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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 12
« Reply #100 on: September 08, 2012, 10:15:13 PM »
Really good chapter! :heart: :inlove:

I love the lion XD
Who is the girl? She know Yuki... And she sees her! :shocked
Oh! Where is Haruna? :?
Rena and Yuki relationship is cute :love: , They are really friends. :peace: And Mayu jealous is cute!!! :wub:
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 12
« Reply #101 on: September 09, 2012, 07:24:31 AM »
hi~ I'm new here,
this story is interesting,
It make me more wondering Mayu hidden ability,
first, she can saw spirit,
second, she know a lots things that others dunno,
third, she give me a feeling that she is some kind of priest,

After chap 12 the last person who saw Yukirin is who?
and on previous person who give candy to Haruna is who?

looking forward for the new update.

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 12
« Reply #102 on: September 09, 2012, 10:24:42 AM »
Yes an update!!

Mayu know a lot of ghost!! The lion is really funny!! (even if he is not for someone)

Interesting... New girl!!! Who she is??
Mayukiiiiiiii !!!!!!!

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 12
« Reply #103 on: September 09, 2012, 12:55:48 PM »
Its not bored! Its make me wanna more and more

Its that girl is jurina?
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 12
« Reply #104 on: September 14, 2012, 11:40:04 PM »
@ChuuuPuffss : I think maybe it'll get deeper and deeper in the future  :on roll:
@yuukimoko : as u requested, updated  :on gay:
@kahem : because of the lion? lol remember the character of Aki-P in here? The lion is like the animal version of him  :on cigar:


@bunny_rabbit : let's me tell you something, I already decided the ending before i start :]
@Megumi : No prob lol and u read xxxHolic? I love them too xD Yuko is the best!!!  :luvluv1:
@Chanaline : I'm glad u like him, and Haruna? maybe next chapter, to be honest I have no idea for next chapter.  :cool2:
@m00nchild : welcome new reader :] it'll explain everything about her in near future  :kekeke:
@Pwety : Read and you'll know  :nya:
@kurogumi : well...  :on ksweat:







Chapter 13: The awakening of demon, Matsui Rena

“Y-Yuki-chan!?”

“J-Jurina!? Wait! What!! You can see me?” Yuki exclaimed as the girl came closer, Mayu was a little unhappy, she didn’t like trouble but why it kept coming after her.

“What’s going on Mayu?” the reaction queen turned to the Cyborg waiting for an answer, everytime she had a question Mayu would always be the one who cleared up her queries. But unlucky for her, today the girl was not in the good mood to answer, she just stared back.

The lion king realized the awkward situation, he could read Mayu’s thinking since he knew her when she still a little girl, so he decided to speak for her.

“We call this place the World of truth, this is the most sacred and purest place in the forest, the truth will show it form in here. Even a single emotion of a person would still showing through the aura around them and people could easily see it with their normal eyes. All the living creatures are equal. Which meant in here the normal people could see all the weird things that they are not supposed to see.”

“So you meant as long as I’m here I can see Yuki-chan right?”

“Exactly”

“So cool right Rena-chan? You can see me no----Eh??” Yuki shouted as she saw Rena acted so strange.

After arrived here, she didn’t speak a word. The black aura from nowhere began to escape from her. The horns sudden showed their form on the girl’s head, fangs could be seeing behind the pink thin lips and her hair suddenly grow long, so long that could cover her whole body. Liked she just put on her body the black feathers of a raven.




Rena in demon mode



“Rena-chan…” Jurina murmured, her eyes were widening in shock, Yuki was doing the same after seeing Rena lifted her head up, releasing a pair of black eyes. However, there was a girl who lost in her own world that didn’t even mind what was going on.

Are you kidding me? Three troubles in a day? My energy is depleting ... Mayu blankly spaced out, until a sudden echoed voice brought her back to reality.

“I don’t remember that I allowed you to bring a demon into my sacred place” the lion said

“I didn’t know the blood of demon is running in her, but wait, isn’t it the same for you? You didn’t realize she’s a demon until now” Mayu calmly replied the king of spirit.

“Cuz she was in human form”

“No excusing”

The pale girl began to giggle, anger was filled in her eyes.

“Yabai…” Mayu and the lion said at the same time.

Rena suddenly jumped into the sky and launched an attack on the girls, luckily they dodged in a right time otherwise all of them already become chopped meat.

“What should we do Mayuyu!!?” Yuki shocked, after seeing Rena’s attack crushed a couple of her black hairs.

“Oh? she could touch you?” asked Mayu while running.

“Yes!! And I don’t know why!!” 

“Well, it easy to understand, because part of her is demon” the lion ran beside Mayu said

“What do you mean part of her is demon?” Jurina exclaimed

“Everything makes sense now…” Mayu whispered

“Make sense wha--AHH!?” Yuki shouted after seeing Rena just behind them.

“MAYUYU DO SOMETHING!!!”

“First, we have to--Ah! Itai…” too busied with thinking the girl tripped on a huge root, at the moment so looked up also was the moment the haft-demon girl about to place an attack on her. But luckily, one of the Goshinboku spirit, the giant elephant showed up and threw her sway, making her ended of hitting on a sacred grove.

“Sugoi…” the Cyborg was astonishing at the super power of the elephant.

“Good job, you’re really my left hand” the lion king appeared from nowhere said.

You useless, only show up when danger is gone… Mayu thought as she saw him came back

“I’m not useless. I was about to save you” the giant king raised his low voice

“Did you just read my mind?” the girl coldly looked at him

“No, I just read your eyes”

“…”

“…”

“…”

“…”

“Stop staring at each other!!!” Yuki and Jurina shouted.

“Ok, let’s end this. She’s destroying this place” the lion said in a serious voice

He sudden became grave and raised his roar. A majestic roar that could echo over and over in the forest, making the birds panicking flew away, he was calling his ally. Asking them to protect this forest, protect their house.

In a short time, countless of shadows showed themselves after the sacred grove. It hard to see their form behind the giant trees, the only thing people could see was their glowing eyes. Slowly, they walked out the darkness and starting to circle the demon girl. They were humming something distracted the middle target and suddenly they stopped their move, and began to roar.

All the roars from different animals making the girl holding her head in pain. Yuki was heartbreaking as she saw her precious friend suffering, she wanted to do something to stop it, but she was just a spirit, would someone listen to her, she couldn’t even touch them. Luckily, a voice shouted crowding out the roars, making them stop their move.

“J-Juri-chan…” Yuki stuttered watching the girl ran toward Rena, who just fainted.

“I think you overdid it” said Mayu calmly

“We was about to stop but then that girl shouted” the lion king looking at Jurina, who was carrying Rena in her arm.

“Really?”

“…Really” the lion quietly replied, he looked away trying to avoid Mayu’s gaze

“You saved one of my friends and hurt one of them, so we draw. I don’t have to do anything for you now” the Cyborg coldly said to king and walked toward her friends.

Not again… the giant lion thought, he was always helping Mayu but ended up with nothing. Her tricky always win over him.





“Rena-chan! Rena-chan!!” were the only words I could hear, my head felt so dizzy. My eyes were so blurry, I couldn’t see it clear, but I’m sure I saw two shadows.

One of the shadows was so familiar, that’s right, I remembered it. It was a face of a girl that I used to see every day, a face that I could never forgot, a face that when a smile surfaced would become that most beautiful thing I ever saw.

Yes, it was Yuki-chan. She was worrying for me, I could hear it through her shaking voice, saw it through her teary eyes. I wondered when was the last time I saw it, I was glad to see her face, but not in this situation. I wanted to see her smile, not her worried face. Especially when it was because of me.

I smiled to her, to show that I’m ok, suddenly I felt my cheek wet, it was tears but it’s not Yuki’s. She was a spirit, she could cry and I could never fell it.

I knew it was from someone else, someone that also cared for me, someone that carried me in her arms, held me close to her body. It felt so warm and relax. I didn’t know since when I fell asleep in that comfort embrace.








*chirps chirps* *chirps chirps*

“Mm…” Rena trying to open her eyes, the sun was too shined for her after a long sleep.

“Where…am I?” the pale girl asked herself as she looking around the room, an empty room excepting the bed she was laying on and a calendar on the wall.

“You awake” a screen sudden popped out next to her.

“M-Mayu-chan?” Rena said with a surprised face, she was trying hard to sit up.

“Don’t move, you haven’t recovered yet. Your medicine will arrive soon”

 “Anou…What happened? I couldn’t remember anything” Rena said as she felt her head aching.

Well…Where should I start?...






…Flash back…

“Don’t worry, she will turn back to her human form soon” Mayu said walking to Jurina and Yuki.

“Mayuyu…” the girl looked up with her teary eyes

“Someone explain to me. What the heck is going on?” Jurina said didn’t bother to look at them, her head was down, her arms were holding Rena tightly. There was a long silence, then a monotonous voice spoke up.

“If what I’m thinking is right then Rena is a haft-human and haft-demon. Rena that you guys knew is her human side, a weak, shy girl. And the demon side is the one you just met” Mayu took a deep breath and continued.

“However, this is a rare race, or I should say it extremely rare. I only read it through an ancient book, so I don’t know a lot about them. But I can surely say this, even how good their human side is, when they turn to the demon side it is a completely different story. They might hurt you, create damage, injuries, or worse you would be killed. Especially, when they can’t control their power, the haft demon will be the wildest, heinousest creature. The reason why they’re more dangerous than full-blood demon is because the full-blood know what they’re doing and they can stop when they want. And the haft doesn’t like them, it hard for them to control the thirsty blood monster, because haft of them are human, it is more weaker than the full blood.” Mayu sighed after her a long talk, it took a lot of her energy to say such a long explanation.

“So you meant we should stay away from her?” asked Jurina, the furious was forming around her.

Mayu didn’t say anything, she stood there, silently. Yuki was staring at her, waiting for an answer that wouldn’t hurt her, or Rena, an answer that would make everybody happy. But after a long silence, she knew her hope wouldn’t come true, Mayu’s face looked so serious and…cold.

“Yes… is the answer I would like to say” Mayu turned facing her back to them “But even if I say it, there will be someone who only does what she like, so why I do have to say something that would make she unhappy” the Cyborg began to wake away, whispering in her mouth “Not mention that Rena is my friend…”

“Mayuyu…” Yuki happily murmured, a warm smile appeared on her face. She was so happy that she found a right person, happy that God didn’t merciless at her in the end.

“Oh” The lion king sudden looked up to the sky “I think it about time” he smiled.

The snow flowers began to fall from the sky, it was so beautiful that could make everyone stopped what they were doing and paid all the attention on it. Some was fell into the audiences’ eyes because they didn’t dare to close it, they afraid that if they close their eyes the show would disappear. They didn’t want to miss the show, even a single moment.

Jurina’s eyes began to freeze because the flowers fell in, she was yelled in pain.

“Don’t worry, it is the blessing of the forest. You will feel better soon”

Right after the lion finished, the girl’s pain also went away. Nothing changed but she could tell the difference in her eyes, she had a feeling that it just being cleared by something, something very pure. She would never forget this moment, the moment that she witnessed the most mirage thing in the world.







“So…did I hurt anyone?” Rena asked, looking at her bandaged hands.

“Nope…”

…Excepting a couple of Yuki’s hair
Mayu thought as she saw a light smile on Rena’s face.

“…Yokatta”

“You…already knew it right? You’re a mixed between them…”

“Yeah…” the girl quietly said.

“Do you hate your other side?”

“No, instead I feel lucky to have her. She rescued Yuki and also…myself” Rena smiled as she spoke.

“My human side was very weak that usually catch some illness, sometimes the situation would turn worse to the level that would risking my life, and when I couldn’t do anything, she showed up. She lent me her power, her vitality and her hope. She is the reason why I can maintain my life until now, she’s a part of mine.”

The Cyborg let out a long laugh, making Rena’s face turned to a tomato.

“Time for medicine~” a monotonous voice said as the door opened

“M-Mayu-chan?” Rena stuttered, turning to look at the screen and back to Mayu

“Why are you here? I thought y-you---”

“Suppose to be in the other room, talking with you through the screen”

“Yes…”

“Well, it just a recorded video since I have nothing to do, only sit there wait and wait for you to wake up.” The Cyborg boringly said as she sat on the bed.

“H-How long have I been sleeping?”

“About two days”

“Two days!?!?” the shy girl exclaimed, worries could clearly see through her reaction.

“Don’t worry, we informed your family that the school has a 2 days trip. I’m glad you wake up in the right time otherwise we won’t know what to say with them” Mayu said sounding she had some responsibilities.

“We?”

“Mayu and the principal, he’s her uncle”

Rena sudden heard a voice, but when she looked around there was only two people in the room, she and Mayu. It’s not Mayu’s and of course not her either, then where’s it come from?

“Yuki-chan?”

“Y-You can hear me?” the voice stuttered.

“Yes, but I can’t see you”

“Ehhh….”

“That’s because her demon’s ability hasn’t completely awaken. She needs time”

“So which means I can see Yuki-chan” Rena said surprisingly, she still couldn’t believe that she would see her best friend again.

“Yes, now drink this” the short girl said as she gave the patient the medicine, after finished Rena asked

“But why is it sudden awakening? But not before? I meant the other personality appeared the first time was when we’re a little. After that, I didn’t feel or see anything strange, but why now?…”

“I was about to ask you too Mayu” Yuki said as she looked at the shorter girl.

“…”

“What did you say?”

“…”

“What?”

“…”

“Louder!”

“I SAID I DON’T KNOW!!” Mayu shouted as loud as she could in Yuki’s ear, making the girl held it in pain.

“The hell, you don’t have to scream you know. What if my eardrum bursts!?”

“Don’t worry, spirit doesn’t have ears”

“What!?” 

Hearing the girls fighting, Rena couldn’t help but laugh. It’s going to be a long day for her…well not really, it’s already noon and she would be at home in 7:00.
The day passed quiet quick for all of them. When Mayu looked outside, it already dark, she went straightly to her bed after Rena left.

“Neh Mayuyu…” the voice called her warmly.

“What…” the girl replied with her closing eyes.

“There was a lot of things happened recently eh…”

“Uh huh…”

“I feel so happy…”

“…”

 “Because of them… I began to know more about other people, the way they thinking, acting and reacting. Hana no AKB is an example, also the Student Council.” Yuki paused for a while “Even I used to be a member, but seems like I know nothing about them” she bitterly smiled “However, everything turning better now…” she giggled between her words.

“All thanks to you, Mayuyu…”

Mayu opened her eyes looking at the spirit floating on top of her, they were facing at each others, closely.

“I wish I could touch you Yuki” the girl below said with all the emotions. Making Yuki moved

“Mayu---”

“To see if you are having a fever or not”

“What!?” Yuki shocking shouted, suddenly furthering the distance between them.

“Ahahahaha~” Mayu laughed hard as she saw Yuki’s surprised face

“Why would you always ruin the mood?” asked the not so happy girl.

“Go ask my mom, why did she born me like this?” the Cyborg said teasingly

“Are you blaming your mom now?”

“Who knows”

“Tsk…”

Yuki sighed and both of them paused for a long time. They were facing each others, in the awkward silence, and Mayu decided to be the one who break it first.

“If you want to know more about them…” the shorter said staring at Yuki warmly“…Then just be next to me, I’ll show you the world”

Hearing those words, Yuki smiled, smiled like a girl just being proposed, smiled like she’s the happiest person in the world.

“I will…”






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So this is the new chapter, the next chapter will take a little longer to update since I have nothing in my head and i just switched a course and now I have to catch up, there was a bunch of homeworks is waiting for me T.T
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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #105 on: September 15, 2012, 02:34:44 AM »
Yeah it's because of the lion and also because he is the king ^^

Gekikara is so strong!
WMatsui~ I feel something between them hehe

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #106 on: September 15, 2012, 05:02:07 AM »
THIS FIC!!!!  :shocked

It's  AMAZING!  :w00t:

It's better when you miss some chapters and read all one by one without waiting! :grin:

I also think every chapter takes a lot of work and research  :sweatdrop:

I love it... please update soon!  :twothumbs

this is so thrilling..I JUST WANNA KNOW MORE!!!  :cow:

My fics are nothing compare to this one!  :bow:

Thank you!  :bow:


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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #107 on: September 15, 2012, 05:13:58 AM »
nice update~
I like how Mayu tease Yuki~
And the Evil side of Rena make me imagine Sadoko,
those anime came out of the forest is it wolf?
How about Shinoda, did they left her at the forest?

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #108 on: September 16, 2012, 12:01:53 AM »
 :yep: Ah yes I've read xxxHolic  the manga but never seen the anime tough  XD I love it!
And OH mY GOD! This update!
Rena-chan is aaaa a half demon? Oh damn! That clarify a lot of things!
This chapter is totally a mix of hilarious moments and a little sad.
The lion king....Aslan!  :rofl: the roar Jurinas is mightier  :thumbsup
We got to know about their friendly relationship between Rena and Yukirin in younger days.
I'm glad that she could hear Yuki and maybe someday see "her" spirit.
Mayu talking in the screen and then recorded it  :rofl:
And Mayu seems to loosen up a lot in this update I'm so happy for her and Yukirin!

Thank you for your update!
And good luck with the school! (I know that feeling glad that I've went trough it and done with it...I work as barista now  XD)

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #109 on: September 16, 2012, 05:04:32 PM »
Sorry guys, I forgot to update the fanart of this chapter, just supplemented



@kahem : u r right lol

@cmze : I'm glad that u love it ^^ and please don't say that, ur fics are really good too, I love them a lot ><

@m00nchild : u meant Sadako of The Ring? lol And Shimoda? in the next chapter will explain about it

@Megumi : i haven't watched it ether, only some eps. And thank you, I so tired now =.= have to write a short essay

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #110 on: September 16, 2012, 05:10:45 PM »
Rena is scary in damon mode  :mon scare:

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #111 on: September 16, 2012, 05:41:57 PM »

@m00nchild : u meant Sadako of The Ring? lol And Shimoda? in the next chapter will explain about it


Yup, I mean Sadako of the ring, I always confuse of her name,
wait for the next update,
Wanted to know what happen to Shinoda. (Shinoda is the member i like the most in AKB48)

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #112 on: September 16, 2012, 09:59:21 PM »
Rena is a demon :shocked

The end is really cute and funny with Mayu and Yuki! :twothumbs
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #113 on: September 16, 2012, 10:44:12 PM »
Not it's the truth even the way you write.. :grin:

it catched mh full attention ..i was reading in the dark on my bed feeling the thrilling,i must admit i was scare just a lilttle.. :nervous

My sister appeared from nowhere..

i shouted with all my heart..i was imgining that snake and then Rena make it worst but it was very good!

thanks for writting this fic :grin:

please update soon!  :thumbsup

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #114 on: September 25, 2012, 03:08:16 AM »
@mo-chan : Gekikara lol

@m00nchild : U was confused either, especially with Sawako in Kimi ni Todoke. I don't know if you know it or not, but Sawako, a character in there usually being called Sadako. Believe or not, i google-ed the name of them before replied u lol

@Chanaline :
Haha thanks, I love Mayuki so much xD

@cmze : lol that must be scary, hope your heart haven't popped out yet otherwise you won't be here to continue reading it >:]


Sorry guys
, I'm trying to write new chapter but I think I'm stuck in a middle of way lol... I appreciate your comments, pls give me some advises what should i do now??? -__-


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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #115 on: September 25, 2012, 05:07:24 AM »
Feeling the same way down here!  :nervous

but still please update soon! :bow:

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #116 on: September 25, 2012, 05:28:36 AM »
Wahhh~ And I thought I was the single one with the depressed mood~

or just not knowing what to write~

Well Playgirlz you can always write about the first time Mayu caould touch Yuki, or if Yuki gets traped in one of her friends body, or put a ghost try to hunt Yuki! these are some ideas.....how you like one?

And for Cmze-san....well depends on what story you want to update first ?

I dont know if Im of any use.....but still trying!

Thank you very much.
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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #117 on: September 25, 2012, 05:33:49 AM »
@m00nchild : U was confused either, especially with Sawako in Kimi ni Todoke. I don't know if you know it or not, but Sawako, a character in there usually being called Sadako. Believe or not, i google-ed the name of them before replied u lol



Sorry guys
, I'm trying to write new chapter but I think I'm stuck in a middle of way lol... I appreciate your comments, pls give me some advises what should i do now??? -__-

LOL~
About the new chapter u can try to add on, some new character, or couple inside, to push forward your fiction.
and I was Waiting with Mariko-same, she so poor give their left it in the jungle. :pleeease: :mon cry:

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #118 on: September 28, 2012, 03:38:41 AM »
@cmze : look like the writers are having problem lol

@yuukimoko :
well, not really in depressed mood, just so so...i think :\
And thank to you, i have an idea to write now xDDD. Not the same ideas you gave me, i meant i got an idea from the ideas you listed... Is that make sense? I don't know what i'm talking about lol

@m00nchild :
I'm trying to update it as soon as i can, sr xP

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Re: The Special Class of AKB School [Mayuki] --- Chapter 13
« Reply #119 on: September 28, 2012, 08:28:43 AM »
totally awesome!!  :twothumbs
you've got me hooked, i really like your writing style and the sketches that you add in the chapters :deco:

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