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Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
« Reply #100 on: April 18, 2012, 08:29:30 AM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                           19.What's wrong Yuko? 

Well i didn't expect that The exchange would win..so here it is..btw for all those Kojiyuu shippers her's a bit of it..

I think is a good idea we go out! Takamina says happy while looks at Yuko and Acchan play with a game in the fair 
yes,i was kinda worried about Yuko but now is just a crazy thought! Nyan Nyan says while looks at Yuko fighting with the game
Why you don't let me win! Yuko shouts and kicks the machine..
look at it silly..you just ruin it! Acchan says
i think we should go! Yuko says looking around and seeing that nobody else notice
i think that's not ok! Acchan says 
you don't know anything! Yuko says smiling and pulls Acchan's with her to the girls 
what happened? Takamina asked 
well---( Yuko putted her hand on Acchan's mouth) 
nothing! nothing! let's get out of here! Yuko smiling till Acchan bit her..
"ouuchhhh you..." Yuko says not finishing her sentence beacuse a mad Acchan was staring her 
Takamina and Nyan Nyan laugh about the scene 
okay let's go grab something to eat! Takamina says while takes Acchan's hand 
                       ~~~~Meanwhile~~~
Geki! Jurina shouts while sees Gekikara entering from the window 
hi! Gekikara says not so happy 
i missed you! Jurina says while hugs her..
"why? i can't find any connection but maybe Rena Matsui is hidding something.."Gekikara thought looking at the mirror that was in front of her..
did you miss me too? Jurina asked smiling
Gekikara looked other way then she blushed when she felt something soft on her cheek 
~~~~~~At the restaurant~~~~~
Yummy this is delicious! Yuko says while eats 
take it slow! Nyan Nyan says smiling while puts her hand on Yuko's shoulder which made her red and jam..Yuko fast took her juice and drank it all while Nyan Nyan was worried looking at her.
Acchan and Takamina looked each other and then  started laughing for that weird situation  
Acchan stopped laughing and pushed Takamina aside while Yuko pushed Nyan Nyan and kicked the table to use it like a shield 
The table broke into little pieces,the people in the restaurant were looking impress, they freak out and run to the exit 
Takamina are you okay? Acchan asked and helped Takamina to get up "what just happened?!" she asked worried while Acchan was trying to catch her breath with her right hand on her ribs 
Nyan Nyan!" Yuko says and sees that she pushed Nyan Nyan two tables away so she had fainted 
well well it's looks like a miss it this time!" A guy smiling staring at Yuko 
"Hideki!" Acchan says  
hello Acchan,i didn't came for you so you better stay out of this! Hideki says serious and pointing to Yuko
Acchan was about to move but some pain in her abdomen didn't let her to,Takamina noticed and stopped Acchan from moving 
Yuko also noticed "Don't worry Acchan i can deal with this..just watch me!" 
Hideki soon was about to punch Yuko but she managed to dodge it and tried to punch him to but Hideki desappear..
Yuko looked side to side then looked up and saw that a flying kick was coming to her,She gave a few steps back,Hideki missed his kick and Yuko took advantage of it Run fast to him and punched him really hard on his face,which couse him to hit himself with the other tables that were in the restaurant 
yes,Yuko! Takamina shouted 
Acchan smirked 
Hideki got up slowly and mad removed the pieces of glass that were on his black jacket "You're dead!" he shouted mad and running to Yuko 
Both punched eachother on the face...
Clearly Acchan could see that Hideki level up and that Yuko was having a hard time..(they were even)
Nyan Nyan woke up and saw the situation,She fast went to Acchan and Takamina..."Acchan help her up!"she said while shakes her
Yuko in other hand was being punched on her stomach and then was kicked and throwed to the wall
i can't..!" Acchan answered 
Takamina removed Nyan Nyan's hand from Acchan's shoulders 
"what?! she's being hurt!" Nyan Nyan replied and then slappped Acchan 
Takamina was speechless she didn't see that coming
i'm sorry!" Acchan replied softly while puts her hand on her red cheek 
"c'mon Yuko!" Mariko murmured and clenched her fist while she sees that Yuko is beated on her stomach several times 
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan murmured with tears on her eyes 
Acchan was clenching her teeth
You're so weak! Hideki said while goes to the bar and grab something to drink..
(Yuko was getting up slowly)
You know i thought you were stronger,everyone says that we should be scare of you that you're going to save them and blah blah blah..Black is scarier than you and she's you're same age,You're never going to save her! Hideki said and then drank his wine
"Black!"She said and then cleaned the blood of the corner of her mouth "okay enaugh of playing!" she said and clenched her fist
Hideki stopped drinking and looked at Yuko "huh,what a kid!" 
You're going down!" Yuko said with a smile that pieces off Hideki 
shut up!" He shouts and runs to her 
Yuko also run to him but she jumped..
not so fast!" Hideki replies and also jumps to her
both were fighting in the air..
He tried to kick Yuko but Yuko dodge it and punched him on his stomach,he was trying to catch his breath with his hands on his stomach  then Yuko putted her hands together and clenched it and punched him in his back to make him go down..
Hideki fell on the floor face up,he opened his eyes because of the pain he felt again in his stomach he saw Yuko's punching his stomach..
AHHHHHHHHHHH!" he shouted and then fainted 
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan shouted and went to her rescue because Yuko fell on the floor too 
Acchan and Takamina also went to Yuko..
Acchan was shocked she notice something that not even Nyan Nyan did 
What's this mean?"Acchan murmured and looked to the real big hole that was on the floor were Hideki was laying "is this Yuko's real power?!" she thought
Is he dead? Takamina asked  
no,he's still breathing! Acchan answered 
Nyan Nyan was her squirrel to get up when a chair from nowhere was throwed to Acchan.. and of course Acchan broke it into million pieces and looked around to know where that came from..
get out from where you are coward!" Acchan says 
Nyan Nyan hugs tigher to Yuko
you quiet made a mess around here! Sae says while walks and tries not to step on the pieces of glasses
what do you want? Acchan asks
nothing i just wanted to introduce you my new friend ken,he's akicha replacement! Sae says happy till she sees Hideki on the floor and her face totally change to a mad one 
"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!" Sae shouts mad and runs to Acchan and punches her on her stomach Acchaaaaaann!" Takamina shouts 
go away!" Acchan shouts and spits blood 
Takamina tried to help Acchan but she slapped her hands and shouted again "GO AWAY!" 
Nyan Nyan carried her on her back and took Takamina's arm 
where you think you're going? Ken asks with a smirk
let them go,i'm enaugh for you! Acchan says while tries to get up
mmm i don't think so,you mess with my friends i'll mess with yours! Gakuran says and takes Acchan by her collar..
let..them..go! Acchan says while tries to breathe 
NO..now you'll watch them die! Gakuran says and beats Acchan again on her stomach 
"AHHHHHHHHH!" Acchan shouts in pain 
"Acchan!" Takamina shouts and rus to her but Ken gets in her way and slaps her 
"Takamina!" Acchan says 
Shut up! Sae says and punches her on her face 
leave her alone! Nyan Nyan shouts and uses a wood to hit Ken 
"whore!" Ken says and punches Nyan Nyan on her stomach and then grabs her by her hair and also take Takamina by her hair 
now you watch the show! Ken says smirking 
Acchan was laying on the floor face up
so Atsuko where's your power? where's that heartless princess? Gakuran asks smirking AHHHHHHHHHH!" Acchan shouts because Gakuran has her feet on her abdomen 
"ACCHAAAAAAAAAN! Takamina shouts crying and also Nyan Nyan murmures  "Yuko!" and tears up
All the sudden..
A punch on Gakuran's face...
what the hell? Gakuran shouted mad 
Acchan turned her head and saw that Yuko's body wasn't laying on the floor then another punch on Ken face this time,he let go Takamina and Nyan Nyan 
what happened? the two girls wonder
An evil laugh can be heared all around 
Ken appered behind Nyan Nyan and putted her arm around her neck.."get out from where you are or i'll kill her..i promise!" 
something hitted Ken face's again and soon hitted him on his stomach then faster went to Gakuran and did the same thing 
it's so fast! Ken says while brushes his cheek 
"Ken let's grab this little bitch!"Gakuran says mad 
Soon Gakuran and Ken were fighting against what it seem to be Yuko..
what happened to her? Nyan Nyan asked scared while Takamina was helping Acchan 
the three were moving so fast but it seemed like Yuko was playing with them 
Gakuran throws her a punch and Yuko jumped and punched he on he face then disappeared and appeared behind Gakuran 
Boo! She said with an evil face and took Gakuran's arms and started pulling them ready to break them 
Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhh! Gakuran shouted in pain 
Ken punched Yuko on the face but this one cleaned the blood on her lip and smirked then jumped on Ken and started punching him like there's no tomorrow..
soon Yuko's knuckles were covered in blood and she was laughing about it 
stop Yuko! Acchan shouts and punches her with all her strength and sends her a couple steps forward
Gakuran was schocked and scared,she took Hideki and left..
Yuko got up and looked around..everyone was staring her afraid 
wh-what? what happened? Yuko asked and gave a step forward to her friends but Acchan,Nyan Nyan and Takamina gave a step back 
Yuko scratched her chin then noticed the blood on her hands then she saw Ken's body..
what the..? Yuko said and looked at Nyan Nyan with her mouth open
this can't be,i didn't do this! Yuko shouts in tears 
Nyan Nyan got closer to her squirrel and hugged her 
let go,i can hurt you too! Yuko shouted in tears 
Yuko let's go home! Acchan said 
like i spected! Mariko said and dissapeared
~~~~~~~~~~~~At home~~~~~~~~~
what happened? Yuko are you okay? Chiyuu asks 
i don't wanna talk! Yuko answered and went upstairs
Nyan Nyan went after Yuko..
Yuko was crying and desperately she was trying to remove the Ken's blood from her face and hands 
let me help you! Nyan Nyan said
let go! Yuko answered 
Nyan Nyan hugged Yuko tighly "you don't need to say anything..i'm here!" 
Yuko cried even more..
"it's okay,let me help you!" Nyan Nyan says and unbuttons Yuko's shirt and starts cleaning her up 
~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sitting in a park....
I'm going to get you back! Mayu says while looks at her computer then got up and stretched her body 
what are you doing here! Black asked 
not of your bussiness! Mayu replied 
whatever! Black says and starts walking away 
you know what you're just a coward..yes,that's what you're! Mayu shouts and throws a can to Black's head which Black totally punched away 
what did you say? Black asked mad 
what you heard! Mayu shouted and got on her bike and started going away 
Black followed her "you're dead!" She shouted while runs after Mayu 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~In the tub~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You think am i going to become Black? Yuko asked while rest her head on Nyan Nyan's chest 
"No..!" Nyan Nyan replies while hugs Yuko 
i don't know what happened to me! Yuko says and tear show up 
i'n sure there's an answer for that! Nyan Nyan replied
aren't you scare of me? Yuko asked 
at first..i was but i know you're the same and that what happened before i know we'll find something to help you! Nyan Nyan answered with her chin on Yuko's head 
(Yuko sighed..)
i love you Yuko! Nyan Nyan said and kissed her on her cheek 
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~
Black sees Mayu bike on the floor and starts looking for her..
she saw an opened door and enter then she saw stairs so she went up.."i'm going to give her a lesson!"
after going upstairs...
what are you doing here? Black asked 
i like this place! Mayu answered while looks the view
you know what did a moment ago was..really annoying! Black asks while walks closer to Mayu 
i know..i do it beacuse i love you! Mayu replied 
huh what the hell? What's this? Black asked while tries to pass an invisible barrier
Like i said is my love for you! Mayu replies 
get me out of here..you stupid human! Black shouts 
you can scream all you want nobody can hear you,it's sunday remember? nobody comes to school! Mayu replies with a smile 
get me out or i will....*Kill me* Mayu completes the sentence "you always say that you'll kill but i'm still here!" 
Aaaaahhhhhhhh!" Get me out! Black shouts deperately 
No till you bring Yuki back! Mayu answered and tear showed up  
"Never!" Black said while clenches her fist and ckoses her eyes 
these books are useless! Mayu said and got into the cirlcle that Black was in...
what are you doing? Black asked shouting 
This is my sacrifice! Mayu answered
TO BE CONTINUED.....
Circle= Humans can get in and out but supernatural things can't get out once they're in unless the circle is erase or at least a little part...
what do you think? Comment please! Next chapter it's all MaYuki..Mayu trying to get back Yuki unbeliveble..

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Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
« Reply #101 on: April 18, 2012, 09:29:19 AM »
Thanks for updating... Love to know what happen to mayuki next..
Also still wanna know more about jurina background

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Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
« Reply #102 on: April 18, 2012, 10:44:22 AM »
SACRIFICE?!

WHAT ARE U GOING TO DO?! MAYUYU~!!

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Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
« Reply #103 on: April 18, 2012, 05:42:13 PM »
Sacrifice??? Eh?!!! Mayuyu don't do stupide thing!

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Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
« Reply #104 on: April 19, 2012, 04:41:40 AM »
aww my kojiyuu..

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Re: Poll winner: The exchange 19.what's wrong Yuko? 17/04
« Reply #105 on: April 20, 2012, 05:40:46 AM »
 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:Mayuki moment is great please update you are the best  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
 :heart: :heart: :heart: w matsui  :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
« Reply #106 on: May 26, 2012, 11:35:53 AM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                20.Yuki/Black

what? Get out! Get out! Black shouts while is kneeling like she's feeling the worst pain ever 
"no,i'm here for you!" Mayu says and walks closer to her a little scared 
"nooooooo!" Black shouts and got up and runs to Mayu and pushes her out of the cirlcle hard 
if..you..enter... again.. I WILL KILL YOU! Black shouts the last part mad 
let me help you! Mayu shouted while gets up 
GO AWAAAAY! Black shouts in pain 
"i can't!" Mayu says and slowly walks inside the cirlcle Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!" Black shouts while covers her ears and closes her eyes and kneels 
"YUKIIIII!" Mayu shouts crying and runs to enter into the cirlcle again 
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Mayu chan! Mayu chan! A voice says 
Black!" Mayu opens her eyes and shouts it 
what? a girl asks 
wow that was a big hit! A boy says 
Mayu get up "what the hell?" she thought while sees herself in the school 
you should go to nursery! The coach says 
am i playing soccer? Mayu thought while looks her hands 
the ball hit you really hard! A boy says 
yes..i think! Mayu says while goes to nursery 
what the hell is going on? where's Black? it was all i dream? angels exist? Mayu wondered while walks to the nursery 
hey you don't run away from me! A guy says 
i don't want to talk to you! A girl says mad 
the guy took her by her arm and the girl reacts making him a 
judo key..
Don't touch me biatchhhh! The girl says and then kicks him on his stomach 
Yuki!" Mayu says impress with a big smile and runs after her
hey you wait up! Mayu shouts 
Yuki turns around..
what? what do you want? Yuki asks annoyed
(Mayu hugs her tighly)
WTF? don't touch me! Yuki says and pushes Mayu away 
what? it hurts! Mayu says while gets up and rubs her butt
leave alone! Yuki says mad and walks away 
"Yuki!" Mayu whispers and then sighs 
<><><>><><><><><><><><> In class<><><><><><><<><><><<><><><><
Yuki was sitting right next to Mayu..
Mayu couldn't help look at Yuki anytime that she was distracted 
even once their eyes met..but Yuki fast avoid it 
Yuki wws feeling ackward the whole day
<End of the classes>
Mayu was walking home but somehow she felt that something wasn't right so she looked back everytime 
"what the hell is going on? was everything a dream?" 
<SUDDENLY> 
Take this bitch..i told you i'll get my payback! The same guy that Yuki punched today came with his gang to get revenge 
hahahahaha that's all you got? Yuki asks laughing and bleeding 
"take this!" the guy punches Yuki on her face
i'm going to finish you! another guy shouts with a knife
NOOOOOOOO! Mayu shouts in tears and beats the guy with a knife with a wood 
where the hell she came out from? Another guy shouts 
you bitch! Another guy says and takes the knife while the other guy was crying on the floor because of the pain 
i'll kill you! That guy says ready to stab Mayu 
Not that fast! Yuki shouts and beats the guy holdong her and runs to the one who was about to stab Mayu  and ounches him on his face making him loose his balance and fall then Yuki took Mayu's hand and run away..
<After ten minutes of running in a safe place!>
Yuki pushes Mayu against a wall in an Alley 
"i thought you were a quiet person but today...What the hell is going on with you?!" Yuki asks with her hands on Mayu's shirt a few inches from her face
I don't know! Mayu shouted and pushed Yuki away
i don't really know! Mayu said and kneeled looking to her hands.."one day i was.." turns to look Yuki and then looked other way and covered her eyes and started crying 
Yuki started to feel bad about it "i didn't..i didn't mean to make you cry!" she said nervous and then walked to Mayu and extended her hand to help her to get up 
c'mon get up! Yuki says 
Mayu wiped hee tears and took Yuki's hand and then hugged her..(Yuki blushed)
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I'm okay! Yuki says serious
not you're not that looks bad it's a cut! Mayu says while examinetes her 
i'm alright! Yuki replies 
"you always say that!" Mayu thought and then went to Yuki's room and brought the alcohol and a towel 
where did you know where to go to get those things? Yuki asked serious and got up from her seat 
i just figured! Mayu answers
Yuki was staring her..Mayu just smiled and started healing Yuki's wounds 
Yuki tood quiet let in Mayu do her work "what are you studying to be a nurse?" she asked 
no..i'm just used to do this! Mayu replies sadly while cleans a cut on Yuki's arm 
<Ackward silence>
wait a minute if i knew about where this things were..that means that everything that we been through is real! Mayu thought while cleans Yuki's cut 
it-it-it hurts! Yuki says stuttering 
sorry!" Mayu says and cleans a little bit more softly..then starts blowing the cut 
(Yuki blushes again)
why are you helping me? after how i treted you today! Yuki asks looking at Mayu's eyes 
beacuse i...i wanted to! Mayu answers looking other way 
i guess i owe you one,is there anything you want or want me to do? Yuki asks
"mmm.. no!" Mayu replies 
"i don't like owe to someone" Yuki says 
mmmm i think actually there's something that you can help me with! Mayu says 
what is it? Yuki asks 
i'm looking for someone and maybe you can help me to find her! Mayu replies 
okay then i'll help you! Yuki answers 
(Mayu and Yuki shakes hands)
Last noght the agreed to start looking for the person that Mayu is looking for..
Yuki said that she will go to pick up Mayu the next day..
                ~~~~~~~~~~THE NEXT DAY~~~~~~~~
So this is where she lives! Yuki thought while looks around and sits on the sofa 
Mayu goes downstairs..
Yuki looks at Mayu coming downstairs and couldn't help to think how beatiful she was on that white dress then Yuki looked other way and got up 
sorry for making you wait,let's go! Mayu says with a smile which vanished after seeing Yuki's Black jacket..
---FLASHBACK---
(At the school terrace)
Yuki chan where are you? Mayu says looking around 
Yuki jumps and appears in front of Mayu..
here!" Mayu says nervous 
Yuki looks at her and takes the package.."what's this?"
a present! Mayu replies happy 
Yuki opens it and it was a black jacket.."thanks!" she says 
you don't like it? Mayu asks pouting 
Yuki smirks  puts it on then takes Mayu's hand and got to much closer to her 
Mayu blushes and asks nervous  "what are you doing?" then
 kisses Mayu's forhead reaklly sweetly 
Melting Mayu..
Thank you! Yuki says and dissappear..
Always keeping it cool! Mayu said 
<End of the flshback>
Since that day wore it everyday! Mayi said 
what? Yuki asks 
"nothing! let's go." Mayu says 
where was the last time you saw that person? Yuki asks
Mayu was hypnotozed looking at her
what? Mayu asked 
"nothing!" Yuki replied 
they kept walking..
so you're from here..I MEAN HERE? Mayu asks pointing to the ground 
excuse me! Yuki asks with a rise eye brown 
what about that arm? you really strong! enough to jump from a building? Mayu asks
what? of course not! Yuki says 
what about your parents? Mayu asks 
shut up! Yuki says annoyed
Mayu turns around "low tolerance check!" she whispers
what? is that a paper? Yuki asks 
ahhh!? no! hahahahahah! Mayu says nervous and hide the paper
who we are looking for your sister,your mom? Yuki asks 
"someone!" Mayu replies 
how am i supposed to help you! Yuki asks complaining 
<AT NIGHT>
this is not working! Yuki says irritated 
what about fighting? do you like fighting? Mayu asks 
enough! Yuki shouts 
what? Mayu asks 
it's completely annoying..I'm tired of it and your stupid questions.. are we really looking for someone or what is this? 
HOW DID YOU KNOW THOSE THINGS WERE THERE LAST NIGHT? YOU HAVE NEVEE COME TO MY HOUSE..I DON'T EVEN KNOW YOU...TELL ME THE TRUTH! Yuki shouts mad and grabbing Mayu by her collar
is not cool fighting here! A guy says 
shut the fuck up! Yuki shouts not looking the man that was behind her 
"Alexander!" Mayu says nervous
who are you? Alexander asks smirking 
who are you? Yuki shouts squeezing Mayu even more
Alexander takes Yuki and throws her away 
what was that? Yuki asks while gets up 
let's play a little! Alexander says smirking 
who are you? Yuki asks
stupid humans,disturbing my world! Alexander says and beats Yuki on her stomach (Yuki spits blood)
Yukiii! Mayu shouts and runs to her 
stay away! Yuki shouts while gets up 
are you trying to fight with me? Alexander asks smirking 
Mayu looks around "This place..is were Yuki got turned..i need to stop it,i need to stop it!" she shouts and runs to Alexander 
garbage! Alexandee says and takes Mayu by her wrists 
"you shouldn't be here!" Alexander shouts and throws her to the water 
(the were on a bridge) 
Mayuuuuuu! Yuki shouts 
what? i thought you hate her and that you didn't know her at all!  Alexander says smirking 
SHUT THE FUCK UP! Yuki shouts while  runs and jumps from the bridge 
YUKIII! Mayu shouts crying 
MAYUUU! Yuki shouts extending her hand 
SORRY! Mayu shouts 
TAKE MY HAND! Yuki shouts extending her right arm that was still hurt DROPS OF BLOOD! from Yuki's arm 
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SORRY! Mayu says and puts her hand on Yuki's cheek 
Black's eyes open wide "MAYUUUU!" she shouts 
Mayu's body falls on Black..
Gakuran smirked looking from another spot
Yuko opened the door from the school terrace and was shocked for what she saw
Gekikara was looking from another building "BLACK YOU REACHED YOUR LIMIT!" 
"Mayuuuuuuu!" Yuko shouts and tries to enter to the cirlcle 
but it was useless Yuko was only hitting herself 
Black was speechless all the blood that were on the floor it 
wasn't hers..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH! Black shouts in pain and crying after leaving Mayu's body aside 
Jurina and Nyna Nyan also get to the terrace 
Mayu! Jurina shouts and tries to enter to the cirlcle but she couldn't get in she end up hitting herself like Yuko 
what the f? Jurina asks 
what? Gekikara thought
like i thought! Gekuran smirked 
Yuko slowly turn her head in horror to look Jurina "that cirlcle don't let angels get in or get out!" 
angels? Nyan Nyan repeated and looked Jurina 
i'm not an angel! Jurina answered serious 
Hello everyone! A man clapping and smiling says standing in feont of Yuko
ALEXANDER! Everyone says 
 TO BE CONTINUE...

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Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
« Reply #107 on: May 27, 2012, 09:55:43 AM »
Mayuuuu!!! Cmze-san!! Thank for the Update! But..but..please update again its too interesting the next chapter...
Hope mayu fine and Yuki comeback to mayu,

Hehe so jurina its an angel eh?

RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
« Reply #108 on: May 27, 2012, 10:46:20 AM »
Cmze-san dont kill Mayuyu..
I know jurina mother is an angel but is alexender is jurina father..
please dont take jurina away..
please2 update the bext chapter

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Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
« Reply #109 on: May 28, 2012, 02:59:38 PM »
YAHOOO

Jurina True Identity !!!

PLEASE UPDATE MORE !!!
WMatsui lover ....JURINA & RENA


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Re: The exchange 20.Yuki/Black 25/05
« Reply #110 on: May 28, 2012, 03:18:00 PM »
I'm really curious about Jurina's identity and who is her father??~   :dizzy:
Please update!~  :hee:
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Re: The exchange 21.where's Jurina? 31/05
« Reply #111 on: May 31, 2012, 08:02:19 AM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                              21.Where's Jurina?

I did everything for you! Black murmures while takes Mayu on her arms 
Mayu whispered something to Black's ear 
Black puts Mayu on the floor softly..
Don't worry Black you're not the only one who kills the one you love for a bigger purpuse! Alexander says smirking 
Kill the one you love!" Yuko repeated 
I DID EVERYTHING FOR YOU! Black shouted mad looking to Alexander and run to him fast 
you're going to end up hitting herself! Yuko shouted 
ha..this is fun! Alexander says clapping
I'm going to kill you! Black shouted and got out of the cirlcle
what? everyone said in unision while Alexander's face changed to a mad one "he dissapeared..."
I know that trick! Black shouted and punched where Alexander was going to appear and end up punching him on his face
impresive! Mariko said 
wow! Yuko said 
(Nyan Nyan went to help Mayu..)
Alexander sama! Gakuran shouted 
what are you waiting for Yuko? let's kick his ass! Black sshouted while takes off her precius Black Jacket
yes! Yuko shouts 
Alexander cleans the blood on his mouth.."That was fun!" 
ha..so you finally found her! he says focusing his attention to Jurina.
who are you? Jurina asked afraid
don't worry i won't hurt you! Alexander says smiling and offering his hand to her 
Gekikara slap his hand..
i forgot about you! Alexander says 
you shouldn't! Gekikara says mad
Alexander hits Gekikara on her stomach hard and whispered on her ear "The special Rena!" 
Yuko and Black got on his way but Alexander was stronger and beat the two angels 
come with me Jurina! Alexander says extending his hand
not that fast you ASS****! Gekikara shouted and try to punch Alexander 
Again you!" Alexander murmured 
not only her! Black said and try to kick him but he manage to grab her leg while Yuko also tried to punch him..
you fooled me! Alexander says and throws Black aside and punches Yuko's face 
My turn!" Gekikra says and kicks him on his stomach 
Alexander sama! Gakuran runs to help him and pushes Gekikra out of the way
You made me mad! Alexander shouted, took Yuko and gave her several punches on her stomach and throwed her away 
"Yuko..!" Nyan Nyan shouted 
what don't tell me that your heart is working? Alexander asks behind Black who was distracted not knowing what to do.."Fight or go afte Yuko?"
"bastard!" Black says and tries to dodge Alexander's kicks,she was alredy tired so Alexander reached to kick her 
Black was getting up but Alexander used his body to push her out of the building
Go and say hi to your friend for me! Alexander says smiling 
Black catched Yuko in the air and was able buffer the fall..
Gekikara was fighting Gakuran
well i'm not going to be charming anymore! Alexander says and grabs Jurina and takes her with him 
GEKIKARAAAA! Jurina shouts 
"Jurinaaaaaaa!" Gekikara shouts and tries to go after her but Gakuran was on the way then once Alexander dissapeared with Jurina..Gakuran also dissapear
Shit!" Gekikra says punching the floor
soon appeared Black and Yuko..
Yuko!" Nyan Nyan says and goes to her 
Where's Jurina? Black asked
           [][][][][][]AT THE HOSPITAL[][][][][]

Yuki was staring Mayu while she was sleeping,the doctor said that her wound wasn't deep and she'll recover soon..but still Yuki feels bad about everything..
Mayu slowly openned her eyes... "Black!" She murmured 
not Yuki! Yuki replied with a sweet look 
Mayu hugged Yuki tighly "i missed you..i missed you..i knew you were there!" 
you were right! Yuki said (still hugging eachother)
i'm sorry! Yuki says 
no,no it was my fault..you told me! Mayu says while kisses Yuki all over her face 
"but.. but.." Yuki tries to speak but Mayu was kissing her all over so it was hard to focus
Yuki cupped Mayu's cheeks "I Love you!" she said and then kissed Mayu deeply 
Gakuran was watching from other building.."So Love made you come back!" she murmured 
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Really Yuki got back? Takamina asked 
yeah she came back! Yuko replied happy 
but what if she tries to kill Acchan? Takamina asks 
which part that she's good you don't understand? Tomochin asks pouting to Takamina 
well i don't anyone hurt Acchan again! Takamina says worried looking other way 
how is she? Chiyuu asks 
 burning up in fever! Takamina replies sad 
she's not healing fast couse she's a fugitive angel probably she would loose her power eventually and become human! Eiiji says looking through the window
Alexander took Jurina i need you to help me to get her back please! Gekikara says worried
don't worry we'll help you! Yuko says while is about to eat an apple that it's snatched by Black!
Black! Everyone says 
hi! Black says with a smirk 
(note: How Black got in...by the window)
what do you want? Chiyuu asks not believing that she has changed 
easy i didn't came to fight even though i would win! Black says while eats the apple 
are you going to help us? Gekikara asks 
"yes.." Black answered 
what do you know? Eeiji asked 
always smart..you even knew that i was coming,your power is going away but you're still strong! Black says while walks around the room and then sits on the sofa
answer! Eiji shouts 
with that actititud you're just going to get you dead! Black says serious and throws the apple in the trash bin that was in the kitchen
don't play with us! Yuko says
okay here's what a got..ALEXANDER IS JURINA'S DAD AND HE WANTS TO USE HER BODY TO KEEP LIVING BECAUSE HER BODY WHICH IS A SIMPLE HUMAN CAN'T HANDLE HIM SO HE'S PLANNING TO LIVE FOREVER AS A HALF HUMAN AND HALF ANGEL Black says 
what?Gekikara 
no way! Yuko says 
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Acchan shouted from her room 
her medicine! Takamina says and runs to Acchan's room to give her the medicine 
sorry about that! Black says (talking about Acchan's ribs) 
that bastard! Eiji says 
wait but there's more!! Black says 
what? everyone asks 
something that Geki knows abd we don't right Rena? Black says with a smirk and gets in front of her...
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what do you want? Jurina asked afraid
don't worry i won't hurt unless you make me mad! Alexander says smiling 
Gekikara will come soon and will destroy you! Jurina says 
oh really? i'm so afraid of her! Alexander says while takes a drink of Whiskey
Gakuran was still confuse.." Love.." she murmured 
you'll see she'll come! Jurina says 
sorry honey i can't wait there so many things to do! Alexander says smirking 

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Re: The exchange 21.where's Jurina? 31/05
« Reply #112 on: June 01, 2012, 03:15:50 PM »
No Jurinnaaaaa


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Re: The exchange 21.where's Jurina? 31/05
« Reply #113 on: June 01, 2012, 11:54:18 PM »
 :imdead: This is too much...
Yuki is back YEI finally but Jurina..... noooooooo  :pleeease:

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Re: The exchange 22.Matsui Rena 12/06
« Reply #114 on: June 12, 2012, 07:24:52 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                 22.Matsui Rena

<The next day>
Black was watching Mayu sleep but relize about the time so she got closer and kissed Mayu's forhead when Black was about to get out from the window
"Where you going?" Mayu asks 
i got something to do! Black answers not looking 
"please..Come back.." Mayu says a tear rolled her cheek 
*Black dissaper*
-Somewhere else- 
You know that you won't get anything if you keep stalking Mayu!" Black says 
i'm not stalking! Gakuran said smiling 
then what do you want? Black asks
kill her! Sae says without hesitation 
You're just a fool! Black says and runs to Sae 
both punched eachother's face
"Good!" Gakuran says and kicks Black's stomach 
being good makes you weak! Gakuran murmures 
ahhhh! Black says and pushes Gakuran *Black was on top* 
this is low!" Gakuran says 
i would never...I WILL NEVER HURT YOU! Black shouted the last part 
get off me! Gakuran said and punched Black's face
you're just so weak i wanna fight with Black not with this clown! Gakuran says and Kicks Black's stomach again 
Black was trying to catch her breath 
do you think you're the stronger enough to protect her? don't me laugh! Gakuran said 
you don't know a thing! Black says and punched Gakuran on her face 
i'm going to kill you! Gakuran said and punched Black again making her fall on the floor 
Gakuran takes Black by her shirt and said "You know i have to kill you!" 
yeah you have but you won't! Black says 
Gakuran let go Black's shirt causing her to fall on the floor
why you let her change you? Gakuran asks mad 
"i belong with her!l Black says looking to the sky 
what? don't say stupid things! Gakuran says 
in all the people in the world i had to take her father's life..in all the fathers that there are in the world hers had to be the one that gave me his life! Black says 
Alexander is coming after you anyway! Gakuran says and walks away 
i'll be waiting for him! Black murmures while gets up and walks to Nyan Nyan's dept 
<At Nyan Nyan's dept> 
Black what happened to you? Gekikara asked 
a friendly talk! Black says while goes to the fridge and takes a cold stake and out it on her back 
that was dinner! Yuko says with a sigh 
anything new about Jurina? Takamina asked 
no! Black answered 
Eiiji was investigating on his computer while Tomochin and Chiyuu were watching tv 
this is not fun we have not clue! Tomochin says 
ehhhhh! Yuko says 
huh? Black reacts 
AHHHHHHHHH! A shout from Acchan's room 
Acchan! Takamina shouts and opens the door 
"Acchan!" Evryone shouts and sees Mariko with her hands inside of Acchan's stomach 
what the hell? Yuko tried to stop it but something don't let her get in the room 
Ahhhhhhhh! Acchan was shouting in pain
"Acchan!" Takamina shouts crying and enters to the room 
get out of here! Mariko shouted 
 Mariko stopped what she was doing...
*Acchan was trying to catch her breath..*
Are you okay? Tell me! Takamina says and looks at Mariko
Acchan opens her eyes slowly "What happened?" she asked looking at Takamina 
now you're healed so if i were you..i'll prepared myself for what's coming! Mariko says ready to go 
Acchan sits and touches her ribs and feel no pain "i'm healed" she said surprised 
what's coming? Gekikra asks 
You should better know Rena! Mariko says and gets out using the window 
"Rena..that name again!" Gekikra murmures 
Rena! Acchan murmures and looks at Gekikara
i think i know something! Eiiji says 
what's that mean? Black asks 
well when i was an angel there was a tell that a human could become an angel..
what?!? how? Takamina asked 
well i don't know the details but years ago existed a girl who could see us or channel us somehow she was an angel but lived her whole life as a human once she ascended she lost her human memories! Eiiji says 
you mean that could be Gekikra! Acchan says
that explains her compasion for humans those days! Acchan says looking at Gekikra 
this can't be "i'm not that person i don't remember! Gekikra said looking other way 
ohh don't worry i can help you! Black says with a smile and then punched Gekikra really hard on her stomach 
wha-what? Gekikra said and instanly felt dizzy and fainted
that was necessary? Acchan asked 
you'll thank me later! Black replies 
now let's wait! Eiji says 
<Past> 
i'm Matsui Rena i was born July 27, 1991 in Toyohashi, Aichi! Rena murmured and openned her eyes 
where am i? Rena thought while looks around 
how you feeling today? A nurse asks 
i'm fine! Rena says with a smile
you had another convulsion..that's not okay! The nurse says while adjust Rena's pillow 
i'm just another human! Rena mumured looking to her hands
Rena looked around and nurse dissapear 
hello how you feeling? Another nurse asks 
fine like i told the other nurse! Rena says 
what other nurse? The nurse asked 
well the one that got out a few seconds ago maybe you saw her in the hall! Rena says 
the nurse got closer and touched Rena's forhead "everything is fine!" the nurse said 
what's wrong? Rena asked 
Maybe you thought you saw another nurse but there's not anyother nurse around till 2:00pm! The nurse answers
i should rest! Rena says 
yes,rest that might be good! The nurse says while closes the door slowly 
*Rena got up and left the hospital...*
what was that? Rena thought while walks 
"Rena chan!" A girl says 
What are you doing here? you have to be in the hospital! The girl says worried 
i'm fine! Rena says and keeps walking 
stop! The girl says and holds Rena 
you're going to end up in the hospital again if you don't take care of yourself! The girl says worried 
"Airin.." Rena said softly 
~Airin took Rena to her home~
I'm glad you came with me! Airin says happy 
what happened? why i was in the hospital? Rena asked 
what? You know..you always have this convulsions that i can't explain! Airin says 
is that so..since when i have it?Rena asks 
since i know you silly..don't worry nobody knows our little secret! Airin replies 
what secret? Rena asked 
well the fact that you can see dead people which is totally cool!Airin says with a smile 
ahhhhhh! Rena says 
what's wrong? Airin asks 
my head..my head hurts! Rena says and her nose starts bleeding 
not another convulsion! Airin says and takes Rena's hand 
Airin watch out! Rena says and jumps on Airin *both fall on the floor* 
a stone was throwed and was going to hit Airin..
there you are! a young man says smiling while enters from the window 
who are you? Airin asks 
the special Rena! The young man says clapping 
My head! Rena says while scratches her head 
do you feel it? that's better than i thought!  The young man says happy 
what do you want? Rena asked in pain 
"you!" The young man said 
over my dead body! Airin says and takes the wood and hits the young man but it didn't hurt him 
as you wish! the young man says and insert his hand on Airin stomach *Drops of blood* 
AIRIIIIIN! Rena shouts crying 
somebody else enters from the window and hits the young man who let go Airin 
Rena goes to Airin and hugs her and then watches the two figures fighting 
the girl seemend stronger she punched him several times on his stomach and then kicked him out the room 
when the girl looked outside the window he was already gone
Airin! Rena says sobbing 
the girl looks at Rena.. "if you keep living here you always going to loose someone you love!" the girl says serious 
what's your name? The girl asks 
Rena..Rena Matsui! She answered sobbing 
well Rena there's something you need to know "you're a weapon..You can find angels and angels or bad angels want you beacuse you work like a radar!" The girl says 
why me? Rena asked 
because you're not human! The girl says 
what?!!?! Rena asks
you need to come with me! The girl says 
no..what about Airin please save her! Rena says sobbing and taking the girl's leg
i can save her but you will owe me! The girls says and takes Rena's hand and puts it on her stomach 
what's this mean? Rena asked 
do you agree? The girl says 
yes! Rena says 
your duty will be saving "Matsui Jurina!!" the girl says and then dissapears 
"Matsui Jurina?" Rena murmured 
Airin openned her eyes and touched her wound 
Rena fell on Airin..
Rena? Airin said and moved her next to her 
Rena wake up! Airin says and shakes Rena then Airin hears Rena's heartbeat but there was nothing 
RENAAAAAAAA! Airin shouts crying and hugging Rena's dead body!
~~~~~Present~~~~~
Gekikra woke up..
Gekikra how was it? Black asked
Gekikra got up and punched Black on her stomach,Black sitted on the couch 
What you find out? Acchan asks 
i met Jurina's mom..i made i deal with her! Gekikara said 
what kind of deal? Takamina asked 
that i would protect Jurina! Gekikra says looking other way
don't worry we'll find her! Yuko says 
what else? Eiji asked 
yes,i'm a angel radar! Gekikra says 
what?!? Yuko asks 
she said so that's why Alexander looked for me and killed Airin..he wanted to look for angels so he would turn them and have an army! Gekikra says 
so that means you can find him and Jurina because she's also an Angel? Eiiji says 
yes! Gekikra says 
that explains why you're always so attached to Jurina? Black says looking other way 
let's find her then! Yuko shouts 
you know that we could die right? Black says 
Takamina sad looked at Acchan,Tomochin looked at Chiyuu 
"don't worry everything will be fine!" Acchan says with a bright smile..

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Re: The exchange 22.Matsui Rena 12/06
« Reply #115 on: June 13, 2012, 11:50:18 PM »
Hopefully I'm the first one commenting...

Woah!
So Matsui Rena was a human?!
Airin~!

Now this is getting serious...
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Re: The exchange 23.this seems a goodbye 21/06
« Reply #116 on: June 21, 2012, 03:13:56 PM »
THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                         23.This seems a goodbye 

I guess we have to say goodbye today! Acchan says 
it's not a goodbye! Yuko says with smile 
Black looked other way 
we'll leave tomorrow! Gekikara says serious 
i'll go with you! Chiyuu and Eiji says 
there's no need! Black says and gets up 
but we want to help! Eiji and Chiyuu says 
well you'll help us looking after them! Acchan says while looks to the othe room where Takamina and Tomochin were watching Tv 
"but.." Chiyuu and Eiiji were about to obeject
Black putted her hand on Chiyuu's shoulder 
i dragged you to this..you were fine living here and that's what you should keep doing! Black says 
<Chiyuu and Eiji looked down>
so then is done we leave tomorrow! Gekikara says 
so i should go! Yuko says and leaves 
Black looks other way and also walks away from the window
i wasn't finish! Gekikara says 
well they have someone to say goodbye! Acchan says smirking 
what about you Acchan? Eiji asks 
yes,i'm thinking about it too! Acchan says looking to Takamina
<Yuko went walking to Nyan Nyan's work> 
Nyan Nyan was busy reading some papers...
hello! Yuko says with a smile 
ahhhhhhhhh Yuko! Nyan Nyan shouts 
soon two bodyguards enetered to the office 
what's wrong Kojima san? The bodyguards asked 
i'm okay! I'm okay! Nyan Nyan says 
Yuko smiles to the bodyguards
wow my Nyan Nyan is well protected! Yuko says 
what are you doing here? Nyan Nyan asks while gets up and gets closer to Yuko the removes a string of hair of Yuko's face then smiled 
i wanted to spend my day with you! Yuko says and kisses Nyan Nyan's cheek 
i guess i can't leave work for a bit! Nyan Nyan says smiling
let's go! Yuko says with her cute dimples 
Nyan Nyan was melting 
they ran away from Nyan Nyan work 
i wanna do everything with you Nyan Nyan! Yuko shouted all the sudden 
what?!? Nyan Nyan replied blushing 
both girls went to an arcade 
they played all the games..
Nyan Nyan i'm winning! Yuko shouts smiling 
i'm not good at these things! Nyan Nyan says in defeat 
let's go there! Yuko says and points to the photo booth
<both get in>
The first Photo was Nyan Nyan kissing Yuko's cheek
the second photo was Yuko grabbing Nyan Nyan boobs with a excitement face 
the third photo was Nyan Nyan pinching Yuko's cheek 
The fouth picture was Yuko crying and hugging Nyan Nyan's chest tighly 
the fift picture was Nyan Nyan resign to the idea that Yuko is a pervert squirrel 
The two girls walked hand in hand to a restaurant 
both went to the bathroom
Yuko pushed Nyan Nyan to one of the cubicles 
what?!? Nyan Nyan asked blushing 
i saw on tv this is fun! Yuko says grinning 
<Atsumina's day> 
Like Black said you could die! Takamina said sad while walks 
Acchan took a deep breath and said"Takamina don't worry!" 
You always say that and you don't care how i feel don't you underttand I LOVE YOU! Takamina shouted crying 
people around looked at them 
i don't care ACCHAN I LOVE YOU! Takamina shouted louder still crying 
Acchan blushed a tear came out
Takamina took Acchan hand and run away 
Acchan stopped running 
what is it? Takamina asked 
"i'll be back..." Acchan murmured 
what? Takamina asked 
I'LL BE BACK AND I WANT TO SPEND THE REST OF MY LIFE WITH YOU! Acchan shouted crying and took off a necklace that she had on and then putted on Takamina
Takamina looked to the necklace 
I swear Takamina i'll be back! Acchan says crying hugging Takamina from behind 
Takamina smiled "you have to get back because it wouldn't work with somebody else!" she murmured 
Acchan takes Takamina's hand "let's eat some katsudon"
"i don't think.." Takamina was about to says somthing
yeah don't worry i know a really good place! Acchan says smiling 
i said i don't want it! Takamina says 
yes,it's delicious there! Acchan says smirking 
you don't get to me? Takamina asks
do you remember the ramen? Acchan asks 
the Ramen? Takamina asks 
yes,the one you invited me when i wasn't hungry! Acchan says smirking like a fool 
(Ramen scene chapter 3.5) 
uhhh what about it? Takamina asks 
well the more i said no the more you offer it to me! Acchan says smirking 
now i remenber! Takamina says 
yes,that's why we're going to eat Katsudon! Acchan says smirking and gives a little squeeze to Takamina's hand 
<Eating Katsudon> 
This is delicious! Acchan says smiling 
i'm really gonna miss you if you don't get back! Takamina says looking at Acchan 
"Takamina.." Acchan murmured 
i'll really miss your smile,your voice,your heart! Takamina says and grabs Acchan's hand 
Acchan tried to be strong but the truth she was feeling the same "she couldn't live without Takamina" 
<Mayuki's day>
Are you going to spend all day staring me? Mayu asked and then openned her eyes 
how you knew? Yuki asked 
i could recognized you kilometres away! Mayu says smirking and gets up 
what are you doing? Yuki asks 
well you're not planning to says hi! Mayu says while gets closer and kisses Yuki's cheek 
"Mayu.." Yuki murmures 
what? Mayu asks 
hold on tight! Yuki whispered and took Mayu and then jumped from the building 
oh god..i don't want to die! Mayu said and kept holding tigher on Yuki's back 
<they got to the tallest building>
wow it's beatiful! Mayu said and looked around 
i know..!"Yuki replied 
it's fine..i know you'll get back to me like you always do please don't get hurt to much! Mayu said
what are you talking about? Yuki asked
Gakuran came! Mayu replied 
ohh! Yuki looked other way 
Mayu hugged Yuki both fell on the floor  "let's enjoy the view Yuki chan!" Mayu said hugging Yuki that was leaned to the wall while Mayu was leaned on Yuki's chest 
Yuki closed her eyes and inhaled Mayu's scent 

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Re: The exchange 23.this seems a goodbye 21/06
« Reply #117 on: June 22, 2012, 11:13:52 PM »
 :cry: Waa please don't get hurt girls!

 :banghead: Happy ending please  :banghead:

I laughed kind a hard with Yuko and NyanNyan in photo-booth
Then AtsuMina I  :cry: and MaYuki I  :cry: :cry: :cry: even more...

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Re: The exchange 23.this seems a goodbye 21/06
« Reply #118 on: June 30, 2012, 06:34:51 PM »
I liked this one   :onioncheer:
 but I wanted the story to be more concentrated on Mayuki  :tantrum:
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« Reply #119 on: July 04, 2012, 08:44:48 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                             24.Rescue Mission 

(At Nyan Nyan's home)
The vibe was really sad Mayu didn't go to school,Nyan Nyan didn't go to work Takamina was still on bed,Eiiji was looking for information and Chiyuu was sad because the girls didn't take her while Tomochin was watching Tv 
Nyan Nyan got up "okay this is enough.. i can't resist this i'm tired of waiting!" she said irritated 
it's the only thing we can do! Mayu says sad 
what if Yuko turn in one of them? Nyan Nyan asked 
she won't! Mayu answered 
you don't know! Nyan Nyan shouted 
She's right! Takamina says leaning on the door
what if Yuki don't come back? Nyan Nyan asks 
she will..she always get her back to me! Mayu answers hugging herself *she was wearing Yuki's Black jacket* then she remembered the moment she met Yuki at the hospital then when she met her at school then again when she appeared to defend her from those men..
We need to do something! Takamina says 
what do you think? Chiyuu asks 
let's go find them! Nynan Nyan says 
but how we going to find them? Tomochin asks 
well gps! Mayu says while her phone is tracking Yuki
great! The girls says and all of them goes to the car
i'm not happy with this! Eiji says 
shut up! Takamina says 
~Somewhere else~ 
Here! Gekikara says 
here? Are you sure? Acchan asks 
yes! Gekikra answers 
i guess your radar is screw beacuse we're in the middle of nowhere, no civilization,no Nyan Nyan! Yuko says pouting 
Black looked around and then punched the ground
huh? Are you crazy? Yuko asks scared 
i see! Acchan says and also punches the ground
A hole was made 
this is scary! Yuko says 
Sorry but i forgot my invitation! Black shouts 
well you're not invited a voice says from the hole 
now i feel ignore poor me! Black says pretending to be sad 
<Hideki and 20 Fallen angels came out>
This is an important event and your kinda not invited! A fallen angel says 
in all good parties there's always crushers! Acchan says smirking 
well if you want to pass you have to do it over me! Another fallen angel says
Hideki saw Yuko and remembered what happened last time he saw her so he got back to the hole 
20 against 4..this is going to be fun! Another fallen angel says smiling 
Let's go! Yuko shouts and goes running to them 
"fool!" Black says and also runs after her 
Acchan smirks and runs to them 
Gekikara sighed "i guess is one for the team!" she said and also run to them 
Yuko was punching everyone..
"Take that bitch!" Black says and kicks one Fallen angel 
A fallen angel was about to punch Acchan but she stopped him grabbed him by his arm and throwed him aside 
Gekikara was merciless fighting 
they never get tired or what? Yuko says fustrated still punching more fallen angels 
there are more appearing! Black says and kicks one on his face
shit! This is going to ruin my shirt! Acchan says and punches him on his stomach 
no matter how hard we beat them they get up again like those zombies in movies! Yuko says while dodges a punch 
what a kid! Black says irritated
but it's truth! Acchan says 
a fallen angels beats Black for being distracted 
"Black!" Acchan says 
then anothers fallen angels hit Acchan 
Acchan!"Gekikara says and goes to her rescue but Another fallen angel grab her by her leg and make her loose balance so many fallen angel started hitting Gekikara 
Yuko tried to help her friend but they were hitting her too 
~Yuko's Flashback~
what if you become one of them? Nyan Nyan asked sad 
i can control it remember? Yuko says with a smile 
"Yuko.." Nyan Nyan whispers and tears come out 
Nyan Nyan...*Sad Yuko*  if That fallen angel tries to turn me there's a thing he could never change about me.. do you know what it is? Yuko asks trying to show a smile 
what is it? Nyan Nyan asks wiping her tears 
Yuko taked Nyan Nyan's hand and puts it on her chest 
"You..!" Yuko answered 
Nyan Nyan felt Heart beat fast when she said "you" 
he would need to rip out my heart to turn me beacuse you're my heart! Yuko says 
Nyan Nyan hugs Yuko tighly "i love you!" she says crying on Yuko's shoulder 
 tears came out from Yuko's eyes "i'm not sad why am i crying? maybe these are tears of love!" 
~End of the Flashback~
Mariko was watching from away "when you're planning to fight seriouly?" 
One fallen angel was about to kick Yuko but she stopped him 
get out of My way..I WANNA SEE MY NYAN NYAN! Yuko shouted crying and run to fallen angels 
"Yuko!" Gekikra said and tried to got up 
Yuko was fighting to all those fallen angels by herself 
"Yuko.. fool.. I WANT TO SEE MAYU CHAN TOO! Yuki shouted in tears then got up and went to fight those fallen angels too 
TAKAMINAAAAAAA! Acchan shouted in tears too then got up and run to the fallen angels 
<In the car> 
Takamina took a deep breath "what was that?" she wondered while looks through her window
Nyan Nyan was feeling weird while Mayu was feeling uncomfortable 
The three girls shouted at the same time " you need to accelerate!" while Takamina got up and pressed the acclerator 
<Eiji was driving> 
are you crazy? we're going to die? Eiji shouted scared 
Mayu and Nyan Nyan also pressed the accelerator 
"we'll be there soon!" 

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