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Author Topic: Chigatte mo Iin da yo! ~Mainly TanaKame, TakaGaki~ [FINALE - Ch. 93 - (1/30)]  (Read 408949 times)

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Yay! I'm so happy you updated! :cow: And don't worry because we will stick with you! :thumbsup

That was so cute! I thought that Eri was really going to tell Reina about her real gender, but I thought, hmm...isn't that happening too fast? :mon dunno: So the confession would have to wait. That's something to look forward too! :twothumbs But I'm worried about how Reina would react. She was relieved that Eri was a "boy". :mon pray2:

Can't wait to go shopping with TakaGaki! :mon squee:

And I can totally understand about the work and all. I have research papers to do too. :mon study:

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So Eri in the end couldn't reveal her gender XD, although the dolphin part was pretty funny irl :nervous
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Kiss *u*
Love that part ~

No truth about gender >o<
BadGirl Kamei part ~

In conclussion XD I Love it <3
OMG TakaGaki o_O I want it XD

Thanks so much for update in your busy life T____T


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Explosion imminent! Danger, danger Kamei Eri, danger! Of course, I look forward to Takagaki the most. Something about the teacher/student thing. It's so...naughty.

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Lol at Junjun :lol: :lol: :lol:
jun² have a good instict I thinks :)

and TanaKame love at the aquarium :wub: :wub:
eri lose again against reina

can't wait for TakaGaki shopping :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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An update!!!  :cow:

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She could feel her heart about to explode from her chest.  She had been held by other guys before but nobody had been this sweet to her.  She lightly punched Eri’s shoulder and hung her head down, refusing to show her red face to the chuckling turtle.  But Eri only tilted her head more to meet eyes with the shy kitten.  Following her lover’s lead, Reina slowly raised her head and closed her eyes.  A second later, she felt the softness of Eri’s lips meet with hers, followed by the sweetness of her tongue.  They swirled around each other, each trying to get more of the other.  Eri gently pushed Reina against the glass wall and trapped her in her arms, pushing her lips against hers more fiercely.  Reina removed Eri’s cap and knotted her fingers into the short hair of her lover to get even more into the kiss.  Together, they completed each other.  All the emptiness that Reina had felt in the past no longer existed when she was with Eri like this.  And the turtle didn’t want anything to break this moment.  Not even the one most important truth about her.
:ptam-shy:

Why didn't Eri tell Reina that she's actually a girl? I have a bad feeling about this...
You're not going to make Reina hate Eri, right? Because if you do... :ptam-kill:

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Next is TakaGaki! (If you remember, Takahashi sensei and Gaki iinchou were going afterschool shopping)
I can't wait!





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@kano-chan: OMG I HATE research papers!  They are my life's nemesis now  :bleed eyes:

@kurosawa87: oh yeah, Eri's too soft XD

@Haruka: noooo thank you for commenting even though I'm so inactive :lol:

@rndmnwierd: LOL naughty is good, right? :twisted:

@fallenxangel: oh Junjun just scares me sometimes, even though I'm the one writing it :P

@XcuteX:  :shocked scary... *runs away*


*comes back*
ahh~ Thanks to all who left comments!  They do help immensely~ And please know that just because I'm inactive, doesn't mean I'm sick of this story yet... you know, the way some writers do  XD

I'm still thinking of lot of scenarios so look forward to it~  :D

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Reina practically gave Eri the chance to 'fess up, but I guess Eri couldn't shatter Reina's 'illusion' of her as a boy when she had just said she was glad Eri turned out to be a boy. A conflict seems inevitable, I just hope Reina isn't too harsh with Eri or Eri is pushed to her limits in what she can handle. I have a funny feeling that Jun will have something to do with exposing Eri; in the least, I think Jun will be the first to find out Eri is a girl, but for some reason I don't think she'll mercilessly expose her or something. Maybe Jun could even help Eri come to her true self with Reina?

Oh, it's just so adorable how Aika is protective of her senpai, measuring up Eri the 'boyfriend' XD


Of course, I look forward to Takagaki the most. Something about the teacher/student thing. It's so...naughty.

Same here :lol: (though, I keep my focus on TanaKame :D)

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Finally caught up~!

You've got a really interesting story here, Saranghai, no doubt... I love that you always try to include all the members (which can be quite demanding to do - imo, anyway) and give us pretty good characters at that.

Now, I can't quite get enough of my TakaGaki fix in this story. The idea of a student/teacher affair... while I usually won't condone (being a teacher myself and all >.<)... it really does lend quite a nice edge to this slowly developing relationship between them. ^___^ So far, TakaGaki has only been sweet, sweet, sweet... I really can't imagine them getting hot and heavy, but when the time comes, I'll take it all in stride  :drool:

So yeah, as for the pairings, my favourite is definitely TakaGaki here.

What's going on between Tanakame... :/
Honestly? I did prefer them in Kokoro no Uta. They were uber, uber cute there. Not that they're not cute here. There's definitely a lot going on between the two in this story, but I just felt that Reina's returning of Eri's feelings was a little abrupt. I thought Eri was going to have it really hard... at least another 20 or so chapters before she managed to get the kitten softened up and all  XD So I don't quite buy it at this point; things are moving so quickly! I can understand Eri's falling for Reina, and I can understand love at first sight and everything, but from the impression I got of Reina at the beginning, I didn't think she would bend to Eri so fast, is all. Still, I do enjoy their scenes together, but I feel like I have to suspend a bit of disbelief (aside from the fact that anybody can mistake Eri for a boy  :lol:) in order to.

SayuJun.... now this is another very interesting couple. A good character to give Sayu. And Jun... wow, such a player, so confident  XD
Jun's being a little forceful though, isn't she? Kissing Sayu like that when she obviously doesn't want it. That kind of surprised me, I thought Jun wouldn't do that, and my respect for her fell a bit... but some of the other readers seemed to enjoy that >.< LOL. Anyway, I'm looking forward to see how things unravel between these two. Another story where Jun's chasing after Sayu... lol.

Overall, good job with the story. I remember mentioning to you that I would've liked to see more detail in your story, but I can understand considering you're so busy and stuff. ^__^


And please know that just because I'm inactive, doesn't mean I'm sick of this story yet... you know, the way some writers do  XD

I'm still thinking of lot of scenarios so look forward to it~  :D


Well, definitely feels like you were into your previous story a lot more xD
I hope you don't get burnt out with so much on your plate. I guess... take your time, make sure you get your sleep and rest!

Good luck with everything!
Thanks for the story, and am waiting for your next update. TakaGaki, YUM.
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OMG! I like this chapter so much, Eri so sweet and about her gender... It will shock Reina -> Junjun and others angry -> a " fight for love" absolutely will happen, I think so. but hard as it is, Eri will fight with all her strenght for her love even it may cost her life.
And SarangAi, stay healthy. Your readers always care for you, you sick no one is happy; get more sleep and eat healthy foods. good luck and have a nice week ^^

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Reina
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Eri
 :shocked: :w00t:
Oh no Reina should be more careful with her words too :lol:

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@aussie: don't we all hope Reina won't be too hard on Eri... we'll see  :twisted:

@Beecubed: ah~ I always wait for your comment because I feel like I get some pretty nice constructive criticisms from you :thumbsup  Yeah, I definitely poured more into Kokoro no Uta than Chigatte mo Iin da yo! because at the moment, I'm just so busy with classes and stuff like that.  So I'm making the story flow a LOT faster than I originally planned so I can get to new things before anybody gets sick of it :nervous  Yeah, so I had to get Reina and Eri together quick.... sorry, that's just me being impatient :bleed eyes:  Jun is an interesting character, the most interesting in this entire story, I'd say.  There's a lot you know about her but also a lot you don't. So the thing with Sayu... we'll see how that turns out XD  Yeah, so thanks for the comment!  They really do help me see how the story looks to the readers and stuff~ thanks! :twothumbs

@yukirei: oh, "fight for love" happens all the time~ and thank you for worrying about me, that's so sweet of you!  :D

@Fushigidane: you just summed it up pretty nicely  XD


oh, comments make me so happy~ I'm currently indulging myself in more work while spacing out occasionally about the next TakaGaki chapter~  XD

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ahh I haven't comment here for a long time, but I still read it of course XD
im really sorry sarangai *please don't kill me XD*

i really like sayujun here  :wub:
jun's character is really interesting for me :lol:

tanakame officially  :inlove:
and the date in aquarium was  :wub:
I really like it *especially the last part  :wub:  :wub:*
it really made me smiling hohoho XD

and im curious about aichan called herself bad person hahaha  :P

can't wait for the next chapter
ganbare sarangai  :twothumbs

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Re: Chigatte mo Iin da yo! ~Mainly TanaKame, TakaGaki~ [UPDATE - Ch. 17 - (11/2)]
« Reply #333 on: November 15, 2010, 05:15:47 PM »
   “The truth is, when I first met you… I thought you were a girl,” Reina laughed nervously, biting down on her lips.  Eri’s expression tightened but she didn’t say anything.  So the kitten continued on, “But from the way you were dressed, you looked like a boy.  I just decided that you were a real baby-face and called you, ‘pretty boy’, remember that?  You were so cute back then, so innocent and clueless with the money and stuff!  You weren’t even my type at all but I guess I was attracted to you even back then.  So somehow, I made myself believe that you were a boy.  And you were… so I couldn’t be happier right now.  Does this all sound weird to you?”

   “… Um, just a little…” Eri mumbled.  What could she say now?  Reina just confessed that she was happy to discover that Eri was a boy!  How could she reveal her true gender after that?

Arrrrggggghhhhhh!!!!!  DANGER! Eri DANGER!  :frustrated:  :frustrated:  :frustrated:

I think we all saw this becoming a problem, I can't believe Reina admitted to Eri that she's glad she's a 'boy' because at first she thought she was a girl  :doh: Now Eri is going to keep a lie alive when she should tell the truth  :banghead:

Hmm, why do I get the feeling that Jun will try and find out more about Reina's 'boyfriend' she dosn't seem that convinced about Eri and Judging by her character in this fic she will try and find out more, I wont be surprised if she figures out before Reina and goes to confront Eri about it on her own....  :panic:

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But... Eri, you're making a big mistake, yep BI~~IG mistake.
Something is telling me Jun will find out the true about Eri's gender  :smhid .
I mean, she's really smart and she noticed something at aquarium.
Stop torturing us like that   :panic: :panic:
Well, anyway I'm waiting TakaGaki chapter  :wub:

Peace ~~  :peace:

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Re: Chigatte mo Iin da yo! ~Mainly TanaKame, TakaGaki~ [UPDATE - Ch. 18 - (11/12
« Reply #335 on: November 16, 2010, 11:06:29 AM »
Pfiou...finally I was able to catch up with the chapter  :heart:
미안해요 >_<. 나는 종종 회신하지않은 경우 :sweatdrop: (sorry if there are mistake :p I'm still studying korean)
but you do know that I really like/love your story.

chapter 18
:wub: Junjun is so cool and Aika&Linlin so funny in this real 1st meeting with Reina "boyfriend"
the teasing and threatening part are so much their personalities :D

yeah for TanaKame at the aquarium...their so loveydovey lolz XD
Eri(ku) you should tell her your gender soon...
coz I feel that it's a bad idea to let Reina think you are a boy more longer ><
and at the end you wanna be hurt and you'll hurt her more.
But I can't blame you...your totaly in love with her and don't want to break this moment.

Keep your great work SarangAi
I'm waiting patiently your next update
and it wanna be TakaGaki shopping :wub: :wub:
 
Like I didn't hear it, like I couldn't hear it.... I shouldn't have heard your love in the first place
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So adorable part :wub:
I can't explain about this part because it's too diffucult to kepp and eye on when my face blused :wub:
I wait for TakaGaki part with the very very doki doki heart :inlove:

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ah~ eri ur making the hole bigger and deeper!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u must tell reina~~~~~~~~~~~~~*rolls around* gahskgt e~ XD i feel like reina'll be ubber ubber ubber pissed/hurt when she finds out D:

but on a happier note...

YEAH~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~TAKAGAKI NEXT~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wonder how much more cuter risa'll get with shopping with sensei~*swwons*
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@reikoshi: lol as long as you comment once in a while, i won't kill you... i think :twisted: XD

@oddball: panic for eri!  :shocked

@Michi.Pinku: you know i like to torture my readers  :twisted:

@YumePouk: lol the translation was a little too formal and choppy but it's fine XD

@Shiawase: and very doki doki it shall be :inlove:

@kawaii beam: LOL someone's excited for TakaGaki :lol:


Seems like everybody thinks Junjun is going to find out first and either confront Eri or confront Reina or whatever.  But everybody seems to think Junjun will fit in the equation somehow XD

And I'm gonna say.......  we'll see :P

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wait, wait and wait; you are truly TORTURE your reader T^T I hope I can read new chapter in November 20, it's my birthday and also Vietnam teachers' day- the day Vietnamese students show respect and love from bottom of their hearts to the teachers.
Goodluck and have a nice week everyone (*^w^*)

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