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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 73 - (8/11)]
« Reply #560 on: August 12, 2010, 10:14:48 AM »
w00t~~~ PERV GETZ!!  :cow:  :yossi: hehe.

I LOL'd at the photoshop reference! That pretty awesome!
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Ai laughed.  “I don’t think the moonlight is complementing you; your beauty is complementing the moonlight.”
Heyyyy!!! the first thing that came to my mind was... "smooth Aichan, smooth~~" :wub: Mr. moonlight style! :yossi: but Risa, being the tsukkomi character that she is, didn't like it ;)

Dammmmnnn, that was HOTTTTTT~!!  :luvluv1: :mon inluv: :on bleed:
And yep, yep! MUCHH BETTER than Tanakame! You have improved also. :twothumbs

Ahhhh, how I LOVEE dominant Risa~ :mon lovelaff: aww, mann, but she should've disobeyed Ai's orders and continued on, hehe... just for torture sakes. :twisted:

EXCELLENT JOB!!  :mon fyeah:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 73 - (8/11)]
« Reply #561 on: August 12, 2010, 12:02:15 PM »
So sweet  :heart: that's the chp. I've been waiting for  :D
is there any *to be continued* for this chp.  :grin: j/k
Awesome  :twothumbs ... Waiting for next UPDATE  :cow:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 73 - (8/11)]
« Reply #562 on: August 12, 2010, 03:22:50 PM »
 :w00t: :drool: :inlove: God, it was so worth the wait! Playful and sweet and so hot! And lingerie Risa :drool: . You definitely do not suck.  :inlove: :inlove: I'm lost for words!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 73 - (8/11)]
« Reply #563 on: August 12, 2010, 10:55:50 PM »
Now for my higly detailed response post.....

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yep think that pretty much covers it  :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 73 - (8/11)]
« Reply #564 on: August 13, 2010, 12:29:21 AM »
Omg...You really know how to put stuff like that into words.... :shocked: :bleed eyes:

That was so hawt.... :mon bleed2: :imdead:

Awesome chapter. :twothumbs

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 73 - (8/11)]
« Reply #565 on: August 13, 2010, 04:05:19 AM »
@sapphire: of course, I'm a Gaki-san fanatic XD

@kawaii beam: yayyyy glad you liked it!!! :D

@fallenxangel: LOL love you're reactions :lol:

@yellow: still not forgetting about sayu, i see~ :twisted:

@Ada: nosebleeds are good, only in this situation though XD

@kurosawa87: yup yup yup~~~ i waited for this too, y'kno :twothumbs

@xrainbowgumdropsx: oh, the angst will come :twisted:

@xanimefreak13x: LOL  yahyahyah, i'm glad you liked it!!!! :inlove:

@Thor87: you can decided whether this is a "to be continued" chapter or not :twisted:

@rndmnwierd: loss of words is good, in this case XD

@oddball: LOL <3 XD

@kano-chan: I DO??? YES i've improved XD


So it seems as though you're all pretty much pleased, and i have improved a little, which makes me happy :twothumbs
This next chapter is actually unnecesary, but it's a scenario i've been imagining since the beginning of this fic, so i'm putting it it XD

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Chapter 74

   Risa slowly opened her eyes.  She felt her lover’s arms around her body and could smell her floral scent.  The bean immediately realized that she was being embraced by Ai; she had a very good view of the idol’s collarbone.  The older girl’s breathing was even and steady.

   The room wasn’t dark anymore but it wasn’t light either.  The sun was barely starting to rise, so the dim sunshine was flowing into the room from the veranda.  Risa guessed that it was around early morning.  She wanted to check the exact time so she gently backed away from her sleeping girlfriend.  But as she tried to turn around, the arm around Risa’s waist constricted and pulled her back to the middle of the bed again.  The younger girl was pressed against Ai’s bare body once more, her warmth transferring to her.

   “Where do you think you’re going?” the singer whispered.

   “I wanted to check the time,” Risa answered.  “You were already awake?”

   “Yeah,” Ai mumbled.  “But I didn’t want to get out of bed yet; it’s warm in here.”

   “Can you let me go so I can look at the clock?” Risa asked.  “We might have to get up soon.”

   “Don’t worry, we’re not late yet,” Ai said softly.  “We still have time before we need to get to the airport.”

   “Can I check and decide that myself?” Risa questioned, a little more irritated now.

   “You don’t trust me?” Ai gasped sarcastically. 

   She pulled herself down a little to come face-to-face with her girlfriend.  Before Risa could say something, the leader pressed her lips together with her lover’s.  It was a sweet morning kiss, gentle and warm.  It reminded them that they were truly together now.  It was comfort, that all would go well in the future.

   “Stay with me a little longer,” Ai giggled, trying to snuggle closer.  “Talk with me.”

   “What should we talk about?”

   “Can we talk about last night,” Ai sighed, “and how wonderful it was?”

   “It was wonderful…” Risa admitted, blushing.  “I’m glad you’re my first, Ai.”

   “And I’m glad you’re my first as well.”

   The younger girl shot up from the bed, her eyes widened in surprise. 

   “I’m your first?” she inquired.

   “Of course you are,” Ai replied, raising her eyebrows in confusion.  “Now lie back down.  Why would you think you’re not my first?”

   “I don’t know…” Risa mumbled, dropping back down on the bed.  “It’s just… you don’t seem like the type of girl to be left alone to keep your virginity until you’re 24 years old.”

   “I’m not sure whether to take that as an insult or a compliment,” Ai smirked.  “Risa, you always seem to think that I’m the more experienced one or something.  You may be right, but I haven’t gone that far.  I got pretty close last time but you’re still my first.”

   “You got pretty close?” Risa shrilled, shooting up again.  “With who?  When was this?”

   “Sweetheart, you need to calm down,” Ai laughed, pulling her girlfriend back down to the bed again.  “I got close with her, but nothing happened.  We’re okay now.”

   “You still see each other?” Risa asked again, automatically shooting up like a jack-in-the-box.

   “If you get up one more time, I’m going to pin you down so you won’t be able to move an inch,” Ai threatened, pulling her girlfriend towards the bed again.  “Yes, we see each other everyday.”

   “… Do I know her?” Risa muttered.

   “Yes, you know her.”

   “… May I know who she is?”

   “You may, if you promise not to overreact.”  The idol studied the bean’s determined face.  She sighed.  “It’s Reina.”

   “WHAT?!” Risa shrilled, her voice flying up a couple octaves.  She shot up from the bed again.  “You almost went all the way with REINA?”

   “Okay, that’s it,” Ai growled.  “I warned you.”

   The singer pulled Risa down to the sheets and rolled on top of her.  She grabbed both of her wrists and pinned it down.  The younger girl struggled to break free but it was an obvious fact that Ai was much stronger than her.  The leader quickly pressed her lips against Risa’s, blocking her mouth before she could say anything too terrible.  The bean tried to reject the kiss but Ai plunged her tongue into her mouth, nevertheless.  She kissed her over and over again before moving on to her ear, leaving Risa breathless.

   “Could you please calm down?” Ai murmured, nibbling on the delicate ear.  “I’m telling you, nothing happened.”

   “You just told me that you almost had sex with Reina,” Risa growled, “and you expect me to stay calm?”

   “Yes, I do,” Ai answered firmly.  She licked her girlfriend’s ear once, causing the bean to shiver.  “It was right after she got dumped.  I was her first victim, in a way.  We came back home and she attacked me.  Thankfully, before she went too far, I pushed her away and told her that she will never use me in that way.  It slapped enough sense into her to save myself.”

   “For some reason, I’m not too comforted by that,” the bean grumbled. 

   “Nothing happened, Risa,” Ai chuckled, facing her lover again.  “You see me and Reina all the time; we’re the best of friends.  And in conclusion, you’re still my first.  I belong to you.”

   “… That makes me feel a little better,” Risa muttered.  “But it’s still not enough.”

   “What do I need to do to convince you?”

   “I don’t know, Ai,” the younger girl sighed.  “Just forget it.”

   “Maybe I need to do something like this?” Ai smirked.  She started to rub her girlfriend’s sensitive nub, causing her to twitch in shock.  Risa tried to put her knees together but it wasn’t possible, for the singer’s two legs were in between her own.

   “Stop it, Ai,” Risa gasped.  “We need to… mm… the airport…”

   “We still have time,” Ai said softly, as she started to run her fingers up and down the bean’s wet slit.  “And I think you’re body agrees with me.”

   Risa bit down on her lips as her heart started to speed up a little.  Ai kissed her smooth neck and licked her soft skin. 

   “What do you say?” the leader asked.

   “… Just… just one more round then…” Risa mumbled, embarrassed.

   “One more round,” Ai agreed, chuckling to herself.

   As the sun continued to rise in the east, the two lovers fell back into the repetition of their previous night’s bliss.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #566 on: August 13, 2010, 04:59:30 AM »
not only sayu, but the pandas too :lol: :lol:
the 'first' thing again... blissful lovers  XD XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #567 on: August 13, 2010, 05:13:25 AM »
Oi .. Oi .. I knew it ... I knew itttttttttt   :wriggly: ' the second round ' ...    :kekeke:   :D
hmm .. but ya'r not gonna write it in details rite?   :panic: :panic:

anyway ... I was really LOL at this ..
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“I don’t know…” Risa mumbled, dropping back down on the bed.  “It’s just… you don’t seem like the type of girl to be left alone to keep your virginity until you’re 24 years old.”

how come you come up with such kind of words > sentences > ideas ...   :grin:  :rofl:

Overall EPIC !  :twothumbs
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #568 on: August 13, 2010, 05:20:07 AM »
hehe well the ReinAi part would be interesting as a flashback (as a side chapter  :nervous)

however the round two thing was awesome
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #569 on: August 13, 2010, 05:38:05 AM »
D'awww~ That was sweet. <3 And the second round was pretty awesome. Even though it wasn't in full detail. ;D

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #570 on: August 13, 2010, 05:45:12 AM »
XD gosh risa's reaction queen never fails XDD always ruining a sweet moment XDDD i just love how ai is all chill about it and then goes into preadator mode after the billionth reaction XD for some reason when she said she was close with someone esle i thought it was sayu o.o idk why though XDDDD then i was like "wait....maybe its reina? XD"
and round 2...sunlight edition XD

verry good job my luv~ X3
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #571 on: August 13, 2010, 05:52:44 AM »
Reaction Queen ftw! Also what an awesome way to end a discussion, go Ai XD But still, Reina? Wtf mate. :bleed eyes: And I'm not just saying that cause they're one of my least favorite pairings, really.


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #572 on: August 13, 2010, 06:06:43 AM »
Awesome sexay samwich in the morning  :drool:
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Somehow I just knew it would be Reina. XD I mean, who else dude? oxo
Haha, xD great update :3

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #573 on: August 13, 2010, 08:08:25 AM »
Ai: It was Reina :mon noprob:

Gaki-san:Reaction Mode :mon wtf:

Gaki-san never fails as a reaction queen :hiakhiakhiak:

and second round is always good :luvluv1:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #574 on: August 13, 2010, 12:09:19 PM »
Aww, the beginning was sooo sweet and cute~ :shy2:
and then came this line...
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“It’s Reina.” / “WHAT?!” Risa shrilled, her voice flying up a couple octaves.  She shot up from the bed again.  “You almost went all the way with REINA?”
ME: WTF!@#(@!Y$U%(*#REINA!?!? :angry: :temper: (sorry, I'm REALLY not a RenAi fan)
Yep, same reaction as Gakisan. XD I knew it was coming though, but I somehow just HOPED that it was Sayu instead. :roll: lol.
but sexy, dominant Ai was awesome though~ :cow:
wooot, second time perv getz? :drool: hehe, make it a one-shot or something..  :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #575 on: August 13, 2010, 03:19:35 PM »
Man Ai is proper horny in this fic, I suppose she has been holding it in for 24 years though :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 74 - (8/12)]
« Reply #576 on: August 13, 2010, 03:59:07 PM »
@yellow: good, you should remember :P

@Thor87: let's call it talent *flips hair* XD

@kurosawa87: yeh, WOOT for round 2 :cow:

@xrainbowgumdropsx: yeah, you can use your imagination :inlove:

@kawaii beam: LOL sunlight edition XD

@rndmnwierd: i just threw that in cuz i felt like it XD

@Ada: right, right? it's always reina :D

@fallenxangel: I KNO i love gaki-san's reaction queen character :twothumbs

@xanimefreak13x: no, i think i'll leave it to your imagination :twisted:

@oddball: she's been holding it back for WAY too long :lol:


ReinAi haters, dun worry.  The last chapter is as intense as it gets (which means it's not rly intense at all) XD

I feel like TanaKame has been in the backwall lately, so I threw in this RLY short chapter to kinda bring them back in a little :)

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Chapter 75

   A pair of warm hands cupped her face.  Somebody leaned towards her ear; the person had a nice scent.

   “Eri,” the soft voice whispered.  “I know you’re tired, baby.  But I need you to turn your body a little and get on my back, okay?  You don’t need to walk; I’ll carry you.”

   The turtle mumbled something incomprehensible.  She wanted to sleep more; the car seat felt oddly comfortable.  And she was way too exhausted from the plane ride back from Hawaii.  She had stayed awake the whole ride to spend more time with her girlfriend.  As a result, she had completed knocked herself out as soon as she got into the silver sports car with her friends at the airport.

   Eri definitely didn’t want to move an inch.  But she knew it was her special person speaking to her, so she obeyed and turned towards the direction of the voice. 

   Keeping her eyes closed, she extended her arms forward and found the familiar shoulders, and wrapped her arms around the neck.  Slowly, she felt herself being lifted off into the air.  The cool air of November blew on to her skin, causing her to shiver.  She tightened her hold around her girlfriend, taking in all the warmth from her back. 

   She felt herself being moved after the beeping of the car resonated.  Soon enough, the coldness disappeared with the sudden blast of indoor heat.  Something dinged and she felt herself being moved again.  She realized that she was inside an elevator as the doors closed.  She also realized that there were only two people inside.  Where was her friend and the other idol?

   Another ding sounded.  The couple moved again.  The half-asleep girl felt the arms holding her up suddenly disappear and reappear.  The creak of the door was heard, and they were inside the apartment. 

   As she wandered between reality and dreams, Eri eventually felt the softness of a bed.  She mumbled something again and made herself comfortable on the unfamiliar sheets.  Where was she?  This wasn’t her house.

   “Reina-chan…” Eri murmured.

   “I’m right here,” a gentle voice answered.

   That was enough reassurance for the turtle; if her lover was there, then it meant that she was safe.  Although her fatigue was already on an overload level, Eri couldn’t bare to not see her girlfriend right after she heard her voice.  She forced open her eyes with much difficulty to see her lover lying next to her.

   “You can keep on sleeping,” Reina whispered.

   “But I can’t see you while I sleep,” Eri mumbled.  “I missed you.”

   “Really?” the yankii chuckled, amused by her girlfriend’s logic.  “I didn’t miss you because I’ve been watching you the entire time.”

   “Where’s Risa-chan and Ai?” Eri said in a hoarse voice.

   “They’re at your house,” Reina replied.  “None of us could bear to stay away from our significant others, so we decided on another sleepover.”

   “I’m glad you did,” Eri sighed contently.  “I always miss you too much.”

   “I know, you just can’t stay away from me,” Reina snickered, her hand tracing up her girlfriend’s leg and to her inner thighs.

   “Stop that,” Eri whined.  “Not now…”

   “I’m just joking,” the younger girl sighed.  “As much as I love your body, I’m still human; I’m exhausted right now too.”

   “But I still like talking to you like this,” Eri whispered.  “What am I going to do without you… I love you too much for my own good.”

   “Well, you’ll never be without me,” Reina answered, “so problem solved.”

   “Is that a promise?”

   “Definitely.”  Eri felt a pair of warm lips kiss her forehead.  “Now go to sleep, baby.  I’m tired too.”

   “Okay… See you in the morning, Reina-chan,” the turtle mumbled.

   “See you in your dreams,” the yankii corrected.

   Eri smiled and snuggled a little closer to her lover, who welcomed her with open arms.  Absorbing each other’s warmth, the couple slowly drifted off to dreamland where they had promised to meet.

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I'll probably update again today :twothumbs
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 75 - (8/13)]
« Reply #577 on: August 13, 2010, 04:19:15 PM »
SO CUTE~!!

sleepy kame is always cute XD i can totaly imagine her just being a smei-cute dead log XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 75 - (8/13)]
« Reply #578 on: August 13, 2010, 05:11:27 PM »
Tanakame is really cute~ :gmon love2:

sleepy kame talk just too cute :thumbsup

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 75 - (8/13)]
« Reply #579 on: August 13, 2010, 05:55:24 PM »
Another sleepover ...   :grin:

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“I know, you just can’t stay away from me,” Reina snickered, her hand tracing up her girlfriend’s leg and to her inner thighs.

   “Stop that,” Eri whined.  “Not now…”

   “I’m just joking,” the younger girl sighed.  “As much as I love your body, I’m still human; I’m exhausted right now too.”

Thx God .. not again  XD as much as I wanna read perv chp. ... too much  :sex: is not good .. ya know ..  :P 

oh .. by the way, How's Sayu!!  :huhuh I bet ... she's bored to death .. coz .. u still put her in the hosp.  :D
Anyway, Thx for the very cute chp. !  :wub:

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