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Re: [AKB48] Several Shot ( '~Tame The Rebel Queen part 3~' 22 dec)
« Reply #220 on: December 22, 2011, 03:28:51 PM »
Oh! Update!! :w00t: Yea!! I've been waiting!! :yossi:

Hoho~ Kai and Atsuko getting close to each other and Acchan kiss him on the cheek :wub:
!!! Kai dropped his passport ID and it says 'Takahashi Minami'!!!! :w00t:
So Kai is Minami?? Then what about Minoru?? :? Same person??
OMG! Acchan found out.. I wonder if she'll be mad about it.. :panic:
Can't wait to read the last part XD

Thank you so much for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please update the last part soon :mon cute:

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Re: [AKB48] Several Shot ( '~Tame The Rebel Queen part 3~' 22 dec)
« Reply #221 on: December 23, 2011, 02:15:51 AM »
Kyaaaaa!  :panic:

You updated!

Wooooa! Acchan knows!

BUt she might not know that the geek is Minami too right?!?!

I can't wait for the next update!

Anyway Merry Christmas to you! Thank you for your update!

Arígatou!  :bow:
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Re: [AKB48] Several Shot ( '~Tame The Rebel Queen part 3~' 22 dec)
« Reply #222 on: December 23, 2011, 03:04:25 AM »
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"Yesh, our class is choosen to play this tittle of drama." Ogawa sensei give the script to me n I read it.

"The tittle is 'Lonely Rebel Princess' and u will be the princess there."

"What? Why should I?" I half shout to him
Acchan playing the rebel princess in the play. haha

Oh no. Has Minami been discovered? I wonder if Acchan has connected all the dots.

Thanks for the update.

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Re: [AKB48] Several Shot ( '~Tame The Rebel Queen part 3~' 22 dec)
« Reply #223 on: December 23, 2011, 08:58:24 AM »
So Minami and Kai are the same person.
Who is Minoru? Her brother?

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Re: [AKB48] Several Shot ( '~Tame The Rebel Queen part 3~' 22 dec)
« Reply #224 on: December 27, 2011, 03:36:44 PM »
guuuuuuuuuuuys~ gomeeeeeeeeeeeen~  :panic: :panic:

i know this maybe late but i hope u like it~  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

the last part~ douzo~  :thumbsup

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Tame The Rebel Queen : Part 4 (Sweet X-Mas)
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That day is an exhausted day. OMG, is it real?! That passport ID is it belongs to kai? Or its belongs to minami? I think if kai is minami its impossible so It means kai knows minami? Now for the first time I feel really confuse. Minami, where are u? If u are here, why u didn't tell me minami?! Are u already forgetting about me. I keep thinking about it. One thing that I should do, I have to ask kai by my self.

So since that day, I try to contact kai but he never answer my called. Okay I know we are together coz of the dance competition but it didn't mean that after the competition it become we can't meet each other right. I then decided to look for him in the dance studio where we usually practice but nope, he isn't there. But suddenly a hand poke my shoulder.

"Yooooo?!"

"Eh? Riku, gosh u scared me."

"Ahaahaha, gomen acchan. So anyway why u are here?"

"Uhm.... Can we talk for a moment? Are u busy?"

"Uhm.... I guess I can. But wait I gotta gather my stuff first." Riku said as heading to the dressing room.

"Okay, take your time. " I said to him. I wait in the waiting room there until he comes and we headed to the nearest cafe there. I wanna know more about kai I hope riku knows.

We sit in a table on the corner and order some drink.

"So, why u looking for kai?" Riku asks

"Owgh, I just wanna talk to him. There is something I wanna ask him."

"Ah I see, well. I don't know where is he either. But based what I have heard he is back to home town coz he must handle something."

"Uhm... Do u know where his home town?" I ask him curiously.

"Well, I don't know. No one knows."

"Heee? But u are his friend." I said in a shock expression

"Yeah, but u know, actually I have just known him for a couple of months."

"Ah souka." I answer in low tone. Looking me so down riku then said.

"Here don't worry, if I heard any news about him I will tell u. I promise." He said to assure me.

"Thank you riku." I lookt at him and then give him a smile.

So, after the conversation with riku I kind a realize that he try to avoid me. I don't know why but I just feel that this all to sudden.

Its been almost a month since that time. Still there is no news about kai. I kind a worry but I don't know what to do. During this time I also have practice my play for the school festival. Its for x-mas actually. Everyday I practice with minoru and other students at school. But sometime we have practice just the 2 of us for our scene.

Today we have a rehers but after that I will have practice with minoru. Well, its.... Its about the kissu scene. Gooosh, I still nervous with that scene. 

Here now we practice in the club room.

"Ma....maeda san u sure u will do this?" He asks

"I don't have any choice."

"Errrr, I don't wanna push u if u don't want how about this. As we do the kiss scene I will cover it with my mantel?"

"Uhm.... That's a good Idea, let's just do that tomorrow." I said to him

"Okay, owgh...." He suddenly look at his watch "I gotta go now maeda san. See u later."

He then leave me in the club room. I look around and I decide to take a rest a bit and I fell asleep in the sofa. Well fortunately our club room have a sofa to sit. I sleep not bad long as I open my eyes I look at the watch, it almost night. I hurry gather my things and go home.

On the way home I feel hungry so I go to the nearest ramen restaurant to eat first. I order a special big size ramen. Well I am hungry since I haven't eaten anything since afternoon. I eat my ramen slowly. The owner just chuckling looking at me. What was he thinking. After finished I pay my ramen and I go headed my home.

As I go out the ramen restaurant I feel someone is following me. I try to ignore it but the foot step getting nearer and nearer. I faster my pace until without realize I bump into someone.

"Heeey look where u are going..."

"Aargh, why u stand there." I try to get up.

"Eeeeh.... A pretty girl." The guy look at me with an hungry stare.

He then approach me and hold my waist "uhm.... We could play little girl."

"Let me go. U bastard." I shout as punch his face.

"What?!!!! How dare you!! KIIIIIDS!!!" Suddenly 2 man hold my hands.

"Fufufufu, don't be afraid I'll be gentle."

OMG, why now n here. Someone....helps.... Minamiiiii..... I shout in my thought suddenly I feel the grabs loosen and I hear a a scream and a fight. I try to open my eyes and I see someone beat that guy. But I can't find out who is it since it is dark. Then I heard

"NO ONE COULD HURT MY ATSUKO!!! YOU HEAR ME!!! NOOOOO ONE!!!!"

"Aaaaargggh...... Ple....please forgive meeee...."

With last punch all the guys lay on the ground. Then I hold this person from back.

"Minami....."

He seems surprise, no action from him.

"Minami.... You are minami right?! Please answer me." I start sobbing and I could feel he is trembling. Suddenly he turn over and cup my cheek. I still can't see his face since its too dark.

"Minami... Where have u been gone all this this time Immmmph....." He then sealed my lip with him. He kisses me gently and slowly. I could feel soooo much love in it. After kisses a couple of minute he breaks the kiss and we both breathe heavily. He then give a short kiss in my forehead and leaves.

I try to catch up him but I lost him. I decided to go home and lay on my bed. I still think about minami. I wanna meet him again.

Minami..... I miss you....

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The next day is our play. My mind still in yeasterday incident. I still think about it. But I have to focus in this play. Suddenly ogawa sensei approach me with minoru.

"Aaah, maeda san u look beautiful." He said.

"Whatever sensei what u want?"

"Ah I just wanna say, please make the kissu scene as real as poss. Hahaha, ja nee.."

"Heeee, what?" I frown

"Its ok maeda san, I won't kiss on your lips."

"Minoru."

"Come on, get ready." He said to me.

I nodded and we do our play. Everything gone really well. And now is the kissu scene.

"My prince why u do this to me?! U are my bestfriend right?"

"Princess I am sorry but I have too. I have to bring the old u. U change."

"By hiding n disguise from me?"

"Princess...."

Minoru and I then stare at each other. That eyes why look so familiar to me. he then cups both of my cheek then pretend to kiss me. Actually he kisses my cheek but his both hands cover it. We break the kiss and hug each other.

"I love u my princess."

"Love u too prince."

All the audience claps their hands for us. We then bow and it the end of the play. Ogawa sensei really pleased. I got change and suddenly I see a phone on the table. Its still me in the changing room. It looks like kai phone. I decided to open it and then I surprise it is kai phone. I see my picture with kai, riku n yuko and.... I see my old picture. So kai is.... Before I could check it further someone coming. I hurry put the phone.

"Hey, maeda san haven't gone home?"

"No I haven't, why u are still here minoru?"

"Owgh, I wanna take my bag and my phone." I shock, he takes that phone. What the meaning of this? Minami...

"Ano minoru, u what u do this xmas?" I ask him

"Uhm... Nothing."

"Let's spend together at your place."

"Eeeehhhh? Ar....ar...are u sure?" He surprise

"Yesh, why? Dame?" I give him a small pout.

"Owgh, no. Really its ok."

"Now let's go." I grab his hands and directly go to his aparto.

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in the aparto


"Tadaimaaa..." Minoru said

"Oujamashimas...."

"Please come in and sit maeda san."

"Thank you." I sit in the sofa and look around.

"So u live alone?" I ask him

"No, I live with my friend kuu. I think he is out now. Anyway, please wait a moment I gotta prepare something."

"Okay."

Minoru go to the back and this is my chance to take a look around. I need to find the truth. I check the room one by one until I got into one interesting room. It full of old picture. I see one by one and its .... Its.... My picture with minami. I wanna cry but I have to hold it. Suddenly minoru call

"Maeda san?"

I go approach him with a serious look.

"Could u tell me this?" He frown and just keep silent.

"Why? WHY U KEEP SILENT? ANSWER ME!!" I shout to him.

"I .... I .... " He can speak.

"Why u do this to me?" I start sob

"Don't u know how I suffer? Don't u know how I miss u?" I shout again.

"Atsuko...." He finally calls my name and hug me but I begin to hit him and strugle

"Let me go.... Don't touch me. Don't u ever touch me. I hate u I HATE YOUUUU MINAMI!!!"

"ATSUKOOOOOO....." He shouts and hug me tighly.

"Gomen, atsuko. I didn't mean to make u sad like this. I am sorry. U know, everytime I always thing about u. I wanna meet u but I can't. Your father I mean master moved and bring you with him. And I lost your track. I try to find u but no result. Until acouple of week ago I got phone. It from master."

I look at him and shock. Dad? Why was he called him?

"He called me and ask me to bring back the old u. His cheerful daughter. So I decided to disguise. I wanna make u realize that u are the same atsuko that loved by everyone. That's why I disguise as kai and minoru. 2 different person that opposite. I am sorry atsuko I really sorry."

There is a silent but then I break it "I still mad u know when I found this. Your passport."

"Eh? Where u get it?" He confuse

"U drop it after the dance competition u baka." I pout and he just scratch his back.

"Ah, I see. Gomen ne."

"And when I finally met u , u won't speak. U even just kiss me. What u think?!" I look other way and blush.

He then chuckle and cherish my cheek "I think I can't hold my self that time. Gomen ne. I really miss u. I wanna be close to u atsuko. And more important thing. I love u."

We then stare each other. his face begin move closer and closer until our lips meet. We kiss again. He kiss me slowly and gently. I reply his kiss and warp my hand in his neck. I could feel how he misses me from his kiss and so do I. I really miss him too.

Our kiss become more passionate and he guide me to his room and then he close the door. Still kissing I begin to stroke his hair and he lift me up then bring me to his bed. he is on top of me now. He begin to kiss my neck and I moan to his touch. He then back kissing my lips. He suck my upper lips and then I give access to his tongue into my mouth and so does he. I could feel every inch of his mouth. But then we break the kiss coz need of air.

We breath heavily and I could see he is smirking.

"So do I forgiven?" He looks at me

"Uhm.... I guess so... But it depend." I give him my devilish smile

"Eeeehh.... Uhm.... Fine.... What if we spend this night together..." He smirk

"Hentaaaaiiii....." I said as pinch his cheek

"Ahaha, but u like it don't u." He grin

"I hate u. I hate u coz u will leaving me again." I pout

"Huh? Owgh, if u mean the passport don't worry, my dad said it better if I stay in japan. He will visit me later."

"Really?" I said excited

"Of course, I won't leave u. Never. So am I forgiven?" He ask again

"Uhmmm... Maybe...." I try to tease him.

He then whispered to my ear "I will give your xmas present tonight. I'll be yours atsuko."

I blush but then look at him "uhm... I guess it could be." He chuckle and then give me a short kiss.

"soooo, am I already tame the rebel queen?" he said as snuggle to me

"uhm.....??? dont be so sure....." I pinch his cheek and he is chuckling


"ehehehe, I love u atsuko, merry xmas."


"I love u too, merry xmas minami."



we then kissing again, enjoying each other presence n warmness.



That night we spend our first xmas together as acouple and .......



in bed?



FIN~

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doooouuuuu???  :panic: :panic: :panic:

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Yes!!! I was waiting for this XD
So Kai, Minoru and Minami was the same person after all :w00t:
This was really great and sweet~~ :wub: :wub:

Thanks for the Update :twothumbs :thumbup :thumbup
I really love this :D

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Finally you update. Minami and Acchan together at the end. What a lovely dovey. Thank you very much and merry xmas to you too.
« Last Edit: December 28, 2011, 08:45:46 AM by Sydney W »

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thank you! sorakamiya

Finally AtsuMina  :) :) :)

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i know that!!! :D, cool ending :D like it!!..

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Ah they all the same person
Nice end ;)

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Miinnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: Gomen i have just updated maybe some of u are new writer here and i would like to saaaaay NICE TO MEET U GUYS~  :grin: :grin: :grin:

soooo i promise to make a FF to Moechan, and here it is. Its the continuance of my fanfic tittle "Forbidden" u can read it before read this or just read this directly  :grin: :grin:

I dont know how its like since its been a long time i havent writen.  :cry: :cry: So, douzooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hope u like iiiiiiiiiiiit  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:  :cow: :cow: :cow:


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Forbidden (After Story)
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A young couple have a serious talk in their room

”Atsuko, I am sorry but I have to do this.”

”But…. But….Kaii….”

”No but, If I keep living with you guys, I could harm you”

”I don’t care. I love u kai.”

”I love u too Atsuko. I promise every year I would visit you and our baby.”

”Promise?”

“I promise”

“and you’ll be alright promise?”

“yes?! I promise my queen”





5 Years Later
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“Moooooooooom, look what I get??” a young boy running to her mom as showing the fish that he got.

“aaaaah, you are great kaito.” His mom prise him but suddenly a girl come

“ahahaha indeed he is acchan”

“Ah, yuko” acchan the mother surprise “kaito here is your auntie yuko greet her”

“waaaa…. I got a beautiful auntie… yeaaaay… yeaaaaay…. Konnichi aunt” Kaito said as bow to yuko
 
“hehehe, konnichi. Wooow acchan he really look like that midget. So how are you?” yuko asks

“I am fine. How about you? N hows uncle riku?” acchan ask yuko as smirk to her

“ahahaha u still call him that don’t you? Well he is fine.” Yuko said as looking down

“hey what happen? Is there something wrong?” acchan look at yuko with concern eyes

“ahahaha nothing, hey lets play Kaito.” Yuko give a sudden change and play with Kaito


Acchan then just look at her son play with yuko. Suddenly a sudden flashback rewind in her mind. The time with her special person.


”We miss you kai. Please always save”


Atsuko POV
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My Name is Atsuko. I live together with my only son Kaito. He is really smart and always genki. Really resemble his father Takahashi Kai. But now its only the two of us. I’ll tell you something Kai is my husband but before that he is my uncle. Well but not really my uncle coz I am just his brother step daughter. My father is Kai’s Brother. After my father died Kai took me. U will all see this as the forbidden love don’t you? But its not. Kai has settle everything and I am not longer his niece. I am now his wife.

I married to Kai 5 years ago. We live together happily until one day I almost get kidnapped by a Gangster. At that time I already carried Kaito. The Gangster almost kill me but suddenly Kai come and help me. The Gangster actually looking for Kai but they kidnapped me to rule Kai up. Because of that incident Kai decided to move out and only visit me and Kaito every once a year. Kai works as secret agent that’s why his life is always in danger. It kind worried me actually. But he always call everyday that make my worry vanished.

A couple of months ago as usually Kai pay a visit to me and Kaito. And that time not like the other visit. Kai play with Kaito in the morning and then in the evening he asks Riku n Kuu to take Kaito for a walk. I wonder why but then he surprised me. Its my birthday day and he prepare a romantic dinner in our home. That night he really spoiled me and we have a sweet night together.

Today , before I pick up Kaito from school and brought him to this park I went to the hospital and take my lab check report. I surprised when I read it. Kaito will be a brother soon. I am so happy and I want to tell Kai soon. I have called him to come today coz there is something I want to tell him. I wanna to tell him about the baby. I cant wait.


Suddenly Yuko Scream


“KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA LET ME GOOOOO!!! ”

“Arrrrrght, DAMN!! Stop struggling” the guy in black shout

“My Riku will not forgive you. *grauk ” Yuko bite the man hands

“Let gooooo auntie” the little Kaito try to help yuko

“you kid go awaaaay…..”

“Kyaaaaaaaaa Kaitooooooooooooooooo” acchan scream

the man try to smack Kaito but suddenly a hard kick hit his back.

“AAARRRRGHHHHHT!!!!!” the man in pain

“Don’t you ever try to touch my son you bastaaaaaaard”

“Kai”

“Papaaaaa…”

Kaito, yuko and acchan said in union.

“are u okay kid?” kai examine his son

“un, daijoubu papa”

“good, u are so brave Kaito now let papa handle It from now okay?” Kai pats his son

“You, you , you , you aaaall of u such a coward now let settle this. URYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA” Kai begin to punch and beat all the men.

Not in a minute all of them already fall down but, someone manage to get up and slice kai left hands

“Arrrrrghhh…. You bastaaaard” kai then kick him until the men unconscious

Looking at her husband bleeding acchan hurry rushing to him but suddenly she is grabs by someone and a gun pointed to her head

“Atsukooooo….. youuuuu…Let go my wife.” Kai stare and pointed to the man

“Ahahahaha, ohisashiburi Kai, owgh my look at this you finally married your own niece. Come on Kai get a live.” The guy tease him

“How many times do I have to told u that she is not my real niece.”

“aaaah yeaaah but still she was before pluuus… look what have u done with my brother. YOU BETRAY HIM AND YOU KILLED HIM” the men shout to Kai

“I told you its an accident and your brother is guilty.”

“SHUT UP?! U know my brother is my everything I only have him and he try to protect me. now I lost him, aaaaaaaargh u will see Kai u will lose someone u love now ahahahahaha”

“Nooooooooooooooooo….”

*BANG *BANG *BANG a shot is heard

“Atsukoooooooooooo…..”

“Kaaaaiiiiiiiiiii…..”

“AAAAAARRRRRGHTTTTTTT!!!! WHY YOU…..!!!!” the men was shot from back and died suddenly.

“Atsuko you alright??” Kai rushing to his wife and hug her

“yes I am alright and your hand..”

“un, its ok I am fine.”


Suddenly a voice are heard

“that bastard really deserve it don’t u think mari chan?”

“un, indeed kuu. And thanks to riku new weapon.”

“ahahah never mind. I hate that guy.”


“Kuu, Riku and mariko sama? How u know?” kai surprise

”well, we followed you and loooook my nephew already grown” mariko said as look at kaito.

“Kaito there are you uncle kuu n uncle riku the that’s your auntie mariko”

“waaaa I got a cool uncles and aunties yeaaaaay…. I am Kaito yoroshiku.”

“Kawaiiii”

Then “nyaaaaaaan nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan…. I miss you sooo muuuch” yuko running to riku and hug him

“owgh come on yu…yuuu chaaan~ not in here come on.”

“but I miss you”

“yeah I miss you too”

“awwww sooo sweet so what about if we hug tooo mari chan. Give your gachaphin a hug gyuuuuuuuuuu”

*smack “ittaaaaaiiiiii…. Hurt heeeey …” mariko smack kuu

“that’s because u become a perv.”

“what? I am nooot”

They all then laughing together

“Owgh come on guys, lets go home.”


Takahashi Residence
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Kai then bring back kaito and acchan to their sweet home. As arrive sayo and Richard already waiting for them. Sayo help Kaito to clean himself whether acchan and kai go to their room. Acchan take the medicine and towel to clean and cure Kai wound wheter kai open his clothe. Acchan clean the wound carefully. They just keep silent the kai broke the silent

“aaa.aaa… ittaaai atsuko..”

“mouuu hold it, its almost done.”

Then acchan finally finished wrap the bandage in Kai arm

“thank you atsuko.”

“you are welcome.”

“uhm…. soo what u wanna talk to me?” Kai ask acchan

Acchan look at Kai and then bring his hands to her stomach “I wanna to introduce u to Kaito soon brother”

Acchan smile to Kai and suddenly Kai shout in happiness “Kaito brother? U mean? YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY~ I Will have a kid agaiiiin… owgh atsukoooo thank youuuuuu~” kai hug atsuko and give her a tremendous kiss

“mou…. Ka…kaaiiii stop it its tickles,” acchan said to kai

“hehehe okay and by the way I have something to tell you too atsuko.”

“what is it?” acchan look at kai and the kai hold acchan hands

“I have decided to come back again to this house. Today incident make me think, how if something happened and I wasn’t there. I don’t wanna to lose u and kaito and also our new baby.” Kai said as hug acchan.

“is that true?”

“yes its is. ”

Kai look at his wife and soon their distance become smaller. Finally their lips meet. Kai begin to kiss his wife slowly and really sweet. Finally he tastes his lover sweet lips again. He rarely meet atsuko coz of his job and now finally he can be together again. The kiss become deeper and full of passion. Kai suck acchan upper lips and acchan replied it as messing kai’s hair. Kai’s hand begin traveling along acchan body and make her laying in their bed. Their kiss become hotter and finally kai’s tongue slide in acchan mouth. Their tongue began battling and try to dominate. Kai’s then exploring his wife mouth and coz need air they pull out for an air. They look each other and smile.

“ne Kai.”

“uhm??”

“I love you”

“I love you too atsuko, so much.”

“sooo do you think our love still forbidden?”

“well, maybe?” Kai smirk

“maybe? Why?”

“My love first is forbidden coz u are my niece but now u are my wife. And I forbidden to leave you.” Kai said as kissing his wife again

“Sweet Talker Uncle Kai” Acchan said between a kiss

“Uhm? Sweet Talked Uncle? I like that , then u’ll be my sexy niece”

After saying that they continue kissing each other and spend all the day together

In………




Bed????



FIN



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Re: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012
« Reply #231 on: August 03, 2012, 01:44:48 PM »
Its just too sweet not to read..


two kids!
That's more like it!
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Re: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012
« Reply #232 on: August 03, 2012, 06:22:07 PM »
i really love all your fic!!
Pls dont stop writing or else i will hunt u down!!hehe

Thanks for the update!
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Re: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012
« Reply #233 on: August 03, 2012, 06:39:51 PM »
SORAAAAAA NIICHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :tama-heart: :tama-heart:
I've been waiting for your update!!!  :farofflook:
You really write a fic for me, thank you so much! This is great!!  :on GJ:
I hope I can read more from you, sora niichan  :k-inlove: Keep writing!! I really miss your fic, so much  :mon inluv:

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Offline Haruko

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Re: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012
« Reply #234 on: August 04, 2012, 04:31:03 AM »
atsumina babieeess!! so cute

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Re: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012
« Reply #235 on: August 19, 2012, 07:35:06 PM »
Could someone please PM me some pervy story to me  :cry: :cry:

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Re: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012
« Reply #236 on: March 29, 2013, 04:13:29 AM »
wahh! so many shots for atsumina! please update more thanks

Offline Archer1992

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Re: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012
« Reply #237 on: April 30, 2013, 10:08:04 PM »
i like all of your One shots
all of they are wonderfull
really
thanks for the good time i pass reading....

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Re: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012
« Reply #238 on: May 01, 2013, 12:49:08 AM »
It's a good one shot thank you :)

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Re: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012
« Reply #239 on: June 22, 2013, 05:21:03 PM »
 :twothumbs :twothumbs

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