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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 8
« Reply #160 on: August 03, 2012, 05:59:50 PM »
@kahem: yes yuko is awesom. She's the best but so is Haruna. And don't worry, Jurina will have her chance.  :P

@Sasshii: Yuko and Haruna were badass. And yeah I think I will put Sasshi in. I laughed when you called me Batman. Is that my new nickname now?  :lol:

@yuukimoko: Well it's not that Nezumi hates Black's son but she sees him as a bother because he gets in the way when she tries to fight for Black's love.  :cry:

@Ricchan_Sawa: Ano the thing you talked about something from my previous story Second Chance. It's been completed so keep reading. But the one I'm working is new. I wonder are you new? If you are welcome to the forum.  :welcome

@mo-chan: Don't worry mo-chan they will have their kiss moment. Just wait a little longer! I know it must be hard but hang in there! :twothumbs

@kurogumi: Ahh gomen! I know everyone is getting antsy for the kiss scene but don't worry just wait a ittle longer! Remember how chapter 10 is always a 2 parter? Well I'm saving it for a double kiss 2 parter so please just hang in there a little longer! I'm sory for making you wait! :cry:


Hoho everyone is wanting a kiss scene so badly. Gosh you must think I'm terrible for teasing all of you. But don't worry it'll come soon. Just wait a little longer. So for now I hope you enjoy this chaper. Enjoy!
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Chapter 8

It was a quiet day today. Rena had the day off today so she was home and Jurina wasn't planning on going anywhere while Rena was there. Rena was writing something while Jurina was watching the TV. Then the door bell rang out of nowhere. Jurina got up to go answer it and found Black and and Nezumi with Black holding her child.

"Hey Nezumi. What's up?"

"I have to go somewhere so I need you to watch Black and her kid." Nezumi said.

"You're going somewhere without Black?" Jurina said.

"Yeah so watch her."

"I don't think Black needs to be watched."

"I just don't want her to get hurt while I'm gone so watch her. I'm being chased down by a couple and I don't want the going after Black."

"No problem."

"I'll see you in a couple hours Black."

"Ok."

Black walked in while Nezumi left. Jurina explained to Rena what was going on and she didn't mind.

"Hello Rena."

"Hello Black."

"So how old is he?" Rena asked.

"About a year now." Black said.

"He's changed since the last time I saw him. Have you been handling him well?"

"Sometimes. Nezumi doesn't really like him so I'm usually the one to calm him when he starts crying. But she feeds him when I'm too tired and changes his diaper which is a really huge help."

"That's good. Do you like being with Nezumi?"

"Yes. But sometimes I miss you."

There was a moment of silnece but then it was broken by the sound of Black's son crying.

"He must be hungry. Here hold him for a minute."

Black handed the baby to Jurina who tried doing the same thing Rena did that one time but was having a hard time.

"Jurina support the bottom."

"Hai."

Jurina fixed her position and then finally got the baby into the proper position.

"Ehh? Oh no I forgot to bring the baby food."

"Jurina take Black up to the store and I'll watch the baby."

"Ok."

Jurina handed the crying baby to Rena while Jurina and Black left for the store. They walked in silence until Jurina finally broke silence.

"So what was it like?"

"Like what?"

"Having Rena around to help you take care of the baby." Jurina asked.

"Oh. Well it was nice. She did way more than what Nezumi did." Black said.

"If it was so nice being with Rena then why did you leave?"

"Well things happened and then I decided to leave."

"What kind of things?"

"Bad things. Things I really don't want to talk about."

"Please tell me. I've been with Rena for nine years and I still don't know anything about her. You don't have to tell me the whole story. Just a small part. Please."

Jurina gave Black a puppy dog look and Black couldn't resist.

"Alright I'll tell you."

"Yes!"

"Back when Black and I were together, there were certain events that took place that made Rena very unstable." Black said.

"Unstable?" Jurina said.

"She got very violent. I was afraid she would hurt my son so I left. I started working at grocery store and living in a run down place. But then one day I was assulted by guys and Nezumi came and saved me. She offered me a food and shelter so I couldn't refuse. So now ever since I've been happily living with Nezumi."

"You don't look happy."

"Oh trust me I am. Nezumi has been really kind to me ever since the day I moved in."

"So what caused Rena to get violent?"

"That's something for you to ask Rena about."

"Ok. Thank you for telling me this."

They arrived at the store and got what they wanted. Then they walked home and found Rena on the couch sleeping while holding the baby. Jurina thought Rena looked like a mother with her child but then she remembered it wasn't her child. Black walked over and took the baby. But as soon as she did, he woke up and started crying.

"Why are you crying? You were just asleep minutes ago."

"Maybe he misses Rena."

"Eh?"

Just then Rena woke up and saw Black and Jurina.

"Hey you guys are back. Did you get the food?"

"Yeah we did. You looked pretty relaxed there for a while." Jurina said.

"Well when you're siting on a couch rocking a baby back and fourth you kinda get sleepy." Rena said.

"Let's feed him. Center come and help me."

Jurina walked over to Black who was getting a container of baby food open. Jurina handed Black a spoon and she used to to scoope the food.

"Here you go. Say ahhh."

The baby refused to eat.

"Ehh? Come on you have to eat. I want you to grow up and be strong."

The baby still refused to eat.

"Black you know that store stuff is gross." Rena said.

"Yeah but it's the only thing I can afford." Black said.

"How about I try this. My mother would do this when I wouldn't eat food when I was little."

Jurina walked over and took the spoon from Rena.

"Ne look over here. Look."

Jurina took the food and placed it into her mouth. Then she made a sound to make it look good even though her face said something else. The baby reached out wanting some food so Jurina scooped some more and this time he ate it. She handed the spoon back to Black and then ran over to the sink to wash her mouth at.

"God that stuff tastes awful." Jurina said.

"Tell me about it." Rena said.

"Thank you Jurina. I think you'll make a great mom one day."

"Please the last thing I need is a kid." 

"How about I make us some apples slices." Black said.

"That sounds great."

Black walked over to the kitchen and pulled out some apples. She took a knife and started to peel them. But then she yelped in pain as her finger started to bleed.

"Ah you clutz. Jurina got get the band aids."

Jurina walked out of the room to go get band aids. When she got back, she found Rena sucking on Black's finger and Black blushing bright red.

"Uh here's the band aid."

"Thanks."

Rena took it and bandaged Black's finger.

"Thank you."

"Anyways, how about you go give him a bath Black?"

"That's a good idea. Where's the bathroom?"

"Down the hall to the left."

"Ok thanks."

Black carried her son with her into the bathroom while Jurina continued to wash her mouth out.

"Ahh how to babies eat that crud?"

"They don't know what's good and what's bad." Rena said.

"I'm glad they don't. That stuff was just awful."

"Rena! I could use your help in here!" Black shouted.

"What's wrong?"
 
"He won't stay still. Come and help me!"

"Alright."

Rena got up and walked into the bathroom leaving Jurina alone. She could hear splashing and laughs. Jurina felt lonely so she decided to go in as well. Jurina walked in and saw Rena, Black and Black's son all in one tub. Thank god there were bubbles covering them.

"Jurina what are you doing here?"

"I want to get in the tub to."

"Jurina there's no room. This tub is meant of two people."

"Well put the baby on Black's lap and you scoot over."

"Jurina there's no way."

"Well too bad!"

Jurina threw off her clothes and got in the tub.

"Jurina!"

"See? We all fit."

"Barely."

"Alright then Rena Jurina could you please hand me the shampoo bottle?" Black said.

"I can't. My arms are wedged in the tub. Rena you'll have to reach over me."

"Alrght then don't move."

Jurina could feel Rena move behind her and reach over. It was during that moment Jurina felt two soft things touch her back. Jurina could've gotten a nosebleed right there if it weren't for her selfcontrol.

"Jurina are you ok? You're face is bright red." Black asked.

"Yeah. The water is just warm."

"Hey stop moving Jurina."

Jurina felt the soft things shift making Jurina blush even more. Rena finally got the bottle and handed it to Black.

"Thanks."

Black finished up bathing her son and then got out. Then Rena got out and finally Jurina. Jurina thought it would be funny to sneak up on Rena so she started walking towards her but slipped and fell on top of her.

"Ahh sorry. Are you ok?"

Jurina froze right there when she saw the sight of Rena. Her body still wet and towel barely covering her body, Rena looked so vunurable. Luckily, the fall knocked Rena out so she didn't see anything. Jurina thought this was the perfect chance. But then the door opened and Black walked in. When she saw Jurina on top of the unconsious Rena, so many things buzzed through Black's brain.

"Sorry to innterupt."

Black shut the door leaving the two. Jurina had to get up and explain to her it was not what she thought. Jurina dragged Rena to the bedroom and laid her down. Then she walked into the other room where Black was getting ready to leave.

"Black it's not what you think."

"I know I know. Don't worry I've had a moment like that with Nezumi when Gakuran walked in."

"Oh thank god you understand."

"Yeah only ours wasn't an accidnet."

"What?"

Just then the door bell rang. Jurina answered it and found Nezumi.

"I've come to pick up my princess."

"Ahh here she is."

"Thank you for everything."

"Come by any time."

Black and Nezumi left and Jurina closed the door behind her. She walked back into the family room and started to make dinner when Rena came in.

"What happened? Where'd Black go?"

"I fell and hit you on accident and you passed out." Jurina said.

"Oh. Did anything happen?"

"Nope nothing."

"Nothing at all."

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Chaper 8 is done! I hope you all liked it. Rena and Jurina's baby siting service tunred out to be quit effective in more ways than one. Look forward to the next chapter and please tell me what you think.

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 8
« Reply #161 on: August 03, 2012, 06:20:24 PM »
Jurina is jealous of Black  :on lol:
Nezumi is kind at the end with Black and her kid  :stuffed:
Black when she is with her child looks kinda stupid  :hiakhiakhiak:
"nothing happened" Jurina bad liar  :kekeke:

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 8
« Reply #162 on: August 03, 2012, 06:42:06 PM »
Ahh, I'm happy we got to learn a bit about Yukirin and Black's past, I wanna know what made Rena go crazy though. Haha, yeah your new nickname is Batman now, Batman. Jurina can be Batman 2.
Now I can't wait to see Sasshi haha  :hehehe:
Update soon, yo :D

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 8
« Reply #163 on: August 03, 2012, 06:42:39 PM »
So nezumi have a romantic side too..aww and black happy living with nezumi..ah so lovely~


Ok miyumi-san i will wait~ lalalala~
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 8
« Reply #164 on: August 03, 2012, 06:43:34 PM »
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"I know I know. Don't worry I've had a moment like that with Nezumi when Gakuran walked in."

"Oh thank god you understand."

"Yeah only ours wasn't an accidnet."

GOOD JOB NEZUMI! :thumbsup Show Gakuran who Yukirin belongs to! But man, Black and Rena's relationship is kinda complicated. They seem to still have feelings for each other.

Black is a helpless mum while Nezumi is an impatient dad :rofl: But aww... Nezumi changing the child's diaper is such a cute image :wub: She may appear mean and cold but her heart is in the right place.

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 8
« Reply #165 on: August 03, 2012, 06:51:46 PM »
hehe~ great chapter! there wasnt much NezuBlack but there was GekiBlack~

"Back when Black and I were together, there were certain events that took place that made Rena very unstable." Black said.
This proposition is kinda........strange........

I love how at the final Nezumi said she comed to take her princess back!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

I hope they do get a chapter for them.......ne, can I beg for an omake !? :? XD An omake(chapter) just with Nezumi and Black being all lovely-dovely~~~~ :inlove: XD XD XD XD

Damn....I love them too much......

Please update soon~
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 8
« Reply #166 on: August 03, 2012, 08:17:30 PM »
Wow, finally found time to stop lurking and actually comment on something.  :lol:

I've read all your stories and they have never failed to make me smile. The character dynamics are just too hilarious.

Black having a past relationship with Rena makes everything oh so complicated and interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Rena's past, and of course interactions between her and Jurina.  :D

There is one thing I'm kinda confused about, though. If Black's son is 1 year old, and Rena was living with her to take care of him at some point, but Jurina was with Rena for 9 years, wouldn't she have known about it?  :?

Anyway, great storytelling, and I'm patiently waiting for more!  :twothumbs

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 9
« Reply #167 on: August 03, 2012, 10:57:07 PM »
@mo-chan: Haha Black would be helpless without Nezumi.  :lol:

@Sasshii: Don't worry Sasshi will have her apperance. And yay I'm Batman!  XD

@kurogumi: Thank you for waiting. I will not let you down!  :banghead:

@seigus: Nezumi apperas mean on the outside but on the inside she's a softy for Black.  :wub:

@yuukimoko: An omake huh? Sounds interesting. I can probably make one. I'll just have to figure out how to incorperate it into the story. Give me time and I'll think of something!   :sweatdrop:

@SharkAttack: Thank you for reading my stories. To help clarify your question, Jurina wasn't with Rena until way after Black moved out of Rena's place. And she didn't know for nine years because Rena is secretive around Jurina and so she doesn't know much about her. I hope I'm making sense. I'm not really good at explaining things.  :nervous


Chapter 9 people. One more and it's chapter 10 and you know what that means! Kissy lovey dovey scenes! I put a lot of thought into it so I hope everyone will like it. So for now, enjoy this chapter! There's a special guest apperance by a certain otaku!
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Chapter 9

Jurina got a call from Minami saying she needed help with something. Jurina went to Minami's place and found her trying to hold up a bookshelf. Jurina rushed over and helped the small girl push it back up.

"What do you need help with?"

"I'm redecorating and I need your help."

"Why?" Jurina asked.

"Because Acchan is moving in with me and last time she was hear she said my house looked like an old ladies." Minami said.

"So what do you want me to do?"

"Help me pick out the right stuff. You're younger than me so you know what young people are into these days right?"

"Uh sure."

"Ok then help me out. First off curtains. Red or white?"

"White."

"Next couch. Brown or tan?"

"Tan."

"Ok now plants. Fake or real?"

"Fake."

"Sheets, pink or light blue?"

"Pink."

"And what kind of underwear should I wear?"

"I don't know why do you ask me?"

"Because last time Acchan saw my underwear and said they weren't cute."

"I'm not going to answer that question."

Minami got a sad look on her face.

"Alright fine. Wear ones with animals on them. For you I would suggest a monkey."

"Ok thanks!"

Just then Atsuko walked in.

"Hey Center!"

"Yeah?"

"Sado was looking for you."

"Ok thanks Yuko."

Jurina went to Sado's club where she was scolding one of her customers.

"Listen here you piece of trash." Sado said in her sadistic voice.

Sado had the man lying on his back with his arms and feet being held back.

"Next time you come in here and try to get touchy with my girls, I will personally make sure you never make love to another woman again. If I have to I will castrate you right here in the club and then throw your filthy ass out on the streets. Understand?"

Sado slammed her heel right in the man's groin area. He screamed in pain as Sado twisted her foot.

"Get him out of here."

Two security guards dragged the man out and everyone went back to business.

"Sorry you had to see that Jurina. Come with me."

Sado took Jurina to the back room where Sado usually hung out.

"So what is it you need from me?" Jurina asked.

"There's a girl I need you to take care of for me. She owes me a huge debt and whenever she comes she harasses my girls and scares my customers. Be a dear and go deal with her will you?" Sado said.

"Who am I going after?"

"A girl namd Sasshi. She usually hangs out an otaku bar. Go take care of her will you?"

"No problem. You want me to bring her back when I'm done."

"Sure. I'd love to see her face after you've beated it to a pulp."

"Oki doki."

Jurina left the club and started to search for the bar Sasshi usually hangs out at. She found it and when she walked in, she found a bunch of girls in different cosplay outfits.

"What the heck?"

 Jurina was amazed at how many otakus were there. She had a hard time finding Sasshi since there were so many people. While searching, someone on an announcer came on.

"Attention attention the cosplay contest will be starting soon. All waitresses please get to the dressing room and prepare."

A random girl walked up behind Jurina and started pushing her towards the back stage. Apparetnly she thought Jurina worked there.

"Wait wait I don't-"

"Hush up and get back there."

Jurina was shoved into the room with a bunch of half naked girls walking around. Jurina tried to leave but the doors were blocked off.

"You can't find your outfit? Here borrow mine."

A girl handed Jurina a costume and walked away.

"Five minutes until show time!"

Jurina had no choice but to change into the costume. The contest started and each girl was called out one by one. Then when it was Jurina's turn, she didn't want to go but the girl behind her pushed her out.

"Crap!"

She stumbled a little and ended up falling on the stage.  There was loud cheering coming from behind her and when she turned around, there were a bunch of otaku's snapping photos of her.

"Nya!"

Jurina almost facepalmed herself when she said that. She meant to say "kya" but because she was startled, it came out wrong. This made the otaku's even more excied to the point where they got nose bleeds.

"Ichigo!" the crowd shouted.

Jurina thought she screwed up but actually what she did was perfect. Jurina was in a Tokyo Mew Mew costume and she was in the cat outfit Ichigo wears. Once all the girls came out, it was time for the judges to make a decision. That's when Jurina saw that Shasshi was one of the judges.

"I cannot belive this."

Sasshi was going around feeling some of the girls up and trying to kiss them. If she did that to Jurina she thought she would punch her. Sasshi was about to fondle with the girl in front of her but then she saw Jurina and ran straight to her.

"Kawaii!"

"Ehhh... Nyan?"

"AHH KAWAII!"

Sasshi grabbed Jurina and hugged her to the point where she couldn't breathe. While being death hugged, Jurina felt a pair of hands travel down to her butt. They grabbed it and then Sasshi said,

"What a cute oshiri!"

Jurina had had it with the pervert otaku girl and decided to start beating her. Jurina grabbed Sasshi and flipped her over. The girl panicked and ran off the stage. Jurina was about to start beating Sasshi up when Sasshi said,

"Wait a minute!"

Sasshi ripped off her clothes revealing a whole new outfit. She was wearing a Kisshu costume who is the enemy in the Tokyo Mew Mew series. Somehow the fight has become a cosplay battle.

"Now we can fight!"

Sasshi jumped up and and attacked Jurina by getting on top of her.

"If I win I'm taking you home and we're going to have a ton of fun"

"I don't think so."

Jurina changed positions where now Jurina was on top. The otaku's all puled out their camera and started taking pictures and filming the fight.

"Don't film this!"

"Pay attention!"

Sasshi kicked Jurina off her and came at her with a punch to the gut. Jurina took it hard but then landed a hit right one Sasshi's face. Sasshi stumbled back and Jurina took the oportunity to round house kick Sasshi off the stage. Jurina thought she won but turns out she was wrong. Out of nowhere a chain with a collar shot out and the collar snapped around Jurina's neck.

"I got you now my little kitty! Let's go home!"

Sasshi started to tug the rope but Jurina fought back. However because it was around her neck, Jurina ended up having a hard time breathing. Then Jurina thought instead of pulling then she'll push. Jurina ran straight at Sasshi and knocked her over.

"Ha! Take that you stupid pervert!"

Sasshi got back up and pulled out a small remote. She pressed a button and Jurina felt a huge electric shock in her body. Jurina fell to her knees and tried ripping the collar off.

"What kind of collar is this?

"A special one. Now be a good kitty and come with me."

Jurina couldn't fight back because if she did then she would get shocked. Sehe had to think of something otherwise she would be used as an otaku's play toy. That's when Jurina got an idea.

"Sasshi-nyan, please let me go. I swear I'll be a good kitty!"

Jurina gave her a cute pouty face which made Sasshi melt right in her hands.

"Aww how can I resist a face like that!"

Sasshi took off the collar and as soon as she did, Jurina knocked her out with a nearby chair.

"Finally."

Jurina grabbed Sasshi and dragged her out of the bar. When Jurina walked into Sado's club, she got a lot of weird stares. She broght her back to Sado's room and when Sado saw Jurina she almost had a heart attack.

"Jurina you look adorable! I didn't know you were into those things. You should've told me and I would've bought you some outfits like that."

"I'm not into this. I was forced to dress like this. By the way here's your otaku."

Jurina tossed Sasshi on the ground who just lyed there.

"Thanks. Oh and before you go look here."

"What?"

There was a bright flash followed by a little squeal.

"Ahh Jurina-nyan is so cute!"

"Mou!"

When Jurina got home, the first thing she was going to do was take the costume off and throw it out. She started to walk to her room when she passed a mirror on the way. She stopped to take a look at herself and after looking for a while she thought she looked kind of cute. Jurina even did a pose with her hands in the air shaped like paws and one foot up.

"Nyan!"

"Jurina!"

Jurina looked over and saw Rena standing at the doorway.

"Re- Rean it's not what you think!"

"Jurina you look... you look so cute!"

"Ehh?"

Rena ran over to Jurina and hugged her.

"Jurina you're so adorable!" Rena said as she started to pet Jurina's head.

"You think so?"

"Yes!"

"You should dress like this more often."

"I don't know."

"I think you look really cute."

"Well then I guess so."

That night Jurina reconsidered her thoughts about throwing away her costume.

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Well chapter 9 is done! I hope you all enjoyed Sasshi's special appearence. Haha I don't know why but I like to imagine Jurina in Tokyo Mew Mew stuff. I just think it's super cute! Anyways look forward to the next chapter! Please tell me what you think! 

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 9
« Reply #168 on: August 03, 2012, 11:31:14 PM »
wow Sasshi was the special otaku  :stuffed:
Sasshi is a pervert too like Yuko  :hiakhiakhiak:
Jurina was in a Tokyo Mew Mew costume of Ichigo  :shy2:
Even Rena Loved it  :luvluv1:
next time is the chapter 10!!!  :ding:
I can't wait for it  :on bleed:

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 9
« Reply #169 on: August 03, 2012, 11:31:56 PM »
this chapter was amusing! :lol: I was like LOL when Minami asked Jurina what underwears to wear~! :lol:

You will do an omake for me?! :shocked I loooooooovvvveeeeee you! Daisuki!  love you! :inlove: :inlove: :wub: :wub:

thanks you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


....alright I calmed dawn.......kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~~~~~~~ XD XD XD XD

...that wasnt me.... :smhid

update soon please~
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 9
« Reply #170 on: August 04, 2012, 12:08:30 AM »
I swear Tokyo Mew Mew and Sasshi need to make an appearance in all your stories. They crack me up!! I still can't forget Jurina's Tokyo Mew Mew manga in Mad House :rofl: :rofl:

And yes, the long-awaited Chapter 10 next!!! :drool:

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 9
« Reply #171 on: August 04, 2012, 12:11:57 AM »
i would love to see jurina wear that cosplay outfit on real life xD

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 9
« Reply #172 on: August 04, 2012, 02:00:11 AM »
Chapter 9
Nyannyan's hair got burnt just like takamina XD

Nezumi is such a troll for giving yuko a fake credit card

RENA

 Y U NO LET JURINA KISS YOU

Chapter 10
Jurina cosplaying and nekomimi  :on bleed:
sasshi  grabbed jurina's oshiri  :shock:
a collar at electrifies when a button is pushed i think i saw something like that on dog whisperer  :dunno:
Epic Chapter
« Last Edit: August 04, 2012, 02:10:25 AM by ElleOranjii »
is a signature a biography ??
I like butter, Orange and Macros....:D
I like minecraft too.. :D I LOVE MATH <3
i have 2 oshimens in every group
it's rare for me to have an ace oshimen XD
but i have no friends :(

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 9
« Reply #173 on: August 04, 2012, 03:04:58 AM »
Im enjoyed all chapter

Im enjoyed all your fic

And im so doki doki with the next chapter...LOL

Miyumi-san fighting!
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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 9
« Reply #174 on: August 04, 2012, 04:09:34 AM »
OMG!! all chapter are awesome.. love it each part.. minami questions to jurina.. jurina vs sashii :D

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 9
« Reply #175 on: August 04, 2012, 07:12:26 AM »
YES MY SASSHI CAMEO I THINK I LOVE YOU NOW  :luvluv1:

Ahem, anyways lol. I love the way you write Sasshi, she reminds me so much of Yuko haha, why is AKB full of perverts? LOL.

I can't wait for the next chapter though, the long awaited kiss scenes lol. Update soon :D

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #176 on: August 04, 2012, 09:00:06 AM »
@mo-chan: Jurina in Tokyo Mew Mew is just so cute. I hope you love part 1! XD

@yuukimoko: Ahh you love me? I feel honored. I love you too and all my other readers! I decided to do the omake just for you so look forward to it.  :wub:

@seigus: I hope you like it. I put alot of work into it.  :P

@bunny_rabbit: Yes Jurina in real life in real cosplay would be amazing!  :twothumbs

@ElleOranjii: Love the face you put on your comment. Don't worry Rena and Jurina will have their kiss. :P

@kurogumi: I hope you love it. Thank you for the words of encouragement!  :inlove:

@Haruko: Sasshi vs Jurina was the most epic battle yet.  XD

@Sasshi: Ahh you love me as well? I love you too and all my other readers! I'm glad you like the way I put Sasshi in. I hope you like the kiss scene!  :lol:


Well here is the long awaited kiss chapter! I hope everyone likes it. There will be tears and blood will be shed but it is all in the name
of LOVE. Please enjoy and to yuukimoko and Sasshi, I love you guys too along with all my other readers! Please enjoy!
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Chapter 10 part 1

Jurina woke up and found herself tied by ropes and surrounded by men. She treid to free herself but had no luck. When she tried to remember what happend she couldn't. One of the guys saw her moving and ran over and kicked her. That's when she remembered everything.

Five hours ago...

Jurina had just won another match and were now on the way home when Rena made a comment.

"You lost it again."

"I know I did."

"How many times do I have to keep telling you to keep your cool." Rena said.

"Well it's kina hard when you're being punched at and you can't fight back. Jurina said.

"You need to learn how to control you anger. If you let loose like that again you'll lose."

"Ok."

"I'm serious. Lately I've been feeling you haven't been listening to me."

"It's because you keep barking orders at me."

"Like what?"

"Keep your cool or don't go nuts. Have a plan."

"You need a plan otherwise you'd lose."

"How do you know? You don't fight in the ring."

"No but I've fought way before you were even born."

"And then you quit. What happened? You lose your pride or something."

"You shut up."

"Make me."

The two stared at each other for a long time echanging death glares. Then Jurina said,

"It's not my fault."

"Yes it is. You have an anger issue and you need to control it."

"Well maybe if you taught me how then maybe I'd have better control."

"Well maybe if you'd listen to me then maybe you'd learn."

"Maybe I'd listen if you quit barking orders at me."

"Hey it's those orders that made you into what you are today. Where would you be now if I haden't picked you up that day? You'd be dead or selling your body on the streets to old men. Do you know how hard it is to support a kid?"

"Who said I was a kid? I'm fifteen now!"

"Yes and you still cry for your mom at night. Grow up Jurina she's dead and she's not coming back."

That really hit Jurina right in the heart.

"I'd be fine on my own you know."

"Really? You wouldn't last five minutes without me."

"I bet I could last longer than that." Jurina said.

"I doubt it." Rena said.

"I could to!"

"Fine then prove it."

"What?"

"I'm leaving you."

Jurina stood there sillently staring at Rena like she didn't hear her.

"I'm leaving you Jurina. You said you can handle your own so I'm leaving you. Goodbye."

Rena turned around and started to walk away from Jurina. There was so much anger in Jurina right now that it was dying to explode. Eventually she couldn't hold it back any longer and shoted,

"I HATE YOU!"

Jurina wanted to cry but no tears would come out. Her whole world just crashed right in front of her and she couldn't do anything about it. Having nothing to do, Jurina started to wander the streets.

"Stupid Rena."

Jurina was walking around and was so deep in thought that she didn't notcie the group of guys following her. When they were close enough, they all attaked Jurina.

"What the heck!"

Jurina tried to fight back but the guys were too strong.

"Rena!"

Current day...

Now remembering what happened, Jurina felt awful about the last thing she said to Rena. Telling her she hated her. There was no way Rena would come to her rescue after what she said to her. Who would? Jurina just lyed there like a dead body grieving over something. Then suddenly one of the men walked over and dragged her across the floor.

"What do you think?"

The man faced Jurina at a very large man in a suit with a glass of wine.

"I'll take her. How much?"

"Fifty thousand."

"Deal."

It looked like Jurina was in some kind of prostitution business. She was just sold to the creepiest looking man on Earth and no one was coming to save her.

"You're coming with me little girl. We're going to have fun tonight."

The man grabbed Jurina and started to drag her to his car. But then suddenly there was a loud banging noise coming from outside. It knocked down an entire wall and dust filled the air. The dust cleared and there standing in the moonlight was Rena.

"Rena!"

"Jurina!"

"Kill her!"

A bunch of men came at Rena with bats and pipes. At first Rena just tried to avoid them by dodging all their moves. But then one guy hit Rena in the head and she fell. Soon after all the other men started beating her.

"Rena!"

"Come on we're leaving!"

"No!"

The man started to drag Jurina but she was putting up a fight.

"RENA!"

CRACK!

The loud crack echoed throughout the area. Then all the guys that were on top of Rena went flying across the room. Everything was moving so fast that Jurina didn't see it happen. But then standing in the middle covered in blood was Rena. There was something different about Rena. There was a wild look in her eyes like she was a whole different person. When she saw the blood on her hands, she smiled the scariest smile Jurina had ever scene. Was this the violent side that made Black leave? Was this why Rena stopped fighting?

"Ne... let's play."

One of the guys came at Rena with a bat and hit her right in the head. Rena just laughed it off and punched the guy in the face. Other guys came at her and started beating her but no matter how hard they hit her, Rena just kept laughing. It was like she couldn't feel pain at all.

"Rena!"

Rena looked over and saw Jurina. She set down the guy she was currently beating and started to walk towards the man biting her nails.

Nee... Okoteru?"

Rena did that same creepy laugh that sent chills down Jurina's neck.

"Get away from me!"

The man pushed Jurina aside and pulled out a knife.

"Rena be careful!"

"Ooo shiny! I wanna break it!"

"Stay back you monster!"

Rena just got closer and closer and the man backed further and further away.

"I wanna break you." she said.

"Die!"

The man charged at Rena and tried to stab Rena. Rena didn't move but instead used her arm as a sheild. Then she punched the man in the face knocking him down.

"Hee hee that tickled." Rena said as she began to lick the blood off her arm.

"What are you?"

"Me? I don't know. Who am I?"

Rena started to think about it and didn't see the man pull out a gun.

"Rena look out!"

Jurina managed to get up and move Rena out of the way. The bullet went through Jurina and she fell to the ground.

"Re..na.."

"Who are you?" she said with a psychotic voice.

"It's me Jurina."

"Who?"

"You're friend."

"Friend? Haha you're funny. I have no friends."

"Rena."

"Just die already!"

The man shot his gun again and the bullet grazed Rena's face. Rena looked back over at the man with a mad look on her face.

"No fair."

Rena walked over and kicked the man in the face. Then she got on top of him and started to strangle the man. He started gasping for air and trying to get Rena off but wasn't strong enough. Rena was about to kill the man when Jurina shouted,

"Rena this isn't you! Weren't you the one who taught me not to kill anyone."

This snapped Rena out of her psyco mode and realized what she was doing. She let go of the man who had passed out and rushed over to Jurina.

"Jurina!"

"I'm glad to see your back."

"Jurina you're bleeding." Rena said.

"So are you." Jurina said.

"Jurina we need to get you help."

"I don't think I'll make it in time."

"Shut up Jurina you don't know anything!"

"Rena I really don't want to die."

"You won't die. Now shut up!" Rena said.

"How do you know?" Jurina asked.

"I don't know but I do know one thing."

"What?"

"I love you Jurina."

Rena grabbed Jurina's hand and held it tightly. Then she leaned in and kissed Jurina on the lips putting all her feelings into it. Jurina's head flashed memories of all the time she had spent with Rena. From the moment they met up to the point where they are. All the sadness and happiness she experienced was being expressed in that one kiss. The kiss that Jurina was dying to give Rena since the day she met her. Jurina didn't want to let go but her body made her. She felt her hand loosen on Rena's and her mind turning black.

"Jurina!"

"Thank you Rena. Thank you so much for everything."

When Jurina woke up, she found herself in a white room. She was just sitting there when suddenly two people came out from behind her.

"Mama papa!"

"Hello Jurina."

Jurina ran up and hugged them both.

"I've missed you so much!"

"We've missed you to." mother said.

"You've grown up so much." father said.

"I was so lonely when you left me. I didn't want you to leave me."

"We're sorry for leaving you Jurina but there was nothing we could do."

"But in the end you found a friend."

"Yeah but I want to be with mama and papa now."

"Jurina you know you can't be with us." father said.

"It's too early." mother said.

"But I want to!"

"Jurina. You have a friend waiting for you and you can't leave her. Go back to her."

"No I want to be with you."

"Don't worry honey your father and I will always be watching you from above. No go."

"But-"

"Goodbye Jurina. We love you."

They kissed Jurina and then everything went black again.

"No.. don't go."

"Jurina?"

Jurina opend her eyes and saw Rena looking at her with tears in her eyes.

"Rena."

"Thank god you're alive!"

Rena hugged Jurina and quickly drew back.

"What happened?"

"The amublance arrived just in time and were able to save you." Rena said.

"I guess you were right when you said I wasn't going to die." Jurina said.

"Of course I was."

"Rena you're crying."

"So are you."

"We're both crybabys."

Rena and Jurina laughed a little and then Rena grabbed Jurina's hand again.

"Hey is what you said back there true? Do you really love me?" Jurina asked.

"With all my heart." Rena said.

"Really because I've always loved you too. Ever since the day we met."

"I'm sorry for fighting with you."

"Let's never do it again promise?"

"I promise."

The two sealed the promise with another kiss. Jurina felt her heart melt as she began to lose herself in Rena. She was the happiest girl on Earth at that moment and never wanted it to end.

Weeks later...

Jurina was released from the hospital and was now resting at her house. Rena was taking good care of her making sure she was recovering nicely. Jurina was on the couch watching TV when the doorbell rang. She was going to get up and answer it up it ended up being kicked down.

"Nezumi? What's wrong?"

"Black and her son have been kidnapped."

"What?"

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Well there's part 1! I hope you all loved the intense Wmatsui moment. I did my best and actually my computer crashed when I wrote it so I had to rewrite the whole thing! Part 2 is NezuBlack so look forward to it. Please tell me what you think!

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #177 on: August 04, 2012, 10:06:34 AM »
see jurina...you really have an anger-management issue...


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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #178 on: August 04, 2012, 10:11:59 AM »
love the kiss scene between WMATSUI ~ so sweet!  and Geki was back for a second there,,,,,scary!!!!!! XD



next its my omake right? cant wait for the NezuBlack love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

I'm glad that my love isnt unrequ---- w-wait! what! you love all your readers!? :shocked arent you selfish...?

.....I'm kinda possesive...I dont like sharing someone I love.......so you better hide~ because if I get my hands on you....Ill make you a little bird without windows~ :twisted:

.....excuse me.......I'm going to find someone else for some pain......
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Akiba Fight Club update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #179 on: August 04, 2012, 10:15:38 AM »
wow now Yuki and his son turn to be kidnapped... :wth
what will nezumi do? its more difficult...she has to resque 2 people...but she has jurina...and maybe rena...LOL
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so its going to be romantic again huh miyumi-san?? i love it! :heart:


so after this moment, Jurina and rena bed time its more..uh more...well...kind of passionate and hot... :inlove: :wub:
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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