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Re: Rainy days CHAP 1 UPDATE 25/6/12 (kojiyuu)
« Reply #20 on: June 25, 2012, 05:16:48 PM »
Hehe I love tht.film its amazing and she's a proper b**ch to everyone and how could u. Sleep wiv one of ur mates girlfriend grrr :angry:

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Re: Rainy days CHAP 1 UPDATE 25/6/12 (kojiyuu)
« Reply #21 on: June 26, 2012, 10:30:30 PM »
colour of her soul

chap - 1 - The notebook

I walked far far away from her i needed time to think why wont she let me help her ??

Why do they hurt her call her names ??

Rain started to drop from the sky masking my tears as they fell to my cheek all i want to do is protect her i need to protect her i love her.

The night was getting colder and puddles covered the ground cars sped past me leaving smoke behind making me cough in discomfort that it had to enter my body.I put the hood of my blue jacket up to cover my head as the rain fell harder.If i cant help with her knowing then i have to help without her knowing i am.

But how ??

I found myself outside a bar that had screams coming from the inside that would scare a normal person but i found myself drawn to go in.

Eyes where glued on me as entered the bar this didnt make me feel self concious i was use to people watching my every move so i dont see why people with muscles the size of bricks would do that to me.

"Arnt you a cutie?"

"Get away from or you will regret it."

He pinched my cheek and tried to drag to me to the side but instead he found self on the floor craddling his arm in pain."You little bitch!" He screamed in pain but i ignored it i just walked away from him then out the bar.
Still raining oh how mother nature hates me isnt being shouted at by the person i love enough punishment for one day.
I kicked the ground annoyed with myself and her but as i did something fell infront of me.
I stepped slowly towards it and picked it up to discover it was a black note book stamped with DEATH NOTE on the front of it.I opened it up and flicked through the pages to find the book had rules about how to kill with it.Curious i took a pen from my pocket and writ one of the names of one of the girls that bullied Yuki in it and i thought i would wait till tomorrow to find out if it worked.
I stuffed the note book into my bag and walked home.

As i got home i put my shoes away then was greeted by my little sister when i walked in.
"Mayu!" She jumped on me hugging me till there was no air in my body i struggled to get her off me but thankfully i did before my body could collapse from lack of oxygen."Miichan go get changed from you unifrom you know mother will be made if you stain it." I told her she nodded her head then skipped up the stairs so she could change and if you listened carefully you could hear the door close and her singing NO3B's girl talk.

I took the remote control in my hand and sat on the couch then switched on the tv.

"17 year old Risa Haruna (A/N : made up person ) Died today at 5:30 of a heart attack which is unusual of a girl of such young age to have the doctors and autopsy have said there was nothing wrong with her mentally or phyiscally she was a normal healthy young girl the family of Risa are not able to comment on her death as shortly after they killed themselves leaving a note saying there unable to live without there precious daughter.Friends are beyond themsleves in grief a funeral will be held 5 days from now in honour of the family."

Did i just hear the news reporter right are my ears fooling me and telling me what i want to hear.Quickly i took the notebook from my bag and read the rules over and over again as i went upstairs leaving the newsreporter on the tv to talk to an empty room.
I got to my room and locked the door behind me and switched my tiny tv on then jumped into the medium sized bed this notebook is interesting mabye one more test to see if it actually works.

(A/N : What Mayu writes in the note book will be in this type of writing)

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Parents find her five minutes later

I closed the notebook after i finished writing and jumped off my bed put my phone on charge and turned on my laptop from its slumber.I went on my face book profile to be welcomed with ten more friend requests and 50 notifactions what did i do to be popular all i do is ignore them all.

I just left the requests and notifications for later and looked to see who was online.

(list of who is online)

Lovetan

Takamina <3 Acchan

Acchan <3 Takamina

Meetan

Pervy squirrel

Nyan Nyan

Miichan <3 cake

Marichan

Yuki

Ahh the person i want to talk has logged on i opened a chat with her and sent her a message.

" Hey Yuki =) "

" Hey ........ "

" Whats wrong are you still angry at me ?? " I typed still worried she was angry at me.

" No im fine dont worry ive got to go Mayu my mother is calling me for dinner."

Yuki has logged off.

I didnt even get a chance to say goodbye yup she is still mad i swear this girl is the only one that can get me out of CG mode and she doesnt even act proud.

"Breaking news another girl died this evening at the age of 17 the autopsy has announced the same as before she died of a heart attack the police are wondering weather the two deaths are connented but so far have found no clue."

My eyes widened no way she died 5 minutes after i writ her name this note book is the deadlist thing on earth and its in my possession oh lucky me Yuki i think i just found away to protect you.

"Hey there." I heard a voice my rooms locked so how i turned around on my chair to be frightened by a angels face.

"How did you get in here?"

"Im a death god i can go anywhere anytime i want and that right there is my death note." She said pointing to the notebook on the bed.

"So you are real?"

"What do you mean?"

"Death gods are real my first to kills where just experiments to see if the notebook really worked my suspicions where correct whats your name death god ?"

"Matsui Rena at your service."

"So tell me more about this death note Rena."

To be continued .....

A/N : Did you like it i hope so please comment and tell me where i need to improve and tell me what you liked
this fic is based on death note but things are going to be different but some the same im trying to stick to the film as much as i can.

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Re: Colour of her soul based on death note CHAP 1 UPDATE 26/6/12 (mayuki)
« Reply #22 on: June 26, 2012, 10:58:00 PM »
Ahhh I think she's going to go too far wiv it someone needs to tell her and lol I love the bit were it says and well done keep them coming please :)

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Re: Colour of her soul based on death note CHAP 1 UPDATE 26/6/12 (mayuki)
« Reply #23 on: June 27, 2012, 12:20:38 AM »
rena as shinigami? wow..
i'm a big fan of Death Note,especially Kira/Light.if kira really exist on earth,i must be become one of his followers.


will mayu kill more people?
please continue~


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Re: Colour of her soul based on death note CHAP 1 UPDATE 26/6/12 (mayuki)
« Reply #24 on: June 27, 2012, 01:54:49 PM »
OMG, I LOVE ALL THE 1st chaps so far.  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Rena-sama...  :wub:
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Re: Colour of her soul based on death note CHAP 1 UPDATE 26/6/12 (mayuki)
« Reply #25 on: June 27, 2012, 05:32:51 PM »
AKB48 = Big Bang !!

chap - 1 the start of Big bang

"Can you bring Takamina,Yuko,Rena,Miichan and Mayu to my office now please?" Akimoto-p asked his assistant who quickly nodded her head and walked out of his office.

Minutes later the 5 girls where inside his office awaiting the big news that the assistant had told them about even though she was sworn to secerecy.Akimoto-p took a big breath then motioned for them to sit down before he spoke.

"Girls the reason your her is beacuse I want you all to be in a new sub group called Big Bang who will be debuting in Korea under YG entertainment also you will all be dressed as boys everyone will know that you are actually girls you all know 2NE1 right ?" He asked before he continued and the five just nodded with the jaws hanging open in shock "Well they will be teaching you all Korean and be helping you with your dancing." He took a short breath then spoke again."Rena your stage name will be Gdragon you will be the leader of the group Cl will be taking extra care of you as she is teaching you how to rap Yuko you stage name will be Daesung lead vocal along with Mayu who's stage name is Taeyang Bom and Sandara will be your vocal coaches Takamina your stage name will be Top main rapper Miichan yours will be Seungri you will be vocal Minzy will look after the two of you okay?" Once again all they could do was nod.

"Your training will start in two days the 5 of you will go to the stylist in 5 minutes to sort out all of your new looks also do not tell any of your fellow members this will be a suprise to them and all of the country when you all reveal yourselves at your debut." None of them could believe it the 5 of them in a sub group together how much greater could life get the 5 of them where espeically close to eachother and go out to eat on a daily bases and now they get to start a new group and get to go where no AKB48 member has been before Korea the home to great bands like : 2NE1,Kara,Snsd,Beast,Mblaq and more and they might get to meet them.This was one of the greatest moments of there lives the 5 coudnt wait for there debut.

Akimoto-p could see the excitement in there faces as the news finally sank into them he smiled at the girls then realised the time and sent them away to get them fitted for there new stage clothes.

Yuko's pov

I coudnt be more happy at this moment right now we where getting measured for our male clothing before we got to pick the style we wanted to have for our alter ego.

The stylist's had already picked what are hair styles where like for that part we had no say but everything else we did.I looked around and decied that i would go for the smart bad boy type  look so i told my stylist and she started taking lots of clothes of the railings and labelled them with my name on.

Then flung them at me shouting for me to try them on I tried each of the outfits on pleased with how they complimented my figure and I and when my stylist put the wig on me my smile coudnt have got wider I looked perfect like a real boy I wore black skinnys hightops a sleevless jacket an brown top an brown medium wig.My part was done for the day but I was told to stay in the male clothing as Akimoto-P wanted to look at us before he left to see the other AKb members. Then I seen my fellow midgets shoes being filled with insoles and I dont mean one or two I five to ten I coudnt miss the chance to tease and by the looks of things neither could Miichan we high fived and began our 'Attack' on the small girl.

"Takamidget!" We shouted together earning a glare from the latter who didnt argue back as she was more interested in trying on her outfits when she was fully changed my jaw droped open an like on the cartoons i swear my toung fell out along with it on to the floor in shock.

She had a short silver haired wig and was tall and masculine and wore a gold and black tiger striped jacket,black jeans and hightops she looked very manly to all of us i coudnt believe this was Takamina.

Out of the 5 of us myself and Takamina where the only ones changed into are male clothing and we looked good even if i say so myself ahaha.

Next to change into male clothes was Mayu who looked amazing she had a black mohawk wig and was slightly taller then usual and looked as if she had big muscles she wore blue jeans black hightops and black jacket with the hood up.

Then Rena who had an all out bad boy vibe around her that is the completely different to her usual calm vibe she wore a graphic top tight blue jeans a checkred red top with black hightops and a hat hanging off the side of her head and a short spiked wig next was Miichan with a short black haired wig and clothes that looked very expensive she wore black jeans and hightops with a brown uneven length jacket which suited her well underneath a plain white top with necklaces drooping down on to her chest.

All us walked infront of a huge mirror that was in the room we coudnt believe that we where looking at oursleves we looked so different.Before we could gasp in our awsomeness (A/N : Lol)Akimoto-p came in with a camera and papers in his hands.We gave him a confused look until he signalled for us to huddle together as we did he motioned for us to pose.

He snapped a shot then said he was uploading it on the Akb48 website the picture was posted up and then underneath it said the new sub group of Akb48 Big Bang can you gusse who the members are ? "Here." He the passed us each 6 sheets of paper each "These are your debut songs Haru Haru and lies okay oh i forgot to tell you 2NE1 will aslo be helping you with your english as alot of it will be in your songs now i need you all to get changed back to normal your going to meet with the other Akb members." We all done as he said and then left with him to meet the others.

Koji pov

I dont think i have been more bored in my life im the only one here for once ive arrived early instead of late i dont want to be scolded by the miny captain for the nth time this month.

I sighed then took my phone from my pocket and checked the Akb48 website to see that Akimoto-p had uploaded something new on to it. A new sub group? Ahh there dressed as boys wow they look good hmm i wonder who is in it that sort of likes Yuko mabye she would tell me if i asked her.

I looked at the clock to see that i had ten more minutes left till everyone arrived then *BEEP* *BEEP* my phone went of telling me that i had a text.

When i read who sent it a smile spread across my face in a second i opened it up and read it.

To : Nyan Nyan
Argh im so tired i cant wait till i see you
I miss you oh did you see that picture Akimoto-p put up
i wonder who they are im 5 mins away cant wait to see you xxxxx
Love from
From : My squirrel

I sent a reply right away and was practically jumping from my seat causing people to stare at me.I sort of forgot they dont know that Yuko is my girlfriend so them seeing me jump out my seat in happiness off one text is probably going to cause some rumors or they will just think im even more odd then i already am.There most likely thinking the second one but hey im smart when i want to be.

Just like she said in her texts 5 minutes later herself,Takamina,Miichan,Mayu and Rena came to the arranged meeting place with Akimoto-p behind them i honestly didnt think Akimoto-p would be here early he mostly comes about 10 minutes after he said he would mabye what he wants is important.

Whilst in my day dream i didnt notice my squirral dashing towards me because before i knew it i was knocked to the ground trapped in a bear hug.Knowing that i woudnt be able to get out of this hug for along time i hit her lightly on the head earing a pout from the latter which in return earned a kiss on the check for her so that she would behave.She coudnt stop grining from that moment on and before we could say anything to eachother she dragged me away to somewhere away from the others.

Mayu's pov

It seems Koji is the only one here besides us ahh i wish people would arrive on time how annoying. I cant believe i have 5 days till i get to meet 2NE1 and learn from then and i have to learn how to do more dances harder dances. Why do i feel once i have learnt the dances for big bang's song the akb ones are going to be so much easier.Ahhh so much stress oh finally people have began arriving here its about time.

"Mayu!" I heard someone shout i turned my body to see Yuki running towards me with a huge smile ingraved into her face.And right behind her Sae great just great.

"Oh hey Yuki hey Sae." I said coldy making Sae give me a glare like she always does why because in her words im a threat in her and Yuki's relastionship which might cause them to break up in the future.Like always Yuki didnt notice and took my hand in hers and started telling me about her amazing day with her boyfriend sorry i mean girlfriend im sure anyone would make that mistake i mean come on Sae looks really boyish.And me being her best friend pretened to care like i always do luckily Miichan noticed my displeasure and came to where the three of us where.

"Mayu come help me prank Rena and Jurina!" Miichan said taking my hand and pulling me to the left."Miichan cant your prank wait i havnt seen her in one week you see her all the time with Takamina Rena and Yuko since your close!" Yuki moaned not seeing Sae's mood change from sort of happy to annoyed."Sorry Yuki its an important prank tell you what to make it up to you i wont prank you for 10 days." Miichan shouted dragging me away from the couple thank god i have a friend like her."Thanks Minami you always seem to save me at the right time."I say thankfully though not changing my CG expression."You know your the only one that doesnt call me by my nickname Mayu its cute ehehehe anyway about the prank." She then goes on explanining the prank to me bit by bit step by step.

Her prank was one of the funniest ones ive heard in long time the two of us walked to where Wmatsui couple and asked to have a sip of there drink of water.We took it from there hands and began drinking the water and both of us where very sneaky and put a tablet that would turn there teeth red then passed it back we both then tapped there backs saying thankyou whilst sticking fake bugs onto there backs and putting a fake spider in both of there pockets and then walked away.Neither of the two noticed which made the two of us start laughing uncontrollably this was one of the rare moments where i would come out of my CG attitude well its rare to others but not Miichan.Suddenly we heard screams making are eyes open in suprise then we heard "Jurina what is that on your back!" Then Jurina repeated the same words except asking what was on Rena's back causing us to chuckle.

"Your teeth!" They both screamed pointing to eachother ahahaha then we seen them put there hands in there pocket to try and get mabye tissues but all the pulled out was a spider causing them to scream again while the others where either laughing or trying to calm the pair down."MAYU MIICHAN YOUR DEAD!" Both of us gulped then ran as fast as we could towards Takamina who was talking to Akimoto-p."Help!" We shouted but it was to late the Wmatsui had caught us by the ear and pulled us to the right there faces where red causing us to have to hold in our laughs.

In the end we got a 10 minute lecture and said sorry to them by the looks of things Acchan hast arrived yet so we cant have the meeting or whatever it is how frustrating i hate waiting.

Miichan's pov

After the lecture from the two pale skinned beauties Mayu was once again dragged away by Yuki she turned her head to me looking at me with pleeding eyes to once again take her away from Yuki but i coudnt do that again because Yuki would take her away again.

And by the looks of things she understood as she just turned her head to face Yuki with a bored look which Yuki didnt really care about as she carried on talking with Sae next to her with a half happy and angry look.I just rolled my eyes Yuki really must not understand peoples feeling she is like Mayu and Takamina put into one im surprised she could confess to Sae.

All of a sudden i felt a sharp pain in my ear and i knew instantly who it was."Marichan do you have to pull my ear?" I could hear her laugh and i could tell she had a smirk on her face oh how i wish i could wipe it off."Aww look who got smart you know who i am without looking at me aww how cute gacchapin." Oh hell no she did not just call me gacchapin "Shut up old women go play some bingo okay!" I replied without looking at her i could tell that her face was going red in anger my mission accomplished A* for me yay.Then bang she smacked me across the head not playfully not nicely but hard i only called her old wtf!

With that i got up and walked away from her i will show her i cant wait till Big bang debut she will not believe that i can do that and she will stop treating me as a child.

Author's pov

Finally the last member had arrived at the meeting so everyone gathered around Akimoto-p to hear his announcement.
"Now i think all of you have seen the picture on the website well that is the new sub group of AKB48 called big bang the members will reveal there faces at there debut stage in Korea as they will be a Korean group under YG they will debut over here later on there debut song is called Haru Haru as you gussed yes there dressed as boys an there not aloud to tell you who they are so all of you have to keep gusseing."Akimoto-p said to everyone as they looked at him listening very carefully to every word he said."Any questions?" He asked causing hands to shoot up in the air.

"Miichan go ahead."

"Why dont we get to know who the members are?" She asked acting like she didnt know who was in the band and that she was in it.

"Thats because if the fans have to wait so do you its only fair okay Marichan you go next."

"Obviously the people in the group are here so will they be acting as if they dont know?"

"Yes that way none of you will be able to gusse or find out easy okay Mayu whats your question?"

"How long will the band members be away for in Korea?" She asked wondering how long she will have to be in Korea for?"

"Im not sure but they will be flying back every week so they can be at our concerts and appear on AKbingo an other variety shows Takamina what do you want to ask?"

"Wont it be obvious who is in the group if there going to go to Korea later on untill they debut?"

"No because at the week before everyone will doing variety shows early then you will all be off for a week and the members will be doing training over here aswell okay last two now Rena your next."

"Wont other members be curious if someone has more dance practice and rehearsel then them?"

"No none of you can tell members your schedules and most of your schedules will be seprate from others okay last one Yuko."

"Will the new sub group be appering on variety shows over here and Korea?"

"Yes they will we are determined to make them one of the best groups in the world okay no more questions you can all go home."

To be continued....

A/N: Thanks for reading please comment and tell me where i need to improve also i know Haru Haru or lies wasnt Big bang's debut song but i wasnt sure what was plus its like one of my favs the next chap will be skipped ahead to 5 days later so they will be meeting 2NE1.

This is the pic Akimoto-p put up on the web http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=big+bang+kpop&hl=en&gbv=2&biw=1024&bih=476&tbm=isch&tbnid=6V23FkFd9MHq1M:&imgrefurl=http://iloveohkpop.wordpress.com/2010/05/28/yg-entertainment-confirms-bigbangs-korean-comeback/&docid=yHH8RJOBfUnb_M&imgurl=http://iloveohkpop.files.wordpress.com/2010/05/d3.jpg%253Fw%253D560&w=457&h=351&ei=_xniT53ALqSd0QW6kOCRAw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=103&vpy=2&dur=561&hovh=197&hovw=256&tx=110&ty=66&sig=103771189715920109181&page=3&tbnh=136&tbnw=185&start=25&ndsp=14&ved=1t:429,r:0,s:25,i:167


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Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 1 UPDATE 27/6/12 (mayuki)
« Reply #26 on: June 27, 2012, 05:42:54 PM »
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OMG!!!

I LOVE YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, ROBYN-SAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This update is AWESOME!!!

I mean, I LOVE 2NE1, I LOVE BIGBANG, I love Yuko-sama, Rena-sama and the others, so THANK YOU!!!
« Last Edit: June 27, 2012, 06:17:18 PM by sakura_drop_ »
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Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 1 UPDATE 27/6/12
« Reply #27 on: June 27, 2012, 06:05:45 PM »
Lol let me guess tht was ur favorite to write and lol I love the prank how did u think of red teeth lol good chap update soon plz

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Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 1 UPDATE 27/6/12
« Reply #28 on: June 27, 2012, 06:34:40 PM »
I really REALLY, ABSOLUTELY love this story. BTW I think that Takamina has the potential to rap. She could do it with training. :D. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great Story! :thumbup BTW I love Big Bang. :D

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Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 1 UPDATE 27/6/12
« Reply #29 on: June 28, 2012, 05:06:19 PM »
@Adam : Im basing this alot off songs lol so it should be cute

@Haruko : Yup he is gonna be player lol when he grows up

@Tanchan : Yer its all a dream like most of it is going to be ahahahaha

Replys for colour of her soul :

@Adam : your on the right line lol

@Yukofan : can u gusse why i chose Rena to be a death god oh and my fav person in Death note is L i have watched the film loads to !!

@Sakura_drop_ : Im glad that you like them all

Replys for Akb48 = Big bang :

@Sakura_drop_ : lol thanks just call me Robyn no need for the san since your older than me i think im glad you like the update and the idea came cause something in my mind said that Yuko looked like Daesung and i love 2NE1 to there my all time fav band

@Adam : Yup you where right oh an in your fic you made them pull a prank on me with spiders im so gonna get you back in one of mine with your worst fear.

@TakaminaBG : Glad you like it i love Big bang 2 ahaha and i think Takamina could rap to it would be awsome !!!

To everyone : Thank you all for reading and supporting my fics

Chap 2 - If i had a girlfriend

Past present Future

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=gOgV4OMP2V8#t=39s

We got off the bus and i interwined our hands together.We waited for everyone else to get off then headed to the filming of Akbingo.You knew i was upset because this was going to be my last filming of Akbingo as an Akb48 member and ace.You always comfort me in your arms when tears stain my face when i think of things like that."Atsuko dont be worried or upset okay just go with the flow like you always do." You said smiling while squeezing my hand lightly.

As we made are way to the building slowly and i remembered when I confessed to you.
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I sent you a text as soon as i woke telling you to meet me in the park at midnight no questions asked in which you replied okay.
I quickly phoned my mother.

"Moshi moshi."

"Moshi moshi mother can you make me some picnic food please oh and can i lend a blanket?"

"Yer sure what is it for darling?"

"Secret."

"Whatever stop by at my work place an i will give you them okay."

"Thanks bye mother."

Before she could reply i hung up my phone and placed it on my bed then took a shower.

After taking a shower for an hour an a half i was felt clean so i dryed my self and put on sweats then took my keys from the bowl by my door and left to get the things from my mothers work place.

When i got there i was surrounded by fans asking for my autograph and to take pictures i obviously had to say yes which caused me to get a bit irritated since i was losing my patience.More then 15 minutes later i could get inside my mothers work place without any problems from fans.

"Mother have you got them?"

"Yes there in my office just go in a get them."

"Thankyou."

I ran into her office and dragged everything off her desk then ran out of the building then to my car and drove as fast as i could home.The first thing i did was pick out my clothes i chose a simple white dress with white pumps and a brown hat that had a black bow around the top.With my outfit picked out i chose to wear light makeup by the time i was finished i only had 4 hours till i went to meet you.

Ring Ring

"Moshi Moshi."

"Acchan we have got the lights and flowers for you where do want us to drop them off?"

"Just drop them off at my apartment im here anyway."

"Okay see you there."

I hung up the phone and got changed into my clothes after i changed there was a knock at the door so i opened it to be greeted with the smiling face of Miichan."This is everything you wanted right?" She asked i nodded my head and she left.
For the second time that day i took my keys from the bowl by the door and drove my car to the park.I chose a secluded area away from everyone we didnt want anyone to take are picture right?Trees blocked off the sight of the area to others so i texted you the directions so that you could find me later.Then i started to set up everything.

I decorated the trees with bright lights that calmed the atmosphere i put bowes around the tree trunks then engraved or names in one.I set out the cloth on the floor and setup rose petals around it i knew you would love it.I looked at my watch to find i had 3 minutes until you arrived.A feeling i coudnt describe was whirling around my stomach making my hands clamy.

"Atsuko did you do all this?" That voice i knew it right away i turned my body to face you to see your face redder than a Robins breast i chuckled and took your hand in mine and led you to where the blanket was.I sat down and patted next time and you fell down next to me.I took my hand away from your safe comforting one reluctantly and took a basket a food from my side and placed it infront of us.

"A picnic under the stars." You muttered i knew you would love it.Before i opened the basket i gathered my courage and confessed to you."Takamina i love you i have since i met you your the reason i cant sleep at night since your always on my mind i feel lonely when your not by my side and sad when your sad i know that you dont want to burden people by letting your emotions show and your always there for everyone so let me be there for you and show how much i love you." I finished in one long breath your face was shocked but then fell into a smile."I love you too Atsuko always have always will."Then you kissed me our first kiss so sweet and full of love.

When we tore apart we were both red so i suggeseted we eat the food after that i shown you what i engraved into the tree.You smiled like a crazy person when you seen it and kissed my cheek.
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From that day on we have never been a part a smile found my face and you kissed my hand it was time to film my last episode of Akbingo while i was Akb48 ace and i know i will always be the number one ace in your heart.

to be continued........

A/N : That was her thinking about the past btw until.
Thanks for reading comment and tell me where to improve.
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Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
« Reply #30 on: June 28, 2012, 05:32:15 PM »
UWA~~, 2NE1 is my all time favorite band too *squeels and huggles Robyn*

And thank you for this update, AtsuMina never hurts  ;)
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Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
« Reply #31 on: June 28, 2012, 05:59:11 PM »
baby baby baby baby boo
i love the video as well as the chapter.. i really feel the scene hahaha  *butterflies on my chest*
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Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
« Reply #32 on: June 28, 2012, 06:12:55 PM »
i never get tired reading ur fic!!good job robyn,..
I just have a exam,and i think all my answer is wrong!!
But aftr i read ur updte,i forget my exam in my advnce engr clss!
Tnx robyn!hehe
Pls update more!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
« Reply #33 on: June 28, 2012, 06:38:38 PM »
Wah!!!  :cow: I really like the Past present future chapter.. :inlove: :inlove: even though I kinda confused with their kids names at first..  :lol: but I love it..  :twothumbs

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Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
« Reply #34 on: June 28, 2012, 07:20:35 PM »
Awww thats soo sweet and romantic what Atsuko did Awwwww  :wub: :wub: :heart: :heart: and ur such a meanie to me lol putting my fear in  :cry: but I forgive you


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Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
« Reply #36 on: June 29, 2012, 06:26:08 AM »
Aww atsumina :D

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Re: Past present future CHAP 2 UPDATE 28/6/12 atsumina
« Reply #37 on: June 29, 2012, 04:00:43 PM »
Replys :

@Sakura_drop_ : Ahh *hugs back* Bommie and cl are my favs in 2NE1 lol and yup atsumina never hurts though i find them the hardest to write

@Miayaka : I want a boy to do that for me in the future so it came into my head and i love the song to Yoseob is so cute

@Chichay12 : Hey Kat im glad i could take your mind off things im sure you did awsome in the test and im on chap 2 of 50 shades of grey im a slow reader lol its quite cool so far

@Flean : Sorry about confusing you *Hits self on head* im glad you like it though

@Adam : My payback will be 2morra ahahahahah

@TakaminaBG : Glad you like it lol thanks for reading

@Haruko : I know so sweet

Rainy Days

chap 2 - i cant believe it

"Where am i?"

"The hospital."

"HOSPITAL!"

"Yes you-"

"Get me out of here now!"

The nurse rushed out of the dull white room and left me alone why am i here what happaned did i have to much to drink or something last night?

Then an man with a long white coat came into my room with a terrified nuse behind him.I rolled my eyes and pushed myself up so i could look at the doctor face to face."You will be staying here for two days then you can go home we just need to run some tests on you okay?" He told me "Tests what type of tests?" I questioned "I cant tell you just yet not until we are sure please co-operate as best you can till you leave." He answered i just waved my hand signalling him to leave which he complied as he left the room with the nurse leaving me lonely once more.

"I need a time machine~~~~~" A voice sang i looked around the room searching for the voice to find that it was coming behind a curtain.I pulled the curtain aside and there was a little girl singing by herself drawing in a book."Hello." Is all i could say she turned around and smiled at me "Hello im Kasai Tomomi and you are ?" Wow she sounds sort of mature for a little girl "Im Kojima Haruna." She smiled brightly at me when i said my name she then lifted her book to the air and shown me the drawing inside."Whats that i ask?" I ask because all i see are scribbles on the paper."Its a flower silly isnt obvious?" She asked "Not really..." I whispered thankfully not loud enough for her to hear.

I stood up and moved away to my bed that was behind the curtain next to hers i jumped down on my bed then snuggled down into it.What time is it i thought looking up to the clock on the other side of the room.10 at night i put my head against the pillow and let sleep take over my body to wake up 3 hours later.

Where is the toilet argh i jumped from my bed and left the room only to hear tiny foot steps behind me.Then a tug on my shirt pulled my downwards ever so slightly.

"Are you going the toilet?" The girl who i believe to be called Tomomi asked i just nodded and tried to push her away but she kept coming back eventually she took her hand in mine and leaded me to the toilets."What are you doing up so late?" I questioned she just pointed to the toilet ahhh she need the toilet to.She must have been to scared to come on her own cute.

She finished and washed her hands then i did she then took my hand again and walked back from the toilets to the room.I tucked her in comfortably then kissed her forehead wishing bad dreams away and went to my bed to sleep till morning.

I woke up with light blinding me and chuckling next to me.I turned my head to see Tomomi smiling and laughing at me i was sort of annoyed by that but i wasnt going to show that to a little kid."Koji look at this." She shown me a picture of a huge house with trees all around it "Is that where you live?" I asked but she shook her head "No this is where we will live in the future from now on your my big sister." She announced i smiled in responce to her then a nurse came and took her out the room.

About ten minutes later a man came in with a clipboard in his hands "Kojima Haruna where going to a cat scan okay come on." I pushed myself off my hard bed and followed the doctor before i knew i was in side this weird confusing machine.A couple of seconds later her let me go and then discharged me early.

Just as i was walking from the hospital a nurse took my wrist and forced me to face her."Please come visit Tomomi she talks about you all the time im sure that you coming would be a huge moral boost for her." The nurse said my heart sank for Tomomi but i wasnt going to visit instead i lied to the nurse saying i would then left.

The first thing i did when i got home was go inside my messy wait scratch that its clean now how and why?

"Im sorry i just had to clean it when you where in hospital i thought it would be easier for you." A voice suprised me instead of saying something i just lay on my bed not caring for the existence for the other person in the room.I could hear her foot steps fade away as she walked away and down the steps.

I wonder what that test was for i thought the slammed my face into the pillow sighing why is my life so annoying and why do i have such annoying people in my life.

Wait she knew i was in the hospital and didnt come and visit am i really that mean of person that she woudnt come and see.No thats not it most likely the idoitic midget said stay away and let her grow up or something.

I checked my while i put it on charge since it died in the hospital not one person had texted me saying to get better or anything like that and im called selfish.I changed my clothes and made my way down stairs and switched on the tv despite the protests from my spineless mother.

Everything on the telly was boring like really boring how should i explain it ahh like thats it like history class when your learning about the same thing you have learnt a million times before.The door shut telling me the midget was home okay now it was my time to talk to her.

"Hey midget why didnt you come see me in hospital?"

"Why did you end up in hospital?"

"Answer me dont give me such a ignorant answer smurf!"

"I had work besides its not like you would have came to visit us if we where there!"

The spineless one just stood still watching the argument from the kitchen.

"And you Atsuko why didnt you visit me?!"

She was shocked hearing her name but answered seconds later.

"I didnt because i coudnt i was looking after your cousin Negima!"

Wait are those tears coming from the small womens eyes?

"Why are you crying?"

"Stop fighting and the pair of you sit down i just got your hospital results back."

I sat down confused.

"You have cancer you have to go back tommorow for treatment."

My world crashed and slown down cancer there was no way i could have that why me what did i do?! Am i that bad of a person ? Did i do something wrong in my past life ? I stood up and tried to walk but instead fell down on my knees and let tears stroll down my face and my whines fill the air.I could her the quiet sobs of the two people behind me i coudnt speak when i tried my throat was dry and sore.

I have cancer my life was over.

To be continued ......

A/N : I hope you all liked it please comment tell me what you like and where to improve thanks for supporting my fics im ill at the moment but im still writing 3 out of 4 fics chapter 2's have been writen yay im proud of myself.

Oh an if anyone has seen the drama of pretty guardian sailor moon did you know the little girl that plays Rei is the girl that plays Rina in dear friends lol so grown up and such a great actoress.

Sorry but Keiko Kitagawa is one of my all time my actoress.
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Re: Rainy days CHAP 2 UPDATE 29/6/12 kojiyuu
« Reply #38 on: June 29, 2012, 04:09:24 PM »
KOJIPPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

OMG... So sad...

Anyway, I'll be waiting for your next update  :deco:


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« Reply #39 on: June 29, 2012, 04:46:00 PM »
Nooo cancer I feel sorry for her even tho she's really vain Ahh  :cry: and ahhh so mean Ahh btw hope u get better  :)

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