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Re: Yuuki's fics~ IMPORTANT! SORRY~
« Reply #80 on: August 11, 2012, 01:04:14 PM »
Thank you kurogumi but ........yes I like my storyes too but these on this topic are for taking~  do you have any fanfic on Yuuki's fics that you would want to continue or change something?

Love puppy will still continue ~
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Yuuki's fics~ IMPORTANT! SORRY~
« Reply #81 on: August 11, 2012, 03:01:06 PM »
wow this last one Yuki a teacher is very interesting  :ding:
 but love puppy is the best ! :on woohoo: :onioncheer:
you wont cantinue the teacher's fic  :stoned:
want me finish it in your place  :on ksweat:

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Re: Yuuki's fics~ IMPORTANT! SORRY~
« Reply #82 on: August 11, 2012, 03:26:39 PM »
hmmm? you would want to finish it in my place? I would love it if you do!!!  Mo-chan is the best~ I really dont know what to do with it..... :heart:

only if you want? :?
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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« Reply #83 on: August 11, 2012, 03:47:38 PM »
I'll see first with this one I don't really have many ideas and  it doesn't have a a title  :dunno:
I'm not really good in writing and I only have one fic and it's still going on  :on ksweat:
I'll see if I can write something good  :depressed:

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« Reply #84 on: August 11, 2012, 04:06:53 PM »
Dont worry Mo-chan Ill be there with you!

and you have good ideas too~ you dont have to make it long, you can make it 6 chapter max. with a lot of action so it will move quiqly.That if you want to make it short, if not good luck~!


Im happy that you liked the idea~for title........ Seduced by my student , Persistent kid, Love teacher , Mine , etc.........

good luck at work with the fics~   Im working on an idea for Love puppy right now too~  hope you update soon, I probably wont cuz I have a little lak.....w-wait it just come back! Im going to write~
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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« Reply #85 on: August 11, 2012, 04:29:09 PM »
yatta  :onioncheer:
ok I'll do my best then  :on study:

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« Reply #86 on: August 11, 2012, 05:28:30 PM »
It's reallyyyyyy good xD pls continue <3

Yuki is so funny, I can imagine her face when get kissed by Mayu, ang more important in front of the class lololol

Thank you for the idea, yuukimoko and good luck Mo-chan :]

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« Reply #87 on: August 20, 2012, 01:01:42 PM »
                                                                     HIATUS!



I put this one on hiatus too, this one was for OS. Anyway! I must choose witch one to continue Narcissistic VS Obsessed! or Risckt Game. One or two? please tell me ,today cuz tomorrow I wont accept anything,I enter in panic cryzes.......Witch one?
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Yuuki's fics~ HIATUS! HELP?
« Reply #88 on: August 20, 2012, 01:04:22 PM »
YOU MUST CONTINUE NARCISSISTIC VS OBSESSED !

IT'S TOO INTERESTING ! YOU CAN'T HIATUS IT xD

But I like Love Puppy -Sulk-

Whatever, NARCISSISTIC VS OBSESSED <--- CONTINUEEE ~~ PLEASE n_n
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Re: Yuuki's fics~ HIATUS! HELP?
« Reply #89 on: August 20, 2012, 01:18:13 PM »
ChuuuPuffss Thank you!


NARCISSISTIC VS OBSESSED is the one ill continue these weeks .Love puppy wasnt a varyant ,I alredy put it on hiatus anyway.Yhank you again!
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Yuuki's fics~ HIATUS! HELP?
« Reply #90 on: August 20, 2012, 01:20:43 PM »
nooo don't say it  :stoned:
you have to cantinue this one  :pleeease:
I love this fic  :fainted:

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« Reply #91 on: August 20, 2012, 01:25:00 PM »
calm down Mo-chan!  These where only OS , and I will do continue after I end exams.But for now only       NARCISSISTIC VS OBSESSED will be continued until I end them........
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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« Reply #92 on: August 20, 2012, 01:36:57 PM »
yeah pls update Narcissistic VS Obsessed

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« Reply #93 on: February 20, 2013, 04:55:37 PM »
ok it should work here. But i'm not here, to make it clear, im just ....nothing...
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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« Reply #94 on: February 24, 2013, 03:46:52 PM »
                                                                                The lover of a star.




All this energy! Is blinding me, her shining body.

She is shining!! On this little stage she is the universe. I can see her flying, that wonderful smile and that radiance is incredible.

Simple words can't describe this, no word can describe her.

But at this moment, this moment was the one that made me fall in love with her!

That radiance entered straight in my heart and started it. The beating of my heart and soul is thanks to her.

Her beautiful voice, and looks and everything. On that stage, it seemed that she was alone.

The smile  on my face and my burning cheeks, are thanks to her too. My wide eyes can only see her.

Since then I've been in love with her, she, who give me happiness and brought me to learn emotions.

But that was 4 years ago, I smile to myself.

Now is nothing as before.

Her shining body , her voice and everything had remained in my memory,and its the only thing that keeps me to live my every day.Is the only thing that makes me smile.But she is not here, in this city, in this region, in this country.

I should have expected this, since she had the potential, the skills and the smile. All stars go, and never come back.

It's raining, I notice as I look out the window to my left. I put down my caffecup and play with the ring on my necklance. She give me this ring.....

FLASHBACK

'Hey! *******! '

I turn around and I'm hit by a hug, her warm body wraped around me.

'I got it! the audicion! I really did it!! ' she yelps happy in my arms. I smile and kiss her cheek.

'I'm happy for you nee....I told you you'll get it! you are the best! ' I smile warmly and give her a short kiss on the lips.

She blushes and smiles
'Mou....' She looks in my eyes 'Thank you ******* ! Without you I wouldn't have done it! I love you!! '

'I love you too nee~' I smile back and i feel something on my hand.I look down and see a ring on my finger. My eyes open wide and i look up at her.

'hehe~ this is a gift , think you.....i love you so much...' I looked at her hands and she had a pair that matched to mine. I smiled and she blushed a little.
'Well, you are mine....so its ok nee....' she looks away and  my smile grew bigger, i kissed her again.

'Of course its ok...you are mine as well ******....'

END FLASHBACK


My smile didn't disappear, but I realized the rain is replacing my tears that I'm holding in.

I always know that she will leave, but I never knew it would happen so soon......I laugh a little, I really wasnt expecting it then.

FLASHBACK

'I....I'm leaving...' she looked out the window at the pouring rain as she spoke .

'hmm?' I continue to smile and drink my hot chocolate, not realizing what she meant.

'****.......I'm leaving to another country....I'm moving out.....'

My movements stoped. I stared at the hot chocolate in my hands, without daring to look at her. It happened too soon...

'i promise I'll come back. Ill come back to you ****' Her tone was serious

'You ....dont need to...' My voice was breaking 'live your dream...thats what I want for you' I put on a smile and close my eyes, raising my head to look at her.

I hear her sigh. She knows my smile is fake.

'I promise, I'll live my dream...and come back to you..' She seals her promise with a kiss.

ENDFLASHBACK


Even if she said that, I'm not expecting her to come back to me----

*doorbell rings*

Hm? Who could be at this hour and on this weather?

I sit up, and go to the door.

I open the door.

'I'm home Yukirin!! ' a sudden hug hits me, and she is wraped in my arms.

'Welcome back....Mayuyu...'

My smile can't grew more, but my tears finally fell. Maybe i did know she will come back, I just liked to denny it.
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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« Reply #95 on: February 24, 2013, 06:13:29 PM »
JAJa my imagination trick me I thought it was an atsumina´s fic :O.. until the end..

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« Reply #96 on: February 25, 2013, 09:10:39 AM »
I love all of your Mayuki story Yuukimoko-san~ and I hope you will make more one short story and continue Love puppy story....  :bow: and thanks for the story!  :cow:

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Re: Yuuki's fics~ Poll! -ONESHOT
« Reply #97 on: March 11, 2013, 09:47:01 AM »
                                 ----You , me------ Preview

Sitting in this place didnt change anything. Im trying to admire the nature but i cant. I cant concentrate anymore. On anything.
"Hey yukirin! "

I turn my head back to the one i love and hate. She is not with me anymore. She doesnt spends time with me anymore. But it was my chooise.
She did as i told her. Cuz of my selfishness.

It feels like im alone. No one talks to me. And if they do then its very short.

Im talking to myself. Im scolding myself. Im blaming myself. And im torturing myself.

Im just a cold cyborg after all .
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Yuuki's fics~ Poll! -ONESHOT
« Reply #98 on: March 11, 2013, 09:22:06 PM »
I want... I want to know the next or I should say the story!!!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



Married?!-Mayuki fanfic (maybe it will have another pair)

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« Reply #99 on: March 12, 2013, 12:07:30 PM »
                                                                                        ----You, Me------- Part 1.



Its been a just a week, since we, I, put stop to it.


The street was as populated as always, and I was walking through the other humas with normal steps. Not too fast, but not so slow. My hands in my pockets and headphones on my ears. I was enjoying a simple noisy song that i started getting adicted to. I guess , maybe because I feel like its singing with my emotions. Such songs are the ones I never get tired of.

Green. The cars stoped, we got on the other side of the street and I walk my way to the meeting spot. I enter a warm place, the door rang as i opened it. I took in a deep breath ,enjoying the nostalgic moment. I go to my usual seat and soon the waitres takes my command.

I look out the window and the sun warms my face. I look away, I don't like it. Another ring is heard from the door as it opens and the person I was waiting for comes in. She sits in front of me and with a face I couldn't read says

'Hey?'
'Hey'

Silence appears. I can still hear the music from my headphones, that were now around my neck. The waitres comes back with two hot chocolates, one for me and one for my friend.

I look at my chocolate, I get a little lost in the deep color.

'So...'   Her voice waked me, I see her rubbing the back of her neck    '....How are you?

I look down again, searching for an answer. A good answer that wouldn't start a fight or anything.

'Umm ok'   I say after a minute of debating on my answer 'I'm ok'

I take a sip from my chocolater and ask the same 'How are you?'

'I'm fine...' Her voice was somehow doubting.

'That's good' I say back , not looking at her.

The silence appears again. Neither of us say anything for more than 15 minutes. She finished her hot chocolate and was now watching me. I only looked down at my chocolate and the silence remained.

'Well....Sorry for bothering you ' She says and gets up. She pays her chocolate and heads for the door. The door rings as she exits.

I remain in my spot, not moving at all. I took another sip from my now cold chocolate and I take a paper and a pen . I start drawing slowly, not caring that I should be going .

Sae.......

I close my eyes. I may be regreting this. Sae had no fault in anything...but without thinking she had started a burning flame that died when I and ....the one I love...loved, had stoped .

It was so hard to explain everything, because nothing  could be explained. But now that is just past.

I look at what i drew, and with disgust ,I fold the paper and put it in my pocket. I can't draw, I pay my drink and leave the cafe with the single ring of the door.

I start walking slowly, as I try to explain myself what can't be explained.

I can see Yuki and Rena walking together with a group of friends on another street. I force my face to smile and continue my walk.

Maybe, I should try to understand what can't be understuded.
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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