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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 4)
« Reply #20 on: February 07, 2011, 01:24:27 PM »
Really Nice... Please keep update  :twothumbs  :twothumbs  :twothumbs

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 4)
« Reply #21 on: February 13, 2011, 03:05:17 AM »
LOL Thank for your... very clear answers...  :huhuh
CRUEL.  :shocked
Thank for the update :D Since you have not a single answer to my questions, I'll just say... I want a meeting between Takamina/Kai/Nami (seriously wondering how she can survive with so many identities  :smhid) and Maeda!!!
But hey... maybe they will just go there when no one will be at school anyway so XD I mean, knowing Saeko, she doesn't want their real identity to be discover so it'd be logic... OMG if you do that, I'll hate you XD
I'm the best at answering questions ;)
Why would I not be cruel? Take this example for thought, It took me like a week to finish this chapter and feels pretty short to me...maybe it's just the forum but you get the point.
If you think about it Riku/Asahi/Torigoya and Kuu/Hinata/Minegishi also have a lot of identities, so you cant just say Kai has lots of identities, it's unfair to Hinata...I'm gonna get Hinata to chase after you....(not in real life...)
What if I don't want a meeting between Takamina/Kai/Nami and Maeda? Did you think of that?
I think I've made you hate me enough with all my answers to whatever you say already....a little more hate wouldn't make a difference....


Thanks for reading my fanfic guys



Chapter 5

-The next day-

Just as the sun was starting to rise, the group Persona was wide awake. Thoughts are all running though their heads.

‘Oh my god, I’m going to be photographed by Kichin.’ As Nami thought to herself as a smile formed on her face, which turned to a frown at second thought. ‘but…NUDE? How are we going to pull that off?’

‘Shit shit shit shit shit. What am I going to do? What if Nami finds out that we’ve lied to her….more importantly, how am I going to explain this to Yuko?’ Asahi thought as she started to make up explanations in her head. ‘Shachou kidnapped me and forced me to do it….no that doesn’t work…Yuko would fight shachou…though, I would like to find out who’d win but Yuko might get hurt…’ Asahi thought as she totally didn't care for the well being of Shachou.

‘What’s for breakfast? I didn’t eat much dinner last night since I was too excited.’ Thought Hinata. ‘Maybe we’ll get a luxurious breakfast from Marilyn to pump us up for the photo shoot.’

*LOUD STOMACH GROWL*   

“That wasn’t me…” Hinata said, fully aware that the other two were already awake.

The three friends started laughing together. All negative thoughts were thrown out of the other two. As they got up.

“Come on, let’s get ready and then we’ll eat early today.” Asahi said

“But my bed’s warm while its cold if I get out of bed.” Hinata replied, unwilling to get out into the cold.

“Ok then you can stay there and I’ll eat your share of breakfast too.” Said Nami, as to motivate Hinata out of bed.

Hinata got up and ran for the washroom while shouting, “Last one to get ready does dishes today.”

Asahi and Nami just shook their heads in unison…

-Downstairs-

After they all got changed into their Persona outfits for the photo shoot, they all went downstairs together to make breakfast and eat it. As they approached the dining room, they saw a huge spread of gourmet food laid on the dining table.

“Ohayou” Marilyn said with enthusiasm

“Ohayou” the 3 person band said together.

“Did you make all this yourself?” Riku asked as he saw Kuu and Kai pigging out on the breakfast spread already.

“Yeah, since it’s your first photo shoot, I thought I should make something special for you guys.” Marilyn said with a smile across her face.

“This is really good. Thank you for your hard work.” Riku really appreciates what Marilyn does to make them feel happy.

“Yeah, this is the best. Thanks” Kai said as he started choking since he was speaking with his mouth full.

“…” Kuu just won’t stop pigging out.

“Excuse me for a moment..” Riku excused himself and went to the washroom.

-Toilet-

‘I should tell Yuko that I’m not going to school today…what’s my reason?’ Riku thought as he paced himself in the toilet. ‘Yosh, let’s go with the oldest excuse in the book.’

Yuko-san, I’m not feeling too well today…you know the time of the month, my cramps are so bad today, I’m not going to school today… sorry…

‘That should do it.’ Riku thought as he sent the message to Yuko.

-Dining room-

“You guys ate everything?” Riku impressed with their appetite yet pissed off that they ate his share too.

“Yup…yummy in my tummy.” Kuu said as he rubbed his tummy to emphasize his point.

“So good….” Kai agreed.

“Riku, don’t worry I made you some onigiri.” Marilyn saw the face Riku was giving off…PISSED OFF look.

After Riku heard Marilyn say that she left him some food, his tension decreased.

“Are you boys ready yet?” Shachou asked

“Yes ma’am.” The boys answered.

“Then lets hop to it. The car is waiting outside for us.”

-Car-

‘Shit shit shit. I feel like my funeral is coming soon……I don’t know if I can hide this from Yuko… she’s so perspective sometimes.’ Riku thought as he stared outside and into space. ‘I should stop hanging out with Nami, I’m swearing so much more….’

‘NUDE?!?!? I can’t get this out of my head.’ Kai’s thought was all jumbled together

‘I wonder if Riku is going to eat his onigiri’s’ Kuu thought as he wanted something to snack on.

-Majisuka Front Gates-

“Welcome to my school.” The school president said as she welcomed the band and managers. “Please feel free to use all of the facilities that my school can offer. Don’t hesitate to ask.” 

“Thank you very much for having us here and lending your school to us, Yuriko.” Shachou thanked her long time friend while Marilyn was giving Yuriko a glare.

“Think nothing of it, Saeko.”

“Well, we should get going or we’ll be here all day.” Marilyn said as she stood between the two friends to block the two friends from looking at each other any longer.

“Yes, well Marilyn is right.” Riku agreed as he wanted to get this done as soon as possible so that they can leave as soon as possible.

“Class is already in session so if you could, please be quiet in the hallways.” Yuriko warned.

“Yes yes, please lead the way.” Shachou and the group all started walking towards the school.

-Classroom-

“Look, are those 3 people over there…GUYS?” Random yankee asked.

“…THEY’RE PERSONA….they just debuted as a group! I’m already a fan of them even though they haven’t released their first single yet.” Wota said excitedly

‘…’ None of the members in Hormone ever saw Wota like this…They were surprised and shocked to the point where they just stayed motionless and they all had their mouths opened such that it looked like =O

“I mean..I’m not a big fan or anything but they seem pretty cool…” Wota tried to cover herself. “LET’S EAT, the meat will get burned.”

-3rd year Hallway-

“So the music room that you will be using is down this hallway. This hallway leads to all the 3rd year classrooms.” Yuriko pointed out.

‘Yeah yeah yeah I know I know’ Kuu thought…can we walk faster, I’m getting bored.

As they made their way, Kai heard a sight conversation and blanked out…

-Classroom-

“Do you know where Atsu-nee is?” Daruma asked

“Atsuko is usually not this late.” Gakuran asked Team Hormone. As she started to feel nervous

‘What if the Yabakune’s jumped her…I should have walked her to school today..of all the days I sleep in, it had to be the one where Atsuko is late.’ Gakuran started beating herself inside.

“Maeda-san? If you two of all people don’t know then how would we know?” Wota answered, feeling less embarrassed from the little excitement of seeing Persona.

“Maeda’s mom just got back, so they’re eating breakfast together right now.” Sado answered as she reads her message that Maeda sent her.

“Maeda will come a little later. We have some business to do later.” Yuko added to reassure Mr. Loverboy a.k.a. Gakuran.

-Hallway-

‘Atsu-nee?....Atsuko?….Maeda-san?.........Maeda Atsuko!’ A light switch flicked on in Kai’s head. ‘SHIT! OH MY GOD. IT CAN’T BE TRUE. IT JUST CAN’T BE TRUE. OF ALL THE DIFFERENT SCHOOLS IN TOKYO, WHY’D IT HAVE TO BE IN THE SAME ONE AS HER!!!’ Kai started to panic. ‘Maybe the person they are talking about just shares the same name as her…’ reassuring himself that it is not possible that she’s in this school…

TBC.....


PS: I thought about it, and I GUESS I don't want people to hate me....I GUESS..... LOL...I'm a horrible person  :theking

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 4)
« Reply #22 on: February 13, 2011, 04:15:45 AM »
I'm gonna get Hinata to chase after you....(not in real life...)

You have no idea how scare I am right now  :yawn: I mean... it's Hinata you know XD (Ohhh how I feel I will regret saying this...)

What if I don't want a meeting between Takamina/Kai/Nami and Maeda? Did you think of that?

If you do that... I will not be the only one who will want to kill you, did you think of that?  8)


PS: I thought about it, and I GUESS I don't want people to hate me....I GUESS..... LOL...I'm a horrible person  :theking

Don't guess too much....  :smhid

Soooo I was just doing nothing on computer and was sure there would be no update tonight, but hey, I was lucky, you updated! Though... "lucky" is such a big word XD

I have a theory of what's going to happen: Kai, Riku and Kuu will "fight" as they do in the real dorama. But since they are in Majisuka High, some yankees, aka Yuko, will see them and will want to fight against them. And then Maeda arrives and wants to kill them too :P Because she doesn't want Yuko to XD And she then realizes that Kai is fighting like Minami, which is really strange to her so she decides to spy them XD Okay, I'll stop here with my crazy things  :lol:

O__________O I want Kai to meet Maeda  :bow:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 5)
« Reply #23 on: February 14, 2011, 12:28:29 PM »
 :cow: :cow: :cow:
thanks for updating...
one question :nervous
.... is erena still in this story? or she's studying overseas.... :D
i want to see takamina's reaction seeing her best friend and her younger sister attending in Majisuka Gakuen!

since bou-j525 have a theory on what's going to happen well, me too :D
.... Kai keep staring at Maeda when someone block his way....  :angry: Gakuran! they started fighting then Kuu as the Majisuka Gakuen Kaichou try to stopped the two boys or girls but the two of them push Kuu away and bumped Akicha :angry: now Team Hormone is now circling Kuu, and Kuu started to cry  :cry:
while Riku can't do anything coz Yuko is watching his every move....

 :rofl:


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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 5)
« Reply #24 on: February 14, 2011, 11:47:15 PM »
Wow an update~ THANK YOU~  :onioncheer:

Looking forward for your next update~  :on GJ:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
« Reply #25 on: February 16, 2011, 08:24:48 AM »
You have no idea how scare I am right now  :yawn: I mean... it's Hinata you know XD (Ohhh how I feel I will regret saying this...)
If you do that... I will not be the only one who will want to kill you, did you think of that?  8)
Don't guess too much....  :smhid

Soooo I was just doing nothing on computer and was sure there would be no update tonight, but hey, I was lucky, you updated! Though... "lucky" is such a big word XD

I have a theory of what's going to happen: Kai, Riku and Kuu will "fight" as they do in the real dorama. But since they are in Majisuka High, some yankees, aka Yuko, will see them and will want to fight against them. And then Maeda arrives and wants to kill them too :P Because she doesn't want Yuko to XD And she then realizes that Kai is fighting like Minami, which is really strange to her so she decides to spy them XD Okay, I'll stop here with my crazy things  :lol:

O__________O I want Kai to meet Maeda  :bow:
You should totally be scared ;)
So tempting.......to just kill off Maeda so they never meet....I totally have an evil side
LOL....
I guess you were lucky......maybe your lucky again tonight? maybe?
How about no to your theory....ok fine some of it is correct......some not so much.....I totally changed a lot of mendol plot but that's ok.....

.... is erena still in this story? or she's studying overseas.... :D
i want to see takamina's reaction seeing her best friend and her younger sister attending in Majisuka Gakuen!

since bou-j525 have a theory on what's going to happen well, me too :D
.... Kai keep staring at Maeda when someone block his way....  :angry: Gakuran! they started fighting then Kuu as the Majisuka Gakuen Kaichou try to stopped the two boys or girls but the two of them push Kuu away and bumped Akicha :angry: now Team Hormone is now circling Kuu, and Kuu started to cry  :cry:
while Riku can't do anything coz Yuko is watching his every move....
I dunno if I'll ever add Erena in the story.....I don't really wanna.........
Too many theories....my head is in overload so I didn't put any of yours or bou-j525 in my chapter...TOO BAD =)

Guys, think about it this way, if my story revolves around your theories, it would make this a lot less exciting

Thanks for reading my rambling again...


Chapter 6

-Music room-

As they started setting up, they introduced themselves to Kichin.

"I'm Persona's Riku."

"Osu, Kuu desu."

Shachou nudged Kai in the arm to get his attention and hissed, "Introduce yourself."

"...Kai desu." As Kai said it emotionlessly, earning worried looks from Riku and Kuu.

"I refuse to take nude photos of men." Kichin exclaimed. "But today, I will take beautiful pictures of men. Although some of them are less cooperative, I will still do it." Kichin looks at Kai.

'Shit, what if it really is her?' Kai tuned out everyone, but had his brain turned on for once.

Scrambling to cover for Kai, Riku took charge and told Kichin, "We'll finish getting ready now so please excuse us for a moment." Riku grabbed Kai and Kuu to leave but stopped dead in their tracks as three girls came into the room.

"Since my school is a bit special, I've gotten three of our girls to show you around and to stop any unnecessary distractions let's say, for the three boys here. Girls, introduce yourselves." the principal ordered.

"Oshima Yuko desu. Pleased to meet you." Yuko said this while giving her best smile and showing her dimples. And since the other two didn't want to introduce themselves, Yuko took the liberty of doing it for them. "The taller one is Sado and the boyish looking one is Gakuran. Don't mind her, she's just filling in for someone who's not here a the moment, so she's a bit on the grumpy side."

"I am not grumpy, I'm just worried." Gakuran said as she tried to hide a blush.

'What is this? Is today make Riku's life a living hell day? First, we're doing our photo shoot at Majisuka, second, my breakfast got eaten by Kuu, third, Kai is not responding at all and now Yuko's face to face in front of me?' Riku hated how the day started out and hopes that it doesn't end any worse than how it started.

"Please to meet you three." Kuu said as he tried to break the ice in this awkward situation.

"Each one of us will be helping each of you three boys today, I be with Riku, Kai with Gakuran and Kuu with Sado." Yuko said as she noticed Riku's facial expressions changed from unhappy to worse day of his life kind of face. "If you have any objections, we can change the pairings." Yuko asked as she kinda felt offended that the boy with red streaks didn't like her.

"Mhmm, if it's ok, can I be in a pair with Yuko? Sado seems like she doesn't like me very much and doesn't talk." Kuu asked as he wanted to give Riku a break from this madness.

"Sure." Answered Yuko, smiling at the boy with blue streaks.

'At least one of the three boys respond.' thought Yuko.

"Um... sorry but could we go to the washroom to finish up our makeup for the photo shoot." Riku asked as he wanted to just run away from Yuko.

"Sure of course, this way please." As Yuko lead the three boys to the washroom, Sado and Gakuran were behind them.

-Toilet-

"Kai, what's wrong with you today? You usually not this unresponsive." Kuu asked as he gave himself a quick touch up.

"Are you sick? Come on let's get this over so we can leave alright." Riku wanted this day to end.

"Oh yeah, I'm fine." Kai replied

'Wait if we finish fast then there's a chance that I don't have to find out if she's actually here or not.  I won't see her and she won't know I lied to her, it's a win-win situation.' Kai thought as he returned to reality

"Osu, let's get this over with." Kai was now pumping with energy.

"Osu, we can do this." Riku felt thankful that Kai was back in shape and that their goals were the same, for this day to end.

"Osu, after this, Marilyn said she'll make me more food" Kuu added, earning smiles from his other bandmates as he too wanted to go home.

-Music Room-

*Loud panting sounds*

“This is strange, very strange. My radar is reacting.” Kichin said as he was taking pictures of the band. “Are you guys really men?”

“Ah, of course we are.” Kai said as he did a manly pose.

“Could it be possible that you’re reacting to the girls in the room?” Riku asked, as the responsible one, he had to think of good reasons to deny the real facts.

“That could be possible but I don’t know.” Kichin’s hair that was a round ball of fuzziness became a round ball of fuzziness with a point on the very top like an antenna. Kichin’s face full of confusion on why there were reactions to his radar.

“Sorry, but could we take a break?” Riku asked, as Kichin nodded in answer since Kichin wanted to sort out his thoughts.

The three boys huddled into the corner.

“What are we going to do? He knows.” Kuu whispered.

“We need to show him that we are men amongst men.” Kai added

“What we need is a plan…” Riku suggested as he looks around to see if there was anything that could be of use to them.

“What if we were to show Kichin that we like girls?” Kai asked

“Good idea. Where’s Ray? That’s the easiest way. For you to be lovey-dovey with her.” Riku gave Kai a grin.

“NO WHERE NEAR HERE. How about you go hit on that tall girl….Sado is her name right?” Kai retaliated

‘HIT ON SADO? Much rather hit myself until I’m unconscious then to do that. She can be so scary.’ Riku thought as Kuu cut his train of thought.

“Well since Ray isn’t here, Kai’s partnered with someone like us, and Sado doesn’t respond at all…I guess the only thing left to do is for me to hit on Yuko.” Kuu suggested earning a pat on the back from Kai, since this was the most humane thing he’s said all day.

“You can’t.” Objected Riku as he showed an angry face.

“Well, if I don’t do it, then you have to.”

“I don’t care which of you two hits on Yuko but decide fast.” Kai added as he scanned the room to see if there were any new bodies that entered the room.

“Fine, Kuu, you can hit on Yuko but just don’t go overboard.” Riku warned as he felt his heart break at the thought of himself letting his most respected person be used to help cover up tracks of feminism coming from the boys.

“Ittekimasu.”

Kuu walks by the refreshments and grabbed 3 bottles of water and walks towards Yuko, Sado and Gakuran, who was by the doors to make sure that no one would dare interfere with the photo shoot.

“Thanks for all the hard work guys, I meant girls.” Kuu said as he handed a bottle of water to each of the girls.

“Thanks.” Yuko said as Sado and Gakuran just gave a quick nod as a symbol of thanks.

“What grade are you in?” Kuu asked as he looked only at Yuko, with Sado glaring at him.

‘Who does he think he is, hitting on Yuko-san?’ Sado thought as she saw that Yuko was getting along quite well with the boy.

-On the other side of the room-

Riku was glaring at Kuu who was being overly close to Yuko. But snapped out of it as Kai walked towards Kichin.

“Look at Kuu go, that lady killer.” Kai commented at the scene of Yuko leaning against the wall with Kuu beside her and talking quite happily with the boy.

“Kuu might look cute and all but if he wants, he can get any girl.” Riku added as he saw Kuu and Yuko exchange mail and phone numbers.

*Pants harder*

‘We failed again…I let Kuu hit on Yuko for nothing?’ Riku thought to himself as he was beating himself mentally as he motioned Kuu for another secret meeting in their secluded corner.

“That failed, good job Kuu.” Riku said sarcastically at the ‘good job’ part of the sentence

“At least I got something out of it.” Kuu said as he gave a wave to Yuko, who returned as enthusiastically as she got the wave.

“What else do you have on your mind, Riku?” Kai asked, not noticing the tension forming on Riku’s face.

“Show him that we have what all men have?” Kuu said as he hinted to the lower half of his body.

“Mhmm, that could probably work.” Kai said, but still skeptical about the plan B.

“Jan-ken-pon.” The three boys thought that this was the most fair way to decide the task through fate.

“I DON’T WANT TO DO IT.” Kai exclaimed as the other two boys pushed him into the washroom where Kichin was already at.

-Toilet-

Kai walked into the toilet unwillingly as he saw that Kichin didn’t close the door to the cubical that he was in and walked into the next one beside him and followed his behavior as to not close the door.

Kai had his instruments tucked into his pants already as he stood feet’s apart as he slowly unzipped his fly and let out water.

Kichin, who was done and curious looked at Kai while he was doing his business.

“Oi, what are you looking at?” Kai asked as he wanted to show a manly side of himself.

“Oh nothing.” Kichin left the toilet.

Kai soon followed after and asked his friends,

“Did he believe it?”

Riku and Kuu both shrugged not knowing if it worked or not.

-Music room-

“Men or women, it doesn’t matter, I, Kichin will take pictures of nude men starting today.” Kichin exclaimed as he grabbed Riku’s jacket and pulled it off.

‘Crap, we’re going to get found out. What can we do? What was the sexiest thing I’ve ever seen?’ Riku asked himself as Yuko’s face popped into mind. The first time Riku saw Yuko was when Yuko was taking care of 50 Yabakune’s on Majisuka grounds where Yuko was saying ‘Tanoshi’ when fighting. In that moment he knew what he had to do, even if it meant bruising for the next week or so.

“ARGH, man up you two.” Riku shouted as he pushed the two onto the floor. “This has always been our dream, we can’t give up half way.” As Riku started the fight, Kuu and Kai had blank confuse faces on, so Riku motioned them to hit him and fight.

Kai, punched Riku in the face with his right hand making Riku swade to the right and in return, Kuu took a swing at him through the body as Riku lost his balance and landed on the floor.

“This is better than nude, more, more, give me more.” Kichin was holding his camera, taking as many shoots as he could as he saw the fight scene roll out.

Kuu then punched Kai in the face while Riku charged at the two of them, throwing himself on the two which caused them all the fall down. Kai was the fastest to recover and took at punch at each of the two friends.

“Their fighting like kids.” Gakuran commented

“I think Kai is the best fighter over there, I think he’s just hiding his abilities that could give you a run for your money.” Yuko added.

“Che, what do you see in him? A punch here and a kick there, I can fight better than him with my eyes closed.” Gakuran unpleased that she was compared to what she thought was a newbie.

“He just doesn’t want to hurt his friends too much. They don’t have this planned out you know.” Sado added as she too saw a spark of fire in Kai’s eyes.

The three boys eventually tired out and gathered around the piano, with Kuu on the side sitting on the piano bench with his jacket off, Riku in the middle wearing his jacket as he leans onto the piano and Kai with his jacket off posed standing up without any support from the piano with is jacket over his shoulder.

“Excellent. Job boys.” Kichin thanked Persona’s management for the new learning experience for him.

As the crew started to pack up, the three girls got the boys ice pads and bandages.

“Here.” Yuko handed Kuu an ice pack and some bandages

“Thanks, what did you think of our photo shoot?” Kuu asked as he noticed Riku looking at their direction.

“It was interesting, who knew that Kai could fight that well.”

“Ahaha, I didn’t know either.” Kuu then slyly yet quietly asked, “Next time we meet, it’ll be a date.” As he heads out of the room, he gave Yuko a quick wink.

“Here, well done, you started the fight but you lost horribly. Think first before you act.” Sado said as she discreetly handed the ice pack and bandages to Riku and walked away afterwards.

“Thanks?”

Riku got confused as to why Sado seemed like she was worried. ‘I must be imagining things.’ Riku then packed up and headed to the van.

“Yo, I guess you can pack a punch.” Gakuran smiled at the blonde

“Mhmm, I guess…” Kai smiled back since this was the first time in the whole day that Gakuran started a conversation with him.

“You can be cute if you want to be.” Kai commented, as Kai was thinking back to the smile Gakuran gave him.

“What are you talking about? I have no interest in you. My only interest is in Atsuko, and don’t you dare hit on her if you ever see her.” Gakuran appalled by the interest in her shown by Kai.

‘Atsuko…’ Kai thought.

“Yeah yeah yeah. Don’t worry, I won’t hit on your Atsuko.”

-Field-

“Thank you very much Yuriko, without your schools setting, we wouldn’t have been able to do this photo shoot so successfully.” Shachou thanked her long time friend as she motioned the boys and Marilyn to get on the van.

“No problem, anything and anytime for you Saeko.”

As all the boys and Marilyn got onto the van, Saeko gave Yuriko a brief hug and then got onto the front passenger seat of the van and left.

Marilyn, who was green with jealously didn’t speak at all to shachou, making the ride uncomfortable and awkward, so all the boys just looked out the tinted window to look at the view.

As the van stopped at the four way stop intersection, Kai saw a girl in the same Majisuka uniform that Asahi and Hinata owns, walking out a house and towards the school. Kai took a glance at the girl’s face…Kai would never forget her face…her beautiful expressionless face…

‘Atsuko.’

TBC...

Opps...they still didn't meet face-to-face yet....DON'T KILL ME....I PROMISE THEY WILL MEET SOON........like next chapter? maybe? I dunno....make you all keep guessing  :theking

PS: Btw, I totally stopped proof-reading....I got bored =P
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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
« Reply #26 on: February 16, 2011, 09:12:55 AM »
no kai and maeda scene!!!!  :gyaaah:

kuu and yuko  :shocked riku and sado
interesting!!!

Guys, think about it this way, if my story revolves around your theories, it would make this a lot less exciting
:grin: your right!

thanks for updating!!!!  :twothumbs


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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
« Reply #27 on: February 16, 2011, 09:32:01 AM »
Updateeee!!!

LOLLLL all the roles are switched up and the pairings are different too  :lol:

I'm glad Riku didn't do anything to Kuu when he was hitting on Yuko

coool i like how you added them commenting on Takamina's fighting  :)

PLEASE MAKE THEMM MEETT NEXT CHAPTER I BEG OF YOU!! :D


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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
« Reply #28 on: February 16, 2011, 11:23:14 AM »
Yay~!! Riku get jealous~!!  :tntrm:

I'm LOOKING FORWARD for your next update~  :luvuluvu:

THANKS~!  :k-great: and PLEASE CONTINUE~!!  :tama-apeshit:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
« Reply #29 on: February 16, 2011, 11:55:28 PM »
How about no to your theory....ok fine some of it is correct......some not so much.....I totally changed a lot of mendol plot but that's ok.....

I was only kidding  :smhid

But hey, I want a meeting soon now!  :shocked But I don't know why I have a feeling you're not going to write it for the next chapter...  :banghead:

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 6)
« Reply #30 on: February 20, 2011, 10:50:28 PM »
kuu and yuko  :shocked riku and sado
interesting!!!
I thought it was funny when I was writing it up....for me...if its not funny or at least interesting I won't do it =)
At least interesting to me....I dunno how most of you guys feel about it....hopefully like it?

Yay~!! Riku get jealous~!!  :tntrm:
I'm LOOKING FORWARD for your next update~  :luvuluvu:
THANKS~!  :k-great: and PLEASE CONTINUE~!!  :tama-apeshit:
LOL....the most important thing for you was Riku getting jealous....but thats ok....I GUESS....kinda think that you prefer RikuxYuko rather than like Torigoya/AsahixYuko.....I thought you liked the second pairing more than RikuxYuko =P
Even though they are all the same person...I just wanted to point it out

MAKE THEMM MEETT NEXT CHAPTER I BEG OF YOU!! :D
But hey, I want a meeting soon now!  :shocked But I don't know why I have a feeling you're not going to write it for the next chapter...  :banghead:
I was contemplating on whether or not I should let them meet.....You'll have to read this chapter to know if I actually wrote the meeting  :twisted:

Thanks for reading my ramblings again  :theking

Chapter 7

- Kamonohashi Office-

“What happened to Nami? She’s like in a daze ever since we got home.” Asahi whispered to Hinata as they were looking at Nami playing with the moose decoration in the living room.

“I don’t know…maybe she’s hungry?”

“Hinata, I wasn’t asking about you, I was asking about Nami.” Asahi said as she walked towards Nami.

‘Atsuko…why is your face still like a void?... I heard your friends talking about you… You should have been able to get over this by now… Where’s the strong willed Atsuko that I met? Did she die with me?’ Nami couldn’t forget about Atsuko after all this time. She felt like she ruined Atsuko’s life. ‘I’m so sorry… To forget and live on with life, that’s all I wanted for you… forget me, live your life to its fullest.’

“Girls, dinner time.” Marilyn called from the kitchen, as she interrupted Nami's thoughts.

“Nami, go wash up and let’s eat.” Asahi said as she saw Nami snap out of her trace.

“Yay, more food for Hinata.”

“Don’t eat my share like you did this morning.” Asahi shouted from the toilet as she and Nami washed their hands for dinner.

-Dinner table-

Hinata was drooling when Nami and Asahi got to the dining room.

A huge spread of party food was on the table, chicken wings, pineapple and ham on toothpicks, spaghetti, pizza and sushi.

“To congratulate the three of you for the wonderful photo shoot.” Marilyn said as she smiled. But her smile didn’t last long as Shachou came into the dining room.

“Yes, good job girls, it’s all thanks to my superior leadership that you’ve gotten this far.”

An awkward scene was starting to unfold as Marilyn and Shachou was looking at each other.

“Girls, please enjoy this meal, I don’t feel so well, I’m going now.” Marilyn left the girls and shachou as chased after Marilyn.

“So it’s just us three now.” Asahi pointed out as Hinata already started to pig out on the spread.

“I’m actually not very hungry, I’m going to go take a shower.” Nami started to head upstairs to the bathroom.

“Mpf gonra eatch urs chu.” Hinata said as her mouth was stuffed with food.

“Hinata, no one is going to steal your food. Slow down. And what did you say?” Asahi got her chopsticks and muttered “itadakimasu.” And started eating.

‘What’s wrong with Nami? She normally doesn’t pass up food… I guess everyone has an off day sometimes… more importantly, did Yuko figure it out? I certainly hope not.’ Asahi thought as her phone rung to grab the owner’s attention since she got a new message. Asahi saw that it was from Yuko and excused herself to the living room.

“Don’t you dare eat my share like you did this morning.” Asahi warned before she left the room.

-Living room-

Nyan Nyan, I missed you today. Today was so boring, we were like babysitting guys our age. But at least I got something out of it >=D. Me and the principal made a deal, if I help her today I get 6 tickets where I can skip class but they will still count me as attended to class. We can go out and have some fun together.

‘So that’s why you were there today, I knew you won’t do anything without good reason…’ Asahi thought with a chuck.

Well, I was in pain all day and you were having fun? That’s not fair. I’m mad at you now.

‘Let’s see her reaction.’ Asahi thought as she chuckled. ‘I totally have been affected by Sado, I’m turning into an S.’ Yuko’s reply came back scarily fast, as if she was waiting with a phone in her hand for Asahi or something like that.

Nyan Nyan, I rather myself be in pain then to see you in pain. I was not having fun at all. There were like three guys. One of them, his name was Kuu and he was hitting on me, he’s actually pretty funny and kinda cute but girly kind of cute, totally not my type. Kai’s too rash and aggressive, but he can fight pretty well for a shorty. Lastly, there’s this guy, Riku, he’s like a pretty boy and a smart one too. Can’t really fight that well though. I don’t think he likes me. He was giving me weird looks the whole time. Nyan Nyan, don’t be mad at me, we can go skip and go have some fun *wink wink*

‘Awww, Yuko’s so sweet… Kuu is funny and cute?!?!?! At least she doesn’t like girly cute boys or else I’d have a talk with Kuu then destroy his phone so he loses Yuko’s number… Kai is a pretty good fighter though, gave me a couple good bruises that won’t go away anytime soon…’ Asahi pouted but continued to read Yuko’s message, ‘Why is Yuko so keen on Riku? Kuu and Kai’s comments were short but Yuko’s going on and on about Riku… No having fun with you.’ Asahi now has an angry pout face.

Well, you didn’t see me all day so you didn’t see me in pain, therefore you yourself don’t have to be in pain today. Here I am talking to you and you’re telling me how much fun you had today and about the guys you met today. I think you have a thing for Riku since you keep mentioning him so why don’t you just skip school and have some fun with him instead.

Asahi was jealous of her second, no, third identity, Riku. For getting the girl that she respects, so she turned off her phone and threw it onto the couch and left the living room to the dining room. When girls get jealous and want to vent out anger, they respond by eating lots.

-Dining room-

“Good, you didn’t finish everything. My turn.”

“I don’t feel so well, I think I ate too much.” Hinata laid across three chairs and started to rub her tummy.

“Go get some Pepto-Bismol, they’re good for heartburns, indigestion and diarrhea.” Asahi said as if she was the spokesperson for Pepto-Bismol commercial.

Hinata got up quietly and took some Pepto-Bismol. Afterwards, she went to bed.

-Next day-

Nami got up at 5 and changed into her Kai identity but not with the usual outfit, she wore a white men’s small tank top, a black hoodie, a pair of skinny blue demin jeans, a pair of black leather Jack Purcell’s shoes, and a plain black baseball cap. As she silently left the bedroom, she remembered to take her face mask and put it on as if she was sick or something. She also left a note on the table saying that she had something to do this morning but will be back before Asahi and Hinata gets off from school.

-Somewhere near Majisuka-

‘I can’t believe I'm doing this, I really don’t think it’s right to stalk her after I left her life.’ Kai thought as he hid into an alley which was diagonally across her house. ‘It’s still early, it’s 6:30, I don’t think she’s ready for school yet…she usually gets up at 8 when school already started and gets there at 9 as she jumps over the fence to get in or other days, she’d just be home or picking a fight with nearby yankee schools. Those were the days.’ Kai slapped herself from reminiscing the past as he heard two figures approaching and hide behind the garbage cans. 

“Atsuko should come out soon.”

“Atsu-nee is always on time.”

‘That’s the girl from yesterday… Gakuran. Gakuran warned me not to hit on Atsuko. So Atsuko and Gakuran? Atsuko is an L?!?!’ Kai thoughts flew out the window when he heard the door open.

“Ohayougozaimasu.” Atsuko said unemotionally.

“Ohayou, Atsuko.”

“Atsu-nee, why didn’t you go to school yesterday?” Daruma asked as they started to walk to school. ”There were some guys from a band at our school yesterday. They seem pretty cool. Wota was so excited to see them.”

“Atsuko, here, let me care your bag for you. I can’t make my women care something so heavy.” Gakuran said as she totally ignored Daruma’s conversation with Atsuko and interrupted. Gakuran then took Atsuko’s bag.

“Ano, it’s really ok, it’s really not that heavy. And who’s your women?” Atsuko asked.

“Um, I mean, here Daruma, I’ll take your bag too. I can’t let my friends who I assume them as my women to carry heavy things.” Gakuran blushed as she tried to cover herself.

‘Right, we’re not at that step of our relationship yet.’ Gakuran thought as she also took Daruma’s bag.

‘Mhmm, so Gakuran and Atsuko aren’t together.’ Kai heart ache slowly decreased as he watches the trio walk towards the school. ‘I'm such a huge stalker… I should go… she has new friends now, she doesn’t need me anymore.’ Kai started to make way to the station. As Kai’s heart ache slowly increased as he walked further and further away, he couldn’t hear the conversation the trio was having anymore.

-The trio-

“Ah! I forgot something.” Atsuko exclaimed.

“Let’s go home and get it then.” Gakuran said as she turned around and started to walk towards Atsuko’s house.

“It’s ok, I can go home and get it myself.”

“What if Yabakune’s jump you?” Daruma asked.

“I don’t want to trouble you guys, and besides, which Yankee’s wake up early to go to school?” Atsuko asked.

“Okok, but we won’t head to school first, we’ll wait here for you ok?” Gakuran asked as he thought this was a better trade than Daruma and her going to school first.

“Alright then. I’ll hurry up and go get my stuff. Sorry.” Atsuko then started to run home.

-Kai-

‘How come my heart ache is decreasing again?’ Kai’s question was answered as Atsuko ran past him, and accidentally pushed him onto the floor.

“I’m so sorry, are you ok?” Atsuko asked as she held out her hand, ready to pull the boy she knocked down up.

‘Atsuko.’

“I'm,” *Cough cough*

‘Right, I’m Kai, my girl voice shouldn’t come out.’ Kai thought

“I’m ok. Don’t worry about it.” Kai didn’t take Atsuko’s hand and just got up himself. As he dusts himself off, he felt pain in his hands. “Ouch.”

“Are you ok? Let me see.” Atsuko suggested.

“I’m really fine. I’ll just go to the convenience store nearby and get some band aids.” Kai wasn’t looking at Atsuko anymore but looking at the floor so Atsuko won’t figure out who he is.

“Band aids won’t help that much, we should sanitize the wound first then wrap it or put band aids on it.”

“I can do that, don’t worry, shouldn’t you worry more about school? Aren’t you going to be late for school?”

“Don’t worry about that, I knocked you down so it’s my responsibility to make sure your ok.”

“No no, school is more important.”

After a little more convincing from Atsuko, Kai knew that if he didn’t let Atsuko clean his wound, he won’t be able to leave so he let her do as she wished.

Atsuko quickly typed up a message for Gakuran. And sent it.

Gakuran, sorry but can you go ahead to school first, I accidentally knocked someone down when I was running and the person got hurt so I'm going to clean the wound first so it might take a while. I'm sorry.

-Convenience store-

“I’m so sorry, I knocked you down and I couldn’t even pay for your band aids and rubbing alcohol.” Atsuko apologized as she realized her bag was still with Gakuran, and she only had her phone and house keys with her.

“It’s ok, I'm sorry for making you late to school.”

“Really, don’t worry about that. More importantly, let’s make sure your wound won’t get infected.”

Atsuko started cleaning Kai’s wounds that were on his hands. As Atsuko felt like a jolt of electricity flowing though her body.

“You’re really good at this.” Commented Kai.

“My dream is to become a nurse so being able to do things like this is natural.”

‘Conversations with this guy really flows naturally…’ Atsuko thought.

“Wow, that’s pretty cool.”

“There, all done.” Atsuko started to put the extra bandages away and covered the rubbing alcohol with the lid.

“Thank you very much.”

“No problem, it was my fault, I’m really sorry.” Atsuko apologized once more.

“Don’t worry about it.”

As the two left the convenience store.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t catch your name.”

“Ah, my name is Ka-..Kazuki.” Kai knew he shouldn’t give out his Persona band name so he made one up on the spot.

“Kazuki-kun, my name is Maeda, Maeda Atsuko.”

“Maeda-san.”

“Kazuki-kun.”

“Maeda-san.”

“Kazuki-kun.”

Awkward silence.

“Kazuki-kun, if it’s ok, can we exchange numbers? So maybe I can take you out for tea one day to apologize for knocking you over and making you pay for the band aids and rubbing alcohol.”

“Really, it’s ok.” Kai or rather Kazuki saw the pout on Atsuko’s face and took out his phone. Atsuko’s pout was replaced by a small but noticeable smile as they exchanged numbers through infrared.

“Thank you Kazuki-kun. Bye, I’ll see you soon?”

“Yeah, ok. I’ll see you later.” Kai watched Atsuko leave and disappear into the distance.

-Behind a tree-

“That asshole. Atsuko is mine.” Gakuran glared at Kazuki.

-Train-

‘Atsuko’s face had more emotions after talking to Kazuki. Did she find out? Or is Kazuki just a good influence on her.’ Kai pondered.

-Majisuka 3rd year classroom-

“Where’s Gakuran? She has my bag.” Atsuko asked Daruma.

“She went to find you. You didn’t see her?” Daruma answered.

“Oh ok.” Atsuko sat back in her seat.

She started typing a message.

Once again, I’m really sorry Kazuki-kun. When are you free, let’s go out for tea.

After she sent the message, she started to stare outside and was deep in thought.

‘Kazuki-kun is really easy going…just like Minami. He’s also really nice and almost the same height.” Atsuko chuckled. ‘Kazuki-kun is like 2 inches taller. I wonder if Minami were still here, would she have grown 2 more inches? Regardless how old she is, she always wants to grow taller.’ Atsuko chuckled at the thought. ‘Would Minami approve of Kazuki-kun? I feel a deep connection with him even though today was our first meeting. I didn’t even get to see his face.’ Atsuko pouted. ‘Minami, how are you doing in heaven? I miss you.’


TBC


Happy now? There's a meeting.....

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
« Reply #31 on: February 21, 2011, 02:34:09 AM »
YAY!!!! UPDATEE! ANDDD MEEETTTTINGGGG!! :twothumbs

i'm so happy they finally meet! Aachan had a connection with her!! :D

but i feel that Gakuran is gonna be a bit of a problem

Takamina got herself a forth identify now. Minami, Nami, Kai, and now Kazuki  :lol:

LOL Haruna is jealous of her "other" self :P

Update soon!

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
« Reply #32 on: February 21, 2011, 03:41:14 AM »
wooow.... finally they are meetiiiiiing....  :twothumbs :twothumbs yeah well, eventhough the meeting is not like what i expected but... stil it's great...  :thumbsup

and... owgh...owgh...owgh... :smhid :smhid i'm feeling now kazuki kun will have a battle with gakuran now...  :smhid update fast will you...  :grin: :grin:i wanna see wether is it true / not that they will have fight and in that time will kazuki disguise is reveal...??  :w00t: :w00t: and could that be acchan will hate nami / she wont? aaaa.... this speculation so exciting...  XD XD

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
« Reply #33 on: February 21, 2011, 07:39:23 AM »
Hey~ Don't take me wrong~  :tntrm:

OF COURSE I like both of them Torigoya/Asahi X Yuko and Riku X Yuko~!!  :luvuluvu:

I'm looking forward for your next update~!!  :tama-apeshit:

THANK YOU~!!   :tama-bye:


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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
« Reply #34 on: February 21, 2011, 01:17:53 PM »
“Go get some Pepto-Bismol, they’re good for heartburns, indigestion and diarrhea.”
that's true!!! works for me too!   :on GJ:

they meet!!!
they meet!!!!!
THEY MEET!!!!!
 :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow:
instant connection!  :wub:

Gakuran is :angry:

Torigoya's jealous of RIKU!!!!
LOL!
the exchange e-mails is so  :inlove:

thanks for the update!!!
can't help but to read this even though this will give an intense headache!  :nervous
reading this is worthy!!!!

update soon!


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« Reply #35 on: February 21, 2011, 01:24:08 PM »
Argh don't tell me..... When I read the beginning of this chapter I was "wtf" at Nami's name until I remembered that it was in reality Minami and etc etc.... AND YOU DECIDED TO ADD ANOTHER IDENTITY?! TT___TT

I'm seriously wondering how Minami will do to see Atsuko (if ever they decide to meet again).... she can't hide her face eternally, right? ¬.¬ I have the feeling you're gonna make us wait again for the next meeting XD

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« Reply #36 on: February 24, 2011, 04:52:51 AM »
Takamina got herself a forth identify now. Minami, Nami, Kai, and now Kazuki  :lol:
Argh don't tell me..... When I read the beginning of this chapter I was "wtf" at Nami's name until I remembered that it was in reality Minami and etc etc.... AND YOU DECIDED TO ADD ANOTHER IDENTITY?! TT___TT

Ok, I'm sorry for confusing everyone with all the identities.... I will soon make some disappear...maybe they will jump off a cliff and then they die... then there would be less identities right? =)

i'm feeling now kazuki kun will have a battle with gakuran now...  :smhid update fast will you...  :grin: :grin:i wanna see wether is it true / not that they will have fight and in that time will kazuki disguise is reveal...??  :w00t: :w00t: and could that be acchan will hate nami / she wont? aaaa.... this speculation so exciting...  XD XD

I haven't thought that far yet....but I feel that the day that Maeda knows that Kai is Nami is the day that this whole fanfic is nearing to an end but I still have lots of new ideas.....I just don't have time to write it yet......

Hey~ Don't take me wrong~  :tntrm:
OF COURSE I like both of them Torigoya/Asahi X Yuko and Riku X Yuko~!!  :luvuluvu:

Well, it's funnier to take you wrong though =P

thanks for the update!!!
can't help but to read this even though this will give an intense headache!  :nervous
reading this is worthy!!!!

...I'm giving you a headache? Is my writing confusing? Or the layout? Should I just stop writing? I am totally a bad writer.... Bad me...=(

I'm seriously wondering how Minami will do to see Atsuko (if ever they decide to meet again).... she can't hide her face eternally, right? ¬.¬ I have the feeling you're gonna make us wait again for the next meeting XD

Maybe Minami will get plastic surgery =O
I don't know, I didn't think THAT far yet....
I was actually going to make the next meeting soon but if you insist on me making you wait a while for the next meeting then ok  :theking


Thanks for reading my rambling again


Chapter 8

-Majisuka 3rd year classroom-

“Maeda-san is in a daze.” Wota commented.

“Maybe she’s spending too much time with Torigoya?”

“Oi, Daruma, stop taking our food.” Unagi tried to take back the grilled meat from Daruma but was short a second as Daruma ate it already.

“Atsu-nee doesn’t even talk to Torigoya, she’s just tired today.” Daruma answered as she took another piece of grilled meat.

-On the other side of the classroom-

“Sado, what should I do? I made Torigoya mad at me.”

“Hm, I don’t know, what did you do?”

“I don’t know… we were messaging each other last night and I was telling her how my day was and she got mad at me.”

“Are you sure you’re not missing out any important details?” Sado looked at Torigoya then back to Yuko.

“I was talking about the three guys from Persona… I know why she’s mad at me now… She was sick yesterday and wanted me to visit her but I didn’t.”

“Er… Yuko-san, I think it was because you were talking about the three boys you met yesterday and she got jealous.”

“Oh, so Torigoya is jealous?...” Yuko’s light bulb in her head switched on. “Oh, so she likes Persona and was jealous of me getting to meet them? Aww, Torigoya is so cute, getting jealous over something so small, I have one of their numbers, I could just call them out and give Torigoya a surprise and then she’ll be happy again?.” Yuko looked like an energetic kid as she thought that she could get Torigoya to be happy and not mad at her again.

‘How dense can Yuko-san get? Oh well…’ Sado thought as she saw Yuko starting to message one of the boys they met yesterday. ‘I guess I could play along with this.’

Hey Kuu, are you busy? I have a friend that’s like a huge fan of yours and totally wants to meet you and the whole group Persona, message me back so we can set a date ;)

“Let’s invite Maeda too, maybe this will get rid of her shy-ness and open up to us too.” Yuko suggested

“Sure, anything you want Yuko-san.” Sado was use to all of Yuko’s antics already and was too tired to fight it.

‘Yuko should learn it the hard way, not everything goes out the way she plans it.’ Sado smiles. ‘I totally have an S side of me.’

-In another 3rd year classroom-

Minegishi Minami just got a message.

Hey Kuu, are you busy? I have a friend that’s like a huge fan of yours and totally wants to meet you and the whole group Persona, message me back so we can set a date ;)

‘Date=FOOD… maybe free food too.’ Thought Minegishi. ‘But it’s going to be hard to convince Nami and especially Asahi… Gotta think up a plan.’ Minegishi had an evil grin on her face.

Yuko-chan, sure no problem but we’re a little busy in preparing our debut single so maybe in a week or so. Is that ok with you? I apologize, I usually don’t like making girls wait for me but duty calls. I’ll update you as soon as possible alright? By the way, shouldn’t you be in class? Or are you skipping class for me?

‘That should give a pretty good image for Kuu.’ Minegishi then sent the message and started eating lunch in class.

-Yuko’s 3rd year classroom-

‘A reply.’ As Yuko read the message, ‘Yes, Torigoya is going to be so happy. Kuu’s pretty cute like that isn’t he, so sweet and caring, yet playful… too bad he’s not my type. Maybe Maeda likes them cute? We’ll see.’ Evil grin.

Alright then, see you hopefully next week then. I am in class, I'm not skipping for you, don’t worry yourself about that. I just normally don’t pay attention to class like how I'm doing right now.

“Maeda, come to the club room after class, we need to talk.” Yuko then got up and left the classroom and made way to Rappapa Headquarters, followed by Sado, who motioned the other queens to stay in class.

-Rappapa Headquarters-

“Maeda’s so slow.” Yuko was getting impatient.

“Well, you told her to come to the clubroom after class, class doesn’t end so fast.”

“Sado, you’ve been giving me smart-ass replies now aren’t you? Don’t you think that you should listen to me more?”

“Yuko-san, I do listen to you, you just don’t listen to me.”

“When do I not listen to you?”

“I told you why Torigoya was mad at you and you’re just twisting my words.”

“Ah… whatever, as long as there’s something fun that’s coming out of my idea its fine.” Yuko said with a smile on her face showing her famous dimples.

“Mhmm.”

‘Yuko is being Yuko again, she ignores what I say.’ Thought Sado. ‘At least she’s not keeping anything from me like before when she didn’t tell me that she was dying…ass.’

“Where should we go with the guys? Shopping? Go for tea? Bowling? Karaoke?” Yuko was jumping around like a 10 year old.

“I doubt anyone would object to what you want.”

“Mhmm. True but I don’t want it to be boring.”

*Knock Knock*

“Yuko-san, Sado-san, konnichiwa.” Atsuko politely said

“Oi, Maeda, we’re going out next week. Make sure you come. I’ll tell you the details later alright?”

“Um, I might not be able to go, I have my volunteer work.”

“Skip it for once. Just like the time you went to the arcade with me.” Yuko said with a slight evil grin.

“Mhm, I’ll see…”

“We’re going with a couple friends and a couple guys too.” Sado added

“If you have a guy friend, bring him along too, since it’s going to be me, you, Sado and Torigoya with three of my guy friends.” Yuko said as she thought that if Maeda had a guy friend, Yuko needed to approve of him first.

“I need to ask first… next class is starting soon, I should go. Yuko-san, Sado-san, stop skipping class.”

‘She actually has a guy friend?!?!? It better not be Gakuran…She’s not even a guy…’ Yuko thought.

“We’ll go in a bit.” Sado answered.

“Ok, please excuse me.” Maeda politely left the room.

-Stairway-

‘Would Kazuki-kun come out and meet up with me and a couple of friends.’ Maeda thought as she was scrambling to think of what to message Kazuki.

Kazuki-kun, is your hand feeling better?

Maeda paused and looked at her unsent message. ‘Wait, it hasn’t even been a couple hours yet. How would his hand heal already.’ Feeling stupid that she just typed that, Maeda then deleted the sentence and restarted.

Kazuki-kun, remember to clean the wound and change the bandages once a day. Um…this might seem really sudden but um… if it’s possible, could we maybe meet up next week. A couple of my senpai’s wants to do a little gathering and well, in total there’s going to be 4 girls including me and 3 guys and I was wondering if you would join in as well since I don’t know the 3 guys that my senpai’s are bringing. I’m really sorry for bothering you. If you’re not free then it’s ok. But if you were to go, I’d feel a lot more comfortable.

‘I wonder if Kazuki-kun will actually come…’

-Kamonohashi Office-

‘Atsuko…’ Nami thought as she snapped out of her trace as she heard her phone ring, and read the message. ‘Atsuko’s such a caring girl, even to a person she just met… A goukon? Hehhhhhhh… what kind of senpai’s does Atsuko have? She should be focused in school… but I guess she needs something to relax… maybe with the guys there, she’ll show her beautiful smile from back then?…’

Maeda-san, don’t worry I’ll remember to clean the wound and change the bandages on my hands every day. A goukon? I’m not much of a party person though, I’ll probably just ruin the atmosphere… but if you’re ok with that and if I can get off from work during that time then I’ll be more than happy to accompany you. I’ll beat the guys that are after you with a stick. ;)

-Maeda’s classroom-

‘Kazuki-kun is so nice to me…’

Kazuki-kun, thank you so much. I’ll tell you the details a little later.

TBC...

Cause bou-j525 thinks that the next meeting will happen much later..........everyone will have to wait  :theking
I'm kidding...... or am I?  :twisted:

Offline aoi_sora

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 8)
« Reply #37 on: February 24, 2011, 07:23:28 AM »
...I'm giving you a headache? Is my writing confusing? Or the layout? Should I just stop writing? I am totally a bad writer.... Bad me...=(
:nervous
it's not you who giving me a headache.... it's my eyes!!!
i think im ok now! just a few eye drops away!

‘Date=FOOD… maybe free food too.’
oh my Miichan....  :rofl:

this goukon is exciting...  :twothumbs
can't wait!  :panic:

i want Black and Gekikara!!!!!
 :lol:

thanks for the update!!!
 :cow:


Offline mangobanana15

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 8)
« Reply #38 on: February 24, 2011, 08:54:00 AM »
NOOOOO DON'T LET WHAT BOU-J525 THINK MAKE YOU DELAY THEIR NEXT MEETING!! :O

oh man i see some identity problems coming up. Kazuki, Kai, Torigoya, and Riku all have to go to the goukon  :huhuh

I love all the text messages going around during this chapter :)

LOL Miichan's love for food is just a total win!

I'll be waiting for your next update!! (DON'T DELAY THE MEETING!! :smhid)

Offline bou-j525

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Re: Lies (Updated: Chapter 7)
« Reply #39 on: February 24, 2011, 01:21:02 PM »

I was actually going to make the next meeting soon but if you insist on me making you wait a while for the next meeting then ok  :theking

...

Cause bou-j525 thinks that the next meeting will happen much later..........everyone will have to wait  :theking
I'm kidding...... or am I?  :twisted:

Haven't read your chapter yet coz I don't have time.... but HAD to quote this.
DON'T. DOOOOOOOOOON'T!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO GET KILLED IF YOU DO THAT!!!

EDIT:

Just read your chapter... omg it gonna be awesome XD Or maybe not... But you know what, I'm just going to stop talking about your chapters just because I wanna stay alive... you know ¬.¬
« Last Edit: February 24, 2011, 11:58:57 PM by bou-j525 »

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