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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 1
« Reply #200 on: July 11, 2012, 07:07:53 PM »
I'm gonna join the pleas and say please let it be MaYuki! SaeYuki never sat well with me but of course I will still support this story no matter what.

Anyway, interesting introduction of the characters. I'm glad the main cast is the same as Mad House's! Mayuyu's reaction at being caught half-awake by Sae cracked me up! And pink bunny pajamas? Most adorable cyborg girl ever! Sae got to stop checking Yukirin out if not Mayuyu will zap her with laser :twisted:

Keep up the fine work. I'm looking forward to the next update!

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 1
« Reply #201 on: July 11, 2012, 08:26:49 PM »
Yes I agree with Yuukimoko :deco: too.

Because in the Mad House Mayuki was toooo KYAAA :luvluv1: :luvluv1:!!!

Your Mayuki is so beautiful. I like Saeyuki BUT I love Mayuki xD
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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 1
« Reply #202 on: July 11, 2012, 08:33:01 PM »
So good, i love the introduction of everyone so much xD

Especially the WMatsui, lol never thought that they'd do this job

Also, the Mayuki is just so cute <3 Mayu fell asleep on Yuki lol More Mayuki please

Thank you, update soon please xD

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 2
« Reply #203 on: July 11, 2012, 10:16:37 PM »
Minna! Thank you so much for commenting! And to all you Mayuki fans out there: I plan on keeping the same pairings as I did in the Mad House so don't worry there will be Mayuki! And to express my point even further, please read this next chapter. Enjoy!
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Chapter 2

"Hey Sae gear up. We're heading out." Sayaka said.

"Where are we going?" Sae asked.

"Down town. You're about to do your first murder case."

"Ok."

Inside Sae wanted to scream with joy but that would be inappropriate. The murder was in a fourty year old woman's house. She lived alone and no one really talked to her. When Sae and Sayaka arrived at the scene, there was a small crowd and and police officers guarding the entrance. Sayaka and Sae showed the officers their badges and were allowed in.

"If you can't handle it then stay outside." Sayaka said.

Sae thought she was ready. But turns out she was wrong. When she walked in, the body was on the ground and part of the brain was exposed. This sight made Sae step out for a minute and lose her lunch. Then she came back in now ready.

"You ok?" Sayaka asked.

"Yeah. This is just so new to me and all." Sae said.

"Well if you're going to hurl again then stay outside."

"No I'm good."

"Alright. Well the woman is Sato Yuki. She's fourty years old and lives alone. No one reported any noises last night and there were no witnesses. The door lock was broken suggesting a break in and there's broken glass in the kitchen which means there could be another culprit. We'll have to wait for Rena to show up so they can take the body."

"Sorry I'm late."

Sae looked over and saw Rena and Jurina walk in. Behind her she could hear some whispers like "It's the angel of death" and "the devil's princess has arrived."

"Hey Sayaka why is everyone calling Rena an angel of death?" Sae asked.

"Rena is known for being kinda scary when she's around dead bodies." Sayaka explained.

"Hey Sayaka get over here!" Rena said.

"Have you determined a cause of death?" Sayaka asked.

"The indentation in the skull suggests a blunt weapon was used. I'd say a bat but I'll have to take the body back to the mourge for better examination." Rena said.

"Alright then we'll leave you to it. Sae let's look around and see if you can find anything."

"Ok."

Sae walked into the kitchen where the window was broken. While examining the area, Sae noticed something sticking out in the sink. In the sink was a rock. Sae put on a glove and then picked up the rock.

"Hey Sayaka!"

Sayaka came running in.

"You think we can get a finger print off this rock?" Sae asked.

"I think so."

Sayaka pulled out a small tube with black powder. She then took a brush dabbed the rock. A couple seconds later a finger print popped up.

"Good job Sae. Bag it and we'll take back to head quarters. You're doing pretty good Sae keep it up." Sayaka said.

Sae felt pretty proud of herself for finding it. Back at head quarters, Sae and Sayaka went to go see how Rena was doing.

"Find anything?" Sayaka asked.

"I found metal shards in the head that I sent up to Yukirin. I also found impression marks on her neck suggesting a struggle." Rena said.

"Anything else?"

"No but could you go check on Yukirin. She should have the results soon."

"Sure Sae you go. I want to look at the body more." Sayaka said.

"No problem!"

Sae felt delighted now that she could leave the cold creepy mourge and see Yukirin. Sae walked into the lab and saw Yukirin working at her desk. Sae thought it would be cute to see how she reacted if she snuck up on her from behind. Sae carefully made her way to Yukirin and was about to pounce. But then suddenly something grabbed her from behind and dragged her off the side. Sae turned around and saw Mayuyu giving her a cold glare.

"What do you think you're doing?" Mayuyu said in a cold voice.

"I was gonna sneak up behind Yukirin and hug her." Sae said.

Mayuyu grabbed Sae by her collar and pulled her closer to her.

"Listen here and listen good. I don't care if you're new or not but no one touches Yukirin but me. If you do I will personally make sure you wind up on the FBI and CIA's most wanted list. Do you understand?!" Mayuyu said with anger in her tone.

 At one point Sae thought Mayuyu's eyes were glowing red. Sae just nodded her head hoping she would let go.

"Good. Then get back out there and if you do anything funny you'll regret it."

Mayuyu let go and Sae ran back out for her life.

"Oh Sae I didn't even see you come in. We were talking to Mayuyu?" Yukirin asked.

"Uh yeah you could say that." Sae said trying to keep her distance away from Yukirin knowing Mayuyu was probably watching her.

"Did Sayaka send you here?"

"Yeah did you get anything on the finger prints and metal shards?"

"Yeah the print belonged to a Ito Hiroshi and the metal shards matched the metal used in baseball bats. Here's Ito-san's address." Yukirin said.

"Thanks well I better get going. Bye!"

Sae ran out of the lab feeling like Mayuyu was targeting her. Sae made a note to herself that Mayuyu was dangerous. Sae and Sayaka went to Ito-san's house to question him. However, there was no need for questioning. When they arrived, they found him with blood all over his clothes and a bat. He saw Sae and Sayaka and started running.

"Sae you go around back and I'll take the front!" Sayaka said.

Sae ran around the house to the back door where her was possibly heading to. Sayaka was right and here he came right in front of Sae. Sae tackled him to the ground and stuggled to keep him down.

"Nice Sae!" Sayaka said as she handcuffed him.

"Ito Hiroshi you are under arrest for the murder of Sato Yuki. You have the right to remain silent, anything you say can or will be used against you in court."

Sayaka shoved Hiroshi into the car and they drove him down to the station. Sayaka was handeling all the paper work while Sae ran to the break room to get some tea.

"Hey I heard you solved your first case."

Sae turned around and saw Takamina staring at her.

"Yeah. To be honest it was kinid of easy though." Sae said.

"How did the murder take place?" Takamina asked.

"Ito-san had a grudge against Yuki for taking her job he wanted. So he threw a rock and broke the window in the kitchen. While Yuki was distracted with the window, Ito-san broke the lock and rushed in. There was a struggle but then in the end, Ito-san finished her with a blow to the head with a bat."

"That's sad. Well good job. Keep up the good work. Oh and no matter how easy a case is, always expect the worst."

"Understood."

"Well if you excuse me I will be leaving. I promised Acchan I'd take her out for dinner."

The small captain excused herself and left. But then a couple minutes later Yukirin came up.

"Hey congradulations on solving your first case!" she said.

"Thanks." Sae said.

"We should go out and celebrate. Are you free tonight?"

Before Sae could answer her question, she felt the piercing glare of a familiar cyborg. Sae looked over and saw Mayuyu glaring at her. Fearing of what would happen, Sae said she was busy.

"Aww that's too bad. Well maybe next time." Yukirin said.

"Maybe maybe not." Sae said to herself.

"Well I'll see you later!"

Yukirin walked over and hugged Sae. Sae couldn't help but enjoy the hug while it lasted. She knew she would get it from Mayuyu. Turns out Sae was right. The next day, a bunch of creepy otaku's showed up wanting to meet Sae. Someone had photo copied her face on a otaku dating website and she became an instant hit will all the otakus. Sae knew who did this and was no fully aware of the wrath of an angry cyborg.

==================================================================================Well there's chapter 2! I hope all the Mayuki fan's out there enjoyed it! Never mess with Mayuyu when she's in her cyborg mode! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter. I plan on adding some Atsumina and Kojiyuu in it.

 

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 2
« Reply #204 on: July 11, 2012, 11:03:54 PM »
Yaaaaaah! Ii ne! XD

Mayuyu jealous so dangerous  :hiakhiakhiak:

Continue Please :peace:
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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 2
« Reply #205 on: July 12, 2012, 12:30:34 AM »
Thank you for keeping it MaYuki! :bow:

Yukirin, you are too friendly! :smhid Your little cyborg is jealous :lol:

Now that we've seen Mayuyu's cyborg mode, I'm looking forward to Yukirin's black mode! Wonder what will make her snap :D

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 2
« Reply #206 on: July 12, 2012, 02:53:02 AM »
Wow you keep the pairing!
Yay
I love mayuki
But i hope wmatsui pairing in this new fic its more hot than before,well thank for the update
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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 2
« Reply #207 on: July 12, 2012, 04:58:46 AM »
Yaaay for Mayuki :D lol poor Sae though having to feel the wrath of Mayuyu :( Ahh well at least she has Sayaka XD

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 3
« Reply #208 on: July 12, 2012, 06:09:49 AM »
I'm glad everyone is happy with the results. Now it's time for everyone to get to know the characters a little more. Let's start off with Atsumina and Kojiyuu and work our way up shall we? Enjoy!
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Chapter 3

Sae was at her desk waiting to get some kind of call. She was so bored that she was willing to do anything. Sayaka was out on another case and Takamina ordered Sae to stay behind she thought she couldn't handle it. Sae wanted to protest but she had to follow her orders. Sae was just spacing out when someone tapped her on the shoulder. Sae looked over and saw Acchan holding two cups of tea.

"Hello." she said.

"Hi"

"Care if I sit here?"

"Go ahead." Sae said as she pulled up a chair.

"So how are things? Have you adjusted enough?" Acchan asked.

"Yeah. Everyone's really nice. Although Mayuyu kind of scares me." Sae said.

"Well if you ever feel like you're in trouble you can always come to me."

"Thanks. I'll keep that in mind."

Sae thought Acchan would make a great mom one day with her kind personality and caring attitude towards others. The two sat there and kept chatting until Takamina walked over.

"Acchan what are you doing here?" Takamina asked.

"I'm just getting to know the new recruit is all." Acchan said with an innocent look in her eyes.

"Acchan are you trying to use Sae like you did to me when you first showed up?"

"What do you mean?" Sae asked confused.

"Acchan as a habit of using a sweet act to get what she wants. It's a deadly skill she has and very scary."

"Takamina how about you go back to your desk. I have something important to discuss with Sae."

Acchan gave Takamina this strange stare that seemed to frighten her. Sae was amazed watching the great captain retreat back to her desk.

"Well now that that's out of the way, you seem to be free at the moment. Would you like to go out with me for a while?" Acchan asked.

"Sure where to?"

Acchan took Sae out to Shibuya to buy some clothes. It was nice taking a break and getting out after being stuck in the office all day. They stopped at a clothing store and Acchan saw something she really liked.

"Wow this shirt would look so cute on me!" Acchan said holding it up against her chest.

"Yeah it would." Sae said.

"I wish I could buy it but I don't have enough money."

Acchan looked down with sad puppy dog eyes. Sae couldn't help but feel sorry for her so she bought the shirt for Acchan.

"Wah! Thank you so much Sae-chan!" Acchan said in cute voice.

"No problem." Sae said trying to sound cool.

"Hey how about we go over to that store next!"

For the next two hours, Sae was like Acchan's personal shopping butler. Not only was she buying everything for Acchan but was also carrying all of it. She had a total of six bags filled with clothes and jewlery. Sae changed her view on Acchan. She thought Acchan wouldn't be a mom but a manipulative wife.

"Hey Acchan can we take a break? My arms are getting tired." Sae said.

"Uh sure let's stop and get some ice cream." Acchan said.

They took a seat at a table and Sae gave her arms a long rest.

"Hey can you go order me some ice cream?" Acchan asked.

"Uh sure just wait here."

Sae walked over to the ice cream boothe and pulled out her wallet. There was only enough left for her to order one ice cream. Sae ordered the ice cream and had to wait a couple minutes. While Sae was waiting, she heard a sudden shout.

"Let go!"

Sae looked over and saw Acchan and a man who was grabbing her arm.

"Let go you're hurting me!" Acchan shouted.

Sae was about to react and take him down but then someone else came by and slammed into the man. They rolled out on to the walk way and that's when Sae saw it was Takamina.

"Don't you dare touch my Acchan!" she said as she continued to beat the man senslessly.

"Takamina!"

Takamina stopped punching the man and saw Acchan.

"I'm not done with you. I'll be back."

Takamina hand cuffed the man to a pole and then walked over.

"Are you alright?" Takamina asked Acchan.

"Yeah I am now." Acchan said.

"Where did you come from?" Sae asked.

"I was following you guys because I knew Acchan would leech off of you. Oh by the way, don't worry I'll personally pay back however much Acchan made you spend."

"You sure about that?"

"Absolutely."

"Well here are the receipts"

Sae handed Takamina three long pieces of paper. Her eyes widened at the sight when she added the total amount.

"Acchan!"

Takamina gave Acchan an angry glare.

"But there was a lot of stuff I wanted." Acchan said giving Takamina the same puppy eyes that Sae fell for.

"Acchan if you want something you have to use your own money! You do not use other people's money to buy things you want."

"I'm sorry Sae!"

Acchan bowed in apology with tears in her eyes. 

"Good now come here you."

Takamina grabbed Acchan and hugged her.

"You know I was really worried about you when that man suddenly came up." Takamina said.

"He was a creep. But you're my hero Takamina!" Acchan said.

"Aww now I can't stay mad at a cute face like that!" Takamina hugged Accchan again.

"Um I'm going to go now. You two have fun."

Sae left the two spend the rest of the day together. Sae was now starving and she didn't have any money for lunch. She decided to go back to head quarters hoping to find some food there. When she arrived back at head quarters, she saw Haruna walking back to the firing range with a huge bento box. Sae thought this was her chance to grab a free meal. Sae followed Haruna down to the firing range.

"Can I help you?" Haruna asked.

"Well I was wondering, I forgot my lunch today and I don't have any money to buy my own. So I was wondering if it would be alright if I could have some of yours" Sae said.

"I understand. I used to forget my lunch all the time. Come inside."

Haruna and Sae walked in and found Yuko on the ground cleaning a gun.

"Hey Yuko is it alright if Sae eats with us? She forgot her lunch." Haruna asked.

"I'm really sorry!" Sae said bowing her head.

"Oh no it's fine. Nyannyan packs huge lunches for us to share so I'm sure there's plenty for one more person." Yuko said.

"Well then here you go."

Haruna opened the box revealing four sections full of food.

"Sugoi!" Sae said.

"Eat up you guys!"

As soon as Haruna said that Sae started scarfing down food. She was eating so fast that she almost choked.

"Take it easy." Haruna said as she handed Sae her tea.

Sae took a big gulp and a deep breath.

"Thanks." Sae said.

"Hey no fair! Sae got an indirect kiss from Nyannyan!" Yuko said.

"And why are you complaining?" Haruna asked.

"Because you never let me do that."

"That's because you're a pervert."

"I desereve at least one kiss!" Yuko demanded.

"No!" Haruna said.

"Fine then I get one boob touch!" 

"A what?"

Before Haruna could answer, Yuko reached out and grabbed Haruna's breasts. Sae and Haruna both blushed at the sight.

"Hentai!" Haruna shouted as she slapped Yuko right across the face.

"Ahh Nyannyans boobs are still as perfect as ever." Yuko said with a red hand mark on her right cheek.

"This is just wrong." Haruna said.

"No it's love!"

"Well I'm going to go. You two have fun." Sae said.

"Come on Nyannyan just one kiss!"

"No!"

Sae rushed out of the room and back up to the main floor. She took a seat at her desk and tried to work on something. But the constant growling of her stomach made it hard to concentrate. Then suddenly Sayaka came out of nowhere.

"Hey I was wondering where you were." Sayaka said.

"I was down at the firing range with Yuko and Haruna." Sae said.

"Yuko didn't do anything perverted to you did she?"

"No. She mainly did it to Haruna."

"Ahh I don't know how that girl got on this team."

"Me neither. So how was the case?" Sae asked.

"Pretty tough although we figured out who it was." Sayaka said.

"I wish I was there. Then it would've been easy."

"No it would have been worse because you would've threw up all over the place."

"Hey I-"

Sae was cut off by another loud growl from her stomach. 

"You hungry? Did you eat lunch?" Sayaka asked.

"No. Acchan spent all my money and Yuko interrupted my lunch with her boob touch thing." Sae said.

"Guess it can't be helped. Here."

Sayaka handed Sae a bento box.

"I can have it?" Sae said.

"Yeah. I already ate on the way here." Sayaka said.

"Wah thanks! You're the best!"

"Well I am your partner and all and it's my job to look out for you."

"The same for me. For example, your fly is undone." Sae said pointing at Sayaka's pants.

"Ahh!" Sayaka shouted as she quickly zipped it up.

"No wonder Mariko was laughing at me."

"Nice panties. I didn't know you liked butterflies. And purple to? I never knew you could be sexy Sayaka."

"Shut up Sae!"

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Well there's chapter 3! I hope you all liked it and look forward to the next chapter involving Wmatsui and a little more Mayuki. Please tell me what you think!

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 3
« Reply #209 on: July 12, 2012, 07:23:50 AM »
wow this is great...!!!


cant wait the next..wmatsui and mayuki...hehehe
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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 3
« Reply #210 on: July 12, 2012, 02:52:47 PM »
Wow~ you update so fast~  :D
Nice panties Sayaka~  :P
Mayuyu is really a cyborg  :lol:
I like this story, it's cool  :twothumbs please continue  :D

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 3
« Reply #211 on: July 12, 2012, 03:03:08 PM »
Mayuyu is so BLACK here, lol!!

Sae's such a cute boy, doing everything that Acchan tells her... :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

As usual Takadeka comes to the rescue!! :twothumbs

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 4
« Reply #212 on: July 12, 2012, 06:03:05 PM »
Hello everyone! As promised, today everyone will get to know the Wmatsui pairing a little better along with some Mayuki. But I think everyone already knows how Mayuyu gets when someone messes her with Yukirin. I hope you all enjoy it! Doso!
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Chapter 4

"Hey Sae I need you to go down to the mourge." Sayaka said.

"Ehh? Why?" Sae said.

"Rena said she needed you to help her with something."

"Man. That place scares the creeps out of me."

"Just get down there."

"Hai!"

Sae went down the the mourge and found Rena stuggling to carry some boxes. She was about to fall over but Sae quickly rushed over and caught the box.

"You ok?" Sae asked.

"Yeah thanks."

Sae set the box on the table while Rena sat in a chair.

"So what did you need me to help you with?"

"I got some new medical equipment and I need help carrying it into the lab. I would usually ask Jurina to help me but she has finals to study for." Rena said.

"Ahh I see. So you just need me to move a couple of boxes?" Sae asked.

"Yep."

"Ok that seems fairly easy. Where are they?"

"Over there in the corner. There's six of them."

Sae walked over to the corner and picked one up. Sae didn't realize how heavy it was. She wondered how Rena was even able to pick up the box. Sae carefully brought the box into the other room. There was loud thud and then Sae came back out.

"That's one! Five more to go!"

Sae continued to lift the boxes and carry them over. Her arms were killing her by the fourth box. She was down to the last one and this one was extremely heavy.

"Here let me help you." Rena said as she walked over.

"No it's alright I got it." Sae said trying to sound tough.

"No really it must be really heavy and you look tired."

"No really it's fine."

The two struggled but then Sae lost her footing. The box flew out of her hands and she started to fall forward.

BAM!

"Itai!"

Sae looked down and saw Rena in a very vulnerable posistion. Sae's arms trapped Rena and her body was very close to Rena's. Rena's shirt had come undone a little revealing some of her silky skin. It almost looked like Sae could kiss her when the door opened. Sae looked over and saw Jurina with her jaw dropped.

"Jurina it's not what you-"

Sae couldn't finish because Jurina had run over and kicked Sae off of Rena.

"Rena are you ok?" Jurina asked.

"Yeah I'm fine." Rena said.

"What do you think you were donig?" Jurina said galring at Sae.

"I was helping her move boxes and I tripped." Sae said.

"It's true."

Jurina looked at Rena and then a Sae.

"Well I'm glad you didn't get hurt. Oh and by the way..."

Jurina leaned in and kissed Rena's neck.

"No one is allowed to touch you like that except me."  Jurina said giving Rena a cat like smile.

"Jurina not here." Rena said trying to push her away.

"But I want it."

Jurina dove in for a another kiss right on the lips. Sae thought she saw tounge for a moment. She also saw Jurina unbuttoning Rena's shirt even further down. Jurina was also rubbing Rena's legs moving up towards her skirt. Feeling unwanted, Sae quickly got up and ran out of mourge before she saw anything else. Sae is now really scared of the mourge. She went up stopped at the lab where Yukirin was to see how she what she was up to. Sae saw Yukirin working on some chemical as always.

"Hey Yukirin!" Sae said.

"Oh hello Sae. What brings you here?" Yukirin asked.

"I was in the mourge and then I came up here to see what you were doing. Where's Mayuyu?"

"She went out to get us lunch."

"I see."

Sae was a little glad to hear the terminator was out on a lunch break. Even cyborgs have to eat.

"I am currently working on a case for Takamina."

"That's cool. Do you need any help?" Sae asked

"Yeah actually could you go over to that shelf over there and grab me that bottle of sulfuric acid?" Yukirin said pointing at the shelf.

"Sure."

Sae walked over and grabbed the bottle. She turned around and started to walk over when she tripped and dropped the bottle. Acid splashed everywhere including on Yukirin.

"AHHHH!" Sae quickly rushed over and took Yukirin's lab coat and shirt off.

Luckily the acid didn't reach down far enough for it to actually hurt Yukirin. It just burned massive holes in her clothes.

"Why did you drop it?" Yukirin said.

"I'm sorry I-"

Sae stopped mid-sentence. She was too amazed at the sight before her. There sitting before her was Yukirin in nothing but a black lace bra. Yukirin's milky skin really made the bra show off her feminine appeal. Sae couldn't help but drool a little at the sight. Yukirin noticed and quickly covered herself and turned around blushing furiously.

"Ah I'm sorry."

Sae took off her jacket and put it over Yukirin.

"Thank you." Yukirin said.

"I'm really sorry for this to happen." Sae said.

"Oh no it's fine. It was just an accident."

"Yukirin?"

Sae looked over and saw Mayuyu staring at the two. Mayuyu saw Yukirin in nothing but a bra and a jacket and her expression changed into attack mode.

"Not good." Sae thought.

"Mayuyu it was an accident I swear!" Sae said trying to defend herself.

"It really was Mayuyu." Yukirin said trying to back her up.

Mayuyu didn't say anything. She just glared at Sae and then ran off into her room.

"This can't be good."

The next day, Sae found all the money in her back account gone. Now Sae was broke and had no idea how she was going to pay the rent. Then to make things worse, someone tipped off some girls saying that Sae was into them. Now Sae was constantly being stalked by a bunch of crazy fangirls. But to make things more worse, Sae has been getting a bunch of porn magazines because someone signed her up for a three month subscription.

"Ahhh this sucks!" Sae shouted pounding her desk.

"What does?" Sayaka asked.

"It's nothing." Sae said rethinking what would happen if she told anyone that Mayuyu was the cause of her pain.

"Tell me. I want to help."

"Well I got robbed and lost all my money and now I can't pay the rent for my place."

"Did you investigate?"

"Yeah but there were no traces. Now I have nowhere to stay." Sae said.

"Well if you want you can stay at my place." Sayaka said.

"Really?"

"Yeah I live alone so it'd be nice to have some company."

"Oh thank you so much!"

"No problem. I'll drive you home so you can get your things oh and by the way, Sae why do you have a porn magazine on your desk?"

Sae looked down and saw the magazine with the picture of a naked woman on it.

"It's not what you think!" Sae said covering the magazine.

"Right. Just don't bring any of that stuff over to my place. Oh and wash you hands." Sayaka said slowly starting to back away from Sae.

"I'm telling you you got it all wrong!"

"Sure I do. Pervert."

"Sayaka!"

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Well there's chapter 4! I tried to add a little sexiness to it because one of the readers requested it so there you go! But I had to keep it within reasonable limits because there are rules and stuff. Anyways please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 4
« Reply #213 on: July 12, 2012, 06:21:25 PM »
I was reading chapter 3 and then there's chapter 4 already?!
wut??!!  :on roll:
btw make more of atsumina pwease.. would you miyu?  :shy2:
I know you'd say yes  :on woohoo:

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 4
« Reply #214 on: July 12, 2012, 06:23:35 PM »
haha! Jurina could't keep her hands to herself anymore~

and Mayuyu in attack mode again! thought I would like a little more interaction between Mayu and Yuki like how you did to the Wmatsui.....I love the Mayu jelous moments but she just doesn't do any thing about Yuki :drool:


update soon please!!! :inlove:
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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 4
« Reply #215 on: July 12, 2012, 06:23:44 PM »
Poor Sae she can just never get a break lol. But at least Sayaka offered her to stay at her place XD

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 4
« Reply #216 on: July 12, 2012, 08:18:25 PM »
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Sae couldn't finish because Jurina had run over and kicked Sae off of Rena.

Good job, Jurina! :thumbsup

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The next day, Sae found all the money in her back account gone.

Now, now, Mayuyu. That's against the law... but I approve! :thumbsup :thumbsup (Poor Sae :lol:)

Come on, Yukirin, show some love to Mayuyu! The little cyborg is getting jealous and angry for your sake! I agree with yuukimoko. These two need more interaction!

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 5
« Reply #217 on: July 12, 2012, 09:44:00 PM »
Minna! Thank you guys so much for commenting on my fic. As a writer it is my job to please the readers so I will do my best in trying to fulfill everyone's requests. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 5

"Sae gear up we're heading out again." Sayaka said.

"Yes finally!" Sae said.

Sayaka and Sae headed down to an alley way behind a bar. There was a man dead with two stab wounds in the chest. This time Sae didn't throw up at the sight of the dead body. Rena and Jurina showed up soon after Sayaka and Sae had arrived. Rena was being distant around Sae and Jurina was giving her a death glare.

"Did something happen between you and Rena?" Sayaka asked.

"Oh no nothing happened." Sae said.

She walked over to examine the body but then Jurina pushed her back.

"Don't touch her you playboy." Jurina said.

"What?"

"Mayuyu told me what you did to Yukirin. You got some nerve."

"What is she talking about?" Sayaka asked.

"Nothing! It's nothing." Sae said.

"Alright. Well Rena do you have a cause of death?"

"One of his main arteries was severed. He bled to death within a matter of minutes." Rena said.

"Hey Sayaka look what I found."

Sae walked over and showed Sayaka a glove covered in blood.

"We might be able to get something off the inside of the glove. Take it down to the head quarters and have Yukirin look at it."

"Roger."

Sae was actually scared to see Yukirin. Every time she did Mayuyu did something to make things worse. But she had a job to do and she wasn't going to let a cyborg stop her. Sae was about to walk in when she heard a strange noise. She looked in and saw Mayuyu hugging Yukirin.

"You know I don't like it when you get touchy with others." Mayuyu said.

"I told you already. Yesterday was an accident. I swear!" Yukirin said.

"You're lying."

Mayuyu stepped on Yukirin's foot making her squeal.

"Mayuyu please I'm sorry." Yukirin pleaded.

"No." Mayuyu said as she bit hard on Yukirin's ear.

"It hurts!"

"This is your punishment."

"Please stop!" Yukirin said.

"Not until you get on your knees and beg for forgivness." Mayuyu said in a commanding tone.

Sae couldn't believe what she was seeing. Yukirin was now on her knees looking up at Mayuyu. Mayuyu sat on a chair and held her foot out.

"Lick it and maybe I'll forgive you." Mayuyu said.

Yukirin leaned in and started licking Mayuyu's foot like a cat. Sae could only sit there and watch the whole scene unfold before her. She had to to do something but she was afriad to step in.

"Do you forgive me now?" Yukirin said.

"Yes. Now stand up."

Yukrin stood up and the Mayuyu stepped closer to kiss her.

"I only did those things because I love you." Mayuyu said.

"I know but did you really have to go as far as drain her bank account?" Yukirin said.

"She deserved it for almost damaging Yukirin's perfect body."

"You better put that money back. Otherwise you won't be allowed to touch me for two days."

"I will I promise!"

"Good girl."

The two leaned in and started kissing each other again. 

Sae didn't want to interrupt the two so she pulled out a pen and paper and wrote "look for DNA" on the bag. Then she threw the bag right behind Mayuyu so only Yukirin could see it. Then Sae ran before the two saw her.

"Man that was a close one." Sae thought.

As Sae was walking down the hall Sayaka came up to her.

"Hey Sae come with me. Takamina said she wanted to talk to us about something."

"Ok."

Sayaka and Sae walked over to Takamina's desk where she was working on something while Acchan was clinging to her.

"You needed us captain?" Sayaka said.

"Yes. I may have found something that could help you with your case. The man who was killed was actually part of a drug dealing business and we found a clue in his pocket suggesting there's going to be another drug deal. Acchan and I are going to confront the dealers and we need your help. You interested?"

"YES!" Sae said.

"That sounds interesting." Sayaka said.

"Good then later on around eight meet by this warehouse." Takamina said handing Sayaka a piece of paper.

"You excited Sae? This will be your first drug bust."

"Heck yeah!"

At eight o clock Sayaka and Sae headed to the docks where Takamina told them to wait. Sae found them behing some shipping crates. Sae couldn't help but wonder what they were wearing.

"Why are you two dressed like that?" Sayaka asked.

"So we don't stick out." Takamina said.

"You look like Sherlock Holmes and his assistant Watson"

"Hey I think we look cute right Holmes?" Acchan said.

"Right Watson!"

The two hugged each other happy that they found themselves cute.

"They should be arriving soon so find a place to hide. Wait for my signal to attack."

Takamina and Acchan hid behind some crates and Sae took cover under a row boat. Sayaka was somehow on the roof of a building. She looked kind of like Batman. A couple mintues later four cars pulled out and ten men stepped out. One of them had a brief case that was probably full of drugs. Sae waited for Takamina's signal to attack. As the two men were exchanging money for the suit case, Takamina gave the signal and they all jumped out.

"Freeze!" Takamina shouted.

"You're under arrest!" Acchan said.

"Shoot them!"

All ten of the men pulled out their guns and started firing at Acchan and Takamina.

"Take cover!"

Acchan and Takamina dove back down. A bullet shot past Sae and nearly hit her head. Sae reached over to grab her gun but she didn't feel it. That's when she realized she left it back at head quarters. Sae felt really stupid but didn't have time because one of the guys found her and was pointing his gun at her. But then Sayaka came out of nowhere and took the guy down.

"What are you doing!" Sayaka asked.

"I forgot my gun!" Sae said.

"Here take this."

Sayaka tossed Sae a gun and took cover next to her.

"Start shooting."

Sae's shooting wasn't good. She missed every shot she fired.

"Sae go after the dealer he's trying to make a run for it!" Takamina shouted as she shot another guy down.

Sae dropped her weapon and ran after the guy. He was pretty slow and Sae was able to catch up with him easily. Sae tackled the man and then hand cuffed him. By the time she had brought him back to the others, the fight was over.

"Good job Sae!" Sayaka said.

"Yeah I did it!" Sae said in victory.

But then Sae saw one of the guys still wasn't dead. He came up from behind Takamina and stabbed her arm with a knife.

"Takamina!"

Sayaka was about to shoot the man but then Acchan grabbed him by the shirt and threw him down. Then she jammed her gun into his mouth and said,

"Eat led you bastard!"

Acchan fired the gun and the man's brains splattered everywhere. Both Sayaka and Sae were suprised at the sight and stood there motionless. Acchan rushed over to Takamina who still had a knife in her arm.

"Takamina are you ok?" Acchan asked.

"Yeah I got it just give me a minute."

Takamina slowly pulled the knife out and threw it aside.

"We better get you to the hospital." Sayaka said.

"I'll drive." Sae said.

"Alright then I'll stay behind and wait till back up arrives."

Together, Acchan and Sae helped Takamina into the car. Then they drove off leaving the bloody place.

"Takamina are you sure you're ok?" Acchan said.

"I'm fine Acchan it's just a scratch." Takamina said.

"Let me kiss it and make it better!"

"Ahh no Acchan it hurts!"

"Ahh I'm sorry!"

"It's ok you were just trying to help."

"You saved me agian Takamina. You really are my hero."

"No I'm your partner."

"Yeah my life long partner."

Acchan leaned in and kissed Takamina on the cheek. Sae could see through the rear view mirror Takamina blushing like crazy.

"It must be nice having such a close relationship with you partner." Sae thought.

"I wonder why Sayaka and I aren't like that."

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Well there's chapter 5! I hope I did my best in pleasing all of you. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 5
« Reply #218 on: July 12, 2012, 10:10:34 PM »
wahhhhhhh!!!! :ptam-shy: :bath: :farofflook:


Thank you!!!!!!! I really loved The Mayuki moment~!!!!!!! :shy2: :shy1:

and I also wanted to tell you that I like your fics! you made the same cast as last one and changed only the protagonist! its really interesting~

maybe next time you put Mayu like tha protagonist or Yuki~! but of course they would be still together~~~~ :monk gboy: :mon huh: :mon ignore:

thanks again for this lovely chapter and keep up wiith the good work and the lovely Mayuki moments~!!!!!!! :mon geek: :mon inluv: :mon cute:
more more more Wmatsui and Mayuki~!!!!!!! :mon geek:

Also please forgive me for my poor english..... :mon innocent: :mon fu: :mon kissy:
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I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Genking Deka update Chapter 5
« Reply #219 on: July 12, 2012, 11:24:17 PM »
The mad house was really awesome!!!!!
And the new fic too! Poor sae is surrounded by scary people lol
When I read this fic I have the ost of the csi miami in mind with the AKB inside lol

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