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There she is standing there looking perfect. Why is she so beautiful? I can’t get my eyes of her. I try to look away. But I can’t. I just keep staring at her. Then suddenly our eyes met, but I keep staring. Her eyes are so beautiful. Her smile is so captivating. Her lips look so soft and that lipstick. I want to lick right of those lips. I feel like I can kiss them forever. Then she starts moving towards me. I freezed. I could smell her perfume.
“Hey, Takamina.”
“Ah, h – hello, Tomochin.”
“Can you help me. I suck at dancing..”
“Yeah, sure.” No you don’t you are good at dancing… Why are you lying?
Dows she want to spend time with me. I don’t understand. But I want to touch her so bad. Yeah I know I’m a pervert. But I can’t resist her. Then I dozed off while showing  her the dance moves. I slipped and I fell on top her. I kept looking in her eyes and I started to move closer and closer. Out lips now are only inches away. I tried to stop, seriously I tried to sop, but I couldn’t. Then she suddenly smiled with her cute fang. I stopped all of my movements and stepped aside.
“Don’t , Takamina. Atsuko will be angry…” she stands up and just walks away.
“What are you talking about.”
“Well there are rumors about you too.”
“What rumors?
“That you two are dating.”
“No, we are not..” she starts to walk away. I grabbed her arm. But she pulls hers as well and shouted.
“Just leave me alone!”
Why is she so mad. Why does everybody think that me and Atsuko are dating. We are NOT dating. But why is Tomochin so mad at me. Could I be that she is jealous. Could she like me too. It’s impossible right? I have to be sure. I love her and I want to know her feelings. She reaches the door and start to open it as I start to run toward her.
“TOMOCHIN!”
She turns around. Then I grab her and push her against the door. She is surprised.
“Takamina, what are…..”
I didn’t give her a chance to finish. I sealed her lips. As I thought they are so soft. I wrap my arms around her waist and pull her closer. I can’t believe it. She is responding the kiss. I tilt my head to the right so I could kiss her even more passionately. I lick of her lipstick. I suck her upper lip then her lower lip. This kiss is becoming hotter. She wraps her hands around my neck and pushes me closer. I slowly open my mouth and my tongue asks for permission to enter and play around with hers. She grants that permission and  our tongues meet and start to play with each other. I catch her tongue and start to suck it. I was surprised she let a little moan. I’m sure she could hear me smirking. Then my hands start to travel around her body and they want to enter to search what is underneath. Then I move my hands up to unbutton her cute shirt. I start to unbutton the first, the second as I start to kiss her neck. Slowly kissing it, licking it, sucking it and I leave a mark on it. Then she suddenly grabbed my hand and looked me in the eyes.
“Takamina…” she blushed and looked away.
“Don’t stop me.”
“Why are you doing this, Takamina.”
“What do you mean?”
“What do you feel towards me?”
I smile and whisper in her ear “Because I love you”. I could see her blushing face.
“What about, Atsuko?”
“I’ll tell you one more time. There is nothing going on between me and her. The one I love is standing right in front of me. I love you, Tomochin.” I said as I kiss her again. But she breaks it..
“Let me answer you properly..”
“Ah. I’m sorry I got caught up in the moment.” I said as I smiled nervously.
“I love you too, Minami. You have no idea how much I love you.” She says as she leans down and kisses me. The kiss became hotter as she pulls her tongue out and they start to battle for domination. Of course she won. She wins in everything. She is the perfect girl. Our kiss became so passionate that we had to break it to catch some air. I slowly bit her neck and whispered in her ear ”I want you”
“Eh?” she said as she blushed like crazy.
“You don’t want to?”
“No I do, but..”
“But what?”
“It’s my first time…”
“Mine too.”
“Really. You are really active.” She smiled and I can see her cute fang.
“Because it’s you. I love you.”
“I love you too. Let’s go to your house.”
“Ok”

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #1 on: May 04, 2012, 10:52:41 PM »
hehehe i hav to say i ship TakaTomo lol i dont know y

am so happy u write a one shot of them =)

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #2 on: May 05, 2012, 12:38:50 AM »
TakaminaBG-san..

another smexy fic..
and it's TAKATOMO!
love it soo much!

At least this one doesn't make me nosebleed
only squealing and excited. LOL
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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #3 on: May 05, 2012, 03:33:02 AM »
Wow, It's the first time I read a TakaTomo (it's strange to see Takamina being the active towards another person than Atsuko haha)

Well, I really like it! Although I prefer AtsuMina, I enjoy this pair too. Congrats!
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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #4 on: May 05, 2012, 02:50:45 PM »
Wow Takamina seems so agressive here. I like it ^^

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2012, 03:20:20 PM »
I read this because I mistakenly read it as a "TomoTomo" fanfic... :(

but then as i read it i enjoyed it even if it was a TakaTomo one  :lol:

thanks for this oneshot! it was a nice read hehehe


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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #6 on: December 24, 2012, 07:48:00 AM »
i was search some takatomo fic and then i found this fic
although it was an one shot fic, but actually i really enjoyed read your fic  :on gay:
great work !  :on GJ:

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #7 on: January 08, 2013, 08:58:14 AM »
sweet story about TakaTomo there... Thank you...
 
Minami is quite aggressive.... Stopping Tomochin by kissing her... Very Interesting...

Looking forward to your other stories with any pairing...

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2013, 06:54:27 PM »
please more!! TakaTomo!!!  :bow:

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #9 on: February 28, 2013, 03:04:14 AM »
so few TakaTomo fics, now they are my current pair of lovely girls and there is not enough of them to enjoy, u.u I wanna cry after reading this teasing fiction, please, please, please write more TakaTomo! onegai.

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #10 on: February 28, 2013, 05:40:31 AM »
great takatomo
really sweet  :wub:
takamina so aggressive   :w00t:
thanks for the oneshot  :inlove:  :thumbsup

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #11 on: September 23, 2013, 07:50:32 PM »
wow? haha, this is unusual. :O
haha i always wanna read kind of more takatomo. :roll: XD
 but still not many write about them..  :nervous
so arigatou for this fic love it. :grin:

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #12 on: March 11, 2014, 11:53:27 AM »
just watching takatomo mujack... and then read this fanfic...

it's so sweet ... :inlove: :inlove:

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Re: [One - Shot] I feel like I can kiss you forever {TakaTomo}
« Reply #13 on: December 16, 2014, 02:03:08 AM »
If Im not an atsumina fan, I would have been a TakaTomo fan. This fic is nice.
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