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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (Unrevealed Feeling) Update Nov 4th
« Reply #100 on: November 06, 2011, 03:03:38 PM »
I just stop to let you know I like your fanfc and especially the AtsuMina OS :inlove: :wub:
Please continue
I will wait fo ur next update Ganbatte ne
Like I didn't hear it, like I couldn't hear it.... I shouldn't have heard your love in the first place
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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (Unrevealed Feeling) Update Nov 4th
« Reply #101 on: November 07, 2011, 07:20:19 AM »
you update :nya:
wahahahaha :wahaha: Everyday Atsumina :wahaha:
i like this fic :mon fyeah: i like this fic so much :mon fyeah:
Minami really a good person :mon thumb: and baka too :mon evillaff:

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #102 on: November 24, 2011, 11:44:13 AM »
hey yoh! Since my business plan is postponed, I decide to write something  :nervous Though my BP has not finished yet. I prefer write stories to finish my BP <--- Boo!! Boo!!  :banghead:
Well... here is my new story.....Hmm.....it's not usual story  :wth and I guess.... I need to make part on it  :panic:
Enjoy reading! Forgive me if its not good.  :cathappy:

*gyahahaha its short!  :mon heh:
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The Real You
Part 1


“Tadaima!!” I close the door and straightly go to the living room. Both my parents seem surprised.

“Yo, papa! Yo Mama!”

“Atsu!” mom stands and still looks surprise. “What happened?” she stares at me like I am coming back from murdering someone or stealing something.

“Nothing happened.”I smile.

“Your hair? What…..what happened to your pretty long hair????” she touches my new hair as she drops her jaw.

“Oh. Kakkoi, right?” I am still smiling.

“Yea you are still cute, but……why you cut your hair? Broke up with your boyfriend?”

“Moooom, come on! I don’t even have one~” I pout.

“So what happened?”

“Ehm….still remember that story I told you mom?”

“Yea. And then?” she pauses for some seconds, and she seems already know my answer, “Don’t tell me that you are gonna…..”

I nod.

“Are you serious??” Mom widen her eyes.

“Yes….”

“Atsu…. Mom still doesn’t think that is…..”

“Mom….” My dad now is standing up and approaching us. “Let her decide it.”

“But she…..”

“Atsuko is an adult now. She knows what she is doing, so let her be. As her parents, we should support her right?”

Mom stays quite and then she sighs. Now she is looking at me. “Like your dad says. It’s your choice. Mom and Dad will keep supporting you, dear. But be careful okay?”

“Hai…. And thanks, papa! I love you!” I approach my dad and kiss her cheek.

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Tomorrow morning, I walk out from my house. I feel the gentle freeze in the morning as I start walking away…. Thanks Mama, thanks Papa for supporting me. I’m glad I have you…

“Kakkoi…..kakkoi~” I blush at the same time as some girls are passing me and saying that I am cool. Well yeah… I tell you, I am not boy right now. Actually I have disguised myself. My dark brown hair helps me to feel the coolness of a real man! Oh yea~

“Cool~” another girls are passing. This time I decide to turn back and give them my morning greeting. I wink at them. They are going crazy and, “kyaaa….kyaaaa” so loud. I smile to myself. Great, Atsuko! You are the best! Even girls fall for you! Keep it up, boy!

But wait…. I am not interested in girl though. Remember why I changed this identity? Yep… I want to meet him. My prince. Since that day he helped me, he never showed up. I wonder where he is. I remember his uniform and it comes from one of Suzuran High School and its all boys school. I just want to meet him and leave that school after meeting him. I don’t plan to graduate from it though. I am totally freak! I will follow someone I adore everywhere he goes! That’s me. At first my mom rejected it, but thanks to papa, mom finally accepted it.

On the way to school, I always fix my new hair to help me looking cool (lol). I pass a wide field as somebody is pushing my body. I fall. There are so many boys passing me, lucky me I fall to the side of the street, so they can’t tread on me .

“Watch your step, JERK!” I shout at them but I think they couldn’t hear me. They are heading to the field and another group of boys are appearing on the opposite direction. I widen my eyes as they all are looking so scary. I quickly get up and watch from a distance.

“Send us your leader, punk!” said someone from the group that are coming from the opposite direction.

“We are here enough for you.” said the one who pushed me until I fell.

“Don’t pretend to be cool! He broke my friend’s arm bone! I will kill him for sure!”

“Huh? Watch your mouth. You wanna die?”

“SHUT THE FU*K UP! First, let me kill you all in one punch! Heaaa!!!” he runs toward the one who is standing so cool in front of him. He just smiles while dodging that man fist.

“You need some years to beat me, ojiichan.” With victory-like-smile, he lands a hand on the man face, immediately turns into fist, the man is rolling down.

“Kuso!!” the man shouts.

“Well….well… I won’t dirt my hand on a small bug like you. Guys, It’s all yours.” Then he walks away and watches his friends fighting from the edge of field. Like he already knows, they will win for sure.

I decide to not get close to the field. And also, are we going to the same school? I am wearing that seifuku though. Masaka? I am attending a yankee school???

I walk away and reach my school as soon as possible. I arrive in front of the gate and hell yeah. The school looks so messy. There are some plastics on the field, the school is not like a school to me. It’s even worst than a school. What is it?? I walk in and head directly to the teacher room.

“Oh, tenkousei. Welcome to our school. I am Togasaki.” A bald man comes approaching me. Seems he is the duty teacher here.

“So you are…..” he forgets my name, huh?

“Maeda Jou. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!” I bow my head.

“Maeda-san, don’t be too formal! You are like girl.”

That was close! I think my true identity has been discovered.

“Whahaha what are you talking about? Me? Girl? No way~” I laugh nervously, try to hide it.

“Ah forget it. Let’s go to your new class.” He takes me to my class.

The corridor is so messy. It’s so dirty! I don’t think its called a school. It’s like a barn! Seriously! It stinks! I guess I can’t stay any longer here.

“Before the corridor has been cleaned, but because the students are too active, the corridor is like this. Hehe….” He laughs.

“When was it cleaned?”

“If I am not mistaken, it was about two years ago.”

WHAT THE FUC*! Two years ago? Geezz…. This school needs a change!

“Good morning!” he yells to the student, but he gets ignored. I look at all the students. Bad boys! Is he studying here? But I remember he wore this uniform when came to help me. But there is no signal of him here. I find my self disappointed. Maybe I get the wrong class to be attended. He probably is in the other class.

“I need your attention, we have one transferred student. Maeda-san introduce yourself.”

“Yo! My name is Maeda Jou. Yoroshiku.”

SIIIIING!! No one listening. Well, no problem.

“Haha…. They always be like that. Take your seat.”

“Err….where should I sit?”

“Ehm….wherever you want.”

I walk to the table near window, I put my bag on it and sit there. Everybody starts staring at me. Heee…….they recognize me? That’s good.

“Yoh…” I wave my hands at them. They look at me confused.

“He will probably dead now…”

“We will have another victim, right?”

“Bloody morning!”

“I will look forward for this!”

“I am going to use toilet!”

“I need to buy popcorn.”

“I lost my pen!”

“I left my cereal at home.”

“Elita is sure an idiot!”

Just what the hell are they saying? Dead? Who? Me? Why should I die? I am still young though. I keep staring at them curiously about what would be happening. Am I doing anything wrong? Mind to tell?

DRAAKKK!!! A door is slamming so hard. I see Togasaki doesn’t move, he looks scared.

“Kita….”

What? Who’s coming?

Everyone starts calming, quite. That is so big body, isn’t it? I mean the boy who just came in. He walks closer to me and stares at me with murder looking.

“HOW DARE YOU SIT ON MY SEAT!!” I close my eyes and my ears at the same time. Man, seriously his voice is breaking all my bones!

“Ow….is it your seat?”

“Yea! You have problem with that!” he grabs my collar.

“But…..but…..To…Togasaki told me I could sit everywhere I want~”

“No…no….no Takeshi! I….I didn’t say that, I swear!”

“Eh???” What the f*ck! He is teacher right? Why he should be afraid with this monster?! He is your student after all!

“See? That guy didn’t tell you sit on my PRECIOUS SEAT! YOU WANNA DIE HUH??” he grabs it tighter, I couldn’t breathe.

“E…..easy…..I…..I will…..move….uhuk!”

“But I am angry to you right now! I will break your bones! Break everything!!!”

Oh god…..what is my fault? Is it the end of my life? I have not even met him yet.

“No! Please…..I…..I beg your mercy~”

“I hate Mercy! Now taakeee this!!!!” He wants to land her BIG FIST on my face. I think it would break it easily. I just can close my eyes. Some seconds have been passed, I couldn’t feel any hurt on my face. Slowly I open my eyes. His fist is hanging on the air, well actually another hand is defending me.

“Could you please be quite in the morning?” the monster looks in fear. He pulls his fist and bows his head.

“I am very sorry, Riku-sama! I….I won’t make any noise anymore! I am sorry!”

“Ck….Just go.” The monster leaves like chicken. The guy called Riku-sama looks at me. “Are you new student?”

“Ah yes….” I say as I rub my neck. Geezzz its hurt. He stares at me and moves his head closer.

“Are you sure you are guy?”

“Ooo…..ye….yes of..course! 100%....”

“Hmm….. you look cuter, like girl.” He is crossing his hand in front of his chest as he looks at me confused.

“No way! I am a girl? Hahaha….” I laugh nervously and come back to sit. Oh god…not now, not now!

When I try to be calm, some boys are running to the window. I sit near window so I can just attach my head on it and look what happened outside there.

I widen my eyes as I see some groups of boys with other uniform are standing on the middle of field. Some of them are carrying baseball bats. Riku closes his head to the window as I can see it beside mine. So close, I try to act normal.

“Who….who are they?” I ask to him.

“Oh… They are from the other boy school. Actually our school is famous you know.”

“Famous?”

“Yep. Almost every day random boy school comes to us.”

“What for?”

“Can’t you see?” I look at them and yea I think I know. For a fight, right?

“Your school is hated by almost boy school. Am I right?”

“Honestly, it was begun 2 years ago when I was in 1st year. Or should I say, because of that guy.”

That guy? Who is it? Too many things happened this morning, I am so confused.

“Don’t you wanna know whom I mean?” he asks.

“Oh…yes…yes….” I nod.

“COME HERE YOU MOTHE*FU*K!!!” that’s screaming makes me turn to look at the groups down (My class is on the 3rd floor). I feel frightened! Why I should pass all of this? Why I can be here?

“Hey what’s happening?” a voice from the door. I look at him as I widen my eyes.

OMG! He was the one whom I met this morning! He is here? We are classmate? Oh no~

“Ah, Kuu…” Riku greets him. “See? Another groups are looking for him.” Riku says as he lets Kuu to look at them from window.

“Aaa…. Has he come?” Kuu asks.

“Hmm.. I think not yet.”

“Should I finish it?” Kuu is already making a fist on his hand. His eyes are so scary, full with murder looks. He smirks and then turns her body back as Riku stops him.

“Wait…. See that.” Kuu then comes to look through the window, me either. I can see two boys are walking together and passing those groups. And OMG! It’s him!! It’s him!!! Finally!! As I expected, he’s good looking. Finally I meet him. I can see the boy from that groups are shouting at them, but get ignored. He then blocks their way and pointing his bat on them.

“Does he wanna die? Fool.” Riku says. Kuu just smiles.

The person who stands next to my crush is grabbing the bat. Then quickly he kicks that boy’s stomach and he falls, his hand is holding it. He throws away the bat and looks at the boys group over there with fierce looking. They are stepping backward and too scared to attack. Then these two boys are continuing their pace to enter the building.

“He’s lucky he didn’t kill him.” Kuu says.

“Yea. Maybe he’s in good mood today…”Riku adds.

“Well excuse me…. Who is he?” I ask to Riku.

“Hey, who are you?” Kuu asks me when he realizes my existence.

“He’s new student Kuu. Be nice to him.”

“Nice to him?” Kuu stares at me. “Onna mitai~” he chuckles.

Why boy’s eyes are so trustful while girl’s eyes are not? This morning I got so many fans though!

“I am not a girl!!” I stand up from my seat.

“What? Have problem with it?” Kuu comes closer to me as I step back and look away. His face is close.

“Ma…ma….” Riku pulls his friend slowly. “…..his name is Maeda Jou. I think, he could not fight.”

They keep staring at me. “This is Kuu. I am Riku.”

“Call me Jou. Nice to meet you….” Riku smiles. “Err you have not answered me yet. Who is he?”

“Which one?” Kuu asks.

“Err…. The one who looks scary?”

“Oh, he’s…..” he doesn’t even finish his sentences that person just comes. “…..coming. Ohayou!” Riku greets him, he just leaves a small smile and sits on his seat.

“You mean him right?” I look at him. The one who looks so scary and looks so powerful. I think he is the gang leader here. Everyone looks pretty calm though. I nod.

“Well… He was whom I mean. This school changed because of him.”

“Eh?? Him? What happened?”

“His name is Takahashi Minami. He is so strong among of us, or the strongest in this school. And he loves looking for problem.” Kuu answers.

“Everyone scared of him, but 4 of us are going so well.”

“4 of us?” I ask.

“Me, Kuu, him, and the person who just come together with him.” My crush! I said happily inside.

“Who is his name? He is in this class?” I ask.

“Nope. He is in the other class. His name is Tomo.” Disappointed.

“Hoi Minami! We have new student here!!” He raises his head and comes closer to us. He looks at me with plain expression and fixes his short black hair (hair’s reference : Ikemen Gakuen).

“New toy.” He says. Eh? New toy?

“Hahahaha!! Here we go again!!” Kuu claps his hand cheerfully. Riku just smiles.

“I think…..he’s rich.”Minami shows her small smile.

“No…no…I am not rich. Wro…wrong person!” I form “X” sign in front of my chest with both of my hands.

“What?” he grabs my collar and looks at me closely. “Buy me coffee or you are going to die.” I nod and he releases his hand on me. I walk away and go to canteen.

Why I am here? Meet with dangerous boys, fighting, blood, teachers are not feared, students can do whatever they want, I don’t think I can be long here. But…. I have not met with him yet. Finally I can see him again after long time.

I have bought one can of coffee and go back to class, and suddenly I bump with someone, I fall.

“Ahh….so…”when I look up, its him. Uwaa so kakkoi from this close distance! His straight face, his sexy lips, and his dark brown hair makes him so cool! I stare at him so long as my heart is beating.

“When will you stop staring at me?” he breaks the silence. I shake my head.

“I…..I am sorry!” I bow my head. Then I come to look at him again.

“I never see you. New student?”

“Y….yes!” I answer cheerfully.

“Sou…” then he walks away. Kyaaa~ he’s so cool! Tomo~kun, why I can fall for you so bad? Compared to that Minami, you are more kind! But….. Minami is cool too. He is handsome though, his cool short black hair, and his mysterious expression will make girl fall for him. Eh?? What am I thinking about? Uh, stupid Minami!

Here I am in the classroom massaging this person’s back. He drinks the coffee that I bought for him. This person feels so relax and happy.

“Hey! Let your power out a bit!! I can’t feel it! Are you touching or massaging?”

“I am sorry….” I give my power on it and I think that’s too much.

“Itai!!” he turns around. “Are you trying to kill me?????” He stands up and looks straightly at me.

“You said so….”

“I don’t need your excuse! As your punishment, you have to treat me dinner!”

“Ehh?? But…but…”

“No buts! Or you wanna die?!”

“O-okay….” I look down. Geezz… is he trying to kill me slowly? I am so dead here! He is so different with Tomo. Tomo is away better than him! Even he’s the best! I remember he helped me from that gangster. Tomo is strong too, I wonder why Riku said Minami is the strongest in this school.

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He drags me to the nearer restaurant. Glad that he doesn’t invite his friends so I don’t need to pay more.

“We will have dinner here~” I look at that big restaurant.

“Eehh??? Here? But I don’t have much money….”

“So you are not going to treat me?” he looks at me with that looks again.

“I will…but can you find the other place? The small one?”

“No. I want to have my dinner here.” He walks in.

“Hoi! Don’t just decide it by yourself! Hoi!” I chase him up.

He is sitting on the table and I sit beside him. Oh god….. What was my dream last night? Why am I suffering? Meeting this guy instead Tomo.

I look at the menu as they are so EXPENSIVE! I think my parents will kill me if they know I have spent my money in buying this expensive meals. But I don’t have any choice!

“Uwaa I am full!” he says as he rubs his stomach. I am walking behind him as I look at my wallet. I sigh…

“What is that just now?” he asks me.

“Ehm…nothing.”

“You were sighing.”

“No! I was not.”

“You know what happened if you are lying.” He keeps walking. I pull out my tongue on him. Jerk.

In the middle of street, there are another groups of men. They are blocking our ways.

“What a coincidence we meet here.” The one who is wearing glasses says. I hide myself behind Minami’s back.

“Ck…what is it? I am not in mood today, so go home…” Minami says and he takes another steps. Other man blocks him.

“Who do you think you are! This morning you beat my cousin!”

“Oh….you are his uncle?” Minami then chuckles. “Don’t joke around.”

“Huh? You dare to laugh at me? You will regret it, young boy! Take him down!” the other men are making circle and surrounding us. I am in such fear, would I die here? I don’t see a way for me to escape. I can’t fight! I am girl though!

And then a man is moving toward Minami and trying to punch him. Minami dodges nicely and lands a kick on to his stomach. Down.

Another is coming and trying to grab Minami’s hand but quickly he moves aside and punches right at his nose. Down.

I widen my eyes as the man in front of me wants to kick my head, I just can close my eyes. Not long I feel my body is being pulled, and that man has been down because of Minami’s spinning kick.

“Careful there. Just find a place to hide. Hurry!” he shouts at me, I nod. Then I run to that barrier and hide behind it. I watch Minami’s fight. I think Riku is right. Minami is so strong. He can take down 5 persons in some minutes. Now is one by one between him and that uncle.

“You sure are strong.” That uncle smiles.

“Am I? I guess…. That because they are so weak.”

“Wahahahaha nice young boy! But big mistake if you underestimate me! Take this!” He runs faster to Minami and lands a kick on to his head, Minami can dodge. Unexpected, this uncle can move faster and he gives another kick to Minami’s leg. He is losing his balance, and he might fall. The uncle makes fist on his hand and want to punch Minami’s face. I cover my eyes coz I know its too late for Minami to dodge, and yes…..He is punched by him. Blood comes from his lips as he wipes it.

“How the taste? Huahahahaha!”

“I can feel nothing.” Minami still shows him his wide smile.

“Oh yeah??” he begins his next move and tries to punch Minami’s chest, and Minami can defend himself. Quickly he grabs that uncle’s arm and kicks his leg. When he is in pain, Minami lands a super heavy kick on to his face, he rolls to the side of the wall… Down.

I am impressed with his strength. He is really strong….and looking so cool. My heart starts to beat as I see the victorious Minami there. That blood comes out from his lips really make him looking cool. The way he fixes his hair is cool too… And then he walks to me. He grabs my hand, pulling me out from that barrier.

“Are you okay?” he asks me.

“Y…yes.” I stutter. I feel the way he talks is different. He is lower his tone and sounded full in care…

“I am sorry, I drag you into this mess… Though I know you can’t fight.”

“Ah… no need to say sorry. I am okay….but….your lips….” Automatically I touch it. It’s stunning. I forget that I am not a girl right now. I am boy! What will he feel when a boy touches another boy’s lips? Disgusting right? I can see his eyes are looking at me but looking so confused. Quickly I pull my hand off him, and smile nervously.

“Here…..use this.” I take tissue out from my bag and give it to him. He says thanks and begins to clean it right away.

The only thing I can’t understand is, why my heart is beating so fast? It’s Minami though, he is not Tomo. It keeps beating whenever I see his face. Why Why?? I hope I am not blushing now or else my fake identity will be discovered.

~Let's meet again in the 2nd part/Last part~

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 1) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #103 on: November 24, 2011, 12:38:36 PM »
 :w00t: OMG!!! I LOVE this!!!! :inlove:
Waa~~ :heart: Minami so kakkoi!!!!! :wub: :inlove:
 :panic: No! Acchan loves Tomo... :( But she is getting attracted to Minami XD

Please Update more about this :bow:
I want to know about what will happen later :twothumbs
Please Update Soon :peace:

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 1) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #104 on: November 24, 2011, 12:41:27 PM »
 :w00t: Thank you so much for updating this!!!!!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs

Minami so kakkoi!!!!!!!! :wub: :inlove:
Acchan is starting to fall for Minami :wub:
I hope Tomo won't fall for Acchan... It will make things complicated :(

I wonder what did Minami do to change the school :? By picking fights with others???

I am really curious about what will happen next XD
Please Update Soon~~~ :thumbsup

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 1) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #105 on: November 24, 2011, 12:54:45 PM »
Moe-chan!!!!! I need the second part!!!!  :frustrated: Gimme the next part!!!! Do you HEAR me!!!!  :mon blowhorn: I need the next part!!!!!!  :mon headbang:   Don't you dare lost your motivation when I do!!!  :mon slapself: wake up!!!!   :mon spit:    and UPDATE!!!! :on kimbo:

why do you even ask!!!  :on yellcard: Of course I want the next update!!!!  :tantrum: Now go and finish it!!!  :on redcard:

I'll just wait for you to update~~  :on drink:  gud luck writing it... moe-chan~~  :byebye: and here..  :gmon flowers: a little appreciation for you~~  :on beatup
« Last Edit: November 25, 2011, 08:04:41 AM by Flean »

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 1) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #106 on: November 24, 2011, 02:37:06 PM »
you MUST continue this, moe-san...  :mon wtfmm:
i like it. i like it. i like it...!  :cow:
you know what? i just re-watching hanakimi 2011 from the 1st episode right now.. and i feel like my imagination gone wild while reading your fic...  :lol:

please continue this~  :kneelbow:

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 1) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #107 on: November 24, 2011, 06:39:35 PM »
WE NEED THE NEXT PART! :on comhere:

Motivation eh? Ganbatte! I want you to continue...please?
It's like boys over flowers/majisuka gakuen(only boys)/Hana Kimi...so coooool!

Please continue!  :bow:
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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 1) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #108 on: November 24, 2011, 07:44:43 PM »
It's like a mix between crow zero and hana kimi? Because I like it!!!! So, update please!!!!!

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 1) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #109 on: November 25, 2011, 02:58:37 AM »
MOEEEEEEEEEEEEECHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN~

UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS~~~~~  :tantrum: :tantrum: :tantrum: :tantrum: :tantrum: :tantrum:

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 1) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #110 on: November 25, 2011, 03:29:59 AM »
i need the next chapter nowwwwwwww~

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 1) Update Nov 24th
« Reply #111 on: November 25, 2011, 07:07:30 AM »
jajajaj acchan we know you fall for minami :D he is so kakkoi :D ne?

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 2) Update Nov 26th
« Reply #112 on: November 26, 2011, 01:36:19 AM »
@kahem :  :nya: how could you know? haha before writing this fic, I watched Crowz Zero  :wahaha:

Yeyy yeyy update from me!!  :hiakhiakhiak: it's weird  :scared: I don't even know what I have written, duh  :frustrated:
ok, enjoy...

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The Real You
Last Part

“I won’t give you any money.”

“Ehh??” I approach my dad and sit beside him on the couch. “But…. I don’t have any money left for this month. Are you going to kill me?”

“You have spent your money for this month in a day. How come dad will give you more? It’s you who try killing your dad.” He continues reading his newspaper.

“But dad…….”

“No but. I have to teach you its so hard earning some money. Dad even don’t know for what you spent your money.”

I can’t say that I have treated Minami to very expensive meals. Dad will probably kill me and won’t let me come to that school anymore.

I pout and stand up as I see my mother is standing not far from here. And then I approach her as she is the only I can ask for a help.

“Don’t even try asking your mom.” Dad looks away from his newspaper and looks at both of us. “If dad knows you ask for money, dad won’t give you money anymore. You earn your own money.”

“Daad… You are so mean….”

“It’s okay honey. Mom will always cook for your breakfast and make bento for lunch, so you don’t need to buy foods outside.”

I nod. At least I won’t die from starving. My mother is so kind. But…. I can’t buy anything in this whole month. Minami’s fault!

I am in my room as I keep thinking about Minami because of yesterday’s incident. Is he okay now? I want to text him, but I don’t know his number. Better to look something for him then. I reach my pocket, okay there is some money left. I think its enough for buying some fresh fruits. I go out and head to the store. I am not wearing any boys outfit except for school.

On my way home, I find a place that needs waitress. I walk closely to the place, and the salary is quite big. Big chance, I thought. A wide smile appears on my face. Then I take a look to the restaurant, and its not a restaurant, but a maid café. Eehh?? So it means I have to wear cat ears and cat tail? Wooott?? Really?? It makes me confused, hard to choose. Then I look again at the pamphlet attached there. OMG, the salary is quite big. I will regret it if I miss this chance. I can earn my own money to fulfill my needs for this month, even after. I decide to go in as I meet the owner there. Luckily, I can work tomorrow evening. Baito~baito!!

In the next morning, no lessons as usual. We just sit on our seats and chat about girls, fights, and another dirty things.

“Minami…..are you okay?” I ask him.

“Can you see?” he doesn’t even look at me.

“Well……” I take out the fruits that I’ve bought yesterday for him. “….here, take this.”

“Wow….” Kuu’s eyes are sparkling.

“What for?” he asks.

“Er….just want to give it to you.”

“I don’t need that.”

“Let me have it!!” Kuu forcibly takes it from me. I just can see my fruits are eaten by him. He even gives it a half to Riku.

“Heh….give me coffee, quick!” he orders me.

“But sorry… I don’t have any money left.”

“What??” he stares at me with fierce looking. “You wanna die?”

“I am really sorry, really really sorry. Because I treated you yesterday, I don’t have money left.”

“Ck…didn’t you ask your parents for money?”

“I did, but my dad didn’t give me.” He then throws his money on my face.

“Use that.” I pout and take the money. I walk away to the canteen.

On my way to the class, I see Tomo. He is watering the flowers there. Heee…. I think Suzuran’s students are that scary like Minami, but there is one student who has angel’s heart like him. Sasuga… Look, he even smiles while watering it. I approach him.

“You like flower?” he looks at me and smiles.

“Yea. They are beautiful.”

“Ehm… My name is Jou, you are Tomo right?”

“Am I that famous?”

“Hmm…Maybe.” I chuckle. “…..hmm…why do you attend this school?” he looks at me.

“Why do you ask?”

“Because it’s so rare student like you is studying here.”

“Why you judge somebody from the outside?” he asks.

“Errr…. I can feel it. You love flower and also you don’t fight like the other, and….you are smart. You should attend Higashi High instead….” I can’t tell him if he once helped me from gangster. He will know I am not a boy.

“I attended this school because of Minami. His words are my orders, his vision is mine too.” He answers and smiling. Eh?? Don’t tell me…..you are…..H?? “It’s not because I like him as a boy, no. It just……he always helps me whenever I need help. We are together since child.” Kinda relieved hearing it. Then his phone is ringing. He excuses himself to answer it.

“Hello, Tomomi? Oh yes, sorry I forget. Okay, after school, key? Yea… Miss you too….”

Wait….wait… ‘Miss you too’? Is that his……..girlfriend? Tomo has girlfriend???

“Sorry I have to go….” I stop him by calling him.

“Your…..girlfriend?” he nods. I am pausing so long and he thinks there is nothing I can say so that he leaves.

I can’t think. I lose my mind. I walk with empty mind to the class. He’s already waiting for me in corridor.

“Hoi! What took you so long!” he stands in front of me.

“So….sorry Minami….I….I….need to use toilet so….”

“Don’t lie! I know you are lying!!”

He has sixth sense?? “You met Tomo right? What business do you have with him?”

“We…well….I just want to greet him….”

“Greet? Are you his friend??”

“Am I wrong greeting him?”

“Yes! It’s all wrong!! You can meet him when I order you to do so!”

“Hey! Who are you btw? My parent? No! How dare you make me as your slave?! You think you tough? Huh…”

“You!!” he points to my face. Then I sweep his hand away.

“Don’t try to point your fingers on my face!!” I can hear my voice is higher than before. I guess I can’t hold it anymore. I think I will leave this school. Tomo has girlfriend, nothing can make me stay here though. Free! Time to be free!! I walk away and leave him there…. I go back to my class and take my bag.

“Hey, where are you going?” ask Riku.

“Home.”

“Have you met Minami there?” Kuu asks.

“Yea….Later guys.” I walk away then I just pass Minami there… Ughh, I really hate him!

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Today I am at Maid Café for my part job. My boss asks me to wear long wig as each maid wears it too. So yeah I don’t have any choice beside wearing it. I am totally a cat! I also put megane on. When I serve all the customers, I feel most of their eyes are looking at me. Little bit embarrassed though. My first time wearing this costume but I have to be confident.

“Okaerinasai, goshujinsama….” That’s the way how I greet each of customers. I seat them to the empty seat and take the order.

“Kawaii yoo….” An old man says to me. I just can smile and say ‘arigatoo’. Even granny who’s coming saying I’m cute too… I think I feel better when I wear girl’s stuff rather than boys. Huff… Everyday is being bullied by Minami. Ah, speaking of him…. I wonder what he is doing right now. I feel little bit uneasy with my feeling. I was shouting at him like that. He’s probably mad at me. Ehh?? Why am I thinking about him? No…no…no….Focus to your job, Acchan!

I come home late at night. My dad is so angry to me. Well, I have not told him I have baito, while telling him about it, he hardly accepts it first, but my mom ensures him and finally he accepts. I take bath and then head to my bedroom. Should I come to school tomorrow? I think… I don’t need to. I have to prepare my document to move to girl school.

Tomorrow morning…

Today I don’t go to school. My parents ask me why, and I tell them I want to take some rests. They are so kind today as they are not mad at me. Haha… Love you mom n dad!

I spend my time watching tv to kill the time. And now I have to go to work~

Arriving there, my boss asks all of us to dress up as a host. Geehh?? It means, I have to wear boy’s attire again. Okay. It’s all about money, so I have to do it.

I am looking so cool! Every maids here is saying me cool… “Maeda-san, kakkoi~” Well, well… When I am a girl, I am cute. When I am a boy, I am cool. Wow….I’m so great!

I serve mostly women today. My boss has attached the announcement in front of the café that today’s theme is host club, so that all come here are women, but there are also some men coming.

“You are better with your cat outfits, Ako-chan…”the same person says that to me again. I nod and smile. To tell you, here in maid café, we have to hide our true identity, I mean our real name to avoid something that we don’t want. When I walk to the door as I can see there is costumer who is coming, jaw dropping. He is coming, Minami is. He looks at me and I think he is also surprised seeing me here.

“Working here?? Maid café??”

I can’t answer his question as I quickly seat him to the empty table.

“Well, what would you like to order please?” I force myself to smile. I feel uncomfortable because he will know my true identity! I know I don’t have anything to fear about since I am not going to that school anymore. But thinking that he will know I lied to him, he will hate me more and more. Even if he knows that I am doing that because of Tomo. He is going to kill me I think.

“Give me orange juice, Maid-sama….” He smirks. Uggh…. Okay, I have to be calm now. I note his order and give it to the kitchen. Not long I come out and give him his orange juice. Then I leave him because I have the other customer to be served.

He is still sitting there while his eyes are looking at me. I don’t look at him directly but I can feel it. Why is he looking at me all the time? Has he found about my identity? Not this time!! Once I see him, he is so friendly with the other maids who come to approach her. I pout. Yea I know he is cool, he’s handsome, every girls might fall for him though. But I don’t like his smile! He doesn’t even smile to me like that though. Oh, damn! I forget that I am a ‘boy’. Of course he never shows his smile to a boy. Then not long after, he left. Fiuh… somehow I feel relieve. This time we have to close. And before went home, I wanna know why the maids here are so looking so friendly to him.

“Ano…..Moe-chan…” I call one of the maid, she turns around. “Do you know that student? I mean…..the handsome one with shirt black hair?”

“Minami-kun? Yes of course… His girlfriend, Ray used to work here. But just quit some months ago, why?”

Ehh??? Girlfriend?? Why I always hear girlfriend’s words these days? Now is Minami’s? He has girlfriend?

“Nothing. Thanks…” I walk out from the locker room. I don’t understand my heart hurt. I feel hard to breathe, my leg feels so weak. Why I feel like this? I like him? No…no…it must not be like that. No way I could like him….Yea maybe I am just too shocked because person like him has girlfriend.

On the way home the street is quite dark as I walk faster. In front of me I see a figure is standing like blocking my way. His face is familiar, oh yes… That man in the café.

“Akoo~chan….” He smiles to me. Oo… I smell trouble here. I ignore him as I walk by his side but he blocks my way again. “Where are you going, Ako-chan??”

“I’m going home. Let me through.” But still I can’t pass him.

“Don’t be so fuss. Let me take you to the other place~ Let’s play together.” He pulls my hand but I defend myself. I pull my hands back but he is too strong. “Just come with me…You’ll be okay~”

“Yada~ Let off me!” he doesn’t loosen his hands on me. He keeps trying to drag me and follow him. Like losing in my mind, I call….. “Minami, help me!!!”

“What? Who’s Minami?” DAKKK!! Suddenly the man falls down. He is holding his head.

“I am Minami. You are looking for me?” The man stands up and looks at Minami. I’m surprised he is coming!

“Ughh…I will call police! How dare you kick my head~”

“I have recorded what you have done some seconds ago. You wanna call police? Go ahead.” The man’s body is shaking as he runs away. The situation between us are so awkward. Then he is the one who talk.

“I’m sorry for saying that things to you at school….” I shake my head. “Why….why you didn’t come to school? I…..I worried you!!” Eh?? Minami is worried about me? Really? “Do you need money that bad so you work as maid?”

“Did you remember because of whom I have to take part time job?” He is quite.

“Well….I’m sorry. I don’t mean to….I will pay you back.”

“No need. The salary is big though…”

“Still mad at me?” he asks. It’s my first time seeing him like this. Hehe…he’s funny.

“No….I guess…” We pause for some minutes. “Well…..See you tomorrow at school.” I smile to him, he replies my smile.

I have taken a bath and now I am going to sleep.

“Uwaa I am so tired!” I jump on to my bed. I am thinking about Minami again. He looks cute with that expression. I don’t know Minami really cares about his friend. And wait? He doesn’t know about my identity right?? I guess he doesn’t know about it. While thinking about him, I always smile to myself like crazy people.

“Ohayou!” I greet Kuu and Riku.

“Hey, where have you been??”

“Nowhere. Hehe….” I guess, Minami has not come yet. Not long he is coming and our eyes meet.

“O….ohayou…” I greet him first.

“Owh…..ohayou…” he looks away and walks to his seat.

“Are….are….what happened to you two?” Kuu smirks.

“Nothing and don’t start!” Minami says as Kuu just leaves a smile. My heart goes to beat again. Different beat I got this time. My head is hot, all parts of my body feel hot, as I feel my face is redder. Oh, god….do I like him?

“You know, this guy is working at Maid Café!” Minami tells Kuu and Riku. They are laughing. Hey! You don’t need to tell them!!

“Oh really?? And why do you know?” asks Riku.

“Yesterday I came to A~La~ve Maid Café.”

“A~La~ve? You mean…..” Kuu hangs the sentence.

“Yup….Ray’s ex work place.” DEG. When I heard Ray’s name my heart is beating even faster. I wonder is she really Minami’s girlfriend or not.

“Why did you go there?”

“Hang out….”

“Don’t tell me you still can’t forget about her…” suddenly Minami looks at me and I quickly move my head and avoid his eyes. What a strange movement. Strange!!

“No… I even forgot that place was her ex work one.” He smiles.

Forgot who? Ray? What do you mean by forgetting her? Is she your ex or your girlfriend? Urghhh!! Can’t calm if I don’t know the truth!!

Time to part time job. I still even don’t know about Minami and Ray’s relationship. Arrghh! I can’t concentrate!! Today we back to the usual theme, Cat. I wear my long wig, cat ears, and tail. I serve the costumer and I don’t see that Ojiichan anymore. I guess he won’t come here again.

“Okaerinasai….goshuji….” I stop my sentence as I these two are coming. Why they should come right now when I am wearing this girlies stuff?? Both of them jaw drop.

“Ka….kawaii…” the dark brown one says as he is drooling. Then the other punch his back and make him back to the real world.

“No time for that…. We have to hear this person’s explanation.” Both of them are looking at me like searching for an answer. Then I drag them both to the back.

“I am sorry!” I bow to them. They don’t show any respond.

“Why are you lying to us?” Riku asks. “You are a girl!”

“And cute too!! Damn it!!” Kuu asks.

“Long story, but I don’t mean something bad.”

“Well… We don’t need your long story though. It just…..we are surprised.” I stay quite.

“Minami knows this?”

“Ah please don’t tell him! Please….”

“You like him?” Riku asks me directly. I look away can’t see his eyes. I am afraid to answer it. “Just say it you like him already. I know you disguised yourself for following him right?”

“No that was not true! I didn’t like him…..but….” I bite my lower lips. Kuu is continue drooling.

“But?”

“But now I do….Please don’t tell him!” Riku is sighing. “What’s wrong?”

“What around Minami is something that so dangerous. You know it right? He also had experienced once with a girl, but failed. He decided to give up on girl..”

“Eh? What do you mean?”

“He loves fighting since junior high. He had girlfriend named Ray. She worked here before as maid also. Minami has so many enemies and one of them kidnapped Ray. They made her suffered and Minami too. And after that, Ray left Minami and married with one of them. Minami never fall in love again with the other girl… He doesn’t want that thing happened for the 2nd time. He passed the days so hard.”

Is that so? So it means….impossible for me to get close to him right? Well… I know its late but I realize my feeling to him is more than just a like. But… I don’t want him to suffer. Should I give up too?

“Riku…. I think tomorrow I won’t come to school anymore. Please take care of Minami…” He nods.

“You don’t need to worry.”

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Somehow I lose my motivation. This big salary thing is not attracting anymore. I look up to the sky as I see a lot of starts and a moon. “Aitai….” I really want to meet him right now. Hearing that story, I know he was so lonely back then. I don’t mind if I have to dress up as boy at least I can be with him everyday. My step is so heavy, I don’t have any idea what is around me. I keep walking and walking… Until I am being grabbed by someone I don’t know. I try to defend myself but he’s too strong, then…..I lose consciousness.
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I slowly open my eyes and I see a lot of people are standing around me. They are laughing at me. I can’t move as I got roped.

“Well….well….we have Minami’s girlfriend here… Quite pretty~” Minami? They must be Minami’s enemies.

“You got the wrong person! I am not Minami’s girlfriend!” I shout at them.

“Stupid girl. Like I will trust you?! Haha…”

“We have sent Minami’s email. We even sent your picture to him as a proof, so that he will come and save you!”

“You will wait for nothing! Minami won’t come!! He is not my boyfriend!!” SLAP! Got slapped by him.

“Just be quite. If he won’t come, we will kill you instead. Bwahahahaha!”

“DON’T  DARE  TO  TOUCH  HER ANYMORE!!” Everybody starts looking at the door, and Minami is there. His hand is dragging a body that has taken down by him outside. He leaves the body there and comes approaches us. “What the fu*k! Let her go!! She doesn’t have anything to do with you!”

“Oh yes she does! She is your girlfriend, right?” I shake my head while Minami is looking at me.

“What do you mean?”

“Put your hands up!!” Minami does what he orders him to. “Now, SIT!” Minami follows his order.

“You….you….and you…get him.” Three of them are carrying bats and starting attacking him with it. I am crying seeing those scene. Blood come from his head and his mouth. Why does he do that for me? Should he be mad instead?? And also… you are strong Minami! Why you don’t attack them back?

Minami falls as 3 of men there are looking so tired while attacking him. Minami then tries to stand up and looks at me.

“Are……are…..you okay?” he asks. I nod while I am still crying.

“Why you come? Idiot!” I shout at him. He just smiles.

“Just kill him already!!” a voice comes from not far from there. I see that last old man who got beaten by Minami. I think he is the one who hires these people. 3 of them are back attacking Minami. Finally he falls down and can’t stand anymore.

“Fufufu…. Let me kill you first young boy. And next…. I will enjoy your girl friend. Mwahahaha!!” he takes out a knife and ready to stab Minami any time he wants.

“Please…..please don’t kill him sir! Please please!! I will do anything for you, but please don’t kill him…Please….” Tears fall as I keep begging him. I can’t lose him here right now. But seems like he doesn’t hear me and he is just ready to stab him.

“Not that FAST!!” from his back someone is appearing. He grabs the man collar and gives a big fist right on his face. He falls. That person sits on the man body as he keeps punching his face, so brutal. The other 3 people just got beaten there. Those are the familiar people.

“Are you okay?” Riku releases the rope while Kuu is helping Minami.

“You can’t run!!” Tomo gets up from that body and chases that uncle and kicks his leg. He falls. Tomo breaks his leg as he can’t move, then he calls police.

“Minami….Minami!! Wake up!!” I call his name to wake him up but he has lost his consciousness.

“Take him to hospital. I have called ambulance.” Said Tomo.

I decide to accompany Minami until he wakes up. I have told my parents so that they won’t be worried me. Riku, Kuu, and Tomo are going home as tomorrow morning they will come back. Tears can’t stop falling as I see the person I love is this weak. So much bruises on his face, and I can’t see it. Suddenly I feel my hand is being held by him. I look at him as he has opened his eyes.

“Minami!! Minami!! Are you okay there??” he smiles.

“Glad you are okay…”he responds.

“Why did you come? You almost got killed because of me!!”

“If I didn’t come, who would come and help you?” his voice sounds so weak. He wipes my tears away.

“You are not mad at me? I…..lied to you…..”

“No…. I knew it from beginning.” I widen my eyes. What?? “Did you remember the time when Tomo helped you? I was there… That time you were crying so much. I always look at you, and started falling for you…” he stops then continue again. “When I know you were coming to Suzuran I was shocked. I know you were in disguise…. I guessed you came there to get close to Tomo. So……that day I was mad at you when you met Tomo…” Oh….so that he was so mad at me. Makes sense.

“You always bully me though.”

“Haha… I think play with you is so fun……… I am sorry….” I pout to him. “Then?”

“Then what??”

“Your answer?”

“My answer??”

“You have not given me any answer yet. I just confessed remember?” Oh yes…he’s right.

“Well…. It’s all your faults I fall for you.”

“Oh really??” he smiles and I nod. “Yataa~ Auch~” he touches his lips.

“Careful you! Uhh….” I rub his lips. “Still hurt?” I ask. He shakes his head.

“Would you mind telling me your true name?” he asks.

“Maeda Atsuko….”

“Beautiful name…” I blush. He moves his hand on to my cheek. “Atsuko…..I love you.” I smile to him as I reply it, “I love you too, Minami…”

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Minami’s condition is getting much much better now. The doctor surprised as Minami cured pretty fast. He’s strong doc. I help him to pack and accompany him to back to his apartment. He sits on the couch as he waves his hand as ‘come here’ sign. I come and next to him. Suddenly he hugs me.

“Huaa finally I can hug you~” he rests his chin on my shoulder. I smile as I hug him back.

“Want me to cook something?” I ask and he releases his hug.

“No… I need you…” he then presses his lips on mine. So soft and so slowly. I reply his kiss, so simple and short.

“Your first time?” he teases me. I give him a small fist on his chest. “Hehe…. I will enjoy it.” He comes back to kiss me but this one is rough one. He kisses me like crazy. Although its rough one, but I feel so addicted to it. I want more~ He sucks my upper lips and let his tongue inside my mouth and it starts to explore inside. He back sucks my lower lips as his hand is unbuttoning my shirt. He kisses my neck and one of his hand is going wild on my chest….  I put my left hand on his waist while the other is pulling him closer. He’s going wilder and he kisses me like insane. He gropes my breast gently and I moan softly….. I guess my voice hypnotizes him, he wants to hear it more and more… He marks my neck and I let a small moan out… He continues doing that until he is satisfied, or never be? He slowly pulls pull himself off and stares at me.

“Honestly I want more than this…. Coz now you look so pretty and sexy….” I am blushing. “We will do more than this after we graduate from senior high. Right after that I will meet your parents, I will propose you.” I am so happy hearing it. I nod and show him a wide happy smile on my face.

“Huuhh….” He sighs. “It means I have to hold myself until then. But….don’t you think you will be safe….I won’t promise you….” He smirks. I land a small fist on his arm.

“Hentai~” then he kisses my lips once agan,

“But….you love me right…”

“Yea… I do….”

“I love you too….” we start another kiss.

FIN~

~ Okay… Maybe some of you will ask about it, how Tomo, Riku, and Kuu found Atsuko and Minami. Let’s go back to where Atsuko was being kidnapped. When that incident happened, coincidentally Moe-chan was around but in a distance. She saw it and felt in fear to ask for a help. She remembered he saved Kuu’s number (Kuu always flirts the girls in the maid café when Ray was still there. All maids had his number). She explained everything to him. Kuu called Riku and Tomo and he told everything to Tomo to make him understand the situation, Jou is actually a girl. When they wanted to reach Minami by phone, he didn’t pick it up. Maybe Minami had known it and saved Atsuko by himself without telling his friends. ~


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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 2) Update Nov 26th
« Reply #113 on: November 26, 2011, 01:40:17 AM »
Yeay!!!! Moe-chan~~~ I'm so happy~~  :nya: and like always the ending makes me, Gah!!!!  :ptam-shy:

Okay… Maybe some of you will ask about it, how Tomo, Riku, and Kuu found Atsuko and Minami. Let’s go back to where Atsuko was being kidnapped. When that incident happened, coincidentally Moe-chan was around but in a distance. She saw it and felt in fear to ask for a help.
LOL... I was laughing because of this...  :wahaha:
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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 2) Update Nov 26th
« Reply #114 on: November 26, 2011, 03:29:13 AM »
So sweet Minami finally. He love atsuko. Yay

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 2) Update Nov 26th
« Reply #115 on: November 26, 2011, 05:46:19 AM »
Oh~ It was so good!!! :wub: :inlove:
Minami and Acchan :heart:

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 2) Update Nov 26th
« Reply #116 on: November 26, 2011, 05:51:42 AM »
Yea!!! Part 2!!!! :w00t:

I hate those guys who kidnap Atsuko :angry:
But thank god Minami came and save her :wub:
Thanks to Riku, Kuu and Tomo too XD

Yea!! Finally Minami confessed to Acchan~ :inlove:

It's so good!!!! :twothumbs
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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 2) Update Nov 26th
« Reply #117 on: November 26, 2011, 07:08:12 AM »
many things happen wow atsumina its so cool :D

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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 2) Update Nov 26th
« Reply #118 on: November 26, 2011, 03:24:57 PM »
Moe-chan~ as usual I always like your fic
Heroic rescue Minami came and save Atsuko! YA YA YA~~


~ Okay… Maybe some of you will ask about it, how Tomo, Riku, and Kuu found Atsuko and Minami. Let’s go back to where Atsuko was being kidnapped. When that incident happened, coincidentally Moe-chan was around but in a distance. She saw it and felt in fear to ask for a help. She remembered he saved Kuu’s number (Kuu always flirts the girls in the maid café when Ray was still there. All maids had his number). She explained everything to him. Kuu called Riku and Tomo and he told everything to Tomo to make him understand the situation, Jou is actually a girl. When they wanted to reach Minami by phone, he didn’t pick it up. Maybe Minami had known it and saved Atsuko by himself without telling his friends. ~
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Re: Moe's One~Shot Collections (The Real You~Part 2) Update Nov 26th
« Reply #119 on: November 26, 2011, 08:53:38 PM »
Yessss update!

That was really good!

Thank you!
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