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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #100 on: June 04, 2012, 04:12:56 PM »
when will everyone find out the Ren is Rena !!!!!!!!?????????

i love this fic espically how Yuko and Takamian are pervs ahahaha

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #101 on: June 10, 2012, 05:32:57 PM »
I read this Fics All Over again...and Still Excited for the next chapter....

I just Realized that

YUN = Yuki + Ren

REKI = Ren + Yuki

Am I right ???
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After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 1 update!!!] June 10
« Reply #102 on: June 11, 2012, 04:05:19 AM »
Hey!  :mon hi: I'm back!! haha.  :twisted:
Thank you to everyone who has left thank yous and to those who took the time to write those lovely and encouraging comments. :kneelbow:
And xxx220 you're right about
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YUN = Yuki + Ren
REKI = Ren + Yuki
 
I'm also thinking about having Yuki discover that Ren is Rena but I'll make that fun. hehe.  :ding: :mon devcandy: Don't know when I'll do it though hehe. Anyways here's the chapter hope you all enjoy it. Sorry if it's too short.  :mon sweat:


Chapter 11 Part 1

While Ren and everyone on the way to the house, inside the house.
“Jurina!!! Catch that lil demon!!!”
“I’m trying Mayuyu!!! Kumi!!Reki!!! Get something to tie him up!!”
“Reki, you really are Yuki’s son!!” Kumi cheered when Reki returned pulling a kid wagon with chains inside.
“Thanx.” He smiled.
“hey, he even brought chains to chain Yun.” Mayu said holding the chains up.
“Great! Let’s go!” Jurina said grabbing a chain.
 “Wait! Aish can’t she wait until we make a plan?” Mayu said shaking her head.
“No, you know how she is.” Kumi stated. “Let’s go Mayu and Reki, we need to chain that monster before he does anything else.” They started chasing Yun.
So far Reki was the only one who could keep up with him. “Yun! Stop! I won’t hurt you!” Reki shouted while chasing Yun.
“Really?” Yun stopped and looked at Reki.
“Yes, I swear. I’ll only get even with you for tying me up to the bed post.” Reki deadpanned while pouncing on Yun with the chains.
“Oi! Get off me!” Yun shouted struggling under Reki.
“No! You need to be punished!”
“No!”
“Midget stay still!!” Reki shouted trying to chain Yun.
“Who you calling midget?! Lilliputian!” Yun shouted turning the tables on Reki who’s now under him.
“Itsy-bitsy!” Reki shouted rolling over.
“itty-bitty!”
“diminutive!!” Yun shouted.
“Miniature!!!”
“manikin!!” Yun bit Reki ear.
“Small!!!” Reki shouted head butted Yun.
“Immature!!!” Yun shouted taking the chains from Reki.
“Premature!!” Reki shouted.
“Say what?!!!” Kumi, Mayu, and Jurina shouted. (note: They have been standing there watching the two this whole time.)
While Reki and Yun fought
“Hey, doesn’t this kinda remind you of Yuko and Minami?” Kumi asked.
“Yeah, cuz their both small.” Mayuyu replied.
“But what’s got me more interested is that these two uses such big words against each while Yuko and Minami just use the word midget.” Jurina reasoned.
“True, but where the hell they these two learn such words?” Mayuyu asked.
“no idea.”
“Immature!!” Yun shouted.
“Premature!!” Reki shouted.
“Say what?!!!” They shouted at Reki last statement.
 When they turned they found Yun finishing on tying Reki up to a wooden chair.

“haha, see. As if you could beat me. And what’s up premature?”
“What’s up with immature?”
“Loser.” Yun said before running away from the ‘three babysitters.’
“Hey! Get back here!” they shouted.
“Hahahaha! Catch me if you can! Hahaha!!!.” Yun laughed running around. Kumi had cornered Yun after a while of running and was close to catching him when Yun suddenly charged and tackled Kumi’s right leg which caused her to fall.
Taking this chance to escape Yun ran up the stair towards Ren’s room but made a sudden u-turn towards the stairs when he saw Mayuyu in front of Ren’s room.

Ren, Yuki arrived first followed by the van where the others were in.
“Ren, can you please tell me what’s going on?” Yuki asked with concerned.
“I don’t know.” Ren said walking towards the door.
“Ren, why do we have a bad feeling about this?” Minami and Yuko whispered to Ren on both his sides (Yuko left, Minami right) when he put his hand on the door knob.
“He knows my secret.” He whispered back.
“Oh no.” They both said a little scared. And Ren opened the door.

“PAPA!!!! I want papa!!” Yun yelled running around the house while being chased by both Center and Nezumi.
“This kid is getting on my nerves.” Nezumi hissed while running after Yun.
“I wonder how the hell Ren could keep up with him.” Center said out of breathe while resting on the floor next to Kumi and Nazumi with a still tied up Reki.
“WHAT’S THE MEANING OF THIS!!!!” An angry voice boomed through the entire house. Frightening everyone.



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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #103 on: June 11, 2012, 04:34:12 AM »
thankyou so much for the update  :twothumbs i wish they would be a little longer tho anyways thankyou  :kneelbow: keep up the good work please update soon  :onioncheer:  and more renyuki please  :luvluv1:  :luvluv2: im in love with them lol  :lol: i love this fic your the best !!!  :peace: out ! 

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #104 on: June 11, 2012, 10:42:19 AM »
KYAAAAAAAA~!!!  :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: *TOTALLY in a fangirl mode* Ren must sound soooooo sexy in that mad voice of his/hers  :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: And those kids... They are beyond the words AWESOME, though.... Their vocabulary....  :mon nyah:

Anyway, I soooooooooooo will be waiting for your next update!!!!!

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #105 on: June 11, 2012, 03:02:25 PM »
AWESOME Fics...  :on GJ: :on GJ:

Yun is Pretty Naughty :nya:

Poor Reki getting tied up on a Wooden Chair

NOOOO REN WILL BE MAD AT YUN  :frustrated:

I think Yun and Reki learn this Word from Yuko and Minami while they babysitting them cause they always Fight  :glasses:

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“Midget stay still!!” Reki shouted trying to chain Yun.
“Who you calling midget?! Lilliputian!” Yun shouted turning the tables on Reki who’s now under him.
“Itsy-bitsy!” Reki shouted rolling over.
“itty-bitty!”
“diminutive!!” Yun shouted.
“Miniature!!!”
“manikin!!” Yun bit Reki ear.
“Small!!!” Reki shouted head butted Yun.
“Immature!!!” Yun shouted taking the chains from Reki.
“Premature!!” Reki shouted.

YUN AND REKI ARE AWESOME  :shifty:

PLEASE CONTINUED MORE CHAPTER !!! :on lol:
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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #106 on: June 11, 2012, 04:46:16 PM »
omg an update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY IM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YAYAYAYYYYYYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA HAPPY DANCE  :yossi: :cow: :otomerika: AYAYYYYYAYAYAYAYAYAY

fun chapter i need morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lol

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #107 on: June 11, 2012, 06:14:03 PM »
The fight between Reki and Yin is so cute lol

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #108 on: June 13, 2012, 10:48:35 PM »

Sok-san:w00t:


Hahaahha Yun and Reki equals epic.

Poor Kumi,Mayu and even Jurina with her high stamina couldn't keep up with these kids.
Ah I wonder how Yuki will discover "Rens" secret...hopefully that would be in a amusing way  XD

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #109 on: June 14, 2012, 05:44:49 PM »
please update soon  :cow:

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After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #110 on: June 22, 2012, 07:44:41 PM »
OH MY GOD!!!
I just found out that There will be a Majisuka Gakuen 3.  :mon wtf:  :mon crazyinlove:
And it's set in PRISON!!!   :mon mad: :mon fyeah: :mon cigar: :mon star:
Which will start to air on July.  :mon roll:
WOW~  :mon XD: :mon trudge: :mon beam:
Shows how much I haven't stayed in tune to AKB48 & SKE48 news lately. :mon cry:
But there's no way I will miss that!!!  :mon yo:


Sorry,  :mon sweat: Just got a little crazy.  :mon fu:



Anyways, I'll try and update by this week. Peace!!  :mon bye:


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After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 2 update!!!] June 25
« Reply #111 on: June 25, 2012, 08:20:21 PM »
Hey everyone I'm back with another update!!  :on lol: Like promised.
Thank you for all your comments and thank yous. I hope Part 2 is long enoungh for you.  :nervous

Chapter 11 Part2

“REN-PAPA!!!” Yun ran and hugged Ren’s legs. “Oh! WMidgets!!” Yun waved at Yuko and Minami with a smirk on his cute lil face.
“Oh no.” They both said and looked at Ren. “Please tell us this is a joke.” With a worried face.
 “Ren, what’s going on?” Mariko and the rest of the girls asked seeing the lil boy hugging Ren’s legs.
“MAMA!!” Reki voiced.
“OMG! Baby!” In a flash Yuki untied and inspected Reki to see if there were any injuries.
“Mama, that kid*sniff* evil *sniff* waaahaaa!” Reki said while he cried pointing at Yun. 
“Papa, he big meanie.” Yun pouted sadly and pointed at Reki.
“Hey! Would anyone care to explain what’s going on here?” Acchan and Tomochin yelled.
“Oh, that kid next to Ren is his son, Yun.” Mayu stated in an angry tone.
“What?!!!” Everyone shouted except Mayu, Jurina and Kumi since they already knew.
“Oh no!” Wmidget said after realizing something.
“What?” Everyone asked confused looking at them.
“Reki’s biting Yun’s ear.” Yuko deadpanned watching the two kids.
“And Yun’s biting Reki’s shoulder.” Minami stated.
“They seem to like each other.” Ren smiled. All the women turned to him with a What-the-hell? Are-you-crazy? Don’t-you-see-they’re-trying-eat-each-other.
Well all except Yuko. “That’s my boy!” Excitedly said with a perverted grin.
“Excuse me.” Minami said and dragged Yuko by her ear to another room. Few second later it’s dead silent.
“Papa!” Two voices called out.
“Yes, Yun? And Reki I’m not your dad.” Reki became sad and hugged Yun bearing his face into his shoulder.
“Papa!” Yun softly spoke.
“Yes, Yun?” Ren softly spoke kneeing down in front of Yun who’s still hugging Reki.
“I want him as a brother.” Yun gently stated turning Reki around so he also faced Ren.
“Yun, I…”
“Please~” He begged giving Ren his cutest puppy eyes along with Reki who cutely pouted with his big whole eyes staring at Ren.
“AW~ CUTE~” All the girls.
All sudden the doors burst. “Yuki can be your mama!” Yuko stated gently grabbing Yun’s shoulder but then tackled to the ground.
“Stop that!” Minami shouted.
“No!!”
“Why not?!” (They were now rolling on the ground. While the others just watched.)
“They’re cute! And they…” SMACK!!!! Yuko landed unconscious on top of Minami.
“That’s enough. Get off MY Minami” Acchan shouted throwing Yuko on the ground and dragging Minami to one of the guest rooms.
“Help! Help! Ren! Help me~” Door slammed closed.
 “Papa, she scary.” Yun stated while Reki nodded looking at where Acchan entered with Minami. “I sort of feel bad for Auntie.”
“Ugh~ My head.” Yuko whined rubbing her smacked head.
“Anyways.” Ren said looking around. Wow~ seems like a tornado came in here and destroyed the whole living room. I’m guessing Yun did all this with a little of Reki’s help. *smiles* Reminds me of when I was a little kid. how I used to cause so much trouble for my maids and bulters. *smiles* But I still have to punish him for this. *evil smirk* “Yun, how about we go to the beach?”
“Huh? Beach? What’s that papa?” Yun asked curious.
“Ren-papa what’s a beach?” Reki asked also curious.
Sigh. No matter what I do or say Reki’ll call me papa. Might as well let him don’t want him giving hints to the others, like he's been doing. “Reki, Yun the beach is somewhere where people go to cool off and enjoy themselves.”
“Yeah, families go to the beach to have fun.” Jurina said.
“Families?” Yun and Reki said looking at her.
“Yeah!” Kumi replied.
“Hey how about we all go to the beach tomorrow?” Yuko shouted excited.
“I agree, we don’t start working until Monday. So we have 3 free days.” Acchan said fixing her clothes.
“Where’s Takamina?” Mariko, TomoTomo, Kumi, Mayuyu, Jurina and Yuki asked.
“Sleeping.” Acchan stated with a sweet smile.
“Rrrreeennnn~ Heeeelllllpppp mmeeeee ppppllleeeeaaasssseee~”
“Oh! Seems she’s awake now. So we’ll be going to the beach tomorrow, we’ll leave at 8:45 am. Bye~” Acchan stated closing the door.
“Okay, so that settles that. Let’s go to sleep.” Haruna said dragging Ren to a guest room.
“Hey! Where you taking Papa!” Yun and Reki shouted running after Haruna but were too late since Haruna closed the door on them.
“MAMA!” Reki shouted looking at Yuki with teary eyes.
“What’s wrong sweet?” She asked putting him up.
“Why did she take papa?” Reki asked crying softly.
“I don’t know.”
“Reki?” Yun called out.
“Yes *sniff* Yun?”
“She’s your mama?” Yun said pointing at Yuki.
“Yes.” Reki beamed.
“Beautiful! Can I call you mama?” Yun asked showing Yuki his adorable puppy eyes.
“Y-yes. Sure, why not?” Yuki stuttered blush a little. Why do his eyes look so much like Rena’s?
“Yeah!” Reki jumped down landing on Yun.
“Hey, Ren was right.” Tomochin said.
“They do seem to like each other.” Mariko added.
“Mama~” Two voices called.
“Yes?”
“We sleepy~” the two said rubbing their eyes cutely.
“Okay, let’s tuck you in.” Yuki said walking hand in hand with the two.
“Aw~ don’t they make a cute family?” Yuko said.
“Yeah, I wish I had kids, to” Tomomi said hugging Tomochin and nibbling her neck.
“Why don’t you? You have plenty of attractive male models drooling over you.” Tomochin stated annoyed.
“Aw~ is my Tomochin jealous?” Tomomi cutely whined shaking Tomochin’s arm side to side.
“Ha! As if! you’re nothing to me.” Tomochin stated and walked away. Leaving a teary eyed Tomomi.
“Oh god.” Mariko exclaimed facepalming.
“Shh, it’s okay.”
“Don’t cry Tomomi.”
“Yeah, Tomochin’s not worth it.” The three younger girls said trying to comfort the crying Tomomi.
“Still the same old dense blunt Shibuya.” Yuko exclaimed shaking her head.
“What?” A very red faced Haruna said walking out the room.
“Why is your face red?” Jurina asked.
“Where’s Ren?” Mayu asked.
“I’m here.” Ren stated coming out the room.
Tomomi stopped crying and looking at the two. “What did you two do in there?”
“OMG!!!! Don’t tell me!” Yuko shouted.
“Not what you think.” Ren stated.
“I simply gave him a massage.”
“What?! Wait! Nothing more?! Wait, on second thought. That’s great!” Yuko shouted. For a moment there I was totally forgetting that Ren belongs to Yuki. Damn, I need to keep an eye on Haruna. Mmm~ she looks so cute and yummy when she’s blushing. Wait? What am I thinking? You were thinking Haruna’s cute. What?! No! She’s smexy! YEAH!!! Wait, what? Agh!!! My mind’s playing tricks on me. It’s all Acchan’s fault. Yeah! That’s it! It’s her fault, if she hadn’t hit me on the head I would have never thought of Haruna in that way. Hope I didn't get any brain damage cuz of her.



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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 2 update!!!] June 25
« Reply #112 on: June 25, 2012, 09:57:51 PM »
Waaaaa~you update yay!! :cow:

AAAAh :angry: What are you doing Haruna with Ren!!

Reki and Yun are so cute . :wub:

Yuki thinks at Rena... kawaiii~. :heart: :heart:
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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 2 update!!!] June 25
« Reply #113 on: June 25, 2012, 10:28:07 PM »
It's been so long...
Reki and Yun are so adorable.  :wriggly:

I wonder what did Atsuko did to Minami and what did Haruna said to Ren.  :dunno:

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 2 update!!!] June 25
« Reply #114 on: June 26, 2012, 02:55:51 PM »
Hahaha! chaos! Poor Jurina,Mayu and Kumi taking care of those kids.

Wonder what Acchan did to Takamina and I bet that Haruna was going to gice Ren massage and she touches his abs and blushed  :P2

Thank you for your update Sok-san hilariously as always. Waiting for your update of other fics too!

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 2 update!!!] June 25
« Reply #115 on: June 26, 2012, 03:14:18 PM »
agg yukirin very good mother..
lol yuko is jealous

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 2 update!!!] June 25
« Reply #116 on: June 26, 2012, 08:56:19 PM »
THE KIDS ARE SO KAWAIII!!
And yes, Yuko-sama, have more perverted thoughts about Haruna, so KojiYuu can happen!!!
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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 2 update!!!] June 25
« Reply #117 on: June 27, 2012, 03:40:28 AM »
is it okay for me to kidnap those kids? they're so kawai..
Yuko..LOL..


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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 2 update!!!] June 25
« Reply #118 on: June 28, 2012, 12:16:47 AM »
The kids are so cute~
Lol Acchan is scary!
Tomochin how can you make Chiyuu cry?!

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 2 update!!!] June 25
« Reply #119 on: June 28, 2012, 12:32:45 PM »
I remember I started reading this a long while ago =O now there is so many more chapters to read  XD

I guess there is one good thing about being inactive for a while, but the other is.... I have way to much to catch up on....

Thanks for the story, this so crazy Reki and Yun are awesome! Best little monsters ever!!!

Yes you 2 should go bring Ren and Yuki together  :cow:

... not sure if i wanna know what Acchan did.......  :panic:

update soon =)

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