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Re: The Mad House update chapter 17- Kojiyuu vs Atsumina!
« Reply #121 on: July 04, 2012, 03:56:20 PM »
2 chapters updated! sugooiiii..
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 17- Kojiyuu vs Atsumina!
« Reply #122 on: July 04, 2012, 05:46:25 PM »
Mariko went nuts is sure scary  :nervous :nervous
I wonder if the others doctors have been nuts before too  :roll: :lol:
husbands and wives fighting hilarious and poor Mariko got shocked in the end  XD

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 17- Kojiyuu vs Atsumina!
« Reply #123 on: July 04, 2012, 07:42:08 PM »
New reader here! I read your whole story in one day, it's seriously too funny. And you update fast too! I love it XD
I think the best part was last chapter when the reporter hit Rena and tried to make her go into Gekikara mode LOL.

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 17- Kojiyuu vs Atsumina!
« Reply #124 on: July 04, 2012, 08:04:35 PM »
Yeeeeeah!!! ajajja kojiyuu and atsumina are the best!!!  :cow: Arigatoou  :deco:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 18- Mayuyu's heaven
« Reply #125 on: July 04, 2012, 10:33:44 PM »
Hello! Today's chapter is about Mayuyu and Yukirin's fun liitle trip. The little otaku is going to get the biggest surprise of her life. Keep reading to find out where they go and what happens. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 18

Mariko was sitting at her desk reading a book when Yukirin walked in.

"What's up?" Mariko asked.

"Uh I was wondering if you could help me with something." Yukirin said.

"What is it?"

"Well tomorrow is the anniversary of Mayuyu and I being together so I wanted to something special."

"Wait anniversary. How long have you two been together?"

Yukirin held up two fingers.

"Two years?!" Mariko said surprised.

"Yep." Yukirin said proudly.

"So I wanted to do something special."

"So what do you need my help for?"

Yukirin reached into her bag and pulled out a poster with an anime character on it. Written on it in giant letters was "OTAKU CONVENTION."

"I was wondering if you could take Mayuyu and I there." Yukirin shyly said obviously embarrassed by the subject.

"Why can't you take her?" Mariko asked.

"Because my car got towed yesterday. I accidently got into a wreck trying at avoid hitting a cat."

"Ohh well that's ok. I'll take you."

"Great! Thank you so much! Oh and there's one more thing." Yukirin said.

"What?" Mairko said knowing there was some sort of catch.

"Welll since it's an otaku convention, there's going to be a lot of cosplayers. Mayuyu and I are both going to cosplay and so you need to as well."

"Come again?"

Mariko pulled into the parking lot and her, Yukirin and Mayuyu all came out.

"I can't believe we're here!" Mayuyu said jumping up and down.

"This is the best thing you've ever done for me!"

"Thank you. But don't forget to thank Mariko." Yukirin said.

"Thanks Mariko."

"No problem. Just one thing, why do I have to be dressed like this?" Mariko said.

"Because this was the only character I could think of that would work for you!" Mayuyu said.

"Who is the person I'm cosplaying as anyways?"

"I already told you, you're Sado from the popular drama Majisuka Gakuen. I'm Nezumi and Yukirin is Black."

"And you guys look very nice." Mariko said examining their outfits.

Mayuyu's character Nezumi was wearing tan boots, a pink hooded jacket with the hood up, and the school uniform with leggings. Yukirin's character was Black who was wearing a long skirt and a black and white jacket with a dragon on it. Mariko's character was a person called Sado and she was wearing the same long skirt and uniform but also a grey and white fuzzy jacket with a music symbol on it.

"I look nothing like her!" Mariko protested.

"No you look more like her twin right Yukirin!" Mayuyu said showing her a picture.

Yukirin nodded her head in total agreement.

"Alright now let's go we're wasting day light!"

They walked inside and was over whelmed by the armount of people that showed up. There was a variety of anime stands to video games. Cosplayers were everywhere and there were so many posters of animes. Mariko looked over to Mayuyu who looked like a kid in the candy store.

"Ahh this is so cool!" Mayuyu said.

"Hey look it's the Hetalia Axis Powers!"

Mayuyu ran over to the boothe and Yukirin and Mariko had to follow. Mayuyu grazed the shelves looking at figurines, mangas, CD's and posters.

"Oo Yukirin can I get this?!" Mayuyu asked pointing at a figureine.

"Sure. How much is it?" Yukirin asked taking out her wallet.

"10,000 yen."

"What!"

"Mayuyu that's way too much for a doll." Mariko said.

"But I don't have this one!"

"I'm sorry Mayuyu but it's too much." Yukirin said.

Mayuyu looked like she was about to cry when the boothe owner came over.

"Hey nice Majisuka cosplay." she said.

When the owner saw Mariko, she squealed.

"Oh my gosh it's Sado!" she said.

"Yeah so what?" Mariko said.

"Well I was wondering if you could give me that glare she has when she's fighting an oppenent." the owner said now fangirling over Mariko.

"No way."

"If you do you can have anything in this boothe for free."

"Seriously? Do it Mariko!" Mayuyu said punching Mariko.

"Alright hang on."

Mariko took a minute to figure out the stare. Then she lowered her head a little, slanted her eye brows and looked up giving the feeling that she's going to beat the owner.

"Ahhh so cool! Take what ever you want!" the boothe owner said.

"Then I'll take that figure and those two CD's." Mayuyu said.

"Nice job." Yuikirin said.

"Let's go see what other free stuff we can get."

For the next hour, the three girls went from boothe to boothe getting all kinds of free stuff thanks to Mariko. She would do weird things like the glares and some phrases she said. One person actually asked Mariko to punch them which she gladly did since this person was previously trying to feel her up. Yukirin and Mayuyu also had to stuff that the characters did in the show. Yukirin had to recite words from the bible and Mayuyu had to do weird little dances and say certain phrases.

"Wow these guys are good." people started to say.

"They're so cool!" fangirls would scream.

 Word got around that there were three girls in Majisuka cosplay that were supposedly really good. Soon, Mariko could see people staring at her and following them.

"Hey Mayuyu I think we should leave." Mariko said.

"No way. This is just starting to get fun." Mayuyu said.

"But Mayuyu it's getting late. Maybe we should leave." Yukirin said who also noticed the crowd of people behind them.

"Come on Yukirin. This is really fun."

"Mayuyu turn around." Mariko said.

The otaku turned around and was immediately startled by all the eyes staring at her.

"Look it's Nezumi, Black, and Sado!" someone screamed.

"Someone take a picture!"

The three girls were blasted by bright flashes from people's cameras. Then they were swarmed by people. Mariko tried slapping people getting them to back off but everytime she hit them they would ask for more.

"Mayuyu!" Yukirin said.

Mariko looked over and saw Mayuyu slowly beginning to be swallowed by the group of people. Mariko reacted by grabbing her by her hood and picked her up. Then she kicked her way over to Yukirin and grabbed her hand.

"Run!" Mariko said as she broke through the crowd.

They ran all the way back to the car and by then they had lost the crowd.

"Man that was close!" Mariko said.

"That was fun!" Mayuyu said.

"We're not going back." Yukirin said giving Mayuyu a cold stare.

The three loaded into the car when they were about to leave but then Mayuyu stopped them.

"Wait I forget something!" she said.

"We're not going back in there!" Mariko said.

"But it's really important!"

"Hang on I'll go get it!" Yukirin said as she stepped out of the car.

Mariko wasn't sure what she just saw but the next thing she knew, Yukirin was back in less than five seconds. 

"Is this it?" Yukirin asked.

"Yeah! Wow Yukirin you're fast." Mayuyu said.

"I can do anything for Mayuyu."

"Aww I love you!" Mayuyu kissed Yukirin who began blushing.

"What is it anyways?" Mariko asked.

"This the music used in the anime "Elfin Lied." Mayuyu said.

"Yukirin ran back for a music box?"

"Mayuyu." Yukirin looked at Mayuyu disappointed.

"Open it!"

Yukirin opened the box and the music started playing. Then inside, there was a note saying, "Happy Anniversay Yukirin." There was also a black cross with Yukirin's name engraved it in.

"Oh Mayuyu..." Yukirin was speechless.

"You like it?" Mayuyu said putting the cross on Yukirin.

"I love it!" Yukirin hugged Mariko and started to cry.

"Happy anneversary Yukirin." 

Mariko sat there thinking watching the scene like it was a romance movie. Mariko thought she was going to cry when she thought of something. When Yukirin left to go get the box, she didn't even see Yukirin leave. All she saw was a black blur. Then Mariko remembered how Yukirin's character Black has super speed. Mariko started to think that maybe when Yukirin cosplays, she obtains the same ability as the character. Mariko hoped Yukirin wouldn't cosplay at the facility.

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Well there's chapter 18! I hope you all liked it with the Otaku in her wonderland. Please tell me what you think and look forward to for the next chapter!

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 18- Mayuyu's Heaven
« Reply #126 on: July 04, 2012, 10:47:39 PM »
wow I like it  :luvluv1:
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 18- Mayuyu's Heaven
« Reply #127 on: July 05, 2012, 12:35:05 AM »
Yukirin and Mayuyu are really sneaky. I mean, they've been together for 2 years already! Man, where is the professional relationship between doctors and patients in this mental facility? :lol: Not that I'm complaining, of course :grin:

Love this MaYuki chapter! These two are always so sweet together. Good job! Looking forward to the next chapter (and more MaYuki moments)! :deco:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 18- Mayuyu's Heaven
« Reply #128 on: July 05, 2012, 01:45:39 AM »
i'm late again for the reply....  :frustrated:you really are a fast updater!!!! :hehehe:

atsumina vs kojiyuu battle is like world war 3!!!! so epic!! :hiakhiakhiak:
my two fav couple in akb!!! FTW!!


hahahaha mayuyu in her otaku land...hahahhaa :on lol:
more mayuki!!!! :on GJ:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 18- Mayuyu's Heaven
« Reply #129 on: July 05, 2012, 04:05:50 AM »
Yaaay, Mayuki my favorite. This was so cute! and it was hilarious how all those people chased after them XD
wow, you really are a fast at updating, it's great lol.

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 18- Mayuyu's Heaven
« Reply #130 on: July 05, 2012, 05:17:08 AM »
Man, that was great!!! :thumbup
the otaku world is really insane  :lol: :lol:
and Mayuki is super sweet! :heart: :heart:~LOL~

please update soon  :) i love it, miyumi-san!!!  :love: :love:
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 18- Mayuyu's Heaven
« Reply #131 on: July 05, 2012, 06:29:44 AM »
LOL :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:


MAyuyu and Yukirin......aka NezumiXBlack so much Funny :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco:


more! a want more



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Re: The Mad House update chapter 19- Sae's attack
« Reply #132 on: July 05, 2012, 06:51:41 AM »
Hello everyone! Today's chapter is about someone who I haven't talked about in a while. I'm sorry for all you atsumina, kojiyuu and mayuki fans but don't worry they'll have a part too in the next chapter. I'm just trying to make it where all the characters get their own screen time you know? It's hard! Anyways, please enjoy!
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Chapter 19

Mariko was sitting on her desk when all of the sudden an alarm went off. This alarm wasn't like a fire alarm but more like a nuclear bomb alarm. Everyone accept Mariko knew what was going on and quickly ran into their rooms. Mariko saw Takamina and Acchan running by and stopped them to ask what was happening.

"Hey what's going on?" Mariko asked.

"No time. Just get inside!" Takamina said with a scared look on her face.

"Hurry Takamina!" Acchan screamed.

The two ran off and quickly got into a room. Mariko stood there not sure what was happening. But then bars came down on all the doors locking everyone in. There was a rumble and then a huge blast. Something ran past Mariko nearly knocking her back. She didn't see it but she recgonized that genking laugh.

"Was that Sae?" she thought.

A couple seconds later, Sayaka came down only she wasn't in her usual doctor's outfit. Sayaka was wearing a black tank top with a bullet proof vest, army green pants with combat boots and black gloves. She also had a sash with syringes and grenades attatched to it and a small hand gun.

"What's with the war get up?" Mariko asked.

"Sae." Sayaka said.

"What about her?"

"She had sugar. A LOT of sugar."

"How much?"

"She found a secret stash someone had which was three buckets full."

"Oh god." Mariko said now realizing the danger.

"Yeah you think she's hyper when she has one piece well when she eats three buckets full, it's like you set off a nuclear bomb." Sayaka said.

"So is that why everyone is locked in their room and the alarms went off?"

"Yeah. When Sae gets like this, she's really nuts. She just keeps running and if you're in the way you get sent flying back through walls. Last time she got like this, I ended up in the hospital with four broken ribs, a broken arm and a concussion."

"Good lord."

"Yeah which is why I have to stop her."

"Why?" Mariko asked.

"Because when Sae's on a extreme sugar rush like this, her heart is beating at an incredibly fast rate. If it becomes too fast, then the blood can't keep up with the heart and just explodes on itself. She could basically die if we don't stop her." Sayaka said.

"Well seeing how I'm locked out, is it ok if I help?"

"That would be wonderful."

A couple minutes later, Mariko and Sayaka had set up a little base. They had set a rope trap so that when Sae ran through, she would be lifted right off her feet. The only thing left was to wait. Within seconds, Sae came racing down with incredible speeds. Mariko watched Sae step into the trap but she was too quick for the trap to set off and by the time it did it was too late.

"Dang it!" Sayaka said.

"So what's plan B?" Mariko asked.

The next plan was to catch her by suprise. Sayaka had set up a plate with some candy on it in the middle of the hall. Then they hid behind some boxes and waited for Sae to come running down. Soon enough, Sae came running down and saw the candy. She stopped and leaned down to eat it.

"Now!"

Both Mariko and Sayaka jumped down on Sae and tried to sedate her. But she was strong and blasted the two doctors backed. Mariko slammed against the wall and Sayaka actually went up and hit the ceiling and then fell back down to the ground. Sae laughed and ran away again. 

"You ok?" Sayaka asked as she slowly got up.

"Yeah? You?" Mariko asked straightning out her back.

"I'm good. We need to rethink out stradegy."

"How? She's too fast for traps and too strong for us to hold down."

"Well there is one more way but it's kind of drastic."

"What do you mean?"

A half hour later, Mariko finally figured out what Sayaka meant.

"Why do I have to be the bait!" Mariko protested.

"Because someone has to shoot her and since you don't know how I'm going to." Sayaka said.

"But still, why do I have to wear this?"

Mariko was referring to the bikini top and bottom entirely made out of candy.

"It's the only way to make sure she doesn't run away. While she's trying to eat your clothes, you grab her and I'll shoot her with the sedative." Sayaka said.

"How long will it take the sedative to take effect?"

"About two seconds. This sedative is powerful enough to take down a buffalo. It would kill a regular person but when Sae is in this kind of mode it won't."

"Ok. Where did you even get this thing?"

"Yuko gave to me as some sick joke."

"Of course. Yuko. Perverted squirrel..."

"Here she comes! Get ready!"

Sayaka hid behind some boxes and loaded the gun. Meanwhile Mariko stood half naked completely defensless with a candy bikini being her only protection. Sae came running down and when she saw Mariko, her eyes nearly popped out of her head. Mariko knew Sae was only focusing on the candy but she still blushed as Sae stared at her.

"CANDY!" Sae shouted as she ran to Mariko and tackled her knocking her down.

Mariko did what Sayaka told her and wrapped her arms and legs around Sae to make sure she didn't escape.

"Sayaka now!" Mairko shouted.

There was no answer. There was nothing moving in the place Sayaka was hiding. Mariko looked back at Sae who was ready to take her first bite out of her bikini.

"Sayaka!"

Right before Sae took a bite, there was a loud whiping sound and soon after Sae fell on top of Mariko.

"Ahhh!"

Mariko quickly pushed Sae off her and stood up. She looked over and saw Sayaka standing with her gun still pointed at Sae.

"Where did you go?" Mariko said really angry at Sayaka.

"I moved from my previous spot because if I had shot there, the sedative would've missed and hit you. Then you would've been dead." Sayaka said.

"Ohhh.." Mariko looked down now realizing the reason for her firends actions.

"Anyways, thanks for helping. I couldn't have done it by myself."

"No problem you just owe me one. Hey when do the bars unlock from everyone's door?"

"Right about now."

"What?"

There was a loud buzz and the bars were raised from the doors. Everyone came out and saw Mariko in her candy bikini and was utterly shocked. Takamina and Acchan were blushing like crazy, Yukirin and Mayuyu were speechless, Jurina was covering Rena's eyes along with her own, Haruna was covering her eyes but Yuko was staring at Mariko like crazy. She actually had a bloody nose. Then when Miichan came out and when she saw Mariko, she passed out right there on the floor.

"Don't look!" Mariko screamed trying to cover herself.

"We're sorry Mariko we didn't know!" Takamina said as she took Acchan back to her room.

"We didn't know you were into those kind of things." Mayuyu said as she pushed the still speechless Yukirin into their room.

"Rena let's get away from this pervert!" Jurina said still covering Rena's eyes and walking her back to their room.

"You look hot!" Yuko said.

"Hey! Just for that you're being punished tonight!" Haruna said as she dragged Yuko back to their room.

"Sayaka! Now everyone thinks I'm a weird pervert!" Mariko screamed.

"Sorry Mariko. You'll have to figure it out yourself." Sayaka said as she dragged Sae away.

"Mou!"

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Well there's chapter 19! I hope you all liked it. The next chapter is going to be another 2 parter so get ready! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter! 

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 19- Sae's wild attack
« Reply #133 on: July 05, 2012, 09:47:16 AM »
 :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

I can't stop laughing, ~LOL~  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Sae is as strong as a buffalo when she goes nuts  :rofl: :rofl:

and poor Mariko  :lol: now everyone is gonna think differently about her  :rofl: :rofl:

i admire this chapter :rofl: :rofl: so crazy  :thumbup :thumbup
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 19- Sae's wild attack
« Reply #134 on: July 05, 2012, 10:17:13 AM »
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Re: The Mad House update chapter 19- Sae's wild attack
« Reply #135 on: July 05, 2012, 10:17:30 AM »
LOL..i imagine mariko with the outfit..LOL..

any sweets should be destroyed from the mad house or genking will destroy the mad house..LOL..

can't wait for another chapter..


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Re: The Mad House update chapter 19- Sae's wild attack
« Reply #137 on: July 05, 2012, 05:15:55 PM »
lmao while reading this..
great chap!  :twothumbs
next chapter on the way i guess.. am i right miyu?  :lol:

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #138 on: July 05, 2012, 05:16:53 PM »
Hello everyone! In chapter 10, everyone in the mad house went on a sepcial trip. Now ten chapters later, they're going on another trip! Like chapter 10, chapter 20 is also going to be a 2 parter. Please enjoy and look forward to the next part.
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Chapter 20 part 1

"Hey Mariko guess what?" Takamina said.

"What is it?" Mariko said.

"We're going on another trip!"

"Great. Where is it this time?"

"The director owns a ski resort up in the moutians. I hope you have a warm jacket because it's cold!"

"Seriously? A ski resort? Is the director a millionare?"

"No I think she's a billionare."

"What the heck!"

"Anyways, get ready because we're going to be leaving soon."

"Ok."

After a half hour, everyone was loaded onto a bus and drove up the mountain for four hours. When they arrived, they were all suprised at how large the ski resort was. Everyone went inside and changed into their snow gear. Then they all headed out for some fun in the snow. Mariko was already waiting for the others when Takamina and Acchan came out. Acchan was wearing a pink fluffy jacket while Takamina wore a blue one. They both had matching hats and gloves and Acchan had a scarf that was attached to Takamina. Mariko wondered if that was safe.

"Hey Takamina let's go make a snow man." Acchan said.

"Yeah! We'll make a really big one!" Takamina said.

Mariko watched the two rush outside into the cold air. She could hear them both scream "COLD" Soon after, Haruna and Yuko came out. Yuko was in a brown jacket with black snow pants and a hat. She was also carrying a snow board. Haruna was wearing a red coat with fluff on the hood and snow pants. She also had boots on but they looked big on her which made her look like a fisherman.

"Come one Nyannyan I wanna ride down the mountain!" Yuko said.

"Slow down! It's hard to walk in these boots." Haruna said.

As they left, Rena and Juina came out. Jurina was wearing a orange jacket while Rena was wearing a yellow jacket. Jurina had a puppy hat and Rena had a kitty hat and their gloves matched their hats. Mariko noticed that Rena was dragging a sled behind her.

"Come on Rena. Let's go sled down the hill." Jurina said.

"Ok as long as I can hold onto you." Rena said taking Jurina's hand.

"Sure."

"Curse her and her cuteness." Mariko thought as the two walked outside.

"Let's go Yukirin!"

Mariko looked over and saw Mayuyu in a light pink jacket with bunny ears on the hood.

"I would if you would help!"

Yukirin was wearing a white jacket with brown boots and a red hat. She was carrying a large sled that looked like it could fit thirteen people.

"Why are we bringing this thing?" Yukirin asked having a hard time carrying it.

"Because I like to relax when I sled." Mayuyu said.

"Don't give me that excuse!"

When the two were outside, Sae and Sayaka came out. Sae was in a dark blue jacket and Sayaka was in black one.

"Why aren't you out there?" Sayaka asked.

"I was making sure everyone was out. I don't want to lose anyone like last time. Sae doesn't have any fireworks right?" Mariko said staring directly at Sae.

"Don't worry I didn't bring any this time. Just hot coco which she isn't allowed to have." Sayaka said.

"Hey no fair!" Sae pouted.

"Well this is punishment for last time. Now let's get going."

They walked outside and Mariko was hit with a blast of cold air causing her to shiver. She walked down to the snow where everyone was having fun.

"Hey Mariko help us out!"

Mariko walked over to Takamina and Acchan who were making a monumental snowman. They were about done but neither one of them were tall enough to put the last part on top. When Mariko got it on top, she put on the rest of the parts that made a snow man.

"Yay! Snowman complete!" Takamina said.

"Now let's destroy it!" Acchan said.

"Yeah!"

Takamina walked to the side adn grabbed two large sticks. Then together with Acchan, the two started beating the snowman.

"Poor snowman." Mariko thought as the head fell off.

Mariko was just standing there when something past her spraying her with snow.

"Hey!"

"Sorry!" Yuko shouted as her and Sayaka raced down the mountain on their snow boards.

It actually looked kind of fun and Mariko wanted to try it but she was too scared. She looked over to the side and saw Rena and Jurina riding their sled down a small hill.

"They look so cute." Mariko thought.

Next to them was Sae and Haruna making snow angels. Haruna was doing it right but Sae looked like she was having a seziure and hers looked like it got hit by a car. Meanwhile, Yukirin and Mayuyu were using that giant sled of theres as a ramp while Mayuyu went down the hill on a smaller sled. She watched Mayuyu go flying when she hit the ramp. Mariko thought she was going to crash but then the otaku made it.

"Mayuyu that was dangerous!" Yukirin said.

"Yukirin you give it a try!" Mayuyu said.

Yukirin hesitated at first but then she went down the hill. Yukirin went up and when she came down, she landed face first into the snow. There was silence but then Yukirin popped her head up with snow all over her face and a huge smile.

"That was fun! Let's do it again!"

"That's the spirit!"

"I wonder if they're going to be alright." Mariko wondered.

Mariko decided to have some fun of her own. She picked up some snow and made it into a ball. Then she snuck up behind Takamina and nailed her right in the head.

"Hey!" Takamina said as she stood up.

Takamina made a snow ball and threw it at Mariko only to miss by a lot.

"Ha you missed!"

But then Mariko got hit with a face full of snow.

"Way to go Acchan!" Takamina said hugging her lover.

"This means war!"

"Hey I wanna play too!" Mayuyu said as she walked over with Yukirin.

"Us too!" Sae, Haruna, and Sayaka all said.

"Don't forget us!" Rena, Jurina and Yuko said.

"Alright then the battle begin!" Mariko said.

Within a couple of minutes, the group was split into two teams and made their own forts. On the left side was Mariko, Jurina, Rena, Haruna, and Yuko. On the right side was Yukirin, Mayuyu, Sayaka, Sae, Acchan and Takamina. Since the right side had a one person advantage, the left side got to go first. Mariko made a snow ball and threw it at Mayuyu nailing her in the back. Then after that it was war.

"Take this!" Yuko said as she threw a snow ball at Yukirin.

"Haruna!" Mayuyu threw a snow ball at Haruna and the air head didn't see it coming so it hit right on the head.

Takamina and Acchan were both throwing snow balls at the same time while Sae was practically firing them at Mariko like a machine gun. Mariko got hit five times in the chest by Sae and three times on the back because of Acchan and Takamina. Seeing how she was out numbered, she called on Jurina for help.

"Hey Jurina help me out!" Mariko said.

"On it!"

Jurina took a snow ball the threw it at Takamina. It looked like it was going to hit Takamina but then it curved and hit Acchan.

"Nice!" Yuko said as she threw another snow ball.

Jurina threw another curve ball and it hit Yukirin right in the butt.

"Ahh snow got in my pants!" she screamed as she stood up and started shaking her butt.

"Yukirin cut it out and keep attacking!" Takamina said.

"No let her be! I like it!" Yuko said.

"Yuko you pervert!" Haruna said as she threw a snow ball at Yuko's face.

"Hey no hitting people on the same team!" Mariko said.

Just then a super fast snow ball shot past Takamina's head and hit Sae right in face. Mariko looked over and asked who threw it. No one raised their hand but then Jurina pointed over at Rena.

"Do that again." Mariko said.

She handed the snow ball to Rena and watched the weak girl shoot the snow ball making it go twenty miles and hour. It hit Mayuyu in the stomach causing her to kneel over in pain.

"Nice! Both of you keep it up!" Mariko said.

The two Matsui sisiters working together made it seem like they were unstopable. It looked like Mariko's team was about to win but then something huge came out from behind the other team's fort. There standing there holding a giant snow ball the size of a TV was Sayaka. She was getting ready to throw the snow boulder right at the other team.

"We gotta stop her!" Mariko said.

"Everyone fire!"

All at once everyone fired at Sayaka. But nothing could stop her as she threw the snow boulder high into the air.

"Run!"

Everyone got out of the way except Rena was still sitting there. The boulder was heading straight at her and would crush the fragile girl. Mariko had no choice but to rush over and push Rena out of the way. Then the snow boulder hit Mariko crushing her. Within seconds, Mariko was out.

When Mariko woke up, she was startled by the worried eyes of Mayuyu, Yukirin, Haruna, and Yuko.

"Hey you guys she's awake!" Jurina said.

Everyone rushed over to Mariko.

"Are you alright?" Acchan asked.

"Yeah I think so." Mariko said as she tried to sit up.

But then a sharp pain shot throughout her lower body making her fall back down.

"Here." Sayaka rushed over with a cup of hot coco.

"I'm really sorry for what happened!" Sayaka said as she bowed at a ninety degree angle.

"It's fine. We we're just having fun and got a little over our heads." Mariko said.

"You sure?"

"Yes it's fine." Mairko said as she drank her coco.

"Thank you for saving me." Rena said as she hid behind her sister.

"Yeah we owe you one." Jurina said.

"I'll remember that. Hey what time is it?"

"Around nine. Why?"

"Cause I heard that there was going to be a meteor shower out tonight and since we're up here in the mountains, we'll get a really good view."

"No way!" Acchan said.

"It should  be starting soon. Let's go before we miss it."

Everyone rushed outside and looked up at the sky. There were already a ton of stars out that lit up the sky.

"Hey there's one!" Yuko said.

Everyone watched as the star flew past over them. Then soon after a bunch of them started falling.

"WOW!" Acchan said.

"This is amazing!" Takamina said.

"Everyone make a wish." Mariko said.

There was a moment of silence and then everyone went back to admiring the stars.

"What did you wish for?" Acchan asked Takamina.

"I can't tell you otherwise it won't come true." Takamina replied.

"Oh then I won't tell you either!"

"What did you wish for?" Yukirin asked Mayuyu.

"My own manga store/danso cafe." Mayuyu said.

"Why does that now suprise me?" Yukirin said facepalming herself.

"What did you wish for?" Yuko asked Haruna.

"A puppy. You?" Haruna said.

"I wished to see Nyannyan in sexy underwear! But then again I see that everyday." Yuko happily said.

"You pervert!"

"What did you wish for?" Jurina asked Rena.

"To be with Jurina forever." Rena replied.

"Me too but with Rena!" Jurina said.

"What did you wish for?" Sae asked Sayaka.

"To become the strongest person in the world. You?"

"CANDY!" Sae shouted.

"That's the last thing you need. And quit shouting you want to start and avelanche?"

"But I really love CANDY!"

"SHUT UP SAE! YOU'RE GOING TO CAUSE AN AVELANCHE!"

"BOTH OF YOU SHUT UP!" Takamina shouted. 

Just then, there was a loud rumbling and the ground shaking.

"Takamina you idiot!" Sayaka said.

"You're one too!"

"Both of you shut up and run!" Mariko said as she started running from the huge wave of snow approaching them.

Everyone ran as fast as they could. But they were not match for mother nature and were swept up by the giant wave. The last thing Mariko remembered before she blacked out was hearing the screaming of everyone's voices. The thing Mariko wished for was to be together with everyone and help cure them but I guess that's one wish that won't come true.

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Well there's chapter 20 part 1! Did you like it? I left you with a cliff hanger to build the suspense. Part 2 will be on it's way so wait patiently. In the mean time please tell me what you think!

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Re: The Mad House update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #139 on: July 05, 2012, 05:44:27 PM »
Eeeeh...OMG...whats next?

I want the next update,kyaaa doki doki ..mwhat happend with everyone?do they life?...
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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