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Author Topic: [AKB48] One Shot (~Kai x Atsuko (Forbidden : After Story) 3-8-2012  (Read 78824 times)

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot Sae x Yuki ( '~Sensei x Student ~' 8 nov) Someon request
« Reply #160 on: November 08, 2011, 03:33:33 PM »
[AKB48] One_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Master x Servant~' 7 nov) and [AKB48] One_shot Sae x Yuki ( '~Sensei x Student ~' 8 nov)  ..^^ pls pm it to me sora-neechan .. :3

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot Sae x Yuki ( '~Sensei x Student ~' 8 nov) Someon request
« Reply #161 on: November 11, 2011, 08:25:46 AM »
okay here is my next fanfic. its about forbidden love.  XD XD XD

kust read then u know what i mean. i make it into 2 part since i think i should divide it into 2.  :grin: :grin:

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~Forbidden part 1~
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  "Okay, I know this might be surprise u but u should know this."

"What is it?" A young blond guy ask in worry.

"Its about your brother. He...."

"Huh? What happen? What happen to him?" The young blond guy approach the tall man in black suit.

"Well, he...."

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~a week later~

"Okay, now Takahashi-san please wait a moment." An old lady said to the young blond guy.

"Yeah sure. I'll be waiting here."

The old lady go out the room and leave the young guy alone. The young blond guy sitting in the chair there and sigh.

'Why is this so sudden brother? I don't know whether I can't handle this or not.' He scratch his hair and feel frustrate. 'Aaaaargh brotheeeer....'

Suddenly the door open and the old lady finally come. But now she is not alone.

"Takahashi-san, sorry for waiting so long." The old lady smile.

"Ah its okay, errrr....is that...." The young guy pointed to the girl beside the old lady.

"Ah, yes. Come on girl, introduce yourself. Don't be shy. This your family."

The girl come approach the guy shyly and then introduce herself.

"Uhm.... Maeda Atsuko desu."

The young blond guy surprise 'maji de?'

"Eerrr....aaa... Takahashi Kai desu. Yoroshiku."

"Well, now let's finished our bussiness then takahashi-san. U should sign this letter."

"Owgh...owgh....okay...."

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~On the way to takahashi residence~

Okay, first I wanna introduce my self first. I'm takahashi kai 25years old.  I've been living with my grandma while I was a child. Now I live alone.I have a brother he is much more older than me. Usually we meet every one a year but somehow its been around 20years we haven't met or contact each other. He is an secret agent and I really proud of his job. Coz of that I also work as a secret agent. Everything fine untill a week before. I receive a message from my lawyer. Its about my brother. He said that my brother died as he did his mission. It make me shock. But what make me shocker is his last will to me.

The girl who is sitting beside me right now is his daughter. Well, not his real daughter actually. He told me that he found this girl as he did his mission. All of her family already dead. The gangster killed them all. So my brother decided to adopt her and coz he already go from this world he ask me to take care of her. Its mean that she is my niece. But what I couldn't believe is 'SHE IS 16 years OLD.' Gaaaarrrrh..... I thought she still a little kid. What was my brother think?! Plus I'm on mission and undercover as a gangster now. *sigh, its not mean I don't wanna take care of her but I just don't wanna involve her. But u see, I don't have any choice.

I look at this girl. She is not bad good looking, soo mature, calm, quiet, cute, sexy, and.... Owgh, wait....wait....WAAAIIT!!!! She is 16 and she is my niece. I shouldn't think like that. Gaaaaaarh.....stupid brother.... Why u do this to me. I scratch my head like feel depress and suddenly she speaks.

"Anooo.... I'm sorry I trouble you. Takahashi san." She said as look down. Now I feel guilty.

I pad her head with my left hand whether the other control the wheel "No, its okay. U are not trouble me. I just.... Well, u know. This is the first time I live with someone else." I smile to her and suddenly I can see she is blush. 'God soo cute.'

"Tha....tha....thank you." She said stuttering.

Soon, not long we arrive at my home. As we arrive richard approach us with sayo san. Richard is the butler and sayo san is an average age old lady. She is the head maid.

"Master kai, good evening."

"Evening richard, sayo san."

"My, is the girl is...."

"Yeah she is...."

"Sooo beautiful master kai, and seems she looks like your type." Sayo san chuckle

"Wha...wha...what u are talking about. Geez... She is my niece." I blush and the girl smile. I look at her and wooow, her smile is look like an angle.

"Well, anyway what should we call u young lady?" Sayo san ask

"I'm maeda atsuko just call me acchan. My friend usually call me that."

"Okay, then miss acchan please come with me I go get u to your room." She looks at me and nods, she follow sayo san to her room whether I go to my work room first.

I check my mail and I see one its from riku. Riku said he will come here with kuu tonight. We gotta talk about our mission. Well, riku n kuu are my friend and also partner. We are the special sub unit called 'Persona.' We have been through together since we are in the academy.

As I reply the mail I go to acchan room to check on her. I knock the door but no answer. So I just open it slowly. I look around and found that she fells asleep in the sofa. I approach her and look her.

'What an angelic face u got there kiddo?!' I slowly lift her and place her in her bed. I cover her with the blanket to keep her warm and took a glance at her before I leave.

'U really shouldn't gone through this.'

I left her alone and wait riku and kuu.

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~Acchan POV~

I open my eyes slowly and found out that I already in bed. Its weird coz I think I in the sofa before. I look around and realize that I now in my new home. Yeah, start today I live with someone that call my uncle. To be honest I still shock. My dad already passed away and I live with someone that I have just known. He is my dad brother. At first I afraid that my dad brother will not like me but somehow I feel calm whenever he around. Kind a unbelieveable he is my uncle. He looks really young.

I got up from bed and take a bath. After I clean I heard someone knock at the door.

*knock..... *knock.... "Miss acchan, dinner ready."

I look at the watch and its already dinner time "haaaik, I'll be coming."

I hurry prepare my self and heading down stair. I feel nervous. Then I see 2 guy talking with takahashi san.

"Konbanwa." I bow them.

"Whoooaaa.... Soo kawaiii...." A blue black short guy said to me.

"Manner kuu." The tall guy said.

"Geez, could u guys just calm down." Takahashi san then stand up and approach me.

"This is my niece, please to meet her. And atsuko this are my friends riku n kuu."

"I'm takahashi san niece, maeda atsuko. Yoroshiku."

"Eeeeeeeeeh?????" Both of then surprise.

I suddenly hide behind takahashi san back in reflex "eh? Atsuko?? Oii....oii....guys don't scared my niece."

"Huh? Owgh sorry...sorry we just surprise since kai got a pretty niece like u. Look his face." Kuu chuckle.

"Shut up!!" Takahashi san pout. Somehow, he looks really cute.

"Okay guys, let's have dinner."

"Yeeaaaaay dinner."

"All u think is just food kuu." Riku san face palm.

I and takahashi san look each other and giggle. He then grab my hand and guide me to the kitchen. As he grab my hand my heart beating so fast and I could feel my face redden. Mooouuu, what happen to me. I try to control my emotion and look calm.

We have dinner together at dining room and start eating. Takahashi san friend really nice. It seem that they already close since they were born.

"Ne, atsuko chan, careful of your midget uncle. He is a player." Kuu said

"Hey, who u called midget?! And I'm not a player."

"Ohohoho, but many girl fall for u. U always flirt with them."

"I don't flirt with them. They the one approach me. I didn't do anything."

"So, atsuko chan how old are u?" Riku san ask

"16."

Suddenly he almost get couch.

"Eeeeeh? Sooo young. My...my.... Kai..."

"Stop looking me like that kuu and u too riku."

We all giggle and finally riku n kuu san have to go home.

"U really have a nice friend ther takahashi san." I said as smiling to him.

"Yeah, they all really precious to me. And atsuko stop calling me takahashi san. Its so awkward. U are my niece." He said as scratch his back.

"We...well....well... Uncle taka okay?" He think a moment and then smile

"Ahaha, much better I guess. Now come on let's go get in. U should take a rest." He then accompany me in my room.

"Well, have a nice dream atsuko. I know we have just met but please don't mind to ask for anything. If u need anything, u can ask sayo san. And that's my room and beside it is my work room. If u wanna talk u can just call me okay."

I nod and he pads my head. I don't know why but every time he pads me I feel like he tread me as a little kid. He go to his work office and leave me.

I go into my room and lay in my bed. I take out my dad picture and look at it. 'Give me a strength dad.'

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Kai do his job in his work room. But his mind still in his niece. 'I wonder if she already sleep of not. ' He think and then decided to check on her. 'I better look at her.' As he wanna move a door open and atsuko stand ther with her pajamas.

"Eh, atsuko? Why u still awake." He approach her.

"I can't sleep." She said as look down. "I know its....its.... embarrasing but... I usually hold my dad hand while sleeping."

Kai, a bit surprise but. He can't help. This girl in front of him is still a kid. He smile and then hug her. It make the young girl surprise but then feel calm.

"Okay, let's go get to your room and I'll accompany u for a while okay."

They go to acchan room and there he lays atsuko in her bed and cover her with her blanket. They both holding a hand.

"There, sleep well okay. I will accompany u."

"Sorry, I trouble u uncle taka."

"Naaaaah, its okay. Really its nothing."

Somehow there is a silence and kai heard the little girl sobbing.

"Eh? Atsuko? Atsuko u okay? Why u are crying?" Kai ask in concern.

"*hiks....hiks....I just miss dad. If its not coz of me he won't die." Atsuko said

"Eh? What u mean?" Kai ask

"*hiks...a group of man chasing us and to save me dad willing to.... *hiks.." Can't looking at the little girl cries he move to the bed and embrace her. He hug her tightly try to comfort her.

"Ssssssh.....don't say that. I'm sure your father won't like it u blame yourself. Ssssh....calm down atsuko. I maybe only your uncle , we maybe have just met once but I promise I won't leave u. I will always beside you. I'll protect u. U still have me as your family. So please don't cry." Kai said as wipe the tear with his thumb and then kiss the young girl forehead.

"Than....thank you....uncle...."

"Really, it was nothing atsuko. Now just sleep. Relax okay." Kai keep whispering into atsuko ears. Try to re ensure her and suddenly they felt into sleep.

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~Next Morning~

I open my eyes and feel another breathe near me. As I open my eyes fully and see the person in front of me I surprise and accidentally kick the person.

“Kyaaaaaa~”

“Whooaaaaaa~ Itatatatata….taaaaiiii… Why u kick me?”

“eh? Aaaaaah…. Gomen uncle taka…” I hurry got down the bed and try to help him but it ended i lost my balance and bump into him.

“whooaaaa…..atsukoooo~ araaaaaa…..”

“So….so…sorry….  I …. I just surprise…”

We look at each other and our eyes meet. Suddenly my heart beat so fast again. Our face is so close. We just keep looking each other until sayo san knock the door.

“Miss, are u okay????”

“Ye…ye…yeah, I’m fine sayo san.”

“owgh okay, please go down breakfast ready.” With that sayo san leave.

“well, atsuko could u move? We gotta hurry or u’ll be late for school.” Uncle taka said as smiling to me.

“ah..aaaaa… yes…yes… so…sorry….” I said as bow to him.

“ahahaha, its okay really.” He got up and leave the room.

I sigh and holding my heart. ‘What happen to me?’ I hurry got change and after that headed directly to the down stair.  I look uncle taka already in the dining room. I greet him.

“ohayou uncle.”

“ohayou atsuko. Here your breakfast.”

“aaah, thank you uncle u don’t have to do this, I can do it by my own.”

“ahaha, its okay. Now hurry finished it and then I’ll go take u to school.”

“okay, and anyway uncle, may I know what u do?” there is a silent and change of expression in uncle taka face.

“we…well….well…. I …..”

“He is a yakuza.”

“what?” I frowned

“Tomochin…. What are u doing in here??”

“hi there kai.” The girl approach kai and the kiss him. ‘what?’

“A gentle and nice yakuza of course…”

“gaaaaaarah…. Tomochin stop doing that.” Uncle taka said as wipe his cheek. Looking the scene in front of me somehow my heart hurt and I feel my blood boiling.

“araaa…. This must be your niece. Soo kawaii…. Kai..”

“anooo..”

“well, atsuko this is tomochin my friend.”

“eeeeh???”

“ahahaha, relax cute girl I wont take your uncle from u. I already have someone.”

“shut up and why u are here.” uncle taka ask.

“I just wanna give u this.” Tomo san give my uncle a piece of paper and I don’t know why but I kind a feel worry of him.

“okay, now I gotta take atsuko first. Lets go atsuko.”

“Haaaiiii…. Shitsureishimasu tomo san.”

With that we go to the school.


TBC

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dou?  :huhuh :huhuh i'll try to post the second part also today. but i think i should see your reaction first minna  :grin: :grin:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 1~' 11 nov)
« Reply #162 on: November 11, 2011, 10:07:05 AM »
Wow~!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!  :inlove:
Please do update the other part soon~!!!  :wub:
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Re: [AKB48] One_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 1~' 11 nov)
« Reply #163 on: November 11, 2011, 10:09:10 AM »
 :wub: :inlove: ITs incredible~~ Kai as an undercover agent  :heart:
Please do update the other part soon   :heart:
 :bow: Please post the other part ASAP  :bow: I'm screaming for the other parts now  :banghead:
 XD XD

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 1~' 11 nov)
« Reply #164 on: November 11, 2011, 11:50:24 AM »
hyaaaaatttt Acchan's kick!!!  :thumbup
hey, what did Tomochin hand to Kai? Secret Mission already???  :hehehe:
it's nice neechan! I demand the 2nd part!!! post it soon!!  :kneelbow: I wanna know how this story end  :hee:

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 1~' 11 nov)
« Reply #165 on: November 11, 2011, 11:59:39 AM »
I want part # now!!!! hahahahaa....  :lol:   need to know what happen..  :nervous

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Re: [AKB48] One_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 1~' 11 nov)
« Reply #166 on: November 11, 2011, 12:09:00 PM »
yeaaaay seems u guys like my story  :cow: :cow:

well without realize i think i should break it again to a couple of part.  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

hope u arent boring. i will try to finished it as fast as possible....  :panic: :panic: :panic:

next part douzo....  :grin: :grin:

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~Forbidden part 2~
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During the way to school kai just keep silent. He think about the letter that tomochin gave him before. His niece worry about him so she asks.

"Anooo, its everything alright uncle taka?"

"Huh?owgh....ahahaha... Its fine atsuko. No need to worry. And ah look we almost arrive."

Finally they arrive at school. acchan goes to akihabara high school. Its an highschool for talent student. She got scholarship in there. Everyone look at them as arrive.

"Woooow, nice school atsuko."

"Not really uncle."

Suddenly her friend called and half of the girl students there shouting.

"Kyaaaaa, whose with maeda?"

"Oh my god he is so kakkoiii..."

Feeling that her uncle being the object of fangirling acchan sigh but then begin her move "ah, guys, excuse me. My uncle gotta go now."

"What? He is your uncle maeda? Usooooo?" Every girl in there surprise.

"Waaaaa, I wanna uncle like that." Everyone shout

"Ahaha, yeah sure but... He is my uncle guys. Now I think my uncle got something to do so excuse him." Maeda force to smile but actually she feels irritate.

Looking at his niece jealous attitude kai teasing mode is turn on. "Ahaha, well girls as what my kawaii niece said I gotta go now. See u later okay."

"Aaaaaaahhhh....." Every girls feels disappointed.

"Okay, then I go now atsuko. I'll pick u up later. Takecare okay." Kai said as kiss acchan forehead and it make her stunned a moment before she kiss kai cheek and now kai the one who got blush.

"A..a...ahahaha, okay then I go. Bye!"

Kai got into the car and leave as touch his cheek where acchan kiss it.

After that he leaves to do his work.

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So, since then their life as an uncle and niece begin. Kai always take acchan to school and pick her up also. He even become popular between acchan friends there. Its not that acchan doesn't like it but it kind a irritate and annoyed her if there is another girl around her midget uncle.

Kai who finds that his niece often get jealous whether he is surrounded by the girl somehow feel happy and excited. But what that he doesn't know that something grow inside him.

They become closer and closer and without their even realize their relationship somehow more than like a what an uncle and niece would do. Kai would often get jealous if there is a boy approach acchan and vice versa. They go shopping together, go on movie together , go to the amusement park together. If an ordinary people see them they could think that they are a couple.

Oneday, kai realize about his feeling towards acchan is already more than an uncle to his niece. Why? Coz that day, as usual kai would accompany acchan sleep in her room before he got back to his office. He waits until his niece sleep as holding her hand. He keep looking to the sleeping face in front of him and suddenly he feel something take control of his body. He stroke her hair and move the stray bangs that cover her face. 'So cute.' That what he thought he move closer and closer. When his lips almost touch her suddenly acchan mumbling something that make him back to reality. That words really clear to him.

I love u uncle. I'm sorry.

Kai, just freeze there. He shock. He almost kisses his own niece. He then hurry go to his room. And grab his brother pic. 

Why should this happen?

This not suppose to be happening.

I... I... This shouldn't be happen.

Brother, what should I do? I'm sorry I love her too. I didn't realize it , I look her as a woman. I love her more than a niece to me.

I know even she is not your real child still she is my niece. Oh my god.


Kai heart aching. He doesn't wanna ruin their relationship. Coz of that he starts to distance his self with acchan. He always go home late and directly go to his office and lock the door. There is almost no time for them to meet each other and It make the young niece feel sad and alone.

Sayo san knows there is something and try to speak to her young master.

"Master kai, are u okay? Its seems u and miss acchan have a fight or something."

"Its okay sayo san. No need to worry."

The old lady can't do or say anything. She just sigh but then speak to the young master "u know master, its okay to fall in love with someone. Its not something u should regret. Love appear in the un predictable time and unpredictable moment. Think about it master kai. Don't let u'r love gone." With that last world sayo san leave the room.

As sayo san leave kai feel his eyes begin watery. He approach the mirror and see him self there "how could I get my love if the one that I love is forbidden to me?! Aaaaaaaargh.... " He said as punch the mirror until the mirror break.

His hand is bleeding so much. But the pain is nothing to compare of his heart feel. He got up and clean his hand then headed to his room.

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Next morning acchan wake up a bit earlier. She can't hold it anymore. She has to know why his uncle try to avoid her. So she decide to talk to her uncle. She hurry take a bath and got change. After that she heading to kai office.

Whether kai still at his bed. Lay there lazily. He try to open his eyes. He force to sit and go get change. Suddenly his phone vibrate and he looks at the screen. Its the b'day reminder. A week from now is her niece b'day and he almost forgot. He sigh and then decide to pretend nothing happen. He doesn't want ruin his niece b'day. After get change he go to his work room and there acchan already sit and wait for him.

"Ohayou uncle." Acchan smile

"Ah, ohayou atsuko. What bring u here?" Kai approach her and sit beside her.

"I.... I.... " Acchan don't know how to start and she just look down.

"Uhm? What is it atsuko?" Kai look at her worry.

Acchan then suddenly speak "are.... Are u hate me uncle?"

"What? What are u talking about?"

"Recently u look change. U even don't wanna meet me or having a time with me." Kai silent don't know what to say. Then he begin hear a sobbing.

"*hiks....if I do wrong please forgive me uncle. *hiks I ... I don't wanna u hate me. I don't wanna u leave me. The .... The only family that....that...." Can't bare seeing his beloved niece cry he hurry hug her.

"Shhhh....shhhh....please....atsuko don't cry...I I'm sorry okay... I don't know if u would think like that. I'm not hate u. I won't leave you. Please stop crying." Kai hug her tightly and pads her back.

They broke the hug and kai wipe the tears in acchan cheek. "Please don't cry anymore. Here, I promise tomorrow we will spend time together okay. I'll take you to amusement park. How about that? And a week from now  is your b'day right? I'll do anything u ask." Kai said as stroke his niece hair.

"U...u....u promise?" Acchan said as try to calm her self. Kai nod and then kiss acchan forehead as said "I promise."

Suddenly acchan hug and nuzzle in kai neck make kai froze. 'Kami sama, why should I love this girl.' "Thank you uncle. I love you. I love u soo much." *deg that words make kai freeze. Kai don't know what to reply he just can nod and enjoy his time with her niece until his phone vibrate.

"Atsuko, u go down first I'll catch up with you okay." Acchan nods and leave her midget uncle alone.

Kai pick up the phone and he looks at the screen its miichan..

"Yoo, moshi...moshi....what is it miichan?"

Yooo kai, we got a bit problem here. Seems that the gangster start to curious with us.

"What u mean?"

I mean that there is a possibility that our undercover is revealed. But don't worry it just a hunch and don't forget this night we have to fight that neighbor triad.

"Ah I see. And don't worry. I'll be there. I just need to distract atsuko."

Aah, acchan. So how is it kai?

"What u mean?"

Eyes can't lie kai. That kiddo likes you. She fall for u.

"Naaah, she looks me as her uncle. Don't talk nonsense."

Well, its up to u whether u wanna believe or not. Shaa matta. Osuuuu...

*bip...*bip.... Tsk that guy.

With that kai now gonna meet acchan in down stair.

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at the night, triad war

"Ooiiii kuuuu watchout." Riku shout

"Whoooaaa, that almost. Take this u jerk."

"Aaaaarghhh...." One down.

"Oiii kai.... Behind u." Haven't got any chance to dodge kai back got scratch with samurai.

"Aaaaarrrght u bastard. Take this." Kai swing his sword and trust the guy.

"Kai your back bleeding."

“Kuu, lets go get kai out of here.”

“wait the bos try to escape.”

“waiiit guys…” kai, pull put his gun and then shot the triad leader .

“hurry take him to his house”

“no, go get rid my wound first. If atsuko see this she ….”

“wakatta, come on.”

“kai? Oooiiii kaiiiii don’t faint..”

“he loosing too much blood.”


Atsuko…..



TBC~

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 2~' 11 nov)
« Reply #167 on: November 11, 2011, 12:22:38 PM »
What happened? WHAT HAPPENED?????  :bleed eyes: :on polter: :gyaaah: :frustrated:
kai please dont die!  :pleeease:
nee, neechan please forget what I've said before okay... huhuhuhu  :scared:

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 2~' 11 nov)
« Reply #168 on: November 11, 2011, 12:24:05 PM »
part 3... part 3... part 3...   :prayers:  I need part 3~~~  :mon geek:

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 2~' 11 nov)
« Reply #169 on: November 11, 2011, 01:05:24 PM »
No Kai!!! Be alive!!

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 2~' 11 nov)
« Reply #170 on: November 11, 2011, 01:36:40 PM »
Kai!!!!
Please update soon I need to know what happen next!!!!!
Please update soon  :bow: :bow:

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 2~' 11 nov)
« Reply #171 on: November 11, 2011, 01:38:21 PM »
No!!!! Kai!!!!!!!!  :(
Who's that!!!! I'll kill that person who harm kai  :angry:
Please update the next part soon  XD I'm curious :banghead:
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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 2~' 11 nov)
« Reply #172 on: November 11, 2011, 02:40:47 PM »
Oh NOOOOOOO!
you make me soooo nervous!!!
what happened??!!!! I want to know what will happen next NOW
I need part 3! I need part 3!
up date please please please

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 2~' 11 nov)
« Reply #173 on: November 11, 2011, 04:10:51 PM »
okay here is the part 3 guuuuuuys~ finally i can manage to finished this  :dozing: :dozing:

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~Forbidden part 3~
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“Kuu…. How Is his condition?”

“The blood wont stop.  We better move fast to mayu place.”

“Hold on buddy.  U will survive.”


Riku faster his car. And soon they all arrive at watanabe secret lab.  Well, watanabe secret lab is owned by Dr.Mayu. Watanabe Mayu is their private and secret doctor. If there is something happened Mayu will gladly help them. Mayu has an assistant her name is Kashiwagi yuki or yuki, She is can move without notice and work so fast and really helpful.

As arrive there they hurry take kai to the lab.

“Mayu…. Mayu… Open the door its us.”

“Huh? Guys, what happen? Kai? What happen to him?” mayu said worry

“We talk about it later okay now lets take care of his wound.” Kuu said.

“Okay, yuki. Prepare everything. Now guys, put him there. I wanna see the cut.”

Ass mayu open the cloth and see the cut he amaze. “Gosh, its not bad bleed. I should to close that wound. Okay kai bite this. This would be reallu hurt.” Kai nods and they begin to close the cut. Kai scream so hard but he try to get rid the pain.

After 30 minutes finallt the cut close and mayu cover kai wound with bandage. 

“You rest first don’t move too much.” ,Mayu order

“But…but… I have to go home. Atsuko must be wait for me. arrrrgh…. ” kai try to get up but fail coz the pain still sting.

“huh? Atsuko? Who is atsuko?” mayu ask

“well, long story but all we could tell is she is his niece.” Kuu said

“ah I see. Well I know u are so stubborn kai so, here drink this lay for around one hour in here and then u may go home.” Mayu order. Kai doesn’t have any choice so he do what mayu said. They leave kai alone and begin talk.

“what happen guys? Kai condition really worst.”

“well, we have a war with the neighbor triad today and seems kai didn’t really concentrate today and he lost his guard.” Riku explain

“ah I see. Is something wrong?” 

“I think kai kun is fall in love mayu kun.”

“eh? Hontou?” mayu surprise

“well, jitsu wa…. It’s a complicated matter. I think better kai told u by him self. ” kuu sigh.

“uhm… cant help. Love is a difficult problem. Well u two better take a rest too guys.” ,Mayu said to riku and kuu.


An hour pass and kai finally awake. He looks around and found that everyone already fall to sleep. He doesn’t wanna disturb so he just leaves a message for them. He grabs his jacket and wearing it. He makes sure that nothing suspicious coz if his niece found out he got wound it would make her sad.  He go home with his bike that he keep in mayu secret lab and heading home.

Mayu secret lab is not too far from his house so its no problem for him to drive in a weak condition. He parks his bike on garage and got into the house silently. He heads the living room only to find a familiar figure lay in the sofa. Sleep like an angel. He approach the figure and smile weakly.

“atsuko… u shouldn’t wait for me u know.” He said barely audible.

“lets bring u to the room shall we.” Kai try to pick up acchan gently and slowly so the girl wont wake up. He go to the second stair and open acchan room slowly. He walks and bring atsuko to her bed.  He puts her there and cover her with blanket. Before he leaves as usual he give the girl kiss in her forehead. As he gonna leaves a hand grab his.

“Uncle…. ”

“eh? Did I wake u atsuko? Gomen.”

“uhhnm… no… why u come late?”

“ah, that’s…. I got a work with kuu n riku. Sorry making u wait for me.” kai said as sit in the edge of her bed.

“I worry coz no news from you.” Acchan pout at him

“aaaah, gomenne~ my phone run out battery so, I cant contact you. Now just sleep.”

“uncle taka…”

“yes?”

“will u sleep with me tonight??” acchan said as covering half of her face with the blanket.

‘gooosh … she is so cute.’ Kai thought … “errrr…. Uuuhm….” Kai scratch his back don’t know what to do…

“I miss u. I feel lonely recently. And u already promise that u will spend time with me.”

Kai felt guilty and he open his jacket.  “alright, I will accompany u tonight.” Acchan smile and kai begin got into the blanket also. Acchan turn and accidentally touch a bruise that kai got that make him hisses.

“eh? Uncle? What happen?”

“owgh, no…nothing its nothing. Come on, lets go sleep.” Kai said to his little niece.

Acchan go closer and snuggle with her uncle there “I really miss u.”

“yeaaaah… me too acchan. I’m sorry okay.” Kai said as stroke acchan hair.

“ne…. uncle….”

“yeah?”

“no matter what u do or u have done…. I wont never leave u alone.” Kai a bit surprise to what acchan said. ‘does she knows what I have done tonight?’ but that thought soon disappear and he heard that his niece already fall asleep.

“geezz…. This girl…. Oyasumi angel….”


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Next morning I woke up and see the angle sleeping in front of me. my she is so pretty. I cherish her cheek and smile. ‘I hope I could see u everyday like this atsuko. But faith said the opposite.’ Suddenly she snuggle closer to me and burry her face in my neck and hug me tightly. Great now I cant move. I keep in that position until finally she awake.

“uhnm… ohayoo…”

“ohayou… sleep well?”  kai ask her.

“un.. thanks to u uncle.”

“eh? Why me??”

“I don’t know, I just feel calm whenever u are around.” She said as smiling to me.

“well , then we better got up now okay. Its almost 8 and today we will go to amusement park right??”

“ah you right. Okay I’ll go get prepare. Yeaaaaay today special dad with uncle taka.” *deg hearing acchan said that make kai heart beating so fast.

“a…aahahaha… u are so funny atsuko. Now I better go get change and prepare too. I’ll be waiting downstair.”

“haaiiik…”

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~Atsuko POV~

Yeaaay, today I really happy coz today I will spen my time with uncle taka. I don’t know why but I really miss him. I wanna spend my time with him as much as I can. Now I thinkm could I be with him forever. He could be married someday and I don’t know what would happen to me if it happen?  Well I will just enjoy the time that we have.

I hurry go get change and then heading to down stair as finished. I see uncle taka already waiting for me. he is wearing a whit shirt and a black wings jacket. Simple but he looks kakkoi. I grab and cling to him and we hurry go to the amusement park. In there we have fun together. He even get me a big teddy bear. I look around and there are many couple come. I envy looking at them. Uncle taka suddenly stops and ask me to wait for him. He will get some drink for us. I wait for him and I wonder why it takes so long. I sit in a bench and suddenly a guy approach me.

“hi there cutie, lets have fun together. Seems u are alone.”

This guys is drunk. “No, I’m not alone. Please just leave me.”

“Heeeey, wow…wow… don’t we so hars young lady I know u lonely… come on…. Join.. us…hehehehe…. ” then… *splash…

“WHAT THE????”

“Leave her alone u jerk.”

“Huh??? Who are u? her baby sitter?” he mock uncle taka.

Uncle taka approach him and then *smack “Urrrrhghhhhh~” he punch him

“No, I’m not her baby sitter, I’m her guardian.” Uncle taka glare at them and they finally run away.

“tsk… kids now a day. U okay atsuko?” he asks me worry

“un… its okay uncle.”

“great , here, we can share.”  Uncle taka give his drink to me. I’m thirsty and I drink from it “thank you.” He smile and drink from the same straw as me. and it…it mean it indirect kiss. I try to cover my blushed. Then without we realize it already night. We decided to go home. I really have a good time today.

As we arrive at home uncle taka go directly to his office to meet someone. I headed to my room but then I realize that I still have his jacket . so I decide to give ot back to him. I go to his office look inside that there is someone in a black suit. I hold my step to go inside and just hearing from outside. The man in black suit is the lawyer that bring me to the orphan after my dad ded. Why is he come here?

“well seems that u take a really good care of her kai.”

“I guess. So what bring u here?”

“I got a shocking news kai.”

“eh? What news?”

“its about maeda san.”

“hah??? What happen to her?”


”eh?me?”


“well, u know that she is adopted by your brother right?”


what I was adopted??? So it means that dad is not my real dad and uncle taka is now my real uncle.


“yeah, but I don’t care about that. She is the only one family that I got and I care for her.”

“uhn, I know that but there is something u haven’t known.”

“whats that?”

“u remember that your brother handle a case back a couple years ago where she find maeda? ” uncle kai nods

“well, u know the one that kill all of her family is this organization. The organization u are in now.”

“What??? Its its…. Impossible…. So it mean i??”

“yes, u are now undercover in White Wings organization , the one who already killed her parents and family.”

“its bad , she could in danger ren san.”

“yes kai. That’s why u assigned to undercover in this mission. U have to protect her and vanished this organization.” Suddenly there is a sound

“whose there???” uncle kai shout and it make me run as fast as I can.

“shit, that atsuko. I gotta explain it all to her. we talk again later okay ren san.”

I can hear uncle taka chasing me. I head to my room and lock it.

“ATSUKO, OPEN THE DOOR. LET ME EXPLAIN!!”

“NO!! Just leave me alone”  I shout.

“Atsuko, please open the door then I could explain it all. Please atsuko…. Please…”

I lay backing at me door and cry there.


why u didn’t tell me from the beginning uncle kai?

Don’t u know how u mean for me…



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Kai keep waiting in front of  acchan door and finally he heard the door open. He face the girl and feel guilty coz he has made the girl cry.

“atsuko… ”

“I’m sorry.”

“lets talk inside.”

Kai guide atsuko inside and begin to explain everything. He could see the pain In atsuko eyes.

“and that’s the truth. I’m sorry I lie to u atsuko. But I cant let u get harm. My brother also have just told me about u a week before we met. I apologize. I know u will hate me. but one thing that u should know, u will be always be my family atsuko. U are precious for me. .”

No reply from acchan. “well, I already explain it all I’m sorry , I better leave u alone now.” kai begin to leave her until he felt a pair of hands wrap around him from the back.

“Don’t leave… *hiks… I’m sorry, I just shock… *hiks …. ”  kai turn around and the hug the young girl.

“its okay. I am the one that should apologize to u atsuko.” They keep hug each other until something hard land in kai head and make him unconscious.

“UNCLE KAAAAAIII!!!!”

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*splash….. a bucket of water thrown into kai

“Mhuaaaaaaa…. Whats… happen? ”

“ah u finally awake kai.”

“Jack. Release me now.”

“whooaaa. Easy tiger. Your beloved niece is with me now.”

kai look to the figure beside jack.

“ATSUKO!!”

“UNCLE KAI!!”

“My … my… what a nice family few, but u know kai. Or should I call u Agent Kai.”

“Leave her alone jack. She doesn’t know anything. ”

“owgh…owgh…owghh… no need to worry kai I just wanna see suffer. Guys, BEAT HIM.” Soon one by one of jack man beating kai. His head bleading and there are wound everywhere. Soo much bruise.

“NOOOO!! UNCLE KAIII!!!!!”

“Araa….araa…. what a nice niece. But..” *plak jack slap acchan

“JAAAACK I’m GONNA KILL YOU!!!!”

“AHAHAHA/…. How’s that kai??? Look someone u love being hurt.”

“I’ll gonna get you jack”


Suddenly  there an explode

“WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA….. Bos the main gate being destroy.”

“What???”

“Bos Our man already vanished.”

“Tsk….It must be your stupid friend.”

“fufufuf.u… then don’t underestimate me ”

“wha…wha….what??? how how could u release your self?”

“as I told u don’t ever underestimate me and …” *smack *Buk *bak…

“NO ONE COULD HURT MY ATSUKOOOOO!!!!”

“AAAARRRRRGGGHHHHT!!!!” with one kick on jack head he down.

“kai, acchan u ok??” 

“kuu, riku… yeah… its ok…now just go get this bastard out of my view.”

Kai look at acchan and release her. he takes acchan’s hand as said “Lets go home atsuko.”

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Atsuko and kai then go home. Kai go to his room whether atsuko take some medicine and hot water to clean kai wound.

“its okay atsuko, I can do it by my self.”

“no, let me take care of u uncle. U already take care of me.” atsuko begin clean the dry blood from kai face.

“why they do this to u uncle kai.” Acchan said almost cry

“ano.. its nothing compare if I have to lose u atsuko.” Kai said with a gentle smile.

Atsuko now unbutton  kai shirt to clean the wound. As the shirt off from kai she shock since there is so much scar there. Atsuko eyes fill with pain as looking at her uncle body. She then start cleaning the wound. “is it still hurt?” acchan ask.

Kai smile and shake his head answer acchan question. He then hold acchan hand and their eyes meet. “look what have they done to u atsuko..?” kai said as touch small bruise in acchan lips. “they dare to hurt my atsuko. I’m sorry…” kai cup atsuko cheek with his hand. acchan reach his hand and enjoy the touch.

Their face now so close to each other “u are so cute atsuko.” Kai said as cherish acchan cheek. Their get closer and closer. Until their face only an inch. And without realize their lips already meet and touch at each other. They kiss slowly and slowly and until suddenly it begin more passion. they move closer and now it become deeper. Acchan hands now wrap around kai’s neck whether kai hands now in acchan waist. They enjoy the kiss. Its like something that they already waiting for long. Kai suck and bit acchan upper lips and then finally a moan hear from his niece as his tongue try to granted an access to explore the girl mouth. Soon there is a duel between their tongue. Kai, like the taste of acchan taste and wont ended the kiss and of course so do acchan. but then they decide to break the kiss. Both of them breathe heavily. They look at each other.

“I … i… I’m sorry atsuko… I just cant hold it anymore. I know this is wrong but, i… I really love you. I already fall with my own niece . I should be punished. I … I ….” Before kai finished his world his mouth already claim by acchan. acchan give her beloved uncle a short deep kiss. Then she hug him “I wont regret anything.”

Kai look at acchan an stroke her hair “even this is wrong then I also guilty. It coz I also fall for my own uncle.”

“atsuko…”

“u know , when I know that u aren’t my real or blood related uncle I part of my heart feel happy. It mean that I still have a chance to be with you.”

“since you are not really my uncle so, u could do anything to me and I will gladly to give u everything. And that’s because I love you. I love u not as my uncle. I love u as a man.” acchan begin plant a small kiss in kai face.

Kai hold acchan hand and kiss it “and I also love u as a woman atsuko. I cant get rid your face in my mind and I want u be mine. I  want me to be yours. I’ll give anything u ask me. I cant hold this feel anymore.”

With that their eyes now full of lust and hungry at each other presence. Kai begin kiss acchan roughtly and say how he really love her as guide acchan to lay in his bed without breaking the kiss.

“I love u atsuko…. I really love u… I wanna to touch you…”

As kai begin to kiss acchan neck she moan loudly… “aaahn… u…uncle kai…”

“please just call me kai now aatsuko…” kai said as bite acchan neck and leave his mark there.

“aaahn…. Fine… kaaai then..”

“now u already marked by me atsuko. Would u be mine now?”

Accahan smile and then wrap her hands around kai neck. “make me yours tonight.”

With that… kai begin kissing and explore his lover now. and that’s night they become one.

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~A week after~

2 naked body that only cover with blanked lay in a queen size bed. Both of them still sleep and enjoying each other presence. The blond guy wake up and just watching his lover sleeping. Still exhausted from what they have done last night. Cant hold his self he begin plan a light kiss to the woman neck and make the woman under him moan.

“aahnnm….. stop do that…”

“hey. Ohayou princess”

“ohayou prince.”

“how is my princess atsuko this morning?”

Acchan wrap her hand in kai’s neck and hug him tightly “uhhhmn… I’m still tired.”

Kai chuckle and give a the girl a deep kiss. “hm… so sweet atsuko. I never get tired of your kiss.”

“what a pervert uncle I got here.”

“owgh really? Then what a wild niece I got here.” suddenly acchan blushed.

“i.. i.. I’m not.”

“then how explain about this scratch ??”

“sorry, is it still hurt?’ acchan ask.

“naaah… I can bare with it. Now lets got up atsuko,”

“eeh? Where to goo??”

“special place b’day girl. Its your 17th b’day right?”

“aah, yeah its my b;day. U lucky I already 17th .”

“yeah….yeah… I know what u mean princess. Now got up.”

“nope, ” acchan then grabs kai and hug him

“u never get tired don’t u?”

“I love u my pervert uncle”

“yeah, and I love u more than u could imagine my wild niece.”



thank you for make me meeting this girl brother.~



FIN~

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dooouuuu????  :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh

sorry if its soooo lameee~  :on blackhole: :on blackhole:

i try to finished this in one day~  :fainted: :fainted:

sorry if its disappointed  :badluck: :badluck:

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 3~' 11 nov)
« Reply #174 on: November 11, 2011, 04:17:07 PM »
i'm glad kai is okay :cry:
this is an engrossinig story
wow i feel extremely slow, chapter three is like right above my comment and i totally overlooked it :lol:  :nervous
thank you for the fast update :cow:
this is an awesome story
and i can't wait for more of your stories :D
« Last Edit: November 11, 2011, 05:00:49 PM by ilovecandiedapples »

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 3~' 11 nov)
« Reply #175 on: November 11, 2011, 04:24:24 PM »
Yea!! You update!!!  :thumbsup  :w00t:
Thank you for updating so fast  :heart:
I was just really curious about what happened  :cow:

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 3~' 11 nov)
« Reply #176 on: November 11, 2011, 04:25:48 PM »
Thank you so much for the fast update  :bow: :bow:
You saved me  :banghead: who was craving for part 3  :lol:
I love it~  :heart: Its not disappointing, its satisfying!!!  XD

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 3~' 11 nov)
« Reply #177 on: November 11, 2011, 04:48:01 PM »
 :onioncheer:  yeay~~~ yeay~~~ arigatou for making 3 updates in a day~~   :kneelbow:

great ending!!!  :luvluv2:  I'm relief that no tragic end~~  :sweat:

btw, I'll be waiting for the project fic~~  :on drink:  but take your time, no pressure...

bye bye now...  :byebye: Imma continue hiding myself...  :on cloudeye:  so depressing~~~  :on polter:

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 3~' 11 nov)
« Reply #178 on: November 11, 2011, 04:48:46 PM »
Wild Acchan hehehe

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Re: [AKB48] Multiple_shot Kai x Atsuko ( '~Forbidden part 3~' 11 nov)
« Reply #179 on: November 11, 2011, 05:26:46 PM »
OMG you up part 3
Happy ending for the love story so romantic
Pervert uncle and wild niece. Yaaay Yaaay
I love your ficwrite more pleaseeee~~

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