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Re: You 11/4/12 chapter 8
« Reply #40 on: April 11, 2012, 09:11:17 PM »
Yes yuko very romantic reminds me of my cousin with his girlfriend  :yawn: and wonder what the rest of the week gonna be like.  Thanks for update and Yes guess I do have to update  :(

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Re: You 11/4/12 chapter 8
« Reply #41 on: April 12, 2012, 01:47:23 AM »
  :thumbsup I like this chapter :)

I'm really happy for kojiyuu!! I'm  :drool: because of how romantic can yuko be!!

Tomotaka? Well I know u have great idea for the nxt chapter for them right  :twothumbs

And thank you very :bow: much if ur going to keep saeyuki in ur fic.. If not renayuki is no problem to me I like them both :)
 
......... I'm thinking of matsui couple  :twisted: anyway thankyou for the update w8ting. For the nxt....

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Re: You 11/4/12 chapter 8
« Reply #42 on: April 12, 2012, 01:42:52 PM »
Ow~ Yuko is so sweet~

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Re: You 11/4/12 chapter 8
« Reply #43 on: April 13, 2012, 08:11:27 PM »
Replys :

@Kahem : I know Yuko is so sweet Koji is so lucky =D

@Saeyukilover : Im happy for them aswell and yer i have an awsome chapter for Takatomo ahead and i might put the Sae Yuki couple in my fic hehehe but i will tell you that wrong about the wmatsui couple hehe.

@Farquhar97 : np prob i like updateing an yer i love Yuko hehe
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chapter 9

It had been 2 days since Kai had told the police and went undercover for the police so far he had nothing that he could use against his father this made him frustrated and distant from Mayu he even moved out of the dorm and was now living with Ren and his mother.

Takamina coudnt believe that her brother had moved out from the dorm and didnt even give them a good reason why.She had noticed that her father had been alot more on edge though she wasnt worried but more annoyed because he started giving her more jobs.Thank god that Tomochin covered for her and had tried to even stop her from doing anything stupid.But there was also one more thing that she had noticed Mayu had became slightly more irratable than she is normally.

Takamina had left it to the fact that mabye it was because Kai had moved out and hadnt had the chance to talk that much since he switched classes and he had been some what secretive lately.But then she was caught off gaurd when Mayu had told what she was going to do Takamina wanted to say something but she knew that it wasnt her place she just hoped that Kai would snap her out of her decision that she knew would break him.

The classes where slow that day and Takamina was thankful that she Tomochin with her through out apart from when they had there seprate class.Since Takamina does photographey and Tomochin fashion but since they had to work on there projects for the end of term they went to the roof where Takamins took pictures of anything and everything.While Tomochin thrown scraps of paper ofn the floor when she hated the design.All the two could think of was work they where worried about what song to sing and after what Mayu was planning to sing tommorow with Ren's band member from Nu'est Aron Takamina wanted to sing something that would hopefully change Mayu's mind but since there is only one preformence every night she coudnt and it was Tomochin's turn tonight plus there hadnt been a prefromance in two days.So Meetan wanted to carry the Korean week on longer.

Tomochin coudnt help but wonder what type of song Takamina was going to sing when something amazing poured into her brain.A CONFESSION SONG!Thats it Tomochin was going to confess to Takamina by singing to her that was perfect now all she had to do was think of a song.Many songs began to pop into her head all perfect for her to sing all she need was one more person to help her and she was fine.She got her phone out texting Ren sending it then quickly gaining a reply.

To : Tomochin
Subject : Song
Yer i would love to help you
At break come to dance and we will work
on the moves =D
From : Ren =D

Tomochin smiled when she read the text she sent a reply saying thanks and asked if he could ask his 2 of his band members to help and also ask the Kojiyu couple.She didnt notice Takamina taking pictures of her for the nth time that day and singing while she did so.When Tomochin looked at her work satistfied that it was all done all coudnt possiabley be any better she finally seen Takamina taking pictures she stood up then snatched the camera away from her and deleted the pictures that Takamina had took of her earning a pout from a older girl.Tomochin stuck her tounge out at the latter then seen the time seeing that it was break excused herself from Takamina and ran to the dance studio.

When she got there she heard the music of her song playing and seen everyone dancing in sycne already.

"Tomochin your finally confessing ahh such a romantic way to awww."

"Thanks Yuko hehe come lets start."

They strated practicing and JR was doing the rapping bit in the song with Tomochin and was dancing with her whil Koji was dancing with Baekho and Yuko with Ren.When they finished Tomochin thanked them all and coudnt wait till tonight.
School ended and Tomochin rushed to work asking for Meetan to not put them in cosplay tonight when Meetan agreed she went to the stage and set up the music then the others arrived hearing the didnt have to cosplay up they all cheered and went to the posts.

Till :

Takamina

Waiters :

Kai
Mayu
Ren
Tomochin


Greeters :

Yuko
Koji


Cooks :

Yuki
Rena


Customers entred and filled there work quickly bearly giving them a chance to settle down in to there work posts.Meetan got on stage about 1 hour after they opened the cafe and annonced that Tomochin was going to preforme for everyone.Tomochin walked over to Takamina and took her hand and Ren placed a chair in the middle of the cafe.Then his 2 band members and the kojiyu couple went on the stage and the music started.

(Once again have to listen to lol sry bout tht Tomochin will be singing Taeyang's parts and JR will do G-Dragons part you know who is dancing with who and basically there doing everthing thats gettin done on the mv beneath the girls dancin the girls bits boys dancin boys)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=BuuiBjL09KY#t=1s

The song finished an Takamina coudnt stop smiling Tomochin got off the stage and hugged Takamina and said i love you Takamina said the same words to Tomochin and the cafe started shouting kiss to the now offical couple.They kissed and leaned there foreheads togther smiling but then Meetan ruined there moment by telling them to get back to work.

Work was done and all headed home when they got there the Takatomo couple was being all lovey dovey (lol) everyone was teasing the couple and then the debate began.

"Bagsey not making dinner!" Shouted Takamina playing with her and Tomochin's interwined hands.

"Me 2!" Screamed Tomochin who started stealing kisses from Takamina.

"Me 3!" Exclamied Mayu sopping into a pillow wanting Kai next to her.

"Me 4!" Belowed Koji having a thumb war with Yuko.

"Me 5!" Yuki stated jumping up and down board thinking about her new friend Sae.

"Me 6!" Rena said out of breath because she had to run up and down the stairs to get warm.

Yuko made the dinner relcuntently pulling herself away from Koji.Every praised her then went to bed.

End chapter

hope you enjoyed

Please comment and thanks for reading

Takatomo finally togther sorry the chapter isnt that long it will be next time since next one is very important.

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Re: You 13/4/12 chapter 9
« Reply #44 on: April 13, 2012, 08:32:38 PM »
 :wub: Aww what a romantic way to say I Love You. I wonder what's going to happen next chapter umm  :? Lol and Thanks again for update :)

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Re: You 13/4/12 chapter 9
« Reply #45 on: April 17, 2012, 11:06:58 PM »
chapter 10

Mayu woke up early for he last day of school as it was breaking up for a week she eat breakfast quickly and got changed into her jogging clothes.She ran out the dorm turning left and right not knowing her destination.A she did so she never expected to see what she saw.Right infront of her Kai was holding hands with another girl and flirting putting her hair behind her ear.Mayu never excpeted this she never thought he would do this to her.She coudnt contain her anger she charged foward pushing Kai to the ground.

"Yah who's this?!" She shouted while the other girl stood there looking bewilldred and Kai sat on the ground with his jaw open trying to say words that where never going to come out.Knowing that she wasnt going to get an answer she had had enough of everything the fact he had been distant irratable annoying for a while now this was the last straw the thing that finally broke her."WHERE OVER!"Mayu didnt regret them she was happy she was free from him he never shared anything to her anymore so its not like she would know if anything bad was happening anyway.

Mayu turned away not letting him see her tears and then she ran as fast as she could to the dorm she was going to get her revenage no matter what and the other girls where gonna help her.She got back to the dorm and changed into her uniform not caring what the time was she woke everyone up and demanded that they get changed and go downstairs.When they where all there she told them everything all looked at her eyes widened not being able to comprehand the situation.Mayu however coudnt look Takamina in the eyes it was her brother that had made her feel like crap and she knew Takamina would try and defend him but it suprised her when Takamina said something else.

"Mayu what do you want us to do to help?" Mayu didnt believe what Takamina had just said she had to motion for her to repeat the sentence."I said what do you want us to do to help?" Yup Mayu was right she asked what could they do to help.

"I want to sing a song to him you know humilate him."

"Okay what song and show us the dance."

Mayu went through her playlist on her phone and found the perfect one she gave the parts out and decied that Tomochin would be the main dancer.All aceppted and started practing the song and dance until it was time for register.They all rushed there and agreed that they will meet again at lunch an break to rehearsh.Arrivaning at register as usual all eyes where on them they smiled at the class making all of the blush or look away.Seeing Kai sitting alone waiting for him the girls wanted to avoid him like the plauge.Kai noticed this and got up from his seat and caught Mayu by the wrist stopping her from going past him.

"What?" Complained Mayu causing everyone to look at the pair.Before he even had a chance to explain himself the person he least excpeted to pull her away did."Ren what-" Ren intruppted him "After what you had told me before Kai there is nothing to explain it wasnt for that you even said it was for your self i might not have know you long but ever since you no what you have changed there is no excuse!"Ren shouted defending Mayu Kai was left speechless again he never thought Ren would speak to him like that but then he didnt think he would be in this situation.

Rena watched Ren say those words someone who had known them for such little time had became another family member and just by that she could tell he would protect them through anything.Suddenly she felt attracted to him but didnt she like Yuki?Ahh confusing!Takamina stood there thankful that Ren would stand up for them well Mayu at this moment Ren felt more of a brother than Kai.Tomochin could see that Ren was a loyal friend and could tell by the look on Takamina's face that she was thankful but sort of worried though she would never admit it.Yuki honestly had her mind on something else well someone else so she didnt really pay attention to what was happening.Yuko and Koji where impressed but they werent going to say anything because they just wanted to know what happaned next."I wish we had popcorn."Yuko whispred into Koji's ear earning a small tap on the head.
Ren and Kai had a staring contest while Mayu walked to the others keeping quiet to find out what happens next the entire class was silent.The sensei came in the class "Okay everyone se-"She closed her mouth when she felt the air in the room was tense and angry so looked around spotting the people who where causing this atmposphere.Just like her students she kept quiet wanting to know who will break the silence first.But with neither speaking it was the bell that spoke first.BRRRRRRPPPPHHHHHH!
Ren spun around heading towards Mayu and asked her if she still needed one of his band members help she declined and explained what she was going to do and thanked him for helping her.Ren just shown her a simple v sign making her laugh and escorted her to class so Kai coudnt try and talk to her he offred to take her to and from class for that reason which she polietly aceppted.Right now all of them hated Kai and he wasnt going to get off with what he did easily.

At break Ren walked Mayu to the dance studio where everyone else was and stayed with them helping them practice and espically helped Tomochin with her dance in the middel.They took a small break so Tomochin could catch her breath and rested her head on Takamina's lap and Takamina stroked her head.The Kojiyu couple started teasing eachother and Yuki was texting somoene in the corner of the room.Rena spent the time talking to Ren finding him really intresting and mabye even falling for him harded than she did Yuki.Mayu was practing her vocals wanting to get them perfect so that she could humilate Kai knowing she done everything possiable to make it the best preformance ever.

Meanwhile Kai was sitting underneath the sakura tree where the group usualy was sighing a his own stupid mistake he coudnt blame Ren for saying what he said it was all true he didnt know why he did it wasnt even part of going undercover he lost his most precious thing because he didnt think about anyone but himself.The one thing he didnt think would happen was everyone to know that him and Mayu had broken up by the time break had started but none knew the reason.Alot of girls loved the fact he was single now and tried to take this as an oppertunity to make him theres but failed dramatically.

He regretted his decision but there was nothing for him to do now.
Back in the dance studio everyone was dancing and singing again without any mistakes then the bell went signalling for them to head to there lessons and rest.They ran out quickly since all where no where near there lessons apart from Koji and Rena who had dance lucky them.

The rest where all late for there lessons getting scolded by there senseis who woudnt take any of there excuses because there mean (A/N : like my eng teacher miss smith =p)
By the time that lunch had came each of them except Koji and Rena had detention for 5 minutes not that long no but annoying none the less.When the rest of them got to practice they got told off by Koji and Rena saying that since it was Mayu's idea.They said sorry then practice started.Ren was helping them once again get the most diffcult parts down.
School finished after lunch since it was half term so work started early for them all so they had to run to work when they seen the time.

Sprinting as fast as they could to the cafe they all barged inside and ran to the board that told them what they where wearing and who was doing what.The door chimed and all turned to face Kai who had a very flustred red face but all just shook there heads and looked at the board and there cosplay.

Kai = Heat guy's Clair Leonelli

Koji = Rave master's Eli

Ren = Heat guy's Daisuke

Rena = Strike witche's Sanya

Tomochin = Claymore's Tereasa

Takamina = Claymore's Irene

Yuko = Soul Eater Maka

Yuki =  Fruit basket's Tohru

Mayu = Witche's Hay Lin

There positions where :

Till :

Yuki

Waiters :

Tomochin
Yuko
Ren
Rena


Greeters :

Takamina
Koji


Cooks :

Kai
Mayu


The time for them to start preforming was getting closer and Kai was getting ignored by everyone the only conversation he practically had was him getting the orders off the others.Hearing it was time to preform the girls ran to the back changing into glamours outfits that would cause any girl or guy to melt and do there bidding.

Music started playing an Kai instently recognaized the song he breath hitched and he was sure his heart stopped he really was regreting everything.

(This song describes Mayu's feelings to Kai how she feels that he cheated please listen oh you obvs no which one is Tomochin when you see the dance as for others imagen who you want who is singing the other parts out of the girls and jouring this Mayu is pointing to Kai)



Kai was getting watched by everyone in the cafe as they all where stunned that he would be able to do such a thing an to Mayu aswell.He stood still then ran out the cafe he just wanted to get fresh air but ended up leaving from outside the cafe to get a head start on his undercover work.

(Later that night)

Takamina was working for her farther when a cop car came down the ally blocking the exit for her and her client to run.A tall sleneder man came out from the car and handcuffed them both each of them struggled but the cop was to strong she was placed inside the vechile and was drove of into the night.

End chapter

Takamina has been arrseted ahh
I dont know why but i have been obsessed with snsd fanfics lately that involve like me you know when they go ______: Ahhh
I love them hehe any suggestions for me am already reading I love you ~~ and I am a member of snsd thanks.

thanks for reading please comment

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Re: You 17/4/12 chapter 10 Mayu's revenage
« Reply #46 on: April 17, 2012, 11:22:25 PM »
Aww kai is a bit mean and getting taken away by  the cops  :shocked update soon unlike this name where u didn't for ages :(

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Re: You 17/4/12 chapter 10 Mayu's revenage
« Reply #47 on: April 25, 2013, 05:19:25 PM »
I love your fic please keep it up

noooo takamina is arrested

kai get mayu back please Kaimayu

please update
Love AKB
             ~TakaYuu~
                           ~AtsuMina~
                                          ~KojiYuu~
                                                      ~TomoTomo~
                                           ~MariMii~
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Love this Pairing
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Re: You 17/4/12 chapter 10 Mayu's revenage
« Reply #48 on: April 26, 2013, 12:40:35 PM »
Ah... what's going to happen to Takamina...?

Poor Takamina... Her brother able to be on undercover to bring down thier father... but how about Takamina...?

She also not in wrong here... she just wants to stay near Tomochin... and also she also wants her brother to also stay together with his gf, Mayu...

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates and the story

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