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« Reply #220 on: July 19, 2011, 10:06:18 PM »
venga ya acabo de llegar desde londres sorry si no estuve comentando  :sweatdrop:

cada vez la situación se cumplica eh  :lol:

weno por lo menos lo del takacchan ya está bn por ahora  :)

kojiyuu no para de hacer me reir excepto los malos moments  :smhid

gahh xq dejaste atropellar a yuki  :shocked y perdiendo la memoria  :banghead:

waaa eso! q kenji y akari desaparecen in view!  :rofl:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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« Reply #221 on: July 20, 2011, 01:47:16 AM »
ahhh...! yuki no ha perdido la menoria solo esta pretendiendo...!:P

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« Reply #222 on: July 20, 2011, 01:52:57 AM »
waaa no le he visto >_< ha sido un error :d

puedo hablar en ingles  @_@?
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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« Reply #223 on: July 20, 2011, 03:15:24 AM »
claro que si..! :cathappy:
sorry for making you wait...! i was writting the next chapter but i'm not done yet...!

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« Reply #224 on: July 20, 2011, 06:11:06 AM »
31(52) 
HUMAN BEHAVIOR...(irrational,stupid,misunderstood,confusing,reckless,ignorant,desire to possess...someone or someones..!)
 
NEXT DAY
mayu enters to yuki's room with a box but yuki is still sleeping..! mayu puts the box aside and stares yuki while she's sleeping, she got closer to yuki and she's about to kiss yuki's forhead but tears comes out before and one of her tears falls in yuki's cheek making yuki  opens her eyes.. she stares at mayu...!
having mayu that close puts her nervous..yuki wipes mayu's tears unconsciously,when she relizes what she was doing got red..!
mayu and yuki  were so close just a few inches away from each other lips..!but then 
somebody enters the room and interrupt ...
hey girls..! kenji says 
yuki look other way and says hi.. mayu also says hi..!
yuki asks what's that(to change the situation) ? and points to the box..
well that it's..it's something that might help you ..! answers mayu with a smile..
mayu starts showing all the things that were in the box to yuki ..ignoring the fact that kenji was in the room too..
yuki starts pouting at mayu..! because she didnt want to see more things she didn't want to remember..!
yuki murmure stop it,stop it mayu didn't hear and yuki shouts I SAID STOP...! and and throws the box away
mayu fell tears in her cheeks again,she stares to yuki and thinks" again that look" the she starts picking up all the things to put it back in the box..
kenji was surprised by yuki's action
yuki says "sorry my head hurts" 
mayu says "don't worry yukirin"
someone else also came to visit yuki..it was sae "hi guys yuki i brough you some chocolates hope you like it"says sae with a smile on her face 
yuki smiles to sae..!
she is with open wounds,she can't eat chocolates mayu says pouting at sae...!
oh god..! i'm really sorry...i'm really dumb sometimes..sae says ashamed..
it's okay ..!yuki says smiling at sae 
actually we should buy something decent for yuki to eat,honestly hospital food tastes awful kenji says 
yeah..! you go,i'll stay here with yuki says sae 
yeah..  you go,i'll stay here too mayu says not even looking at kenji..
kenji was mad and took mayu by her hand and try to drag her with him..
why you don't wanna come with me..? kenji asks forcing with mayu..!
mayu gets up(she was still picking up the things) looks at kenji,slap him and shouts "I SAID NO..I WANNA STAY HERE...!"
yuki and sae were shock..!
kenji was brushing his cheek
it's must hurt right? but i don't think it hurts more than this..! yuki says while looking at her wounds...
fine kenji says and leaves..
MEANWHILE
nyan nyan and yuko were shopping trying to find a good present for yuki..!
nyan nyan i'm tired of walking ..!yuko says complaining
c'mom yuko where's the atthletic girl? nyan nyan asks laughing
yuko number 1: yeah is easy to ask that when you're not the one who's carrying the bags..!
yuko number 2:you offered yourself jerk don't complain
yuko number 1: hahaha you're calling yourself jerk...
yuko number 3: are we going to get something after this?
yuko number 2: i don't think so...!
yuko: trust me girls..! this is not free... 
wait...! are you mocking me nyan nyan? yuko asks pouting 
ME..! no,never hahahhaha nyan answers
nyan nyan keeps walking but feels that yuko is not walking ..!
nyan nyan turns around and see yuko standing and staring at something with shiny eyes in one of the stores showcase...!
what are you looking at? 
nyan nyan looks and it was a..sexy nurse costume...!
what? yuko i don't think yuki will enjoy that...!says nyan nyan innocently...!
it's not for her..! says yuko with a creepy voice,bleednose and staring at nyan nyan and with the look of an old perverted man..!
nyan nyan blushes and shouts NO,NO STOP LOOKING ME LIKE THAT  YUKO..! DO YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH COSTUMES...?I'M NOT GOING TO PLAY A SEXY NURSE..! I'M DONE... CATWOMAN WAS ENOUGH FOR ME...! 
everyone was staring at them..
please nyan nyan..this is the last one..i promise...! yuko says with sweet squirrel eyes and in knees
yuko this is embarrasing,get up..!nyan nyan saw people watching them and blush even more ..!
ok,ok..just get up...!nyan nyan says
yuko number 1: nyan nyan as a sexy nurse..i can't wait...!
yuko number 2: i want her to take my temperature..!
yuko number 3: one word.. bleednose..!
yuko: you see i told you..!HAHAHHA
MEANWHILE
takmina and acchan were eating in acchan's bed
you know ,we are all sad but you have to eat takamina to be strong and you're not going to be strong if you don't feed like you should !
i'm not hungry acchan but thank you...!
nooo, open up your mouth...! acchan says
no..! takamina reply 
open it..!.
no..!
i have an idea...what about everytime you take a tablespoon,you're hot and caring girlfriend  will give a kiss..! does it make it better..? acchan says looking at takamina with a smile...!
well ...i guess if you  putting it that way..makes it way better...!
sorry for my english and for taking too long..is just that you guys don't let me put it more drama and for me is kinda dull...!:(



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« Reply #225 on: July 20, 2011, 06:30:45 AM »
its okay if you want to put more drama.. just write what ever you want...  XD

I'm just too emo when I give comment LOL~~ :lol:

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« Reply #226 on: July 20, 2011, 11:27:38 AM »
Haha go Mayu! I still hate you for messing around with Kenji! :]]

Waaa I want to see Harunyan in Sexy Nurse costume too.  :w00t:
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« Reply #227 on: July 20, 2011, 12:50:15 PM »
Kenji have just to die!!!
Kojiharu as a nurse... Hehehhe
Acchan know how to feed Takamina lol

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« Reply #228 on: July 20, 2011, 01:39:44 PM »
Can someone just kill off that kenji dude. He's seriously pissing me off. :angry:

sexy nurse harunyan...  :drool:

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« Reply #229 on: July 21, 2011, 06:35:16 AM »
32(53) 
HUMAN BEHAVIOR...(irrational,stupid,misunderstood,confusing,reckless,ignorant,desire to possess...someone or someones..!)
 
yuki is in the hospital in a wheelchair she is looking through her window thinking:
what happened to you that i didn't notice? when you change that much...? where is the girl who likes to be swinged by me?
 FLASHBACK
good morning yuki chan...!
good morning mayu chan...!
yuki chan what are you planning to do for valentine's day? mayu asks blushing 
 mmm..i don't know! i haven't think about that...! answers yuki while putting her left arm around mayu's neck
and what about you mayu chan..!
i-i...just maybe think that i'll watch some anime..!answers mayu..
like always mayu..you're so adorable..! says yukirin 
hey yuki wait up...!
huh? both girls turn around
it was sae..mayu pouted
hey girls..! i was thinking..yuki would you like to go to the cinema with me tomorrow?
mayu look other way mad...
yes, why not?answer yuki with a smile..
so i'll guess..i'll pick up tomorrow ok see you..! sae says and leaves 
mayu are you okay? yuki asks
yes,totally..i think i gotta go  mayu answer with a sad face...
wait mayu..i wanted to ask you..!yuki couldn't finish her phrase,mayu left running..!
next day 
mayu gets a mail from yuki:
happy valentine's day mayuyu... !<3 hope you have fun today  love you..!take care;)
mayu sigh and don't respond,she's mad bacause yuki agreed going out with sae in valentine's day..
who needs yuki? i don't..! right? mayu thinks sad
yuki was at the cinema with sae and thinking:
why she haven't reply me yet?why she haven't text me? 
i been waiting all morning for you to answer me..!
yuki was staring her phone to ring to see a message or a call from mayu...!
maybe something happened to her? that's why she haven't text me in all day..
are you okay yuki? sae asks 
yes,i'm fine hey sae can i use your phone? yuki answers
yes , here it is..!
yuki gets out and goes to the bathroom,she calls mayu from sae's phone 
when she heard hello she hung up the phone...!
unbelieveble..! how she dares..? she's fine and she can't text me back...! yuki says mad and goes back with sae..!
the movie ended and sae walked yuki to her house..!
thank  you and good night..! sae chan 
you're welcome and goodnight..!yuki chan
yuki was in her room laying in her bed mad...!
i can't believe she didn't text or anything...i hate cyborg girl..! yuki shouts while putting a pillow on her face..!
hi yuki chan...!
yuki freak out and fell out of bed...
mayu smiled are you okay yukirin?
how did you get in? ask yuki trying to her breath
the window was open...! mayu answers 
wow you just climbed the wall... yuki says surprised
no! that tree help me a lot..! mayu answers
who ever though mayu as a climber...! says yuki laughing..
mayu look at yuki with a sweet look and murmure "i'll do anything for you yuki chan"
mayu why you didn't answer my message? yuki asks 
it's just...it's that i didn't wanted to bother you...
bother me? now you're bothering me..!
i'm sorry  mayu says standing up in tears
whaaaat? no,no,no don't cry,i didn't mean it that way...! says yuki nervous 
i forgot that she is 15...! yuki thinks while she gets up and walks closer to mayu..!
mayu was looking down in tears and pouting 
yuki says you're so adorable and kiss her in her forhead..!
mayu feels yuki's lips and blushes 
just don't ignore my messages ok...! says yuki smiling
ok yuki chan...
yuki starts tickling mayu till the little girl fell to the floor..
stop! stop! yuki chan
no, i won't.. you pissed me off and this is your punishment..!says yuki laughing
yuki stops tickling mayu and says mayu let's have a walk 
ok let's go yuki chan
the went to buy ice cream anf they were fooling around an making silly faces..!
it was cold outside..yuki  hugged mayu to keep her warm (she was worry about her little girl might get a cold)they keep walking till they saw a park..!
mayu and yuki stares each other and run like a race to the games,they play them all and have fun like 2 kids in a candyshop..! they were laughing and enjoying their time together..!
mayu gets into the swing and yuki begins to pushing..!
mayu shouts laughing stronger yuki..! stronger yuki...! till i reach the sky ..! yuki was also laughing she couldn't stop loughing mayu's laugh was contagious..!
YUKI CHAN YOUR THE BEST SWINGER EVER...! shouts mayu laughing
END OF THE FLASHBACK
 tears came out from yuki's  while she was looking to the window, yuki murmure "we were so happy back then" and starts crying even louder..!
she didn't notice that mayu entered the room and she was behind her..
mayu see yuki crying and turn around the chair to face yuki..
yuki are you okay? something hurts? do you want me to call the doctor..?mayu asks worry
yes,it hurts but there's no need to call the doctor..! yuki answers sad
mayu tries to wipe yuki's tears from her cheek,yuki avoids mayu's hand  and moved the wheelchair again to the window..!
mayu takes the wheelchair and moves it to the door..!
what are you doing?yuki asks
 being here lock up is not good,we're going to take some freash air...!
what? no! i don't want to...! yuki replied mad 
i'm sorry but your not in possition to say anything...!
mayu and yuki wanders around the hospital .!
mayi starts running and pushing the wheelchair all over the hall
what are you doing...? we're going to crash..!yuki says worry
why so negative? i'm really good at driving wheelchairs says mayu laughing and pushing the wheelchair with all her strainght..
yuki didn't want to laugh but she couldn't help it..it was fun 
and it seems like back then ..!
yuki was laughing really loud because she hold it the past few days...!
mayu was happy seeing her captain happy and that gives more energy to push even harder (even though she was tired because she had practice)
go, go,go faster..! shouts yuki with a big laugh 
told ya i'm really good at riding wheelchairs "I'M GONNA MAKE YOU REACH THE SKY LIKE YOU ONCE DID..!  shouts mayu with tears in her eyes..!
sorry for my english and for makjng it too short..it just that i'm preparing something..don't hate for what i'm about to do...!

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« Reply #230 on: July 21, 2011, 11:25:59 AM »
I want to see Mayuyu climbing lol

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« Reply #231 on: July 21, 2011, 06:57:52 PM »
Waaaa that was sooooo cute!!! MaYuki never fail to make me happy. :[[[

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« Reply #232 on: July 21, 2011, 09:18:47 PM »
sorry i can't update i have english right now...!

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« Reply #233 on: July 21, 2011, 10:10:55 PM »
hahaha enga disfruta de tu clase  XD
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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« Reply #234 on: July 22, 2011, 03:57:29 AM »
33(54)
HUMAN BEHAVIOR...(irrational,stupid,misunderstood,confusing,reckless,ignorant,desire to possess...someone or someones..!)

takamina was watching tv in her room when she was changing channels she saw acchan  and kept watching her lovely girlfriend..
the host shows acchan a picture of her with takamina..
the host asks what about you two you seem a lot close?
acchan answers" i love takamina"..!
(hahahha she loves me shouts takamina happy)(i love you too acchan says takamina while jumping of joy) 
like what? the host asks
like everything,she is one of the most important persons in my life,i really think that i don't know what i'll do with out her by my side to support me
oh really? how do you describe your relantionship with her? the host asks
well...mmm..i think is amazing...! answers acchan with a smile 
(wow acchan look so beatiful on tv) 
so then how is your relantionship with this other girl that you're married with...?
what? micchan? acchan answers
yes, exactly that one..
well..miichan is a really special friend,she's really nice and lovely..answers acchan 
so who would you choose? takamina or miichan?
eehh...i don't know..i can't choose..! they're both very important for me...stop asking those kind of questions acchan says pouting..
takamina couldn't believe it..!she turn off the tv and lay in her bed mad and with teary eyes  "she did this to me again what the hell is wrong with her? why she always has to hurt me so bad? "
after the interview acchan went to takamina's house 
takamina's mom open the door and told acchan that takamina was upstairs.. 
hey darling tell takamina that i'm going out please...!
ok...!
acchan goes upstairs,opens the door and  see takamina sleeping face down..!
omg she's sleeping though acchan.she enters the room slowly to not wake up takamina
accahn sits on takamina's bed and stare the room a little bit..wow takamina's room it's so clean unlike mine(so messy)
acchan got bored of looking at takamina's room that she sitted on takamina's butt and starts kissing takamina's back..!
(takamina doesn't wake up,she was dreaming with acchan  to be exactly she was having a naughty dream so she though that it was normal feel those kind of sensations)
takamina flips face up and put her arms around acchan neck to pull her closer for a kiss 
acchan gives takamina a rough kiss and put her hands underneath takamina's shirt..
takamina fell good(she was still thinking that was part of her dream)
acchan break the kiss and trace her way to takmina's neck and ear..she start kissing it and biting it..!
takamina hands roams around acchan's body and she opens her legs letting acchan be between them..!
acchan  lift up takamina's shirt a little just the enough to feel takamina's abs..
acchan whispers in takamina's ear "do you like what i'm doing to you?"
takamina opens her eyes and see acchan on top of her between her legs,her shirt lifted up,her hands around acchan's body...
what the hell? takamina asks in shock she moves aside and gets up...!
what's wrong takamina? acchan asks smirking
i was sleeping and.. how this happen? takmina asks
hey it's okay your my girlfriend we can kiss like that says acchan while getting closer to takamina..
acchan is going to hug her but takamina avoid it..!
"this is my parents house at least you should respect that"takamina says 
acchan stop smirking and says i'm sorry
takamina look other way and asks what are you doing here? don't you have something else to do? you're always busy ..!
acchan answers i wanted to see you and no,i canceled everything i wanted to spend all my day with you...!
as the face of akb you shouldn't be wasting your time here...! takamina reply
what? your my girlfriend takamina...! what you mean with that? acchan says mad and grabbing takamina's arm 
maybe miichan can explain you...! takamina says smirking
this is not funny takamina..! 
both girls starts forcing
you're so sick about right? you think that i love miichan?
i'm so tired of it...! grow up takamina...! shouts acchan 
sick..? of all words in the world you call me sick...! there's no doubt you're stupid acchan sometimes...!answers takamina 
if i am that stupid why you are with me? you shouldn't get back to me if you weren't ready ..! keeps shouting acchan
because...
you know what don't tell me.. i don't wanna know...! acchan says while walkiing to the door
takamina mad shouts WHY YOU SAID THAT YOU CAN'T CHOOSE BETWEEN ME AND ACCHAN?
acchan turns around and push takamina softly against the wall with both of her arms in takamina's shoulders..acchan takes a deep breath, look takamina in the eyes and says "because i though that you didn't want  anyone to know about us..!"
a tear runs in acchan cheek..
at..-su..ko.. takamina stutters  
acchan get off her arms and turned around to leave but takamina grabbed her hand to pull her closer to take her by her waist and says  i'm sorry...!
acchan look takamina's eyes and kiss her 
well i'm not going tell what they did next  i'm not good writting those things...i think i should take someone else eroctic part and paste it on my fic hahahaha nooo i don't think that would work...! 










 

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« Reply #235 on: July 22, 2011, 10:06:18 AM »
Takacchan!!!!!!!
This chapter made me blushe

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« Reply #236 on: July 22, 2011, 11:29:23 AM »
takacchan moment~~ kill me!!!  :banghead: :banghead:

nice!!!!  XD

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« Reply #237 on: July 22, 2011, 12:09:30 PM »
i'm so saaaaaaaad...!  :cry:
i saw akbingo confessions epidode...!
when they asked yuki who are her best friends?
she answer some whatever girl and saee....! I HATE SAE....! :angry:
why she didn't say mayuuuuuuu..! :banghead:

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« Reply #238 on: July 22, 2011, 12:22:10 PM »
i'm so saaaaaaaad...!  :cry:
i saw akbingo confessions epidode...!
when they asked yuki who are her best friends?
she answer some whatever girl and saee....! I HATE SAE....! :angry:
why she didn't say mayuuuuuuu..! :banghead:

because Mayu is her girlfriend, not bestfriend.  :P

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« Reply #239 on: July 22, 2011, 11:04:43 PM »
It kills to create an erotic scenes. -.- Even though I have the imagine on my mind but still can't write it properly. :/

Acchan sneaking in Takamina's room.
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she sitted on takamina's butt and starts kissing takamina's back
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