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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 98 - (8/29)]
« Reply #800 on: August 30, 2010, 12:51:40 PM »
*dies from cuteness* Risa mostly got over her stage fright and Reina sung something girly.

And next is "Takahashi Ai withu MC GAKI"  :lol: I love that song.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 97 - (8/28)]
« Reply #801 on: August 30, 2010, 03:06:19 PM »
But can I just say... WHERE THE HELL IS ALL THE KAMESHIGE SUPPORT AT?!

I mean, as much as I love TakaGaki and TanaKame, haven't we had SarangAi write us a pretty epic story about them already? How about a change? Damn, guys.

I just gotta say this... lol-> RIGHT ON~!  :twothumbs not that I don't like Takagaki and Tanakame either, but a change is good  :thumbsup but keep Takagaki in there for sure though :roll: hehe

WOAH~ Am I seeing things right? Tanakame is beating out Takagaki right now?  :shocked I am quite shocked!! :O I thought there's usually more Kameshige supporters... lol, maybe your fic convinced some of them to jump ships, SarangAi  :lol:

OMG~~ AGHHHH! I am so behind in reading :( I told myself to keep up...but then I failed  :smhid
Sorry for the lame comment~ I will continue this sometime later when I wake up... and finish reading everything cuz my brain has stopped functioning right now... so sleepy... XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 98 - (8/29)]
« Reply #802 on: August 30, 2010, 03:19:04 PM »
Come on TanaKame!! If it can't be RenAi at least let it be TanaKame  XD Everywhere I go it's only TakaGaki stories that still seem to be active now.


I always found that Heya to Y-shirts to Watashi song a little creepy. A little too possessive :nervous
2 chapters to go. I didn't expect you to hold up to that 100 chapters suggestion, but hey, I'm not complaining :D


EDIT: I never figured out how to read that Yuki/Ai x Anata ≥ Suki song  XD
I know it's on their winter-themed mini album they released in late 2006, but I never actually heard the song. The only song I heard from that album was Reina's solo, Kira Kira Fuyu no Shiny G, as this was before I really got into MM.
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 98 - (8/29)]
« Reply #803 on: August 30, 2010, 04:06:33 PM »
YEAH~ 2 more chap to go!! :twothumbs :twothumbs
and reina her song just nice :mon star:

anyway never knew they're so much ReinAi supporter :mon cigar:
but it's look like a takagaki and tanakame story :glasses: ..just what i predicted

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 98 - (8/29)]
« Reply #804 on: August 30, 2010, 04:24:33 PM »
@kawaii beam: awww~ glad you liked it  :D

@kano-chan: it's a BEAUTIFUL song, you have to listen to it!!! :thumbsup

@Swtme03: lol it's like, 163 now... i kinda get a feeling that lurkers made accounts they're never going to use to vote for this... XD

@kurosawa87: ganbarimasu~ :)

@rndmnwierd: lol I love it too~  :D

@xanimefreak13x: lol it's okay~ but make sure to come back and give me feedback! XD

@aussie: oh, I usually keep my promises~ i'm pretty diligent :D

@fallenxangel: Yeah, ReinAi and GakiKame supporters! I nvr knew... XD


SeCoNd To LaSt ChApTeR~~~

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ENCORE:


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Chapter 99

   The soft music started to play out into the hall, and into the rest of Tokyo through the big screen TV.  Eri squealed excitedly, eager to listen to the leader’s song again.  Reina grinned, thinking of how her leader was going to blow away Tokyo.  Risa watched her lover intently, determined to not miss a single note.

Love
The wind isn’t blowing at all
There are no clouds in the starry sky
Ah, I wanted to be babied by you a little
So I grabbed your arm

   “She really does do that sometimes…” Risa thought, smiling at the memory when Ai had begged her to make breakfast.  “She isn’t always the mature one, which is okay with me.

Love
But the air is still pretty cold
And my breath is white
Which temple are you going to on New Year’s?
I’m thinking about next year

   “She’s always been thinking of the future, hasn’t she?” Risa thought.  “Always scared that I may be angry at her…  But she doesn’t need to do that anymore.  One thing I’m sure about the future, is that we’re going to be together.

Our hands are together
Inside your jacket pocket
Am I the only one
Who is truly happy?

   “That’s not true, and she knows it!” Risa yelled inside her head, blushing.  “What she just sang is supposed to be my line.  She’s so good at hiding her emotions, sometimes I feel so immature…

Snow divided by love
Times you, the answer is
Greater than or equal to like
I like you

   “Is she comparing our loves for each other?” Risa thought.  “She can’t decide whether my love is greater than or equal to hers…

   The interlude started to play out with a guitar solo line.  Ai walked over to the steps and started to climb it in a zigzag motion.  Her smile alone made Risa’s heart beat faster; after all, she knew that Ai was singing for her and her only right now.

Snow divided by love
Times you, the answer is
Greater than or equal to like
I like you

It’s up to me to choose
Love’s direction
With this loving heart
Let’s always stay together

   “And we’ll never let go,” Risa thought to herself, smiling.  “I’ll love you and you only…

   The original instrumental started to play out, as the leader started to climb more stairs.  She finally disappeared behind the curtains, but then reappeared to wave at the crowd.  The audience went wild with cheering, as did the rest of Tokyo on live TV.  The spotlights finally turned off, and the scene was reverted back to the Song Fighter MCs, indicating the end of the event.

   Risa turned around just in time to see Ai running towards her; she had climbed too many stairs and went off stage at the wrong exit.  As soon as their eyes met, the younger girl jumped into her girlfriend’s arms.  The singer chuckled softly and kissed her head.

   “I love you,” Risa whispered.  “I love you so much.”

   “It seems like that’s all you can say today,” the leader laughed.  “But that’s okay with me.”

   “I really love you…” the bean continued to mumble.

   “You really showed them, Ai,” Reina grinned.  “Check out the TV.”

   The four girls gathered around the small TV screen and watched the mass crowd in the middle of Tokyo, all gathered to watch High-Queen live on the big screen.  The newscaster was interviewing a black-haired girl sitting in a wheel chair.

   “I thought the live was wonderful,” she said with a slight accent.  “I heard about this event so I even came out of the hospital for it… I think it was definitely worth it.”

   “It was alright,” the girl behind the wheel chair grumbled.  “I think Takahashi Ai’s solo could’ve been better.”

   “SAYUMI?” Risa shrilled as Eri shrilled the name of the panda in the same pitch.

   “Why must she haunt me even during the holiday season…?” Reina groaned, eliciting a glare from the turtle.

   “And Tanaka Reina’s voice wasn’t right for that song at all,” the bunny continued on TV.

   Reina started to fume.  “Why that little—”

   “That’s not true at all!” a different voice said in the little screen.  “What are you saying, lady?” 

   The camera turned a little to the left, revealing a short, brown-haired girl.  She spoke in a very heavy accent.

   “I thought Tanaka Reina-san’s solo was wonderful!” she insisted.  “Her voice was very well suited for that song!”

   “Linlin…?” Eri gasped.

   “I agree!” a different voice said, a much younger voice.  The camera turned further to the left, revealing a girl in a school uniform.  “Ren-chan’s songs are always great!  Don’t you dare insult her, you pale-skinned lady!”

   “Aika?” Reina mumbled, as Eri started to giggle from the school girl’s attitude at her flustered cousin.

   Before Sayumi could counter back, a loud chanting started in Tokyo.  Before the four girls could figure out what they were saying on TV, the same chanting started in the audience.  They listened carefully and finally realized that they were calling for their favorite idol duo, High-Queen.  Suddenly, the Song Fighter producer ran towards them from the hallway.

   “Girls,” he huffed, “I think the crowd wants an encore.  Since it’s Christmas, Song Fighter can broadcast for a little longer, so that’s not the problem.  But it’s up to you two now.”

   “You mean perform another song?” Risa asked, surprised.  “But they’re tired!”

   “It’s okay, Risa,” Ai said.  “Like Reina said before, we’re pros.  We don’t turn down the audience unless they turn us down first!”

   “Producer-san, please put on our debut song,” Reina grinned.

   “But you don’t even match now!” Eri shrilled as though it was the end of the world.  “Do me a favor and make a quick change?”

   “You girls have two minutes,” the producer warned before running out.

   “That’s more than enough time,” Reina decided.  “And that chanting isn’t stopping any time soon.  Let’s go Ai!”

   “Wait here,” the leader instructed her girlfriend.

   After Eri and the two idols ran out, Risa started to stare into the TV screen again.  She could see little bits of snow starting to fall.  Everything she could see and hear… the moment was overwhelming.  So many people were asking for these two girls; their talent and passion for music had captured them all.  Somewhere, deep inside, Risa started to hope that maybe even she captured a couple hearts tonight.

   The bean’s three friends were back before she knew it; the chanting hadn’t weakened a bit.  After making some last minute costume checks, the two idols smiled at their girlfriends and ran out onto the stage.  The spotlights returned and the crowd cheered.

   “Thank you for the encore!” Ai yelled. 

   “We’ll sing one last song, where High-Queen first started off!” Reina announced.

   “Clap onegaishimasu!” Ai requested.  “‘Diamonds’!”

   A low, bass buzzing tune started to play out quietly.  But soon, the song morphed into bells and chimes.  The audience started to clap along with the two High-Queen members, who were in more than festive spirits.  Risa and Eri grinned from ear to ear as they put their arms around each other, appreciating the fact that they had a best friend to lean on.

I dip my bare feet in the cool spring
And look up at the skyscrapers
All I’m doing is wearing my favorite clothes
There’s nothing wrong with that

   “Thank you, Eri,” Risa suddenly yelled over the music.  “Thank you for all the times you were there for me.”

   “Hey, I was going to say that first!” the turtle pouted, making her friend laugh.

Cruising around town with a golden steering wheel
I’m hooked on having fun
I want to see that scenery
That television can’t show me

**  **  ** 

   “Kamei-senpai,” Linlin whispered, smiling, “Tanaka-san seems very happy right now… I guess that’s because of you.  And I’m sure she’s making you happy as well, right?”

**  **  ** 

The moment the needle drops
The way my heart beats burns into my mind

**  **  ** 

   “Keep singing, Ren-chan,” Aika spoke under her breath, grinning.  “Don’t ever let the past hold you back again.  Always keep your chin up!

**  **  ** 

It’s a wonderful collection
I want to keep adding on to it

**  **  ** 

   “They really are amazing, aren’t they?” Junjun breathed, rubbing her hands together.  “They just irradiate light so naturally.”

   “It’s the costumes, Junjun,” Sayumi grumbled.  “I still like your piano better.”

   “I won’t argue with that thought of yours, then,” the panda laughed.

**  **  ** 

Whether I’m sleepy, or whether I’m hated
Or whether I get old, I still can’t stop!

   “Thank you, Reina, for being here,” Ai thought to herself.

   “Thank you, Ai, for always being there,” Reina thought.

They are diamonds
Ah, Ah, all these various scenes
Ah, ah, I can’t put it into words
But they are still treasures

   “Every memory is a treasure,” Risa thought, smiling.  “Everything that’s happened, no matter how happy or how sad, are all precious in the end.

That premonition I had before
Ah, Ah, it was all real
Ah, the thing that is driving me right now
Is that feeling

   The scale climbed up into a higher octave.  The excitement rose along with it.

Sometimes, there are nights
Ah, Ah, when I want to go back
Ah, ah, to when I was a child
And didn’t know anything

   “But even as children, we knew so much,” Risa thought.  “We knew exactly what we wanted to be, exactly what we wanted in the future.  Even though I’m all grown up now, I finally realize this…

The premonition I had before
Ah, Ah, that feeling was real
Ah, what’s driving me right now
Are those diamonds

   The instrumental continued on with the chiming bells.  By this time, everybody in the audience as well as Tokyo was all clapping their hands to High-Queen’s debut song.  Eri and Risa smiled as they bobbed up and down to the rhythm.  Ai and Reina danced towards the middle, ending the performance by singing the tune of ‘Diamonds’.

   A deafening roar exploded from the crowd, and from the small TV.  In the midst of the snow and the Christmas lights, everybody was cheering for High-Queen.  Risa and Eri squealed in excitement as they hugged each other.  The two idols stood up straight.

   “Domo arigatou gozaimashita!” Ai yelled.  “Seno…”

   “HIGH-QUEEN DESHITA!”

   Another loud cheer burst out of the audience.  As the idol duo continued to thank the crowd and bid the rest of Tokyo a Merry Christmas, the snow ceased to stop as well as everybody’s smiles. 

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Diamonds was just something I threw in there without planning for it, cuz the chapter was too short XD

One more chapter to go~~ :twothumbs

so the voting is at a stalemate now... So whenever I check my computer again in a couple minutes, and which ever vote is higher, is getting it :twothumbs

EDIT: I realized the poll just expired... what do I do now... O_O

 :onioncheer: :byebye:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 99 - (8/30)]
« Reply #805 on: August 30, 2010, 04:35:44 PM »
Wow, one more chapter is left and I don't know how it can get much happier than this! Oh wait, I have one idea... :drool:

*shakes head* Uhhh, anyway. Looks like Takagaki and Tanakame are going to win, almost 170 voters! Jeebus Cheese and Crackers! :shocked

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 99 - (8/30)]
« Reply #806 on: August 30, 2010, 05:09:21 PM »
Adorable chapter  :wub:
It made mushy in the inside xD And omg at the other girl's comments about AiReina's performances  :lol:

Can't wait for the final one! *_*

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 99 - (8/30)]
« Reply #807 on: August 30, 2010, 05:16:39 PM »
aw~ so cute~! XD it took me FOREVER to get the 1st vid working, even the other vids taht had ais sininging teh same song in the sexy 8 beat concert stoped D:  but i got it to work^^;

only one more chapter D: oh gosh i can feel the cuteness already :D X3
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 99 - (8/30)]
« Reply #808 on: August 30, 2010, 10:29:57 PM »
>o<!!!!!!!!!!!!

SUPER CUTE *o*

I love it, from the first chap until NOW =D

You made it <3

Now give us the big finale =3


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 99 - (8/30)]
« Reply #809 on: August 30, 2010, 11:05:44 PM »
Ai-chan's song is lovely. :heart:

And yay! Everyone came to the concert! :w00t: Sayu admits that she 'likes' Jun's piano playing. :wub:

And their arguments were shown on TV??? XD

The last chapter better be super super SUPER HAPPY! Christmas celebration! :mon XD:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 99 - (8/30)]
« Reply #810 on: August 30, 2010, 11:11:56 PM »
Aichan is the best~ :twothumbs

and ShigeJun :wub: :wub:

and just one more chapter :onioncheer: :mon blowhorn:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 99 - (8/30)]
« Reply #811 on: August 31, 2010, 02:02:08 AM »
aww... Last chapter duuh >,<  I really loved ur fic and u Made me love ShigeJun  :wub:

ps: sorry if i didn't comment and my post is too poor but, I don't feel okay n_n

THANKZ for such a great Story SarangAi  :bow: :bow:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 99 - (8/30)]
« Reply #812 on: August 31, 2010, 04:22:49 AM »
@rndmnwierd: lol of course they win, but the question is which one... XD

@Ada: glad you liked it~ :D

@kawaii beam: LOL hopefully, it'll be cute enough for you :wub:

@Haruka: HAI! the big finale~ XD

@kano-chan: i know, it's the four girls plus the confused newscaster+cameraman  XD

@fallenxangel: yes~ shigejun :inlove:

@Michi.Pinku: yeah, I made myself like ShigeJun more too XD


GAH I can't believe it's come to this... but it is time!

KoKoRo No UtA lAsT cHaPtEr~~~

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Chapter 100

   “Are you sure you don’t mind staying here?” Eri asked, uneasy.  “We could still go to the square, if you want…”

   “Eri, I already told you that I don’t mind staying indoors,” Reina laughed, pulling her girlfriend down to the couch next to her.  “If you think it’s too cold out, then it’s too cold out.”

   “Somehow, I really hate it when you do everything my way,” the turtle grumbled.  However, her actions contradicted her words as she tried to pry the yankii’s arms from her sides to place it around her own shoulders.  Reina chuckled as she obliged to her lover’s wishes.

   “Staying like this in your house is okay too,” the singer sighed.  “Just watching TV with a cup of hot cocoa… it’s still kind of romantic.”

   “It’s romantic because we’re together,” Eri giggled at her own cheesy line.  She snuggled closer to the younger girl who rolled her eyes.

   “I think Ai is rubbing off on you,” Reina groaned.

   “Is she now…” Eri wondered, smiling.

   The two girls cuddled together in Eri’s couch, watching the TV that showed the streets of Tokyo, live.  Every store was decorated in red and green lights, along with a giant Christmas tree in the middle of the square.  Suddenly, Reina gasped out loud and started to panic.

   “What time is it?” she quickly asked.

   “Um… 11:55, why?”

   “Then I’m not late yet!”

   Reina slightly pulled away from her girlfriend and started to dig through her jean pockets.  She took out a lighter with one hand and a piece of origami paper that was folded into a heart with the other.  Eri raised an eyebrow.

   “What’s that?” she questioned.

   “Just watch,” Reina grinned. 

   She brought the lighter to the heart and lit it on fire.  The blaze of heat engulfed the entire origami paper.  Eri gasped, worried that her girlfriend may burn herself.  But somewhere along the line, the heart paper burned up and a different piece of paper drifted down into Reina’s other hand with the disappearance of the flames.  The yankii unfolded the paper and held it up for Eri to see.  The turtle squinted and started to read.

   “Tanjoubi Omedetou, Eri…” she mumbled.  Then, she gasped as her eyes widened.  “What day is it today?”

   “It’s three minutes before December 23rd officially ends,” Reina laughed.  “What, did you forget your own birthday?”

   “Well, I’ve been preoccupied with this whole event so…” Eri said, blushing.  “But you knew!  How did you know?”

   “Risa told me,” Reina grinned.  “She more like threatened me; she made it very clear that she will never forgive me if I don’t do something for your birthday.”

   “That’s my Risa-chan,” Eri laughed.  “Well, thank you for remembering, Reina-chan.”

   “Oh, I’m not done yet,” the yankii said.  “Watch.”

   She brought the lighter to the piece of paper again and lit it on fire.  It seemed as though the flames would get bigger but instead, it flicked off at one point as something silver dropped down from Reina’s hand.  Eri gasped as she stared at the silver chain.  Her eyes traveled down to the charm that was dangling at the end.

   “It’s a key!” she exclaimed.

   “And it’s yours, if you want.”

   “A key… for what?”

   “To my home.”

   “The High-Queen dorms?”

   “No, not exactly,” Reina laughed.  “At the beginning of next year, I’m moving out.  I got my own place in a different apartment.  This is the second key to my new place.”

   “It’s like a spare?” Eri asked.

   “No, I have a different spare,” the yankii mumbled.  She looked down a little and started to scratch the back of her neck a little.  “I was thinking… well… it’s my new place but… it could be your place too… if you want.”

   “You mean… live together?”

   “Yeah… I mean… if you want, that is.  I’m sure Risa wouldn’t mind and all… So if you want, it can be your home too.”

   “Reina-chan!”

   As the yankii looked up, she was immediately attacked by her girlfriend who hugged her so tightly, it nearly cut off her air circulation.  Reina laughed and embraced the turtle back. 

   “Yes, I want to be with you!” Eri yelled, laughing.  “I want to see you every single day; I want to be a bigger part of your life!”

   “And I yours,” Reina grinned. 

   At that moment, a loud music started to play from the TV.  A big animated Christmas tree came up on the screen with the words of holiday greetings.  The clock had struck twelve.

   “Merry Christmas Eve, baby,” the younger girl whispered.

   “Merry Christmas Eve, Reina-chan,” Eri murmured back.

   They slowly leaned in closer until their lips met.  They kissed over and over again, more passionately each time, to celebrate a new beginning for the both of them.

**  **  ** 

   “So tell me again why we’re walking the streets of Tokyo at midnight,” Risa stuttered.

   “Because we’ve never had a proper date,” Ai grinned.  “Every single time we try to go out, I always get recognized.”

   “That’s true…” Risa mumbled, remembering the time her girlfriend was discovered twice by the fans at the amusement park.  “So how is today different from any other days?”

   “Because it’s Christmas Eve,” Ai explained, turning to look at her girlfriend walking next to her.  “There are over a hundred couples out tonight, and none of them care enough to spot me.  They’re all too busy looking at their own beautiful lover, like me.”

   “Stop that,” the bean laughed, turning away a little from Ai’s staring. 

   “So let me ask you one thing,” the leader said, her fingers tightly wrapped around her girlfriend’s hand in side her coat pocket.  “Did you enjoy singing tonight?”

   “I would’ve fainted on stage if you didn’t come out then,” Risa laughed, remembering herself freezing up during the interlude.  “But overall, it felt good to sing again.  I mean, I still love it, you know?”

   “But you still don’t want to be a singer?”

   “Not really,” Risa sighed.  “It was my original dream so it might be nice… but I’m happy with who I am right now.  I’m happy writing songs for you and Reina, and I’m happy with making sample recordings only.  I like it enough that I don’t want to leave it behind.”

   “I would’ve really loved to sing with you in public,” Ai sighed, smiling.  “But I guess it’s still your choice.  And I’ll respect it.”

   “Thanks, Ai-chan,” the bean grinned.

   “So, is there anything you want to do in particular tonight?” the idol asked.

   “Not really— no, wait, there is!” the younger girl exclaimed, beaming.  “Come on, I wonder if it’s still open!”

   Before the singer could ask where they were going, Risa pulled her quickly through the streets, trying to avoid crashing into people as much as possible.  Soon, they stopped in front of a brightly lit store; the bean smiled.

   “It’s still open!” she squealed excitedly.  “I guess it’s because it’s a self-serve place!”

   “Where are we?” Ai asked.

   “Come on!”

   Risa pulled her girlfriend into the small store.  It was just one room with various lights flashing around.  The walls were lined up with multiple booths.  The couple could see other people’s feet inside the booth underneath the curtains. 

   “A Purikura place?” Ai gasped.  “I haven’t been to one of these in a really long time…”

   “Remember how you and I don’t have a picture together from when we were little, and I couldn’t remember your face?” Risa smiled.  “Well, I’m never going to let that happen again.”

   The two girls then picked their own booth and slid into the seats.  Risa quickly picked out a Christmas background and some glitters for decorations.

   “Ready?” she asked.

   “Whenever you are,” Ai grinned.

   “Okay, then,” Risa said, putting her hand on top of the green button to take the picture.  “Smile!”

   “Risa!”

   “Huh?”

   The bean turned her head towards the older girl as her hand pressed down on the button.  Her eyes widened as her lips were met with a different warmth, a different softness.  A flash of light exploded, indicating that the picture was taken.  A strip of sticker pictures came out of the slot.  The two girls looked at the purikura and smiled; Risa blushed as she lightly hit her girlfriend’s shoulders as a pay back for her joke, while Ai just laughed.  They were just small pictures, but it had captured all of their love and happiness that would last forever.

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That's it!  Kokoro no Uta has officially come to an end.

I would like to thank all of my readers, lurkers or not.  It was all of you who kept me going all these weeks and months! 
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I hope you all enjoyed reading this story as much as I loved writing it.  I didn't expect to have so many readers, considering it was my first fic, but I'm very grateful for all the comments and feedbacks!!!  :farofflook: :nya: :farofflook: :nya: :farofflook: :nya:


As for me, I will most definitely continue writing; it's what I love to do. :wub:

And for the poll results...
As you can all see, TakaGaki and TanaKame are tied.  It was tied like that when the poll got locked (how does that even happen?) :panic: :panic: :panic:

But I believe TanaKame got the deciding vote first before TakaGaki.  And I flipped a coin three times too, and I still got TanaKame so...
...My next fic will feature TanaKame as the main :D :D :D :D :D :D

But TakaGaki will still be there, so please support me!   :)
I'm not sure about what's happening with the other members yet, but I'm brainstorming (which usually doesn't take that long).

But for now, i'm wondering whether I should do a schoolgirl-fic or a fic with all the member's original ages  :nervous

I'm not sure when I'm going to start my new fic, but it could be as early as tomorrow (seriously) :twothumbs

once again, thank you everyone for reading my fic! I hope you all enjoyed it~~~  :on woohoo:

 :byebye:

avii&sig by the wonderful kawaii beam~!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [COMPLETE - Ch. 100 - (8/30)]
« Reply #813 on: August 31, 2010, 04:31:04 AM »
*glomps u* AI AI THATS LIKE THE CUTEST ENDING EVAH~!!!!!!!!!! it's seriously cute,and thanks for being able to update almost every day X3 i really cant wait for the next fic ^^ i wish i was better at making longer comments cus i would but i hope this is enough to prove my thankies*hugs again* :inlove: :love: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 96 - (8/28)]
« Reply #814 on: August 31, 2010, 04:35:50 AM »
Comment replies time~  :cow:
Ch.97:
But I don’t care if it’s a dream that doesn’t exist anymore,” Risa thought, putting a hand over her heart.  “Even so… I still…
Even so, I’m still in love with you
OMG~! AHHH~~~ You are so darn awesome you know that!?!? :yossi: I LOVED how you tied this song into the fic~ :mon lovelaff: freakin awesomeness~
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“Yup,” Risa grinned.  She reached up and quickly kissed her girlfriend on the lips.  “You.”
soooo cuteee~! hehe, loved this line also :wub: it's squeal worthy~  :twothumbs
Lol, my nerdy side ish kicking in  :smhid so slight correction here...Kite gudasai should be Kiite kudasai lolz

Awesome~ you got a new laptop!? What'dya get? a mac? hehe. Aww, good luck with everything, hopefully life won't be that hectic on you. :) I'm guessing school started/ or is starting soon? cuz my friends that go to NYU flew out there on thursday... lol.
Ch.98:
w00t~ Loved Risa's solo song :mon lovelaff: :mon fyeah: Interesting choice for Reina's song though, I never thought of that one! I was thinking of.. hmm, kira kira fuyu no shiny g. Hehe, you're really good at tying these songs into the chapters~ Mega props for you~  :cow: :twothumbs
My favorite lines of this chapter...
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“Yeah, yeah, you guys can make out in the dressing room,” the yankii grumbled.  “Go change, Ai.”
“I know that,” Reina answered.  “But I was speaking on a mental term.”
oh, on a side note, you should change what I mentioned for ch97 in this chapter too :D

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WAIT OMG!?! WHAT!? you posted the ending already?! While I was typing this? :shocked adshfiulwaeourlsdjf!!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [COMPLETE - Ch. 100 - (8/30)]
« Reply #815 on: August 31, 2010, 05:50:35 AM »
nice ending to the fic, although can't wait for your next fic to come up
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [COMPLETE - Ch. 100 - (8/30)]
« Reply #816 on: August 31, 2010, 05:52:23 AM »
*pat on the back* Congrats on completing your first fic. I enjoyed it very much, I'm looking back and thinking, "it was only 100 chapters long!?!"  XD

Happy ending for all. Reina finally overcame her demons and found her true love, Ai-chan reunited with her lost love, while Sayu has now 'recovered'.
You're officially one of the writers whose stories I'll look forward to and keep tabs on :thumbup Not that that says much, I'm only a lazy reader heh.


(And yay for TanaKame's 'victory'~~)

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [COMPLETE - Ch. 100 - (8/30)]
« Reply #817 on: August 31, 2010, 05:55:38 AM »
DAMN!!!!!!! MY PC SUCKS RIGHT NOW!!! I CAN EVEN TYPE NORMAL >o<

THE HELL... I swear I'm reading it again XD god I love it <3...

And I'm sure I will love the next one =D I'm soooo looking forward it =3

Thansk a lot for my restless nights because it worth XDDDDDDD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [COMPLETE - Ch. 100 - (8/30)]
« Reply #818 on: August 31, 2010, 06:17:04 AM »
OMG OMG OMG! I can't believe that ... Kokoro no Uta ended finally.  :cry:
I really loved your fic and It to be your first one, it was really awesome.
Ai and Reina were so cute at the last chapter with their girlfriends, I love the purikura place scene and the fact that Reina and Eri are gonna live together *-*
I'm gonna miss Kokoro no Uta but I'm looking forward to read your next fic.
So GAMBARE!! SARANGAI >o<  Michi's supporting you.  :cow: :cow:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [COMPLETE - Ch. 100 - (8/30)]
« Reply #819 on: August 31, 2010, 07:05:08 AM »
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...My next fic will feature TanaKame as the main :D :D :D :D :D :D
YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :wub: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :lol:
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I'm not sure about what's happening with the other members yet, but I'm brainstorming (which usually doesn't take that long).

But for now, i'm wondering whether I should do a schoolgirl-fic or a fic with all the member's original ages  :nervous

I'm not sure when I'm going to start my new fic, but it could be as early as tomorrow (seriously) :twothumbs
Whatever kind of fic u gonna write next IMMA READ THAT coz .. URE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! XD :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :thumbup a super updater XD super brainstormer :heart: :lol: :D And the story is so good even tho u write it so fast! :shocked: lol XD I can't stop admiring that ^^

The ending was so nice ^^ :heart: :heart: Hahaha I rofl'd at Sayumi liking Junjun's piano better than High-Queen :lol:
And the whole stort was very well complete. :P Or something XD I don't think there was anything left open that should not~~ :thumbup
TANAKAMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE<333333333333333333333333333333333

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