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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
« Reply #120 on: September 05, 2012, 10:25:16 PM »
Wouaaaaah!!!! Good fanfic!! I read that before i'm register XD

Love the last scene with Mayu and Yuki!!! :heart:

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
« Reply #121 on: September 06, 2012, 11:34:28 PM »
Kiss me and never let me go...  :wub:

Jurina is a pimp but just to make Rena jealous  XD

Sae will be so heartbroken... there will be dramas..

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
« Reply #122 on: September 07, 2012, 09:07:42 PM »
hehe WMatsui~
Jealous Rena is so funny~

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
« Reply #123 on: September 08, 2012, 04:24:16 AM »
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(6 years ago) 
"Sas chan it hurts!" Mayu says crying 
why are you such a crying baby?it's just a cut i don't wanna take you home,i wanna keep playing! Saw shouts and gets back to play soccer with her friends while Mayu is crying sitting 
Yuki passes on her bike "ehhh..what's wrong Mayu chan? why are you crying?" she asks while gets off the bike
my..fi..finger hurts! little Mayu says sobbing
"let me see.." Yuki says and examinates it 
(Mayu cries more)
[Note:It was a little cut]
Yuki smirks and kisses the finger 
Mayu stopped crying..she was impress by that action that she just stared the older girl who was smiling 
My lips has a special ability i can heal anything! does still hurts? Yuki asks smiling 
"No..." Mayu replies mouth open 
"I'm glad i helped" Yuki says and gets on her bike 
Mayu only looked at her finger and then looked at Yuki on her bike and smiled 
 ~~~~~~~~~~Present at the party~~~~~~~~~
what..what's this? Sae asks and tears showed 
Yuki looked other way 
answer me! Sae says and gets closer to them 
"Sas chan.." Mayu says 
you shut up! Sae says mad and looking at Yuki 
Mayu was about to get closer to her older sister but Yuki putted her arm in the way and didn't let her 
Sae i'm sorry! Yuki says in tears 
we're in love! Mayu says trying to not be so cruel
you're in love..don't make me laugh three weeks ago you couldn't stand Yuki and now you "love her"? Sae asks and Yuki turned to look Mayu 
Yes,Yuki she hated you so much! Sae says 
That's not truth! Mayu says and tears wanted to show 
really? Sae asked trying to control her pain 
i have always..been in love with Yuki since we met but then i found out about your relantionship and i couldn't help to hate you to hide my real feelings but now i know that i'm the one for you and you know it too..*Shut up! Sae interrupts Mayu* 
Sae's tears showed 
Yuki is mine and i'm not going to share it! Mayu says in tears looking at her older sister 
(Yuki was shocked not knowing what to do) 
Why did you this to me? how this happened? i don't undertant!!  Sae asked shouting 
I just don't know! Yuki replied crying 
don't know? tell me now..how is possible that you kiss my little sister? Sae asked mad 
"Mayu stole my first kiss..." Yuki says unconsciously
what? Sae asked 
Mayu was shocked 
Since that kiss i started thinking about Mayu! Yuki said looking other way 
"then that dream was real.." Mayu murmured then blushed and remembered all the things they did
Sae slapped Yuki
 Mayu helped Yuki she was ready to fight Sae but Yuki stopped her 
Sae left the two and got back to the house 
Yuki walks away 
where you're going? Mayu asks 
"home.." Yuki replies 
i'll go with you! Mayu says and hugs Yuki from behind 
"this is your birthday party.." Yuki says coldly without looking at Mayu 
"i don't care... all i wanted for my birthday.." Mayu whispers presses harder Yuki's body against hers 
"but.." Yuki murmures 
please..all i want it's you! Mayu says resting her head on Yuki's back 
"ok.." Yuki ackwardly answers 
~Meanwhile~ ~walking to Jurina's place~ 
Rena chan did i tell you who beatiful look tonight! Jurina says while puts her arm around Rena's neck 
Rena blushed and smirked "it's 100 time you tell me so!"
sorry i can't help it..i like to admire beauty! such beatiful night.Don't you think? Jurina asks looking to the sky 
Rena stops walking and also looks to the sky "you're totally right!" She says and looks at Jurina 
what's wrong? Jurina asks 
"nothing.." Rena answers 
you're looking at me like if i have something on my face..are sure everything is okay? Jurina asks looking concerned to Rena 
Rena looks at Jurina and kisses her 
They stopped kissing couse the lack of air 
i'm in paradise finally my Rena chan gave me some love i'm so happy! Jurina says like she's floating in the air
what a child! Rena says and hugs Jurina then kept walking to Jurina's place 
~At Yuki's home~ 
Once changed the Mayu was ready to sleep but there was something that was bothering Her "Yuki is not acting like herself must be cause Sae.." she thought 
Yuki got out of the bathroom and removed the towel that was on he head then started to brush her hair in front of the mirror,She saw Mayu standing looking at her "What's wrong?" she asked and left the hairbrush aside and got closer to the younger girl 
Mayu looked at her in the eyes then kissed her and pushed her to bed 
"Mayu.." Yuki says while Mayu is on top of her kissing her 
"I want you.." Mayu murmures and bites Yuki's neck while her hands were under Yuki's shirt 
"Mayu..stop!" Yuki says trying to avoid the younger girl but it was hard beacuse her body was reacting differently
"Love me.." Mayu whispered on Yuki's then bit it and lick it
Yuki was trying hard to remove the younger girl off her but the waves of pleasure were uncontrable 
Mayu hands reached to her breast and squeezed them hard while mouth was about bit them too
"Stop!" Yuki says and pushes Mayu off her and sits on bed while Mayu wasn't listening her hands rubbed Yuki's thighs till Yuki get them off 
what? Mayu asked 
what are you doing? Yuki asked taking deep breaths while her whole body is shaking 
*nobody ever touched her like that before* 
" i wanted you.." Mayu answered 
look you're going to sleep here but if your hands gets to touchy you're going to the sofa! Yuki says still trying to catch her breath 
"sorry..." Mayu says looking down 
"let's sleep today was a long day" Yuki says and lays on bed then sighed 
do you regret? Mayu asks and hugs Yuki 
what? Yuki asks and looks at Mayu who has her head on Yuki's right shoulder 
"no.." Yuki says and gives her a soft kiss on the lips 

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
« Reply #124 on: September 08, 2012, 06:05:26 AM »
YAY Finally, Sae is out of the picture :3

But but but I pity Sae ;u;

I hope she'll fall in love with Sayaka ze gorira xD

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
« Reply #125 on: September 08, 2012, 07:14:30 AM »
Finally!!!!!!

Sae is out~ and Mayu is horny~ and Yuki is in love with Mayu~


Thanks for the update!!!!!!
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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
« Reply #126 on: September 08, 2012, 08:48:32 AM »
Poor Sae T_T
But I'm glad Mayuki can be together

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
« Reply #127 on: September 08, 2012, 10:07:38 PM »
 :w00t: Youhooooo!!!!  Mayuki is together!! Yay!! Yuki loves Mayu!! :inlove:

Sae is out yay :) (sorry I'm too cruel)

Thank you!!!
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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
« Reply #128 on: September 08, 2012, 10:37:09 PM »
Poor Sae-chan she's heartbroken  :cry:
But Mayu saw her first so it's actually fair  :sweatdrop:

Mayu is um yeah hormones
But Yukirin didn't regret breaking up with Sae.
Finally Rena-chan is showing her dere-dere side  :wub:

Thank you for your update
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« Last Edit: September 10, 2012, 11:06:43 PM by Megumi »
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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
« Reply #129 on: September 10, 2012, 12:36:31 PM »
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Rena looks at Jurina and kisses her
Finally Rena !!  :nya:
What is Sae going to react when she will see Mayu :scared:
I'm really scared of Yuki I hope she wont let Mayu again  :OMG:
I can't wait for the next  :pleeease:
« Last Edit: May 25, 2013, 12:52:41 AM by mo-chan »

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #130 on: September 14, 2012, 10:16:10 AM »
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
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(SUNDAY or the next day) 
Mayu observing Yuki while she sleeps her finger circling her back 
"I know you're thinking about Sae chan that's why you're acting weird,it makes me jealous that you have her on your mind..i have to make you forget!" Mayu thought and then kisses Yuki on her cheek because Yuki wasn't waking up,Mayu decided to use anothee way to wake her up so licked her ear and then bit her..
"Mayu it's too early for this.." Yuki murmured while Mayu sitted on her stomach
"heavy.." Yuki says then opened her eyes 
"Sorry..." Mayu murmured looking at Yuki's eyes 
"Mayu.." Yuki whispered feeling a little sorry 
"i just can't help it.." Mayu says and takes Yuki's hand and puts it on her chest "Can you feel my heartbeat? it's like my heart is going come out of my chest..i never felt thois way before!" She says emotionless 
Yuki was blushing *she has never done skinship to the younger girl..it was always Mayu touching her*
Mayu got off bed "i made you breakfast" She says while walks downstairs 
Yuki got up from bed and went to the bathroom 
Mayu was checking her mails on her phone 
Yuki came downstairs and looked the table *Everything on that table looked delicious* 
"Like Sae chan said..you were learning how to cook.." Yuki thought and then smirked 
Cyborgs can cook? who ever thought that? Yuki asked laughing 
Mayu pouted then sitted 
i'm playing Mayu chan! Yuki says smirking while eats 
ohhhh this is delicious! Yuki says excited as the reaction queen that she is 
i like you like it! Mayu says smiling 
~Meanwhile~
Jurina stop! Rena says smirking while Jurina kisses her all over her face 
i can't you're just damn cute! Jurina answers still devouring Rena's face 
i like you kissing but we're in the train..i'll let you kiss me once we get home! Rena smirking says trying to avoid the younger girl 
"there's nobody around.." Jurina says looking side to side 
"Jurina behave!" Rena says serious 
Jurina pouted "Just five minutes more.." The younger girl says and cupped the older girl cheeks and kissess her 
Beep!! Beep!! 
Rena pulled out her cellphone from her pocket 
~Phone call~
Rena chan! A voic says 
Sae chan? Rena asked serious while Jurina tris to kiss her on the lips 
I need to talk to you..where are you? Sae asks
Going home! Rena says trying to avoid Jurina 
I out of your house *Jurina stop!!* Rena shouts mad interrupting Sae 
*Jurina pouted then got up and sitted behind Rena*
i'm out of your house please come! Sae said and hanged 
"Sae chan.." Rena murmured 
*Jurina still pouting*
"I'm sorry..i have an important thing to do,i promise once i'm done i'll let you kiss me,hug me.." Rena says then kisses Jurina's forhead 
*The train stopped* 
Rena got off "i call you later!" she says while walks 
"but..Rena.." Jurina says as the doors closes 
~Meanwhile~
*MaYuki hugging on the sofa*
Are you still thinking about Sae? Mayu asked 
"huh? no..." Yuki answers and kisses Mayu's head 
"don't lie to me!" Mayu murmures hearing Yuki's heartbeat
it's just..i didn't want that she find out this way! is your sister doesn't bother you to hurt her? Yuki asks 
Mayu sits then looks at Yuki 
what's wrong? Yuki asks
Tears rolled on Mayu's cheek 
"Mayu.." Yuki murmured 
"I wanna go home.." Mayu murmured and got up started to look for her shoes 
what's wrong? Yuki asks and takes her by her arm 
"Of course it hurts me but the only thing you think about is Sae,you don't seem not even happy to have me.." Mayu says and more tears shows up 
"Mayuyu.." Yuki says while Mayu runs away 
STUPID YUKI..you're not the only one losing something cause this relantionship!!  Mayu thought while runs 
~Meanwhile~
Sae chan! Rena says 
Mayu and Yuki had an affair and she chose her! Sae says crying 
how did she find out? Rena thought while sits next to Sae in the sidewalk in front of Rena's house 
i'm stupid! Sae says sobbing 
Sae chan..you're not! Rena says and rubs the girls back 
"they just said that they were in love.." Sae murmured while grabbed a little rock
I'm so sorry! Rena says 
can you believe it? Yuki dating my little sis! Sae says and gets up and throws the rock that she had on her hand 
Sae chan you have to get better! Rena says trying to comfort the taller girl 
why i didn't choose right? Why i was so blind? I'm sorry Rena chan why i didn't choose you ? Sae asked looking at Rena's eyes,Both looked eachother in the eyes and soon enough Sae leaned and kissed Rena
Rena reacted and broke the kiss 
Sae chan this not cool.. i loved you but i now i have somebody else and i know deep down you still love Yuki so please leave out of this! Rena says 
sorry Rena! Sae murmured and turned around to leave
hey.. you seem really mess up! Rena says and takes Sas by her slip 
Sae looked at Rena "Huh.." 
I'll take care of you! Rena says 
~Meanwhile~ At Mayu's home 
Mayu chan you got back! Her mom says smiling while eats last night cake 
yep..i'm tired i'm going to my room! Mayu says while goes upstairs then locked the door and throwed herself on bed
i don't wanna think about you BAKARIN! Mayu thought and closed her eyes.She fast she fell sleep 
Afew minutes later she felt something on her ear..
Mayu opened her eyes and saw Yuki sitting next to her
ehhh?!!!?! How do you get in? Mayu asked and gets up from bed 
i thought waking you up by bitting your ear would be cool..by then window!  Yuki says with a smirk and winking her eye to the younger girl 
go away i don't wanna talk to you! Mayu says looking other way 
Reall? Yuki asked then got closer to the younger girl and looked at her in the eyes 
Stay away! Mayu says while gives a step back 
there's the wall! Yuki says and gets Mayu between her and the wall 
"you hurt me.." Mayu murmured 
Who said i wasn't happy that you were with me? i'm happy sorry not show it very much ..i'll promise i'll show it to you everyday! Yuki says smiling while grabs her girlfriend by her waist 
"don't ignore me again.." Mayu murmured looking down 
Yuki smirked "My spoiled Mayu always get what she wants from me!"  she says and grabs a teddy bear that was on Mayu's desk 
let her go! Mayu says trying to snatch it 
what? why? it's mine! Yuki says 
no,it's not! Mayu replies trying to snacth it from the taller girl which took advantage of the situation and planted a kiss on the lips of the younger girl
(Flashback 5 years ago) ~At the fair~ 
That game was great! Sae says holding Yuki's hand 
yeah it was fun..Mayu chan you haven't tried any game.are you sure you don't want to try? Yuki asks smiling to the younger girl 
actually i..*i need a bathroom!* Sae says  out of the blue interrupting Mayu's answer 
i think over there says bathrooms! Mayu says and points 
I'll be back girls wait for me! Sae says and runs to the bathroom
Yuki looked at Sae running away then shook her head "Mayu chan you were saying.." she says 
i don't like this place! Mayu says 
you sure you don't want anything? Yuki asked 
Mayu looked around then she saw a teddy bear that caught her attetion "I want that!" she says excited 
*Hit the target* Yuki read " i hate that game.." she thought
You sure you want that? Yuki asked 
"Yep.." Mayu replied smiling 
Yuki tried 3 times and she couldn't hit the target
*Mayu pouted*
Yuki sighed "i have no more money except my luch money for the week!" she thought 
Mayu was still pouting 
whatever i going to get that teddy bear..Anything to make Mayu chan smile! Yuki says and puts the money on the table and starts to shoot till she made Jackpot 
the helped gave Mayu her teddy bear..Mayu smiled widely 
"Thanks Yuki chan! She says smiling 
Goodbye luch food..why i always spoil this girl? Yuki thought 
now i'm happy..what did i miss? Sae asked 
nothing! Yuki replied 
~End of the flashback~ 
You didn't ate at school for 5 days..just for that teddy bear!  Mayu asked 
ehh well i wanted to make you happy! Yuki answers smiling hugging the younger girl 
Stupid Bakarin i love you and i love that you like to spoil me! Mayu says and kisses Yuki 
TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT! 

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #131 on: September 14, 2012, 10:30:40 AM »
Sae x Rena?! Wasn't expecting that..  :shocked
What about Jurina? :cry:

Hohoho~ Im really starting to like MaYuki now :heart:
But im still a SaeYuki fan!!  :P  :cow:

Poor Sae~  :cry:
 
Please continue your story cmze-san  :bow:

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #132 on: September 14, 2012, 10:45:15 AM »

what's wrong with sae-chan? why she kissed rena-chan? what will jurina do if she finds out about that  :shocked

..and i'm smiling while reading the MAYUKI part  :D

thanks for the update cmze-san your the best!!  :twothumbs  :deco:




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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #133 on: September 14, 2012, 12:58:22 PM »
I really love the Mayuki part!!! :inlove: :heart:

Why Sae kisses Rena!? Noooooo! Poor Jurina :cry:!

:heart: :heart: Mayuki  :heart: :heart:
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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #134 on: September 14, 2012, 01:05:35 PM »
I like how Yuki came in through the window~ Edward Cullen LOL

Yuki loved Mayu from the start! She just didn't want to admit it~

Sae and Rena ?! Rena loved Sae ?! No way ! Past is past, Rena ! >:O

Eeeehhh Poor Juju :< How could you Rena?! Now, I hate you here lol

It's not okay to cheat on an under-aged kid xD You'll destroy her belief in what love means. My little Juju ;u;
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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #135 on: September 14, 2012, 01:08:02 PM »
so lovely Mayuki  :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
but  :stoned:
why Sae kissed Rena!?  :scolding:
Sea's relationship is ruined she want to destroy Rena's relationship with Jurina  :angry1:
I know that Sae is sad but it's not cool what she did  :on redcard:
and Rena loved Sae it's really getting complicated  :frustrated:
what about Jurina  :pleeease:
« Last Edit: September 14, 2012, 01:17:23 PM by mo-chan »

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #136 on: September 14, 2012, 01:14:34 PM »
Sae and Rena?!!! OMG!
Yuki is so sweet with Mayu~

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #137 on: September 14, 2012, 06:58:07 PM »
yay mayuki are so cute!! youhou!!

Rena and Sae! What Sae doing?
Mayukiiiiiiii !!!!!!!

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #138 on: September 14, 2012, 09:03:41 PM »
Oh la la~ so this time Yuki is the attacker eh?? *smirks*

I know Sae is poor but don't do anything stupid Rena >:\

Pls pls update!!, I want to know what's going to happen xD

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Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
« Reply #139 on: September 17, 2012, 02:34:58 AM »
damn you sae!!! if jurina see what you did !! oh i dont want imagine it!

yuki...sweet as always! but they need to talk with sae ... hope its end good...

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