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I'm the Mafia's daughter - COMPLETED
« on: July 21, 2012, 08:14:02 PM »
Im the Mafia's daughter

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"Seriously all I did was go to a freaking cafe and im being shot at are you kidding me right now!" I shouted dodging bullets and fists that where constantly being thrown at my face.

A foot then came flying towards my face i caught it in my hand and elbowed the joint of the leg causing it to make a horrible cracking sound of the leg breaking.I then dropped the leg to the floor and ran behind a table that had been thrown over to its side.My breath was hitching and my heart racing what could i do?The only way out had been blocked and all these innocent people are suffering because of me its all my fault.

I looked to my right to see a women in her early twentys holding a baby girl whispering to it and rubbing its back while tears fell down her cheek then i looked to my left to see dead lifeless bodies placed on top of eachother as if they where protecting eachother.My heart tore into pieces seeing these images im a bad person i am making all these people suffer or worse die.

Someone help!

I could hear police telling people to back away outside the cafe and people screaming for there loved ones everyones names was being shouted but mine.But what can i expect its not like i tried to be close to anyone and this right here is exactly why.
I got to my feet and bullets zoomed past my face i held my breath and closed my eyes making the world slow down just like i was taught by my father and span on my heels opening my eyes and in a split second i had knocked out 3 of the 6 people that have been trying to kill me.

I took a gun from one of there hands and shot at the remaining three hitting one in the chest one in the leg and the other in the arm.I ran over to the three of them and stomped on there wounds making the screech in pain.I snatched the guns from there hand and slid them to the other half of the cafe where the dead bodies where.

"Oh my god you saved us!" I heard a women shout and just then police barged into the cafe in full uniform and bullet proof vests holding there guns in the air shouting "Stop your under arrest." Idiots "Your to late this girl just saved us." A girl belowed at the police they all looked down in guilt then i figured that i should get going before they start praising me or something stupid.
I ran out of the cafe before they could confront me and headed home straight away i know my father would have heard about the attack and would be worried so its for the best its not like i have anyone or anywhere else to go to.

Im Itano Tomomi and im the mafia's daughter and this is about my life and how i met the love of my life.

to be continued ...

A/N : So did you like it ???!!!!! I hope so ive been wanting to make a fic where Tomomi is the main person init for a long time now so i hope you want this to continue thanks for reading.
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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter TEASER 21/7/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2012, 08:27:10 PM »
tomochin as a mafia's daughter..it's interesting..i want to know how she'll meet chiyuu..


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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter TEASER 21/7/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2012, 08:44:16 PM »
Lol this reminds me of you're first fic a bit I like it please continue

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter TEASER 21/7/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2012, 11:11:26 PM »
OKey this is cool!

I can totally imagtine Itano Tomomi in suit (since Team K ikemen music video)
So please continue!

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter TEASER 21/7/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2012, 06:41:47 PM »

A/N : Thanks everyone for reading and commenting I hope you like the prolouge please comment say what you like and dislike thanks for reading

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The lights of my room flickered on and off making me wake up from my deep slumber I lifted my self up slightly to see who was disturbing my sleep.It was my father standing there with a smug look on his why because he done what everyone in this house failed to do and that was to wake me up.

"Good morning honey."

"Morning father."

"Get ready for school okay?"

"Hai."

He left my room and I plopped my head back down onto the pillow hoping to get more sleep only for him to come back into my room and throw my school skirt onto my face you know cause he is nice like that.I heared him chuckle then leave my room for a second time really how can someone like him be the renowned Mafia of Japan.Smriking to myself from his actions I changed my clothes quickly brushed my hair and teeth and put slight makeup on my face then I placed my school stuff in my bag and made my way down stairs.

I walked to the kitchen and my father was there chatting to a couple of his friends/bodyguards and when they all seen me they got from there seats bowed to me then kissed my forehead to show respect.

Of course I was use to this after all I have known these people since I was born to me they where family uncles aunties cousins sisters and brothers where what I considered them.Oh did I forget to mention myself and my father are the last of my family line since all of them where wiped out at a family reunion.That is except for my father mother sister and I but later on  when I was 11 five years ago my mother died of cancer and my sister killed herself.The past couple years have been hard but my father stayed the same and so did I we never shown are weak sides to eachother we only shown the happy that way we could always smile even if it was mostly fake.Sometimes yes we did show genuine smiles but they where rare but are bond has never been stronger and im scared one day I will lose him to.

My father smacked a piece of toast on my head making me pay attention to him he shown his charming smile to me then pointed to the clock.7:40 I only had 20 minutes to get to school and I lived 30 minutes away from it great.I snatched the toast from my father and kissed his cheeks then sprinted as fast as I could to school.Luckily with the speed I was going I made it to the road that was just infront of the school I smiled at my victory but that only lasted a second.Because the gates shut early my jaw dropped this means I have to climb the schools wall great just great.

I got to the wall and flung my bag over it the climbed the pipe attached to it a couple of seconds later I was over the wall with no time to spare.I ragged my bag off the floor and ran to my class room which happaned to be on the 4th floor out of 8 of them what a bother.

Just as I arrived I seen that my sensei was late so I slapped my hands together and thanked the God I didnt believe in.But then my ears picked up an annoying sound of music and the worlds most annoying Idol Kasi Tomomi singing her new song which I didnt know the name of.All I knew was that right now like all her new songs end up it was number one and getting played way to much unfortunately for me every one in my class loves her and would marry her given the chance idiots.I slid the door open and glared at the direction from where the music came from and it instantly switched off.Oh how I love being the ice queen.
Not one person in this school knows that my father is the mafia which means there scared of me not my father this gave me the amazing feeling of power.I also didnt have any friends since I have pushed people away since I was young and not a single soul know's the true me the only thing any of them know is that I aswell as being the ice queen im the fashion queen.

I sat at my desk and the class was just filled with whispers until the sensei came into the class saying she had a big announcment for all of us.

"Now class we have a new student here today and she just wants a normal higshool life so please treat her like you would anyone else and Itano-San please be nice to her."

"No promises."

"Argh whatever everyone welcome your new classmate Kasi Tomomi!"

What did she just say I turned my head to everyone else in the class room who literally jumped out of there seats when she walked in they all started saying things like i love you marry me be my girlfriend and things like that.Did I mention this is an all girls school but everyone is like that about half of my class are together with someone and the rest have crushes and are to afraid to confess because there terrified of being rejected the wimps.

Then the new girl started her much unwanted intorduction.

"Im Kasi Tomomi please treat me well I hope we can all be friends please treat me like you would anyone else where should I sit sensei?"

She asked then my eyes darted to the seat next to me it was empty which means no please no "Please sit there in the empty seat by miss Itano." The sensei replied im so gonna kill her if I get the chance.

She nodded then sat beside me smiling to me but I just turned my head then looked out the window hoping she would just turn away and face the board while the sensei lectures on about something my father taught me when I was five.Thankfully she did and she started taking notes listening carefully to everything that came out of the sensei's mouth.

When the bell rang for break I coudnt have been happier instead of staying in the class room like most people do I went to the roof wanting to skip the class after this since its physical education.But with my luck today someone just had to come up the door opened and the face I never wanted to see walked out."Oh someone is already here." She said with a small amount disappointment in her voice "If it helps I didnt want you to be here either." I stated cockly which earned a chuckled in return which I wasnt really excepting.

"I take it your not a fan."

"Im not a fan nor a friend so dont speak to me so freely miss Tomomi."

"Your cute chiyuu~~"

"What the hell was that!"

"What was what chiyuu~~"

"That the chiyuu sound."

"Its something that I always do you would know if you where a friend or a fan."

"Well I dont want to be neither so if you excuse me."

I stood up and left the roof leaving her behind dumbfounded.Looks like I cant skip my next class since my peaceful space had been invaded.Just as I got down the steps the bell rang for the second time of the day meaning I had to do the class I hated.
I got to the gym and then realised I didnt own the schools gym clothes since I havnt done it since I began in school.So instead I walked up and sat at the side of the gym the sensei with a look shock on his face that I was here and the rest of the class looked like they needed to put there eyes back into the sockets.I shook my head at there lack of descretion of there amazment and leaned against the wall.Then the annoying beast came in trying to look perfect in her gym clothes to keep up her idol image which failed since the clothes didnt look right on her since she didnt look like a physical education kind of girl.

About five minutes into class I found myself bored of watching the girls fail at doing various things while the sensei just watched with a peverted mind and slight drool sneakly dropping from his mouth.I took out my phone from my bag and texted my father to inform him I was skipping the rest of my classes and heading to my favourite cafe which he always took me to when I was younger.

I stood up making it look like I was fixing my skirt took my bag in my hand then bolted out of the gym then out the school.Peace finally the cafe only took me a couple of minutes to get to since it was close to the school so sometimes teachers would be inside but none bothered to shout at me for skipping since they had given up on it.But something didnt feel right I could tell I was being followed.I opened the cafe door with a ding then bullets showered the windows of the cafe alarming everyone as they hid under tables and behind doors and desks.

I dived to the ground protecting my head as glass from the window rained down heavly.The bullets stopped for a moment then started again I groaned and stood up to my feet.

"Seriously all I did was go to a freaking cafe and im being shot at are you kidding me right now!" I shouted dodging bullets and fists that where constantly being thrown at my face.

A foot then came flying towards my face i caught it in my hand and elbowed the joint of the leg causing it to make a horrible cracking sound of the leg breaking.I then dropped the leg to the floor and ran behind a table that had been thrown over to its side.My breath was hitching and my heart racing what could i do?The only way out had been blocked and all these innocent people are suffering because of me its all my fault.

I looked to my right to see a women in her early twentys holding a baby girl whispering to it and rubbing its back while tears fell down her cheek then i looked to my left to see dead lifeless bodies placed on top of eachother as if they where protecting eachother.My heart tore into pieces seeing these images im a bad person i am making all these people suffer or worse die.
Someone help!

I could hear police telling people to back away outside the cafe and people screaming for there loved ones everyones names was being shouted but mine.But what can i expect its not like i tried to be close to anyone and this right here is exactly why.
I got to my feet and bullets zoomed past my face i held my breath and closed my eyes making the world slow down just like i was taught by my father and span on my heels opening my eyes and in a split second i had knocked out 3 of the 6 people that have been trying to kill me.

I took a gun from one of there hands and shot at the remaining three hitting one in the chest one in the leg and the other in the arm.I ran over to the three of them and stomped on there wounds making the screech in pain.I snatched the guns from there hand and slid them to the other half of the cafe where the dead bodies where.

"Oh my god you saved us!" I heard a women shout and just then police barged into the cafe in full uniform and bullet proof vests holding there guns in the air shouting "Stop your under arrest." Idiots "Your to late this girl just saved us." A girl belowed at the police they all looked down in guilt then i figured that i should get going before they start praising me or something stupid.
I ran out of the cafe before they could confront me and headed home straight away i know my father would have heard about the attack and would be worried so its for the best its not like i have anyone or anywhere else to go to.

As I got home my father rushed out and engulfed me into a hug full of worry and care while saying small things into my ear about how he was sorry that he coudnt protect me and such."Ive decided im giving you bodyguards you will have four they will be in your class and you will be nice walk home with them go out with them and such no arguments no nothing come with me." He says seriously which is letting me know there is no arguing with him so I nodded and followed him into the house where 4 girls sat a pair holding hands the other pair with one sitting on the lap of the other."Care to introduce yourselfs?" I asked and all if them stood up then began telling me there names and a small amount of infromation on theselves.

"Im Matsui Rena im 16 I love spicy food oh and apparently have a rather scary side."


Interesting.

"Im Matsui Jurina im 15 no relation to Rena im her girlfriend and the only one who can calm her scary side."

Sort of weird.

"Im Watanabe Mayu im 15 I love manga erm im smart and I dont like to talk much."

Odd girl.

"Im Kashiwagi Yuki im 16 I also have a scary side im pretty fast im Mayu's girlfriend and im the only one that can make her interested in a conversation and make her heart beat crazy also I am the leader of the four of us just call us by are first names please no formalities we dont like them."

Too talkative.

"Ahh I see well in that case just call me whatever you like im Itano Tomomi obviously the one you will be protecting." I replied.
"Can we call you Tomochin?" The one with a cat smile asked damit I have already forgot her name."Erm yer sure where are you all staying by the way?"

"Your father says we are living her in the two rooms on your left and right and we will start on tommorow we are already in your schools data base since I hacked it oh and here starting tommorow you will be taking part in every lesson encluding physical eductaion your fathers orders." The girl I believe to be called Mayu replied I didnt question her instead I went to my room and flopped my body onto my comfy bed quickly drifting off to a peacfull bliss no problamatic world.

To be continued ....

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter PROLOUGE 27/7/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2012, 07:05:32 PM »
Wow she's a good fighter and lol unlucky for her needing to do all of her pe classes

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter PROLOUGE 27/7/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #6 on: July 27, 2012, 08:04:47 PM »
Ah, Rena-sama appeared! Are KojiYuu and AtsuMina going to be in this story aswell?

So far I like it. ;-)
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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter PROLOUGE 27/7/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #7 on: August 02, 2012, 09:38:19 PM »
chap 1

In all honesty ive never been one to follow the crowd or even talk for that matter.I have always enjoyed peace and quiet not the hustle and bustle of the loud city of Tokyo but of course my life is slightly different of those who work for a living and go to school.I have daily death threats placed on my familys name all saying there going to kill us in ways that my mind cant seem to wrap around since some seem impossible.Right now im letting my ears be tortured by the sound of a drowning voice that comes from the tiny sensei who is showing the class how to solve a maths problem that is rather easy even if I say so myself.I found myself looking around the classroom catching glimpses of my so called bodyguards that are placed in each corner of the room one reading manga another sleeping one listening and writing things down every now and then and the last trying to wake the one who is sleeping by throwing paper balls when the sensei isnt looking.A bunch of idiotic baboons if you ask me I can protect myself better than what these for can.

I looked at my white strapped watch only to notice I had another hour of this boring voice till I get to go home sorry until we get to go home.I groaned loudly only for the midget sensei to turn around a give me a death glare which failed.I chuckled and her face started to turn red with anger but she just let everything slide turning back to the board and explaing everything again.Did I mention that im smarter than everyone in this class and im not being big headed seriously im not my father the softie mafia made me learn 5 diffenrent languages when I was younger and everything the schools learn and x100 more just at the simple age of 5.

So thanks to him I can speak : English,Korean,Indonesian,Chinese and french because he wants me to be the mafia when he dies.I dont really want to but what can I do he is my only family.Then my ears caught a cute little noise coming from the desk next to me obviously I had to look to see what it was.Turns out miss Idol sneezed well that was my gusse since she pulled out a tissue blowing her nose quietly as not to disturbe the class.I think she noticed my eyes burning holes into her since she looked in my direction and her face went the colour of a strawberry.It looked sort of adorable but like hell would I say that to her actually I think she is sick."Are you okay you seem ill?" I asked trying to sound like I cared but sort of failed since my tone was flat."Im fine I just have a cold." I shook my head at this girl "If you have a cold then your not fine." I replied sounding angry wait why am I angry oh why do I care forget it."Its only a cold." She says annoyed at the easy going attitude I waved my hand in defeat not wanting to argue with the girl.

Bored I wanted to cause trouble so with a pen in one hand a pencil in the other I started playing the drums on my desk getting louder each time oh did I metion I can play violin piano drums guitar and flute I know im such an over achiever and im 16 once again blame my father."Miss Tomomi stop right now or step outside." Okay looks like she isnt taking much today I stood from my desk walked outside and leaned agaisnt the wall sliding down on it till my butt reached the floor.About five minutes later some one came out from the class room walked infront of me and bent down so they where face to face."You know you shoudnt cause trouble for the sensei." She said I scoffed then replied "You know you shoudnt talk to strangers." Seems I caught her off guard with that "Well then im Kasi Tomomi age 16 im an Idol and I dont like being treated differently you?" I chuckled at her action mabye she wasnt that bad "Im Itano Tomomi age 16 ice queen." I answered shorty she laughed and sat down next to me putting her head on my shoulder I didnt remember saying she could do that.

I hate personal contact a kiss on the head or cheek is the most I can take so this was going over the line but somehow this felt right so I didnt stop her."Can I call you Tomochin?" She question.Tomochin sounds like a nice nickname "I gusse." I could see a huge smile take up half her face when I said those words."Then you can call me Chiyuu~~." I nodded my head to her making her smile even more "Just because your not a fan of my music doesnt mean we cant be friends right?" Chiyuu asked.Friends ive never had one I took a peek at her hopeful face that was still leaning on my shoulder "I suppose." I swear that smile coudnt get any bigger how did she just break through my walls like they werent there in the first place mabye im going soft.

"Can I have your phone?"

"What for?"

"Please chiyuu~~~~."

"And here I thought you stopped that."

"Only when im with my fans."

"So you dont need my phone."

"No I do I do."

"Okay by the way are you okay now since you have a cold?"

"Yup im fine hehehe."

She took my phone from my hand typing something in and handed it back "Its my number chiyuu~~."I checked my phone and yup there it was her number saved as Chiyuu <3 Tomochin I gave her a confused look but she just blushed.I didnt change it instead I just left it and placed my phone back into my skirt pocket."You dont have many contacts you have 6 now including me." She says sounding sad "Im not that sociable."Was all I said for my answer im not going to tell her the truth.Not saying anything she stood up patted her skirt down then went to the class door "It would be abit odd if I was gone all class woudnt it oh mabye we can do something after school text me your answer." She said then walked inside the classroom what a strange girl and she is ment to be Japan's number one Idol.

Before I knew it class had ended and I was able to get my things and meet my body guards outside."Tomo~~chin so can we do something now?"Was all I heard that voice had to be Chiyuu all the students around that where just going to ask Chiyuu that same question froze understandable really.I just nodded my head and she skipped foward and linked are arms together and we headed outside to meet the others."Its about time I was bored." Jurina complained "Shut up little girl." I snapped back "Vampire!" She fired back "Wannabe badass!" I shot back shutting her up completely thats what I thought."You shoudnt fight Tomo~~chin." I didnt argue back instead I stayed silent and let her enjoy her victory."Can we go now?" Mayu asked not looking up from her Manga "Im going to the cafe you all go ahead." I told them with Chiyuu still holding onto me."No we will come with you." The girl with black hair said I think her names Yuki.Rena the pale girl didnt say a thing "Fine!" I shouted pulling Chiyuu with me I dont think any of them payed close attention to her.

When we got to the cafe it was still all banged up from when them people tried to kill me but it was sort of better.The 6 of us entered the cafe and the owners face lit up "Its the girl that save us the other day you can have anything on the house same for your friends and OH MY GOD ITS THE NATIONS LITTE SISTER KASI TOMOMI!" The women screamed making all eyes focus on us Chiyuu closened are distance because people started to run up and ask for her autograph scaring her then her head was tucked into my neck and her arms around me holding on for dear life as we where being pushed as people got even closer.My bodyguards didnt do a thing instead they sat down on a random table and enjoyed the show here I thought they where ment to protect me.
"YAH STOP THIS RIGHT NOW CANT YOU SEE THAT SHE IS SCARED ARE YOU REALLY THAT DENSE AND STUPID!" I shouted at a defening highpitch covering Chiyuu's ears and making everyone step back and realize what they had been doing.All of them stepped back bowing and saying sorry slowly walking back to where they sat before hand."Thanks Tomo~~chin." Was all I heard in between little sniffles "Its okay." I said stroking the back of her head and heading to the table where the others at sending a death glare to each one.

After that everything went great we took her back to her home (Mansion) then headed back to my one not eating tea I went straight to bed and my head hit the pillow instanly falling alseep not even getting a chance to change my clothes.

To be continued ....

A/N : Just so you all know Mayuki and Wmatsui did know that Tomomi was an Idol they just didnt care since Tomochin is the person they need to protect

Thankyou for reading my fic I hope it was worth it I writ it watching the olympic swimming GB is doing terriable im sad but still im sporting China ahahaha

@Adam : Ahaha now you know how I feel PE is such a annoying lesson
 
@Sakura_Drop_ : Yer they will be lets just say the school isnt safe for Tomochin anf Takamina is already init I have mentioned her but not actually her name can you gusse who she is oh an I have to ask this will you be my 2NE1 sister lol

Please comment say what you liked and what I need to improve any questions feel free to ask I will answer you when I can
Once again thanks for reading

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 1 2/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #8 on: August 02, 2012, 09:50:16 PM »
ah there will be Mayuki and Wmatsui?! XD I wanna read more~ so Tomomi is and idol and Tomochin is from the mafia~


it is interessting please continue~

update soon~ XD
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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 1 2/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #9 on: August 02, 2012, 10:07:27 PM »
I wouldn't think that they friends awww the mafia and a idol lol what a partnership lol and it was dead cute how she gave tomochin her number awww   :wub: and
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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 1 2/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #10 on: August 02, 2012, 10:16:12 PM »
2NE1 sister, thank you for this update!!!  :deco: :deco: :deco:

It was a fun read.. We all know that Tomochin, despite her tsundere chara, is always soft to Chiyuu, nee?  XD XD

Bakamina is just not fit to be the teacher, now is she?  XD XD She always gets mocked by the likes like Tomochin  XD XD But we love both of them, so it's okay, at least we can have a good laugh, nee?  :lol:

I love those bodyguards   :wub:

And PE was not annoying at all, I loved it when I was at school, or on the first year of my studies  :yep:

Olympics... One part of it was great, when our swimmer Meilutyte won gold  :twothumbs
But our basketball team lost to France...  :banghead: :banghead:

And I'm still waiting for Yuko-sama to appear (I'm too jumpy, from topic to topic, but oh well  8) )
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« Reply #11 on: August 03, 2012, 03:15:21 PM »
It's an interesting fic  :glasses:
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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 1 2/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #12 on: August 07, 2012, 02:13:31 AM »
Tomotomo!!!! I like it!!! The bodyguards team is awesome!!!

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 1 2/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #13 on: August 07, 2012, 02:48:22 AM »
Please COntinued...

This sound Interesting fics

I wonder does a Mafia have a Body Guard ??? :dunno:
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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 1 2/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #14 on: August 07, 2012, 09:32:38 PM »
chapter 2


I walked through the school gates finally ontime for once with the four stooges following me I took a deep breath knowing today was going to be hard.

If your thinking why I will explain right now ......

Flashback

I woke up and rolled of the bed with a bang as I hit the floor changing quickly I slowly made my way down the stairs and the maid came straight to me "Your father wants to see you in his study." She told me I nodded to the squirral like women "Is that all?" I asked she shook her head in responce "No he asked me to accompany you to his study to."I gave her questioning look but she just shrugged and the two of us went to my old mans study.

I knocked on the door twice then walked in to be greeted with a stern look as I did."You wanted to see me father that is what this maid said."

"Yes I did and that maid is called Yuko now the reason ive asked for the two of you is serious okay now Tomomi I heard you made a friend that friend happens to be Kasi Tomomi the number one idol in Japan am I right?"

"Yes father."

"I do not allow it when you get to school today you will ignore her and end this friendship of yours its dangerous or her and you okay?"

"Bu-"

"No buts if you want her safe you will obey me."

"Yes father I will ignore her if that is what you wish."

"Thankyou okay Yuko you will be going to her school and you are going to be the new nurse I want you to keep an eye on her and those body guards I hired there not doing the job very well is that okay with you Yuko."

"Yes sir I will go there right away if you will excuse me."

"You are excused Tomomi its almost time for you to go to so go with your body guards now go."

"Yes father bye."

I walked out of his study behind Yuko angry and upset not knowing what else to do I ragged my bag of the table in the kitched and stormed out of the house while my body guards rushed to keep up with me.

end of flash back

So now you know the story about how I have to say goodbye to my first ever friend since my father said so and he has the body guards and that women called Yuko keeping and eye on me I didnt know I was a animal at the zoo.I slammed my classroom door open making everyone look in my direction I glared with so much more power than I usually do then slid my chair back so far It smashed into the desk behind me making the owner of it move her desk back a little bit in fear of me.I think they have noticed im in a bad mood well I hope they have noticed.

The 4 dim wits then came in sending me weak glares as they did that is except for Mayu who gave me a glare as strong as my own seems like she is in a bad mood too from what I can tell Yuki is ignoring her.
The desk next to me where Chiyuu sat was empty mabye just mabye my luck has turned and she has a schedule please let her have a schedule.

*1 hour later*

Class had finished and the sensei announced that we could go home early since something has happaned which needs hers and the other senseis attention."If your wondering why its because of the new nurse aka your maid." Rena said popping up behind me making me jump slightly "What about my maid?" I questioned worried about the answer "She was caught making out with Kojima Haruna of class A." Jurina replied for her back hugging Rena earning a smile and a short kiss on the lips."Where is she now and what is happening with them two?" I said looking over to Mayu who is trying to get Yuki's attention."Oh well Yuki sort of went on a date with someone from her old school Mayu didnt like it they argued and now its like that oh and your maid is waiting in the toilets for you we asked her to meet you and she agreed also there might be someone else there." The two love doves explained finishing eachothers sentences.

"Whatever come on and bring Romeo and Juilet aswell." I got up from my seat saying that took my bag in hand and walked out of the classroom heading straight to the toilets.

"Oshima-san what do you think your doing the hole point of this is for you not to get found out that your in this school and now the sensei's are having a meeting because of you."

"What do you mean?"

"You got caught making out with a student in school."

"No I didnt me and my Nyan Nyan where careful no one caught us."

"Okay then why has school finished and WHAT YOU HAVE A RELASTIONSHIP WITH ONE OF THE STUDENTS YOUR IN YOUR TWENTYS!"

"No im not im your age its not my fault my girlfriend goes to this school and as for the meeting thing I have no idea by the way call me Yuko oh and Nyan Nyan will be coming any second."

With that the door opened and my body guards and the girl I believed to be Yuko's Nyan Nyan.Mayu and Yuki had now sort of switched postions like Yuki was the one trying to get Mayu's attention while Mayu ignored her.I looked at Rena "Dont ask." She said not letting me ask a question I just nodded then pointed to the girl who was holding Yuko's hand.

"Im Kojima Haruna of class A Yuuchan's girlfriend she already told me everything and I wont tell a soul I promise."

"YUKO YOU TOLD HER EVERYTHING INCLUDING WHO I WAS!"

"Y..y..yer sorry about that erm anyway we should head home ive already informed your father that school has ended early due to an unknown reason ah your father asked for Mayuki to stay behind and investigate everything shall we go now miss Itano."

"All of you can leave apart from Mayuki I will wait for them now go."

"As you wish miss Itano."

"But we have to protect her."

"Relax she has the other two now lets go~~~"

"Yuuchan dont be so  loud."

"Sorry Nyan Nyan."

The two couples left leaving one who are still acting like children looks like I have to be the parent.

"Hey you two what happaned explain right now."

"Since when where you my mother?" Mayu asked with a smug look.

"When you started acting like a kid so you shut up Yuki talk."

"She is angry at me because I went on a date with my best friend from school and that friend asked me to be her girlfriend and she is angry because of my answer."

"What was your answer?"

"It was erm a mabye."

"She has every right to be angry Yuki go home I will do the investigation with Mayu!"

"Where ment to protect you."

"Well you wont do good if your arguing with her so leave!"

"Fine!"

Yuki ran out if the toilets and I didnt care and by the look on Mayu's face she didnt either the two of us exchanged looks we left the toilets and the first thing we did was go to the staff room.When we got there voices could be heard from inside the room some getting louder and louder as they spoke we caught little bits of there sentences but that was all we need to know that this school was not safe.I took Mayu's hand in my own and she squeezed it a little then without words we knew what we where going to run away.We sped down the hall literally jumped down the stairs trying to make no noise then out we made it out of school.

We stopped catching are breaths letting eachothers hands go so we could wipe are sweat away when I seen Mayu's face I knew that she didnt do this much even if she is a master at everything the one thing she sucks at is running."Tomo~~chin why are you not in class?" That voice its Chiyuu."S..school ended ..... early something about the new nurse." I said trying to sound natural but that didnt go so well."Why are you out of breath?" Oh great how am I going to answer that I cant say well you see we over heard the sensei's say there going to kill me in a very disturbing way we where scared we would get caught and ran and then you came."She was helping me exercise."Mayu interuppted thank god."Yer ahahaha thats right why are you here I thought you had a schedule?"

"I did but it finished early and I thought I could come to school but obviously there was no point can I come to your house since my manager wont be here till school ends and I could always call my manager from there please~~~." She begged I glanced at Mayu she gave a thumbs up then spoke "Your father isnt there anyway so he woudnt find out I will make the others shut up I owe you since you got Yuki away from me." I smiled at her showing my fang and I think Chiyuu knew my answer so she hooked her arm with mine and we arrived at my house (Mansion).

I must remember to say thanks to Mayu she is probaly the closest to me these past days since I already think of her as a little sister.When we go inside I heard arguing so I instantly went into the direction it came from with Mayu and Chiyuu close behind.
I went inside the living room only to find Rena and Yuki close to a fist fight I sighed rolling my eyes taking both by the collars of there ruffled up shirts throwing them to a different side of the room."What the hell is going on now are you stupid we have guests at least wait till they have left!"I screamed but my words went through one of Yuki's ears and out of the other since she opened her mouth and started speaking."She said that im an idiot just because I said mabye to my friend." This again really let it go everyone is mad at you "First off all of them have the right to be pissed im gusseing they see Mayu as a sister and even from this sort amount of time so do I and the fact you done that you deserve all you get now what is your friends name?" I said trying to stay calm leaving Mayu and the others baffled at my short but affective speech."Sae and I only said mabye because I didnt know how to say no."

"Well you could have started with I have a girlfriend and I love her not you." I replied quickly leaving a guilty expression on Yuki's face I dont have time for this I left them in the living room and Chiyuu followed me out I dont think anyone payed attention to her at all."You live with them Tomo~~chin?" Chiyuu asked with a cute confused face "Yup long story which I dont want to talk about." I retorted she nodded taking her hand in mine and I lead her upstairs into my room.We talked for hours and she called her manager when she left I coudnt help but smile to myself thinking of what a great friend I have but tommorrow she wont be my friend I have to do what my father said.

Im sorry Chiyuu.

To be continued ........

@Yuukimoko : Yup there will be Wmatsui and Mayuki lol thanks for reading im glad you like it

@Adam : Yer but not for long and I get your joke ahaha

@Sakura_Drop_ : She will always be a softie for Chiyuu but she will always do what her father says Takamina may be a teacher but she is also something a else care to gusse and yer at least we can have a good laugh glad you like the body guards and PE is hard in my school well annoying we always do the same thing lol and Yuko has appeared thats all for now 2NE1 sister!!

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@xxx220 : If your asking if Tomochins dad has a body guard the answer is yes just he doesnt use it much

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 2 7/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #15 on: August 07, 2012, 09:57:49 PM »
so Yuki and Mayu had a fight~  Damn that Sae.....she always appear and destroys Mayuki.....(sorry to all Sae lovers!!!!!!)

hope Mayu will forgive her...
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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 2 7/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #16 on: August 07, 2012, 10:34:48 PM »
I like SaeYuki, but I love MaYuki, so please, Yukirin, ditch Sae and come back to your dearest Cyborg  :kneelbow:

Ah, Yuko-sama is perfect like always with her antics and with NyanNyan they're a couple, huh  :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

Now TomoTomo should start dating in secret, and then somehow convince her father that they are meant to be together, but this is further to the story, right?  :glasses:

I wonder if midget Bakamina is somehow connected to Mafia and what is Acchan's role in this.. (if she will appear at all...)  :dunno: :dunno: :dunno:

Also, I really love cute and all lovey-dovey wMatsui, I hope at least they stay together without any arguing or problems, at least they should proceed providing us with sweetness, cuteness and all other positive emotions  :shy1: :shy1:

I smell some MafiaWars oncoming, because of Tomo~mi being around Tomochin... I just hope Tomochin saves Tomo~mi and then... Yuko-sama saves the day with her antics... Haha, lousy plot, yet I'm biased, so no can do  :hee: :hee:

Thank you for this update, 2NE1 sister  :on cny1:
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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 2 7/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #17 on: August 08, 2012, 12:09:32 AM »
Wmatsui are so lovely like always  :luvluv1:
noooo  :OMG:
what are you doing Yuki  :stoned:
I really love Mayuki it can't be they have to make up  :pleeease:
I hate Sae there is always a problem when she is with Mayuki  :angry1:
Sae don't disturb Mayuki again  :on redcard:
poor TomoTomo they wont be friends again  :gyaaah:
update soon please  :on speedy:

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 2 7/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #18 on: August 08, 2012, 01:12:43 AM »
Ahhh why can't her father let her live with them!

As for Yuki who says maybe when they have a girlfriend grrrrr

Btw Yuko making out with Koji was hilarious lol as Koji was a member of the school same old pervy Yuko :D

Update soon please I can't wait till next update keep it up!

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 2 7/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #19 on: August 08, 2012, 05:28:46 AM »
jajjajajaj hilarious!

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