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Author Topic: Lies - chapter 16 (MendolxMajisuka) 15/11/2011  (Read 50307 times)

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
« Reply #80 on: September 29, 2011, 09:28:26 AM »
Oh isshaburi ^^
Rofl stalker Yuko!!!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
« Reply #81 on: September 29, 2011, 09:59:35 AM »
You have risen from the dead lolol :~)

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
« Reply #82 on: September 29, 2011, 10:42:34 AM »
OMG you finally update after so long........

and when things are getting interesting you just have to end it!!!

now obviously the people who came into the rescue is the Rappappa gang :) they here to save their 'boys'

please update again ASAP!!!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
« Reply #83 on: September 29, 2011, 11:03:53 AM »
omg! I need an update!!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 15 Part 2 and 3)
« Reply #84 on: September 30, 2011, 04:30:29 AM »
blueangel65: Hey, thanks. Hopefully I can finish this without dying again........I promise nothing.....

aoi_sora: Kuu is the wild card in this fanfic....when I don't know how to make things connect...I blame it all on Kuu =P I think I made the Rappapa rescue too obvious =( now I'm sad....

kahem: Hi, long time no talk? I love Yuko, I can totally see her stalking people in those big trench coats, hats, sunglasses and facemask

Arakawa: Yes I have! Hopefully I won't dig my own grave and bury myself again =)

blughise: I know right....like 2~3 months opps....LOL...of course I have to end it when it gets interesting...this makes people want to read it because of the cliffhanger =P

haruhi16: Fast enough for you? I doubt I will update soon after this but don't worry...it will probably be less than...a month   :P


Anyways....Enjoy this short part cause I don't like writing for long periods of time.... :theking




Chapter 16 (Part 1)

“Yuko..” Riku trailed off as he paid no attention to his surroundings except on Yuko.

“Maeda-san…” Kai said as he kept dodging left and right

“Sado-san, Black-san, Shibuya-san, Gekikara-san. I’m sorry about my friends, they are kind of impolite since they didn’t acknowledge other people that try to save them.” Kuu sighed as he shook his head. 

“RIKU, WATCH OUT.” Yuko shouted as a Yabakune girl punched Riku in the face.

“That Yabakune girl is going to have a broken rib.” Shibuya said as she made her way to the fight while finishing putting on her gloves.

“A broken rib? Are you kidding? At least 5.” Sado said as she put her toy away and also joined in but discreetly made her way to Kuu’s side.

“HAHAHA, tanoshi~.” Yuko said as she punched the Yabakune girl in the face to avenge Riku.

“Koiyo Yabakune.” Shibuya kicked the girl in the guts.

“HAHAHAHAHAHA, neh~ Okotteiru?” Gekikara asked as she became a punching bag that won’t fall down and retaliated as well.

Black silently took out the girls that surrounded Yuko.

Atsuko started to help defend Kai, as he was surrounded by all sides. Eventually Atsuko and Kai were back-to-back while Atsuko hits, punches, and kicks the girls, Kai helped her defend against oncoming girls.

As Atsuko was distracted by 2 girls charging at her, a girl came up from behind and swung her metal pipe down towards Atsuko’s neck. Gakuran ran out to try and save Atsuko but failed to do so as Kai shielded Atsuko with his body and fell since he couldn’t watch his best friend get hurt.

“KAI!” Riku and Kuu shouted as they ran towards him.

Black swiftly moved over to protect Atsuko as she now holds Kai in her arms. Gakuran just stood there watching the interaction between Atsuko and Kai.

‘Maybe he truly does love Atsuko as much as I do…’ Gakuran thought.

“Why? Why did you protect me? Why must all the people I like have to be hurt because of me?” Atsuko said as tears started to stream out.

“Kai…wake up…please.” Atsuko says as she kept holding Kai’s upper body up with her arm and she started to brush away his hair that was in the way with her other hand. Her tears still streaming down and tear droplets eventually landed on Kai’s face.

Riku and Kuu just stood by, not knowing what they could do to help comfort Atsuko.

As the fight was nearing to the end most of the Yabakune girls either fled from the warehouse or laid unconscious on the floor. While Sado held onto Sanae by the collars to find out the mastermind behind the attack. The Rappapa girls then surrounded Atsuko and Kai.

“Kai’s…going to be ok…”Riku said as he walked closer to Atsuko.

“It’s all my fault… Before it was Minami and now Kai… It’s all my fault…”

“Don’t cry Atsuko…I can’t bear to see you cry.” Kai weakly said as he wiped the tears off Atsuko’s face.

“Kai… Why did you protect me?”

“I can’t bear to see you get hurt…” Kai said as his voice trailed off and he fainted again.

“KAI!” Riku, Kuu and Atsuko shouted.

“Let’s take him to the hospital.” Suggested Sado.

“NO! I mean, we have a personal doctor that will take care of us… We just need to take him home.” Riku said as he thought, ‘If we go to the hospital, our identities will be revealed.’

As Riku and Kuu took Kai home in a cab, Riku called Shachou to tell her that they were jumped and that Kai is injured, Rappapa had a meeting.

-Rappapa Headquarters-

*Awkward Silence*

“One of the Yabakune girls told me that a Majijo girl planned this with them.” Sado broke the silence with the newly retrieved information.

*Knock Knock*

The door opened and revealed Gakuran. She walked into the center of the room and got on her knees.

“I’m sorry… My jealously over Kai and Atsuko’s relationship made me blind.” Gakuran said as she asked for forgiveness.

Yuko glared at Gakuran while Black, Shibuya, Gekikara and Sado didn’t really show an interest to the whole event that happened.

“…It’s ok, it has made me realize that I only bring disasters to those beside me…” Atsuko said as she started to close herself up to everyone again.

“No, it’s not your fault Atsuko, it was because I was green with jealously… I know that I can’t do anything to get you to forgive me but I will wait… I’ll do anything for you to make it up… Just tell me what I can do.” Gakuran said as she looked at Atsuko who was looking out the window.

“Well, I have an idea of what you can do.” Yuko said as she had an evil grin on her face. “Round up all the Majijo girls, I have a plan.”

‘Oh no.’ everyone in the room except Yuko thought.

‘With this, I can protect Riku.’

TBC

Lets hope I can keep this up =)

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
« Reply #85 on: September 30, 2011, 05:16:23 AM »
I' ll properly comment and edit this later as im using my phone right now.... Hard to type.......


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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
« Reply #86 on: September 30, 2011, 08:23:14 AM »
Me too I can completly imagine Yuko stalking someone lol and it seems the Rappappa don't like her plans hehehe

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
« Reply #87 on: September 30, 2011, 12:02:13 PM »
Poor Kai...

I wonder what Yuko's plan.. Hmmmmm..

Update soon!!!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
« Reply #88 on: September 30, 2011, 03:24:51 PM »
YEY FOR ACTION!!!! :mon zoom:
woah!

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“Round up all the Majijo girls, I have a plan.”

They're going to sing YANKEE SOUL!!!  :guychan:

ahahahahahaha!  :rofl:

thanks for the update!

update soon!  :twothumbs

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
« Reply #89 on: September 30, 2011, 09:45:43 PM »
What's gonna happen??? :? :?
please update soon
cant wait for de next
I'll say "I love you" to the person I love
Even if these feelings aren't returned, saying "I love you" to the person you love
That is the most beautiful thing in the world

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
« Reply #90 on: October 02, 2011, 06:42:10 AM »
 :heart: :heart: :heart:

You finally updated  :twothumbs :twothumbs

Kai is still protecting her Atsuko no matter what cause, they should really sit down and have a talk or they will just be running in circles with each other again.
Gakuran... sigh you are suppose to protect Atsuko not hurt her, sometimes jealousy does blind a person but at least she finally snaps out of it and is willing to
take responsibility.

..... now the most important thing is.... what does Yuko have in mind... I have a feeling its gonna be dramatic  :twothumbs

THanks for updating, please update soon again.  :thumbsup

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
« Reply #91 on: November 08, 2011, 10:10:35 AM »
 :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup please update soon!  :bow:
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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
« Reply #92 on: November 08, 2011, 12:04:56 PM »
 :nervous Almost forgot to comment  :P
But I am reeeaaalllly~~~ curious about what will happen next :huhuh
 :thumbsup It's really interesting! and Please update soon  :bow:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 1)
« Reply #93 on: November 15, 2011, 07:17:37 AM »
blughise: So you didnt actually edit it after =( its ok I know how busy life gets....I'm a good example of one =P

kahem: Yuko is a stalker type if you haven't already noticed.....Rappapa doesn't like her plans but hopefully you will like it =D

haruhi16: Kai will be fine....not so much everyone else that's around Yuko.....

aoi_sora: Mhmm....Close but not yet....

RJay: Hopefully this will be a pleasant surprise?

immortal_K: And I finally updated again!!!! Well, talking is not happening very soon =P....Gakuran is just blinded by love.....hopefully, I'll find her another person to fall in love with.....

Megumi: Sorry, school is being gay....too much to do and so little time....

skytsuna: Well, here you go, everything is happening now but I don't think the next part will be out till....Christmas?


Anyways, here you guys go, hope you will enjoy this as I was grinning the the whole time while I was typing this....


Chapter 16 (Part 2)

-Kamonohashi Agency Living Room-

“So, what happened?” Shachou asked as she looked at Riku and Kuu while Marilyn started to bandage up the boys.

“We were jumped by Yankee girls.” Kuu said as he let Marilyn start sanitizing the scratches on his face.

“They surrounded us by all sides and tried to hurt us but guys don’t hit girls so we only evaded at best…” Riku added.

“But then superhero like Yankee girls from another school saved us from the evil clutches of the first set of Yankee girls.” Kuu finished the story as shachou just looked at them disbelievingly.

“What Kuu was trying to say is that a rival school of the first group of Yankee girls came in and saved us.” Riku retold the story

“Hmm….that seems more possible than the way Kuu told it…” Shachou said and continued, “Kai’s out of the picture for a while so you two can go back to school… but when Kai gets better, you better be able to work twice as hard and I think you three will need some martial arts lessons…”

-Gym-

*Majijo students going at others necks*

“Oi! Listen up.” Yuko said over the microphone.

All the Majijo students quiet down as they heard their leader.

“So, I want you guys to follow me.”

Murmurs of ‘what is she talking about?’ could be heard.

“I want all of you to join me in auditioning for AKB48, an idol group.”

Everyone in the gym was thoroughly shocked at what Yuko-senpai said.

In the corner of the room, a certain Nezumi thought, ‘mhmm, interesting…’

‘That was her brilliant plan?’ Sado thought. ‘Yankees as idols? Is she insane?’ Sado sighed as she knew that after Yuko-san decides something, no one can change her mind.

“So, I want all of you to start fixing each other’s faces…wait that didn’t sound right… I want you all to start putting on makeup, practice singing and dancing.” Yuko smiled and showed her dimples. “Application forms are outside, take one and bring it to the staff room tomorrow to fax it out. Before I end this meeting, one thing you should keep in mind, if you leak a word to Torigoya, I WILL KILL YOU. That is all.”

-Next day-

The Rappapa gang took over the staff room as each Yankee in the school lined up to use the fax machine to fax over their application sheets.

“Yuko-san, are you sure we should do this?” Sado asked as she clutched onto her own application and a forged application of another person.

“Yep! I think this will be good for her to open up.” Yuko said as she snatched the two applications and sent it. “There, no backing out…now, how am I going to get Maeda to go to the auditions…”

‘This is going to be tiring…’ Sado thought as she left the staff room.

‘I need a sure way for us to get into the group…what can we do? We’re just Yankee girls that want to become idols…’ The light bulb in Yuko’s head switched on as her plan was made. ‘Nothing will stop me… I could probably plan for world domination if Torigoya wanted to become my queen.’ Yuko grinned as she drafted up her plans.

-Weeks later-

‘I’m so bored of school… It’s a good thing that Nami is feeling better now.’ Torigoya thought as Majijo girls started to fight one another. All is normal at Majisuka…except, ‘why are they only aiming for the body? Even I know that the best place to KO someone is the face…’

-Rappapa Secret Meeting-

“Ok, so who are the girls that made it through the first selection?” Yuko asked

“I really don’t know why we’re doing this…” Shibuya said aloud, earning a glare from Yuko.

“Neh~ Okotteiru?” Gekikara asked Shibuya.

“Shut up.”

“HEHEHEHEHE.” Gekikara let out her signature laugh as she rubbed her neck.

Black then moved swiftly to Gekikara’s side and sat her down as to not piss off Shibuya and have a fight break out with Yuko around. God knows what would happen if Yuko, Gekikara and Shibuya fought…

“Ahem, everyone from team Horumon, Fondue, and Under made it, as well as Nezumi, Center, Kabuki Sisters, Gakuran, Shanshou Shimai, and of course all of us including Dance and Maeda.” Sado reported.

“Alright, since the audition is tomorrow, I'm going to let you all in on the plan of success.” Yuko said as Sado rolled her eyes. “Round up the girls that failed the first stage and get them to scare off all the other applicants.” Yuko showed an evil grin.

Sado let out a sigh as she thought, ‘Nothing is going to stop Yuko-san is there?’ and concluded to her fate of becoming a part of the next Japanese idol group.


TBC.....


YAY I finished all my midterms.....but finals are coming up......December will be better, I promise?
and this part only finished because my place had a blackout with me having no internet to do my hw so I decided to finish this part of my story.....

Hopefully you have enjoyed this update and won't kill me because it took too long.....  :theking

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
« Reply #94 on: November 15, 2011, 07:54:44 AM »
Oh! An update!!!! :heart:
I'm Lucky today XD
Thanks for the update :)
I was really curious 8)

OMG! They auditioned for joining AKB!!!! :w00t:
Wow! What a brilliant idea Yuko!!!!
Dang! Now I want more  8)2

Thanks again~ :thumbsup
And I'll be waiting for the next update 8)

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
« Reply #95 on: November 15, 2011, 07:56:57 AM »
Yay they're going to audition for akb48!! Yuko is planning this for Riku?? Ugh i hope Riku won't be cold towards Yuko and show how much she love the squirrel! LOL they're going to scare the other applicants so no one will stand on their way? HAHAHAHA Brilliant idea as usual Yankee girls!!

Now i want the next chapter!! please!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON AS  YOU CAN! It's been 2 months already!!! D: D: D:
« Last Edit: February 08, 2012, 05:05:54 AM by haruhi16 »

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
« Reply #96 on: November 15, 2011, 08:03:18 AM »
 :peace: Yea!! Update!! :)

Yuko's idea was awesome!!!! :w00t:
To audition for AKB XD
Hehe.. and to scare off other competitors :lol:
Thats definitely  :twisted: evil but I like it :P

Nice update  :thumbsup
Hopefully you will update soon  :mon cute:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
« Reply #97 on: November 15, 2011, 08:11:27 AM »
LOL... I'm actually re-read it again because I can't remember the last chapter that I read before...  :lol:

Good to see you're updating again...  :twothumbs

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
« Reply #98 on: November 15, 2011, 08:14:05 AM »
Oh how I like Yuko's ideas!!!!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 16 Part 2)
« Reply #99 on: November 15, 2011, 08:00:58 PM »
YAY! Update.  XD

Now I wander how they'll get Atsuko to go? :?

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