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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Haruna's POV)
« Reply #60 on: March 07, 2012, 04:07:43 PM »
@sakura_drop : Yuu won't take you..He'll take me instead :gmon shy: haha

@RenaChii : JunMayu? have to wait for next chapter  :)

@Sieka : My eyes are too sleepy now. Too lazy to re-check the grammar&spelling for Yuki's part. so i'll post it tomorrow  :grin:


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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Haruna's POV)
« Reply #61 on: March 07, 2012, 04:44:48 PM »
yuu is the perfect gentelman just wondering if his pervy side will get him beaten up by Koji lol

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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Haruna's POV)
« Reply #62 on: March 07, 2012, 06:46:18 PM »
 :wub: :wub: :wub:

Just got to reading Haruna and Mayu's POV and  :twothumbs :twothumbs I LIkey!!!
VERY MUCH!!! LIKEY!

WOW for how fast Jun moves, kissing right from the start  :lol: Mayu X Jun
So then Yuki's must be SaeYuki!!!!  :inlove:
KojiYuuu!!! LOL Just give up denying Haruna, you have already fallen hard for Yuu keke

THanks for the updates, I'm trying to get as many comments in as I can with my limited amount of time because work is making me :bleed eyes:
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Thank you and please keep it up!  :twothumbs
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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Haruna's POV)
« Reply #63 on: March 08, 2012, 04:09:42 AM »
The KOJIYUU moment is so  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

Waiting for more!!  :thumbsup

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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Haruna's POV)
« Reply #64 on: March 08, 2012, 06:18:19 AM »
hell yeah kojiyuu moment... aww yuu if you need a model im here :D

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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Yuki's POV)
« Reply #65 on: March 08, 2012, 01:20:32 PM »
thankyou for reading  :bow:

thankyou for the comments  :bow:

Yuki's POV is posted  :)

poor yuki, when finally she had the courage....

will she give up? will she give up? i if were her, i think i would give up..

next : the last of chap 3, akicha's POV...

« Last Edit: March 08, 2012, 01:30:26 PM by yukofan »


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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Yuki's POV)
« Reply #66 on: March 08, 2012, 01:28:43 PM »
THE MOST IMPORTANT RULE.

NEVER trust a movie over a book.

ALWAYS read a book first, and then watch a movie.

Poor Yukirin... But on the other hand, she talked with Ren, he now knows her name..

Interesting...how will she approach him next time...IF she approaches...

Or maybe Ren will make his next move.. or or.. Or maybe fate will make them bump into each other or something  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

Good update  :thumbup

Will be waiting for the next one!  :)
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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Yuki's POV)
« Reply #67 on: March 08, 2012, 01:53:48 PM »

“You mean that I have to read this novel?  No, you know I I don’t like reading. And look at this novel. It has hundreds of pages. Reading this novel will kill me”


Me too~ I don't like reading novel~

You are so unlucky Yuki~ got a prank from Akicha~

Hope you can get Ren soon~

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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Yuki's POV)
« Reply #68 on: March 08, 2012, 04:42:17 PM »
I like reading anything interesting, so I'm willing to read a hundred pages if its worth reading. XD And I always read the title and the summary of the story before reading, also....Yuki should have did a few research on that movie and the novel she was holding on to. :lol:

Though I have to say, Akicha is such a troll for doing that to Yuki. Yuki now has a poor and weird impression on Ren? Or maybe not, lol, I think she'll have a hard time getting another second conversation with Ren if she remembers what she first did. Hahaha, not like I mind it or anything, but seriously, that Akicha troll failed and succeeded in a way for Yuki.

I hope Yuki does her best next time! Man-up, although I know you're a girl and all, but still, Yuki! Man-up! XD
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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Yuki's POV)
« Reply #69 on: March 09, 2012, 12:39:43 AM »
haruna pov - i really like how you write it^^ come on haruna you can't resist your's yuuchan you know

yuki pov - yes go for it yuki  see aki plan work... but did she really watch a different dvd or something????

mayu pov - ahh mayuchan what will you do after this???

Thank for update.....

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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Yuki's POV)
« Reply #70 on: March 09, 2012, 10:40:13 AM »
thankyou for reading, comments, and the "thankyou"   :on cny1: :on cny2:

  there were times when i was stuck writing chapter 3..but, i think i'm still able to continue writing this fic..

i don't really like reading a novel..especially the one with too many pages  XD  i love reading short story, fanfics, and manga..i can spend 1 or 2 month only to read 1 novel..well, at at least novel is more interesting that school textbook..much more interesting..

and yeah, akicha is such a troll  XD



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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 3 : Akicha's POV)
« Reply #71 on: March 09, 2012, 04:10:05 PM »
Akicha POV is up!

with this, chapter 3 was completed  :cow:

i hope someday i can make the POV of the males character  XD


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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 4 : She Cried)
« Reply #72 on: March 10, 2012, 08:38:26 AM »



Chapter 4 : She cried




--In Matsui house--

Jun knocked Ren’s room door

“Aniki, may I come in?”

Ren, who was lying on his bed, walk toward the door and opened it

“Come in, Jun. ”

After Jun enter Ren’s room, Ren close the door. Jun sit on Ren’s chair, while Ren sit on his bed.

“What’s up, Jun? You need something?”

“I need someone to talk to”

Ren was a good listener. He was someone who became Jun’s place to sharing his stories and problems.

Ren smiled “Here I am. Ready to hear your story”

Then Jun told about what happened to him today


*Flashback*

“What do yo- ……”

Mayu couldn’t finish her words when Jun’s lip suddenly pressed against her lip.

“We’re going to have a date after this. You better go home now, Akane” Jun said to the girl in front of him after he broke the kiss

Mayu was just standing still..Stunning.. It took some time for her brain to proceed what was just happened. When finally she realized what was happening..

She glared at Jun “YOU Hmmmppphhhhh!!!!!”

Again she couldn’t finish her words, now because Jun’s left hand covered her mouth. Jun then dragged Mayu out of the class as fast as he could leaving Akane who  still couldn’t believe what her eyes just saw.

“If I can’t have you, then  I won’t allow other girl to have you. You’re mine, Jun”
Akane said to herself.

In other place, Jun was dragging Mayu along the school corridor. His hand still covering Mayu’s mouth. Mayu was trying to struggle, but Jun was too strong to her. Finally they stop at school yard. Jun released Mayu..

“What did you do?! Why did you kiss me?!”  Mayu pushed Jun

“I’m sorry but I didn’t mean to kiss you your lip.”

“What?!” Mayu was surprised with Jun’s answer

“I just wanted to kiss your cheek but suddenly you turned your head and our lips met. I’m really really sorry”

Mayu didn’t say anything but she started to sniffle.

Seeing the girl in front of him crying, Jun felt really guilty.

“Hey, don’t cry. It was just a kiss”

“ you said ‘it was just a kiss’?! It was my first kiss.. ” Mayu thought

“I HATE YOU!!”

Once again Mayu pushed Jun. Now, it made Jun fell to the ground. Then she run away toward school gate.

*End of flashback*


“You went too far, Jun. And you even didn’t know who that girl was, right?”

“Yes”

“You feel guilty?”

“Yes”

“Strange..”

“eh, what do you mean?”

“I think you get used to seeing girls crying because of you.”

Jun just quiet. Ren was right. Jun has made many girls cried. And he got used to it. But, that time, when he saw Mayu cried, he felt something

different. Seeing tears came from those innocent eyes, he could feel his chest tighten.

“ I think I’m done with my story. Thanks for listening, Aniki.”

“No problem, Jun. Now go to sleep”

Before walking out of Ren’s room, something caught Jun’s eyes. He saw  the novel on Ren’s desk

“Oh, you’ve found your novel!”

“Yes, I dropped it and luckly someone was give it back to me”

Remembering what was happening, Ren chuckled

“Why are you laughing?”

“Nothing. It’s just someone who gave me back this novel was very funny”

“Okay. I’m going to sleep now. Goodnight, Aniki”

“Goodnight, Jun”

After Jun left Ren’s room. Ren took the novel and lying on his bed. He kept looking at the novel.

“That girl.. Was she really read this novel?” Ren thought and once again he chuckled

He then open a page of the novel and started to read the novel until he fallen asleep.


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Author’s note : The italic words is what Haruna’s thought in her mind. And the ones with no italic words are what comes out from Haruna’s mouth..
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---In Haruna’s room--

Haruna was looking at the design sheets which Yuu gave

“These design are not bad” she said while keep looking at the designs

“Ahhh..these design are so good” Haruna thought

Haruna was a girl who follow fashion trend. She liked shopping. She had many famous-branded product. She had good fashion sense.

She kept thinking about Yuu’s offer

“No No. I don’t have intention to become a model. Furthermore, I don’t have any experience” Haruna said while shaking her head

“Ahh, but I want to wear these clothes..”

“Tsk..What’s good being a model? ”

“You can wear many good clothes, encounter with famous people from fashion industry, hearing people say that you so pretty wearing the clothes”

“And he’s annoying. Keep persisting me to be her model”

“Besides, being near him is not good for the health of my heart”

That night Haruna’s mind and heart keep arguing about whether accept the offer or not until she fall asleep

-----------------------------------------------------------------------END OF CHAPTER 4-----------------------------------------------------------------------

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Re: Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 4 : She Cried)
« Reply #73 on: March 10, 2012, 09:13:53 AM »
LOL Haruna just say YES already and be Yuu's model!!!

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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 4 : She Cried)
« Reply #74 on: March 10, 2012, 09:23:08 AM »
Hoho, Jun needs to be punished for making Mayuyu cry. :lol: I mean, seriously, he needs to be punished. X3
Ren can't seem to take his mind off of Yuki now huh, it seems like he likes Yuki, in a rather hilarious and embarrassing way for Yuki. Oh well, at least Ren's thinking of Yuki. Akicha sure did well with the plan, but will she ever survive the wrath of Rino and Yuki? Will she live for another day? I want to know. XD

Hahaha, omg, Haruna, o Haruna, please accept, the offer's pretty good and you have a handsome Oshima Yuu in front of you, I'd grab the opportunity in a heartbeat, no matter how much it would kill me. :lol:

Thank you for the short update, it was really fun reading it. :)
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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 4 : She Cried)
« Reply #75 on: March 10, 2012, 11:18:48 AM »
^Sieka-san, you spoke everything what's on my mind...

Now what to comment...?

Ah.

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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 4 : She Cried)
« Reply #76 on: March 10, 2012, 11:42:31 AM »
I really love your fic!! :luvluv1:


especially the pairing of KojiYuu and SasshiCha which I'm really a big fan of  :glasses:


Please UPDATE!!!  :cool1:

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Re: Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 4 : She Cried)
« Reply #77 on: March 10, 2012, 11:52:53 AM »
Because of Jun's action, maybe Mayuyu will be in danger now~

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Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 4 : She Cried)
« Reply #78 on: March 10, 2012, 12:44:49 PM »
thankyou minna-chan for 2500+ views  :bow:

@haruhi16 : haruna is playing hard to get  XD  but, making Yuu put more effort to get Haruna is not bad idea, right?

@Sieka :  i don't want to punish my handsome ikemen :PP  and I hope Akicha will still survive  :lol:

@sakura_drop_ : btw, what is the definition of "SOON"? haha, okay.  i'll try to update as fast as i can.

@smarty0821 : thankyou for liking this fic  :bow:

@RenaChii : Mayu will be in danger?!  :shocked:  let's think about what danger she will face  :roll:


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Re: Re: LOVE will find YOU (Chapter 4 : She Cried)
« Reply #79 on: March 10, 2012, 01:35:09 PM »
I wanna see Churi on bitch mode, it should be funny lol

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