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Re: Future Love [12] - Unexpected Revelation?
« Reply #140 on: July 24, 2011, 01:48:57 AM »
That Nana girl is gonna DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~ *cough* Oh did I say something?

MARIKO AND YUKO?!!!!!!!!

WMATSUI TOMORROW? BUT BUT... ITS TOO FARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

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Re: Future Love [12] - Unexpected Revelation?
« Reply #141 on: July 24, 2011, 01:50:03 AM »
I'm speechless....  :mon speechless:

I'm hurt for Acchan!!!!  :mon runcry:  I need to kill that girl!!!!  :on voodoo:

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Re: Future Love [12] - Unexpected Revelation?
« Reply #142 on: July 24, 2011, 02:04:30 AM »
WTF?  :O


what just happened??? :panic:


i need to know what's nexxxxxxxxxxxttttttt....!! :banghead:

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Re: Future Love [12] - Unexpected Revelation?
« Reply #143 on: July 24, 2011, 04:17:04 AM »
Someone needs to die! *coughnanacough*

MariYuu?  :? Shockku!

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Re: Future Love [12] - Unexpected Revelation?
« Reply #144 on: July 24, 2011, 07:28:37 AM »
What?! Yuko & Mariko?!  :wth

Update soon~  :grin:

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Re: Future Love [12] - Unexpected Revelation?
« Reply #145 on: July 24, 2011, 10:33:04 AM »
Shipping Yuko && Mariko! Acchan's murder strategy should be done in reality to Nana  :twisted:

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Re: Future Love [12] - Unexpected Revelation?
« Reply #146 on: July 24, 2011, 09:08:54 PM »
OMG SDN party!!!!!!!!!!!
What did she said?!!!!!

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“I really can’t believe Takamina went out with you. Don’t you know it’s rare for Takamina to accept someone in just a snap?” Nana formed fake smile to Atsuko. “Oh and it’s so unbelievable for you to be her girlfriend. I mean come on, I know Takamina is crazy about popular hot girls.” She then positioned herself in a sultry pose, earning an attention to the people who are passing by.

The quiet girl felt offended on Nana’s choice of words. Didn’t she know Maeda Atsuko is the second hot and popular in Akiba Academy? Hotter than Nana Takeuchi’s filthy mouth.

In her vision, Atsuko is brutally ripping Nana Takeuchi’s internal organs, fried them up until it get burn and place all of it in her dirty mouth. Atsuko’s not yet satisfied on that scene, therefore she’ll start to pluck out her eyeballs and let the girl eat her own eyes. Break all the bones in Nana’s body. Chop her into pieces, set those flesh in fire until it got burnt and lastly, throw it into the cannibal’s mouth.

Who says Maeda Atsuko is a gentle girl?

“I’m not trying to offend you okay? I’m only… stating the facts.” Nana place her palm on top of Atsuko’s hand and give her a wink.

Removing her hand on Nana’s polluted hand and Atsuko let out a fake laugh. “No it’s okay. In fact, I only show my body to Takamina whether we are in bed, under the bed, shower room, teacher’s desk, principals office, in the bleachers, at the field, rooftop, dinner table, changing room, everything. Maeda Atsuko’s body that every single man-being that had been drooling and fantasizing are only for Takahashi Minami.” It is now Atsuko’s turn to wink. “I forgot. Takahashi Minami, have licked everything~”

‘I own the spotlights now Takeuchi Nana.’

Nana inhaled sharply and went back to her old self. She couldn’t find her wise words to say to Takamina’s girlfriend.

“Every time I see Minami, my virginity is growing back.” Atsuko continued, making this last sentence as her victory strike.

The three awful words from Takeuchi Nana’s mouth massacred Maeda Atsuko.

“I’m the first one who took over Takamina’s virginity.”

‘First. Takamina. Virginity.’

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Re: Future Love [12] - Unexpected Revelation?
« Reply #147 on: July 24, 2011, 09:37:40 PM »
hahahaha indeed   :mon lmao:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Future Love [12] - Unexpected Revelation?
« Reply #148 on: July 24, 2011, 11:38:28 PM »
yes.... and from all the atsumina fanfics that I've read, only in this fanfic, I find Acchan really scary!!!!  what she said to that Takeuchi Nana bitch girl...was something I would have never imagined...... THAT WAS EPIC!!!! XD :twothumbs

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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #149 on: July 26, 2011, 12:22:36 AM »
A's Note: It really is scary, awesome at the same time. The slaps, pulling each others hair, cursing and all. :]] Hehe, I never thought my piece for Acchan would be that epic. >:]] Find out more on Acchan's ehemehemehem by scrolling down.



13

(Wmatsui’s continuation.)

Jurina’s soon-to-be dying into happiness heart beat crazily on the flash from the past of her first date with Rena. That blissful moments should have more gazillion memories to follow. Having Rena on her side is the only precious present she could wish for.

She had finally escaped to the past era with that bastard who put her into a damnation. Now? Matsui Rena is the reality she can’t escape. Jurina is imprisoned in Rena’s heart.

I’ll hold you and your heart close to my arms and spend my whole life with you. Jurina… I love you.’ The words of Rena are chanting repeatedly in Jurina’s heart. How can Rena blurt out such wonderful words and promise?

“I LOVE YOU!!!” Is the only words Jurina shouted to the girl who is gazing at the sky. Tears rained down in Jurina’s eyes. Not tears of sadness. Tears of happiness.

The sudden shout of the voice that she had been craving to hear startle Rena. She followed the note of the voice to see Matsui Jurina crying and smiling. Sadness and happiness are fighting who will be dominant in Rena’s feelings right now. Jurina run towards Rena and enfold her into an embrace. A tight embrace.

Happiness had won.

Though, Rena became a stone for a second and tighten her embrace to the girl she loves. Her eyes become blurry for the fact she’s crying too. There are a mass number of wonderful words Rena wanted to tell Jurina but there are only three words that she wanted to say.

“Wait.” Rena gently push Jurina away and rose her feet on the ground. She extract a deep breath before shouting the words Rena wanted Jurina wanted Jurina to hear and to the Gods above. Jurina on the hand, give Rena a confuse yet hurt look as she is thinking Rena changed her mind not to love her anymore.

“I LOVE YOU JURINA!!!” The lump on Rena’s throat nearly choked her from shouting, she couldn’t fight the tears flowing in her eyes. She want to die right now from this ecstatic feeling, but of course she can’t leave Jurina alone again.

The before expression of Jurina had been replaced. She burst into tears once more and collided her body on Rena, letting her tears to deepen on the fabric of Rena’s shirt.

Rena rested her chin on top of Jurina’s head. “Ehh… stop… crying.” Rena croaked, the bump in her throat is really killing her words.

“How can I stop crying if you hurt me?!” Jurina drummed Rena’s chest after she parted away from the hug. Rena then clasp Jurina back for an embrace.

The tongue of the tall girl has been bitten by a cat as she was taken aback on Jurina’s question. She became nervous and stabbed in the chest. “I’m sorry.” Is the only words Rena had said. Though, she thought Jurina would be furious again but Rena earned a weak giggle from the girl.

“Please, listen to me.” Jurina look up to Rena and brush away the tears of Rena. She hold her hand and motion her to sit down.

From speaking out the truth behind Jurina’s past and to the reason why she almost give up her love. Rena’s blood boiled up in anger and pain. She understood why Jurina had turned her back.

“Why are you smiling, Prince?” Jurina raised an eyebrow. Curious why Rena is giving her a smile instead of the opposite.

She was more curious when Rena stood up.

No.

Matsui Rena bent down on one knee. She reached something on her pocket and hid it behind.

“Jurina Matsui, I don’t want to be your prince. I wanted to be your forever. Baby, this is for real.”

Rena placed the box in front of her and opened the box. A figure of a two robots necklace with a red-colored heart in the middle of the robot’s body.

Rena chuckled. “Hehe, it’s a human with a square body.”

Jurina hold Rena’s hand, making the girl to stand up while tears are streaming down her face. No words are coming out. Instead, she kissed her with so much love. The kiss is telling them they would be together for eternity.

Rena gently place the necklace around Jurina’s neck after they separated from the kiss. Jurina took the similar necklace on the box and clasp it on Rena’s neck.

“There is no such thing as happy ending. What we have is our beginning. We came from the start of our future love and proved we can bloom our love together. It is our two hearts became one… I love you Jurina Matsui.”

“I love you too Rena Matsui.”

[ We all want to love that perfect person eternally. We all want to have a happy ending. This is Matsui Rena and Matsui Jurina’s love. ]

--

After saying those beautiful words. A boom of fireworks appeared in the happy sky. Loud cheering can be heard outside the rooftop. The couple stare at each other as if communicating to each other if they have the same thoughts about the sudden fireworks. They went to the edge of the roof and looked down to see; Kumi, Yuki, Mayu and Haruna. Mizuki followed after. If you observe Kumi and Mizuki closely, the light of their phones are switched on while waving it to the girls above.

“CONGRATULATIONS!!!” The five girls shouted. 

--

(Maeda Atsuko’s Point Of View)

I’m too scared to go home. Too scared that… that… I might hear from Minami the truth. Her words stabbed my heart and myself. Anger, hatred and pain are mixing inside me. Why does it have to be Minami? Why does it have to be Nana? It’s me right? It’s me who is the first girl to taste Takamina.

My breathing got hitch from crying here at the corner of the room. Hugging my knees and sobbing hard in my cousin’s guest room. I shouldn’t have went in here. I’m only bothering her and making her worry. Yet, I’m too lost and weak to move. The strength I showed earlier is now empty.

(Flashback)

“I’m the first one who took over Takamina’s virginity.” She stunned me by saying those filthy words coming from her filthy mouth.

My ears deafen, the beat of my heart stopped for awhile. I can feel my soul starts to burn in inferno. She really is trying to kill me with her lies. I was ruined. I lost. I wanted to cry but I have to show her I’m not affected. I raised my hand and draw a mark of my palm in her cheeks by slapping her sharp and clear. Most of passersby paused on their tracks, we earned Ohh’s from them.

It shows Maeda Atsuko is dominant.

“You slapped me!” She shrieked.

“Oh no, I did not slapped you. I high-five'd your face bitch.” I spat the bitch word on her face. I took a few steps, yet I came back to face Satan’s wife again.

I heard her gasped when I swing my shopping bag on her face. I laughed.

“I guess, your faces needs a plastic surgery.”

I looked at her. Scared? Haha, hell to the yeah. She can't even move a muscle. Oh come on, don't tell me I won? Too bad I'm expecting a lot more action coming from her. Where's the attack? Pulling my hair? Slap me back? Flop me on the ground? Screams of vulgar words?

“The show is over.” I raised my hands to the people whose jaws are dropped on the floor. I strike a pose here and there to the people who are recording a video and pictures. Damn, I should be a model now right?

With that, I ran away. Fury receded into pain.

Nana Takeuchi trapped me in lunacy.

(End of Flashback)

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Finding my muscles to regain its strength I hurriedly went back to Akiba Academy. I burst into our dorm room. There she is, Takamina laying in her bed, staring at the ceiling but that broke her stare when she heard the loud slam coming from my direction.

“A-atsuko?” Takamina narrowed her eyebrow as she is scrutinize me carefully.

I saw her standing up. Yet, my head is spinning that it will explode in a seconds now. I ran towards her. My hands aggressively begin removing her clothes, placing wet kisses on her face, down, down… to her body. I was crying too damnit!

“Atsuko!” She pushed me with so much force, I stumble on the ground and recover quickly.

“You only want sex right Minami? Here, I’m giving it to you. Sex is where everyone wins a price while love is so hard to win. I’ll make it more unforgettable just like Nana did to you.” I broke into tears by remembering Nana’s words. Here, I’m still ripping Minami’s clothes. God I sound/look so desperate.

Hearing a silence in her mouth and sensing not a single move from her. All I gave is our pleasure. A one-sided intercourse.

--

(Next day)

The extra weight pressing down in Mariko’s body awaken her. She examined the girl who is sleeping well in her chest. Oshima Yuko. The pervert. The squirrel. The trus—

Mariko was cut off in her thought when Yuko roll on the right which she almost dropped if only Mariko didn’t hugged the girl back.

“Oi Yuko, wake up.” Mariko shook Yuko’s back.

“Ehh?! Why am I on top of you?!” Yuko automatically jerked up straight. “And, why are we here in the couch?!” She asked after she finished observing the surroundings.

“Augh. The party last night.” Mariko placed her hand on her forehead.

“Wait, then why are we really here? I mean, we’re suppose to be in your dorm room right?” Yuko frowned. “Ahh, whatever, I’m going to get a shower and clean up my self.” She jumped off Mariko’s body.

“By the way, brush your teeth three times. Your breath stinks.” Yuko stick her tongue out before running away from the wrath of Mariko.

“I’LL KILL YOU!!!” Is the warning she had from Mariko.

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The sound of the bell warned all the students that is it already time for lunch.

“KORISU!!!” Mariko shouted across the field. Zooming her way towards to the number of girls who are now walking their way back the changing room. Mariko is furious about what the little squirrel did to her last night.

The kiss.

Yuko’s tired face receded into fear. Knowing Mariko so well and could tell she had done something to the tall girl. Is it what she said earlier? Mariko knows Yuko is only joking, she always jokes around with Mariko. It is probably the reason why they are together in the couch. Yuko began to panic. The girls around her; Sayaka, Sae, Haruna(Who is surpirsed to see Mariko), and some other girls set their attention to Mariko.

“What did I do Sayaka? What did I do Sae? What did I dooooo?!” Yuko placed her hands on her head trying to remember what had happened last night, yet her memory is a blur.

“I don’t know. I can’t remember anything either.” Sae answered and looked at Sayaka who is giggling. She then shove her other half.

“Oi, what are you giggling at?!” Sae asked.

“Hi.Mi.Tsu.” Sayaka burst into laughter, remembering the four drunkards going wild last night. In reality, she doesn’t know either why Mariko is furious. Did something happened between them after when she and Sae left the 3rd years dorm room?

“Marichan!” Haruna called out when Mariko’s figure are getting closer to their spot.

“Kojiharu.” Mariko smiled at the tall girl and place a kiss on Haruna’s forehead. She suddenly ignore the fact why she is here. Completely ignored the panicking squirrel.

“I’m sorry if we haven’t talked in awhile now. Marichan love Kojiharu so I’m giving up my school work and spend lunch together with you okay?” Mariko pinched Haruna’s nose.

“I love Shinoda Mariko too.” Haruna dumbly smiled.

Then it hit Yuko. I’m sorry. Love. The words from last night. ‘I love you Shinoda Mariko… I’m sorry.

I apologized because… because…’ Yuko then ran away from the two tall girls. She sit herself at the corner of the bleachers and sob very hard. It kills her for crying this much. The ghost of Oshima Yuko’s past now haunts her.



A's Note: What a mess. :]] So Yuko's drunk yeah? Acchan's one-sided woo?

I did say to post the WMatsui update yesterday but I was stuck on my dance rehearsal(all day) and went to a party afterwards. I tried my best to the WMatsui. >:]] Does this mean i'm done with them?

I feel like giving up. -.-

P.S. This is the necklace btw. WMATSUI'S NECKLACE :]]]

I realized, all this writing technique I used on my fics are not the real technique I'm using before. Sucky thing. I re-read my other story (Not related to AKB) damn, it was so far from this writing i'm using right now for my AKB Fics. :[[ 4 months of not writing really got me.
« Last Edit: July 26, 2011, 01:04:34 AM by AAAice »
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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #150 on: July 26, 2011, 12:41:41 AM »
GAH i was busy finishing the tomotomo flashback here!!! :frustrated:

oh well Wmatsui over  :shocked  eh more more >_<

ACCHAN that was just..fighting!! but the fact Nana told is really getting into her.

i wonder what Yuko had done from her past. :dunno:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #151 on: July 26, 2011, 12:51:42 AM »
I'm happy for WMatsui~~~  :luvluv2:  the robot necklace are cute~~

Acchan... be strong!!!  :fainted:  Takamina!!!! why didn't you say anything!!!!!  :frustrated:

Yuko~~~  :pleeease:

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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #152 on: July 26, 2011, 01:26:54 AM »
Nal
- Distracted? So sorry! Can't wait for extreme TomoTomo flashback.  :twisted: GOODLUCK!!! Yeah, the fact doomed Acchan yet Nana deserved to catch the slap and the hit of the shopping bag.  :pimp:

Flean
- Guilty perhaps? xD Let's just hope a good/calm conversation between the two in the future chapters?



Augh, that scene between Acchan and Takamina is so dark.


LOL the emoticons are making me laugh! How cute.
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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #153 on: July 26, 2011, 03:02:44 AM »
Finally WMATSUI ARE BACK TOGETHER FOR GOOD!!! XD

WAAAH I WASn't Expecting things to happened like that for my ATUSMINA!!! :( :cry:
stupid NANA TAKEUCHI BITcH!!!!!! :angry: SHe totally deserve that slap!!!!
now what's going to happen to my Atsumina? :(

POOR YUKO :(
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!




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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #154 on: July 26, 2011, 03:11:16 AM »
Wmatsui! Oh my heart~  :luvluv2:

Acchan :OMG:

MariKojiYuu triangle.  :dizzy:

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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #155 on: July 26, 2011, 04:47:54 AM »
I don't even know why i didn't see this fanfic!!!

Graaahhh!!! Lol~
 

:mon scare: :mon scare: Takaachan!!! Nooo!!!!

Wmatusi~  :monk gboy: :monk gboy: Awww

and the triangle going on...  :mon ghost: :mon ghost:

Update soon!!!
 

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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #156 on: July 26, 2011, 05:01:36 AM »
YAY WMATSUI finally together again!!!!  :wub:

“Oh no, I did not slapped you. I high-five'd your face bitch.”

Love this line, Go Acchan!!!

but.... what a mess with atsumina and Mari*yuu*Kojiharu =O
Hope things will eventually workout for them

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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #157 on: July 26, 2011, 05:36:57 AM »
“Oh no, I did not slapped you. I high-five'd your face bitch

Oh? *Takes notes*  :grin:

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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #158 on: July 26, 2011, 06:49:39 AM »
hii, was a silent reader, but i finally made an account lmao orz.

wmatsui :wub: my feelings~ don't tell me you're done with them though ): moar fluffy moments!
i was LOL'N at acchan omg, haha she went crazy ballistic. and :shocked omg i wonder how takamina took it, i meant like acchan's sudden entrance and everything.. lol. yeah YAY!
my precious kojiyuu... what happened... what did mariyuu do last night T___T what's with yuko's past??  :cry:

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Re: Future Love [13] - Two Hearts became One.
« Reply #159 on: July 26, 2011, 11:51:16 AM »
Acchan's spunky attitude recalls me of your character Jasmine

Mariko always in the way is tough for Kojiyuu!!  :farofflook: Yuko stop being scared!!!

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