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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 3
« Reply #20 on: January 05, 2012, 12:03:37 PM »
 This is really good :D
Thanks for the update!!!
I love the intetaction between Taka and Acchan XD

Please update soon~~ :mon cute:


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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 3
« Reply #22 on: January 06, 2012, 05:14:07 AM »
awww kojiyuuu :D thanx :D i miss them.. JJAJa now the tsundere is minami wow good role changing like it :D please keep going

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 3
« Reply #23 on: January 07, 2012, 02:06:09 AM »
CHAPTER 4


Both couples already finished their foods and headed their own ways. The two couples took the opposite ways.

"Nee, Minami."
"Hm?"
"I don't want to go home yet, it's still afternoon."
"Who told you that we're going home?" Takamina chuckled.
"Oh, no one." Acchan smiled at her. "Where will we go next?"
"We're going to watch a movie." Takamina said to her and intertwined their hands.

Once again, Acchan blushed and looked at their intertwined hands then she looked at Takamina. Takamina noticed it and looked at Acchan.

"Hm? What's wrong?" Takamina asked.
"N-Nothing." Acchan said and avoided Takamina's eyes.

Takamina just smiled at her. Few minutes later, they arrived in the cinema.

"So, what will we watch?" Acchan asked.
"Hmmm..." Takamina looked at all the now showing movies and decided what to watch. "I like this one." Takamina pointed a horror movie with a scary face on the picture. "Let's watch this."
"Eh?! I don't like horror movies."
"Why?"
"Umm... because... I'm easily scared." Acchan looked on the other side.
"Nahh, that movie is not scary." Takamina said.

After the moments of fighting whether to watch it or not. Acchan already gave in and decided to follow what Takamina wanted.

>> Inside the cinema room (The movie is not yet started) <<

"Minami, I'm scared." Acchan said, clinging onto Takamina's arms.
"Don't be scared." Takamina said. "I'm here, and besides the movie is not yet started."
"Minami, I'll just sleep on your shoulder, okay?" Acchan layed her head onto Takamina's shoulder. "I don't want to watch it." Acchan pouted.
"No, don't sleep." Takamina also layed her head onto Acchan's head which layed on her shoulder. "You need to watch this and we will watch it." Takamina held her hand and intertwined it.
"You know what, Minami?"
"Hm?"
"We look like a couple, if we're like this." Acchan squeezed Takamina's hand which is intertwined to hers.
"Oh, really?" Takamina also squeezed Acchan's hand. "Do we really look like a couple?"
"Yes." Acchan answered.
"Well, it's possible right?" Takamina smiled.
"Eh? What are you saying?"
"Why? You don't want?"
"No, it's not that I don't want." Acchan said shyly. "It's just that... we're both girls."
"So?"
"Eh?" Acchan stared at Takamina.
"We can be a couple." Takamina smiled and looked at her. "If you'll just tell me your feeling for me." Takamina chuckled.
"You're making fun of me again." Acchan hit Takamina's arm softly.
"No, I'm not."
"Yes, you are."
"Hahaha, you love me right?"
"Stop it!"

In the middle of their small fight, the cinema room suddenly burst out a loud sound which means that the movie is already starting.

The movie started with a very creepy background music. All the people we're in silence, the only sound that were heard are those the sound from the movie and the crunching voices of the people eating.

They were in the middle of the movie and it's getting scarier and creepier. Suddenly a said-to-be-ghost in the movie, popped out making not all but many people screamed in fear including Acchan.

"Minami, I'm scared." Acchan hugged Takamina and closed her eyes. "Let's go home."
"Let us finish the movie first." Takamina hugged back the other female. "Or if you don't want to watch, you can just hug me because I know that you love me but you don't admit it."
"Eh?! No." Acchan said and parted their hug. "If you don't want, I'll just go home alone."

Acchan was about to stand up when Takamina held her hand.

"Don't get mad, I'm just kidding." Takamina showed her, her sweetest smile showing her cute dimples.

Seeing her cute smile, Acchan sat down again and covered her face with her hands to cover her blushing face. Acchan felt that her day is already complete. That smile, that smile is one of the things that Acchan wanted.

"Atsuko? Are you crying?" Takamina tried to pull Acchan's hands from her face but failed. "Don't cry. Okay, if you want to go home, let's go."
"Really? Yay!" Acchan suddenly pulled out her hands from her face and looked at Takamina with a smile on her face.
"Eh?! I thought you're crying." Takamina narrowed her eyebrows.
"Hehehe..." Acchan chuckled. "But, you already said that we'll go. Hehe."

Takamina had no choice but to obey Acchan or else Acchan will get mad at her. They are now outside the cinema room.

"You should have let me finish the movie." Takamina complained.
"What's with the movie and you really like it?" Acchan asked.
"It was fun."
"Fun? Is it really that fun when you watch horror movies?"
"Yes."
"Are you mad now?"
"Mad? No. Why?"
"Because... you didn't finished watching the movie."
"No." Takamina smiled at her.
"Do you want to watch another movie?"
"No, thanks. I just lost my mood"
"Sorry." Acchan looked down.
"It's okay." Takamina held Acchan's shoulders.
"What can I do to make it up to you?"
"I told you, it's okay."
"No. I feel guilty about it."
"Well, if you insist, how about... we go to watch movies at my house."
"But you said that you lost your mood in watching, right?"
"Yes, but now I feel like I'm in the mood again." Takamina chuckled.
"You're weird." Acchan said. "Okay."



~~ CHAPTER 4 END


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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #24 on: January 07, 2012, 05:43:38 AM »
aww atsumina so cute.. acchan be strong and tell takamina your feeling :D

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #25 on: January 07, 2012, 09:19:03 AM »
Yea!! Thank you so much for the update :D

Atsumina are so cute~~ :mon lovelaff:
Aww~~ :heart:

Thanks again for the update XD
Please update soon :mon cute:

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #26 on: January 07, 2012, 04:36:56 PM »
One word to discribe -> KAWAI~!  :luvluv2:
Takamina is such a tease~  :lol:
Acchan should confess to Takamina  :yep:

Waiting for more updated  :D

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #27 on: January 08, 2012, 10:30:02 PM »
Make her yours Takamina! Go!

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #28 on: January 10, 2012, 12:47:37 PM »
 :doh:

going to read this... tomorrow! OTL

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #29 on: February 11, 2012, 11:51:03 AM »
i'm enjoying this fic  :P

LOVE IT  :heart:
LOVE HOW TAKAMINA TEASES ACCHAN  :heart:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON  :cry:
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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #30 on: June 17, 2012, 04:35:49 AM »
Oh I love straight to the point fan fics about ATSUMINA hahaha!
FULL of atsumina sweetness I love it!
Hopefully you'll update soon T^T

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #31 on: August 07, 2012, 12:55:47 AM »
Please update soon!!!i want to read more of this, it's so good!!

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #32 on: August 07, 2012, 05:11:33 AM »
Update SONN
or  I'll kill you
LOL jwk  :kekeke:

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #33 on: August 23, 2012, 03:52:07 PM »
Aw I love this fic :) it's so cute ^^ Please update :D

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #34 on: August 24, 2012, 11:31:16 AM »
PLEASE UPDATE YOUR WORK.

I LOOK FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.

GOOD LUCK!!!

THANK YOU.
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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #35 on: January 08, 2013, 02:08:52 AM »
lol wow Takamina here is so different! hahahahaha but I like it hehehehe  :mon thumb:

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #36 on: July 29, 2013, 06:51:06 AM »
UPDATE SOON ONEGAI SHIMASU  :kneelbow:

I really like shy Atsuko and bold Minami  :shy1:

I really like the happy and cute atmosphere for a change  :hee: all the other fics I read for the last few days are sooo sad and weird  :mon dunno:
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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #37 on: July 29, 2013, 04:59:19 PM »
Aw~ Atsumina is so cute. LOVE IT!
Waiting for your next update

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #38 on: July 29, 2013, 11:03:32 PM »
Interesting... The way they interacted with each other

Atsumina was so cute together

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

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Re: Shiiwaachan : [AtsuMina] Bestfriends // Chapter 4
« Reply #39 on: July 30, 2013, 10:25:11 PM »
ooooo hahahahahahaha something is going to happen ¬3¬

thanks and Update soon!!

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