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oist · « **Reply #80 on:** December 18, 2011, 05:27:03 AM »

The whole time I was reading this, it felt like Yuko is already dead, or in veggie state, or something along those lines (but she turned out to be fine and living, though I cant be too sure about that). Warning signals popped up all over my head and it was screaming 'BAD END BAD END' since the first paragraph. Hey, 8am isn't all that early imo, so there must be something wrong. Also that moment when Kojima's co-worker asked about Yuko and there was a break in her dialogue with an ellipsis, darn!

Maybe I'm just paranoid, but I'm keeping my guard up for this one.

I didn't take part in the poll.

Sorry. Will try to be more active in the boards.

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #81 on:** December 18, 2011, 08:01:42 AM »

Thanks for all the comments so far! I'm working on Chapter 2, so please look forward to that m(_ _)m

@oist: Okay... out of all the theories so far... yours is by far the most... out there LOL As interesting as that kind of story would be, I think I kind of already pulled that with 'Lips of an Angel' in a way, so no, it's definitely not like that xD Very interesting idea though LOL
As to what's really going to happen... stay tuned to see 8D
Also, feel free to fill out the poll anytime x3

Thanks for all the comments again, everybody! ; v ; b

immortal_K · « **Reply #82 on:** December 18, 2011, 09:57:27 AM »

AHHHHHH What have I been missing for being MiA'ing due to work LOL

THanks Div for another awesome story here, please don't hesitate to write more

So many different KojiYuu moments, that all connects together. I'll be looking forward to reading
Chapter 2. As usual there is no problem with the writing aspect of it, totally love the way you
write and I'm sure you are aware since I think I say that every time. Majidayo! LOL

It seem's like Haruna is a very busy designer and has very little time for Yuko, I'm sure it
will eventually cause a riff in their relationship but I hope it would just be something minor. The
way that Haruna replied Akane, there just seems to be something off about it.

Hmm Sayaka as a traffic police? in leather and travels around on motorcycle with Sae maybe HAHA
that would look pretty cool for both of them. I also wonder who is that girl that just walked out of the
elevator while texting, wonder if she is anyone significant.

The way you added time to it, made it feel like the scenes are playing straight out of a diary but in
moving visuals with dialogues instead of just a one POV diary entry. The last time I heard something
with the title "in Heaven" the results ended up with one of the lead dead by car accident.... I hope this
won't be the case but I don't mind some heart wrenching scenes and endings either. I think it makes
a story more interesting when things goes unexpected and unpredictable.

Thanks for the KojiYuu, haven't read one in a while... actually haven't had time to read all week as
life here at work is a bit busy and I've been pretty much working daily so don't be sad if you don't
see my long crazy replies right away. I won't abandon your amazing stories, I've just haven't
gotten a chance to attach myself to a computer

imo_k

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #83 on:** December 22, 2011, 04:11:00 AM »

In Heaven

Part I: Love Song

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Chapter 2
(Posted 12/22/11)

Warning: Unregulated amount of clichés, boredom, and BS ahead.

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A/N: I sincerely apologize if this chapter was just… complete crap OTL ~~This is why I should stop trying to write at 5 AM~~.
I assure you, holes of confusion will (most likely) be filled in later on ; v ; b Thank you for donating your time and reading this ;__;

Thanks as always for all of your warm comments and support, and I hope you can stay tuned for the next update ; v ; /

Haruko · « **Reply #84 on:** December 22, 2011, 04:55:23 AM »

aww kojiyuu.. i hate a little haruna.. yuuchan do everything for her, waiting for her, understanding all the hard work but haruna doesn`t do anything.

aww what are yo doing with my kojiyuu... awww make them happy and time for do their business couple

Kid_Alpha · « **Reply #85 on:** December 22, 2011, 05:45:36 AM »

Prediction: They're gonna break up.

I think me being sick is having me think of depressing outcomes lol

Nyanoha · « **Reply #86 on:** December 22, 2011, 06:09:29 AM »

I waaaaant. Neeeeeext. Chaaaaaaapterrrrr.....sooooo. Huuuuurry. Yooooooour Liooooooon. Buuuuutt. ;_____________________________________;//////////////

Das why I comment again, dat is al-*is shot*

haruhi16 · « **Reply #87 on:** December 22, 2011, 06:15:33 AM »

What is she doing!! Yuko is putting so much effort just to be with her and she just don't give a little time to spend with her girlfriend!! what kind of girlfriend is that?!?!?! I HATE YOU HARUNAAAAAA!!! >:-( DON'T HURT YUKOOOOOO!! ;_______; omg my heart ;__;

oist · « **Reply #88 on:** December 22, 2011, 07:58:34 AM »

They're going to break up, they're going to break up! (stupid Haruna) At this rate Yuko's going to be finding a new girlfriend soon... Oh well.

At least it doesn't seem like anyone is going to die or is already dead, which is a good thing, ofcourse. And you're going to get them back together afterwards right? RIGHT??!??!?!

kahem · « **Reply #89 on:** December 22, 2011, 08:27:07 AM »

Kojiharu don't hurt Yuko!!!

luckymmsg · « **Reply #90 on:** December 22, 2011, 09:40:13 AM »

Quote

“How am I supposed to tell Yuuchan…?” she quietly murmured to herself.

Oh please, Haruna please dun hurt Yuko.
I won't mind you be tsundere to her..
This line make me sad.

immortal_K · « **Reply #91 on:** December 22, 2011, 02:20:29 PM »

YAY Another update =D, initially saw this first on tumblr under your new name and I almost... just almost
didn't know it was you but the title of your fanfic gave you away keke.

Hmmm what can I say about this chapter other then it is triggering red lights all over signalling danger ahead,
please proceed with cautions. LOL Sigh Haruna is really working too hard, I know she is trying to do her
best with her career but it really shouldn't be on the expense of your love ones. I personally know a couple
that think they can just make up for neglecting their other half and make it up later but seriously its not the
same. It really hurts and I get really annoyed at them, but people are people, always a tint of selfishness and
tend to forget about everything else or get blinded by success?

I'm surprised by Yuko determination and dedication to Haruna even if all she get is "I'm trying" and "I'll let you know as soon as I can"
or "I'm not sure". 3 weeks since their last date and having Haruna always be late and on her phone all the time....
Sigh Yuko..... you really shouldn't treat yourself like this, Haruna didn't even spare a glance at the cake you left
for her.

From your last line, I bet its something related to work that will totally break the two apart and Yuko will be the
one to suffer. Sounds like reality for some people out there, that can't seem to realize they are being treated
like crap.

I like this even though its sad to read knowing that something will happen to the pair, but we don't get these kind
of story often and this one has a lot of depth in it.

Please never hesitate to continue writing, I will be here waiting for more of your Divine work

I'll wait patiently (starts collecting rocks to throw if I don't see updates) <--- those aren't for you......

HAHA thanks again for another awesome read.

Imo_K

yukofan · « **Reply #92 on:** December 22, 2011, 09:18:06 PM »

i love your fanfic

Quote from: Divine Vengeance

“Yes, and don’t forget your own treatment,” Kojiharu reminded softly.

what treatment?

does yuko is having serious illness?

please update as soon as you can

Megumi · « **Reply #93 on:** December 24, 2011, 12:03:43 AM »

Thank you for your update!

As always I appreciate your fic

Arígatou!

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #94 on:** December 25, 2011, 10:56:24 AM »

Mistletoes and Midgets
(Posted 12/25/11)

A/N: Happy Christmas to all! I originally wasn’t going to write anything, but Krisa and I were joking around and this thought bunny popped up, so here we go LOL

Please enjoy, and happy holidays to all~

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Thanks for reading, and Happy Xmas ;D

Yagami.Rai · « **Reply #95 on:** December 25, 2011, 11:11:20 AM »

Wow! I love this~
Thanks for the update

Haha Acchan kept avoiding Minami but then still kiss her at the end

Minami was so desperate

Seigus · « **Reply #96 on:** December 25, 2011, 02:44:35 PM »

It's nice to chance upon a fluffy Christmas update after being away from the forum for so long!

Santa Yuko needs to learn about the spirit of giving and be less possessive

And sweet MaYuki moment there! Yukirin should officially be known as Mayuyu's armchair.

Merry Christmas, Divine Vengeance and everyone else!

Now I need to catch up on all the updates I've missed before work claims my life again!

Nyanoha · « **Reply #97 on:** December 25, 2011, 08:04:50 PM »

Best Christmas ever 8D

Crimsonwing · « **Reply #98 on:** December 25, 2011, 08:11:32 PM »

So if that wasn't a super fluffy adorable christmas story, I dunno what super fluffy adorable is.

Acchan is forever a tease LMAO. (But that's what makes her totally awesome)

And I see some SasshiMii nonsense which I TOTALLY APPROVE OF (^.^)b

Merry Christmas trollbro!! <3

Megumi · « **Reply #99 on:** December 26, 2011, 04:41:54 PM »

LoL Sasshi and Takamina walking around like a deer was

Thank you for Xmas update

Arígatou!