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You 17/4/12 chapter 10 Mayu's revenage
« on: March 30, 2012, 06:30:53 PM »
You

The most important person in my life : Yes

The person that has made me cry the most : Yes

The person who has been making me dout everything : Yes

The person i love : Definetly

My name Takahashi Mianimi my best friend is the girl im inlove with yes THE GIRL IM INLOVE WITH.

We have known eachother since we where five now we go to a preforming art highschool she studies as an fashion designer and me as a photographer.

She doesnt know about my feelings i cant tell her  i cant loose are frienship.

I have 6 other bestfriends who we met in primary school there called:

Kojima Haruna : An airheaded girl who studies dance she may be come out with lots of stupid comments she can read people like a book.Loves video games and is Yuko's girlfriend.

Oshima Yuko : The most hyper girl you could ever meet studies acting closely resembles a squirral is totaly inlove with her girlfriend Kojima Haruna.Is also in the basketball club.

Takahashi Kai : My twin older brother who studies art like me he snaps when being called small is also in the basket ball club along with Yuko.Hates being proved wrong.

Watanabe Mayu : Dates my twin brother Kai loves Manga and anime looks like she stepped out of one actually studies art.

Kashiwagi Yuki : Studies singing is very quick and smart and passed all her tests top of her class.But when she snaps her black side comes out.

Matsui Rena : She studies break dance loves spicy food and is toatly and helplessly inlove with Yuki gets jelous easy hates people getting close to Yuki like Yuki when she snaps you get scared as she laughs crazilly.

There my other bestfriends then there is the one im inlove with.

Itano Tomoi : The fashion queen of the school has a cute fang smile is cold to people that she finds annoying or therthing doesnt let many people close she isnt in any clubs but works  part time with me and the others in a cosplay store for extra money.

Oh yer did i forget to mention that everyone worships the 8 of us we are number one in the derpartments we study and also we all live togther in the dorms of the school.

end of teaser
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Re: You the teaser 30/3/12 should this carry on ?
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2012, 09:58:21 PM »
Finally some takatomo fanfic!!!
please continue!!!and please update as soon as you can!! :bow:
i can't wait for the next chapter!! :deco:
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Re: You the teaser 30/3/12 should this carry on ?
« Reply #2 on: March 31, 2012, 01:59:17 AM »
continue? hell YES!

I'm waiting 4 the 1st chapter


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Re: You the teaser 30/3/12 should this carry on ?
« Reply #3 on: March 31, 2012, 05:36:14 AM »
 :twothumbs yahoo!!! :twothumbs


Finally something new :)

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Re: You the teaser 30/3/12 should this carry on ?
« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2012, 10:45:11 AM »
My name Takahashi Mianimi my best friend is the girl im inlove with yes THE GIRL IM INLOVE WITH.

At first, When I read this Sentence... I thought it was going to be AtsuMina's Fics... But, Idk what to say... ^ Well, Just waiting for the Prologue/Chapter to posted... Thank for the Teaser! :)2
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Re: You the teaser 30/3/12 should this carry on ?
« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2012, 04:59:17 PM »
You got me with Rena's description...hohoho, is this some one-sided RenaYuki? :lol:
Mah anyways, you also got me, you got me curious about Takamina.
Who exactly is the person she loves? How did she fell for her? How did they became friends? Typically, that's the basic questions running around my head right now, hope you answer them in the future updates to come.

Hahaha, I'm curious how things will play out though on Takamina, I'm rather, or more like, really really really curious who exactly is that person she loves, who is that bestfriend? Takamina has a lot of bestfriend, its hard to guess who is the one she loves.... :lol:

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Re: You the teaser 30/3/12 should this carry on ?
« Reply #6 on: March 31, 2012, 06:40:17 PM »
You

Chapter 1

I got out of the car walking to the front of the school to be greeted by tons of  other students fangirling or fanboying over me this of course i was use to this is how i was usally treated how me and my seven friends where usally treated. The others where alseep though in our shared dorm i woke up early so i could work on my class project i really hoped there woudnt be that many students here at 6am just once i wanna work on something without being harrased by boys and girls going crazy over me.  But then they dont know that my heart is taken by the schools fashion queen but then no one does i keep it well hidden.

The students watched me as i began taking lots of pictures in diffrent lenses and zoom my phone began beeping telling me that it was time to go to register then my class. I coudnt believe that 2 hours had passed so quickly i put my camarea in my bag and headed to register. When i arrived i got swarmed by the boys and girls in the class i pushed my way throught to see my best friends huddeled around my desk speaking to eachother when they all looked up to me with gleaming smiles.

1.... 2.... 3.... 4... 5... 6  she was missing well thats what i thought because before i could even ask where she was hands covered my eyes."Gusse who?"I laughed a little as i tried to pull her hands away but she was stronger."Hmmm i dont know Yuki."She knew i was teasing her so she played along."No way Takamina do i give out a black aura.......haha just erm joking Yuki please dont kill me."I began chuckling which she heard as she headbutted the back of my head whispering your fault into my ear.

(No ones pov)

"Sorry this is my last gusse Tomochin?"

"Yay dont get me worried Takamina!"

Both joked with eachother as people in the class began to chatting to eachother saying:

Why is Tomochin is only like that with her?

If anyone other than them touch Takamina she would break our arms

They look so good togther

Im just happy there not arguing

Do you think Takamina would say yes if i ask her to be my girlfriend?

No way  do think Tomochin would say yes to me?

Takamina and Tomochin looked at eachother with widended eyes like anyone of the boys or girls who said that stood a chance with either of them they did have standards.

The teacher entred the room telling them all to take there places she called out the register after everyone answred to there names the radio at the top of the classroom started making brrrrrr noises letting everyone know that an announcment was going to be made by Head teacher Nachu!

"Yahh good morning everyone i want to let you all know that today after school a last minute basketball match has been made so all the basketball team finish early todayyyyyyyy good luckkkk to the team you will be playing Dream morning musumeeeeeee good luckkkkk!"

"Kai we said we where going to go on a double date with Koji and Yuko."

"Relax Mayu have your forgot that Yuko's on the basketball team to?"

"No its just i wanted to go on the date!"

Seeing his girlfriend was upset he kissed her on the forehead stroking her head to look away from her face seeing Yuko walk out of the classroom closing the door behind her with a slam leaving the entire group dumbfounded so they looked at Koji who avoided there questioning gazes."Koji whats just gotten into Yuko?"

"Her step parents are asking her for money again so she has gone to talk with them obviously she is well you know pissed."
Rena got out of her seat as she looked at the clock tapping on Koji's head pointing to the clock she nodded as the rest of the group understood that they had 5 minutes before the bell called for them all to go to there lessons so they got up from there seats and went to there respected lessons before they could be chased by there fellow students.

(Fashion class)

Tomochin arrived a couple of minutes early because no one else was there not even the teacher she sat down grabbing one of the magaziens infront of her.Then the rest of the class came in.Even though they pretty much worshiped Tomochin they knew it was a bad idea to try and talk to her unless you where Takamina or one of the others.Somehow they manged to knock her walls down and they all wanted to know how.

The teacher came in writ something on the board and left.Tomochin tilted her head up from her reading and glanced at the board.

Everyone i have to something i have to do
so for todays class i want you
to design outfits for the schools runway
show this is a compertion
the winner will win 90,000 yen

When they all read the board they all looked at Tomochin she shook her head at them getting up from her seat and placing her magazien on the table then taking some sketching paper walking out of the classroom.

(Yuko meeting her parents)

Yuko was meeting her parents at the park when she got there she seen them bouncing her little sister on there lap with huge smiles on there faces but as soon as they seen Yuko there faces dropped into faces of depression.It was obvious that they where just trying to get money out of her and that they didnt really need it for her sister.

"What do you need money for this time?"

"Your sisters operation."

Yuko coudnt tell if they where speaking the truth or not as they said it with a straight face she didnt want her sister to be in pain if it was true so instead nodded her head saying she will give them the money by the end of the week.

(Photographer class)

Takamina was sitting and talking to the other students about there class project the teacher had just told them to carry on with it so they where asking about eachothers projects.

When the door opened an a brown haired girl came into the class.

"Tomochin why arnt you in class?"

"I have to draw some designs and i cant conentrate so i came to get you to help."

"Tomo-"

"Come on!"

"Fine bye everyone."

The excited the class room and headed to the top of the roof Takamina started taking pictures while Tomochin skecthed they where in pure comfurtable silence.Takamina gained a mischvoues smile so while Tomochin wasnt looking started taking pictures of her.Each one captured the fanged girls beauty perfectly each time.

She got pictures of :

her biting her lips concentrating

Scruncing up her nose when ever she didnt like something

Licking her lips

tapping her pencil

smiling when she got something right

And brushing her behind hair ears
 
Just as Takamina was going to take another picture Tomochin looked up catching her in the act.

"Takamina!"

"Sorry Tomochin i coudnt resist."

"Delete them!"

"Before i do atleast take a look at them."

"No!"

"Please!"

"Fine!"

Takamina smiled at sat beside her friend showing her friend (secret crush) the pictures earning glares and playful hits each time she shown one.

"Delete them now."

"Okay fine."

Takamina deleted them infront of Tomochin so that she woudnt suspect her on keeping them.

"Can i see your designs or do i have to wait like everyone else?"

"Wait."

"Not fair."

"Lifes not fair."

Takamina stuck her tounge out to the girl then looked at her watch it was time for there next lesson.Tomochin understood by just looking at Takamina that it was time for there next class so she got up and dragged her off the roof by her hand to there shared lesson of math.

(Art class)

The pair had just got out of english and where in the favourite lesson art.Mayu took hold of some paper and sat down followed by Kai who just started drawing a manga he was workin on as the teacher just let them carry on with whatever they wanted.
They both where laughing and joking as the others just watched the lovey dovey pair amazed that they have such talent.

(Dance class)

They had double dance class today while others grouned about how there bodys hurt Koji kept dancing not bothering to stop this was the only thing she could do to stop her mind wondering on to Yuko thinking is she okay.Rena sat on the floor as both of there classes where put as one because the teachers wanted to incoreparate break dance and normal together to make the ultimate show piece.

As much as Rena loved dance she had other things on her mind like will she be able to pay her tution for the school on time and other things.

(Singing class)

Today there class was getting a two hour lecture on how to do high notes this did not intrest Yuki in the slightest she was the best in the class she could reach the high notes so she didnt care so instead she just day dreamed about her future.

(English class)

Yuko had missed her morning acting class but she was happy about that as she didnt think she would have been able to do it because she coudnt believe her parents where making her lend money again.But this time she coudnt risk if they where lieing or not her sisters life might be on the line.

(After school ended the basketball match)

The crowd was hyped up chanting all of the players names.The group of six watched there friends play with skill and agilety passing it back and forth from each other.Takamina was taking amazing action pictures of the shots to the basket and dribbles towards it.However Koji noticed that Yuko wasnt playing the way she usally does she always plays with the most energy and motivetion but this time was completely diffrent she was playing with energy yes but her eyes where cold her movements stiff this wasnt her Yuko this was the upset one.

The ref blown the whistle as the opposite time signaled for a time out.Koji seen this as a chance to speak to Yuko even if it was for a minute.

She made her way to Yuko tapping her on the shoulder when she finally reached her.

"Nyan-Nyan!"

Yuko shouted the coldness in her eyes went away instently and brightness entred them she hugged her girlfriend happy to see her because she hadnt seen her since the morning.

"Hey there squirral whats the matter?"

Koji asked as she stroked her squirrals head.

"Nothing im just focused on something else thats all."

"You sure its nothing serious?"

"Yer i told you my step parents just want to lend money thats all."

"Okay."

(In the seats)

"what are you doing?"

"Taking pictures of the cat and squirral couple Yuko asked me to everytime i see them hug or kiss so that i can give her them."

"I would say thats romantic but since its Yuko im not sure if she wants them for perverted reasons so am just gonna go with thats nice."

The entire group laughed at Mayu's comment because of how true it was Koji then reappred by them and the match began to resume.

(Basketball court)

Kai and Yuko where taking the ball off the oppersistion each time that they gained the ball and scored in the basket earing the crowd cheering there names in responce.

The match eneded and there team Akb had won again they where defiently ready for the compertion.The team hit the showers and came out changed into everyone clapping for them.And Mayu an Koji running into Yuko's and Kai's arms congratulating them on there win.The group of 8 best friends then headed back to there shared dorm.

( At the dorm)

"Bagsey not making dinner!" Shouted Mayu

"Me 2." Replied Kai

"Me 3." Screamed Yuko

"Me 4." Belowed Takamina

"Me 5." Exclaimed Koji

"Me 6." Yelled Tomochin

"Me 7." Answred Rena

Yuki sighed at there child like behaviour she coudnt believe she had to make dinner after the day she had first a 2 hour lecture then an hour rehersal for the school show and lots more of exsuteing things.She walked into the kitchen gathering all that was edable making anything she could one hour and a half later everyone was complementing Yuki on her cooking skills.
Suddenly beeping entred the room telling everyone it was time to sleep.The girls and the one boy where yawing like crazy anyway heading to there rooms thinking about there day off the next day.

(End of chapter)

hope that you enjoyed it and thought that it wasnt boring please comment and thanks for reading!

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Re: You chapter 1 31/3/12
« Reply #7 on: March 31, 2012, 08:52:04 PM »
ahhhhh i love it ! :heart:
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Re: You 31/3/12 chapter 1
« Reply #8 on: April 01, 2012, 01:24:01 AM »
Seriously... Bakamina, You're a Pervert.
Ah! All of the Pairing were Cute and So Romantic! <3 Love it! Btw, Update Soon!
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Re: You 31/3/12 chapter 1
« Reply #9 on: April 02, 2012, 10:02:02 AM »
chapter 2

It was there day off well there day off from school today they had work.The 8 of them where to tired to move.
Kai grouned annoyed that he had to awake from his slumber and jumped out of his bed to make brakefast for the others.
Koji woke up with her girlfriends arm around her waist she turned her body to face the squirral she stroked her face then kissed her forhead.Yuko opened her eyes slightly to be welcomed to the gorgeous face of her cat like girlfriend.She kissed her lips then got out of bed pulling Koji up with her leading her to the kitchen.

Mayu opened and closed her eyes there was no way she was going to go to work today and dress up as a boy for the customers.Kai never got jelous of the attention she got so she never seen the point of making the effort.

Takamina rolled out of her bed falling with a bang on to the floor.She rubbed her head to try and sooth the pain from the impact.She really didnt want go to work she didnt need the money her and Kai's father was a huge figure in the bussiness world so they didnt need to worry about money but it made them feel normal.She sighed crawling out of her room to eat.

Yuki woke up and looked to the bed on the other side of the room there was no sign that her roomate was going to wake up so she thrown her pillow at her making it land on the pale girls head.Rena felt something hit her face realizing that it was a pillow she through it back to Yuki standing up from her bed then ran out the room.Yuki caught the pillow but before she had the chance to do anything she seen Rena run out so she menatlly noted to get her back.

Tomochin rolled to her side forgeting she had draws by her and slamed her head against them she was having an amazing dream to but instead she woke up to reality where she had no one that she could call her boyfriend or girlfriend.She got up and headed to get her breakfast.

"Tomochin whats with the gloomy face?"Takamina questioned while she was sneakly taking one of her brothers pancakes without him realizing.Tomochin shook her head in responce taking her breakfast from the counter an putting it on the table to eat with the others.Kai noticed Mayu still hadnt gotten out of bed so her excused himself from the table knocked on Mayu's door asking for premission to entre.Mayu shouted "Go away!"

Kai rolled his eyes making his way into her room being carefull not to step on anything and sat on his girlfriends bed."If you dont get up i wont kiss you for a week."

Mayu's eyes shot open there is no way she could go without Kai's kisses for a week she pushed herself off her bed wrapping her arms around Kai's neck pecking him in the lips smirking as she did so.Kai laughed at his girlfriend dragging her up by her hands but she refused to walk so he gave her a piggy back to the kitchen.

The rest of group chuckled at the couple as they left to get changed into there clothes.

After hour they where all ready to head to work.

When they finally arrived they had 10 minutes to get into there cosplay.

Takamina changed into = Lucky star's Konata

Mayu changed into = Full metal panic's Sousuke

Kai changed into = Naruto's Sasuke

Tomochin changed into = El cazador de la bruja's Nadie

Koji changed into = Death note's Misa

Yuko changed into = Yuri Yuri's Kyouko

Yuki changed into = Koihime mouso's Aisha

Rena changed into = Vampire knight's Yuki

They came out from the changing rooms and Kai switched the sign from closed to open  as soon as he did the shop was filled with customers.

The waiters where :

Kai
Yuki
Yuko


The person behind the till was :

Tomochin

The cooks where :

Rena
Mayu


The greeters and the people who shown them to there table was :

Takamina
Koji


The place was full and people where mostly requesting Yuko as there waiter so she was back and forth between diffrent tables.Then Yuko made her way over to a table with about 5 boys around that looked like trouable makers.

"Your cute im glad i picked you as my waiter."

"Thanks what would you like to order?"

"How about you on a date with me."

Koji's ears shot up when she seen the boy flirting with Yuko and turned on her heels ready to storm over to Yuko when she heard Yuko.

"Sorry im taken what would you like to order?"

When Yuko said this Koji calmed down immediently whilst the others boys on the table that where being served by Yuko began teasing there friend until idea's popped into there heads and whispred them into there friends ear.

"Like i said i want you on a date with me just dont tell your boyfriend."

"I dont have a boyfriend."

"I thought you said you where taken.......ooooo i get it you have a girlfriend even better bring her along and the three of us can have a good time."

Koji could tell Yuko was being to fell uneasy so she walked up to her and gave all the boys on the table death glares that would literally kill if they could however the boy that kept flirting with Yuko opened his mouth again.

"Is this your girlfriend?"

Before Yuko could say anything Koji spoke for her.

"Yer i am so back off!"

Yuko coudnt believe her girlfriend had this side to her she had never seen it before all she could do was stand there shocked.The boy didnt take the fact Koji had practically shouted to him to back off into reality as he continued his attempt to show off infront of his friends.

"I like girls like you so how about you dump the cat girl erm whats your name.......Yuko yes so Yuko why dont you dump the cat girl i hate stubborn girls and date me?"

This time before Koji could reply Yuko did.

"How about i stay with the person i love and you either order or get out!"

The place went silent when Yuko shouted this and everyones looks changed to the direction of Yuko Koji and the 5 boys.Kai walked away from the person her was serving and headed towards Yuko.He stopped infront of the boys table and asked for them to explain what happaned when he heard the full stroy he came to one decison.

"Leave now you are not going to make Koji and Yuko feel uncomfortable in the place they work get out before i throw you out."
The 5 boys didnt say anything they just stood up from there seats and walked out shouting random offensive things towards Koji and Yuko who just brushed it off as they didnt care.

Tomochin coudnt believe what had just happaned as she sighed in annoyonce that someone one would do that to her friends but she was glad that they didn take the things that the boys said to heart and the fact that Kai got involved calmed her down abit.She took her eyes of the cash register looking up to see her small friend coming in her direction.

"Here its the money from table 8."

"Thanks Takamina are they okay?"

"Your asking a question you know the answer to of course they are since when have they cared what people think thats why everyone loves them."

"I know i know its just that Yuko seemed abit more angry then what she usally gets when flirted with."

"You noticed aswell well if there is something wrong lets just leave it she will tells us when shes ready."

"Okay someone is calling for you."

"Yer it will be someone that thinks that im being a waiter today i swear people cant read boards."

"With the way Yuki writes im not supriesed."

Takamina laughed and headed to the table that called leaving Tomochin alone behind the till.

Mayu and Rena where bored no one wanted anything that would actually be intresting to do for the pair so when ever someone oredered they put a little extra in.Rena spiced there oreders up while Mayu writ little notes saying things like :

Your cute <3 your secret admire
Lets go out sometime <3 your secret admire


She loved seeing there faces when they thought someone like them but then she just loved tourting people when she was bored aswell.

Soon there work day was over and they changed into there normal clothes thankful to be out of the cosplay then switched the sign from open to closed.Today was a really eventful day well sort of.
They got home an rushed into the kitchen.

"Bagsey not making dinner!" Screamed Mayu

"Me 2!" Kai lazely said

"Me 3!" Takamina yawned

"Me 4!" Yuki shouted

"Me 5!" Yuko laughed as Koji was tickling her

"Me 6!" Koji said out of breath still tickling Yuko

"Me 7!" Screached Rena

Tomochin coudnt believe her luck just because she got into there dorm last she had to cook because they beat her to it.
Dinner was served altough simple it was delicous like they did the day before to Yuki they complimented her continusely until a noise was heard signalling for them to go to bed as tommorow was there full day off from work and school they really loved sundays.

End of chapter

Hope you all enjoyed it thanks for reading please comment im thinking of always ending with the dinner because i think they act like a family so the chapters should end like a family thing what do you guys think?

Also did you all like the couples?

oh an look up Yuri Yuri the anime then you will understand why i chose that person for Yuko to cosplay as there totally alike and if you have see it its true am i right?
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Re: You 2/4/12 chapter 2
« Reply #10 on: April 02, 2012, 12:32:10 PM »
Ha them 5 boys were funny getting yuko and koji angry and Yer I think that you should do the dinner  :)

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Re: You 2/4/12 chapter 2
« Reply #11 on: April 02, 2012, 03:21:07 PM »
 Kojiyuu are sooooo cuuuttte!!!!

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Plss.... Update soon I'm really enjoying your fic


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Re: You 2/4/12 chapter 2
« Reply #12 on: April 03, 2012, 04:11:59 PM »
chapter 3

Takamina woke up early to find Tomochin already in the kitchen enjoying her breakfast she grabbed a bowl and some coco pops off the counter when she went to get milk out of the frigde Tomochin spoke."We only have the milk your alergic to Takamina here have mine i will get somethin else."Tomochin smiled at Takamina taking the milk out of the fridge an pouring it in Takamina orignal bowl."Why am i having the rest of your breakfast?"

"Relax i only just made it but i made the mistake if using your milk so have it and sorry about using it."

"Its okay Tomochin thanks for giving me your breakfast."

Tomochin smiled once more at her before tucking into her new breakfast.Takamina speedly eat her breakfast got changed and put all her camerea stuff in her bag an just when she was about to head out "Takamina where are you going at 7 in the morning?"

"The park wanna come Tomochin?"

"Sure i might get some fashion ideas just let me get changed."

"Okay."

Tomochin was ready after 5 mintues dressed in a simple yet elegant fashionable outfit.She took her sketching pad and pencil off the table and the pair headed to the park.

When they arrived little girls and boys where with there parents getting pushed on the swings Tomochin noticed there was one left so ran as fast as she could leaving Takamina behind as soon as she sat down she heard laughing she turned her head to Takamina's direction to see her laughing at her.She stuck her tounge out and waited for Takamina to be next to her when she said "Push me!"

"Whats the magical word."

"Please."

"Good girl."

"Dont treat me like a kid."

"Well you are acting like a big one."

Tomochin laughed Takamina was the only person she had ever said please or thankyou to in her entire life not even her parents her heard her say them words which made her think what Takamina had actually done to make her be this way towards her.Suddenly she felt her feet lift off the ground she hung on tightly to her sketch pad as she was swung higher into the air.Then a memory came into her mind.

(Flashback)

Tomochin was five and was crying as she sat on the swing when a small girl with a huge ribbon in her hair ran over to her.

"Are you okay?"

"What does it look like im crying arnt i."

"Im Minami ust call me Takamina everyone else do."

Tomochin stared at the girl this girl why hadnt she ran off kids usally do when she talks and shows her tsundere attitude.Then her feet where up in the air she didnt know how until she realized that the girl called Takamina was pushing her on the swing.She wanted to stop the girl from pushing her but she loved the way it felt to have the wind in her hair going up and knowing her feet will always touch the ground.

"Why where your crying?"

Tomochin was still being pushed by the other girl and didnt realize till she spoke that she had actually stopped.

"If you stop the swing i will tell you."

The swing eventually slown down and Takamina sat down on the on next to her.

"My Father got remarried to an evil witch who hates me!"

Tomochin felt arms embrace her in a warm hug that insetentally told her that it was okay to cry that it was going to be okay only the person that ran away from her and her father could ever give these hugs these hugs that made her feel so safe.Tomochin didnt hold her tears anymore she just cried on the girls shoulder while the girl held her.

"Im Tomoi but everyone calls me Tomochin."

Takamina smiled hearing the other girls name and stroked Tomochin's head softely for comfort.After what seemed like hours Tomochin had stopped crying but was still held in Takamina's embraced with her head nuzzled into the side of Takamina's neck.
"Little sister dad told me to tell you its time to come home."

"Yer i will let me take Tomochin back."

The boy nodded at Takamina and ran towards there dad who took his hand and left the two girls on the swings.Tomochin got walked home by Takamina who only lived a street away suddenly Tomochin had all the courage she needed to face her new life.

(End of flashback)

"You know this is where we first met remember?"

Takamina asked as she sat beside Tomochin on the oppisate swing letting Tomochin swing herself.

"Yer i was just thinking about it did i ever tell you that you said ust instead of just and do instead of does."

"Nope haha it was weird though that the next day we ended up being in the same class and everything."

"I know but it was fun."

"Yer it was."

Without knowing the pair had spent ther entire day at the park so they went home quickly to be greeted to the familuar end of the day.

"Bagsey not making dinner!" Miichan hyperly said because she had just drank 7 energy drinks in a row.

"Me 2!" Yuki said trying to catch Miichan who was now running round jumping off everything she could.

"Me 3!" Koji said protectivly as Miichan was now throwing things so Koji was trying to stop things from hitting her and Yuko.

"Me 4!" Tomochin said dogeding Miichan's now series of little attacks she was doing."

"Me 5!" Takamina moaned in pain as Miichan bit her.

"Me 6!" Rena screamed who was now running away from Miichan as she was trying ti bite her to.

"Me 7!" Kai grunted as Rena moved out of the way just in time for Miichan to tackle Kai instead of her.

Mayu came out of her room to see a very hyper Miichan on top of her boyfriend she doesnt care if Miichan bagseyed or not she can put her hyperness for the powers of good just this once.

Dinner finished an Miichan was practically drained of everything as her head was against the table regretting how many energy drinks she had.

A noise was heard it was there signal to go to sleep and get ready for there full day of school ahead.

End of chapter

lol i love hyper Miichan

thanks for reading please comment

i will reply soon i just keep forgeting

and is there any couples u guys wanna see more of

if you wondering where Miichan came from i sort of forgot that she wasnt in the story because im so use to putting her in storys i put her in by accicdent so just imagen she came an vistied them on there day off lol
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Re: You 3/4/12 chapter 3
« Reply #13 on: April 03, 2012, 04:28:42 PM »
Wow... TakaTomo was Soo Romantic...
OMG...... They're so cute (in the Park)... Especially Tomochin.. I Love it!
Hyper Miichan is CUTE too... Poor Kai.. Get tackled by Miichan... Greedy-Miichan... LOVED!
I'll be waiting for your update... So, Update Soon!
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Re: You 3/4/12 chapter 3
« Reply #14 on: April 03, 2012, 05:27:07 PM »
Oh yea... I forgot to comment about Chapter 2..
So you're an Otaku? Me Too! I'm a Fan of K-ON, Fairy Tail and etc...
About Takamina's Cosplay, Maybe Fairy Tail's Lucy Heartfilia would fit her too? (instead of Konata)...
Mayu cosplayed Sousuke? But, Sousuke is a Boy! She's more cute if she cosplayed Hatsune Miku....
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Re: You 3/4/12 chapter 3
« Reply #15 on: April 03, 2012, 05:27:49 PM »
Aww that's so sweet  :wub: and the hype reminds me of someone I know know. Good work keep it up  :twothumbs

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Re: You 3/4/12 chapter 3
« Reply #16 on: April 03, 2012, 09:22:20 PM »
 :mon zoom: :mon zoom: :mon zoom: :mon zoom: :mon zoom: michann is so energetic!!!!! yeheyyyy :panic: :panic: :panic:

 :mon love: :mon love: :mon love: :mon love: i'm starting to like takamina and tomochin couple!!!


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Re: You 3/4/12 chapter 3
« Reply #17 on: April 04, 2012, 12:40:30 PM »
Replys to everyone that has commented so far :

@Nakamii : Thanks for reading im glad you enjoy it also dont worry about commenting twice i dont mind thanks for the suggestions for there cosplay they will get used lol =D and yer im an otaku i love anime and manga always have and will so i had to make them work in cosplay lol

@Farquhar97 : Im gusseing you mean me im not even gonna argue coz i know its true coz i dont need energy drinks to be hyper i naturally am lol

@Saeyukilover : Miichan is very energetic espically with energy drinks im glad that you are beging to like the Takatomo couple

@Sieka : Im glad that your intrested in my new fic hehehe happy that Rena caught your eye im thinking of giving her a awsome chapter later on =D

@Iloveakb48 : Yup finally some Takatomo i love the couple 2 i dont know why lol

@Yukofan : Thank you im glad that you like it =)
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chapter 4

Today was monday the worst day of the week they all had school then a double shift at work today sucked.
They all got out of there beds and Mayu woke Miichan who was sleeping on the couch by pouring a bottle of water on her head.

"Ahh what was that for!?"

"For staying over when we said you coudnt."

"Mariko is scary when she is angry there is no way im going back to my dorm yet!"

All shook there heads there was no comeback to win the argument when Miichan said that Mariko was defenitly scary when angry so they just let it slide.Breakfast was freshly made by Kai who had woken up before all of them.Everyone sat down at the table chatting with eachother then got ready changing into there school uniforms.

(authours note: If you wanna know what there uniform looks like check out girl's day twinkle twinle for the girls as for Kai imagen everything they have on except the skirt is three quater pants.)

As they arrived at register the sensei was already there reading all there name's out.
"Your late." There sensei pointed out the 8 bowed there heads and apoligazed explaing that they took Miichan to her register because of how scared she was of Mariko since her prank got Mariko instead of her friend Riku.
The teacher understood which suprised them but they didnt question anything they where lucky that the sensei understood mabye today was going to be a good day.

Soon register was over and everyone headed to there headed respected classes.

(Kai's pov)

As soon as me and Mayu walked into class the teacher pushed me out i gave her a confused look which she answred."Your moving to the music deparment."

"Why?"

"Because we have all heard you sing an as much talent you have in art you have more in singing we all know your only in this deparment because Mayu is and since shes so shy she needed someone with her."

"But-"

"No buts we all know you love singing so go on your class in waiting."

I nodded a little upset that i was sepreated from my girlfriend yes but more happy and excited i finally got to do the thing i loved.
When i arrived i sat down next to a boy that looked like a girl he had blonde long hair but it was up in a pony tail he bowed his head slightly and offred me his hand to shake.

"Im Ren and im new and you?"

"Im Kai nice to meet you."

"Yer you too lets got on well."

"Yer defiently."

The class went smoothly and me an Ren where laughing every second with eachother over everything we got on really well before i knew it class was over .

"What class are you in next Ren?"

"Dance what bout you?"

"Dance awsome looks like we will be in the next class togther."

"Yer lets go."

We walked out the class room play fighting we had gotten so close in a matter of an hour.(Authors note: the reason Kai has dance now is because it fits in with music so his timetable has been switched so from where he never had dance he does now)
When we got there the sensei partered me and Ren up since she said he is new and that we get on well.She put music on and told us to put a dance to it.After half and hour me and Ren where in perfect sink doing break dance he thrown his fists at me an parts of my body went in when i pushed them all out he jumped back onto the floor and started to spin while a span around lowering down to the floor we grabbed hands and jumped up letting go and high fiving at the end.The sensei coudnt stop praising us she said that we where amazing and that was one of the best dances she had ever seen we thanked her and the bell rang telling everyone class was over.

"Your a awsome dancer Ren."

"Yer you to is it break now?"

"Yup so come with me and i will introduce you to my friends."

"Okay."

We met the others in our usal spot under the sakura tree.I introduced Ren to everyone they took to him quick and him to them.It was nice to have another guy in the group.I sat down next to Mayu and Ren next to Takamina.He looked back and forth between me and my sister until he opened his mouth.

"Twins?"

"Yup."

"Awsome."

I smiled at him then someone hit my head that someone was my Mayu.

"The sensei said that you switched to music."

"Yer they switched me today so im only in your english."

"Mouuu!"

"Mayu dont act like that."

She pouted cutely so i kissed her then her pout turned into a smile she is so easy to make happy.

"Oh do you guys know where this place is?"

Ren asked showing us all a piece of paper and we all knew the place right away.

"Yer we work there why?"I questioned

"Well im ment to be starting work there today looks like i will be spending alot of time with all of you oh and by the way i know Kai's names what about the rest."

The everyone began introduceing themselves.

"Im Takahashi Minami Kai's little twin sister call me Takamina."

"Im Watanabe Mayu Kai's girlfriend."

"Im Itan Tomomi call me Tomochin."

"Im Matsui Rena nice to meet you."

"Im Kojima Haruna Yuko's girlfriend nice to meet you."

"Im Oshima Yuko nice to meet you!"

"And im Kashiwagi Yuki."

Ren smiled at all of us by the looks on his face he was thankful he had made lots of friends already.

"Where are you from Ren?" Yuko asked

"Korea i moved here because my mum got a job over here."

The bell rang again for lessons to begin so everyone went to the seprate lessons and me and Ren headed to Math.

The day went quick and before we knew it we where at work.

(End of Kai's pov)

The group which now included Ren entered there work place and got changed into the costumes for today.

Takamina = Fairy Tail's Lucy Heartfilia
 
Mayu = Hatsune Miku

Ren = D-Graymans Allen

Kai = Death note's L

Yuki = Rosario vampire's Ruby

Tomochin = Shugo chara's Rima

Yuko = Gothic sport's Anya

Rena = Chiba vampire's Karin

And there jobs for today the person on the till was :

Yuko

the waiters where :

Tomochin
Takamina
Ren
Kai


The greeters where :

Rena
Mayu


The cooks where :

Koji
Yuki


Ren had some help off Kai at first but then soon caught on about how everything was done all the girls swooned over the two boys who just winked and bowed calling them princess.As for Takamina and Tomochin they where always getting called between diffrent tables who tried to chat them up one even said to Takamina that he loved small girls lucky for him Tomochin pulled her away intime before she could explode at the boy that called her small.

There manger then came into work changing into :

Kaicho maid sama's = Misaka Ayuzawa

"Meetan our finally in work Ren this is our manger Meetan."

Ren bowed in respect to the manger and carried on with work Meetan smiled and started to work to help with there double shift.Usally there work closed at 8 but since it was double shift it closed at 11.

Finally work ended and they said goodbye to Meetan and Ren as Ren lives with his mother everyone got back into the dorm there useal debate.

"Bagsey not making dinner!" Yuko said falling on top of the couch exsusted of her day.

"Me 2!" Yawned Koji landing ontop of Yuko earning a small laugh from the latter.

"Me 3!" Shouted Mayu who sat down at the table placing her head against it.

"Me 4!" Takamina called out.

"Me 5!" Tomochin said taking hold of Takamina asking for a piggy back that was quickly declined.

"Me 6!" Yuki belowed then clasped onto the nearest chair.

"Me 7!" Kai screamed playing kiss chase with a now untired Mayu.

Rena went to the kitchen and whipped up the quickest and easiest thing she could think of.When it was done she called everyone for there meal which they eat complemented her about then went to bed as they had already missed the useall noise telling them to get to bed.

Tommorow they had the same routine except they didnt have a double shift thank god for them.

End of chapter

If your all wondering who Ren is he is from the new Korean boy band NU'EST and im inlove with them now espically him because i  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: his singing voice plus i thought i needed to put another boy in for Kai lol

thank you for reading and please comment!

if you have suggestions for wht they could cosplay as tell me and put a pic up so i know who your on about
also i would appreciate it if someone would put some pics up of the ones that they cosplayed of this chapter because i cant sorry bout that.

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Re: You 4/4/12 chapter 4
« Reply #18 on: April 04, 2012, 02:07:17 PM »
I wonder Where's The Hyper-Miichan....
It's good to see her like that.. But it look likes she doesn't really appear in this chapter..

@Cosplay:
I won't mention Takamina and Mayu since I already add Their Pic in my latest reply... xD
And, About Yuko's Cosplay, It's hard to find Anya's Pic.. My Suggestion for her is = Hirasawa Yui
And, Kai's Cosplay... L is kinda Creepy.. It's good to see him cosplaying Tsunayoshi Sawada
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Tsuna's kinda Cool, Right? Better than L...
Shit! Tomochin's,Yuki's and Rena's Cosplay were Always Cute!
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Re: You 4/4/12 chapter 4
« Reply #19 on: April 04, 2012, 02:52:57 PM »
 :deco:I want more of kojiyuu!!! Takatomo needs to improve fast


Anyway pls. Continue love it!!!!!:)


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