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Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 9 - Uekara Maritroll
« on: June 30, 2012, 07:23:45 PM »
Hi everyone, I've been a lurker in this forum for a long time and I really love the fics! I am a MD fan of AKB48  :heart: :heart:

I'm done with my first Saeyuki fic, and starting another one. Please use the links below to navigate.

I have also made backup copies in https://saeyu.tumblr.com

I will start posting below. Please enjoy :peace:

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3 hours (Atsumina) - link
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Heaven on Earth (Mayuki)

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9

They Way I Grew Up (Saeyuki)

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4A
Chapter 4B
Chapter 5A
Chapter 5B
Chapter 6
Chapter 7 (final)
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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 02/07]
« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2012, 07:24:51 PM »
Chapter 01

“Be the bravest idol!” These words echoed in my head again and slightly cleared my dizzy head. The cramped backstage. The lack of ventilation. The cheers and shouts of my fans. The promise I made to myself four years ago, is finally coming true. I, Kashiwagi Yuki, will be standing on the biggest stage of every idol’s dream — my solo concert in Tokyo Dome.

I am nervous, but this request —“Be the bravest idol!” — is on heavy rotation in my mind now. I can’t think of anything but this genki voice looping and looping, strangely calming me down. Yes, this is the voice of the person that is most important to me, the person who taught me how to be myself.

Sae-chan, I have kept my part of the bargain, will you keep yours?

Unconsciously, I chuckled out loud, drawing a stare from staff-san who was counting down to raise my platform up on stage. I gave him a smile to indicate that I’m fine, but my mind drifted off to where it all started…

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4 years ago….

“….HELP ME, HELP ME wooow Kanashimi no….” My alarm rang with the latest single of Momusu, my favorite idol group. To be honest, it’s not the best song to start a day, but it aptly described my situation. I don’t want to go to school.

I sighed as I got up and gave Genking a pat on the head before I leave bed. Genking looked up to me with his puppy eyes, his always loving and warm smile giving me some assurance that I could survive today.

I went down and have breakfast while mama gave me the usual rant about my listless state and how that’s not going to help me in life. My popular jock-brother gobbled down his food and barely gave me a glance before leaving. My dad never even put down the paper as he quietly sipped his morning coffee.

Another typical day.

It’s my first year at high school and the year has barely begun before I became a pariah for no reason. High school is hell, people say. But why me? I checked my chair and drawers to make sure no one put anything nasty in there like last time when ink pore all over my homework and skirt as I pull a textbook out of the drawer. Not only that, when I leaned back by surprise, the back of the chair fell off and I totally lost balance and landed upside down. The whole class was laughing, including a snort from my homeroom teacher….why…

I am still not sure of why I became the target even today, but I guess someone had to take that role, and it happened to be me.

Slowly I retreated in my own world and got even more into idols as a way of escape. These people can do all they want, but at the end of the day, they can’t control what’s on my mind. Or so I thought.

“Woaah! Look what I found here!” Startled by the familiar voice I turned around and saw something that sent shivers down my spine. Hiro, the leader of the clique who led the bullying, held up a pink envelope that’s carefully sealed with a cute puppy sticker and  neat handwriting that addresses “Ishikawa Rika - Sama”.

“A love letter by our shy shy Yuki-chan,” Hiro continues. “Um…lemme see…’You mean the world to me…. ‘I can only feel alive when I see you perform’ and ‘Thanks for being here with me’???”

“Please….don’t…” I managed to utter something of a plead.

“This is pathetic Yuki. I didn’t know you like idols and wow, you even imagine that she’s in love with you?” “It’s not like this…” “You’re such a sore loser. Let’s do her and that Rika a favor.” Hiro gestured one of her underlings, who promptly lifted the letter from her fingers and tore it to bits and pieces, throwing it out of the window.

“Wait!” I rushed out classroom and all I could think of was those bits and pieces of pink paper that drifted further and further away into the blue sky, like sakura petals falling from the tree, slowly disappearing from the sights of crowds who never care about fallen petals, but only those still hanging on the trees or riding with the wind. Then I gave up the thought of retrieving the letter and simply ran home.

Luckily, no one was there, and I could have some peace with myself. I thought through what happened and tears started flowing uncontrollably out of my eyes. I couldn’t remember how long it took me to finally muster up the courage to write my first fan letter, to let my idol know how she influenced me and supported me even without knowing me personally.

And now, the letter’s journey hadn’t even begun before it met its end, all because I am pathetic.

Useless and cowardly person, that’s Kashiwagi Yuki.

I looked at Genking, who still smiled at me with his cute, curvy mouth. I used his paws to wipe my tears. His soft brown fur giving me comfort as I brushed it down my face.

My puppy, Genking. No, he’s not even my pet, he’s just a puppy doll. The only friend I could ever have.

Do I really just deserve to have a non-living friend?

“If you are real, you probably won’t smile at me now, will you? Will you wipe the tears of such a useless person?”

Genking’s smile was unwavering and his beady eyes glittered, the black plastic globes showing parts of my reflection. I could feel his warm encouragement, or my imagination of it. But that’s enough, I could survive the day.

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Next day (still 4 years ago)….

I woke up to my alarm and found that I was still in my uniform. Apparently I slept through the day and no one cared to check on me until morning. Wait, something was missing. Genking was gone.

“If you skip school again today, it will cause me a lot of trouble, Yuki!” My mother’s warning rattled up the stairs and compelled me to go down. Where is genking….my mind still wandered worriedly in recollections of yesterday but I couldn’t find a clue what I had done except hugging him to sleep.

Anyway, there was no time to spare under mama’s consistent urging and I reached school again.

“Lovergirl, why, you finally came back? Did your mail reach the post office?” Hiro asked and her group of girl friends laughed. I decided I really need to get through the day in order to find Genking and so I gave her a sad face as a tacit response. We’re interrupted by our homeroom teacher’s arrival. Following right behind him, was a girl who strode confidently into class, a girl I’ve never seen before.

“Good morning class, we have a new transfer student. Please introduce yourself.”

“Hi, my name is Miyazawa Sae, 16 years old. I am from Tokyo and I love sports. Can’t wait to start a new life here at Kagoshima Girls’ High School! My nickname is Genking, which stands for Genki King! Yoroshiku ne!!”

My eyes widen with shock, and so were my classmates’, but for different reasons. Although she looked cute, she has a boyish face with short, fluffy brown hair and a tall, slender body. Her radient smile and steadfast eyes melting everyone’s defenses. All of these features enough to give girls heart attacks 10x round. But I was just shocked that she introduced herself as Genking, is this a joke???!!!

“Miyazawa-san, please sit beside Kashiwagi-san over there,” the teacher pointed at the only empty seat in the classroom. Of course, it’s the seat beside me, befitting of a social pariah. I recovered from my shock and looked down as she walked towards me. To my surprise, she grabbed my hand as she sat down. “From now on, please take care of me!!”

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So this is it, the first chapter which sets the scene and you can probably see where it is all going. Other familiar faces will also start to appear in the next chapter!

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 02/07]
« Reply #2 on: June 30, 2012, 07:26:04 PM »
Chapter 02

I felt uneasy with pairs of hungry eyes staring at my direction. They were not looking at me, but our instant-star, Miyazawa Sae. The transfer student with short hair and a handsome face. The one who calls herself Genking.

“Kashiwagi-san, can you share your textbook with me for today?” I nodded and pushed the opened textbook in between our desks, not daring to look at her. She moved closer and my heartbeat hastened. She’s so close to me that I could feel her body radiating some sort of….energy. I took a deep breath to calm my nerves and for some reason I felt something like clean laundry smell filling my senses. It allowed me to relax like I never did in class before, even though all eyes were trained at the person beside me.

At break time, girls immediately flocked around the new student and flooded her with questions. “Can we have lunch with you?” “What do you do in your free time?” “Do you swim?” “Do you have a girlfriend?” To which Miyazawa handled with almost perfect grace. I couldn’t remember what exactly she said but she managed to keep everyone happy, the energetic smile never once faltered from her face.

”…about going out with someone…I keep ALL options open so I can enjoy my life fully! [Yuki’s note: what a playboy answer!] Speaking of which, I would like to try something new here, like music. Kashiwagi-san, I heard you play the trombone, let’s join the school band!” With that, she just took my hand and led me out the classroom, as if it’s a natural progression of all the welcoming she received.

And there I saw it in some of the students’ eyes as we pass by, a look of confusion but also jealousy.

“Miyazawa-san, I can’t really do that…” I was trying to back out from what she suggested. Not to mention, why, would she know that I play the trombone? I did that in junior high and enjoyed it, but since high school, all the bullying had kept me from anything close to a social life…

“Ah ah ah, call me Genking or Sae-chan from now on. I don’t know how to play instruments but who knows, maybe I can sing for the band! I heard there are auditions held in the upper-classmen rooms today…come come, let’s check it out!”

“But..”

“Yuki-chan how do I get to Class-K, the flyer says it’s there. O by the way, can I call you Yukirin? I always feel like calling you that…a cute name for a cute face!”

She just kept babbling till we reached class K. There was already a bunch of students in the room and a short girl darted towards us. She gave us a huge smile, forming two dimples that lit up her excited face.

“Are you here for the auditions? My name is Oshima Yuko, the president of the band and I play the bass. You guys must be first-years, right? So what do you want to try out for?”

Sae stepped forward, “Ano…Sae (pointing to herself) wants to try out for vocals! While this cute girl here, Kashiwagi Yukirin-chan, will play the trombone!”

Another student quickly handed me a trombone and said, “This is great, we’re missing trombone players! Here, use mine for the audition, my name is Miichan, Minegishi Minami!”

“Miichan, it’s your lucky day! Yukirin is pretty and judging from the size of her assets, she must have huge lungs!” To my dismay, all three of them started laughing and Sae chimed in saying, “Is lung capacity really related to chest size?? Hey Yuko, stop feeling my chest, you’ll never find them!”

“Can you two stop harassing and intimidating our potential members?” An elegant girl with long wavy hair appeared and pulled the short girl’s ears hard. “Itai itai! Nyan nyan, it’s just a joke, Sae-chan doesn’t even have boobs….I only have eyes hands for you!” Nyannyan then gave a smack on midget yuko’s head and ignored her pout while smiling apologetically to Sae and me.

Sae was amused by this scene and joked, “Are you looking down on my chest now, huh? Cuz I will show you my true potential in the basketball court!”

“Who mentioned basketball?” Another tall girl with a chiseled face, like a beautiful olympian statue showed up.

Sae gaped at the sight of this walking wonder while Yuko greeted her by sticking a tongue out. “Hey Gorilla, here to snatch my first-year younglings to your team? Looks like we have a lot of quality goods here…” Yuko shifts her attention back at me again, as I frown and looked down, scared at what people may think of these unlikely comments.

“Yes I get it I get it, but I am not a pervert like you squirrel. I heard this buddy talking about basketball, so you wanna play?”

Sae gave her a silly grin and said “Wow, I am still dazzled by your perfectness! How do you get a body like that?? I want to play ball with you!!!!” The gorilla-girl responded with a friendly smile that immediately showed her lady-like side and said, “Thanks, we have a basketball team here too. My name is Akimoto Sayaka, the captain of the team, while this squirrel here is also one of our team members. We are having trials for basketball too, want to come?”

“Okay okay,” Nyan nyan said, “Sayaka, you will have to wait till after school for your basketball trials. Time to start the band audition now. I am Kojima Haruna, the secretary of the band, please make yourselves welcomed here. Let’s start with you, Yukirin-san.”

I didn’t realize that now I am suddenly in the spotlight of a dozen or so girls who are waiting to hear me play. Why, Sae, are you putting me on the spot?

“I…” I wanted to give up and run away.

Sae came up to me and rested both arms on my shoulder. “Look at me. Take a deep breath. Now just pretend you’re at home playing the scales for fun. I will be there, waiting for you.”

She walked away to her seat, her gaze never leaving me. Once again, I felt relaxed as I saw my own reflection on her glassy eyes. It reminded me of the hours I spent at home in front of the mirror, dancing to idol music and playing the chromatic scales over and over with increasing speeds, just to relax (and annoy my brother). The only audience in there, is well, myself, and also my puppy doll, Genking, who looked at me as earnestly as ever. Now I felt relaxed and positioned my lips between the mouthpiece to begin.

I started playing The Grand March, a song that lifted my spirits when I used to play in my junior schools’ band. As the sequence built up, I found myself taking deeper breaths and playing more surely, letting the music flow from my brain. I finished the excerpt with a clean note and suddenly, I felt that I grew taller, or rather, it’s because I held my chest up higher.  Everyone clapped at my performance. I could tell that although it’s far from perfect, people were genuinely enjoying it. I passed my audition that day, but more importantly, something changed in me for the better. And it’s because of Sae.

Sae also sang her part but frankly, she’s kind of out of tune. However, she never once let fear show in her face. She smiled and even fitted a dance routine in her singing, showing the kind of confidence that makes it hard for people to dismiss her performance. Although she didn’t pass the auditions, she managed to gain more fangirls on that day.

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“So yappari, I should stick to what I’m best at, ya?” Sae quipped as she walked us back to class for the remaining lessons.

“Thank you.” I said.

“Thank me for what? Yukirin’s performance is kakkoi! Look at how Yuko and Miichan are all pleased. Even though I can’t join, I am happy for you. And I am glad I met such as a cool friend and neighbor on my first day here…I’m not good with homework so remember to lend me your answers too from now on!! But don’t let my mom know about this or she…. (chatter mode on)”

In my heart, I knew that she would never go try out for a band if not for me. Miyazawa Sae, my lucky star, how you mysteriously appeared swept me out of the doldrums.

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 02/07]
« Reply #3 on: June 30, 2012, 11:20:34 PM »
kyaaa I like iiiit  :shy2:
but could you make a Mayuki too like anzai said  :wriggly:
I can't wait upload soon  :on gay:

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 02/07]
« Reply #4 on: July 01, 2012, 03:15:29 AM »
 :inlove: saeyuki are so cute!!!! :)

I want more please  :fap
 
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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 02/07]
« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2012, 04:27:40 AM »
Jajaj Sae is so talk active. for a moment I want to say.. shut up for a moment sae.. yukirin is so confused jajaj but love her :D

I think that yukirin gonna try drums :D i love yukirin with drums..

good fic :D keep going!

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 02/07]
« Reply #6 on: July 01, 2012, 01:34:58 PM »
@anzai:  :w00t: I'm so glad you liked it! Sorry for my poor English, I meant to say, I'm an MD fan, a minna daisuki fan which just means I am too in loved with everyone and can't choose an Oshi.

@anzai and mo-chan: Thanks for reading! Do you want me to tackle the awesomeness that is Mayuki? There are so many good fics there. Give me some time to plan it out as I want to have a full plot before writing to make sure I finish each story.

A Mayuki fic will be the next one then!!!

@saeyukilover: Thanks! Please let me know your thoughts on Saeyuki!

@Haruko: Sae gave me an impression that she can be annoying in rl...lol but it's all a show of affection for our shy Yuki...

The next chapter will be out very soon as I'm finishing it. Please look forward to more cliched scenes  :deco: and also Yuki's character development.

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 02/07]
« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2012, 06:13:22 AM »
Chapter 03

…i wanna be a pop star kimi wo motto muchuu ni sasete ageru kara ne...” Sae-chan’s voice rang through the otherwise quiet neighborhood in the early spring morning.

Skipping happily to her tune, she looked back every few seconds for the not-so-genki me to catch up.

“Where does all your energy come from?” I complained.

“Oi! We just woke up from a night’s sleep!!! Shouldn’t you feel recharged?” Just then, she let out a huge yawn that betrayed her true state.

“Hey! Look who just said she’s recharged?”

“That wasn’t a yawn. It was a roar. A silent ROAAR!” Sae started to imitate what she thought was a lion but instead, made a crumpled-up face and produced some growls that sound more like a cat’s purr.

“You sound like an old fat cat.” I said it in a matter-of-fact manner.

“Yukirin, sometimes I’m just amazed how BLACK you can be!” She pulled closer to me and continued with her ‘lion’ impersonation, so close that our noses nearly touched each others’.

“Black?” I asked, trying not to laugh at her silly face.

“You know, blurting venom out of the blue without even batting an eyelid…” She furrowed her eyebrows and made a pout to show how ‘hurt’ she was.

“Wha~~~I!!” Honestly I hadn’t notice that I’d said something wrong, and my eyes nearly popped out.

“This,” Sae gave a gentle tap on my nose, “and your exaggerating reactions, are what makes you so adorable.”

She then skittered away and resumed her half-singing, half-growling routine, leaving me flushed and confused.

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It’s been a week since Miyazawa Sae came into my life. Ever since the day of the audition, things had gotten better and better. First, I got selected to the school band, and Sae-chan made it to the basketball team. Then, we discovered that she lived nearby so I no longer had to walk to school alone. After that, we spent almost every waking moment together, and surprisingly, despite our different personalities, we got along pretty well. With her around, I felt easier to open up to senpai like Yuko-san, Mii-chan and Haruna-san, who were fast becoming my first friends at school.

Her popularity in class did not diminish at all, so I also found myself getting some positive interaction with people who weren’t hostile to Sae-chan’s closeness with me. For example, there was Katayama Haruka-chan, Sae’s science lab partner, whom she dragged along to lunch one day. Because we were both quite shy among strangers, I doubt we would ever hit it off without Sae’s talent of getting along with everyone.

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“Whaccha thinking about yo, yo yo?” a pair of hands flashed in front of my eyes and woke me from my daydream.

“Yuko…saying ‘yo yo’ doesn’t make everything you say a rap…” Miichan mused.

“She’s been like that since karaoke yesterday,” sighed Haruna. “well, as expected…”

“Hehehehhehehe, Nyannyannyanyannyannyan, I am inspired to write a song about you! I’m listing everything that rhymes with your name now…anyone? anyone cares to give the next great R.A.P.E.R. some help?”

“Me me!!” Sae squealed!!

Nyan nyan, gotta get some bun bun, taking on the hun hun..uh uh” Sae got up and started “rapping”.

“YEAH!!!!” Yuko and her high-fived triumphantly.

Sayaka, having a convenient height difference with the squirrel, gave her a smack on the head. “Squirrel, trust me, you don’t want to be a raper, even though you do have a tendency for perversion, hahahahaha!”

“My perversion is reserved for Kojima Haruna only,” Yuko answered indignantly, turning to Haruna. The cat turned her head away nonchalantly towards me and asked instead:

“What’s been bothering you, Yukirin?”

“It’s nothing…. I am just too tired from class today…” It’s lunch time, and we’re lounging in the cafeteria before class.

“Yes, I understand, especially in Math when they make us do all these calculations like how many minutes there are in a second…ah chigai…I mean, how many minutes there are in a day…365?? Mou!! Anyway, my solution is always this!” She happily pulled out a DS from the bag and began playing.

Truly, apart from the bullies, whose presence Sae’s sunshine power had been managing to keep at bay so far, there really wasn’t anything that worried me. Except, except, I still couldn’t find Genking, my puppy doll.

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Genking was given to me when I was 5, by a neighbor named Cindy, who was about 10 years older than me. She too, was a very nice person who acted more like a caring sibling than my brother ever would be. Once, I was too scared to slide down the slides in the park because a dog was around at the bottom, looking up at me. Cindy encouraged me to come down and told me that dogs are the friendliest creatures in the planet. However I still hesitated and cried. She scooped me out of the slides and gently stroked my hair, saying “Shuuu, shuuuu, I will let you know there’s nothing to be afraid of in this world….” The next day, Cindy took me to the park again and gave me Genking. “Here, your new best friend!” We laughed and I was able to touch and even play with the dog that came by again, after looking at Genking’s innocent face and her cute, curvy smile.

In a way, Genking was not only my best companion, but also a proxy to Cindy, who had moved to Tokyo a few years ago. She knew my timid personality well, but was never too pushy about it, always taking care of me and encouraging me to do what I want. In fact, that’s how I picked up a musical instrument in the first place. So whenever I felt sad and discouraged, if I couldn’t find Cindy, I would always talk to Genking. Now that he’s gone, it got me really worried. Well, I was sure that no one would break in just to steal a toy, so I convinced myself that he’s still lying somewhere at home.

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After class we went to basketball practice as band rehearsals were not on that day. We sat on the benches to watch them. Haruna dished out her NDS while I caught Sae-chan’s eyes glittering with admiration as she followed her captain’s every move. Her short, unruly curls bounced up and down as she ran back and forth the court to warm up, imitating what the captain was doing.

This is a side of Sae-chan I rarely got to see because she’s always been the strong one between both of us, and it really lifted my spirits.

“Let’s start!” shouted Captain Sayaka. The team members quickly filed into their respective positions. It’s a practice match today.

The two groups played against each other with the tallest two, Sae-chan and Sayaka, going head-on each other frequently. The passes were so fast that I couldn’t even follow. A swoosh and a fake here and there, and slowly the match started to build up.

“Wow, I didn’t know you’re that good!” Sayaka said while trying to dribble the ball pass Sae.

Sae sniffed and responded, “You too captain, my muscle fibres are twitching in excitement. Watch out!” Her hand shot out and tried to block the captain’s move, while Sayaka quickly changed her direction and passed to the squirrel.

“Easy there, first-year!” she smirked. The pace of the game got a lot quicker with more pants and shouts from the teammates. Even Haruna was peeking up from her NDS more often to see how it’s going.

After 20 minutes and very close scores, the team was ready for a break. Watching Sae-chan walk towards our bench, I noticed that one of her shoelaces was falling loose. Baka! I was thinking to myself how childish she looked at that point, with sweat beads rolling down her slightly blushed face, her hair all messy and ruffled up due to the intense action. I leaned forward to warn her of the shoelaces, but she was also rubbing sweat off her eyes and arrrrraaa! She stepped on her own shoelaces and tripped forward.

My head banged onto something and I lost my balance too, my eyes closing reflexively.

After landing on some uneven surface, I opened my eyes.

A pair of glassy globes, black, deep and mesmerizing. I couldn’t see anything else. Huh?

My nose, it’s resting on something soft…no wait, my body too….huh? My lips felt the moist of someone’s heavy breathing from below.

The situation I was in — directly landing on top of the hapless Sae-chan —dawned upon me and I sprung up in shock. Sae-chan was perhaps injured with the impact, as she lied motionless and not even blinking, like a statue.

“Nose and nose…chu chu!” Yuko exclaimed and clapped her hands, followed by Sayaka’s roar of laughter. That seemed to have shook Sae-chan out of her coma and she blinked furiously, sitting up and scratching her head while doing so. I walked back to the bench and sat down, daring not to look at Sae-chan’s or any other people’s faces.

My heart was beating like crazy but the light of her eyes was deeply imprinted in my mind for the rest of the day, and a warm fuzzy feeling crept up my head.

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After practice, we walked back home together. There was an awkward moment of silence but finally, Sae-chan decided to talk.

“Ano, Rin-chan, sorry about just now, did I hurt you?”

I peeped sideways to find an equally shy girl stealing glances at me. Boy, that’s very unusual of Sae…

“Of course not, don’t worry about it! Sae-chan, are you alright though? You cushioned my landing after all…” I could feel my ears heat up again recalling that scene…

“Rin-chan, you’re light and soft like a blanket, you didn’t hurt me one bit!!” Sae-chan started stuttering. “I…should’ve been more careful with the shoelaces…..honto ni, gomen ne!!”

I looked at her flustered face and let out a laugh.

“Baka! I’m more worried about your ability to tie shoelaces than anything else! Miyazawa Sae-san, how old are you?”

“Heheh, as long as Rin-chan is here, I don’t have to worry anyway, since you’ll make sure I’m well groomed, right?” She gave me a mischievous wink and started skipping around me.

Back to her baka-mode again, she took my hand and forced me to skip all the way back home with her.

The sakura trees in our neighborhood is fully blossomed now.

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 03/07]
« Reply #8 on: July 02, 2012, 07:51:50 AM »
I love the rap part.. I read it well I sing that part..

“Nyan nyan, gotta get some bun bun, taking on the hun hun..uh uh” Sae got up and started “rapping”.

jajaja hilarious >D

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 03/07]
« Reply #9 on: July 05, 2012, 03:42:50 PM »
Chapter 4A

“Morning class, open day is in 2 week’s time. Each club is required to set up something fun or entertaining to interact with the guests. Understood?”

“Ne,” Sae-chan nudged my elbow, “what do you think the basketball club can do— have one-on-one matches with guests? Or have Sayaka dressed up as Gorilla and set up a purikura booth? That will be so awesome *sparkling eyes*”

“Sae-chan, if you do one-on-one matches, the visitors will never have any opportunity to play because the lines will be flooded by your own fan club!”

“Hora hora, is Rin-chan jealous? Stop sulking! >.< You’ve been like that since the morning! Don’t worry, although I went to the amusement park with Rie-chan and Yuihan, that has no effect on me. You’re still my no. 1 Rin-chan!” She was teasing me rather than being apologetic.

“That has nothing to do with your fan club, Miyazawa!” I protested.

“Then what is it? Tell me.” Sae’s face suddenly looked serious, but her face relaxed to a more gentle smile.

“There’s this…..ok, promise you won’t laugh.” I cleared my throat and proceeded “There’s this doll, this puppy doll that an onee-san gave me when I was really young, but I’ve lost him for 2 weeks already and can’t seem to find him.”

Sae’s attention and expression remained the same.

“I know it’s just a doll, but, he’s really really important to me. He is my best friend. Even though he doesn’t answer back, the mere fact that he is beside me gives me the security the no one else can….Sae-chan, actually, well, never mind (I wanted to tell her how they are both called Genking)….”

“It’s okay Yukirin, I understand. I’m sure you will find your puppy. Dogs are loyal creatures, you know, and even though it’s only a doll, I’m sure it embodies a dog’s spirit.” Sae patted my head and widened her smile to a grin.

“Thanks Sae! You are very very important to me too….”

AHH I sa…said it!!! It’d only been 2 weeks but to me, Sae seemed to have consumed my whole life and it felt like ages. But for her, surely this sounded crazy and idiotic?! No!!!!!

“Thank you, Yuki, you have no idea how much this all means to me.” Surprised at this straightforward answer, I blushed and look back down at my textbook.

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At the cafeteria, the basketball team and school band members started discussing what to do for Open Day.

“Let’s run a danso cafe and attract all the ladies to our club!” Yuko suggested.

“No!” said Sayaka and Haruna in unison.

“Basketball team needs someone with guts, not someone for us to pamper to.” Sayaka reasoned.

“Sasuga Captain!” Miichan struck a thinking pose. “We’ll have to strike a balance between fun and utility. If we do something outright serious, like a basketball match, we may scare kids away. However, as Sayaka says, there should be something that attracts people of your kind to you…”

“Miichan! What do you mean by ‘people of your kind’?” Yuko twisted her face to show her contempt, “People of our kind is athletic, clever and brave!”

“Brave…hmm…..I know, let’s host a haunted house!” Sae raised up her hand and looked at others eagerly.

Sayaka rubbed her chin thoughtfully and nodded, “This might be a good idea! We can test to see if they have enough power to evade our straps and scares, that way, everyone can have fun and we can also find great recruits!”

“Yes yes yes!!!! Sa-ya-ka approves my idea!!”

While Sae started flinging her hands and dancing around, Haruna asked Yuko “So what about us? What activity should the band do? I don’t want to perform just some songs like last year!”

“Well, we all joined this club due to our love for music, I guess we can figure out something that’s not just an ordinary band performance…” Yuko furrowed her eyebrows.

“How about…idol music?” Haruna suggested.

“Sugoi! we can rearrange some classics like Love Machine and also invite people to dance with us!” I suggested.

“Yes, that sounds like fun!!” Yuko yelped. “All right, we are all set to conquer Open Day!”

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2 weeks of preparation flew by with a blink of the eye, and Open Day was finally here. Our band started with a show that paid tribute to idols of our era, so we performed a song from AKB48-san, Aitakatta, then Morning Musume-san’s Love Machine and lastly, SPEED-san’s White Love.

I did something unthinkable just 4 weeks ago — I agreed to take up the singing and dancing part with Haruna. It’s true that I used to study songs I love to the most minute detail, playing and replaying videos, trying out different expressions in front of the mirror. But no, I dared not even perform in front of my family. Was this shyness or lack of confidence? I often asked myself.

Anyway, this wall had now broken down due to the determination I saw among my friends. The way Sae-chan would persist till the end of each basketball match, the way that Haruna carried on practicing despite twisting her wrist, the way Yuko struggled with school and activities of her clubs because she was sure of what she wanted.

I couldn’t recall how exactly the show went. All I remembered were happy faces….and the exhilarating effect it had on me. “So, this is what being an idol means?” I wondered at that time. I felt happy, and Sae-chan seemed to have noticed it too because she gave me an assuring fist-pump towards the end, before dashing out to get ready for the haunted house.

Why is she in such a hurry? Such a weird girl….


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The chapter will complete with the haunted house  visit soon (I'm still writing...)

The concert part is short because there will be a Sae POV chapter to focus on this, since I find it hard for Yukirin to describe how awesome her concert is in first-person POV :nervous

WHERE ARE ALL THE SAEYUKI FANS??????

btw, the Mayuki fic is also in the works, it will be more comical and lighthearted than this one  :shakeit:

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 04A/07]
« Reply #10 on: July 05, 2012, 05:38:08 PM »
Nooooo!!! Keep ur story to saeyuki pretty please  :deco:

Using my phone reading that's why I can't comment that much but pleAse continue
Writing saeyuki :)

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 04A/07]
« Reply #11 on: July 06, 2012, 06:37:26 AM »
Yeah Sae`s fan are crazy.. whe I reade that I think in this video :D

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 04A/07]
« Reply #12 on: July 06, 2012, 01:50:08 PM »
@saeyukilover: No worries! Even if no one reads it, I will still continue because I have the plotline for each chapter sketched out already!

@Haruko: Those radio excerpts are hilarious! I guess it doesn't help that Sae is also a flirty person. That's why i ship her with the world, lol!

Chapter 4B

After the show, we all visited the basketball team’s haunted house.

To be honest, they were a bit too serious about it ^.^''

I couldn’t recognize it’s our indoor court anymore, as even the walls were draped with dust and spider webs, and decorated more like a desolate chapel. There’s a grave dug right outside the entrance, and just as I was preparing myself for the journey to begin, a corpse flung up right in front of us from the grave! That’s the level of seriousness Sae-chan was talking about! I wonder where she is…

Although all three of us (Nyannyan, Miichan and I) were scared, we’re also determined to find out what they’re up to. On the other hand, there were really braver and more reflexive people who ventured ahead of us, dodging blood-stained cloths and black wigs that attacked from all sides. Looks like Sayaka-san’s plan was working after all.

We entered the part of the labyrinth where it was complete darkness. The three of us chained our hands together and treaded forward slowly. But the dead silence except our footsteps did not betray a hint of where the traps were. Suddenly, I remembered another young visitor who was also trailing behind us. She looked dead scared even at the very beginning, so I decided to track back to find her. Luckily she made a few whimpers so I tracked down the sounds and grabbed a hand that was surely hers….

“Bwahhhh!” a quick flash of light shot hard on the person’s face. Yabai! It’s a BLOODY skeleton! (This combination just didn’t make any sense…and later my guess was confirmed that this was indeed Yuko and her idea)

“AH!” someone also screamed besides me. The light went off again, and Yuko disappeared. Dead silence except the two of us catching our breaths. I tried to grab the person who sounded she’s behind me this time.

“Kowai kowai kowai~~~” that girl resisted. I got it right this time.

“Shhhhh it’s ok, I came to get you. I’m from the group in front.” I tried to calm her down.

“Kashiwagi-san?” the girl asked.

“Eh? How do you know my name?”

“Actually, I came to your band’s performance just now, so I knew…”

“Thank you. But don’t insist if you can’t continue any longer, you looked pale even back there when zombies tried to ambush us. Do you want me to walk you back”

“No no, this is alright.” The child grabbed my arm tighter. It looked like we’d officially lost the other members as my shouts did not return any reply.

“I hope we’re going the right direction. What’s your name? You can call me Yuki, I’m a first-year student here.”

“uh-ummm…” was all the girl managed to stutter. I recalled how cute her face was even when she’s frowning. Yes, this is an unforgettable face because it’s so perfect. Now, I remembered she’s the one sitting on front row, looking quite emotionless. Like a cyborg.

Recalling her cute face, I naturally gave her a gentle pat on the head and guided her forward. There must be a trap ahead or else Haruna and Miichan wouldn’t have disappeared without a trace.

It’s the first time I felt protective about someone. Normally, it’s me who’s the one being protected, whether by Sae-chan or by Cindy. I heard some squeaky noise over the wooden floor as we inched forward—it must be here.

I shifted our positions so I was slightly shielding her. We moved forward again, and I tried to use one hand to feel the front.

I touched something soft. A green light flashed from below, revealing a figure dressed in a white tailcoat, styled like a military costume.

“Okaerinasai, Ojousama. (Welcome home, my lady)” An evil smile flashed upon the face of a handsome prince who now bared her fangs as the grin spreaded.

It’s Vampire Sae.

“Sa…” before a could react, the floor below me swung open, and I felt myself falling. The floor where cyborg was standing wasn’t part of trap, so I felt I was dragging her and tried to let go. But the girl’s grab was too fierce.

I couldn’t let this happen because it’s clear the hole was small enough for one person only. Just as I thought I was gonna smash her into the ground, a force separated us.

I landed on a mat below without any problems, but the trap door swung shut so I couldn’t see what happened above. Then I heard quite a commotion and feet stomping above and someone came to get me at the basement.

Our haunted session had prematurely ended. I rushed back upstairs and learned that Sae-chan lept forward and stopped the cyborg from landing facedown on the trapdoor, but got quite a cut on her hand.

“Sorry I should’ve let go…” The now fully lit stadium revealed a visibly worried girl with double pigtails.

“No no no don’t say that,” Sae immediately interjected. “It’s my fault. It’s my idea to separate the parties that were brave enough to come this far. It’s actually the final stage, so we wanted to see how guests do without each other and designed two trapdoors that won’t open simultaneously….Sorry!” she bowed.

“Come on, girl, let nee-chan take you for a hot drink!” Haruna came and wrapped her arms around the cyborg. “Don’t worry about it, she’ll (gesturing at Sae) do just fine. When you join our club next year, I guarantee you won’t get any surprises like that.” She gave a wink that loosened up the girl’s tense look.

“Really? You think I can join?” The cyborg beamed. Oh my, even her teeth are perfect and white.

I walked towards the girl and also rubbed her back in assurance. “I look forward to seeing you next year! Please don’t let this put you off!”

“Yuki-san, I will definitely get into this school next year! My name is Watanabe Mayu, please remember me!” she bowed.

“Mayu-chan, please visit us anytime!” I replied and smiled. With that, Haruna and her walked away and continued their discussion about keyboards.

“Sae-chan, let me tend to your wound!” I turned my attention back to Sae. “Let’s go to the changing room for the first aid kit.”

“We’ll leave Saepo in your good hands then,” Sayaka said. “The next batch of guests have arrived so we must resume the haunted house. By the way, good job to both of you there.”

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In the changing room


“Ano….Sae-chan, can you remove your fangs?” I was applying some antiseptic on her cut but the muffling sounds she made due to the squealing through her fangs were a bit distracting.

“Okay, Rin-chan! Iya Iya Iya~~~~ please be gentle to me!”

“Sit still, are your fangs removed yet?” I glanced up and see the handsome face that’s no longer a vampire.

“Open your mouth” I commanded.

I popped two peppermint candies in her mouth and stroke her hair to comfort this child. She chewed dutifully and her eyes formed into crescent-shaped curves to show her satisfaction.

“You do know that’s my wig right?” She started teasing me again as I stroke her silver mane.

“Stop distracting me, Miyazawa-san!”

I wrapped a bandage around her hand to stop the blood flow. “Stay still,” I whispered as I pressed my hands around the wound. I then started focussing on her long slender fingers. Her skin had a slightly darker shade than mine, almost like chocolate. It was smooth and inviting. It looked delicious….but luckily I caught the laundry-like smell of her body again, reminding me that she’s human, or I wouldn’t be sure if I would do something crazy.

It appeared though, that Sae-chan had also sat still and she was also looking at her hand too. Or maybe, she’s looking at mine.

“Rin-chan, your fingers are so nimble…” Her left hand crept up and touched mine.

“You were so great today. Even the way you lifted your pinky when you held the mic makes my heart dokidoki…”

We both looked up at each other at the same time. With her silvery wig on, Sae-chan had only become even more otherworldly than she already was. The gaze from her dark pupils stood out from all the whiteness of her costume and wig, and the seemingly bottomless depth is bidding me to take a closer examination.

Our faces pulled closer towards each other, and our lips were about to touch. I slowly let my eyelids close in anticipation of the moment.



“Stop!” A voice thundered from the direction of the changing room entrance. We both pulled back instinctively.

“I mean, sorry guys!!” Sayaka immediately regained her composure. “I need to have a quick chat with Sae about the club.”

Sae scratched her neck and was looking at anywhere but Sayaka and me. I was also too embarrassed to look at anyone and so I quickly stood up and headed towards the door, saying goodbye to both of them quickly.

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As I wandered out the basketball courts, I slowly regained my footing. What just happened!!?? Was that the feelings we had for each other? These 4 weeks had gone by like a roller-coaster ride. There’s no doubt that we’re close to each other, but I didn’t know we’re heading towards that kind of relationship. Was that why my heart raced whenever I look straight at her face? Was that why she noticed details of myself that I didn’t even know?

I was a good 5 minute walk away when I realized I had left my bag in the changing room. I must go back to get it because some band-related documents for Open Day were inside. Besides, we had to walk home together anyway so I couldn’t avoid her for long. Hopefully, they were done with their talk.

Carefully descending the stairs to the changing room to make sure that no one was there, I heard Sayaka spoke.

“Sae, you are playing a really dangerous game here.”

“I’m sorry Sayaka.”

“There’s no use to apologize to me. I’m just worried about you…”

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Mayuyu made a cameo :) and Sayaka barged in at the wrong moment! What's the dangerous game?  :cow:

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 04B/07]
« Reply #13 on: July 07, 2012, 05:55:34 AM »
OMG!! they almost.... my heart right nowis so dokidoki :O

YOu are falling in love saeboy..

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 04B/07]
« Reply #14 on: July 07, 2012, 07:47:07 AM »
oh please continue!!
this is pretty interesting :)

i wonder if sayaka knows something about sae magically coming to the school!! maybe she knows sae is yuki's missing genking :O lololol i dunno~
its great how sae always seems to be on a sugar high ahah makes it funny :)

well well keep up the good work and i shall be forever waiting for the next update  :twothumbs

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 04B/07]
« Reply #15 on: July 09, 2012, 11:09:11 AM »
 :bleed eyes: sayaka !! Why you have to stop the kIss !! :( :)

And thank you for the update pls finish the story  :heart:

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 04B/07]
« Reply #16 on: July 09, 2012, 04:44:31 PM »
@Haruko: yes they are, please look forward to the next chapter below!!! :)

@Pandah: the details will be revealed soon, but I still haven't reached that part!! ><

@saeyukilover: Please look forward to below...lol  :heart:

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Chapter 5A

“…You are playing a very dangerous game…”

What did Sayaka mean? What were they hiding from me? Why did she stop us from kissing?

When I overheard their conversation back in the changing room, I was too scared to continue listening and escaped back up.

I re-examined everything that happen between us for the past few weeks. Which part of it was friendship, which part was infactuation?

I recounted the number of times I felt my heart ache when Sae-chan got all yasashii with others and reprimanded myself for being such a selfish person.

But was that love? Or was love why she’s always by my side at the end of day? Maybe none of all these were love. And that’s why we’re playing a dangerous game…

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Later I pretended I never ran into them and retrieved my bag. I joined the other girls for afternoon tea at the cooking club instead of going home with Sae. I was afraid that I would blurt out all the questions I had in mind and ruin everything.

Sae looked at me dejectedly before leaving school without me. It was the first time we didn’t walk back together.

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Nonetheless, Open Day was a big success and we’re now all pumped for our next challenge, the district high-school band matsuri (and competition)!

We received our music scores and had to be prepared within a week, so we had rehearsals everyday. Because no one played the drums and we had both Sasshi and Miichan for the trombone parts, I was assigned to the drums instead.

Hontoni, learning a new instrument within one week was an intense task! That meant extra hours practicing alone, and literally no time for anything else. I now only saw Sae-chan in class, and we never really talked except for a few trivial exchanges about class and homework.

Although we’re so near each other, we’re also so far apart. None of us dared to approach each other.

Was she regretting what we almost did back there?

I felt like I was running away from the truth I dare not discover.

At lunch time, I went to the band room to practice the drums as usual of the routine this week. Suddenly the door slided open and revealed the face of Hiro and her friends.

My heart sunk upon seeing these familiar faces again.

“Yuki, Yuki, Yuki…,” started Hiro. “You never learn do you? That rejects like you are not allowed to roam around the school so freely!”

“Haven’t we taught you not to do things WE do not permit you?” A minion slowly walked toward me, and I stayed still at my drum set.

“Lunch time is called lunch time so we can have lunch…” continued the minion. My eye shifted toward the object on her hand — a hot bowl of soup.

“Here, here, let Aya-ne feed our scared little kitten,” Hiro laughed.

The bowl was now right on top of my head, with Aya (the minion) slowly tilting it’s angle. No, I couldn’t wait for it to tip! But my hands were stiff, and all I could do was imagining the soup slowly reaching the edge of the toppling bowl.

A million thoughts race through my mind. What should I do? Why was I sacrificing my lunch time to practice? Was it not all for the sake of my nakama, and the one who introduced them to me? The one who introduced meaning to my life, Miyazawa Sae. I couldn’t let her worry about me anymore, I couldn’t force her to protect me always.

Just at the last possible second, I grabbed Aya’s arm and pushed back with all the strength I could summon. Aya fell back and the soup splattered at the direction of Hiro and her group.

Splash! Hiro got the worst out of this—- her face completely covered with miso and seaweed.

“GRRRRRRRRRRR…..You!” They were all ready to jump on me.

At this moment the door slided open again, and Sae-chan bursted in.

“Oi! Yukirin, practice properly or you won’t get your food!” Turning to Hiro and her gang, she feigned a surprised face.

“O Hiro-chan! Didn’t know you’re here too. Are are? What happened to this pretty face, I think your mascara is bleeding…come, let me take you to the bathroom to clean up…”

“It’s fine!!” Hiro shrugged Sae’s hand off violently. “You will pay for this, Kashiwagi!” The group left the room, leaving both of us.

“Sae-chan…” I said.

“Is my Yukirin ok?” She rushed towards me and hugged me tightly.

“Sae-chan, am I right to rebel against them? If you didn’t come in time, I would’ve caused more trouble to everyone again.”

Sae-chan released me from her hug but was still holding me in her arms. She stared at me sternly.

“What you did there was the right thing! Never think that you should back down! It may be harder, but you can’t let sheer power overcome you. If you don’t let them know they can’t do that, you’ll never really be free from your fears. Be brave! Remember that you are the master of your own fate!”

Her face softened and she stroked my arm gently. “I’m sorry I couldn’t be here earlier. I know you don’t need my protection and, and I can’t be there for you always. But, believe me,” She choked, “I want to…….I really want to…”

My eyes went misty but Sae’s tears were raining down her cheeks.

I’ve never seen her sad, let alone crying.

“Sae-chan…” I reached up and tried to wipe the tears from her face, but she stopped me.

“It’s not your job to do this, it’s mine.” She sat me back on the stool, kneeled in front of me and cupped both hands on my cheeks, brushing her thumbs under my eyes to wipe my tears away. Although her tears are still falling, she sniffed and looked up, making a broad, curvy smile.

“Rin-chan, my angel….look….how far you’ve come. I’m so proud of you!” she tried to sound cheerful.

I couldn’t control myself anymore and pulled her towards me. I kissed her forehead first, then brushed my lips down to her eyelids, slowly meandering down through both sides of her cheeks. I tasted a sense of longing in drying those salty tears, asking me to give her more.

“Surely, you must feel the same way, right?” I asked. Without waiting for her to answer, my lips closed against hers. She didn’t resist and replied with a gentle suck, nibbling my lower lip and wrapping her arms round my neck. I slowly descended from my stool to be at her level. Our kiss deepened as we drew closer to each other, my one hand grabbing her soft, brown hair and the other reaching beneath her sweater to stroke her waist. Reacting to my touch, she embraced me completely and kissed me more fiercely. Outside, the spring breezes brought the last petals of sakura in through the window, enveloping us in gentle caresses.

We continued until we’re out of breath and broke apart. We’re both now sitting on the floor across each other, catching our breaths.

“It’s time to go back to classes now,” Sae stood up at last, extending her hand towards me. I pulled up without breaking my eyes from her.

“Yuki, remember that this will always be here for you, even when I’m not.” Using her free hand, she touched the left-hand side of her chest, signaling what she’s talking about. She took a glance at the drum set and grinned. “Promise me: be the bravest idol!”

I smiled in return and entwined my pinky with hers. “Of course. I will never let my dream run away from me, for your sake.”

We walked back to class and didn’t break apart from our pinkies for the longest time I could remember.

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Three days later was the day of the Matsuri/competition. We’re loading our instruments to a small bus when Sasshi came shouting and running towards us.

“Miichan! Yuki!! The drum set…the drum set!!!”

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My heart beats quicker when I'm writing this even though it's a bit sad. However, when I reread it, it doesn't feel that fantastic anymore :nervous

Sorry I'm not good at writing those scenes orz

I hope you can feel Yuki's gradual change in character though...it's my first fic so please let me know how I can improve!!

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 05A/07]
« Reply #17 on: July 10, 2012, 08:27:43 PM »
Oh~ good fic
I wonder why Sayaka know about Sae

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 05A/07]
« Reply #18 on: July 11, 2012, 07:36:50 AM »
The kiss finally..

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Re: The way I grew up (Saeyuki) [Chapter 05A/07]
« Reply #19 on: July 11, 2012, 11:15:12 PM »
 :deco: Kiss? kiss? Kiiissssss...... And it's my saeyuki  :drool:

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