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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 3A-3B)
« Reply #40 on: November 24, 2011, 08:40:32 AM »
Ehhh!!! Acchan O_O did her father betray her family too or what?

I like jealous Tomochin ^^

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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 3A-3B)
« Reply #41 on: November 25, 2011, 04:16:58 AM »
woah those girls <3 Aww Jelous Tomochin <3

Duddddeee! Gekikara is a bad ass monster as usual <333

Woah Acchan is scaryy , raging like that O: ~

I want the next chapter!~

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« Reply #42 on: November 25, 2011, 07:13:59 PM »
haru9210: thanks for liking this chapter ^_^

sorakamiya: panda, please do my OS request ok? hahaha

kazuski: ohh is this your first time commenting in my fic? good that u like it

yagami.rai: i think this chapter will disappoint you again hahaha but the next chapter will give you a clue on how they will meet. coz this chapter is important especially to what is bothering with aachan. ^_^.

kahem: let us see if her father betray his family, yeah jealous tomochin FTW

haruhi16: here is the next chapter lol
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Chapter 04

*ATSUKO’S POV*
I ran as fast as I could from the abandoned house. I open the van and took the back sit. I was thinking of what I’ve done. What if mariko didn’t stop me? What will happen? As the scenes are floating in my head trying to forget what happened in the abandoned building. I was shock when I saw koichi full of blood, unconscious that will took months of healing and rehabilitation. I think I broke his 4 ribs, face and even his arms. I was frightened with my own self as I saw my hands full of blood. Thanks to mariko, if she didn’t stop me I might end up being a killer. But what is with that usual self? Even me, don’t know much about myself anymore now because of what had happened. Who am I? Then a flashback of memory crosses my mind.

*FLASHBACK*

“don’t ever call here again or try to contact her, you leave her without words now you are telling me that you care for her? Damn it.  And Ohh you’re concern about her accident? Then let me tell you frankly, you have no rights and don’t even bother yourself about it coz i-i-i-,, iiit has nothing to do with you” my father said with anger as he was talking with another person on the phone.

“wait? What accident? And who is he talking with? And does this one connected with the accident? I whispered as I was eavesdropping while watching the scar in my wrist.

“neechan what are you doing?” my little sister asked.

“shhh erena, don’t shout as father might hear you” I muttered while my heart is beating faster because I was nervous that I might get caught.

“oh sorry, what are you doing here? It’s been awhile that you come to this house since you’ve been staying in WNA house for a month. Erena muttered while having a happy face seeing her sister.

“yeah it’s been awhile, but I’m just here to get some money. Well can you asked father to give me some money? I asked

“ohh sure, but why? I thought business in WNA is doing great? But I miss you oneechan” erena run towards me and hugged me tightly

“yeah it is doing great but we have to buy some equipment to be used in important and special request, just send it to my bank account ok” I replied as I also hugged her, after a few seconds I cut the hug as I asked her with a question “ahh by the way do you know anything about this scar in my wrist? Did I try committing suicide? I asked her because I was curious about what I heard with my father talking privately in his office room.

“oh that scar? Ermmm, I really don’t know about it, this is my first time seeing it as u always covered it with wristband. Erena replied while hiding something.

“are you sure that you really don’t know?? I said while trying to find some clue in her facial expression that might give me a hint that she is hiding something from me.

“yes, I’m sure” she replied with confident, but somehow, someway , I feel odd, I feel like she is lying but I think it is for my own sake. I still trust my sister coz after all she is the only one that I trust the most along with the WNA members.

“oh atsuko welcome home” my father said while he went out to his office room and saw us with erena chatting.

“I have to go erena, see you again but I don’t know when and don’t forget what I asked you coz I really need it, after all you are part of that group as finance secretary” I said as I went out to our house hurriedly since I don’t want to talk or see my father’s face.

“wait atsuko, come back here, hey!” my father shouted. “what did she did in our house? Did she heard anything from my conversation?” father asked erena with a worried face

“well she just need money just send it to her bank account, and about the conversation yeah sort of,  she heard but I didn’t tell her the truth, it is not because I did it for you father it is for oneechan coz I care for her not like you” erena replied as she headed back to her own room.

“hey erena what is the meaning of that?” father quickly asked but erena didn’t respond instead he just heard the door bang loudly.
*END OF FLASHBACK*but still in ATSUKO’S POV

As we traveling back to WNA house. The atmosphere is quiet. No one dares to talk or joke. I can’t watch them in their eyes or try to talk to them. I was thinking that they might be afraid of me right now because of what happened. Few minutes later we arrived in our house.

“welcome home, how was the beating up?” mayuyu asked while she was excited to hear about it from us

They didn’t know or hear or saw it because they deactivated the recording and quickly edit the audio to post in the website as evidence so that Kim can hear it and prove that we did our job.

“yeah share it to us, we are busy editing the audio and also Kim called us and said payment will be send tomorrow and thank you for your hard work” as jurina corresponded.

“I got to go to my room and have a rest” I said while looking down and went straight to her room.

“wait atsuko we need to talk about what happen” miichan asked as they want to clear their thoughts in mind and know the exact reason.

“not now please, can we do it tomorrow? I need to be alone to think” I requested

“but” yuko replied

“please, just for now, I’m begging you guys” I said with a lower voice trying to hold back my tears as I was really confused.

“alright! We will be waiting at the time you already wanted to open up. We are just here for you please don’t forget that. Mariko approved as she saw me that is really bothered.

“thank you” I said and headed straight to my own room.

“what happened? And what is with those expressions you are wearing? Jurina asked with curiosity

“you left this house normal but you came back being weird” mayuyu said

“we will know it when by the time she will open up to us and the two of you, you don’t need or have to know what happened when you deactivated the recording” yukiriin said while her black aura is vanishing.

“we have to rest now guys, it’s been a long tiring day for us” miichan told them as she don’t want to discuss about what happened

I heard their conversation but I immediately get inside to my room as I heard their footsteps. I went straight to my bed and lay. I used the quite evening atmosphere to think. Questioning myself like who really am I? I didn’t know that this scar in my wrist is really a big part of my past. That a big clue or hint to an unsolved mystery. I tried to remember but I can’t. How, where, and why did I have this? Until something pop outs in my mind.

“ehhh?what was that? The image is unclear, a girl holding a cutter, was the girl me? I whispered making me totally confused as a sudden memory appeared.

There is something lacking in my memories. That like I’m sent to the future without knowing all my past. That I must find the missing piece of a puzzle that will lead to the real me. Suddenly my head hurts as I saw a flash of light and heard some beep from a car.

“aahhh” as I scream because of the pain

I heard somebody open the door and said

“aachan are you ok? oi are you ok? Answer me!” I heard kojima’s voice

“what happened?” I heard everyone’s voice as they quickly went in my room because of my scream.

Their voice slowly and slowly disappeared and I collapsed.

TBC....

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 :panic: aachan's past.
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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
« Reply #43 on: November 25, 2011, 07:26:19 PM »
Haha.. it's okay :lol:
Hm.. I wonder what happened :?
I'm really curious.. :banghead:

Please Update Soon :bow:
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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
« Reply #44 on: November 25, 2011, 07:37:26 PM »
OMG! Did she killed someone??? O_o

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« Reply #45 on: November 25, 2011, 07:42:06 PM »
yagami: hahaha curious again? atleast we knew a little thing about her past
kahem: hmmm i think her scar in the wrist will give you an answer? lol -spoiler- hahaha.
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« Reply #46 on: November 25, 2011, 07:48:31 PM »
Yea.. XD
Although it seems to be sad :cry:
I'm a curious person :P

I wonder who is the one talking with Acchan's dad on the phone :?
And about the accident and Acchan's scar on her wrist... :cry: seems sad...
I also wonder what Erena knows and is hiding away from Acchan and..
What happen to Acchan when it seems like some memory is coming back to her.. (wait... it seems like Acchan has lost some of her memory??!!! :shocked)
Haha.. so many questions in my head :nervous but I demand for the answers!!! XD
And I'll be expecting you to supply me with the answers through your fic 8)

So Please Update Soon :mon cute:

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« Reply #47 on: November 25, 2011, 07:53:45 PM »
yagami: wow a lot of questions you have there huh. hahaha. i'm still not in the mood on writing the fic lol but i will try later coz i'm making another series lol.^_^.
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« Reply #48 on: November 25, 2011, 07:56:22 PM »
Haha.. :lol:
It's okay I'll wait XD
And I'll also be looking forward to your next work 8) :peace:

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« Reply #49 on: November 26, 2011, 12:15:35 AM »
Poor Acchan!

I wonder if it's the same girl from Majisuka Gakuen that stabbed Gekikara and Center
but this version it's Acchan :P

Just my imagination running wild  :panic:

I'm happy that Erena is in this fic...I kind a miss her since she left AKB  but I'm glad that she's back into the business entertainment again...
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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 04)
« Reply #50 on: November 26, 2011, 01:12:25 AM »
wohohohohohoho.... u update bunny bear~  XD XD XD

okay, i will make your request but be patient...  :grin: :grin: :grin:

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« Reply #51 on: December 03, 2011, 12:50:27 AM »
Chapter 05

*THE NEXT MORNING* Aachan's POV

“miichan stop running in the hallway, you might wake up others” Mariko shouted

“naaah I’m hungry” miichan answered

I woke up because of the noise while I saw tomotomo duo sleeping inside my room but when I tried to move tomochin woke up.

“oh goodmorning tomochin” I said while on the other hand tomo~mi also woke up.

“good morning aachan how are you feeling now?” tomochin replied

“I’m fine now, thank you for the concern” I said with a smile.

“we are worried about you because you suddenly collapsed last night” tomo~mi said in a low tone

“well I’ll explain to you guys later what happened, let’s go down and eat our breakfast, I bet everyone is already awake” I told them while standing up.
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*WNA KITCHEN*

“good morning Aachan and tomotomo” rena voiced out

“breakfast is ready now” jurina said

Everyone gathered in the dining table to have their breakfast. It’s early in the morning and the ambiance is still quite until I broke the silence.

“uhmm, I apologized for what happened last night” I said while bowing my head

“it is fine now, we are just really surprise of what happened” miichan replied with a smile

“you can ask any question to clear your thoughts, and I’ll answer it” I stated as I know that there are lots of questions inside their head floating.

“are you sure? I mean there is no hurry for explaining yourself you know” mariko responded

“yeah I’m sure, after all I don’t want to hide anything from you guys” I answered

“if you say so” yukirin said while continuing eating her breakfast.

“alright, let me ask you first, what is bothering you? I mean you are not with your usual self, to tell you honestly, you are scary now, we don’t know what you are thinking, like you are full of mystery” kojima stated while other members look at her with an impressed look.

“WoW” yuko responded

“hey what’s with the wow yuko!?” kojima exclaimed

“I think yuko was just surprised coz she always think you are airheaded ohhh not she always think but WE always think hahaha but now we change our mind, your question gives us nosebleed” miichan said teasingly as everybody laugh out loud.

“good that all of you got back to your usual self” mayuyu the cyborg said with a relief

“as you remember, I went to our house last week to get some money for the equipment and to see also my little sister” I answered

“uhmm,last week??   Ahhh yeah, then? Is it the reason why you are acting so weird? What happened?” yukirin asked

“yes, it’s just that I heard something from my father” I replied as I explain all the details of what had happened and heard about my father’s conversation.

“WHAT? You got an accident? When? You never told us about it before” rena shouted

“hey minimize your voice” jurina said with annoyance

“oh sorry I was just surprise” rena responded

“that is the problem, I really don’t know about the accident, I can’t remember about it at all, I tried but I can’t” I said with continuation “and I think this will be your fist time seeing this but I think it will help about my past”  I wear off my wristband a show them the scar.

“did you tried committing suicide? Tomochin asked with her eyes widened O.o

“I don’t know, that is why I’m revealing this to you guys so you can help me find the missing piece of my past, I mean we are like a family here and we spent 6 months already living in the same house, if you have any idea about my past could you tell me? I told them as I really need someone to help me.

“as far as I or we remember, thing that we knew about your past was you moved here in Akihabara from Hokkaido last year because your mother died of an illness” mayuyu said

“moving here will give you a fresh start that is your father’s reason, but you hate him so much because he is always busy on his work and he has no time for you. He always sees you like a stranger; he only acted as a father in giving you a financial support. Yukirin continued as what mayuyu said

“you also hate him because he took your mother for granted and after moving here you established this house for teenagers like us” tomo~mi answered

“but I think mariko knew something, well the two of you established this WNA and you’re also relative to each other” yuko responded

“me???ahhm??      ohh right! Speaking of it, it is unusual that your father decided to move here. It was the first time that he communicated with me and asked if I could live with you aachan in this house. Since I’m blood related to your mother but not to your father. I accepted the offer coz he promised that he will pay all our needs but that is all that I know nothing more nothing less sorry. Mariko apologized.

“ohh I see, I think I’m the only one who can solved this thing, I’m sorry for bothering you guys” I told them as they really can’t give the answer that I was searching.

TING TING TING EXCUSE ME BOSS YOU HAVE NEW E-MAIL

“jurina can you please check the laptop coz there is someone who e-mailed us” kojima stated and jurina went straight to living room to found out if there is one.

“we have a new request guys and I think we really have to take actions with it” jurina yelled so that everybody can hear them

Everyone finished their breakfast and went towards the living room. Mariko read the letter.

To WNA, can you please revenge me with the guys from paper heart agency? They tried to harass me and dragged me in a dark place. They even said that they wanted me to be part of their girl group that they will introduce to public as soon as possible. I tried begging them because I know what really their plan was but they won’t let me go home until I said yes. They tried to rape me too but luckily someone helped me and said her name is Erena. She said she is a member of this team and gives me a card where your website is written. I tried to tell my brother about it but no words came out in my mouth. I also can’t say this to my parents coz I’m afraid they will not believe me as they sees me as a boyish chubby girl. Hope I can get your approval

P.S= I heard rumors about this agency being a scam, they asked teenager girls who wanted to be a singer to join them to achieve their dreams without knowing that they will end up being a prostitute in a club which I don’t know the name.
    
Sincerely, Takahashi Myao

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so got a hint now how the rebel will meet mr.nice? lol. and i'm sorry if this chapter is short and the development of the whole story is soooo soooo slow :kneelbow:







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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 05)
« Reply #52 on: December 03, 2011, 02:06:41 AM »
Yea! Update :w00t:

Takahashi Myao.. :shocked
So Myao is Takamina's sister!!! :w00t:

Oh! So they take this request and it could be how Acchan will meet Takamina!!! XD

Please Update Soon :mon cute:
Can't wait to read more XD

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« Reply #53 on: December 03, 2011, 03:29:02 AM »
Yay update.  :twothumbs Thank you.

ohho. The last part is very interesting.

I wonder when they'll meet.

Thank you once again. Can't wait for your next update.

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« Reply #54 on: December 06, 2011, 07:11:13 PM »
Oh I see. Next part would be really interesting, can't wait ^^

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« Reply #55 on: January 10, 2012, 04:40:06 PM »
Chapter 06

*1 DAY EARLIER*-ON KAI’S SIDE AFTER MEETING MAEDA ERENA

“This WNA really bothered me but I guess it’s just a famous bar pin” I thought while giving up my curiosity about the bar pin.
It was already night and I have to go home before dinner. When I was about to go inside our house I saw my sister crying.

“hey myao what is wrong? What happened?” I asked worriedly

“it’s ……”

“it’s what?” I asked as she didn’t continue her words

“n n n nothing, and even if I tell you, you will not believe me” she replied coldly

“I will believe in you, I’m your brother, and I care for you” I exclaimed

“I’ll tell you about it when I’m ready. And besides you also have your own problems” she responded and run quickly inside our house.

“I have my own problems? Ohh yah, I don’t have money for my tuition fee, I don’t have girlfriend and I don’t even know what WNA is. I muttered and paused for a minute and think “ehh is that what they call problem? i don’t think so”

We are about having our dinner as my sister didn’t come out to her room.

“Kai can you call your little sister and tell her that dinner is ready” father asked

“alright” I responded
I went upstairs and knocked her door.

KNOCK!KNOCK!

“who’s there?” she replied

“it’s Kai” I said

“Kai who?” she asked

“uhmm, Kai the most handsome guy in the world, the nicest person you have met, and the best brother of yours who is damn worried about you” I answered back

She opened the door. I saw her red eyes (it must be the effect of crying nonstop) I tried to step closer to her but she step backward with fear. I tried to hug my little sister so that she can feel that she is safe but before I take the action she said something

“sorry, but I’m not yet hungry, can you please leave me alone for now and please just make the excuse why I’m not hungy” she begged

“alright, I’m just here if you need me ok?” I agreed and close her door.

I was worried what happen to my sister, but I have to wait until she wanted to speak about it. I must respect her decision for now and I must think of an excuse why she is not hungry.

*MYAO’s POV* (note I here = Myao)

I was lying in my bed crying. Forgetting what happened previously but I can’t. It is already part of my painful past. I cried and cried while punching my teddy bear until I remember something. Something that a girl gave me after that incident happened.

+FLASHBACK+

“Hi miss, why are you alone? Do you want to have some fun? “A scary guy said as he approached me along with his 2 friends.

“sorry I have to go” I said with a fear in my voice

As I tried to walk away the two men dragged me in a dark area.

“if you will do what we want, you will have a chance to become a star as we are recruiting new members of this girl group ” the other man said with a grin giving me a calling card.

As I saw what is written (Paper Heart Agency) my heart beat faster. I heard a lot of rumors about paper heart recruiting teenager girls. Telling them that if they signed up to their agency their showbiz dream will come true. But it wasn’t true, their real motive is to gather a lot of fresh teenager girls and send them into a night club making them a prostitute.

“I refuse” I yelled and run away

The men didn’t let me escape. The one man punched my stomach and let me lay down in the ground. 

“if you refused then I have no choice but to do this” the perverted man said

The two men hold my hands and feet. The other man tried to take his move and tried to rape me. His face is getting nearer and nearer to my neck and I don’t have the strength to pull him instead I just closed my eyes praying that a hero will save me. After few seconds nothing happened, I opened my eyes and saw a girl the same age as me fighting with the 3 men. She is so good, like a black belter martial artist. It only took her 3 minutes to knock down all of the pervert men. She gave her hand and tried helping me to stand.

“nice timing, and by the way are you ok?” she asked me while wiping my face with her handkerchief

“t t thank you for saving me” I replied as my tears fall down

“shhh, everything is fine now, do you want me to call your parents? Or do you want me to send you home?” she asked me with concern

“please don’t call my parents, just call my brother instead. It’s Takahashi Kai” I replied and give my cellphone to her. She dialed it but no one answer instead she always sent to the voice mail area.

“oh your brother is not picking up my call, well I guess I have to send you home if it’s alright?” she stated

“I can go home by myself and I already caused you so much trouble besides I want to be alone to think” I responded, I’m shy to accept her offer especially to the scene she saw.

“well if you say so, ahh and by the way if you don’t have someone whom you can talk to or share what happened, here I’ll give you this card” she said while wearing a bright face that makes me feel that I’m safe now

“WNA? I read what is written

“yeah, it is wild night atmosphere. They will surely help you especially when you want to take revenge. My sister is part of that group and I’m their finance secretary. Feel free to write us an e-mail” she stated

“I have to go now, see you around and please be extra careful next time, I might not be able to save you for the second time around” she said as she walked away

“ what is your name?” I shouted quickly so that she can hear me

“ ERENA, MAEDA ERENA” she responded as she waved goodbye

*END OF FLASHBACK*

It was already 11 o’clock in the evening and I was staring the card that Erena gave me. I open my laptop and search for the website. I was thinking if this website is a scam or not but I trust Erena and I want to take revenge badly. I filled all the details that they needed and after few minutes a new topic was posted.

“To Kim – Evidence no. 89” I whispered as I read the title of the new topic

I click the topic and I hear a voice.

““ a a a a alright, I admit it, I’m having an affair with a girl from the unlimited night club for 1 year already. I betrayed my wife my family. But who cares? You kids can’t do anything about it and what is this? Do you think you are good enough by doing this? Do you think people will acknowledge you? You are just a trash in society”

I was shocked of what I heard. Erena is really telling the truth. This website really helps us teenagers who suffered some pain or bad memories because of some bad adults.

“I must send an e-mail, hope they can read it and accept it” I murmured but when I’m about to type on my keypad somebody knock at my door. I quickly turn my laptop off and put the card beside it.

“Myao you have to sleep now, you still have a class tomorrow” mother voiced out

“yes mom” I said nervously. I turned off the lights and lay down in my bed.

“sigh! I’ll just get up early in the morning tomorrow to send WNA a request e-mail” I thought while I close my eyes and sleep.

*The Next Morning*

         To WNA, can you please revenge me with the guys from paper heart agency? They tried to harass me and dragged me in a dark place. They even said that they wanted me to be part of their girl group that they will introduce to public as soon as possible. I tried begging them because I know what really their plan was but they won’t let me go home until I said yes. They tried to rape me too but luckily someone helped me and said her name is Erena. She said she is a member of this team and gives me a card where your website is written. I tried to tell my brother about it but no words came out in my mouth. I also can’t say this to my parents coz I’m afraid they will not believe me as they sees me as a boyish chubby girl. Hope I can get your approval
P.S= I heard rumors about this agency being a scam, they asked teenager girls who wanted to be a singer to join them to achieve their dreams without knowing that they will end up being a prostitute in a club which I don’t know the name.
                                                                                 
                                                                                                     
Sincerely, Takahashi Myao

I click the send button after I’m done typing my message to WNA.

“YATA! I’m done, hope they will accept it” I said with a sigh of relief.
After few minutes, a message appears.

“ From WNA
   Thank you for your request. You are currently our customer number 90. Please do fill up this form below and print it. Put your picture in the space given and also your signature. Please send us the hard copy of the documents. Hope you will do it now because we still have a lot of request. If you fail to send us the copy today, you will not be given a second chance. If we already have the hard copy, please wait for our mail/text as we will inform you the date and time of revenge. Thank you :)

                                                                                                                         

                                                                                                                                                                                                             
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Name:
 Age:
 Location:
 Telephone/cellphone no:
                 Please put your signature in the Customer’s signature as a proof that you agreed to our terms of condition and regulations that you read earlier when you were signing up to our website.
             
                                                                                                                                                                                                 
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“yes! They accepted it. Lucky I have one 2x2 picture left inside my wallet” I said while heading to fill up the documents. After few minutes I printed it out and sign it with my signature.

“alright, it’s done” I muttered as I put the documents in an envelope with their address.

I went to the nearest post office telling them that they need to send this documents I’m holding because it is urgent. They made me choose their special delivery which will take 30 minutes to 1 hour delivering my mail. I paid for it even though it is quite expensive.

“my cellphone, where is my cellphone?” I stated while searching for it

“shit! I left it at home” I murmured. I check the time but it’s already 7:50

“geez, what a wrong timing, I have a test today so I can’t be late, I’ll just go home early” I thought as I went towards the direction of our school. 

*KAI’s POV*

Knock! Knock!

As I’m trying to check my sister’s condition

Knock!knock!

Still no one answer. I’m worried of what she might do and decided to open her door.

“eh? She is not here and she forgot to bring her cellphone” I thought while walking near to her study table.

“well, maybe I’ll just drop it by at her school since it’s on the way to the café and I’m also in the afternoon shift” I whispered as I get her cellphone something has fallen. It was like a calling card or something and I pick it up. I read was it is written.

“ WNA (Wild Night Atmosphere).. eh?? Don’t tell me?” i said with a surprised tone as my question was answered about WNA. The phone I was holding vibrated and it received 1 message. I read it with a low voice

“we already got the documents, the revenge will be this evening 8 o’clock” the unknown sender texted.

My heart beats faster as I read the message. A lot of thoughts are floating inside my head. I was nervous if my sister is part of this group, or she did something wrong to them and they gonna revenge her tonight. I immediately search for the address which written down in the card. I run straight towards the given address while calling Sae telling him that I can’t come to the café. After few minutes of running I arrived at the place. It was western style 2 story house. I pressed the doorbell while catching my breath.

“who are you?” a girl’s voice asked

“I’m Kai, Takahashi Kai” I replied

“sorry but we don’t know you, and as far as I remember we don’t have an appointment with that name” she said

“I’m Takahashi Myao’s brother, I just want to clear things out” I responded

“Takahashi Myao? Ohh number 90, alright come in” she said as she pressed something that make the gate open automatically.

I got inside and saw a bunch of teenage girls, 11 to be exact with the beautiful-evil-hunger-for-blood girl sitting in the couch reading a book.

“come in shorty” a tall girl with a short hair said(mariko) while others stares at me stopping what they are doing

“thank you, and please don’t call me shorty, I already know that” I said jokingly while trying to hide my annoyed face

“sorry but this is our territory shorty, so you must accept the nickname we had given to you” the long brown curly hair (tomochin) which I met before in the café, the one who kicked the garbage bag, stated

“so what is your reason of coming here shorty?” a short girl but definitely taller than me (yuko) asked

“what do you want with my sister, and what is with this message, are you the one who send it, is she part of this group?” I asked directly showing them the message while I’m already pissed off hearing them saying shorty in front of my face. The forbidden word that makes my blood boiled.

“hahaha, what is with that question shorty? You don’t know anything, do you? And your sister is not part of us as we are not recruiting new members” a girl with black aura (yukirin) said teasingly

“I can’t hold it anymore! You! Bunch of delinquents or rebellious teenage girls beating up adults, stop calling me shorty and also if you do something about my sister, I will not forgive you. And thanks God she is not part of this crap group or else she will end up like a trash in society” I yelled with anger as I can’t hold it anymore.

I look up to them with my eyes wide opened. I was carried away with my emotions; I said too much, too much painful words. I saw their angry, shocked faces until someone stood up and voiced out.

“heh, thank you for entering our territory and destroying our mood. For your information, we are not planning to hurt or do something stupid to your sister. She is the one who needs our help. And what the heck! Do you call yourself her brother? Damn it, you don’t know anything about what happened to her yesterday and you have the guts showing your face here and telling that words? Yes we are rebellious, we are stubborn, we left our houses and we beat up those fvcking unreliable, untrustworthy, and a bad role model adults but you don’t have the rights to call us a trash in society. You don’t know us, you don’t know a single thing about this CRAP GROUP and please don’t judge us” the beautiful-evil-hunger-for-blood girl said with anger and walked out, headed to the second floor of the house.

“before saying all those hurtful words, please know about the real situation” the girl with a long black hair(mayuyu) approached while letting me see what is written on the laptop.

I read what is written in the laptop. They are right I judged them without knowing their real motive. I was so angry about myself for telling those hurtful words to them, angry for not protecting my own sister.

“I’m so sorry for the rude words I said earlier” I said while bowing my head

“we are used to it already but still it hurts” kojima stated

“yeah it’s sad that everyone judge us even though it’s the very first time that they meet or see us” miichan voiced out

“ and I’m part of that ‘everyone’, I’m embarrassed because people said I’m nice but I ended up judging you. I’m really sorry” I bowed feeling guilty

“ damage has been done” jurina replied

“you can go now Mr. nice guy coz we still have lots of things to do” tomo~mi said

“but I want to help you. I want to have a revenge for my sister also and to pay for my wrong judgments about your group. Please let me help you” I begged

“ we don’t want another luggage in our shoulders” rena responded

“I will not be a burden to you, I just want to take revenge for my sister” I said

“do what you want but don’t you ever be a burden to us” mariko approved

“yes, I won’t, definetly” I responded while bowing.

I watched them prepared their things for tonight’s work. I’m a bit nervous as this is my first time fighting bad guys.

“alright let’s go” atsuko said while giving me a scary stare

We went to the location. They are like professionals in fighting. They beaten up the guys but there is one that call some backups. A bunch of guys immediately comes to the rescue and the girls are slightly tired already. Yes, I’m not burden to them coz I’m hiding somewhere because of fear until

“hey look out, at your back” I shouted

She didn’t hear me and continue punching the guy who was lying on the ground. I run towards her and protect her from the guy who was about to hit her using a metal tube.

“hey are you ok, you’re bleeding, oi wake up, wake up!” she shouted as I’m about to lose my consciousness

“aachan and mariko take him to the van, we can handle this” Yuki shouted and beat the guy who hits me.


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sorry if this chapter is not good.

BTW i will take a break writing fics for now as i have so many things to do with my life lol.
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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
« Reply #56 on: January 10, 2012, 05:04:00 PM »
Yay~ Update.
Wow this chapter is very interesting.
The bad guys had back up.  :thumbdown:
Poor Kai, I hope he's okay. i wonder who'll be taking care of him?
Thank you can't wait for your next update.  :thumbsup

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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
« Reply #57 on: January 10, 2012, 05:35:13 PM »
Yea!! Update!! I've been waiting for this :D
Oh~ Kai went to WNA and want to help them :lol:
I wonder who Kai defended XD and I hope nothing too much will happen to him :)
Yea, I also wonder who will be taking care of Kai XD

Thanks a lot for the update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute: No matter how long, I'll still wait :thumbsup

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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
« Reply #58 on: January 11, 2012, 05:58:27 AM »
OMG!!! good chapter

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Re: [KaiAachan]. When REBEL meets NICE (CHAPTER 06) update 1/10/12
« Reply #59 on: January 11, 2012, 09:57:05 PM »
Waaa! You updated!

 :panic: ErenaxMyao!  *yes! Erena was so cool here saving Myao...

Nooo Kai!

Thank you for your update!

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:
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