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Well guys, this is my second fanfiction. I'm really sorry, I just like gender bending and really like Takahashi Minami, she's my oshimen.
And I'm sorry that some parts may be repetitive in my other fic; Is It You?

So here it is

~BE MY GIRL~:
Chapter 1(below)
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

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Be My Girl
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Chapter 1

   The sun was shining brightly between those barely closed curtains. Feeling the heat on his face, he reluctantly opened his eyes but immediately close them as the sunlight was too bright. Finally adjusting his eyes from the sun’s brightness, he let out a yawn as he slowly stretched his body hearing small cracking noise from his bones. He lazily grabbed his cellphone from the bedside table and opened it. His eyes widen when he saw the time. It was already noon.

“Oh my god, I overslept! I’m going to be late!”

He quickly got out of bed, not even bothered to fix it as he dashed towards the bathroom to wash up.

As he got out of the bathroom, he quickly changed into his baggy jeans, white tank top and black zip-up hoody. He grabbed his cap and sunglasses as he went down the stairs and found now one in the house; obviously they left the house with the time being right now. At the door, he put his shoes, cap and sunglasses on and he grabbed his keys as he went out the door and locked it.

When he got of the condo, he ran as fast as he can to reach his destination. While he was running in a hurry, he suddenly crashed into someone as she was about to fall, he grabbed her hand and pulled her up towards him while wrapping his free arm around her waist to prevent her from falling.

“Are you okay?” He asked as he took out his sunglasses and hooked it on his hoody.

“Yeah, I’m okay. Thank you.” She answered as she slowly pulled away from him and looked at him in the eye.

When he saw the girl’s face, he was stunned from her beauty, with her dark brown shoulder length hair, her beautiful hazel eyes and with a face of an angel. Noticing that his hands were still on her waist, he quickly pulled away from her as he placed his hand behind his neck rubbing it slightly while laughing nervously as a bright pink blush appeared on his cheeks.

“Since you’re not hurt, I have to get going. Bye.” He said as he waved goodbye and left her. ‘She’s really cute.’ He thought to himself while he was running as he remembered the girl’s angelic face and blushed at the images that passed through his mind.

On the other side, the girl was staring at the boy’s retreating back getting further and further and finally disappeared from her sight. “He has really beautiful eyes.” She mumbled to herself while staring at the direction where the boy left, and left her spot.

* * * * *

Finally arriving to his destination, he stopped trying to catch his breath while scanning around the area looking for someone. After a few seconds of searching and finally finding the person he was looking for with her hair tied up in a ponytail and wearing her usual signature sunglasses.

Heading towards the café where the young lady was waiting, he went behind her and gave her a peck on the cheek as he grabbed a seat right in front of her and faced her, even with her sunglasses she didn’t look really happy at all.

“Where were you? I’ve been waiting for more than a half an hour. It’s not good to make a lady wait, you know.” She said with an angry tone in her voice as she takes out her sunglasses and placed it over her head while glaring at him.

“Sorry, I didn’t mean to be late. I was really tired last night and I overslept.” He shrugged, not seeming to care since they will be hanging out for the whole day anyway, and besides they see each other almost every day, depending on their schedules.

She stares at him for a couple of seconds and lets out a sigh as she stood up from her seat, paying her bill. The boy also stood up as he took his girlfriend’s hand and intertwine their fingers as they walk away from the café as they go on with their date.

“Don’t ever do that again, I got really worried. ‘Cause I thought you might leave me.” She said while pouting as the boy let out a small chuckle.

“I would never do such thing.” He said giving a comforting smile as she smiled back at him while giving a small squeeze in their entwined fingers.

TBC


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Well, that's it... Should I continue? Please comment!
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19)
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2012, 12:23:23 AM »
 :onioncheer: :onioncheer:  I love stories that mix Mendol and AKB!   :nya: :nya: :nya: :nya:

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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19)
« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2012, 12:31:19 AM »
 :cow: Please continu to write more for this fic o(^▽^)o

I want to know who are who
And I need to read more ( ̄^ ̄)

Please update as soon as possible
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19)
« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2012, 03:15:00 AM »
Oh! Looks interesting!

I will wait anxiously for the next chapter
♥ 恋がしたいのに、うまく恋ができない… そもそも、恋愛なんて私たちには贅沢なんだろうか?  ♥

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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19)
« Reply #4 on: June 20, 2012, 04:28:16 AM »
I rarely pay attention to Mendol fics, but this one has intrigued me so far. I'll be waiting for your update I myself am working on 4 updates, don't know when I'll be able to post them OTL

P.S. I so want to put a smiley for you, but commenting through my phone, so it's impossible. I might do that tomorrowtoday. It's 5:30am here in Lithuania, and I'm still trying to put myself to sleep. Good night, I guess?.. OTL
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19)
« Reply #5 on: June 20, 2012, 06:26:56 PM »
Please continue this fics till the end. Love the prologue. Looking forward to the next chapter. ^^

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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19)
« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2012, 12:54:13 AM »
To everyone: I forgot to mention that there will be no gender bending in this one.

@Minami-chan: Is that so? :on lol: I hope you like it though.

@YumePouk: I will update as soon as I can. I will just have to update my other fic first before writing the next chapter. The characters are pretty much obvious, you know. Just saying.

@haru9210: Yes I will, since you're eager to read more. :on lol:

@Suicchin: I hope I won't let you down, I'll try my best.

@sakura_drop_:  :shock: You're still awake at that time, unbelievable. Where's Lithuania?

@Sydney W: Glad you like it. I'll continue after updating my next chapter of 'Is It You?'
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19) REPLIES
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2012, 01:09:46 AM »
Yes, sadly I wasn't able to sleep that night at all....

Lithuania is in Europe, northeast to Germany, above Poland, below Estonia and Latvia... People used to mistaken our country as a part of Russia, as we were under it's ruling some time ago. but now we are an independent country *proud* *fails being proud* I want o be proud, but the goverment in this country makes me dug my own grave OTL

Anyway, I will be patiently waiting for your update!!! *hugs RJay tightly*
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19) REPLIES
« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2012, 01:22:34 AM »
@sakura_drop_: I see, I wanted to visit Europe just once. It's cool to travel.

*Hugs back* I will, once I finish my other fic and the challenge and of course this one.
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19) REPLIES
« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2012, 01:24:47 AM »
So you're doing the challenge story? Yatta!!! at least one person is interested... Coz i got no comments and no likes ORZ I'll wait patiently then (I really will, as I'm going out for the weekend, so when I'm back I'll have lots to read!!)
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19) REPLIES
« Reply #10 on: June 22, 2012, 01:33:17 AM »
@sakura_drop_: Yeah, I'll be doing the challenge. The theme is a bit hard, but I'll do what I can, though I'm not sure if it will be interesting.

I've been trying to do some brainstorming but not a lot of ideas came to my mind. But like I said, I will try my best and post it as soon as I finish writing it.
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19) REPLIES
« Reply #11 on: June 22, 2012, 01:37:39 AM »
Yeah, I thought the theme is really a bit too hard as a starter, but oh well.. If apart you no one will post, then you will be the winner straight away and can decide another theme.

Fail me OTL
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19) REPLIES
« Reply #12 on: June 22, 2012, 04:07:36 AM »
Pleaaase continuee..  :cow: I'm anxious  :bow:

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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19) REPLIES
« Reply #13 on: June 22, 2012, 04:15:37 PM »
WAHHH!!! :bingo:
another atsumina fic!!!
I THINK?? :glasses:
plsss update this!!!
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 1(12/06/19) REPLIES
« Reply #14 on: July 03, 2012, 06:44:03 PM »
@Nab:  :lol: Yeah I will assure you with this chapter. Thanks for reading.

@Chichay12:  :hee: Well I'll let you figure that out while you're reading my future chapters.

To everyone: Sorry to have made you wait this long again, I was just really busy with my summer vacation that I didn't have the time to post this. I will do what I can to make it up to you.

So this is chapter 2.
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Chapter 2

   Rays of sun begun to seep between his thin curtains as it slowly illuminates his room and into his eyes. He turned his face to his other side to avoid the sunlight on his face. Suddenly his cellphone started ringing notifying him that he had received a text message. Groaning from the sudden short ringing, he reluctantly reached for his phone on his bedside table and flipped it open, he checked the time, its only 7:00am and he went to his inbox and started reading the unopened text message.

‘Good Morning~!! I wish I was with you right now making breakfast. I miss you.’

He smiled as he could imagine the perkiness of his girlfriend sending the message to him, but his smile slowly disappeared as he imagined his girlfriend making him breakfast, the thought brought him shivers to his spine as he remembered that one time when she baked him a cake and not only it looked weird with its light blue icing, combined with different kinds of fruits, chocolates, raisins, nuts and sprinkles mixed all together in the center of the cake, it also tasted really terrible, thanks to that he had spend at least three days in his bed with his stomach in pain. In other words his girlfriend is a terrible cook.

Reluctantly, he got off of his bed and stretched his body as he opened widely his curtains feeling the sun’s warmth all over his body. He went to the bathroom, doing the usual routine.

After washing up, he changed in to a grey short sleeve button-up shirt with a white tank top underneath, paired with black skinny jeans. After changing into his clothes, he went down the stairs and on his way to the kitchen he was greeted by his fellow roommate while the other was cooking breakfast.

“Oh, hey Kai, you’re finally awake.”

“Hey Kuu.” Kai greeted back his roommate.

“Good morning guys.” The other greeted both of them while putting their breakfast in front of them.

“Thanks, Riku.” Kai and Kuu thanked their roommate.

Riku, Kuu and Kai are cousins and they were used to be in a three member band called Persona. They were really popular in Japan. Riku was the leader of the group, he’s a gentleman pretty boy in which any girl or even boy would fall for, since a man name Katsuyuki-san; a director executive from sunny music fell for him.
Kuu is a gachapin look-a-like in which anybody would sure to have fun with, he’s the type of guy who wants to have lots of fun. And Kai, the bad boy type of guy that every girl would dream to have as their boyfriend, with his dyed blond hair, fierce looking eyes and his lone wolf aura. Though being shorter than average man height, he’s really strong, and when showing his sensitive side that would make any girl swoon.

These guys were really popular and even made it to the number one spot in Music10 on their second single, but it was really disappointing when Persona had disbanded, no one ever knew the reason why they disbanded or knew where they have disappeared to. Two years after, which is the present, they are now studying in Tokyo University, having a normal life and getting in their choice of career.

Riku was trying his best to become a doctor, he was studying really hard, while Kuu wanted to become a chef in a restaurant and probably open one on his own and make it popular. And Kai wanted to become some sort of engineer; designing and building all kinds of gadgets and such.

Though still being a legendary group in the music industry and still very popular these days, they still have to hide their identities and get private classes in the university, so that not many fans would bother them. Anyways, enough with the explanation and back to reality.

“So Kai… how was your date with Ray?” Kuu asked as he started eating his breakfast.

Yep, Kai is dating the charismatic diva Ray; the number one selling diva in Japan, heck, maybe even the whole world. Though with his small stature, Ray is totally and madly in love with her midget boyfriend, Kai.

“The usual. But this time I got late on my date.” He answered and shrugged at the same time since every time he went on a date with the diva, he would always have the ‘how’s your date?’ and ‘what did you do?’ questions.

“You got late on your date? What happen?” Riku asked as he also ate his own breakfast; and continued. “I’m so sure that Ray got angry at you.”

“Duh. What do you expect? I just overslept and got late, so what. I don’t get why she has to be angry when we actually see each other almost every day.” He answered while he ate his breakfast; while Riku and Kuu were staring at each other.

“Yeah Riku, you know how the diva is, she’s pretty bitchy when she doesn’t get what she wants.” Kuu added and realized the glare that Kai was giving him. “What? I’m just stating the obvious.” He said nervously, and added. “And besides, remember the time when she nearly destroyed Persona two years ago, just so she can work with you in the business.”

How can they forget? No way can they forget something unforgettable such as that. Unfortunately for them, the diva hired a professional photographer and took a couple of pictures of Riku and Katsuyuki-san wherein from an angle, looked like they were kissing each other and published it in every newspaper in Japan. Persona was devastated; everything they worked for to reach where they were went all down the drain. Luckily, they went all the way to the top and knock out the diva to second place in Music10 after restoring the diplomatic relations with wataar the seventh plus the kiss shared between Kai and Ray, two years ago.

“That’s when I got my gay scandal with Katsuyuki-san.” Riku said as he sadly remembered the scandal where his lovable fans thought that he was gay and begun to hate him and Persona.

“Well anyway, what time are we meeting ‘them’?” Kai said as he changed the topic. “It’s been awhile since we last saw them, which is like two years ago.” He added.

“We’ll meet ‘them’ after lunch, since we don’t have classes in the afternoon. And I still have to find my gift.” Riku replied as he took his roommates and his plate and started washing them.

“Same.” Kai and Kuu said in unison as their heads were hanging low staring at their legs.

Just who are ‘them’? Just who are they meeting? Are they their girlfriends and is Kai cheating on Ray? Actually Kai would never do such a thing just like he said on his date with Ray the other day; he’s a really nice guy if you don’t make him mad. So there’s nothing to worry about, so far.

“We should get going now, or else we’ll be late for school.” Riku said as he wiped his hands on a towel.

The three boys left the kitchen and went to their own rooms as grabbed their bags, caps or hoodies, sunglasses and their car keys.

As they finally grabbed what they needed, they went downstairs and gone out of their condo and locked it as they head towards the parking lot where their cars are parked. Their cars’ engines roared to life as they drove towards the university. When they got to university and their cars parked neatly in the parking lot, they got out of their luxurious cars and students were staring at them like they were superstars.

Obviously, they are stars, well, use to be. But they don’t know that and they don’t need to know. In the university, Riku, Kai and Kuu were still popular, not only because they looked like really handsome idols, it’s because they’re in the top of their class and they got a lot of attention from the students, especially the ladies.

And one more thing, nobody knew their names besides their last names.

“After class, let’s meet here and we’ll figure out what we should do first.” Riku said as he closed the door of his car.

Kai and Kuu just nodded their heads in agreement and the three went to their respective classes while thinking what kind of gifts they should buy.

* * * * *

As their classes are finished, they went straight to their cars and started discussing.

“Okay, this is what we’ll do, let’s split up and meet up later.” Kuu said already slipping in inside of his car as he wanted to take as much time to find his gift.

“Let’s buy flowers and a cake first, and then we could split up and meet up in the parking lot of Akihabara Theater.” Kai said as he went inside of his car and on it.

“I’ll go with what Kai was saying.” Riku said as he also went inside of his car and started it.

So they went to a flower shop and bought each a small bouquet of flowers, and went to the bakery and bought a huge chocolate cake which Riku took it since Riku and Kai didn’t trust Kuu taking the cake because he might eat it all by himself.

They parked their cars inside a mall’s parking lot as they stopped by the mall to get their gifts for that someone.

“Okay, let’s split up and if you’re done buying your stuff, you can go to Akihabara Theater straight and meet up in the parking lot.” Riku said and looked at his watch and added. “Let’s meet up at around 2:00pm.” Kai and Kuu nodded their heads in agreement to their cousin as they went in different directions.


TBC


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So that is all for chapter 2, please comment or critic, whatever you want.

I hope you enjoyed it and will continue to read this fic.

Until then.
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 2(12/07/03)
« Reply #15 on: July 04, 2012, 05:51:14 AM »
Oh~ You finally updated it! XD
I bet the 'them' is AKB48~~!!!! :cathappy:
Can't wait to see them meeting each other~~
But what would be the reason of them meeting each other? :?

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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 2(12/07/03)
« Reply #16 on: July 05, 2012, 04:52:41 AM »
Is there going to be MariKuu and RikuYuu?! <333

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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - chapter 2(12/07/03)
« Reply #17 on: July 10, 2012, 04:06:35 PM »
@haru9210: You'll find that out in the next chapter, which is after you read this reply.  :on lol:

@Yagami.Rai: The reason, well I really don't know how to explain it to you without spoiling it. I guess you will find that out yourself.  :sweat:

@haruhi16: I'll let you decide, but since you're asking, I guess so.  :dunno:

@everyone: Sorry for the long delay, didn't mean to make you wait long again. I have yet to finish writing the chapter of 'Is It You?' and it's still not done. I've been really busy and it's sucks since I won't be posting anything until the end of the month because I have to take summer school for French. Please forgive me and don't hate me for this.  :kneelbow:


As an apology, I present you the third chapter of this fic, I think it's a bit long... or not... maybe. Well anyway, I hope you will enjoy this chapter.
It's a bit cheesy, I'll say. And it's a bit repetitive too. *sigh* :depressed: so disapointed in myself or I guess not.
Okay, I've talking/typing this whole, I'll let you read now.


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Chapter 3

           Riku was walking around the mall doing some window shopping while people around him were looking at him stunned at how good-looking he looked. He practically looked like a model with the clothes he’s wearing; black trousers, white dress shirt combine with a purple button-up vest, sleeves slightly rolled up to the elbow, paired with black loafers and don’t forget to complete his look; his sunglasses.

He sighed as he couldn’t find anything that ‘that person’ might like, so he continued to walk further until something caught his eyes. He went in front of the store’s window as he looked at the dress, analyzing it; he went inside the store as he was searching for the salesclerk.

“Welcome. How may I help you, sir?” The salesclerk asked as Riku turned around and took out his sunglasses and hooked it over his button-up vest, showing his glittering eyes that were completely mesmerized by the salesclerk.

“Um… Yes. Can I see that dress in display please?” He asked while the salesclerk was in her own world as she stared at him in awe. “Excuse me…?” Riku said as he came closer to the salesclerk. “Hello…?” He continued as he waved his hand in front of her face.

“Huh? Oh. Sorry about that. What is it that you wanted?” She said as she came back to reality.

“The red dress in display, can I see it?” Riku repeated for the second time.

“Of course, hold on for a second.” Without a reply, the salesclerk went towards the said outfit in display.

‘She’s weird.’ Riku thought as the salesclerk came back with the dress in her hands and handed it to Riku.

When the red dress was handed to him, he took his time to look at it carefully, scanning at every little detail from the silky dress.

“I’ll take it.” Riku said as he handed back the clothing to the salesclerk who nodded as she went behind the counter.

“That will be 15000¥. You want me to wrap it for you?” She asked as Riku prepared his wallet and giving the exact amount of money.

“Yes, please.” He replied while the salesclerk started folding and wrapping the dress and put it inside the shopping bag.

“Is this for your girlfriend?” She asked as she handed the shopping bag to Riku.

“Well, not really. Let’s just say that we’re really close.” He answered back as he took the bag while the salesclerk looked disappointed that he already has a girlfriend…or something like that.

“Thank you for shopping here.” She said as Riku got out of the store, not bothered to look back.

* * * * *

On the other side, Kuu was inside another cake shop picking different types of cakes in the store while the salesclerk was having a hard time keeping up with him.

“I’ll take strawberry shortcake, cheesecake, cupcakes, fruitcake, muffins, tarts…” Kuu kept going on and it seemed that the salesclerk is getting tired and still couldn’t keep up with him, it seemed like he’s buying every cake in the shop, since he already filled up three boxes of cake inside.

“Are you almost done?” The salesclerk asked feeling a bit dizzy.

“Um… Yep. That’s about it.” He finally said happily as he took the three boxes filled with cake and paid for them.

‘Though, he may be a bit annoying, but he’s really cute.’ The clerk thought to herself as she stared at the back of the boy wearing a pair of white shorts and a blue v-neck shirt with his zip-up hoody over it and paired with grey high cut Nikes.

* * * * *

Meanwhile, Kai went in some random stores but end up being desperate for not knowing what to buy, not even having a clue what ‘that person’ wanted since he’s known that person for like, I don’t know…forever. While he was roaming and browsing around the mall, he suddenly bumped into someone and made some of their stuff fall to the ground.

“I’m sorry, I didn’t see you there. Here let me help you.” He said as he bent down to help the person pick up their stuffs. They both stood up at the same time while Kai gave back the stuffs and looked at the person’s face; he was surprise at the recognition of the person’s face while the other was also surprise to see him again.

This person was pretty, and in Kai eyes, she’s really cute and gorgeous. She was wearing mini white shorts, showing her creamy flawless legs, with white converse and a pink top. Thought being shorter than average height for man, he has the same height as the girl.

“Hey, you’re the guy from yesterday.” She said feeling a little happy to see Kai again. “What a coincidence, I never thought that I’ll meet you here, out of all places.” She continued.

Kai was too shock to say anything as he continued to stare at the girl with his mouth slightly agape. But if he didn’t say anything it would feel a bit awkward for the two, so decided to reply back.

“Yeah, what a coincidence.” He said while rubbing the back of his neck. “And I also bump into you twice, now that’s a coincidence.” He continued. ‘Oh my god, am I really that lame?’ He thought to himself, feeling slightly disappointed to himself.

“Maeda Atsuko.” She said as Kai was taken aback by the sudden introduction from the girl and decided to do the same.

“Takahashi Kai” He introduced himself while the girl was looking at him shock.

“KAI?! As in Kai from Persona?!” She squealed at him. “Now that you mention it, you do look like him. Except a bit taller.” She continued feeling really excited.

‘It’s because I grew for about 5 to 7 inches for the last two years.’ He thought to himself. “Nah, I’m not him.” He lied as he said it calmly but in the inside he was nervous that his identity was revealed. “It’s true that I look like him, but I’m not him and I don’t even have blond hair.” He made up some excuses to not be found out and it was true he didn’t have his blond hair anymore, he dyed it back to black, so that no one would notice him. “And what’s weird, I also have the same name as him.” He added laughing nervously while the girl was staring at him looking a little disappointed.

“Well anyway, what brings you here?” She asked showing a cute smile.

“Why? Am I not allowed to be here?” He answered back with another question as he raised his eyebrow and the girl let out a giggle.

“What I meant is, you seem a little down, like you can’t find your puppy or something.” She said as a matter of fact.

“Was that really obvious?” He asked earning a nod from the girl. “Well, the thing is…” Kai started to explain as they start walking side by side. “…I was trying to find a present for a special person for me and I couldn’t find a perfect gift for that person.”

“Your girlfriend?” She asked a little curious.

“No.” He answered directly while the girl frowned at him.

“Then maybe I can help you.” She said as she pulled the boy in a random store, finding the perfect gift.

For a half an hour, they’ve been browsing in so many stores and trying out some stuff, and they’re having so much fun together. In people’s eyes, they looked like a cute young married couple or whatever you try to call them.

They were having so much fun that they didn’t even noticed that they were holding hands and their fingers were intertwined, enjoying each other’s warmth. Suddenly, Kai went inside a jewellery store while slightly dragging the girl with him and finally something caught his eye, it was a necklace with a golden star and a bright shiny pink diamond in the center of the star.

“Atsuko, what do you think of this one?” He asked the girl as he pointed at the precious jewel while the girl started to cling onto his arm where their hands were entwined and gave him a smile.

“It’s really pretty, are you going to take it?” She asked as Kai nodded his head and signalled the salesclerk that he’ll buy it.

“Can you wrap it for me please?” He asked the salesclerk as he prepared his wallet and paid the salesclerk while the girl was still clinging onto his arm.

“Of course.” The salesman replied with smile and started to wrap the gift. He gave the small shopping bag to Kai as they left the store still holding each other’s hand.

Finally, he found a perfect gift; he can finally stop worrying and can finally relax. He looked at his watch checking how much time he had left, its only 1:30pm; he still has 30 minutes left before he could meet up with the guys.

“Hey, you want to get something to eat? I’m getting a little hungry.” Atsuko asked while rubbing her stomach and Kai chuckled as he nodded in agreement feeling also a little hungry.

The both of them were now headed to the food court, hand in hand, again, well am I not surprise. They went one of the fast food restaurants and ordered their food. After ordering their food, they went to a vacant table, seating side by side and started eating. While eating, Atsuko took out her phone and secretly trying to take a picture of Kai, but he noticed it as he turned his head towards her.

Tchik

With the sound of a click of her phone, the picture came out okay, it was a picture of Kai facing her, looking innocent like he didn’t know what was going on right now and also he was looking at her with his passionate eyes making her blush slightly.

“AH! You’re so cute and handsome.” She squealed as she clinged onto his arm while showing the picture on her phone to Kai. He started pouting as he stared at the taken picture.

“You call that cute? That’s far from being cute.” He said as he blushed in embarrassment while the girl let out a giggle at how adorable he looked right now.

“Hey, I did call you handsome too, you know.” She said as she continued to giggle while Kai was looking away still having a tint of pink on his cheeks.

Kai also took out his phone and now it was his turn to take a picture of Atsuko.

Tchik

Atsuko’s eyes widen as soon as she heard another clicking sound from Kai’s phone. Kai smirked as the photo came out perfectly and he showed it to the girl, it was a picture of Atsuko clinging on his arm, giggling and showing a cute smile at the same time.

“Now this is what I call cute.” He said as he chuckled at the girl’s reaction, she blushed slightly when Kai called her cute.

“Now, let’s take a picture of both of us.” She said excitedly as she gave the phone to Kai as he put it in front of them, the camera facing them and with the sound of a click, the picture came out with both of them smiling with Kai’s arm over Atsuko’s shoulder while the other was holding Atsuko’s phone and his cheek touching the side of Atsuko’s forehead while the girl’s arms were around the young man’s body, looking like they’re a couple.

The girl checked the time on her phone and her eyes went wide for the second time; she was almost late for work. She got up from her seat while Kai was looking at her, confused.

“I’m sorry, I have to go; I’m going to be late for work.” She said apologetically as she pouted slightly while Kai also looked at his watched and it was already 2:00pm. His cousins were so going to scold him for being late, especially when he was the one who had planned this.

“Oh, I have to go too.” He said feeling a little sad that they have to part ways.

“Can I see you again?” She asked with hope in her eyes as Kai stared at them with his passionate ones.

“Of course, we will.” He said showing a soft smile and winked at her. “Why don’t we exchange our contact number and email, and you can call me and text me anytime.” He said with the same smile on his face as he flipped his phone open while Atsuko’s mouth begun to form a smile.

“So I’ll see you when I see you.” Kai said as he let out a chuckle and Atsuko just nodded. “I’ll be waiting for your calls and texts.” He added as he gave a wide smile.

After exchanging their contact number and emails on their phone, they said and waved their goodbyes as they part ways.

After getting out of the mall, Atsuko took a cab heading towards her work as she stared at her new wallpaper of her and the boy on her phone and a smile formed on her lips, she just became really close with a stranger whom she just met the other day like they’ve known each other for a long time. She can’t help but frown while looking at the picture; having a feeling she had seen the boy’s face before. But…Where?

On the other side, Kai was running towards his car as he was sure that he was late and his cousins would scold him for that. Once his car roared to life, he quickly stepped on it and his car drove really fast, heading towards the theater where his cousins were waiting.

Once Kai arrived at the theater, Riku and Kuu were already there waiting for him. They were both glared at Kai as he came with his small gift and his small bouquet of flowers in each of his hands

“What took you so long?” Riku said keeping his glare at the shorter cousin as he crossed his arms to his chest while sitting on the trunk of his car.

“Yeah man, we’ve been waiting for like 30 minutes.” Kuu added as he also had his box of cakes in hand and a bouquet of flowers on the other. The two other boxes were in the trunk of his car, keeping it for something else.

“Sorry guys, I was eating lunch and lost track of time.” Kai said nervously as he explained at how long it took to find a gift and ended up being hungry and ate lunch, but he didn’t explain that one part, that he was with a girl the whole time. But they didn’t need to know that.

“Anyway, let’s just get going.” Riku sighed defeatedly as he opened the trunk of his car and took the chocolate cake, his gift and his bouquet of flowers.

The three cousins went on the elevator and went on ground floor as they were greeted by a man in a suit.

* * * * *

20 minutes before

Atsuko had just arrived to work, as soon as she went inside a huge building; she went in a spacious room filled with so many girls. She sighed as she put her bag on the floor and sat beside it while still looking at her phone and smiling at the same time, all of a sudden she was surrounded by her friends.

“Acchan, why are you late?” Atsuko quickly snapped her phone close when one of her friends approached her, but a certain squirrel grabbed her phone and opened it.

“Oooh~, who’s this Acchan, your boyfriend?” The squirrel-like girl asked while a tall model-like girl and a girl with a fang looked at Atsuko’s phone curiously.

“Hey, he’s kind of a cutie. But doesn’t he look familiar.” They said as they grin at the flushed girl, Atsuko grabbed her phone back and snapped it close as she saw three other figures approaching them.

“That’s why you’re late; you had lunch with your boyfriend.” The squirrel-like teased at the already flush girl as she blushed even more, looking more like a tomato right now.

“Oh, Acchan, you have a boyfriend?” A short girl among the three figures that just came asked as she tilted her head to the side. “Wait. We’re not supposed to be in a relationship.” She said frankly.

The three girls; fang-girl, tall girl and squirrel-like girl stared at the shorter girl and glanced back at Atsuko’s phone, and their eyes widen in realisation.

“He looks like Minami.” They whispered to each other while the shorter girl noticed that the girls were staring at her.

“What?”

“Oh nothing.” They replied still whispering among themselves.

“I don’t have a boyfriend and he’s not my boyfriend.” Atsuko retorted as she covered her red face.

“It doesn’t seem like it.” A gachapin-like girl teased as she wiggled her eyebrows.

They suddenly stopped talking when a certain man in a suit came in the room with three other figures.

* * * * *

As the man entered the room, everybody became silent as they were about to hear what the man was going to say.

“Sorry for interrupting, but we have three guest who wants to meet three of our members.”

As soon as the three figures entered the room, Atsuko’s eyes widen as she laid eyes at a familiar boy while you could hear screams and squeals from the other girls in the room and became louder when the man introduced them.

“Ladies, I’d like you to meet Persona.” The three boys grinned at the sudden reaction the girls had.

Atsuko and her friends noticed that three of their friends ran towards the three boy and the other members quiet down as they also noticed them and stared at them confuse.

The tallest among the three rushed towards the tallest member of persona and hugged him tightly as the boy replied the hug, the second rushed towards the gachapin-like member hugging him tightly almost knocking him over, and the shortest among three rushed towards the shortest member completely knocking him over as they landed on the floor as the girl straddled his legs and also hugging him tightly placing her cheek over his and rubbed it slightly. The girls in the room including Atsuko and her other friends were shock at the scene and confuse, the three girls that were hugging the three boys, loosen their embrace as they received their gifts and face them with tears forming in their eyes and said in unison.

“I miss you, onii-chan.”

“…” The room was completely silent as the other girls in the room were trying to process everything in their brains as they discovered something really shocking…if you include Atsuko and her friends too. And they exclaim,

“EH! ONII-CHAN!!!”

All the girls had their jaws dropped to the floor, really shock and the three boys can’t help but chuckle at their reaction keeping their embrace on the girls and started introducing themselves, even though the girls already knew them but still, just to make sure.

“Hello, I’m Kojima Riku, Haruna’s older brother. Nice to meet you.” Riku said as he showed his usual charming smile.

“Osu! I’m Minegishi Kuu, Miichan’s older brother. Nice to meet you, ladies.” Kuu said as he winked at the girls and smiled widely while showing a peace sign.

“Yo. And I’m Takahashi Kai, Minami’s older brother. Nice to meet you all.” Kai said as he stood up and he dusted his pants and hugged the little girl from behind.

Everybody was speechless and Atsuko couldn’t believe her eyes, she had been staring at the boy whom she was hanging out her whole lunch hour and she had been wondering if she was dreaming or something as her friends recovered their jaws and they were staring at her as they noticed that Atsuko was staring at the short member of Persona.

“Isn’t that Kai in your wallpaper on your phone?” The squirrel-like girl whispered as she pointed at the supposedly blond member of Persona and Atsuko just nodded, her friends became shock, their eyes widen as they stared at Atsuko.

Atsuko stood up from the floor and walked towards the six people that everybody had been staring at, with her friends following behind. Kai seemed to notice that someone was walking towards them and looked at the person; he eyes became wide at the sight of the girl in front of him and his sister. Riku, Kuu and their sisters were looking at them with their eyebrows raised. Even the little girl was confused at what was going on.

“Minami, is he really your brother?” Atsuko asked as she pointed her finger at Kai. Now that she noticed it, Minami does look like Kai. The little girl just nodded her head.

“Since when?” Fang-girl asked the three girls.

“Well obviously, since we were born. Duh.” Miichan answered as she rolled her eyes.

“You never told us that you had brothers.” A tall girl with short hair said as she tilted her head slightly to the side.

“Because you guys never asked.” Haruna answered with a shrug.

“That’s so cool!” The squirrel-like girl said as she added. “You’re related to Persona.” The three girls just smiled at them as they didn’t know what the big deal was.

“Anyway, Kai-nii, I want you to meet Maeda Atsuko; my best friend.” Minami said as she motioned towards Atsuko, Kai’s eyes widen for the second time, shock.

Atsuko came closer towards Kai as he gulped slightly as he distanced himself from his sister, afraid what might happen since he had lied about him not being Kai of Persona whom in fact he was. Atsuko was a foot distance in front of Kai as she frowned slightly and he just stood there feeling guilty at what he had done while everybody was just watching them curiously.

“You jerk!” Atsuko exclaimed as she pouted at Kai and hit his arm, making him wince at the action as he rubbed his arm and stunning the others. “You lied to me; you told me that you weren’t Kai of Persona, when in fact you were.” She said as she continued to pout.

“Wait, let me explain.” Kai said at the pouting Atsuko, making his sister and his cousins confuse and they had to ask which their answer is quite obvious, but just to be sure.

“Do you guys…know each other?” Minami asked as she stared at the duo that were looking at each other.

“Apparently, they’re dating.” The tall girl said as she pointed at the two who were looking at her incredulously.

“WHAT!” Everybody in the room exclaimed in the exception of Atsuko’s three friends and turned towards Kai and Atsuko as they couldn’t believe at what they had just heard. “SINCE WHEN?!” Riku, Kuu, Haruna, Miichan and Minami shouted.

“I don’t know; we saw a picture of both of them in Acchan’s phone.” Fang-girl said as Riku and Kuu each went to Kai’s side and put their hands on his shoulder and said,

“You could’ve told us you were with this girl then you would’ve been off the hook.” They grinned widely while Kai was blushing furiously like a ripe tomato.

“Acchan, I didn’t knew you were dating Kai-nii.” The three girls said while Atsuko was blushing in embarrassment.

All of a sudden, a certain squirrel snatched Atsuko’s cellphone once again and flipped it open to show everyone, Atsuko’s wallpaper.

“Look, look, look!” Atsuko took back her phone and clutched it near her chest like it was her most precious possession.

“Yuko, don’t just snatch other people’s phones.” Atsuko scolded the squirrel-like girl as she glared at her.

“But Kai-nii, aren’t you currently dating Ray at this moment?” Haruna asked.

Atsuko sadden as she heard that Kai has already a girlfriend, it hurt her, sure she likes Kai…a lot; in a friendly way. But if she were to compete, how was she going to compete with the charismatic diva, the top selling diva at all time. She never felt so close with a stranger before, especially with a boy whom she didn’t knew was her best friend’s older brother.

“Now that you mention it, Ray will surely kill you if she hears this.” Kuu said while his and Riku’s hand was still on his shoulder.

Kai brushed off their hands and turned towards them and took a deep breath with the eyes burning like fire saying.

“Atsuko and I aren’t dating.” To Atsuko, it felt like a knife that had stabbed her, of course they weren’t dating in the first place, but she felt broken-hearted.

Suddenly, Kai’s phone started ringing; you really don’t need to guess who it was since the three boys already knew who it was as they sigh silently and Riku and Kuu moved away from Kai to let him answer the call.

“I have to take this.” Kai excused himself as he got out of the room while Riku and Kuu wave him off.

“It seems that you guys know whose calling. Who’s calling?” The tall girl noticed and asked the two members of Persona.

“Isn’t it obvious? You don’t need a genius to answer that question.” Riku let out another sigh as he leaned on the wall with his arms crossed over his chest.

 “That person practically texts and calls him every day, she’s like glue sticking on him, she’s completely obsess with him.” Kuu added as he shook his head.

“Hey, where’s Acchan?” Minami asked as she couldn’t find Atsuko in room while the others did the same, except for two who seemed to be enjoying this as a smirk appeared on their faces.

* * * * *

Meanwhile, Kai went up to the rooftop of the theater to pick up the phone call. He sighed as we all knew who it was and picked up the phone call.

“Yeah?” He answered with boredom apparent in his voice.

“Kai~, why didn’t you reply my text messages?” The voice on the other line said with worry.

Kai’s eyes widen, he didn’t knew he had received texts messages from his girlfriend. Maybe he was too busy finding his gift in the mall and hanging out with a cute girl name Atsuko, the whole time. He smiled at the thought of hanging out with Atsuko in the mall a couple of dozens of minutes ago.

“I’m sorry; I was busy with school work.” He lied somehow feeling guilty and he didn’t want to tell that he was hanging out with another girl rather than with his girlfriend, since she will get really jealous and possessive when a girl gets close to him.

“Anyway. Say, do you want to come at my place for dinner tonight?” She asked as she changed the topic while Kai shivered at the thought of Ray cooking him dinner. Though he was happy that he was not eating her cooking tonight.

“Sorry I can’t.” He replied quickly.

“Why not?” Ray asked feeling like he was hiding something from her that made her think that he was going on a date with another girl, and that worries her… a lot.

“Don’t get the wrong idea. The guys and I are just having dinner with some relatives and probably with some friends tonight.” He explained, it was the truth, at the end of the day they will have dinner with their siblings/cousins. “Maybe next time.” He said apologetically trying to make it up for her.

Suddenly, he felt a huge slap on his shoulders as the person snuck behind him and scared him. He let out a loud scream as he almost dropped his phone over the rail and put it back near his ear as he turned around to find a girl in front of him with her usual cute smile, giggling.

“Atsuko! Don’t scare me like that.” He scolded the girl as she playfully stuck out her tongue at him. “And what are you doing here.” He asked as the girl just gave him a shrug of an answer.

“Wait! Who’s Atsu-” Without warning, Kai hung up and snapped his phone close. Ray will kill him for sure for hanging up on her.

Kai leaned his back on the rail as Atsuko walked closer to him and went beside him. With silence surrounding and the breeze of the wind blowing softly on their faces, Atsuko took Kai’s hand into her soft one and entwine them while she placed her head on his shoulder as he rest his head on hers, enjoying each other’s warmth.

“Why did you lie to me?” Atsuko broke the silence keeping her head on Kai’s shoulder while Kai was taken aback by the question and suddenly felt guilty that he had indeed lied to her. “Why did you tell me that you’re not Kai of Persona, when you are?” She asked as she faced him to look into his eyes finding the truth.

“I don’t want to get too much attention from people who might be fans, that’s why I died back my hair; black so they wouldn’t recognize me.” He honestly said as he looked up towards the sky and looked back at Atsuko. “Besides, I’m not Kai of Persona anymore; I’m just Takahashi Kai, an honour student in Tokyo University with Riku and Kuu.”

Atsuko can see the honesty and seriousness in his eyes. She realized that it was true; Riku, Kuu and Kai were not Persona anymore but Kojima Riku, Minegishi Kuu and Takahashi Kai. Persona still exist in these guys hearts because they will never forget their hardship they endured as Persona, and they still exist in many fans hearts.

Atsuko placed her head back on Kai’s shoulder and smiled at his honest answer.

“Say, you want to have dinner tonight with the guys and the girls tonight?” Atsuko was taken aback by the sudden invitation. “You can invite your friends, since I’m sure Haruna, Miichan and Minami will do the same.” He added and Atsuko answered with a nod and squeeze their entwined hands.

* * * * *

Meanwhile, inside a different building, a young woman was staring at her phone with the dial tone that could be heard in her ears. She couldn’t believe what just happened just a few seconds ago, her boyfriend had hung up on her in the middle of their conversation. She will definitely give him a fit.

And just who was this Atsuko?

Atsuko’s name kept popping questions in her mind, obviously that name was a girl’s name, so there was no mistaken it that Kai was hanging out a girl right now, at this moment…alone? She didn’t know the answer to that question, who knows maybe they were with Riku and Kuu.

Kai did mention that he was having dinner with his relatives and friends tonight; she was thinking that maybe this Atsuko is his sister or something and he was not lying to her, but there was a possibility that the dinner he had mentioned was a complete lie and probably he was going on a date with this girl instead.

The thought of Kai and another girl namely Atsuko having a date together alone, angered her so much that she wanted destroy something. These two questions in her mind bothered her a lot; she was debating which one of these questions was a lie and which one was the truth. One of them was right and one was wrong.
Ray was starting to have a small headache for thinking too much. She got up from her seat as she growled in frustration and got out from her dressing room angrily scaring the staffs and ordered one of the staffs to get her something to drink to cool down herself.


TBC


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Sorry for making a little or too cheesy for some of you.

Well I hope you like it. Until next time.  :byebye:
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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - REPLIES + Chapter 3(12/07/10)
« Reply #18 on: July 10, 2012, 04:50:13 PM »
Yey! another update  :inlove:
I'm always looking for a Mendol fanfic  XD

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Re: [AKB48 X Mendol] Be My Girl - REPLIES + Chapter 3(12/07/10)
« Reply #19 on: July 10, 2012, 04:55:38 PM »
HOHOHOHO :wahaha: :wahaha:

i really love this fic!!!
 :wriggly: kaixacchan is the best!! :wriggly:
and minami and kai is brother and sister, i cant really imagine that!!!
even riku and kuu wit haruna and miichan!!
and RAY!!forever JELOUS!!!
this is so cool!!! :on GJ: :on GJ:
pls dont stop this fic!!! :on asmo:
ARIGATOU!!
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