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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 2) update 19 - 7
« Reply #20 on: July 19, 2011, 05:45:18 AM »
Wah~~ This is nice.. :twothumbs  the plot sounds interesting!!! :w00t:

Update soon...  :bow:  update yours and I'll update mine... LOL.. :lol:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 2) update 19 - 7
« Reply #21 on: July 19, 2011, 06:33:10 AM »
Kinda hard to imagine Yuko as an ultimate angel, with her level or pervertedness and all  XD

agree, but this makes it more interesting,  :twothumbs

Very nice, will be looking forward to next update.

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 2) update 19 - 7
« Reply #22 on: July 19, 2011, 10:42:35 PM »
YATTA!!!! project with ma daughter nin nin good job   :yep:

look look i'm back  XD

tho i don't seem to find where is my notebook  :?
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 2) update 19 - 7
« Reply #23 on: July 19, 2011, 11:17:28 PM »
hi guuuuuys~  :cow: :cow: :cow: thanks for reading  :thumbsup :thumbsup today i manage to finish chap 3.  :grin: :grin:


@kaizoku_gal @immortal_K : well, since she is to long at human world her pervetness increase i guess  XD XD

@Ninjatigerdemon : hehehe, u will find out it in this chappie  :grin: :grin:

@AFLynx : thanks, well tomoTomo will appear later i guess  XD XD

@Flean : hehehehe, i already update mine dad , now update yours  :twisted: :lol:

@anoni2 : mommiiiiieeee u back finally  :twothumbs :twothumbs heehe now i waiting for yours to update  :grin: :grin: find your lappie mom  :cry: :cry:


okay, i dont know whether this is good or not, u decide guys.... and enjoy....  :thumbsup :thumbsup

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chapter 3
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next day in human world
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"Moooom, I'll go to school now."

"miichan take care okay."

"Hai, don't worry." Miichan put on her shoes and goes out the house.

"Ittekimasuuuu~"

"Itteirasahai, ki o tsukete ne~"

As leaving her house she stop her step and sense something.

'Ah, I feel something gonna happen today.'

She inhale and exhale her breathe, close her eyes for a moment then open it  and start to skipping cheerfully on her way to school.

On her way suddenly a tall girl bump into her.

"Whoooooaaaaa....."

"Waaaaa......"

Miichan fall to the grounf and her back ache.

"it...it....itaiii yoooo~"

"Ah, gomen I'm in a hurry. Sumimasen."

"Heeeey~"

The tall short hair girl leaving her.

'Tsk, that girl.' Miichan scratch her back and look down. As she look at it there is a wallet. She pick up and open it.

"Shinoda Model Agency."

'Maaaa, so she is a model. Well, got some address and I just give it back to her later.'

'Now, headed to schooool~'


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meanwhile somewhere near the park
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Suddenly a light appear in there. As the light faded a figure come out from the bushes.

"Ittai, my head still spinning."

"Now, where am I. Let's see...." She Looks around and finally realize where she is.

"Owgh yeah, now I already in human world. But....what should I do now....its impossible I wonder around with the wing at my back". Minami look at her angel wing and facepalm.

"Uhm....I better tell angel lord first."

Yupz, that's right. Minami already arrive in the human world. Begin to doing her task.

But one she hasn't realize that In the other place someone is watching on her.


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minami POV
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Finally I arrive in the human world. I got up and looking the scene around me. Well, human world not bad good.

"Uhm....I better tell angel lord first."

I close her eyes and try to contact angel lord.


"Minami, u has arrived."

"Yes my lord. I have arrived. Now what should I do?!"

"glad u have arrived save there. Now u have to get change first." 

"But how my lord?"

"here, take this with u." the angel lord give me a bracelet.

"What is this my lord?" I ask as give a confuse look.

"that is an angel bracelet. It has a power so u can interact with human and hiding your wing."

"Owgh I see. Okay, thank u my lord."

"well then give me more information as u find that girl."

"As your wish my lord."

"and by the way, that bracelet will also change you to attire that suit u."

As saying that the angel lord leave.

"Well, soo seems I gotta try to use this." As I wanna wear the bracelet in my wrist a shadow rush in front of me and I feel the bracelet missing.

"Heeeey?! Get back here. Return my bracelet." I chase the shadow and I finally manage to grab that person hand.

"Gotcha?! Don't u even run away from me. Now give it to me!"

"Moooeee, can't we just playing." The person turn around and pout at me.

"Heeeeeh? Why is a devil like u could be here? Masaka?"

"Haik, I'm atsuko. The kuroi tenshi. Yoroshiku ne~" she wink at me after introduce herself to me.

I frown at the figure in front of me. She suddenly getting closer to me and I just can stunned with her action towards me.


"whaaaaaat?????"

 
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atsuko POV
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Yesterday the devil lord give me a task to go to the human world. And now here I am. I have arrived at the human world.

'Urgh, my head feel really dizzy.'

I try to got up and look around the scene in front of me. Suddenly the devil make a contact to me.

"atsuko, can u hear me?!"

"Ah, yes my lord."

"now u already arrived at human world. Do your job smooth and well".

"Yes my lord as your wish."

Good, now here take this with u.

A necklace suddenly wrapped around my neck. "Ah, what is this my lord?!"

"that is a devil necklace. With that your power will increase and let u interact with human. Use that usefully. Now I shall go."

"Thank you my lord."

As devil lord voice disappear I heard a voice near me. I try to look at it and hide behind the tree there. I see a bright light not far in front of me and a figure come out, it her. I just keep watching her behind the tree and couldn't get rid my sight from her. 'So this is the ultimate angle.'

I see she is talking to someone but I don't know with who. Suddenly she already handed a bracelet in her hand. My naughty grin appear in my face 'I think I should play a bit with her.'

I rush forward her like a shadow and take the bracelet from her.

"Heeeey?! Get back here. Return my bracelet." she shout and try to chase me.

'fufufufu..... this is gonna be fun.' I keep running but then suddenly she manage to catch me. 'Tsk , shimatta she is not bad fast.'


"Gotcha?! Don't u even run away from me. Now give it to me!" she said and then I turn around and pout at her


"Moooeee, can't we just playing." all I can see is her confuse look.


"Heeeeeh? Why is a devil like u could be here? Masaka?" her sudden change of expression its really funny.


I giggle and introduce myself to her "Haik, I'm atsuko. The kuroi tenshi. Yoroshiku ne~" she wink at me after introduce herself to me.


she frown at me and I decided to move closer to her. Looking at her expression make me come up with something in my head and my naughty mind appear again. 'She is so cuteeeeee~' as our distance close enough I cup her cheek and then.....




"I kiss her~"



TBC~

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what do u think ???  :huhuh :huhuh please give me a comment!!!  :grin: :grin: i havent write anything for the next chapter so i guess it will take a bit much time  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #24 on: July 19, 2011, 11:28:08 PM »
naughty naughty acchan!!!!!  :grin: its so cute please update soon

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #25 on: July 19, 2011, 11:56:23 PM »
Thanks for updating
Great Chapter :cathappy:
 XD I bet that takamina reaction is going to be funny
Like  :shocked
Can't wait for next chapter  :thumbsup
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #26 on: July 20, 2011, 12:00:07 AM »
aiz sly acchan XD

lol takamina get a hold of urself!  it's just a kiss( from a naughty devil~)
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #27 on: July 20, 2011, 12:55:21 AM »
somehow devil acchan is really fitting  XD

luckypoor takamina got a kiss right after reaching the human world  :lol:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #28 on: July 20, 2011, 05:50:29 AM »
dies~~~  :nervous   kisu~~~  :inlove: :inlove:

can't wait for Takamina reaction~~  :cow:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #29 on: July 20, 2011, 08:06:23 AM »
kisssssssssssssssssssss!  :nya: :nya: :nya: :nya: :nya:

sora-neechan please update soon :shifty: :shifty:.. i can't wait for chap 4!  :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #30 on: July 20, 2011, 10:07:50 AM »
wow acchan is fast  :twisted:

goes right for the kiss  :inlove:

Thanks you, will be waiting for your next update  :twothumbs

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #31 on: July 20, 2011, 09:03:22 PM »
Woooooooooooooooooooooo kiss!!!!! Good job Acchan ^^
Yuko and chiyuu are punished because of forbidden love interesting

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #32 on: July 21, 2011, 05:53:01 AM »
 :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

Acchan a devil? Takamina an angel?  :on lol: :on lol:

Ahhhhh!! Acchan being all sexy and all    :mon spit: :mon bleed2: :mon blood: :mon angel:

And cute little innocent takamina  :shy2: :shy2:

Update soon!!!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 3) update 20 - 7
« Reply #33 on: July 22, 2011, 04:33:04 PM »
hi guuuuuys,  :cow: :cow: sorry for the long update...  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop: kind a busy recently,  :nervous :nervous

anyway, thanks for reading my fict and all the comment.  :cow: :cow:

now, lets just move out to the next chap,  :thumbsup hope u like it  :thumbsup :thumbsup


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Chapter 4-1
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Minami POV
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'Wha...whaaa...whaaaaat?!'

'What is this girl thinking?!'

'Omigaaaaa, she kiss me, she KISS ME?!'




The devil girl cup my cheek and kiss me directly to my lips. All I can do just stand there and stunned. I can't say anything and I don't know why I even not push her. Omg what is this.

Suddenly she broke the kiss and look at me as Smile innocently.

"My, u are so cute angel." She chuckle and I snap back to reality.

"What...what....why.....why u do thaaaat?!" I said as trying to hold my high blush and cover my mouth with my hand.

"Heeeee, don't say that it is your first kiss minami." She said pretend to surprise.

'Tsk, yeah she is right. That is my first kiss. Aaaaarght....what should I do. My first kiss is with this little devil. Owgh come oooon...' I face palm and I could hear she is chuckle again.



"What? What so funny." I frown to her and she again begin approaching me.

"Nooo, its just...." Without realize I lost my balance and fall back and my butt fall to the ground.

"Ouuuch...."

"Oooowh....minami u are u cute." She giggle whether I try to got up.

As I trying to got up suddenly her face closer to me. It make me surprise and I stunned for the second time.

"Ne, minami~" she said seductively and tracing her hand from my cheek to my neck.


'Omigaaaaah, is all the devil like this.' I shiver from her touch. I just close my eyes then her hand stop around my collar bone.


I open my eyes and I see she bite her lower lips "what a cute angel, too bad u are my rival."

She then pull back and give the bracelet to me.

"What do u mean?" My sight still attached to her.

"Well, u know, I won't gonna lose to u minami." She said as grin to me.

"Hmph, don't underestimate me little devil." I wear the bracelet and suddenlly I change into human form. But the weird thing is 'WHY I DRESS LIKE A GUY'.

"What the....??? Why I style like a guy here." I face palm my face whether then I see this devil look at me just staring.

"Hey, yoooo?! Little devil?!"

"Huh? Uhm...I....I...." Her change of expression surprise me. 'Is she blushing?!' She look away from me and I just approach her.


I place my finger to her chin and make she look at me "Listen little devil, I won't lose from u." I smile and move away from her.

Suddenly I see a dark light surrounding her and she then turn into a beautiful human girl. 'Huh?! is it right what I have seen? A devil like her could look like an angel.'

I snap back as I see someone pass the park where I and the little devil is.

"Huh? That's the girl." As I wanna chase the girl a hand grabs mine.

"What is it again this time little devil?!" I frown at her and she pout at me.

We keep staring to each other and I see the girl already almost lost from my sight.


"Aaargh....now let go my hand litthmph..."

Haven't finished my word, again she sealed my lips with hers. Its short and rough kiss. Then she pull from kiss.

I stunned for the second time and try to breathe. She let me go from her embrace and I feel my body so weak and fall to the ground.

"Now, I'll catch up my target.and anyway...."

She turn back before leaving me and said "call me atsuko next time or else I'll do that again." She said as wink to me and leave.


'What the hell that girl think?'


I got up and chasing her.



'Maan, yuko?! U are totally right. Wish me luck?!'


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Atsuko POV
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I have a task from the devil lord and here I'm now in the human world. I meet my rival and before I do my task I play a bit with her. She is so cute and I don't know, I feel I'm attract to her.


'I wonder if I have known her before.'


I move closer and then something happen

'I kiss her'.

Funny, but as I kiss her I feel something. Somehow there is a different. I can't resist to taste her lips. 'So this how is the feeling kissing an angel.'

I pull out from the kiss and smile innocently to her. 


"My, u are so cute angel." I chuckle to her.

"What...what....why.....why u do thaaaat?!" She said as trying to hold her high blush and cover her mouth with her hand.

"Heeeee, don't say that it is your first kiss minami." I think what I said is a truth.


'My oh my, I get an angel first kiss. Its my lucky day.'


She seems uneasy and her act is so funny. I only chuckle looking at her. Suddenly she look at me.

"What? What so funny." She frown to me and somehow it make me wanna to tease her more.

Then I try approaching her and said in a seductive way "Nooo, its just...."

Haven't finished my sentence she suddenly lost her balance and fall back and landed her butt on the ground. 'What a funny angel.'


"Ouuuch...." She feel the pain in her butt.

"Oooowh....minami u are u cute." I giggle and as she try to got up move closer to her.

Our face only in inch. It make her surprise and she stunned for the second time.

"Ne, minami~" I said seductively and tracing my hand from her cheek to her neck. 'So smooth~'

I could feel she is shivering from my touch.


'My why she is so tempting.'


She just close her eyes then I  stop my hands around her  collar bone.

She open her eyes and I bite my lower lips "what a cute angel, too bad u are my rival."

I said to her, then pull back from the close distance  and give back the bracelet to her.

"What do u mean?" She said as her sight still attached to me.

"Well, u know, I won't gonna lose to u minami." I said as grin to her.

"Hmph, don't underestimate me little devil." She then wear the bracelet and suddenlly she change into human form.

"What the....??? Why I style like a guy here." She face palm her face whether I only can staring at her.



'Oh my gosh, Oh my gosh, OH MY GOSH!!! she is so kakkoiiii~'



Then her voice snap me "Hey, yoooo?! Little devil?!"

"Huh? Uhm...I....I...." I try to hold my blushing and I look away from her and she begin approach me.

She place her finger to my chin and make me to look at her.


'Urgh, why my heart beating to fast.'


"Listen little devil, I won't lose from u." She smile and move away from me.

Now its my turn to get change. I use the necklace that devil lord give to me and turn into a human girl.

I could feel that she is staring at me but something got her attention.

"Huh? That's the girl." As she wanna chase the girl I grabs her hand.

"What is it again this time little devil?!" She frown at me and I pout at her.


'Mooouu, why is she always call me little devil. I got a name too.'



We keep staring to each other and finally she feel irritate.

"Aaargh....now let go my hand litthmph..."

Haven't finished he word, again I sealed her lips with mine. Its short and rough kiss.


'It irritate me she call me little devil.'



Then I pull from kiss.she stunned for the second time and try to breathe. I let her go from my embrace and for the second time she landed on the ground.

"Now, I'll catch up my target." I smile at her.

"and anyway...."

I turn back before leaving her and said "call me atsuko next time or else I'll do that again." I said as wink to her and leave.



'Fufufufufuf, this is gonna be really interesting~'



TBC

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douuu???  :huhuh :huhuh i dont know whether this is good or not., so please comment~  :panic: :panic: :panic:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 4-1) update 22 - 7
« Reply #34 on: July 22, 2011, 04:41:50 PM »
Man!!! I love Atsuko in this!!!!  :ding: very devilish~~~  :twisted:

takamina = takaboy!!!  :twothumbs

UPDATE SOON...  :bow:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 4-1) update 22 - 7
« Reply #35 on: July 22, 2011, 04:45:19 PM »
INDEED!!! aiz poor takamina getting tease by acchan   :lol:

guy outfit!!!! again   :rofl:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 4-1) update 22 - 7
« Reply #36 on: July 22, 2011, 05:02:49 PM »
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!! Acchan teasing Takamina, she so evil :rofl:
Poor Takaboy :grin:
Please UPDATE ASAP!!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 4-1) update 22 - 7
« Reply #37 on: July 22, 2011, 05:11:15 PM »
Devil Acchan FTW!  :lol:

Takaboy appearance  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 4-1) update 22 - 7
« Reply #38 on: July 22, 2011, 05:33:24 PM »
Takaboy being tease by devil atsuko is epic  XD
Takamina transform to look like a boy is also epic
Thanks for updating  :cathappy:
UPDATE SOON! MUST READ MORE!!!  :twothumbs
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 4-1) update 22 - 7
« Reply #39 on: July 22, 2011, 05:43:12 PM »
Kiss again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah!!!!!!!!!!
Takaboy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Tomotomo ^^

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