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Re: Akiba Fight Club Prolouge
« Reply #120 on: August 01, 2012, 03:29:35 AM »
imagining the boyish jurina became fighter makes me drooling..she must be looked kakkoi~
so,she has feeling for rena..interesting..can't wait for your update..


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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 1
« Reply #121 on: August 01, 2012, 06:33:20 AM »
It's small but I got enough replies to convince myself to continue the story. Thank you all so much and don't worry I will make sure to include everyone else like I always do. I'm not the type that focuses on one main couple but I also like to share the spotlight with others. You must think I'm weird but all well. I'm just going to keep on doing what I do best and that is writing! Please enjoy this first chapter!
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Chapter 1

Jurina woke up and found an empty space next to her like always. Rena always got up and left early because she had other jobs to work to. Jurina walked into the kitchen and saw food placed out on the table. Next to it was a note from Rena.

"Your fight starts the same time as last night. Eat up and train a little but take it easy. Make sure you're fully rested for today's fight. Rena."

Jurina ate her breakfast and then walked into the training room to lift some weights. But then her phone rang indicating she got a text.

"Meet me at the park. I found out something interesting. Nezumi"

"What does that mouse want?"

Nezumi real name Watanabe Mayu was somewhat a friend of Jurina. She was one of the fighters that escaped the death penalty of the Akiba Fight Club. Now she works as in informant for other fighters. Even though Mayu doesn't fight anymore, she can still defend herself if you mess with her. Jurina walked over and sat at the bench where they usually met. A couple minutes later Nezumi came up from behind Jurina.

"Hello Center." she said in that same monotone voice of hers.

"Hello Nezumi. So what is it you want to show me?"

"I have some interesting information about the girl you're fighting tonight." Mayuyu said.

"Is it good?" Jurina asked.

"You wanna find out?"

"I'll listen."

"The girl you're fighting has some experience in kick boxing. She's known for striking the legs so be on the look out. She mainly uses her legs so take them out and you basically win the fight."

"That is good. Thanks for the tip."

"Hey don't think you're getting this for free."

"Oh right. Here."

Jurina handed Mayuyu a small wad of cash.

"Thanks for doing business."

"Whatever. I'll be leaving now."

Jurina turned around but stopped when she saw the blank expression of a very familiar face.

"Jesus Black don't sneak up on me."

Black, real name Kashiwagi Yuki was Mayuyu's partner. She was basically her bouncer where if anything went wrong then she would step in. The only reason why Yuki is with Mayuyu is because she has a kid back home and Mayuyu is letting her stay at her place. She used to be on a special attack force squad but when she got pregnant she was forced off the squad. Yuki is known for her increrdible speed and blending in with the dark.

"Ah about time you showed up Black."  Mayuyu said. 

"Sorry I had a little business to take care of." Yukirin said.

"What things?"

"Them."

Yukirin pointed at the pile of badly beaten men on the ground.

"Mayuyu what did you do to tick off the mafia again?" Yukirin said.

"Nothing. All I did was take what they owed me." Mayuyu said.

"Did you really have to kill their boss though?"

"Hey that pervert tried to have his way with me everytime I visited."

"Ahh what am I going to do with you?"

"You can come with me and we can go get some sushi."

"That sounds better than beating up people."

"Then let's go."

"Ok. Oh by the way Jurina, Sado was looking for you."

"What does she want?"

"Don't know. All I know is she wanted to talk to you about something."

"Ok thanks."

Jurina went to a hostess club where a security guard escorted her to the back room.

"Ahh Jurina you came. Looks like Black delivered my message to you."

"Yeah. So what is it you wanted to talk to me about Sado?"

"We'll get to that soon but first let's have a drink."

"You know I can't drink. I'm underage."

"I meant me silly. You can have some juice. Now come and sit."

Jurina walked over and sat next to Sado as a waitor came in and poured some juice. Sado, real name Shinoda Mariko was the owner of every hostess club in both Akihabara and Shinjuku. She's known to be very powerful in the business and no one dares to mess with her. Everyone calls her Sado for a reason because Mariko is known for being a huge sadist. Mariko was like a big sister to Jurina. During her childhood, Mariko would watch over when Rena was busy and teach her many things about conning men.

"I wanted to congratulate you on your win in your first fight. I'm so proud of you!"

Mariko leaned in and hugged Jurina.

"Is that all you wanted to tell me? Because if that's it then I'm going to leave." Juina said.

"Don't leave yet! I still have more to tell you!" Sado said.

"What?"

"I got you a new punching bag. It'll be waiting for you when you get home. Try not to beat the crap out of it like you did the last time."

"Hey it's a punching bag. It's what they're for."

"Yeah but they're expensive."

"Please Sado. You have more money than you have girls. Speaking of which here comes one now."

Suddenly one of Mariko's hostesses came in wearing a tight red dress and heals.

"Mou Sado I can't do this anymore! Can I switch to a body guard or something?"

"Torigoya calm down. What happed this time?"

"Her!"

Torigoya pointed at the small girl next to her who came in out of nowhere.

"Yuko what did you do?"

"Hey I only touched her boobs once today!"

"More like five times!"

Torigoya, real name Kojima Haruna. She works at Mariko's club because this was the only job she's able to hold down. She's a walking clutz with her other jobs. Haruna isn't really a good fighter but she's known for being able to see people's memories and make them have mental breakdowns. It's really scary if you ever experience it and thankfully Jurina never has.

"I couldn't help it! Nyannyan is so sexy in red!"

Yuko, real name Oshima Yuko. She's a real pervert when it comes to being around Haurna but actually she's a pretty strong fighter. Sado once told Jurina that Yuko helped pull Rena out of the abyss when she was down and helped her get back up. Yuko overall is the most respected amoung the group and Jurina sees her as her perverted uncle. But despite that she gets along pretty well with Yuko.

"Oh hey Jurina! I heard about your victory in last nights fight. Good job!"

"Thanks."

"By the way how are you doing? Are they getting any bigger?" Yuko said giving Jurina a perverted look.

"Shut up you perverted squirrel."

"Ahh you still have ways to go. Unlike Nyannyan here who is in perfect shape!"

Yuko latched onto Haruna and Haruna tried to shake her off.

"Sado do something!"

"Yuko if you don't let go you'll be banned from the club for two weeks."

"NO!"

Yuko let go and ran over to the chair next to Mariko.

"Thanks Sado. Oh and congrats on the fight last night Jurina." Haruna said.

"Thanks. Now I better get going. I'll see you later."

"Ahh wait!" Mariko said.

"What?"

"Come and give your nee-chan a kiss."

"Aww do I have to."

"Jurina."

Jurina ran over and gave Mariko a quick peck on the cheek. Jurina would do that all the time when she was little but now that she's older it's just embarrassing. Jurina thinks Mariko enjoys seeing her embarrassed. She is a sadist after all. Jurina was walking down the streets when she ran into Atsuko and Minami.

"Hey Jurina we watched your fight last night. You did great out there."

Minami, real name Takahashi Minami. Her and Atsuko have been good friends for a long time. Minami is a good fighter but when she's with Atsuko she's even stronger. Oh and she's really short. Jurina couldn't believe how short she was when she first met Minami. Not to mention she always wears a bow making it look like she's some little kid.

"Ne Takamina let's go or we're going to be late to the movies."

Atsuko, real name Maeda Atsuko. She's like Minami's wife and is always around her. Atsuko is a really strong fighter. Jurina and her once got into a fight and Jurina almost got plumbed if Rena weren't there. Atsuko only fights when someone questions her. Otherwise she's just a giggly girl friend who is madly in love with Minami.

"I'm sorry Acchan we'll get moving. We'll see you later Jurina!"

THe two lovers ran over and Jurina decided to head home. When she arrived, Rena had gotten back from work and was now sitting at he kitchen table eating Melonpan while reading a book.

"How was it?" Jurina asked.

"Same as ever. How was your day? Did you train like I told you?" Rena said.

"I didn't get a chance because Nezumi called. Then Black told me Mariko wanted to meet me so I went to her club."

"Oh well that's alright. You're oppenent is fairly easy today. She's a kick boxer so watch her feet."

"Thanks Nezumi already told me."

"Of course she would already know. Well then let's go."

Rena and Jurina went to the club where there was another large crowd. There must have been a good fight earlier because there was a lot of blood in the ring. A half hour later it was Jurina's turn and she was ready.

"First up we have Center and her challenger is Mad Dog!"

The bell rang and the fight started. Mayuyu was right when she said the girl was a kick boxer. Mad Dog tried kicking Jurina but she blocked it. However there was a lot of force in it. Mad Dog was about to go in for another attack but then Jurina grabbed her leg and twisted it until she heard a loud crack. Then she finished her with a punch to the gut and Mad Dog was down.

"Winner is Center!"

The crowd cheered and Jurina walked off to back stage.

"Well that was a quick fight." Rena said.

"I didn't really want to stay too long. Besides she wasn't even worth using my full strength on her." Jurina said.

"You won and that's all that matters. Grab your bag and we'll head home."

"Right."

Jurina and Rena left for home once more. This time Jurina was determined to get some actual training done. But sleep was beckoning Jurina to come and rest. She reached her limit and then finally went to bed with Rena who was already sleeping.

"I wonder how long it is going to take..." Jurina wondered.

"How long it is going to take for me to reach my goal."

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There's chapter 1! I hope everyone liked it and enjoyed the backgrounds I put them in. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 1
« Reply #122 on: August 01, 2012, 07:03:39 AM »
Yaaaay new story, with Jurina as the main character too! Poor Jurina though, with her parents dying and stuff. Maybe she should turn into Batman at the end of the story...

Haha, Mariko and Jurina are cute though. I always like their friendship, especially in real life. I hope you'll update soon, I want to know who Jurina is fighting next, and I'm sure you'll throw in a few twists in there too, so I can't wait :D

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 1
« Reply #123 on: August 01, 2012, 08:37:47 AM »
WOw good  its like majisuka but better because yuucha is alive.. aww kojiyuu atsumina and sado like it a lot :D

but jurina we need more interesting fights

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 1
« Reply #124 on: August 01, 2012, 11:45:59 AM »
ahhhhhhhh~ BlackxNezumi! how much I waited for this!!!!!!!!



thanks for the update!
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 1
« Reply #125 on: August 01, 2012, 03:19:25 PM »
I love this fic  :shy2:
center is cool  :cool1:
when is problems going to start miyumi-san  :kekeke:
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 2
« Reply #126 on: August 01, 2012, 05:48:35 PM »
Minna thank you for your comments! Don't worry there will be problems in the future. The fights will get brutal and and drama intense. I'm just having Jurina take the easy road so she won't know what's coming when I throw her a curve ball. I hope you enjoy this chapter!
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Chapter 2

Jurina woke up to the sound of someone knocking at the door. She walked over and when she opened the door, Nezumi was standing there with Black.

"You wanna go beat up some thugs for me?" Nezumi said.

"Why should I?" Jurina said.

"Because you'll get paid."

"Sounds good enough. But why not have Black do it?"

"She got into a bad fight last night when a deal went bad. I want you to beat them up for me as revenge."

"Ok so where are we heading?"

"A bar in Shibuya."

"Alright then let's make this quick."

Jurina and Nezumi arrived at the bar and watched a couple people come in.

"Just go in there and beat as many people up."

"Are they armed?"

"Yeah but Black unloaded all of them so you should be fine."

"Alright then I'm going in."

Jurina walked in where there was a group of guys sitting at one large table. The boss saw Jurina and stopped everything.

"Little girl, what are you doing here?"

"I came here to do something for a friend."

"Oh? And what would that be?"

"I came here to kick your ass."

Jurina right jabbed a guy taking him out and then drop kicking the next guy. She jumped up to avoid two guys coming at her and slammed down hard on them. One pulled out his gun and tried to fire but nothing came out. Jurina took the gun and bashed the guy's head. Three other guys came at Jurina all at once but all Jurina had to do was duck and they took out each other. All that was left was the boss.

"Well little girl you've got some skill there. How about you come work for me?"

"No way old man."

"Fine then."

The man reached into his pocket and pulled out a switch blade knife.

"It's such a shame to. You are very beautiful."

The boss came at Jurina and tried to slash Jurina's chest. But Jurina managed to get back and manuver around to the back. She kicked his back sending him flying forward onto a chair. Then Jurina took a beer bottle and broke the end revealing several sharp spots. Jurina held the bottle right up close to the boss's neck.

"So you're going to kill me?"

"No."

Jurina whacked him in the back of the neck knocking him out. Then she reached into his pocket and pulled out a large wad of cash. She also took the cash from the other guys as well. Jurina walked out of the bar where Nezumi and Black were waiting for her.

"Did you kill them?"

"No I didn't."

"Why not?"

"Because I'm a fighter. Not a killer."

There was one rule that Rena taught Jurina that she must always follow. You must never take a life without having a good reason to. Rena told Jurina she could fight and beat them until they're unconsious but never kill them. If you take one's life without reason then you have no reason to live.

"So where's my money?"

"You already got it. The money you took from the guys was your payment." Nezumi said.

"Ok then I guess I'll be seeing you around. Seeya."

"Try not to get yourself killed in tonight's fight."

"Why?"

"You'll see."

Jurina wanted to question Nezumi but she was already gone. Having nothing better to do, Jurina decided to go back home. But when she got home she found the place trashed. In the middle of the reckage was Rena who was bleeding.

"Rena!"

"Jurina? Ahh what happened?"

"I don't know I just showed up." Jurina said.

"Well when I came home I found our place a mess. Then I felt someone sneak up behind me and try to kill me. But I fought back and managed to scare them off." Rena said.

"Who do you think it was?"

"I got a good look at them. It was your oppenent for tonight's fight."

"What?

"Jurina relax. She did this only to get you angry. Keep your cool otherwise you'll lose your fight."

"I'm gonna kill her."

"Jurina."

Rena grabbed Jurina and made her look at her. Look into those souless brown eyes that always made Jurina calm down when she was angry.

"Listen you need to keep your cool. If you lose now parents would've died for nothing. Do you understand?"

"Yeah."

"Good then get ready because your fight starts in an hour."

"Alright thanks."

"And remember Jurina. Keep your cool."

An hour later Jurina arrived at the club and was ready to pumble someone. She stepped up to the ring ready to face her opponent.

"Today's match is Center against Mocchi! Fight!"

"Did you like the little suprise I left at your place?" Mocchi said.

"Shut up and fight!"

Jurina came at Mocchi and swung at her. But Mocchi blocked it and counter attacked with a punch. She hit Jurina square in the chest and Jurina could feel the power. Mocchi punched Jurina again right in the stomach causing her to fall to her knees.

"Is that all you got? You know maybe when I'm done with you I'll go after your teacher."

"Don't you dare touch her!"

In a fit of rage Jurina tried tackling Mocchi but missed and ended up slamming into the ropes.

"Oo is someone angry? Did I upset little Center?"

"You shut up!"

Jurina tried to do a low kick but Mocchi jumped and high kicked Jurina's face.

"You've got to be kidding me. I thought you were better than this."

"Shut up!"

Jurina tried another charge but once again missed and this time instead of slamming into the ropes, Mocchi caught her and knocked her onto the ground. Then she put her foot on Jurina's stomach and started pressing down on it. Jurina could feel her insides being flatened like a pancake.

"Center!"

Jurina looked over and saw Rena staring at her with cold eyes. Those cold eyes calmed Jurina down and was now ready to fight. Jurina grabbed Mocchi's foot and twisted it causing it to break. Mocchi stepped back and Jurina jumped back up.

"You're going to pay."

Jurina punched Mocchi in the stomach and then twice in the chest. Then she did three rounds to the face and one more to the stomach. To finish it all off, Jurina took Mocchi and threw her out of the ring into the crowd.

"Winner! Center!"

The crowd cheered as Jurina walked out of the ring.

"You almost lost it there." Rena said.

"I know that." Jurina said.

"You can't do that in a fight."

"I know!"

"Look Jurina I'm just trying to help."

"Sorry. Let's go home."

Jurina and Rena walked out to the car but was stopped. Standing in front of them was a young girl holding a knife.

"Giver her back! Give my onee-chan back!" she screamed.

"What?"

"Jurina this is the younger sister of Mocchi."

"Oh.."

"Give my onee-chan back!"

"Hey put the knife down. No one wants to get hurt here." Jurina said.

"Give her back!"

The girl charged at Jurina and tried stabbing her. But Jurina knocked the knife out of her hands and then pushed her down.

"Listen! If you want to avenge your sister then train hard and work for your goals. Become stronger and then maybe you'll be able to avenge your sister."

Jurina and Rena got in the car and drove off.

"I can't believe you said that." Rena said.

"You told me those exact words when you found me in a situation like that. I thought I would tell her the same." Jurina said.

"You handled it very nicely."

"Thanks. It's a shame though. Seeing a young girl like that swinging a knife around."

"Well think. That could've been you nine years ago trying to charge straight into the fight club."

"Maybe maybe not. But you found me and because of that I'm not some piece of trash on the street."

"I only took you in because you had that look in your eyes."

"What look?"

"The looks of a killer."

"What?"

Jurina and Rena arrived home and found the place sparkling clean. There sitting on the couch was Black and Nezumi along with Atsuko and Minami.

"What are you all doing here?" Jurina asked.

"We heard your place got trashed so we came over and cleaned it up a bit." Minami said.

"What do you think? Do you like the flowers I put in the kitchen?" Atsuko said.

"Yeah they're nice."

"So why are you really here?" Rena asked.

"There's going to be a shipment of certain goods I need and I need your help." Nezumi said.

"What kind of goods?"

"Some new spy equipment that I could use. It'd be very helpful if you assisted us because there's also a ton of other stuff that can be sold on the black market. I'll split whatever cash we manage to make."

"Sounds good. Who are we stealing from?"

"The police department."

"What?"

"The police got some new spy gear from the US that's supposed to be really good and I want in on it."

"If the cops catch us then we're done for." Jurina said.

"Don't worry I got the whole escape thing planned out. All I need is you guys to help me a little."

"Take out the guards and grab the goods." Black said.

"And if we get caught?"

"I'll call Sado and she'll get you out." Nezumi said.

"So are you in or not?"

"Well since you fixed our place then I guess we're in."

"Sweet. Then meet at the shipping docks tomorrow around ten. That's when the goods are supposed to arrive."

"Alright I'll see you then."

Nezumi, Black, Atsuko, and Minami all left.

"Are we really going to help them?" Jurina said.

"We got no chocie. Even if we say no she'll still find a way to make us." Rena said.

"Ok so then tomorrow we're going to steal from the police. Hooray."

"Just be careful and you'll be fine."

"You're not going to fight?" Jurina said.

"I don't fight anymore." Rena said.

"Why not?"

"That's something you don't need to know."

Rena left without another word leaving Jurina alone. Over the nine years Jurina has known Rena, she never knew why Rena quit fighting. Jurina never pressed into it because she knew Rena would only get mad. Jurina would never want Rena to hate her so she never asked questions. But Jurina would like to know one day why Rena stopped fighting.

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Chapter 2 done! Please tell me what you think! Jurina is going on a heist! Will she succeed or will she be caught by the cops? Look forward to the next chapter and find out!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 2
« Reply #127 on: August 01, 2012, 06:05:28 PM »
Jurina has The looks of a killer  :scared:
next time they are to steal from a police dep'  :stoned:
be careful you two  :fainted:
I wonder what is Rena's secret  :dunno:
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 2
« Reply #128 on: August 01, 2012, 08:57:36 PM »
Ohhh very interesting update here. Jurina seriously is starting to remind me of Batman now, haha her parents died in front of her, she doesn't kill, and Rena could totally be Alfred lol.

But, I'm excited for the next chapter, I hope they don't get caught. Update soon please!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 3
« Reply #129 on: August 01, 2012, 10:44:30 PM »
mo-chan: Yes I too wonder what Rena's secret is. It's still in development so for now, it will remain a mystery.

Sasshii: After looking at it, the story does remind me of Batman. Nice pointer. Let's see if they do get caught shall we?


It's time to find out whether or not Jurina will pull off the heist successfully. Will they make it or will they get caught? Please enjoy the chapter and find out!
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Chapter 3

"Are you ready?"

"Let's do this."

Jurina, Minami, and Atsuko all headed for the dock.

"So what are we looking for?" Atsuko asked.

"We're looking for a metal brief case." Minami said.

"And where is it?"

"On the boat."

"You mean that thing!"

Jurina pointed at the large cargo boat just pulling into port.

"Yeah. Nezumi said the case in in the captain's quarters." Minami said.

"What's that?"

"The fanciest room on that floating piece of crap."

"Oh."

"Nezumi said we got an hour before the cops show up so we need to work fast." Atsuko said.

"How do ou suppose we get on the boat?"

"Nezumi already had that planned out."

Right as Minami said that, Black walked over in dock worker uniform and a box with a cart.

"Get in."

"You can't be serious."

"Just get in."

Minami, Atsuko and Jurina all loaded into the box and Black wheeled them onto the ship.

"Ahh someone touched my butt!"

"Atsuko that was me."

"Minami now is not the time for that."

"It wasn't on purpose!"

"Both of you shut up. We're almost here."

They stopped moving and Black tapped on the box twice. That was their signal to jump out. Minami opened the box and everyone got out one by one.

"So where do you think the captain's quarters are?"

"Proabably below the deck. We need to get inside the boat." Minami said.

"Where's the closest stairs?"

"Over there!"

Atsuko pointed at a nearby door with the picture of a guy and a stair way.

"Good eye Acchan!"

Everyone went down the stairs and hid behind some shipping containers.

"I think I see the captain's quarters. It's right over there!"

"But we'll have to cross a wide open area. How are we going to get there without being detected?"

"I got it covered."

Atsuko walked up right into the open and started crying.

"Someone please help! I think I'm lost!"

All the dock workers started to surround Atsuko leaving a spot for Jurina and Minami to sneak through.

"Let's move now!"

Minami and Jurina snuck in undetected thanks to Atsuko.

"If they do anything funny to my Acchan I'm going to throw them over board."

"Minami focus. We got to find the case. Where do you think it is?"

"There it is!"

Minami pointed to the captain's desk where the case was sitting. Jurina grabbed it but right as she did, she could hear the door open.

"Minami hide!"

Jurina hid under the desk and Minami hid behind a chair. The door opened and Jurina could hear footsteps come in.

"Hey where's the case?"

She could hear the captian look around and not find anything. He pulled the chair out from under the desk and knew she was screwed if he found her. Right as the captain was going to look under the desk, another man walked in.

"Captain we got a young girl here who appears to have stowed away on the ship."

"What?"

The captian walked out and then Jurina and Minami came out of hiding.

"Acchan is out there! We gotta get her!"

"Then let's go. I got the stuff."

Jurina and Minami walked out and found Atsuko being restrained by two of the dock workers.

"Acchan!"

"Takamina!"

"Sound the alarm we got intruders!"

A crew worker flipped a switch and the alarm went off.

"So much for sneaking out of here."

Jurina ran over and took out the two guys holding Atsuko.

"Let's run!"

Minami, Jurina, and Atsuko ran towards the stairs but found them blocked off by a bunch of guards.

"We're trapped!"

But then in a blink of an eye all the guys were down for the count.

"Black!"

"Get moving. The cops have already showed up."

"Thanks!"

They ran up stairs up to the main deck where police were just starting to show up.

"What do we do now?"

"Hey you guys!"

Everyone looked to down and saw Nezumi and Black on a boat.

"Toss the stuff down here!"

Minami dropped the case and then Black threw a bag up to them.

"Wait where are you going!" Minami said.

"I got what I wanted. You guys are on you're own. You better put those suits on before the cops get on!" Nezumi said.

"Nezumi you son of a-"

"Minami they're coming!"

"Quick open the bag!"

Minami opened the bag and found three costumes.

"Dibs on the Luigi!" Atsuko said.

"Alright then I get the Yoshi outfit." Jurina said.

"Ehh. Why do I have to wear the Mariko outfit?"

"Just put it on!"

They all quickly dressed right as the cops started to board the ship.

"FREEZE!"

The spotlight from a helicopter shined down on them and there were about a dozen cops there.

"What the hell?" one of the cops said.

"HQ this is Tamaki speaking. We got Mario, Luigi and Yoshi. How are we supposed to handle them?"

"Minami what do we do?"

"I don't know Acchan."

"Hey there's something in the back of my costume."

Jurina reached into her sack and pulled out a egg.

"What is that?"

"I don't know."

"Well throw it and find out."

Jurina chucked the egg at the cops and right when they hit the ground, a cloud of black smoke englufed the cops.

"Now's our chance!"

"Let's a go!"

They all started running away from the cops but it didn't take long for them to start chasing after them.

"They're catching up! Isn't there anything we can use to slow them down?"

"I think I have something!"

Minami reached into her Mario costume and pulled out a puch of banana peels.

"Is this some sport of joke?"

"Just throw them!"

Minami threw the banana peels and some of the cops actually managed to slip on them.

"You guys we're getting close to the end!" Jurina said.

"Hey look!"

In the water was a green boat with a L on it.

"Get in!"

Everyone jumped into the water and onto the boat.

"Luigi drive!"

Atsuko started the boat and the three drove away. But the cops were right behind them on their speed boats.

"What do we do!" Minami said.

"Press that button with the shell on it!"

Minami pressed the buton and a green missle shot out and crashed into the boat.

"What the heck!"

"They're still after us!"

"Here let's try this button."

Jurina pressed a red button that had the picture of three red shells on it. The boat shot out three red missles at the boats. The boats dodged the missles but Jurina saw them turn around and smash all the boats.

"You guys they're still catching up!"

"Press the bullet button!"

Minami presed the black button with the picture of a bullet on it. As soon as she did, Jurina was whipped back and the boat started to go really fast. They didn't know how to slow down the boat and we're heading straight towards a dead end.

"You guys grab onto me!" Jurina said.

Atsuko and Minami grabbed onto Jurina and then Jurina jumped into the air right before the boat crashed. Jurina saw this in video games and she would give it a try. Jurina started to flutter kick in the air and surpringly it actually worked. Jurina flutter kicked over the the nearby roof.

"That was awesome!" Atsuko said.

"Let's get out of here before the cops start looking for us again." 

When Jurina and the others got home, they found Nezumi and Black waiting for them.

"You got some nerve." Minami said ready to punch Nezumi.

Black got in between the two ready to fight but then Nezumi called her off.

"I did that becasue the boat wouldn't carry us all." Nezumi said.

"Ok then why they heck did you give us those ridiculous costumes?" Jurina said.

"To keep you identities hidden. Look."

Nezumi turned on the TV and the news came on talking about their heist.

"Just a couple minutes ago, Mario, Luigi and Yoshi broke into a cargo ship holding valuable spy equipment for the police and stole it. When police tried to persu the theives they ended up losing them. Police are searching for them but it is doubtful they'll find the actual culprit."

"See?"

"Ohhhh. Now i get it."

"Yes and now here is the money I promised you."

Nezumi handed each of them an envolope full of cash.

"Sweet thanks." Minami said.

"Good then I'll be leaving."

"Ey Mario!" Atsuko said.

"Ey Luigi!" Minami said.

"We gotta go rescue the princess!"

"That we do. Let's a go!"

"Mario wait!"

"What!"

"Eat some mushrooms first. You too tiny."

"Shut up Luigi!"

"Thank god Rena isn't here to see me in this stupid outfit." Jurina said.

"Uhh Jurina."

Acchan pointed at the door way at a now shocked Rena holding a bag of groceries.

"Rena it's not what you think!"

Rena just stood there silent not sure what to say. Then she finally said,

"I'm sorry Yoshi but Princess Peach is out right now. Would you like me to make you some mushrooms?"

Atsuko and Minami started laughing like crazy and Jurina just blushed.

"Mou Rena!"

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Chapter 3 is a success! They all made it and didn't get caught. They ended up having a fun Mario action filled adventure and got away with the goods. Find out what happens next time in my next chapter. Please tell me what you think!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 3
« Reply #130 on: August 01, 2012, 11:27:50 PM »
Nezupmi is so *****  :temper: :angry1:
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 3
« Reply #131 on: August 02, 2012, 01:27:34 AM »
LOL I loved all the Mario Kart references in here. I'm glad they didn't get caught though .

I think the twist at the end of the story should be that Jurina sees the silhouette of a bat through her window and decides to spend the rest of her life dressed as a bat and beating up villains. LOL. Okay, no more batman jokes after this I swear lol.

I can't wait for the next chapter though, please update soon :D

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« Reply #132 on: August 02, 2012, 02:19:52 AM »
Hey miyumi-chan! Sorry for the late comment! Been busy with work recently :bleed eyes:

Anyway, I'm liking the new Fight Club story. It's interesting that you weaved in the Majisuka characters and gave a twist to their relationships. I've always love the idea of Nezumi x Black so I'm really happy to see them together here :inlove: I hope to see how these two seemingly cold-hearted people interact in private and also how they handle Black's child. Nezumi please kill the man who made Black pregnant :P

P.S. Nezumi used to be in Fight Club? Did she quit because she almost died in a match? Her fighting techniques are one of my favourites in Majisuka 2 as she uses the opponents' momentum against them instead of relying on brute strength (which we know she doesn't possess anyway LOL).

Looking forward to your next update!! :deco:

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« Reply #133 on: August 02, 2012, 02:35:50 AM »
WOW You are fast!
Second chance was so cute~
And I like the new fic

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« Reply #134 on: August 02, 2012, 06:13:55 AM »
jajajaj the chapter 3 are awesome.. the costume love it... :D

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« Reply #135 on: August 02, 2012, 07:28:32 AM »
mo-chan: Stay calm mo-chan! Nezumi had her reasons! But don't worry, Jurina will have her revenge and boy will it be sweet.  :twisted:

Sasshii: I like your Batman jokes. I find them funny. Tell as many of them as you like! It's fun to read them.  :lol:

seigus: Ah I was wondering where you were. I haven't seen you update for a while so I was getting worried. But I'm glad to see you're ok and just busy with work. Gambate! Ah and the Nezumi Black thing is interesting. Nezumi didn't quit but lost however she escaped the death penalty. And I saw what you crossed out, don't worry there will be a chapter where Nezumi steps in  :twisted:

kahem: Thank you for reading my new fic. I hope you enjoy it as much as everyone else! XD


Chapter 4 is here! And there's two more people I haven't introduced yet! Can you guess who? Well this next chapter is going to be their first debut! Enjoy.
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Chapter 4

Jurina woke up and saw a note on the table in the kitchen.

"Jurina, Gakuran is looking for you. Rena."

"Gakuran? Haven't heard from her in a while. Wonder what she wants from me."

Jurina headed out to the usual palce Gakuran always hung out at. She walked into the DANSO cafe and took a seat. A couple minutes later Gakuran walked over and sat next to her.

"Glad you could make it." she said.

"You called me?"

Gakuran, real name Miyazawa Sae is a classic ikemen tomboy. She dresses like a guy and tends to attract a lot of young girls. She can be a player when she wants but is only obessed with one person and that's Atsuko. But because Minami is constantly protecting Atsuko, Gakuran can't go near her.

"I need you to get something from Nezumi for me."

"What is it?"

"I ordered some new photo books from her and I need you to go get them for me." Gakuran said.

"Why can't you go get them?" Jurina asked.

"Because last time I went I tried hitting on Black and Nezumi tried to kill me."

"Oh ok I'll do that. You really need to lay off Black. You know she belongs to Nezumi."

"Yeah but sometimes she's just so cute!"

"Whatever playboy."

Jurina met up with Nezumi at a cafe and got the books for Gakuran.

"It's a good thing she sent you." Nezumi said.

"Well she did tell me you tried to kill her."

"I was doing it to protect Black. I don't want anyone going near her."

"You hear that Black? Looks like Nezumi is the one protecting you rather than you protecting her."

Black just blushed and Nezumi got mad.

"Just give that playboy her books and tell her next time she tries to hit on my Yukirin I'll make her regret ever meeting me."

"Roger that."

Jurina went back to the DANSO cafe and found Gakuran talking to Chouhoku.

"Hey Choukoku." Jurina said.

"Hey Center."

Choukoku, real name Akimoto Sayaka is a fighter like Jurina only she doesn't fight in the fight clubs. She fights professionally in the boxing ring and is currently the champion. She's kinda huge for a girl her age and looks like a greek statue. But on the inside she's actually a real softy and secretly wishes to be cute and girly. Weird huh? Choukoku is basically the only one that keeps Gakuran from going all out on a girl.

"I got the books."

"Alright! Thanks a lot Center."

"What'd you get this time?" Choukoku asked.

"None of your business."

"Is it another Playboy?"

"Yes. But I only got a new one because Yuko took my other one."

"You two really are something. Oh by the way Center, Sado was looking for you. She said she had something to tell you."

"Alright thanks."

Jurina headed down to Sado's club and right when she walked in, a chair flew past her head.

"You b****!!" one of the hostesses said.

"Shut up you piece of s***!" another one said.

"Jurina just in time! Would you please take care of them? They've been fighing like this all day." Sado said.

"Why don't you stop them?"

"Because at first it was funny but now it's just plain annoying."

"Alright."

Jurina staightened her jacket and then walked between the two fighting hostesses.

"Ladies ladies can't we all just get along. If you behave, I'll treat both of you to a drink."

Jurina gave them that killer smile that Yuko called a "heart catcher" and both girls fell to their knees.

"Well done. Now come with me."

Sado took Jurina to the back room where Torigoya and Yuko were waiting.

"So what is it you need?" Jurina asked.

"I got a job for you and I need your help."

"What do I have to do?"

"There's been some underground trafficing of girls and I want some of them." Sado said.

"So how are we going to get them?"

"There's an auction going on tonight at a rival hostess club acrosss town. I need you, Torigoya and Yuko to go down there and get the girls and bring them back here. Oh and don't be afriad to blow the place up a little bit."

"Ok I'll keep that in mind. You guys let's go."

"Yay I get some fresh new girls!"

"Yuko no molesting the merchandise." Sado said.

"Ahh but Sado!"

"Another word and I'll ban you from seeing Torigoya!"

"No!"

"Good then get going."

"On it!"

Torigoya drove down to the club where the auction was being held. When they walked in, they found the girls linked together by chains. There were people bidding on the girls and Jurina knew that she wasn't here to buy them.

"Let's get started shall we?" 

Jurina ran up onto the stage and knocked the announcer guy down. Then she took the mic and said,

"Ok people listen up. We're here to take the girls and that's it. Unless you want to get your brain blown by my friend Torigoya and your bones crushed by Yuko, I would suggest you run."

All the biders ran while the security guards came in.

"I'll get the girls. Torigoya you got the guys?" Jurina said.

"I'm got them!"

"And Yuko?"

"I got these guys."

Yuko ran up and dropped kicked a guy in a face. Then she span around and took out two more guys with a double kick to the groin.

"Yuko don't take all of them!"

Torigoya grabbed two go guards and did her weird mind thing. She said something to them and then the next thing they knew, they started to attack other gurads. One thing Jurina forgot to mention is that Torigoya can also control people when they get mentally attacked by Torigoya. They become something like her puppets.

"You idiots! Quit fighting and go after them!"

Standing at the front in lepord print legwarmers and a pink jacket was Shibuya the club owner. Shibuya, real name Itano Tomomi. She's the owner of the club and used to be good friends with Sado. But then she left Sado to start her own business because she was tired of Sado's style. She's a decent fighter but Jurina could easily beat her up.

"Ah Shibuya! It's been a while!" Yuko said.

"Give me back my girls!"

Yuko and Shibuya started fighting. Meanwhile Jurina worked on getting the girls out.

"Don't worry we're going to take you somewhere safe just follow me."

Jurina led the girls out the back exit but there were more guards waiting for them.

"You wanna go?"

Jurina got into fighting position ready to fight. But the suddenly someone snuck behind them and knocked them out.

"Gakuran!"

"Hey! I heard what was going on so I came to help. These the girls?"

"Yeah."

"Ok. Sado got a bus for you to use. Get the girls in. Ladies let's move."

The girls happily followed Gakuran onto the bus. Then a couple minutes later Yuko and Torigoya came out.

"Where are the girls?" Yuko asked.

"Gakuran's got them. She's loading them onto a bus."

"What! Oh she better not be touching that cute red head. I called dibs on her boobs!"

Yuko ran off followed by Jurina and Torigoya.

"Is everyone on!"

"Yeah let's move!"

"Alrigh hold on tight!"

Gakuran slammed on the gas and the bus moved forward. Once they were on the main road, they thought they were safe. But then three black cars came up from behind and surrounded the bus. Then one guy stuck out his arm from the window with a gun.

"Crap Gakuran pull back!"

Gakuran slammed the brakes and everyone flew forward. Then Gakuran did an illegal U-turn in the middle of the street and started heading the other way.

"We got to get rid of them."

"I go an idea!"

Yuko took out a small gun from her jacket.

"Where did you get that!"

"I borrowed it from Sado. Now move aside."

Yuko leaned out the window and started shooting at the tires of the cars. She managed to take out one but there were still two more. Just then Gakuran hit a bump and the back door swung open. One of the girls fell out of her seat and almost fell out of the bus.

"Crap!"

Jurina ran over and grabbed the girl's hand before she completely fell out. Using her feet to keep her inside, Jurina used both hands and tried to pull the girl in but she was too heavy. Not to mention they were drivin on a upwards slope and gravity wasn't helping. The cars were getting closer and one of the guys pulled out a gun.

"Yuko toss me the gun!"

Yuko tossed the gun to Jurina who caught it midair and started shooting. She hit the tires causing it to swurve out of control and ram into the other car crashing both of them.

"Nice one Center!" Gakuran said.

"Just hurry up and get us back to the club!"

Jurina managed to get all the girls safely back to the club. When she walked inside, she found a huge parfait waiting for her on a table.

"Eat up. You deserved it." Sado said.

"Thanks."

Jurina took a spoon and started eating.

"So how was Shibuya?"

"Pretty pissed when she saw us." Yuko said.

"You should've seen the look on her face." Torigoya said.

"Remind me to send her a thank you note. So how was it Jurina?"

"Good. I'm a little ticked though because I didn't get to fight anyone."

"I would be too. Come to think of it, you haven't had a fight in a while. I wonder why that is."

"I don't know. I'll go ask Rena she should be home by now. Thanks for the parfait." Jurina said.

"Any time honey."

Jurina arrived home and found Rena watching the news. It was a news report about a girl who was murdered last night.

"What are you watching?" Jurina asked.

"That girl was supposed to be your oppenent tonight." Rena said.

"What?"

"The reason why you haven't been getting any fights is because someone has been going around killing all your competition. I asked Nezumi and word is it's someone you used to know."

"Really? I don't remember anyone who could do this."

"Well we need to find out who. Otherwise the Fight Club is gonna start thinking somethings up."

"What do you think we should do?"

"We'll have to go on a stakeout."

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Uh oh someone's been going around killing Jurina's competition. Jurina better do something about it before she gets into the trouble? Who's the one that's been killing Jurina's opponents? Find out in the next chapter. Please tell me what you think!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 4
« Reply #136 on: August 02, 2012, 07:47:39 AM »
OMG!!! all fight scene was awesome :D

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« Reply #137 on: August 02, 2012, 08:15:20 AM »
 :shocked I wonder who is that killer~~

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 4
« Reply #138 on: August 02, 2012, 09:05:17 AM »
ahhhh~ It was lovely!!!! The NezuBlack action! Nezumi is so protective of Black! she belogs to her~ Thought I was expecting a kiss.......




anyway!!!!!!!!! please update soon~!
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 4
« Reply #139 on: August 02, 2012, 10:17:15 AM »
i love this fanfic looking foward to the next chapter  :twothumbs  :cow:

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