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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #60 on: August 17, 2012, 03:20:46 PM »

I'm also from QC but my school is in Manila and as we know that was the part that mostly suffered from the floods and stuff :(
Yeah yeah... It's really had to commute because of that.

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #61 on: August 17, 2012, 08:21:21 PM »
That's so sad, i hope things get better soon... 

i really love your fics and your drawings are amazing, so i'll wait patiently for your update.


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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #62 on: August 18, 2012, 10:06:30 PM »
Mee too I will be waiting patiently and giving my support from here in Sweden

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #63 on: August 18, 2012, 11:56:45 PM »
Oh yay!!! kiss!!!

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #64 on: August 19, 2012, 05:17:28 AM »
Everyone I really thank you for your support, it really touched my heart and made me cry :mon waterworks: well just a bit not that much X3

anyways I really that you for your patience and for all of your support!right now I have a free time so I'm working on
the drawings for chapter 7 and also I need to get some payback of drawings because I didn't drew anything for Chapter 6!
here's a sneak peek for Chapter 7~!



and yes when Chapter 7 is updated this pic. wont have any censors haha~ :on lol:


Again even if I repeat it over and over I really thank you for all of your support and I hope you'll support me 'til the end. :kneelbow:


Also I have some short stories so if you don't mind reading some of it I'm glad you did~ :hee:

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that's all thank you~! : :byebye:
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #65 on: September 03, 2012, 07:02:34 AM »
To all the readers:

Finally I have time to continue this story.I am really sorry for those who want to read this so badly
I just don't have much time to do this fan fic. in such a short time in one day,also there are three of
us siblings that are using the PC and I'm the youngest one and you know...I'm always the one not
getting the chance to use the PC much longer.Anyways the good thing is that I finally updated this fic.
but for now because I'm fully busy on school I'm just goin' to write the SUPER HALF part of Chapter 7
so enjoy >.<


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Skip if you still remember the happenings in Chapter 6.

Summary of Chapter 6:


Takahashi Minami and Maeda Atsuko was chosen as the two main characters for the play.Minami was so surprised by the script of
the play because it really matches her situation right now and so because of that she can't concentrate at the play and always make
mistakes on their practice for the play.After many days later Akimoto arrives at the practice room together with Togasaki Tomonobu
to check the status of the play and after hearing the situation the producer announced that if either the two main characters said
something wrong and random lines that are not written in the script then the whole play would turn into a FREESTYLE play, meaning
they can do whatever they want or say but the settings or the meet ups are still the same they just need to say something that is not
written on the actual script of the play.After hearing that the producer leave the scene together with togasaki.The director panicked on
the announcement  and blamed Minami for all of that cause.The leader was hurt for the harsh words but Atsuko defended her but the
director doesn't care at all and pushed the ace because he's pissed off but the leader catches the ace and got mad by the director's
actions against her ace and so she pushed the director until he fell on the ground and then they fled of the scene.

END OF Summarry.





The Problems for 1 month Chapter 7 part 1



"I need to leave you..."

"What?I thought we will be together forever?"

"I'm sorry but it's just that I have someone that I love more than you..."

"No....you're just kidding right?"

"I'm sorry Acchan but that is the truth...I don't love you anymore..."


"No...stop lying...."

"I'm sorry Acchan but this is goodbye..."


Minami let's go of Acchan's face and goes away from her.Acchan is chasing Minami but for some reason she cannot reach her no matter how fast her
speed of running is.Acchan didn't stop running but then the flat form that she is stepping at started to collapse and turned into a blood-like color.She
fell endlessly to the unknown place,she is crying on what Minami said and then suddenly as she falls endlessly to the unknown place....she saw a hand
that is reaching through her.She didn't think twice to reach that hand and so after she reaches that person's hand, she saw....her.

"MINAMI!"

"!!!A-Acchan!finally you are awake!you shocked me there!"Minami said with a worried tone.

Acchan suddenly hugged the leader tightly.

"You had a bad dream again?"

"U-Un..."the Ace agreed with a crying tone of voice.

"You made me so worried...you were crying as I woke up...I tried to wake you up but you still keep on crying....I tried to hold your hand and that's were you
  suddenly woke up..."The leader said while hugging the Ace tightly.

"On my bad dream...no...that was a nightmare....I thought you love someone else....and then...you're going to leave me...."The ace said with a buffering tone of words.

"Why would I do that?I wont leave you...no matter what happens...I'm here."Minami clasped the crying Ace's hands and kissed it with her lips.she can feel her fear,
the shaking of her hands.The endless heavy heartbeats that she can hear through Acchan's body.Minami tightly hugs the Ace tightly and said.

"Just forget that nightmare ok?that wont happen,trust me.Let's go.we have a practice for the play,right?"

"U-un.....thank you..."The Ace weakly replied.

"Mou.What is that half-reply?now reply to me again...but with your smile."

"Ok.Thank you....Minami"the Ace smiled on the part where she said "Minami" and made the leader blush like a tomato.

"That's more like it."The leader said while smiling but still blushing.



END of Chapter 7 part 1

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yes.I know It's so short but I this is the best that I can do to update this fic. my schedule in weekdays is really ruff and at weekends I can't use the
PC too much because again I have 2 siblings that is also using it.So I hope you all wouldn't get mad at me because of this short update on Chapter 7
but it's the best way that I can do to not let you guys wait so long for this fic. to update. I'm sorry again for letting you all wait for so long. :bows:
« Last Edit: November 23, 2012, 11:46:46 AM by Mai-chan »
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #66 on: September 03, 2012, 07:49:17 AM »
too short but still love it :D

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #67 on: September 05, 2012, 01:27:32 PM »
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FINALLY UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!

THANK YOU!!!!!!!

I HOPE YOU UPDATE MORE OFTEN IF YOUR NOT BUSY..

GOOD LUCK!!!
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #68 on: September 05, 2012, 01:51:26 PM »
sweet Atsumina moments :wub:
Acchan's nightmare.. hope it won't be a reality :o

thanks for the update! :thumbsup

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #69 on: September 07, 2012, 10:31:46 PM »
I hope Takamina will never leave Acchan

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #70 on: September 28, 2012, 03:17:43 PM »
uwah~!! everyone thank you for your support on this fanfic. and still kept on reading it~!
I really thought there are no more readers in this fan fic. cuz I update so slowly :on cloudeye:

but still thank you for all the readers out there~!

btw I can't draw on a digital thing right now cuz the app that i am using isn't installed yet in the PC and this leads to my question for you  and that is....is it ok for you guys or gals for me to draw the scene in a traditional style in short just a sketch from a notepad or book?
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #71 on: September 28, 2012, 04:53:51 PM »
btw I can't draw on a digital thing right now cuz the app that i am using isn't installed yet in the PC and this leads to my question for you  and that is....is it ok for you guys or gals for me to draw the scene in a traditional style in short just a sketch from a notepad or book?
well for me, I'm totally okay with that ^^

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #72 on: September 28, 2012, 06:26:59 PM »
Love this story! Looking forward for the next update!  :grin:

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #73 on: September 30, 2012, 04:18:45 PM »
Arghh! So sad but wait for next part
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 9/3] Chapter 7 part 1
« Reply #74 on: October 01, 2012, 03:27:26 PM »
Just wanted to say that I've been a huge fan of this fic for awhile now and decided to finally comment, an I gotta say that I really love this fic a lot!~ and your drawing skills are amazing too!
I think you are a very talented person and I'll be waiting for you next update ~ :D

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 10/16] Chapter 7 part 2
« Reply #75 on: October 16, 2012, 11:27:12 AM »
It has been awhile~
Hey Everyone~!It has been uhm....oh! 1 and a half month since I update~!wait....WHAAAAAAT???!!! :stoned:
well that was my reaction after noticing that my fan fic. is taking so long to update and after that I just decide
to update it without putting any drawing on this chapter and for that I'm sorry  :kneelbow:
I was so moved by all the replies I received from the latest update of Chapter 7.I still can't believe that there
are still people reading my fiction that hasn't been update for a long time and I actually shed a tear for that. :farofflook:

as for TakaNyan, I really thank you about that comment of yours it kinda make me...



hehee~  :shy2:

oh yeah!enough of me blabbering!here's the latest update of Problems for 1 Month~! (finally~)

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Chapter 7 part 2 -Sudden Return

"ACCHAN!Hey Acchan!Come on!Don't snob me!"

The worried captain kept calling her Ace but not a single glance was given to her,instead Acchan fastly walk with her head straight up ready to go home
without looking & speaking to the captain.

TAKAMINA POV

Oh man...here we go again with the "Chase and run"thing.This usually happens when Acchan is jealous or if there is something that we can agree with each other.
How did it happen?Well it all started when...

FLASHBACK

"UWAH!Minami?!is that you?"as me and Acchan walked together after our practice for the play,I heard a familiar voice coming from afar.I looked at my back and it
was my friend,Keitaro.As I saw him I waved my right hand and smiled to him and so does he.

After we waved hand with each other,Keitaro approached me and it's like he was about to say something as he was getting closer to us.

"Yo Minami!gone from work?"

"Uhm...kinda."

"Hm~who's you're friend?"Keitaro asked while looking at Acchan with a joyful smile on his face.

"Oh...uhm...she's--"

"My name is Maeda Atsuko,AKB48's center"

Acchan suddenly cut my words and I'm quite surprised that she bravely introduced her name and position yo a person that she met for the
first time.I looked at Acchan at that time and I was wondering on why her face is so serious to a sunny guy like Keitaro.

"Ah so you're the Ace of AKB,huh?"Keitaro said with his kansai ben. accent and also with a smile.

"Yes."again with her serious face,I kept wondering why but I just kept silent and observe their conversation.

"Well it's nice meetin' ya Atsuk--"

"Don't you dare say my first name."

I was shocked on Acchan's actions,her gripping Keitaro's shirt and let it go was surprising.It was the first time I saw Acchan did that.After that
she just fled the scene without saying anything.

"What the hell is that?am I rude to her or somethin'?"

"I don't really know...well I need to go Keitaro,I'm going to clear things up."

"Ok and tell her I'm sorry of what I did."

"I don't think you did anything wrong,see you."

'Hm...I f you say so then,Ja!let's meet again some day!"

END OF FLASHBACK

"Acchan!"Minami kept calling the Ace waiting her to look at her and explain what she did but the Ace kept ignoring the captain and so Minami
has no choice but to hold her left arm tight to stop her from walking.Acchan didn't let Minami's hand go but just stare at the ground silently.

"Why did you did that?"Acchan didn't answer Minami's question,instead Acchan gave her an awkward atmosphere."Oi Acchan!don't you give
me a silent treatme--"

"IT'S A FAN'S INSTINCT OKAY?!"

"fan's....instinct?"Minami got confused on Acchan's answer.

"Yes!A fan's instinct!"

"So then it's a priority of a fan to grip the shirt of the person she fandomizes?"

"NO!I'm not a fan of Keitaro!in fact I HATE HIM!!"

"Hate?then why is it a "Fan's instinct"?"

"I'm sure you know this since you know him,I'm a fan of persona and their leader Kai is being insulted by calling him "midget"I mean can you
believe that?!"

"...so that's why....*please recall the first chapter :D Writter's POV "

"So that's why what?"

"AaaaaaAaAahhHh!!N-nevermind about that!w-well why does Keitaro keep insulting Kai?"

"Uh...well...rumors say that they were H.S. friend but it's kinda weird right?friends turns into rivals.Many people said that Keitaro started their rivalry
and that's why I hate him!"

"....H.S. friends...no ways....Acchan...I have to go somewhere....I need to clear things up."

"wher--"

"Sorry!I need to go!"as soon as possible Minami ran so fast it's like she's in a track in field competition or something.

"....Eh?"Acchan tilted her head.


After that....

"RIKU!!!"Minami exclaimed Riku's name after she opened and reached persona;s dorm.

"Yo Takamina!Great timing!I was about to--"

"Tell me!What is Kai's real name?!"

Minami's body was full of sweat drenching through her shirt,she kept catching some air through the room waiting  for Riku's answer

"I knew you would figure that out..."

"....so he is..."

"yeah."Riku smiled.

"But...why?Why did he--"

Before Minami finish saying her question someone suddenly opened the door,as Minami and Riku looked at the direction where the door was,they saw...


"Yo!I'm back Riku!"

A guy with a solid black hair came in the persona dorm."I Don't know who he is but I have a strange feeling around him."Minami said inside her mind.

"Ah!Welcome back....Kai!"

"K--KAI?!"Minami exclaimed Kai's name with full of shock in her face.

"B-But Kai's hair is blonde right?"

"Ah that?well that's just hair spray!this is Kai's original hair color."Riku said while Minami is still confused on the situation right now.

"Anyways her name is Taka--"

"MEGUMI!Takahashi Megumi!Yoroshikunegaishimasu~!"

"Wha..?"Riku wondered on why Minami doesn't want to let Kai know her real name.

"Nice meeting you Megumi-san and thank you for covering as Kai for the past 2 weeks."Kai said with a smile on his face.

"Wait...I though he will be gone for 1 month?What's the point of the title of this story if he's here and it didn't even lasted for 1 month?
that's why this story is entitled "Problems for 1 Month" right?!"

"....what the hell are you talking about?"Riku said with a plain face.

"*sigh nevermind..."

"uhm...If you're wondering on why well actually I go to my province to visit my mom's grave.It's her 5th death Anniversary and I also
ask if it's ok to the group and they said that it's ok but only for 1 month and Riku also said that he knows someone to cover for me and
that is you Megumi-san and I'm really impressed that you do look kinda like me but I'm 150 cm though! but then I stop that brake because
I'm thinking that I might have been bothering that person that is covering me up for the past few weeks."after Kai explained everything,Minami
slowly asks...

"So...It's over?...the deal...is...off?"

"Yeah.I'm greatful that you cooperate and help us encounter many things with us."said by Riku.

"Arigatou ne!Megumi-san."

"....So...this is goodbye then."

"Un.I hope we still see each other again Mi-- er Megumi."Riku said.

"Sure,you can count on that Riku."

After Minami left the scene Kai suddenly spoke...

"...Riku..."

"Yeah?"

"...Why do you think that she didn't say her real name to me?"

"hm....I dont's really know the exact point Kai but maybe...she doesn't want to not let you remember
the "Takahashi Minami" that you used to know anymore."

".....Is that so?...*smiles....I guess...she still have that bruise in her heart huh..."

"I guess you're right....Kaicho."


T.B.C.

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WOOP~!WOOP~!What is Kaicho's relationship to our Captain Takamina?? find out on the next Chapter~

and yes I know that some of you are wondering..."What does Kai look like in this fiction?!!I want to see it!!! :scolding:" and many more mixed emotions~

well here it is~



I was planning on putting it in the story but then there are words on the side that is really catchy to read so sorry for that because you can see my ugly handwritting and
btw that's how I write the story on scratch  :on lol:

that's all~ and the Next Chapter lies in your hands~

If none wants to let this fiction continue it's ok. because I'm slow on updating this... :fainted:

OH! and btw do some of you have any twitter account?if so~ Let's follow with each other~!

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 10/16] Chapter 7 part 2
« Reply #76 on: October 16, 2012, 12:58:22 PM »
WAAAH! This fic is so interesting!  I seriously want to know what is going to happen in the next chapter! Thanks for the update! :hee:

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 10/16] Chapter 7 part 2
« Reply #77 on: October 16, 2012, 01:10:38 PM »
I've been reading ur fic actually.. :glasses: and its good of course I like it!!  :hee:
keep updating Mai-chan~  :)
just take your time hehe

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 10/16] Chapter 7 part 2
« Reply #78 on: October 16, 2012, 05:12:30 PM »
pls update this as soon as possible!!!!
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thank you for the update,
looking forward for more!!! :thumbsup

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 10/16] Chapter 7 part 2
« Reply #79 on: October 16, 2012, 11:22:39 PM »
Let me progress what I read. Because of 'something', Kai hates Acchan (maybe because she's close to Takamina :?). And because of another 'something', Kai hurt Takamina and it makes Keitaro hate him and be his rival.

So many 'secrets' for you to reveal in the next chapters, Mai-chan :lol:

I can't wait for this. And btw, your drawing is cute as usual :wub:

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