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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part III
« Reply #20 on: July 20, 2012, 07:29:22 PM »
kumi...just 'eat' her already :kekeke:

oops...on second thought,she's not legal yet so you better wait until yuria is legal then you can 'eat' her :on bleed:

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part III
« Reply #21 on: July 20, 2012, 07:42:41 PM »
This is some wonderful progress~

lol Yuria is really layering it on pretty thick. :lol:
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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part III
« Reply #22 on: July 20, 2012, 08:11:13 PM »
Kumi please eat Yuria hehe

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part III
« Reply #23 on: July 20, 2012, 08:21:29 PM »
aghh kumin start like yuria

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part III
« Reply #24 on: July 21, 2012, 12:42:24 AM »
kumi is tsuntsun

yuria you go girl  :otomerika:


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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part III
« Reply #25 on: July 21, 2012, 01:19:37 AM »
That "Just call me Kumi anyway" really caught me off guard.. It's really cute.. ha ha ha

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part III
« Reply #26 on: July 21, 2012, 02:13:03 PM »
hoho..kumi wanted to eat yuria..LOL..

kumi is a tsundere XD


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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part III
« Reply #27 on: July 23, 2012, 02:46:04 AM »
Kyaa!

I really love your story. I've never thought of this pairing, but I think I already ship them hahaha

Continue it soon!
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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part IV
« Reply #28 on: July 24, 2012, 05:55:36 PM »
Whoo! A longer update finally ~~  :cathappy:

Thankyou for all the comments. Hope this update worth the wait. Sorry for the errors cause i'm no perfect author  :sweatdrop: without further ado, enjoy!  :)
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Let There Be Love
IV

“Mmmm, oishiii!!!”

I played with the chopsticks while watching Yuria slurping her noodles happily. Before we got here-- ramen store which was recommended by her--my stomach kept being intolerant and grumbled all the time, but now when a bowl of hot ramen already sat in front of me, I didn’t feel like eating at all. However, seeing her eating excessively like that made me curious to have some too.

“Itadakimasu…” I lazily mumbled.

Hmm, it was really good just like I thought. She’s not bad for choosing place, though. Maybe it was not a terrible idea going out with her for a lunch, as Mom didn’t save me anything to eat after her leaving for morning shift anyway. But I hoped this only happened today and wouldn’t be a habit in the future. I was too arrogant to tear down the barrier between us.

Minutes passed and we still hadn’t exchanged words as we both busy enjoyed our meal. But that didn’t matter as I didn’t want any conversation happens anyway. It’s just fine like this.

“Ne, Kumi-senpai, do you want ice cream? I know the best place!”

I almost choked hearing my name being called; it still sounded unusual to me as she always called my family name. But then I thought again, it was me who asked her to call me that way. No, it’s not like I started liking her. It was just an act of me feeling gratitude of her deeds today and I was too supercilious to say “thank you” straightforwardly to a stalker. No, I didn’t talk about her theory of waking me up as well, that’s just disgusting.

“I’m fine…” I shook my head. See? I already thought she would bring me to another place and another place and another place aaaaand another for a day and she would think I start liking her and this ended up becoming a date. However, I wouldn’t let that happen.

“I see…” I saw those downcast eyes again. She looked a bit sad I assumed, maybe she really wanted to go there. Suddenly I felt disconcerted and realizing both of our bowls already empty, I decided to ask her.

“Do you want to go?”

Her change of expression was really quick like a camera flash that I almost believed she just put on an act to make me agree going out with her. Now I regretted for asking.

“Yes!”

“Then go. I’ll go home now.” I shrugged.

“But I want to go with you…” She pouted. Oh, so I was right?! She really did take this as a date huh. Looks like I need to straighten things out then.

“Listen, we’ll not going anyw-“

“You need the newest volume of Kuroshitsuji, right?”

Eh?! My ears awaken hearing my favorite manga title being spoken. My memories drifted to yesterday; the day I failed to buy any because of me losing my mood instantly thanks to her. Wait, how did she know that I was currently craving for that? Oh I already know the answer; because she’s a stalker.

Rather than answering, I scoffed and grabbed my wallet to pay the ramen. I had to admit that she’s such a pro knowing about me to the little details I didn’t even remember. I wondered if she has a special book where she’s taking notes of everything about me. Or a sophisticated telescope that she could easily observe me every day. Every step I take, every move I make, even when I’m taking a bath. Worst, she already attached a very very very small GPS chip somewhere in my body that I couldn’t spot on. However, thinking about those things made me unconsciously shiver.

A hand stopped me when I was about to pay the meal,

“I already said it’s my treat today!”

“Ah…well…” I slowly put back the money into my wallet. But something a bit odd here, after I went back to my seat, I saw her only bowing and saying something I couldn’t hear to the owner before walked back to me,

“Done!”

Wait, I didn’t see her taking out any money from her wallet, did she really pay the meal?

“But you haven’t pa-“

“Thank you so much, ojichan!” she bowed to the old man which was the owner, and I reflexively bowed as well.

“Come again next time, Yuria-sama.”

Oh I see, so this old man already knew well his customer. But wait…did I mishear? Did he call this girl “sama”? That was just such an unusual way to call a customer unless you are the owner of the place. Plus I didn’t see she paid a thing…wait. Could she be the owner of this place?!

“That’s why you treat me here. This place is yours, isn’t it?”

At first I only received a peculiar stare which followed by massive laughter that made me look like a retarded seal in a zoo being laughed by curious elementary school kids. No matter how I tried to wear my angriest face, it was worthless that she kept laughing till the tears welled up her eyes.

“Of course not!” She finally answered after settling down from her forever laughter. I was about to object her obvious denial but she continued with the answer,

“Let’s say…fate made my family help his family a bit.” She humbly smiled.

“You must be a rich person, aren’t you?” she only giggled; which meant a yes. Then all my anxiousness about her buying GPS, sophisticated telescope, or private satellite, could be possibly happened for real as she comes from a wealthy family anyway. If that’s true, I really needed to plan my great escape from Japan then. First, I had to get a plastic surgery that she won’t recognize me forever. Then I would fly to Africa, no, further to a deserted island where her GPS couldn’t detect my position. If those plans seemed so complicated and expensive that I couldn’t afford, I would just commit suicide then.

“Let’s go buy your Kuroshitsuji.”

xxx

Here we are, standing in front of one and the only and also the biggest manga and anime store in this town. This also like the second home for me, as I always come here every day spending most of my time rather to study if there were no track and field club activities afterschool. I even knew well some of the staffs here, they let me to read for free as long as I want since I’m the most loyal customer in this store.

“Kumi-senpai, I got a call. Excuse me.” She pointed at her phone and walked to a corner to answer whoever was that. Oh well, I shrugged and stepped inside.

“Yo, Yagami-san!"

I knew that voice, the voice that always greeted me whenever I entered the store. I turned my head to find an ikemen face standing behind the cash register; Nakanishi Yuka.

“Looking for something? Just tell me and I’ll find it for you.” She winked at me. Yuka-san’s always being friendly to every guest, and she had special business smile that immediately make you feel like at home.

“Thanks…but let me look around first.” I really didn’t want to go out of this store quickly, so I decided to be in this place as long as I could; to bought time so that girl got bored and decided to leave me alone. I’d be free and getting my manga, yay.

“Just tell me if you need something.”

“Copy that.”

My eyes caught Yuria still talking on the phone; she looked pissed to, whoever she’s currently talking to. Well, as if I care. I continued observing every shelf in the store, especially in the new release section. I wanted to replace all my old and dusty collection in my wooden cupboard. Recently, I’d been thinking to cast them away. You see, the incident with my closet yesterday reminded me a lot, thanks to her.

Newest Kuroshitsuji must be in this section too as it just came out yesterday, but strangely I didn’t see any. I kept looking here and there but still…none of Sebastian or Ciel’s face caught in my sight. I started to worry that it might already sell out. But then again I thought, it CAN’T be sold out that quick in a day. Maybe they still had in their storehouse.
   
“Ne…Yuka-san. Do you still have latest Kuroshitsuji?”

“Ah…let me see…” she moved to the computer nearby, where all the data of the store kept. You could check all the stock in the storehouse in detail without even going in and search for it manually.

“Sorry Yagami-san! I think we’ve ran out of it. Last package just sold this morning. But you can wait a week.”

“A WEEK?!”

“Uhm well…you see this is the only manga store in this town and the shipment from Tokyo will be arrived in a week…I guess. Kuroshitsuji is quite popular, you know.”

“But! Ohh never mind…” I sighed in defeat. Yuka-san patted my back in sympathy.

“What’s with the commotion?” A woman voice behind startled both of us. I saw Yuka-san bowed and I turned to find out who it was.

“What now?” That vexing grin of my stalker irritated me again. I almost forgot that I went here with this girl as well.

“Are you looking for this, Senpai?” she showed me what appeared to be what I’d been looking for since yesterday; you know what I meant. How come she bought that? Online store?

“Ehh?! Yagami-san! You know Yuria-sama?”

Yuria-sama!! After that ojichan, now Yuka-san. Then who? Japan Prime Minister as well? Why was only me not calling her “sama”? Who is she?

“Oh Yuka-san…not you too…” I facepalmed.

“Ara…Nakanishi-san knows Kumi-senpai?” Somehow that happy tone of her exasperating me more in the ways I couldn’t explain. Yuka-san only nodded.

“By the way, I bought this for you. Glad it’s the last stock this week.” She shoved the manga to me. Hold on, It’s not like I didn’t appreciate her gift but I felt like I can’t take this. By taking this, meant I would own her a gratitude which lead me to open the gate wider for her butting into my life even more; something I had avoided from the start.

“No, I can’t take this.”

“Don’t worry, you don’t have to pay. This place is mine.”

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part IV
« Reply #29 on: July 24, 2012, 07:22:41 PM »
+100 points because you included Nishishi! :rock:

I wonder if this new bit of info about Yuria will change anything between them?

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part IV
« Reply #30 on: July 24, 2012, 10:26:20 PM »
Hahaha Yuria is awesome!

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part IV
« Reply #31 on: July 25, 2012, 03:14:04 AM »
I really like your fics!   :twothumbs
"One thing that I didn’t want her to know, till my death and forever ever ever after; that once in my life.... " Uooow! XDD~
Yuria is sooo cute x.x

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part IV
« Reply #32 on: July 25, 2012, 11:53:30 AM »
WOW!! Yuria's family is very rich for sure. I want to know what her parents' job that she can own the one and only bookstore in that town

and yeah, thanks for the update. I like it :twothumbs

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part IV
« Reply #33 on: July 25, 2012, 12:48:40 PM »
jeez kumi...you think too much...

why don't you just accept yuria's kindness already...if you don't then i will...

*got smacked on my head from yui*

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part IV
« Reply #34 on: July 26, 2012, 07:12:18 PM »
 :rofl: That ramen place wasn't hers but the manga/anime store was  :rofl:

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part IV
« Reply #35 on: July 26, 2012, 08:08:03 PM »
So Yuria owns the anime place.
Kumi should accept the manga that Yuria got for her.

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part V
« Reply #36 on: July 28, 2012, 06:05:19 PM »
Finally update!  :deco: well sorry this is not as long as before but...the plot is getting intense!  :thumbsup

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Let There Be Love
V

Yabai.

I had made a big mistake.

I kept cursing myself while I ironically flipped pages over pages of my new manga. Although it kind of wrong reading it yet I couldn’t stop as I still curious what happened with Ciel in the next chapter and the next chapter and the next…

“Mou!!” I tossed the innocent book to the bed, so hard that I could hear its hitting sound. Just two more chapters and I would finish the whole. But the more I read, the more intriguing feeling haunted me as if I had done something wrong. And yes, I did. And now I owned her more.

My thoughts drifted back to yesterday, when I was in the manga store. I could retell how intimidating Yuria and Yuka-san’s gazes were, or it was just my negative imagination, but one thing I was sure; something wrong happened to me that I finally took her offer in the end. But I couldn’t recall how exactly it happened; all I remember was a nod and…I already read this manga today. Maybe it was some kind of supernatural power driving me into this; some another unconstructive theory of mine. Well whatever it was, it surely had made me breaking the barrier.

“KUUMIN!”

Ah, Mom. Her voice was so beautiful that I couldn’t even stand it. What did she want now?! I was in kind of bad mood; mostly pissed because of myself and my absurdity, but I hoped she wasn’t about to ask me to shop the daily necessity. I really hated that task.

“YES?!” Too lazy to walk downstairs, I shouted back with all power I could bear on. One second, two second, no answer came. So I decided to shout louder,

“YEEEEES?!” Still no answer. Ugh! I disliked this feature of Mom. If she doesn’t answer, means she needs you to come facing her directly. My body was already glued to the bed and I was too lazy to move, but ignoring her would be a bad option since…you just don’t know how wild the unleashed beast of her if she’s mad. Therefore, I chose my safe zone.

“You need me?” I pretended to yawn and walked like a drunkard all the way to the kitchen. She’s appeared to be like usual; same apron, same big smile. The second I entered the kitchen, something smelled so nice. Like a chocolate and…some kind of flower I didn’t know. My stalker radar suddenly caught in an anticipation signal, I scanned the room to find if it was some kind of odor trick like yesterday and she…happened to be here. Fortunately, it was just my imagination as I found out the source of the delicate scent.

“Whoa…chocolate cake! Itadakimaa-” I was about to jump to grab a fork but Mom’s hand stopped me.

“Uh-huh. Not for you.”

“Eh? Well…where’s my spare then?” I looked around to see another round of chocolate calories but couldn’t find any. Maybe Mom put it in the fridge.

“Nowhere. Hey, can you help me wrap that cake?” She pointed at a pale yellow box behind me.

“Ehhh?! None for me?!” I bit my lower lip as the plump shape covered in melted chocolate, topped with fresh strawberries and glazed almonds, plus the tantalizing aroma of it, tempted to bite.

“More action, less talk.” She turned to her unfinished dishes, leaving me frowning alone. I was about to happy finding that finally there’s something I could eat to be my mood relief, but in truth, I should only be satisfied by just sniffing its scent.

“Whose birthday?” I lifted the cake carefully to the box, making sure it would be received as perfect as it now. Everyone knew Mom is a great cook and she loves to make desserts, sweets and cakes and giving them to neighbors and her friends on New Years, Christmas, even their birthdays. Mom is such a sweetie to everyone. Therefore, I didn’t want to ruin her masterpiece.

“Nobody. It’s for Yuria-chan.”

“WHAT?!!!”

Luckily I still had my grip on when I was about to drop the cake entirely hearing the spoken name. Oh, I didn’t even need to take care of it anymore as I wanted to throw the chocolate mound to the wall knowing who it  was about to address at. Yappari, God didn’t allow me to be in a good mood these days.

“Why?!” Mom turned her head in a neck breaking speed hearing my reaction.

“Why that girl!!” I completely regretted what I had done. I stared in terror at the beautifully wrapped cake ready to be delivered, something I wasn’t supposed to do from the start.

“Eh? Because she’s your friend, right?”

“SHE’S NOT!”

“Whatever! Stop bulging your eyes out, they’re about to fall and you look scary. Now…” Mom took the box and shoved to me “…bring this to her. Say thanks for her visit two days ago.”

 “I don’t want!”

“Why?!”

“I don’t know her address!”

“Then call her. Ask her. Whatever you can do!”

“I don’t have her number!”That’s true. I didn’t have her number. And of course I wouldn’t. Cause I didn’t want to.

“Take my phone then. I have it.”

If I were made of rubber, I was sure my jaw would have dropped to the floor literally. How amazing this Yuria was! Her movement was really fast that now she even had Mom’s number. Strangely, I wasn’t getting angrier or anything. Well, her way of getting closer to me clearly pissed me off, but somehow I became even curious about where all this lead into. I wanted to know what she would do next, and I didn’t know why.

Suddenly an idea popped in my head. A very, very nice idea.

“No Mom, I lied. I know her place.”

xxx

“Ehhhhh?!”

“Please Yuka-san! Please!” My bow couldn’t be more lower than now. I dragged Yuka-san outside once I got inside the manga store. Some staffs and customers turned to us and giving a snooping glare before Yuka-san shouted to someone to replace her position behind the cash register.

“Why don’t you give it yourself, Yagami-san?” Yuka-san scratched her unitchy head while her other hand tried to balance the yellow box I had dropped on. Clearly she was confused about what all it was. I just frankly asked her to deliver the cake to Yuria so that I wouldn’t face her by myself. Besides, she owned this store right? It would be very easy to Yuka-san to send Mom’s treat to her.

“Well…me…I have something to do right now. Ja, ne!” I wore a worry face as if I was late about something then I ran away leaving her astonished. I was afraid Yuria would come out of nowhere, like she always did and I don’t know why is that, and caught me here. That’d be useless for my effort asking help to Yuka-san. Furthermore, yesterday’s incident was unforgivable for me and I didn’t know what kind of face I should put on if I face her this time.

xxx

“Come in!”

“Excuse me Yuria-sama”

“She’s not coming huh? Well, I have to try another way then…”

“Eh? Y-you know?!”

“I’ve been watching you two from up here.”

“Well you see…ano…I’ll just put it here…”

“Thank you, Nakanishi-san.”

“Anytime, Yuria-sama. Shitsureishimasu...”

“Ano…”

“Ah! Yes?”

“What do you say if I’m willing to increase your wage?”

“Ah!! I will be very very grateful, Yuria-sama!”

“But you have to do something in return…”

“Anything! I will work harder for this store sake!”

“Haha…no, not that. We have enough staffs for that. It’s for me…how?”

“Umm…”

“Take it into your consideration.”

“Tell me what should I do.”

“Come here, listen…”

xxx


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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part V
« Reply #37 on: July 28, 2012, 06:17:55 PM »
wow! Yuria came up with a plan!

Can't wait to see what Yuria was planning :twisted:

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part V
« Reply #38 on: July 28, 2012, 10:50:18 PM »
what a persistent stalker you are yuria... :kekeke:

go get kuumin's heart :onioncheer:

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Re: Let There Be Love (Yagami Kumi x Kizaki Yuria) - Part V
« Reply #39 on: July 28, 2012, 11:09:37 PM »
Poor Kuumin, even her mother is on Yuria side hehe

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