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Re: The Mad House update chapter 12
« Reply #100 on: July 02, 2012, 05:47:36 PM »
It was good but I was kinda hoping to see what efect would it have on Yuki......but still good~


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Re: The Mad House update chapter 12
« Reply #101 on: July 02, 2012, 05:47:59 PM »
me going loco..  :twothumbs
as usual you'd know ilove your fic..
but there's no atsumina in here  :cry:
I'm looking forward on them i trust you! :*

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 12
« Reply #102 on: July 02, 2012, 09:51:46 PM »
the Sayaka act like a princess  :hiakhiakhiak:
Jurina was really funny  :wahaha:
I think that I like Rena more she is Gekikara then when she eat this strange fruit  :hee:
please cantinue  :wriggly:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 13
« Reply #103 on: July 03, 2012, 12:24:30 AM »
Hello everyone! Today I have a special present for all you Atsumina fans out there. And don't worry, Kojiyuu and Mayuki will also have their moments. So for now, enojoy!
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Chapter 13

Mariko was relaxing by the main desk when Acchan walked over to her.

"Hey Ma-ri-ko." Acchan said.

"What is it?" Mariko asked.

"I need your help."

"What is it?"

"Well lately, Takamina has been paying attention to other patients more than me. I'm starting to feel really lonely so I was wondering if you could help me."

"Why?"

"Because if you don't then I might do things to make your life very miserable." Acchan said with a death glare.

"Alright I'll help you." Mariko said backing up.

"So what do you want me to do?"

While Takamina was talking to Mariko, Acchan suddenly came out of nowhere.

"Mariko!" Acchan said clinging onto Mariko's arm.

"Her Acchan. I'll be with you in a minute." Mariko said.

"But I want you now!"

"Not now. I'm talking to Takamina."

"Forget her. Let's go somewhere private."

"Acchan."

"Mariko."

"Well I hope you don't mind but I think I'm going to leave." Takamina said as she walked away.

"Do you think that did it?" Mairko asked.

"I don't think so." Acchan said.

"Takamina's tough so we'll have to go to phase two."

"Phase two?"

Acchan explained to Mariko how she was going have her hang around her more often and be all lovey dovey around her. At first Mariko thought it was stupid and there was no way it was going to work. But then again she could be wrong. Acchan told Mariko to wait for her signal and when it was time, she would walk in and do her thing. Acchan walked over to Takamina and started talking to her. Then Acchan gave her the signal and Mariko walked over.

"Hey Acchan!" Mariko said as she ran up and hugged the princess.

"Hey Mariko!" Acchan said.

"What are you doing here Mariko?" Takamina said having a slightly confused look.

"I came here to see Acchan. We're going to go eat lunch together." Mariko said.

"But I thought we were going to eat lunch together."

"Well you said you were busy so I found someone else to eat with." Acchan said.

"But that was yesterday. Today I'm totally free to have lunch with you."

"Sorry but Mariko and I already made plans. See you later. Let's go Mariko."

The two quickly walked around the corner and when they were far enough, they looked back to see how the midget doctor handled it.

"You think it worked?" Mariko asked.

"Let's see." Acchan said.

Sadly, it seemed like it had no effect. Takamina just carried on with her tasks like nothing happened.

"It wasn't enough." Acchan said.

"So what do we do now?" Mariko asked.

"We step up to the next level."

At lunch time, Takamina was sitting alone at the table across where Acchan and Mariko were at. Acchan was dead set on making the small girl jealous.

"Alright take out your lunch." Acchan said.

"Mariko pulled out a small box and opened it revealing food.

"Ok now what I want you to do is spoon feed me it." Acchan handed Mariko a spoon.

"Really?"

"Just do it!"

Mariko scooped a spoonful of rice and placed it into her mouth. She chewed it and then said,

"Wow Mariko this is good! It's even better than Takamina's!"

She said it loud enough so Takamina could hear it. But she just ignored it and kept eating.

"Maybe we should try a different approach." Mariko said.

"You wait here and I'll go talk to her."

Mariko stood up and walked over to Takamina.

"Hey." Mariko said.

"Hey." Takamina replied with a mouth full of food.

"How is it?"

"Good."

"Hey have you noticed how cute Acchan is?"

"Of course. Acchan is super cute."

"Well are you two.. you know... together?"

When she said that, Takamina almost choked on her food.

"No! Of course not!" she said.

"Then if you don't mind, I think I'm going to steal her from you." Mariko said with a devilish smile.

"What?"

Before Takamina could do anything, Mariko walked back over to Acchan.

"Acchan stand up for a minute." she said.

"Why?"

"Just do it."

Acchan stood up in front of Mariko.

"Now start walking towards the exit." Mariko whispered.

Acchan started to walk but then Mariko pretended to run into her and the two fell over. They had landed in the most akward position where Acchan was on the ground and Mariko was on top pinning her down.

"What are you-"

"Shhh!"

Mariko began to lean in really close to Acchan to the point where she could kiss her. But then something pulled her off of Acchan and slammed her againt the wall.

"Hands off my girl!" Takamina shouted.

"I thought you weren't together." Mariko said innocently.

"We're not!"

"Well then I'll be taking her for myself."

"Never!"
 
Takamina jumped onto Mariko and started punching her the face repeatedly.

"Don't you dare touch my Acchan!" Takamina said.

"She's not yours! She's mine now since you've ignored her. She came to you looking for love but you ignored her so she came straight to me. It's your fault!" Mariko said with her face badly beaten and bruised. She could taste blood in her mouth. 

"Is that true?" Takamina said to Acchan who was now looking down.

"Acchan." Takamina walked over to Acchan and placed her hands on Acchan's shoulders.

"Acchan look at me!" Takamina said shaking her.

Acchan looked up with tears in her eyes.

"Is what Mariko said true? Do you feel like I've been ignoring you and not loving you?"

"You never paid attention to me so I thought you hated me. I was hurt and felt lonely." Acchan said with tears dripping down her face.

"Who said that? Who said I hated you?" Takamina said who was now also crying.

"I just wanted to be loved."

"Acchan I will always love you forever and all eternity. You are my cute, spoiled bratty little princess who I know and love and I would do anything for. You are the reason why I enjoy working here. Seeing your bright smiling face everyday lifts my spirits up to the level of gods. I would never ever try to hurt you. You're too prescious to me."

"Takamina.."

"To be honest, I was afraid that you didn't love me which was why when I saw you with Mariko I felt left out. Being me, I tried to hide my feelings but after seeing you like that with Mariko, I couldn't control it any more. I felt angry and just exploded. Oh Acchan I'm really sorry!"

The two embraced in a heart warming hug.

"Do you really love me Takamina?" Acchan said.

"I do. With all my heart." Takamina said.

"Then never leave me again."

"I promise."

The two sealed the promise with a kiss followed by another hug. The two stood there crying in each other's arms. Seeing how things turned out with the two love birds, Mariko quietly left the room. Mariko found Miichan and now she was cleaning Mariko's wounds.

"So Takamina did this to you?" Miichan asked as she dabbed Mariko's wounds with disenfectant.

"Ow! And yeah that girl can pack a punch." Mairko said.

"Well as they say, big things come in small packages."

"Yeah and that big thing is Takamina's punches."

"Well at least you weren't hurt too baldy." Miichan said as she finished putting the last bandage on.

"Thanks Gachapin."

"No problem"

The two walked back out into the hall and saw Takamina and Acchan walking down the hall holding hands.

"So you two made up?" Mariko said.

"Yep!" Acchan said moving closer to Takamina.

"Thanks for clearing things up between Acchan and I." Takamina said.

"Oh and sorry about your face."

"It's alright. I admit I did go a little too far."

"No it was perfect!" Acchan said.

"What?" Takamina looked at her with an angry look.

"Nothing. Hey Takamina let's go get some juice."

"Sure anything for you my princess."

The two walked away hand in hand never letting go.

Mariko was glad that the two finally found feelings for each other. Now maybe things will get better for everyone else around her. As she stood there staring at the two love birds, she couldn't help but feel a sudden ache in her chest. She didn't know what it was but she didn't like it. Later on that night, Mariko went out to a bar and got drunk.

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Well there's chapter 13! I hope all you Atsumina fans out there liked it. Takamina finally confessed her long lasting love to Acchan. Let's see how the relationship goes for them. And do not worry Kojiyuu and Mayuki fans I will have their moments soon. Just give me time! Anyways I hoped you enjoyed this and as always, please tell me what you think! 

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 13
« Reply #104 on: July 03, 2012, 12:41:33 AM »
hahahaha acchan making takamina jealous is so damn funny and cute :luvluv2:
please make more atsumina moments like this!-- :bow: :bow:
but why did mariko feel an ache on her chest???  :? :?
please update soon!!!

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 13
« Reply #105 on: July 03, 2012, 02:28:15 AM »
I can't wait for the other paring expacialy mayuki wmatsui and mariko.and miichan

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 14
« Reply #106 on: July 03, 2012, 06:56:19 AM »
Alright everyone it's time for some Mayuki and WMastui love! I am going to give it my best and I hope you all enjoy it!
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Chapter 14

"Hey Mariko!"

"What?"

Mariko turned around and found Mayuyu staring at her.

"What is it?" Mariko asked.

"I need you to help me get something from Jurina." she said.

"What do you need me to get?"

"Well a couple days ago, I was playing with Yukirin when we accidently ran into Rena. Jurina got mad and punched me. Then she took Yukirin's cross that she loved very much. I feel really bad for losing it so I wanted to make it up to her by getting it back. But when I tried, Jurina attacked me which is why I need you to do it."

"Ok. That shouldn't be too hard."

Mariko walked to Jurina and Rena's room. They were looking at a magazine about amusement parks and when they saw Mariko they stopped.

"Mariko what's up?" Jurina asked.

"Mayuyu said you took something from Yukirin. A cross right?" Mariko said.

"Yeah what about it?"

"Well can I have it back? Yukirin is really upset about it and so is Mayuyu."

"No way. This is punishment for what they did to Rena."

"Well then what can I do to make you give it back?"

Jurina stood there for a moment and thought. Then she looked back at the magazine she was reading and got an idea. She picked up the magazine and showed Mariko a picture of an amusement park.

"Take Rena and I here." she said.

"Disney Sea?" Mariko said.

"Yeah. Rena and I have always wanted to go there when we were kids."

"If I do this then will you give me Yukirin's cross back?"

"Yep."

"Alright. Let me go make the proper preparations."

"Yay! You hear that Rena? We're going to Disney Sea!" Jurina said extremely happy.

"Yay! Jurina your're the best!" Rena said.

"They really are just kids." Mariko thought as she left the room.

After an hour drive, Mariko pulled into the Disney Sea parking lot. Then her, Rena and Jurina stepped out of the car. The two girls were wearing normal clothes instead of their usual facility gowns.

"Alright we're here and before we go, there's something I need you two to put on." Mariko said.

Mariko pulled out two necklaces. One had a sun and the other had a moon on it. Rena took the sun and Jurina took the moon.

"I want you two to wear these so incase you get lost, I'll be able to spot you."

"Ok!" the two said as they put on the necklaces.

Actually, the necklaces were tracking devices given to her by Sayaka. Mariko had the tracking monitor in her purse just incase they tried to escape.

"Alright then let's get out there and have fun!"

"Yosh!"

For the next two hours, the three of them went on rides and played games. Mariko also bought snacks and souvineers with her money.

"Well there goes my pay check." she said to herself.

Jurina went on the wildest rollar costars in the park while Rena stayed with Mariko. Then they all went on the ferris wheel and after that the tea cups. Jurina kept spinning the cup they were in making Mariko feel like she was going to throw up. They met Mickey and Minny Mouse and got to hug them. Although Mariko kept her distance because they kind of creeped her out and she felt like beating Mickey with a bat. After going on the same ride for the third time, Mariko decided to go buy some snacks. She had the two Matsui sisters wait for in on a bench nearby while she went to go buy the ice cream. She would often look back to make sure they were still there. She ordered the ice cream and walked back to the girls. But then she saw they were gone.

"Oh crap!"

Mariko quickly gave the ice cream to a random couple and then pulled out the tracking device from her bag. She turned it on and soon two red dots popped up. They were on the move and it looked like they were heading for the game center. Mariko quickly ran down the game center and started to search for the sisters. But they were nowhere to be found. Mariko looked at the tracking device and saw they were now heading towards the water fall drop ride. She quickly ran to the ride and didn't see them. They weren't on the ride either.

"Where are they?"

Mariko looked at the tracking device again and saw they had stopped near the ferris wheel. Mariko dashed down to the ferris wheel and stopped right at the spot where they would've been. She looked around but still didn't see them anywhere. But then out of the corner of her eye she saw the sun necklace. Mariko turned around and saw the two necklaces only they weren't on Jurina and Rena. They were on two random girls. Mariko ran up to the two girls and questioned them.

"Hey where did you get those necklaces?" Mariko asked.

"Two nice girls gave them to us. Why?" one girl asked.

"Did you see which way they went?"

"Yeah towards the rose garden." the other girl said.

"Thanks!"

Mairko ran as fast as she could down to the rose garden which was on the other side of the park. When she arrived, she saw a lot of people. She frantically searched for the Matsui sisters who were still nowhere to be found. But then in her panicked dash, she saw two girls sitting on a bench under an arch of roses in front of a fountain. Mariko stopped and realized the two girls were Rena and Jurina! Mariko ran up to the two girls ready to scold the living day lights out of them. But when she got closer, she realized the two were sleeping. Rena was resting peacefully against Jurina's shoulder who was leaning against Rena's head. Somehow seeing this made all the anger in Mariko's body vanish.

"Aww how cute."

Mariko took out her phone and took a picture. The sound of the shutter made Jurina wake up. Mariko quickly put her phone away before she noticed she had taken a picture.

"Morning." Mariko said.

"Mariko?" Jurina said.

"Shhh." Mariko said as she gently held Rena allowing Jurina to get up and stretch.

"I was wondering where you guys went." Mariko said.

"Well Rena really wanted to go see the rose garden and I couldn't say no." Jurina said.

"I see. Well let's get you two back to the facility." Mariko said as she carefully placed Rena into a piggy back position and started carrying her.

"I can do it." Jurina said.

"No I'll do it." Mariko said.

Mariko knew that as long as she had Rena then Jurina wouldn't run. When they got back to the facility, the two sisters thanked Mariko and Jurina returned Yukirin's cross to Mariko who then gave it to Mayuyu.

"Thank you so much!" Mayuyu said.

"You have no idea what I had to do to get it back." Mariko said.

"Yeah yeah don't care."

"What?" Mariko said slightly irritated.

Just then, Yukirin came out with a sad look on her face.

"Hey Yukirin look what I got!" Mayuyu said waving the cross in victory.

Yukirin's face brightened up and she ran over and hugged Mayuyu.

"Thank you so much!" Yukirin said as she put the cross back on her neck.

"How on earth did you manage to get it back?"

"I have my ways." Mayuyu said in a cunning voice.

"This person..." Mariko thought getting even more mad at the fact that Mayuyu didn't mention all the hard work she had to do.

"Oh Mayuyu this is the best thing you've ever done for me!' Yukirin said.

"Not the best thing." Mayuyu said.

"What are you-"

Mayuyu silenced Yukirin's lips with a kiss. Mariko watched Yukirin's face turn bright red as the two held for what seemed like forever. When they let go, Mayuyu was the first to speak.

"I'm really sorry for everything Yukirin. Can you forgive me?"

"I already have." Yukirin said as she dove in for another kiss.

Seeing how she didn't belong, Mariko left the two lovers. When she looked back, she couldn't help but feel that same ache in her chest. She didn't know what it was but she really didn't like it. It felt like there was a giant hole in her heart just sitting there eating away at what's left. That same night, Mariko got drunk again.

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Well there's chapter 14! I hope everyone enjoyed it. I did my best trying to think of the best romantic scenarios and that's when I thought of Disney Sea! Now next up is Kojiyuu. But in the meantime, does anyone know why Mariko's heart is aching? Well find out more in the next chapter. Agian thank you for reading and please tell me what you think!

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 14
« Reply #107 on: July 03, 2012, 10:52:52 AM »
lovely~~~~~

Mayuki was cute!!! and so was Wmatsui~

....wonder why mayuki was so short.....still cuteeeee~ XD
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 14
« Reply #108 on: July 03, 2012, 11:48:30 AM »
you up there! miyumi!!

I just woke up today and basically visit this site to update some fics of mine..
You always made my day happy :shy1:


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Re: The Mad House update chapter 15
« Reply #109 on: July 03, 2012, 02:08:24 PM »
Everyone has their bad days. This chapter is about Mariko's bad day. I hope you enjoy! Or not....
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Chapter 15

"Two hang overs." Mariko thought as she rubbed the temples of her forehead.

The pain meds she had taken weren't helping either. Mariko was in a really bad mood. A lot had been happening to her and the over whelming pressure was too much to handle. Lately, she's got this patteren of going to the bar and getting drunk and then waking up with a major hang over. She had a huge head ache and just had a nasty edge on her shouler.

"Hey Mariko!" Yuko said.

"Shut up!" Mariko shouted.

Yuko looked at Mariko with the eyes of a child that just got scolded. Mariko realized and straightened herself up a little.

"I'm sorry Yuko. What do you need?" Mariko asked.

"Well if it isn't a bother.... I saw how you got Takamina and Acchan to come out so I was wondering if you could do the same for Nyannyan and I." Yuko said hesitantly.

"Sure. Where is she?"

"In her room."

"Alright give me a minute."

Mariko turned around and trudged down to Haruna's room. Her head still really hurt and she was tired from the lack of sleep she's been getting.

"Hey Haruna can I talk to you for a minute." Mariko said as she walked in.

"Yeah. Hey Mariko are you ok? You don't look too good." Haruna said.

"I'm fine."

"If you say so."

"So listen, I don't know if you know this but Yuko really likes you. And not in the pervy way but in the actual deep love kind of way."

"Yeah I know."

"Do you love her back?"

"Of course I do." Haruna happily chimed.

"Then why is it that you reject her every time Yuko tires to make a move on you?" Mariko questioned.

"Because I get scared. I'm afraid."

"Ahh I see."

Mariko slowly started to assess and figure out what her next plan was. Then she got an idea.

"Wait here."

Mariko walked out and then came back with a bottle of pills.

"Here take these." Mariko said handing Haruna the pills.

"What are they?" Haruna asked as she popped two in her mouth.

"Hormone pills. They'll make you more aggressive towards someone of the same sex. Mainly Yuko."

"What?"

"You'll be more open around Yuko." Mariko said.

"Ohhh ok."

Just then Yuko came into the room.

"Hey you guys!" she said.

Yuko walked over and sat next to Haruna on the bed.

"So how are things going?" she asked.

"Good." Haruna said.

There was a long silence in the room. As Mariko sat there watching the two, she notcied Haruna's hand getting closer to Yuko's. When Haruna touched Yuko's hand, the squirrel girl flinched.

"Nyanyan." Yuko said.

"Yuko I don't know why but I feel like I want you." Haruna said.

 Then Haruna leaned in and kissed Yuko right on the lips. There was a bright smile on the squirrel girl's face as she held Haruna close to her. The two were lost in a kiss and the whole sight was making Mariko sick. Then it happened. Mariko quickly ran out of the room to the nearest bathroom and threw up. Her throat burned as she stood there with tears running down her cheeks. That same ache in her chest was back and worse than before.

"Why... why, why, why!" Mariko said to herself.

Images of her paitents flashed in her head. Their smiling faces as they held each other so closely. It looked so nice and so comforting. Mariko felt so lonely not being able to enjoy that same feeling. After she had washed her mouth out, she started crying. But then a familar voice came out from the stall.

"Mariko, are you ok?" Miichan said.

"Leave me alone Gachapin." Mariko said.

Miichan couldn't help but feel sorry seeing her doctor like this. Without thinking, Miichan walked over and hugged Mariko. This new feeling made Mariko's body shiver. She felt her heart become lighter and didn't feel that ache in her chest. When Miichan was about to let go, Mariko wrapped her arounds Miichan.

"Don't go." she said.

The two stood there for what seemed like hours. It was during that time Mariko realized what the ache in her chest was. She wanted love like everyone else around her was experiencing. She was holding back this feeling which was only hurting her on the inside. But hugging Miichan made her realize what she was missing and now she wanted more.

"Miichan." Mariko said pushing her back.

Before Miichan could respond, Mariko pressed her lips against Miichan's. Their lips locked in a pasionate kiss. Mariko never wanted this moment to end. She just wanted it to stay like that with Miichan in her arms and lips locked. But then Mariko realized she had to refrain herself and she snapped back to reality.

"Mariko..." Miichan said looking at her with wide eyes.

"I'm sorry. I have to go. Thank you for everything." Mariko said as she left the bathroom.

"Great now she probably hates me." Mariko thought.

Mariko walked back to check on Haruna and Yuko and she didn't even have to walk in the door to know what they were doing. Outside, you could hear Haruna's soft moans coming from inside and Yuko's perverted laugh.

"Oh Nyannyan you're so sensitive." Yuko said from inside.

"Shut up Yuko." Haruna said.

Mariko quickly walked away from the door and without looking ran into Sayaka.

"Oh Mariko I'm-"

Sayaka stopped midsentence. She looked at Mariko and then said,

"Come with me."

Sayaka took Mariko to her office where she got her some tea.

"Thanks." Mariko said taking the cup.

"Drink it." Sayaka said.

Sayaka walked over and saw across from Mariko.

"Now listen I'm one of the head doctors here and it's my job to not only make sure the patients are ok but the doctors as well." 

"Ohh." Mariko said realizing why she was here.

"If there is anything bothering you, you can come to me. You know that right?" Sayaka said.

"Yeah. Of course." Mariko said.

"Good. I'm just making sure you're ok. You don't look too good right now and I'm worried. How about you take the rest of the day off and go home and rest." 

"Thanks."

Mariko said as she got up and left the room quietly. She really could use the rest after everything that happened. On her way out, she caught Miichan.

"Hey Gacha- I mean Miichan, you wanna come with me to the bar?" Mariko asked.

"Uhh sure." Miichan set her stuff down and walked over to her.

"Hey Mariko."

"Yeah?"

"Why are you calling me by my name all of the sudden?" Miichan asked.

"Because I want to." Mariko said.

"This isn't some sort of trick is it?"

"If it was, it wouldn't be at a bar."

"Good point."

That night, the two went out and had fun. For once, Mariko didn't feel lonely because she had found someone to be with. The next morning, Mariko woke up with another hang over. She had gotten drunk again and now was fighting another head ache. Like every morning, she would start off by getting up and getting in the shower. But when she was going to get up, she felt something warm grab her. She looked over and saw Miichan unconsiously holding onto her hand. Seeing that made Mariko remember the fun night they had last night.

"Hey Gachapin." Mariko said.

Miichan woke up and in the process, she sat up. That's when Mariko realized Miichan was naked.

"Ahhhh!"

Mariko quickly turned around and covered her bright red face.

"What?"

"Ahhhhh!"

Miichan also realized and covered herself with the sheets.

"Gachapin.. Did we...." Mariko couldn't finish her sentence becasue she didn't want to.

"No... There's no way." Miichan said.

"Right. Yeah there's no way."

"Yeah."

Mariko looked at the clock and realized that it was almost time for work.

"Crap! Gachapin get dressed!" Mariko said.

The two arrived to work two minutes before they were considered late. Sayaka had her suspicions but didn't press any further into it. Mariko was walking down the hall when Yuko came up to her.

"Uhh thank you for helping me out yesterday." Yuko said.

"No problem. I could hear that you two were making progress yesterday." Mariko said.

Yuko blushed at the rememberance of what she and Haruna did yesterday.

"Those pills you gave Haruna really got her fired up. What exactly are they?" Yuko asked.

"Actually they're just sugar pills." Mariko said.

"What?"

"When you trick the mind into thinking they can do it then they will actually do it. You get it?"

"Yeah that make sense!" the squirrel girl said.

"Yeah so basically Haruna made all those sweet noises all on her own." 

A huge perverted smile stretched across Yuko's face.

"Well I'm glad I was helpful." Mariko said.

"Yeah I'll definetly be coming back for more." Yuko said.

"I'll be waiting."

As Mariko walked away, she saw Miichan making her way over. The two stopped right in the middle of the hall.

"Mairko."

"Gachapin."

There was an akward silence between the two. Then Mariko finally spoke,

"So listen, I don't remember what we did last night but whatever it was it's in the past and it's done."

"Yeah totally." Miichan said.

"And we must promise never speak of it again." Mariko said.

"Yes."

"Ok good. Well then I'll see you later Miichan."

Mariko started to walk away when Miichan said something.

"Hey Mariko."

"Yeah?"

"Thanks for calling me by my name."

"No problem."

Mariko left having a warm fuzzy feeling in her chest. She felt so glad that she had finally found what she was looking for all along.

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Well there's chapter 15. I'm sorry if the beginning is kind of depressing but I too was in a bad mood when I started writing it. But then I made the ending and started to feel better. But now I'm seriously cosidering ending it here. I don't know. I just don't feel confident about my writing anymore. But enough about me. Please tell me what you think and I hope you all continue reading!

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« Reply #110 on: July 03, 2012, 03:10:02 PM »
WHATT??? you're ending this?  :fainted:
MAJI DE?
DON'T!! I mean not yet! make fun of it more please  :on_puddle:
I want to know more about my atsumina here if they ended up happily..
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« Reply #111 on: July 03, 2012, 03:23:45 PM »
MariMii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :heart: :heart: ~yay~ :twothumbs

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 16
« Reply #112 on: July 03, 2012, 10:36:14 PM »
Hello everyone! I have decided to continue the Mad House series once more thanks to a certain someone who helped me get through the worst. So I'm done with all the lovey dovey stuff. Now it's time for insanity! Please enjoy!
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Chapter 16

"Hey, hey did you hear?" Takamina said.

"Hear what?" Mariko said.

"Apparently, there's a reporter coming today to do a story about the facility."

"Really?"

"Yeah so everyone's on their best behavior."

"Well that's good."

"No it's not."

"What do you mean?" Mariko asked.

"What I mean is everyone is going to get wild." Takamina said.

"Really?"

"Yeah. The only reason why news reporters come to the facility is to film everyone acting crazy and then show it to kids so they get scared and never go insane."

"Well that's one way to tell them."

"Yeah so be on your toes because it's going to be a long day."

The news reporters arrived around noon. Sayaka greeted them and walked them in. There was the one news caster and two camera men. Mariko saw them coming down the hall so she pretended to look busy.

"This is a lovely facility." the news reporter said.

"Of course. It is one of the best in Tokyo." Sayaka said.

"Is it ok if we meet some of the doctors?"

"There's one now. Mariko!"

Mariko walked over to them and looked right at the camera.

"I am Shinoda Mariko and I've been working here at Hirokawa Mental Facility for five months now. It's nice to meet you." Mariko said.

"It's nice to meet you to. Now tell me, what's it like working here at the facility?" the reporter asked.

"Well it's not as bad as you think. Some of the patients are actually really calm and rarely act out."

"Can we meet some of your patients?"

"Sure please follow me."

Mariko decided to take them to Haruna's room seeing she's the least dangerous out of all her patients. When they walked in, Haruana was suprised and jumped back a little.

"This is Kojima Haruna. She's been here for five months like me and she is the least dangerouos out of all my patients." Mariko said.

"Nice to meet you." Haruna said.

"Tell me, do you enjoy being here in the facility?" the reporter asked.

"Well it's not bad. When I first came here I had a hard time adjusting. But thanks to Mariko, I've began to adjust and actually make friends."

"And who are these friends?"

"Nyannyan!"

Yuko came rushing in and jumped on Haruna.

"This is my best friend Yuko." Haruna said.

"I'm Oshima Yuko. Nice to meet you!" Yuko said with that squirrel smile of hers.

"Yuko is the second least dangerous and she's very good friends with Haruna. They're always around each other." Mariko said.

"We're like sisters!" Yuko said wrapping her arms around Haruna.

"Yuko wait a-"

Haruna froze and slowly began to fall back.

"What's wrong with her?" the reporter asked.

"Haurna has petite malseizures meaning she'll lose consiousness at random times for a couple minutes. We'd better leave so we don't scare her when she wakes up." Mariko said.

"But I wanted to have some fun with Nyannyan." Yuko said in a perverted voice.

"Not now." Mariko said giving the squirrel girl a death glare.

The last thing she wanted was the public to think the facility was a house for crazy lesbians.

"Let me take you to the Matsui sisters. They're also my patients and have been here since I've been here." 

As they walked down the hall, Acchan and Takamina came over.

"The short girl with the bow in her hair is doctor Takahashi Minami and the taller girl with short black hair is Atsuko Maeda." Mariko said.

"You're pretty short to be a doctor." the reporter said to Takamina.

"Well I have been told that before." Takamina said trying to hide the fact that she was ticked.

"Hey apolagize to Takamina! Only I'm allowed to make fun of her height." Acchan said.

"Apolagize now!" Acchan was getting angry.

"Takamina take Acchan back to her room." Mariko said holding Acchan back preventing her from attacking the reporter.

"Come one Acchan. Let's go to your room and I can paint your nails."

"Ok!"

The two walked away holding hands.

"Um aren't they a little too casual for doctor and patient? They're acting like a boy friend and girl friend." the reporter said.

"Every doctor has a different way of handling their patients. Takahashi just happens to use the more friendly method and there's nothing wrong with that." Mariko said defending her friend.

"Good point."

Mariko and the reporter walked down to Jurina and Rena's room. When Jurina saw the cameras, she immediately began to go into protective mode.

"The one standing is Matsui Jurina and the one sitting is Matsui Rena. THe two are sisters and are very attached to each other." Mariko said.

"I'm guessing you're the most dangerous?" the reporter said to Jurina.

"No but I will be in a minute."

"Easy Jurina." Mariko said pushing Jurina back a little.

"Actually, the most dangerous one between the two is Rena."

"Her?" the reporter pointed at Rena who was hiding behind Jurina.

"She doesn't look dangerous. She looks like she couldn't hurt a fly."

"Oh you'd be suprised." Mariko said.

"Yeah. When nee-chan gets mad, she'll slaughter anyone in sight!" Jurina said.

"Jurina language please!"

"I would love to see what happens." the reporter said now eyeing Rena.

"Don't you dare touch my sister!" Jurina barked as she was about to punch the reporter.

"Jurina relax." Mariko said pushing her back.

"This one is a fighter."

"You're not helping." Mariko hissed.

When Mariko finally got Jurina to calm down, she made the reporter and the camera men leave. 

"I am sorry but could you please refrain from agrivating the patients. Some are not as easy going as the others."

"But we came here to film them getting mad and angry. We need something exciting to but on TV." the reporter said.

"Well unless you want to end up in the hospital, I suggest you back off." Mariko said.

Just then, Sae came running over. She was her usual hyper genking self.

"Hi there!" she shouted.

"Hello." the reporter said.

"My name's Miyazawa Sae but everyone calls me a genking. I'm always super super super excited all the time!"

"That's very nice."

"Hey is that candy?" Sae said pointing at the pocket of one of the camera men.

"Yeah here take some."

"No don't!"

Sae ate the candy and within seconds she went beserk. Sae started bouncing all over the place and running in circle and rolling on the ground.

"Why'd you do that?!" Sayaka said as she ran up to them.

"Sae can't have sugar!" 

"I'm sorry I didn't know." the camera man said.

"Oh I'm sure you are. Sae put that down! Fire extinguishers are not rockets!"

Down the hall you could see Sae sitting on a fire extinguisher with the nozzle in the back. She started making rocket engine sounds and shaking all over.

"Prepare for blast off!" she shouted.

Then Sae pulled the pin and the extinguisher went off sending her flying down the hall.

"Dang it Sae!" Sayaka said running after her.

"Let's get moving."

Mariko started to walk when she suddenly tripped over something. She looked over and saw Mayuyu who was perfectly huddled on the ground reading a manga.

"Hello Mariko." she said.

"Who is this?" the reporter asked. 

"This is Watanabe Mayu. A patient here. Where's Yukirin?" Mariko said.

"Behind you."

"Hello."

The two camera men stepped to the side to reveal Yukirin who was apparently there the whole time.

"This is Kashiwagi Yuki who is a doctor here. Mayu is her patient."

"Nice to meet you." Yukirin said.

"You suprised me." the reporter said.

"I do that a lot."

"Why is your patient out in the hall?"

"Because she likes to read manga out here and I like to watch her."

"I see."

"Yes now if you excuse me I'll be taking my patient and we will be on our way."

The two left the hall and into a room.

"I think she has the most well behaved patients here." the reporter said.

"Oh you have no idea."

Just then, there was a loud bang coming down from Haruna's room. Soon after, Haruna came out with Acchan on her back riding her like a horse.

"Faster, faster!" she said.

"Get her off me!" Haruna screamed.

"Get off my Nyannyan!" Yuko said charging at Acchan.

"You go film that!" the reporter said to one of thecamera men.

Then at the other end of the hall, Jurina and Mayuyu came rolling at punching at each other.

"Give me back my sailor moon magic wand!" Mayuyu said.

"No way! I wanted to play with it!" Jurina said.

"Get that, get that!" the reporter said.

"Find that Rena girl! I want to see her fight too. More violence! More insanity!'

"What's wrong with you?" Mariko said.

"This is what the people want to see!"

"No it's what you want to see!"

Everyone was in total chaos. Mayuyu and Yukirin were fighting, Acchan and Yuko are wrestling over Haruna, Sae was on a sugar rush, and all the doctors were useless. Things were getiting really bad. But then things got worse when one of the camera men started beatinig Rena.

"Get angry! Go nuts! You're a freak, a lunatic, a monster!" the camera man shouted.

"Jurina!" Rena cried.

"Leave my sister alone!" Jurina said as she attacked the camera man.

"Acchan get off Haruna!" Takamina said trying to pry Acchan off Haruna.

"No I'm not done with ger yet!" Acchan said.

"Leave my Nyannyan alone!" Yuko said punching Acchan.

"Sae stop running!" Sayaka said as Sae ran down the hall carrying a chair.

Sae slipped and the chair went flying. It hit Mariko right on her head. When the chair impacted, Mariko fell to the ground. She was almost going to black out when something inside her just snapped. Mariko got up and only Yukirin and Mayuyu noticed the dark aura coming from Mairko as they ran into another room. Mariko walked over to Acchan and grabbed her by the leg. Then she pulled Acchan off Haruna like she was nothing and threw her at Takamina.

"Acchan!" Takamina said as she caught the girl mid air and fell back.

Then Mariko separated Yuko and Haruna by thowing Yuko across the hall.

"Yuko!" Haruna screamed as she ran down to her.

Mariko then walked over to Sae who was still running around like crazy. She waited for the right moment and right when Sae was going to run past Mariko, Mariko stuck her arm out and closed lined Sae knocking her out cold. Once that was done, Mariko walked over to the Jurina who was on top of the camera man attacking his face. She picked up Jurina one handed and slammed her against the walll. Jurina slid down the wall and landed right next to Rena. Then Mariko grabbed the two men and shoved them into the reporter.

"Hey what do you think you're-"

Mariko just stared at the reporter with the darkest glare she had ever given.

"Get out. Get out right now! Don't you ever come back and if you do, I'll show you something crazy." Mariko said.

Mariko punched the reporter and then pulled out a scalpal she had in her pocket. She got on top of the reporter and waved the scalpal in the reporter's face. Then borrowing Rena's words,

"Hey... you mad? You wanna see something scary?"

Mariko gave the reporter the most wicked smile that even made Rena shiver. Mariko raised the scapal and brought it down on the reporter. But right before the blade hit, something stopped her. Mariko looked over and saw Miichan was holding onto her arm.

"Gachapin let go!" Mariko barked.

"NO!" Miichan then wrapped her arms around Mariko and gave her a reassuring hug.

This snapped Mariko out of her anger mode and she calmed down. Mariko got up and said to the reporter,

"The people here are not animals. They are not your toys that you use for your own entertainment. They are patients that need help and it's my job to make sure they get it."

Then Sayaka escorted the whole group out of the facility. Everyone just stared at Mariko trying to figure out what just happened. Mariko had snapped and showed everyone the full force of Mariko's anger. Mariko just looked at everyone and then finally said,

"Sorry everyone. I guess I went to far trying to protect you guys."

The next day, the reporter had broadcasted the film taken at the facility. It showed everyone going nuts. They didn't even bother showing the actual good footage where everyone was calm.

Mariko sat there watching the TV when Miichan walked over and handed her a cup of tea.

"Don't listen to them. They're full of dirt." she said.

"Thanks." Mariko said.

"Hey Mariko what was that on that day? It was like you snapped and became a whole new person."

"I don't know. I think everyone is starting to rub off on me."

"Be careful. I don't want to see you in a straight jacket. But then again, that actually might be kinda hot."

"Shut up Gachapin."

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Well there's Chapter 16! I tried to put in as much madness as I could. Ahh it feels good to be back. And a special thanks to miayaka for helping me when I was down. I owe you one! Anyways, I hope you all enjoyed it and please tell me what you think!

 

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 16- Mariko goes nuts!
« Reply #113 on: July 03, 2012, 11:55:09 PM »
I hate that repoter  :scolding:
awww I like it so much  :shy2:
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 16- Mariko goes nuts!
« Reply #114 on: July 04, 2012, 12:42:19 AM »
And Mariko shows why she is called Mariko-sama :thumbup

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"Why is your patient out in the hall?"

"Because she likes to read manga out here and I like to watch her."

 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: That the way to go, Yukirin! Proudly declare your affection towards your adorable otaku patient! But gosh, stealthy Black Yukirin can give one heart attacks with her sudden appearances :lol:

I'm glad you decided to continue this series. Insanity is goooood! :twothumbs Keep up the awesome work and squeeze all the craziness out of your amazing characters!

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 16- Mariko goes nuts!
« Reply #115 on: July 04, 2012, 01:36:10 AM »
I'm really glad you decided to continue!
Mariko x Miichan is really cute :D
The reporters are evil  :thumbdown:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 16- Mariko goes nuts!
« Reply #116 on: July 04, 2012, 01:39:51 AM »
wow i've been gone for a day and you updated already 2 chapters :shocked
it's super funny  :rofl:
and crazy and super mariko is epic!!!
but i hate the reporter anyways...that reporter should die... :angry:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 16- Mariko goes nuts!
« Reply #117 on: July 04, 2012, 03:12:27 AM »
WOW....

Shinoda is becoming Like Rena...COOOL

They All Fighting ... except Rena

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 17
« Reply #118 on: July 04, 2012, 06:55:22 AM »
Hello everyone! Today's chapter is going to be another battle of awesomness!! I present to you: Kojiyuu vs Atsumina! I hope you enjoy reading this chapter. Let the battle begin!
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Chapter 17

Mariko was talking to Sayaka when she heard a scream coming down from the hall. Mariko ran down and couldn't believe what she was watching. There on the ground was Takamina and Yuko wrestling each other. Mariko stood there for a moment trying to figure out what was going on. But she didn't have time and just tried separating the two. When she finally got them to stop fighting, she asked,

"What are you two doing?!"

"The squirrel here went too far!" Takamina said.

"No the midget went too far!" Yuko protested.

"Ok one at a time!" Mariko said.

"Takamina what did Yuko do?"

"She touched my Acchan!"

"What do you mean?"

"She grouped Acchan and told her inappropriate things!"

"Yuko is that true?" Mariko said looking over at Yuko.

"Yeah I grouped her. I did what you still haven't done yet." Yuko said.

"What does that mean?"

"Acchan told me how she wished Takamina would be more touchy with her like I am with Nyannyan. And Takamina being the stubborn midget she is won't listen!"

"There's no way Acchan would think such dirty things! Acchan is pure and would never think that!" Takamina said.

"She's 19 and still hasn't done it yet. She's practically a cat in heat!"

"Don't you dare say that about Acchan!"

Takamina got back up and charged at Yuko. But then Mariko got in the way and knocked Takamina back down.

"Stay!" Mariko said.

"Now Yuko what did Takamina do?" 

"She told my Nyannyan she wasn't attractive and kept gloating on how great her prescious Acchan is. She made Nyannyan cry!" Yuko said. 

"Only becasue she called Acchan a brat!" Takamina said.

"Because she is!"

"Alright both of you calm down!" Mariko said.

"God they're like two husbands fighting over something stupid." Mariko thought.

"Where's Haruna and Acchan now?" Mariko asked.

"In Haruna's room." Takamina said.

"Then let's go get them and talk this through. Otherwise I'm hooking you both up to a shock wave therapy machine. Got it?"

The two silently nodded their heads. Together, the three of them walked down to Haruna's room. They could hear screams coming from inside. Mariko opend the door and Haruna and Acchan came racing out. Haruna was on top of Acchan with a pencil in her hand getting ready to stab Acchan.

"Acchan!"

Takamina quickly pulled Haruna off Acchan and threw her to the side.

"Nyannyan!" Yuko said as she ran over to Haruna.

"What happened?" Mariko asked.

"Tell the air head she's wrong about Takamina!" Mariko screamed.

"Tell the princess what she said about Yuko was all lies!" Haruna sceamed back.

"Great now the wives are fighting." Mariko thought.

"Tell me what happened!" Mariko screamed at the both of them.

Acchan was the first to speak.

"This air head said that Takamina was lame because she was short and not good at romance like Yuko."

"Because she is and you know it!" Haruna said.

"Why you!"

Acchan tried to get up by Takamina held her down.

"The little princess told me Yuko was eyeing other girls besides me because I don't pay enough attention to her!" Haruna said.

"Because you don't! Why do you think she grouped me? Because she found me more attractive than you!" Acchan barked.

"Shut up!" Haruna tried to get up but Yuko pushed her back. 

"Hey control your girl!" Yuko said.

"You control your pet!" Takamina said.

"What'd you say?"

"I'm gonna kill you!"

Pretty soon all four of them were in a heated battle Takamina and Yuko were punching the day lights out of each other while Haruna and Acchan were tearing at each other's hair and leaving all kinds of cat scratches. It was like watching a soap opera you see on TV when two familes get into a heated arguement. Mariko had to stop them before they seriously injured each other. She stood there trying to figure out a way to break them up. Then it hit her. Mariko ran into the other room and came back with a bucket full of water. She dumped it on the four girls making them stop in their tracks.

"Hey!" Takamina said.

"What was that for?" Yuko asked.

"To get you guys to stop fighting." Mariko said.

"Well it got us but not them." Takamina pointed over to Haruna and Acchan who were still fighting.

 Having no choice, Mariko walked over and slapped both of them in the face.

"Hey that hurt!" Acchan said."

"Yeah!" Haruna agreed.

"Well it got you two to stop fighting so to me it worked." Mariko said. 

"Now listen. You guys need to stop this arguing and just apolagize."

"Never!" Acchan said.

"No way!" Haruna said.

"Takamina, Yuko?"

"NO!" they both said.

"Fine then I have no choice."

After a half hour of stuggling, Mariko finally finished tightening the last restraint.

"What's the meaning of this?" Takamina asked trying to free herself from her restraints.

"What's with the patches?" Yuko asked.

"This." Mariko held up a remote and pressed a button causing Yuko to be shocked.

"Ow that hurts!"

"That's the point."

"Why are we tied like this?" Acchan said.

"This isn't fair!" Haruna said.

"Well it's the only way to get you two to stop fighting and do what I say." Mariko said.

"Now we're going to talk things through like adults and if you refuse..."

Mariko hit a switch and all four of them got a shock.

"Let's begin. Haruna how about you start by apalogizing to Acchan." Mariko said.

Haruna remained silent.

"Well if none of you go then I'll just flip the switch."

"Wait wait I'll do it!" Takamina said.

"Thank you for being the adult."

Takamina looked over at Yuko with a serious face in a sinciere voice she said,

"Yuko, I'm sorry for the way I behaved and I hope you can forgive and when this is all over we can still be good friends."

"Thank you Takamina and I'm sorry too." Yuko said.

"I went to far and forgot how much Acchan meant to you. I hope we can still be friends ofter this too."

"See? Now that wasn't so bad." Mariko said.

Mariko was glad Takamina was the first to stand up.

"Now are you two ready?"

Acchan and Haruna remained silent. Well since no one is answering..."

Maaiko pressed two buttons and both Haruna and Yuko started screaming.

"You ready to apalogize now?"

They both nodded their heads.

"Alrigiht then Haruna you go first."

"Acchan I'm sorry for what I said about Takamina. She's actually a great person and you're lucky to have her." Haruna said.

"Thank you and I'm sorry for saying all those harsh things about Yuko. I was mad and wasn't thinking right." Acchan said.

"Good. Now is everyone happy?" Mariko asked.

"YES!" everyone answered.

"Alright then I'll untie you."

Once everyone was released, they all went back to being their usual selves. Feelinig satisfyed with herself, Mariko decided to take a quick nap before her next appointment. About a half hour later, Mariko woke up only she found herself in a different room. She was also strapped to a chair and couldn't move. Mariko started to get really scared when she saw the shock patches on her arms. She looked up and saw Yuko, Haruana, Acchan and Takamina all smiling at her. Then Takamina pulled out the same remote she had used on them.

"Payback time!" they all happily chimed.

Mariko grabbed onto her chair preparing herself for what was probably going to be the second most painful thing in her life.

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Well there's chapter 17! I hope everyone enjoyed reading. I tried not to make the battele as intense as Mayuki's and Wmatsui's because it wouldn't seem right having Acchan shoving a pencil into Yuko's leg you know? It just doesn't fit them. Anyways, please tell me what you think and look forward for the next chapter!


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Re: The Mad House update chapter 17- Kojiyuu vs Atsumina!
« Reply #119 on: July 04, 2012, 08:30:58 AM »
man  :rofl: :rofl: it's like the doctors are going to be insane too  :rofl: :rofl:
the chapter is...crazy  XD and poor Mariko... :rofl: she's not going to get away from that  :rofl:

please continue writing, miyumi-san, it's great!! :thumbup and i love it!  :thumbup
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