Author Topic: Hold My Heart Forever [AtsuMina/Kojiyuu] (12-30-13) Chapter 6 Part 1 (Read 36990 times)

Keisthename · « **on:** July 23, 2012, 02:48:31 PM »

Hello, I said to myself to stop writing for a while.. but I just can't I dunno why..

I have another new story.. and it's different than the other 2 I made first.

Read them if you haven't:

SHORT FIC: (The Only Thing That Won't Change) http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33381.0 FINISHED

SERIES: (Contract) http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33275.0 ON-GOING

Hold My Heart Forever

Preface

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ATSUKO's POV

"Life is just too cruel isn't it? All of us just wanted to live happily with our loved ones and with all the things we care for. We never, even once, ask for our creator to take our happiness away. But why? Why do we have to suffer at the end when we almost thought that our life is already complete?

I guess I really am just unfortunate, too unfortunate that sometimes I ask the purpose of my existence in this world. Why should I exist when all the things I needed and loved have been taken away from me? How can this life be so cruel with me?

I always try to find new hope and light for me to live but when I do, they are again being taken away from me. Does life have this huge anger towards me? What did I just do? Is it a sin to crave for happiness?

For the things that had happened in the past, I don't want to trust anyone forever. Up until the end I will no longer open my heart nor care with anyone. I'm tired already, if this is fate for me to be lonely forever then I accept it already. So please, don't add any more pain in my heart. I've already given up. I will live forever like this until this life of mine is being taken away too."

Ehem.. that's where the story will revolve..

Will try to update this, same with my other fic "contract".. but I hope you guys can wait..

chibi-nyao-chan · « **Reply #1 on:** July 23, 2012, 09:08:58 PM »

Kei-tan don't say things like that ! You must continue this story !!
I like it very much !! I want know why Acchan is so cold and scary!
Takamina is cute "It's not me"

and she wants see Acchan again

Please Kei-tan continue this story

Haruko · « **Reply #2 on:** July 23, 2012, 09:51:30 PM »

OMG!! awesome I like when the story started like this.. maeda so are so.. agressive but takaboy gonna make you believe in people and find love again

Flean · « **Reply #3 on:** July 24, 2012, 06:00:41 AM »

Finally I got time to read today!!!

your fic is as expected will be full of emotions going on and me likey~

maybe this just a hunch.. but the story won't be so very happy happy at the end?? or maybe not..

LOL.. I just love to imagine things my way..

btw, please continue this.. I wanna know what happen between Taka and Acchan..

Trickster · « **Reply #4 on:** July 24, 2012, 09:00:27 AM »

you must continue to write this!
I like how the story starts

Acchan is full of mysteries, really want to know what happened to her in the past

how will they meet next time?

please do continue this story

chiqinna · « **Reply #5 on:** July 24, 2012, 09:07:53 AM »

I love this story!!!

please continue it! please~~~~

miayaka · « **Reply #6 on:** July 24, 2012, 11:44:43 AM »

oh men! is this not a happy ending? i hope not or else

better make my atsumina happy together ok?
next chapter pwease! *mia too demanding again sowee*

acchaniu · « **Reply #7 on:** July 24, 2012, 12:02:33 PM »

AT ATSU ATSUMI ATSUMINA

Acchan <3<3<3

Update soon Keichan

Mai-chan · « **Reply #8 on:** July 24, 2012, 12:22:12 PM »

WOHOO~!! Another Atsumina fan fic~!!!

Please Kei~! continue it~!! I want to know the past of acchan on why is she so cold and what is taka's life style!

Go Kei~! I'll support your fan fiction about Atsumina 'till the end of the story haha

kahem · « **Reply #9 on:** July 24, 2012, 12:36:41 PM »

Hahahahaha!!!!! Takamina is so cool and funny at the same time ^^

Trickster · « **Reply #10 on:** July 25, 2012, 11:25:02 AM »

Takamina is just so innocent

I love the part when Takamina and Yuko talked about Acchan, and Acchan suddenly showed up!

Acchan's reaction when Takamina said that she will sit on Acchan's lap

please update more, thank you

Sydney W · « **Reply #11 on:** July 25, 2012, 02:23:37 PM »

Takamina you're on fire when Acchan was about to dare her to sit her lap. Haha
Dormitory, will Takamina be sharing the same room with Acchan ? ^^

TakaminaBG · « **Reply #12 on:** July 25, 2012, 03:13:36 PM »

Takamina soooooooooooo BOLD!!!!
Then let me sit on your lap....

:D:D I laughed so hard...........
Good job.

Update SOON!!!

Haruko · « **Reply #13 on:** July 26, 2012, 06:26:57 AM »

jajajajaj i love so much this fic..

first you dummie takamina dont talk about person.. they can heard you...

yuko.. that i was talking about.. jaja you are a charming person.. kojima gonna try to resist your charm but we know that you can ..

minami!! you are my hero... that comment about sit on acchan make laugh a lot

chibi-nyao-chan · « **Reply #14 on:** July 26, 2012, 11:19:34 AM »

Takamina you'r sooo cute

and clumsy

But Acchan hears just the bad part description

But it's ok because Takamina will make Acchan fall in love with her

And she has the good technique "I will seat on your lap"

Please Kei-tan update soooon

haruhi16 · « **Reply #15 on:** July 26, 2012, 11:40:01 AM »

Lmao Yuko

I want more!

Wmatsui22 · « **Reply #16 on:** July 26, 2012, 01:51:03 PM »

thank you...

please update soon..

i look atsumina pairing

kahem · « **Reply #17 on:** July 26, 2012, 03:21:06 PM »

HAHAHAH!!!! good job Takamina!!!

hazwani · « **Reply #18 on:** July 26, 2012, 08:13:49 PM »

yeah...... thanks you for the update...

nice one

..hope u will update chapter 4 faster ...hehehhe
sorry just can't wait,,

Loveforever · « **Reply #19 on:** July 26, 2012, 08:44:58 PM »

Moreeeeeeeeee pretty pwease!!

the story is so good! Thanks for the update

Author Topic: Hold My Heart Forever [AtsuMina/Kojiyuu] (12-30-13) Chapter 6 Part 1 (Read 36990 times)

Flean