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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 1
« Reply #320 on: March 11, 2013, 02:23:15 AM »
I usually like aki/mocchi or ami/mocchi, but Kokabuki/Youran seem like a cute pair can't wait to see what's going to happen with them and tomotomo.  :hee:
Poor shaku atleast sado is getting some love now

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 1
« Reply #321 on: March 11, 2013, 05:07:16 AM »
I'm liking the Kokabuki/ Youran pair
Eager to learn more about Sado's past/ personal life...hopefully Shaku can get thru to her
Thank you for the update!

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 1
« Reply #322 on: March 11, 2013, 08:05:31 AM »
arghhhhhhhh..... it's a interested chapter  :wub: :wub: :wub:
Did Sado open her heart because of Yuko-san ? Really? I want to know more this story about Sado's past and feeling  :inlove: :inlove:

Oh, unbelievable, Shaku got part time jod just because of Sado's thought  :P :P :P
I hope Shaku will succeed to get Sado's heart  :cow: :cow: :cow:

and i want to know wtomo's life after they live together.

Poor Shibuya, when she will be 21 years old, she will be cut allowances ,haizzz how can she live if she won't get a job at that time.
And now, after paying hospital charges ( it’s almost at the same amount with her living cost for two month) i wonder how can she pay living cost in two month with Ookabuki lives with her  :? :? :? :?. i hope you'll update soon  :) :)
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 1
« Reply #323 on: March 24, 2013, 07:23:55 AM »
Chapter 28 - 2


It has been more than a week since we started to live together. Well, it really was different, compare to when I live alone by myself. There were a lot of the good sides, though the bad sides were just as many. For example, seeing her every day was… heavenly, and not to mention all the home-cooked meals and getting laid for... well… lots of sex love. Though with her being there means I’m not alone anymore, it’s also means that I had to relent and being tolerant. Which, considering my individualist nature, was quite hard. Now I had someone to report in to whenever I had to come home late, and I couldn’t play the music or TV as loud as I wanted to. But the worst part was, how she would nag at me if I neglecting my study. My Mom even didn’t care about it as much as she does. I do understand why, though it didn’t mean that I wasn’t irritated by it.

And then, there this… nagging feeling that I’ve got, ever since I saw Geki on the day when the Kabuki Sisters went out from the hospital. I knew they were hiding things from me. I’m not an idiot. Just three days after they got out from hospital, I came home and saw Tomo tending over Kokabuki’s bruises on her face. They were just fought. The doctors told them to ‘take it easy for a while’ and yet they had fought only three days after. Thank God their injuries from the fight before did not re-open. And that day was not the only times I knew they were fighting. Whenever I asked they always said things like ‘only some flies’, ‘just the usual fight’ or they just change the subject all together. And not to mention all the time she came home late. My prep-school was farther than Majijo and I tended to have afternoon classes and yet I often came home earlier than her. Damn it! Now I know how she feels whenever she knows I was hiding things from her.

Other than a bit quarrels about the stuffs before, some of our time was usually filled with comfortable silence when she was doing her things and I did the same, or some endless playful banter (that mostly leads to me got angry and she would calmed me down with…, well, you know) or some talks about our past. Just like when she asked me of how I got to know the others.

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*Flashback.

I was doing some home works while laying on my bed with her beside me, browsing on some stuffs on the internet with my iPad. All of a sudden she asked, “How did you know the other Rappappa?”

“Huh? What’s with the sudden interest?” I mumbled, still in deep concentration to the damn English home works.

“You know how I joined Rappappa,” she said while hitting me with a pillow, “it’s fair if I know how YOU got to know them too.”

I sighed, closed my book and put it on the side table. “Fine… what do you want to know?” I grumbled and arranged the pillow so that I could lean my back on the headboard more comfortably.

She narrowed her eyes at me and sarcastically said, “Could you just tell me about it without being a smart-ass?”

I narrowed my eyes back at her and almost snapped back at her, but I held my tongue. I glanced at the calendar and face palmed myself inside my mind. ‘Dear God… she’s PMS-ing, no wonder she’s so cranky like this.’ I sighed, snatched the iPad, put it on top of my book on the side table and pulled her closer. I sighed again when she snuggled my neck, but for a different reasons.

I kissed the top of her head and mumbled, “I met Geki a few weeks after I got back here. Because of… the way I am, it wasn’t took that long till I started to get into fights and brawls, lots of it. And in one of my fights, she suddenly shown up and… did her usual creepy giggle and said, ‘ne~, can I join? It looks fun~~,’ which she did. And when I realized it, she became my fighting buddy. We would end up on the same side during fights and protecting each other’s back.”

“She… didn’t change that much, isn’t she?” she asked with mirth apparent on her voice. I shivered slightly when her breath hit my neck. Thank God she didn’t notice it.

“Hm… And then… because I often hung around with Geki, or more precisely fought together, I got to know Black too. She was her classmates. And sometimes we would head up on a fight together. But mostly, it was just me and Geki.”

“Yeah…I know about it. Geki has told me that you and her are fighting buddies.” She muttered softly, her breath hit my neck again and this time I felt her lips grazed my neck. I released my breath shakily, my mind went blank, and based on how I felt her mouth turned into a smirk in my neck, I bet she knew it too. I thought after all that living-together-thing, I would get used to her, but no… I wasn’t, and I don’t think my body would ever stop reacting this way whenever she’s too close like this.

“Yeah... and then... since we often clashed with Yabakune students, we chosed to went to Majijo. After a few weeks in Majijo, Yuko-san asked us to joined her.” I finished my story with a lightning speed simply because I couldn’t stand the temptation she brings anymore, made her frowned at me.

“You-“

What she wanted to say to me, I would never know, because, I kissed her lips, hard and demanding at first. But then, when she propped herself up and sat on my lap, she controlled the kiss and it turned gentler and slower. The next thing I knew was… I was on the process of unhooked her bra while nipped her neck, while she had her hands running up and down on my back. Afterwards her hands went down, tugging at the tip of my t-shirt and dragged it up to strip me, deliriously slow and intentionally caressing the side of my body by doing so, made me shivered in response. After a few seconds that felt like hours, I grew impatient, breaking the kiss, then pulled the damn t-shirt off of me, threw it on the floor, and kissed her again. I pulled her towards me and switched our position so that she was on the bed with me on top of her.

When I was trailing kisses down her body, my eyes caught something that made me stop. The… scar…. It has been better than it was when she was in the hospital. I saw it when Sado-san was changing her bandage. I was never a weak person, but when I saw the raw injury with its` stitches, I felt like I was about to faint. But now, after a few weeks passed, the cut has been closed firmly and the stitches have been long gone. But still, the cut left a scar on her abs, just a whitish line, but it still felt tender when I touched it.

I felt a pair of hands touched my cheeks and guided my face to look straight at her. “Don’t think about it,” she whispered while caressing my face.

“But-“

“It’s not your fault.” She cut me with a soft yet firm whisper, not giving me any space for objection. She then sat up and hugged me, comforting me.

“You could’ve died… a-and… there’s nothing I could do to help you…”

“But I’m not, right? I’m here. I will always be here beside you.”

After a while, I finally calmed down. There’s nothing I could do about it. Whenever I remembered how I was so close of losing her, I would always freak out, especially when we’re alone. Well, I still have some self-control if others were around.

“So…. Shall we go to sleep now?” she teasingly said.

I pulled myself out from her embrace and made a face at her. “Sleep? What’s that?” And tackled her softly so that I was on top of her again and continuing where we left off.

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With more days passed by, the more we got to know each other. I thought I knew her, but it seemed like there’s lots of things that I didn’t know as well. Perhaps Yuko-san and Torigoya went through the same thing as well, which was why I was here right now, in a café, waiting for Torigoya. If I didn’t talk with someone I would explode. With each minutes passed, I was getting more and more impatient. I never was a patient person. She knew it, that’s why whenever we set up the time to meet up or something she’ll always try to be more punctual, or prepared something to bribe me for her tardiness.

And after I’ve finished my latte and about to order another kind of drinks, she finally came, with Yuko-san trailed behind her. “Sorry we’re late. I was about to go when Yuu-chan told me to wait up for her.” Torigoya while sitting down in front of me with Yuko-san sat beside her.

“And why are you here too?” I asked to Yuko-san whose immediately narrowing her eyes at me.

“Even though I know Tori-nyan is mine and you have Ookabuki, I won’t let you two have another so-called-date again.” Yuko-san growled at me, made me rolled my eyes at her.

“So… what do you want to talk about?” Torigoya asked me after we ordered our drinks.

I seriously wanted to just spill it out, but considering Yuko-san was also here, and not to mention she might use it as blackmail material if she wants to. But, then again it’s Yuko-san, she’s the person that I trust the most, and she knows that as well. So, even though she has this trolling tendencies, she also knows when and what to keep to herself. She knows what’s best for us… for her… families.

“I… I don’t know why but… somehow she has been crankier lately. And she would nag at me whenever I was being lazy and neglecting my study.”

“She?” Torigoya said with her eyebrows raised at me, “Ookabuki?”

“Of course. Who else?” I sarcastically said.

“Well…,” Yuko-san mumbled with a serious look, and in an instant, she gave out her perverted grin again, “if you’re a guy, I’d say she’s pregnant.” I rolled my eyes again at her while Torigoya lightly smacked Yuko-san`s arm. “But since you’re not a guy, perhaps… let’s just say that she’s getting some of your traits.” And when the only response she got from me was only me raising one eyebrow at her, she added, “they say couples who lives together and connected to each other deeply often shares some traits, right?”

“Uh-huh… just like how Torigoya got your trolling tendencies, huh?” I retorted back at her.

Yuko-san just shrugged and mumbled, “maybe….”

“I’ve never prank on you…” Torigoya pouted at me, “don’t call me a troll….”

“Yeeeeaaaaahhh…. Riiiiiight…. Should I made you remember of the time you blurted out we often went on a shopping ‘dates’, or when you following me around all day and intentionally acting all sweet and spoiled to me in front of my girlfriend?” I said while glaring at her.

Torigoya pouted at me even more, made Yuko-san patted her head while saying, “kawaii…,” then she shifted her attention to me and with a coy smile she drawled, “you know what… Shibuya, you’ve change too.”

“Am not.” I said while leaned back on my chair and crossed my arms on my chest.

“You do. How to put it… Hm…. Now you’re a bit more… open, should I say… and a little bit more carefree. You’re not scowling and snapping at people all the time anymore.” Yuko-san said in deep thought, “and now, your sarcastic remarks are more for the jokes more than an actual insult.”

“Yeah… you’re smile more and laugh more too.” Torigoya piped in.

“Yep.” Yuko-san finished with a smirk at my affronted expression, “still wanna say that you’re not change?”

“Fine… fine… whatever you two saying.” I rolled my eyes again. “Anyway… I also noticed that the Kabuki Sisters are hiding something from me.” I gave Yuko-san a pointed look, since I knew the order must be came from her.

“Sorry… it’s under my command.”

I sighed a little and stirred my latte, “I know.”

Yuko-san sipped her green tea and mumbled, “I’ll let you all know about it after the others came.”

“…Fine…” I grumbled out, and then I realized something, “wait… ‘after the others came’? You told them to come here?”

“Yep.” Yuko-san said with a nod, while Torigoya mumbled out an exasperated, “here we go again…”

“Wait a minute…,” I grumbled out while narrowing my eyes at our leader, “I called Torigoya for a little talk and now you turned it into a full-blown Rappappa`s meeting?!”

“Not entirely ‘all’ Rappappa… it’s just us, you know…. The usual dinner meeting.” Yuko-san calmly said, already used with me snapped on anything and everything that pissed me off. “So… give Ookabuki a call or email or something, let her know that we’ll kidnap you for a few hours. Wouldn’t want her to get mad at you.” She added with a grin.

I let out an exasperated sigh, and while I was typing an email to my girlfriend, I accusingly said, “and I thought you want us to not interfere with anything with the email that you had sent to us. You told us ‘don’t come to Majijo until further notice’ last week. Remember?”

“I have my reasons, you know…,” Yuko-san sighed and looked old all of a sudden, made me felt slightly guilty for snapping at her earlier. “Shibuya… tell me, how’s you study?”

“Er… good, I guess?”

“If they told you the exam is tomorrow, will you be able to pass?”

“Sure,” I answered with a frown, “with flying colors even. Didn’t know math was that easy before.”

Then Yuko-san shifted her attention to Torigoya, “what about you with the photo-shoots?”

“My schedule is quite packed right now,” Torigoya said with a frown, “you know that already, why do you asked that again?”

“That… That’s exactly why I banned you all from interfering.” Yuko-san said as she rubbed her forehead in a tired manner, “you all have other things to do. And I don’t want to disturb you for as long as possible.” She sighed while supporting her chin with the palm of her hand, “we’ll talk about this later on when the others come. For now… I want to ask you something.”

“About?”

“Did Ookabuki ever tell you about the Kabuki Sisters` fight?”

“Which one?”

“The one that sent them to the hospital in critical state.”

“Oh…, er…, some of it, as I had said before, I rather not knows the full details,” I said while scratching my head, “why?”

“Just wanna know if she knew ‘he’ was one of her opponents. She didn’t say anything about ‘him’ when we heard their story.” Yuko-san said off-handedly but her eyes gleaming with curiosity.

“Yeah, she knew… I was curious about it as well, because Geki told me his condition is one of the worst, but I couldn’t ask her when she was still in hospital with her sister there too. I was just asked her about it a few days ago. She said… that jerk recognized the jacket she was wearing…, my jacket, and… he then bad-mouthing me or something, she didn’t tell me the details. He didn’t said anything about… how did I get to know him, thankfully. But it’s enough for her to know who he is.”

Yuko-san whistled in amazement while Torigoya blinking repeatedly, made me frowned again at their response.

“Wow… so she did know it was him, it’s no wonder anymore,” Torigoya said after a while with a pat on my shoulder, “Shibuya, I warn you, don’t you ever make her mad at you….”

“Huh?” was my dumb response.

“She’s right… be careful…” Yuko-san added.

“Huh? What do you mean?”

“Ah… I forgot… haven’t told you yet,” Yuko-san grimaced and paused to take a sip of her green tea again, “Captain Takahashi said he had; one,” Yuko-san started counting with her fingers, “nice-palm-tattoos on his body which lead to several broken ribs; two, dislocated arm; three, lost some teeth; four, because of the strike on the side of his head, he can’t hear well with his left ear now.”

When I heard all of that, my first reaction was to gaped at Yuko-san dumbly and after my mind finished with the re-booting process, I shouted loudly, “Wh-what?!!”

“You heard me… I’ve never know she can be that… crazy when being angry…,” Yuko-san chuckled in amusement at my shocked state, “ah… thank her for me will you?”

“Thank her for what?”

“For giving him a good lessons to not messing up with Rappappa.” Torigoya answered with a totally-out-of-character-sadistic-smile.

“Just like what she said,” Yuko-san put out her agreement to Torigoya`s statement with a nod of her head.

“… well… she did tell me that she was ‘overdid’ it a little… but… I didn’t know it was that bad…,” I said while still somewhat in a dazed state, “wow… just… wow….”

“I figured she wants to have some revenge if she ever meet him…,” Yuko-san said while grinning, still amused with the whole thing, “because I do want to beat him up, the last time… during our raid… it’s not enough… nowhere near enough.”

“Yeah? I want to have my share of revenge too.” I grumbled, my temper went up when I remembered how badly Tomo was injured, “I won’t let them get away after what they did to my girl! …. …. And her sister….”

“Pffft…. Since when you started to care for Kokabuki?” Yuko-san teasingly said while Torigoya gave me an understanding smile. “Ah, well… all jokes aside, Captain Takahashi said that all the people that we’ve captured will be facing lots of years in prison. They’re doing drugs, that alone can make you rot in prison, and then they’re hurting police officers and sent two of Police`s informants to the Hospital in a critical state… So yeah… they’ll rot in prison, I’d say.”

“And the… three?... person that ran away? What about them?”

“Well… we’re just helping the Police to begin with, er… helping Cap’n to be more precisely,” Yuko-san said while scratching her head, “since she now has to process the documents to sent about thirty peoples to the prison… she is a little bit occupied with paper-works right now, and not to mention that the ex-Higa Groups seemed to be lay low for a while. But, Cap’n also said, the investigation still running like usual, and since they already captured some of them, the Police are now trying to ‘make them open up’ so to speak. They’re still looking for more proof and evidences and plotting some strategies right now. When it’s all complete, then they’ll raid them.” She looked at my frown and added, “no worries, we’ll get our shares during the raid too.”

 “Ah, it’s dark already,” Torigoya exclaimed as she looked at the window, “come on, you two, we have to get going to the usual izakaya.”

I watched them stood up and asked, “why don’t we have our dinner meeting here? The pasta here is good.”

“Sado and Black might faint when they look at the price list,” Yuko-san retorted, “while Geki might not even bother to order anything other than water.”

“And you’re not?” I asked back with one eyebrow raised while I stood up, and put some money on the table to pay for my drinks while Torigoya did the same.

“I’m with Tori-Nyan, so I’m safe.” Yuko-san answered while we’re walking out the café and heading towards our usual dinner meetings place.

“I’ve heard from Sado that you paid Ookabuki`s hospital bills, and your credit card has already reached its limit,” Yuko-san said while we’re walking, “So… all good now?”

“Thankfully I had already done my monthly grocery shopping before, so we’re safe. And I have enough cash in my bank account to pay for my daily expenses for… at least half a year.” I answered calmly. “But if I could, I don’t want to drain my save, so… no shopping-spree for now.”

“Well… you just have to wait till your parents pay your credit cards bills, after that you can go shopping as much as you want again, right? On what date your credit card`s bills due?” Torigoya asked.

“Every the 5th day of the month.”

“Only a week left… just be patient.”

“Yeah… I need to buy a new wardrobe for-“

“Wait,” Yuko-san cut us out, “Since when you have a bank account?”

“Since last year…,” I said with a roll of my eyes, “why did you sound so surprised anyway?”

“You… actually trying to save some money… and not being a spendthrift anymore…,” she said slowly with incredulous expression. “Of course I’ll be surprised. Oh… God… I feel like watching my kid grown up right now…,” she added while wiping fake tears from the corner of her eyes, making Torigoya giggled and pinched her cheek while I was rolling my eyes for the… I didn’t know how many times already.

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Okay... I know I made some grammar mistakes in some parts, but I don't know how to re-phrase it to be grammatically correct. :banghead: :nervous So... sorry for that. I'll try to be better in the next update.


@hikari_043083: sorry... just wait for it. I'm busy with my work right now, so I can't update soon. :panic:

@cisda83: Shaku didn't do anything's (terribly) wrong actually, it's just that Sado is a tough nut to crack.
               As for the reformation thing, it will be in the (old) Rappappa`s dinner meeting in the next part.  :twisted:

@elo: er... a part of it, yeah... :nervous
         other than that.... er.... :nervous in the side-story later.

@BbSis: I hope so too. :nervous Sado's problem is not only the age-gap... hehehe, you'll see later on.  :twisted:

@theblueknight: I haven't touch my PS for months now :smhid, got occupied by work, fanfiction and iphone games lately :nervous
                        emm... I'll try to write more about them.

@Minami-chan: LOL it was for the MariMii shippers here.

@kahem: glad you like it XD

@Kitzune: you photo edits are really good  :twothumbs

@KojiYuu44: Sado`s past, eh? Hm.... I'll try.
                  Shaku will one day.  :nervous

@songbac: SadoxYuko was clearly shown in Majisuka 1, right? XD
                Is this answer your questions about Shibuya`s money? :lol:


Thanks for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys. Till nexy update :)

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 2
« Reply #324 on: March 24, 2013, 01:18:12 PM »
Please update soon! :cry:

Can't wait for the next update!

MAYUKI ~ YUKIRENA ~ ATSUMINA ~ KOJIYUU ~ TOMOTOMO♪

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 2
« Reply #325 on: March 24, 2013, 01:36:10 PM »
Wah.... WTomo is so cute....

Tomo~mi was so scary... she created lots of damage to the guy

Yeah... hope Tomochin's parents paid for the bill....

Tomochin be more stingy.... save more money....

Anyhow... I can't wait to see more

Want to know how the meeting is about... ?

What's Minami next move?

Thank you for the lovely update

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« Reply #326 on: March 24, 2013, 02:19:56 PM »
Sorry for not commenting before, I've been really busy...  :bow: :bow:

I love the story and how it's progressing and really thank you for continuing and writing it (unlike me, who lost inspiration...  :banghead: )

I'll be waiting for your next update  :)
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 2
« Reply #327 on: March 24, 2013, 08:24:44 PM »
Awww shibuya is cute :B: yeah kojiyuu!! :B.. but I want atsumina!!

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 2
« Reply #328 on: March 24, 2013, 11:27:55 PM »
wow nice chap cant wait for more you rock!  :twothumbs I hope you make longer chaps cause those are my fav type of reading heh  :drool: yea I know what you mean when you got no time :cry: heh I got sick right after my nephew got better so all I had some type of fun which was bed, my laptop for reading fics and my ps vita/3ds/psp  :oops: so I was able to finish p4 the golden  :cow: now im better and waiting for more updates from you cant wait  :grin: more captain takahashi please  :)
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Mari(mariko)es mi amor, solo con ella
vivo la felicidad yo se que nunca a nadie
mas podria amar, por que la quiero de
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mano continuemos siempre asi
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Dios me ayude a morir ya que
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English ver dow originally name mary is my love by leo dan :
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I live in happiness
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 2
« Reply #329 on: March 25, 2013, 03:54:30 AM »
Yeeey! Update o/ TomoTomo is living together now! How magic*.*

I liked this update o/ so Haruna is the one who brings home money huahuahua

Now i got curious about Sado's story.

Thank you for the update o/

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 2
« Reply #330 on: April 13, 2013, 03:30:02 AM »
Really epic.... <3 <3 <3 fell in love with it
even though to tell the truth, I actually dislike having W Tomo as the main pairing
....I was like dying when I read some of the chapters......
such a wonderful fic, ganbatte >.<
Geki is epic~~ starts drooling at the thought of her....

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 3
« Reply #331 on: April 13, 2013, 08:42:39 AM »
First of all, sorry for not updating in quite a while. I've been busy with my job (Damn the financial reporting submission deadline  :smhid), and I've been working overtime for almost every weekdays so... I couldn't write much.  :nervous


Chapter 28 - 3


*at the usual Izakaya

When we came, Sado-san was already sat on her usual seat, waiting for us. She was scowling dangerously all the time, which made Yuko-san couldn’t help herself but to ask her after the waiter had left with our orders.

“What’s wrong, Sado?”

“That brat pissed me off.” Was the short answer. When I heard that, I truly hoped that Shaku was not being reckless again. It won’t do her good if she made Sado-san mad even more at her.

“Come on, Sado… give the poor girl a chance…,” Torigoya whined at our sadist vice-leader, “she has been brooding all the time ever since you turned her down.”

My eyes widen slightly at this, I knew Sado-san wasn’t one for personal talk, so that’s only left Shaku as the one who told Torigoya. Not a surprise though, Torigoya is her mentor. And considering how Sado-san retorted back at Torigoya, and started her irritated speech with ‘I’ve told you before…’, this wasn’t the first time they had this kind of talk.

“Why are you so scared anyway?” Yuko-san cut out Sado-san speech with a glare towards her vice, a leader`s glare, which Sado-san returned back at her with me and Torigoya watching over them in silence.

“I’m not scared.” Sado-san calmly said.

“You are.” Yuko-san retorted back with her glare still intact, but then her expression softened, “open up a little, Sado. Let her in. It has been years already. I want you to be happy.”

“Why should I? I’m happy,” Sado-san said defiantly while crossing her arms, “and besides, she… was the reason why I got sent to reform school and community services years ago….”

My eyes widen again at this. Remember when I said they all had their reasons as of why they’re finished high school at the same time as me? Well, that’s Sado-san`s reasons. She had to spend years in reform school and did some community services things after fought and sent a group of guys from another high school to hospital, in an almost dead condition. All because she saw them bullying and at the same time harassing an elementary school student… em…, made it a student from an expensive and elite private elementary school. Sick, right? Right. I mean, harassing an elementary school student?! A kid?!  Some guys just truly think with the head which located below, not the one above their shoulder. And what made it even more suck for Sado-san, because she’s a yankee and those guys were apparently some soccer stars in their school, people thought that Sado-san just attacked them without reason, hence, the reform school and community services. As for the kid, well, she was just a kid, nobody listened to her much.

Torigoya patted Sado-san`s hand sympathetically after she recovered from the shock. “She… was the little girl you protected?” she asked with her eyes widen.

“… Yes…,” Sado-san answered bitterly, “I’ve just known that a little earlier today too. So that’s why there’s something familiar about her.”

“And that’s must be the reason why you’re attached to her.” Torigoya added, and when Sado-san narrowed her eyes at her, Torigoya pouted, “Oh, come on, Sado…, you are, just admit it already. Remember all the times you crashed at my training sessions with her? You are so… protective and caring at her… though you trolled her just as much. And I’ve never seen you like that with anyone.”

“I. Am. Not.”

Yuko-san sighed and shook her head a little, “just give the poor girl a chance already.”

“Do you… want me to go to jail now?” Sado-san asked sarcastically.

“For God’s sake…. She’ll be eighteen in a few months. I have enough of a brooding and silent Shaku,” Torigoya whined, “I want my crazy and funny pupil back.”

“Same here…,” I said for the first time ever since they started to talk about the poor girl. Torigoya responded with a ‘huh?’, made me sighed and I added, “you do know that Ookabuki is living with me, right?” the three of them gave me a nod, silently asking for me to continue, “well, that’s mean… right now, my apartment has become a hang out place for our kouhai…, though they usually left a few minutes after I came home..., saves for Kokabuki…. And, yeah, I have to agree, I want crazy and funny Shaku back too. It’s just too weird to see her all silent and serious all the time…. And, a little bit depressing too.”

“Yeah, Sado. Just open up to her a little. The way you two meets each other again… It’s must be fate going on here. Just like Shibuya and Ookabuki” Yuko-san said while she was in deep thought, even though her words sounded like a joke, she was actually serious. “I’m not saying for you to screw her,” Yuko-san added while rolled her eyes in exasperation, “Give her a chance. Who knows? She might surprise us if you do.”

At this time, my eyes caught someone with red coat outside the izakaya, walking across the road hurriedly. “She did surprise us alright.” I said while pointing at the window, made they looked at the direction I had pointed. And not long after she disappeared, Team Under came into our view, frantically tried to follow her around while calling her, “Shaku-nee… wait for us!”

“… Shaku-nee…?” I asked to no one, confused. “… since when she became Shaku-nee?”

“Did she knows that Team Under is actually your under, Sado?” Yuko-san asked with an incredulous expression. Sado-san just sighed and massaged her temple tiredly.

“I doubt it.” I said, “Not much people know about it. They think they were our underling. Even Dance didn’t know it, and she used to spend some of her time with them. Which was the reason she was wondering why Team Under disappeared from Rappappa`s Room after we’re graduated.”

“And now they’re under Shaku…,” Yuko-san muttered softly, and within seconds, she grinned mischievously, “… interesting….”

“It’s looks like Shaku was trying to fend them off rather than welcoming them.” Torigoya said as she peered out from the window. “She’s not the kind of person that likes having someone following her around.”

“Can we just drop the topic about her already and started to talk what you want to talk about?” Sado-san said through gritted teeth.

“Fine… fine…, but promise me that you’ll think about it.” Yuko-san said. “I may not be a physic, but usually, my advice works well,” then she turned to look at me and grinned, “right? Shibuya?” I just rolled my eyes at her and she continued, “Aaaand…. Where’s Geki and Black actually? It’s unusual for them to be late.”

“They’ll come sooner or later.” Torigoya answered with a small smile.

And true enough, after a few minutes Gekikara and Black came, with Black`s son in her arms, they immediately came towards us after they were inside and sat on the empty seats next to Sado-san.

“Sorry we’re late. Need to find someone who can babysit Ren.” Black said with her usual hushed tone while tried to adjust her hold on Ren.

“Is there any problem?” Yuko-san asked with a concerned look.

“No, it’s just that the obaa-san in the apartment next to mine is going shopping with her daughter, so we need to find other who’s willing to babysit Ren.” Black answered, “and there’s none. So….”

I dropped my head on the table with a small ‘thuck’ sound and muttered darkly, “Do. Not. Talk. About. Shopping.”

“Is there’s something wrong with her?” I heard Geki’s asked around.

“Her credit card has reached its limit.” Torigoya answered amusedly.

“She paid for Ookabuki’s hospital bills. So no shopping for her. At least for a while.” Sado-san added while she was chuckling at my depressed state. “Anyway, why are you told us to come here, Yuko-san?”

When I heard Sado-san asked that, I raised my head and looked at Yuko-san whose non-challanty said, “let’s have dinner first, and discussed it later on.” She picked up the menu on the corner of the table and gave it to Black while she was asking, “what do you two want to order? The usual?”

After Black nodded her answer, Yuko-san called the waiter. After the waiter, a cute and beautiful waiter, came Yuko-san leaned forward in her seat whilst smiling charmingly and with her husky voice she said, “So… pretty lady, my two friends over here,” she pointed at Black and Geki, “would like to have one bento set A, one gekikara ramen and two ocha. Please don’t make them wait too long.” And she completed the flirt with a wink.

Sado-san who was sitting in front of me sighed in exasperation, the action that I copied soon after, while Geki and Black rubbed the base of their nose in the same time. While for Torigoya…, well…, she… was actually kind of creep me out with her dark aura, and with my luck, she was sitting next to me. She was smiling but… I knew Yuko-san would’ve been dead if only they’re not on public places.

“Someone definitely will get a punishment from an angry cat later….” Sado-san mumbled under her breath, made me snorted in amusement, earned myself a few questioning looks which I answered with a grin.

“Hmm?” Yuko-san asked with mock-curiosity, “What is it, Shibuya?”

“Nothing.”

“You’re not thinking about perverted stuffs, aren’t you?”

I rolled my eyes at her while grumbled, “I am not you.”

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“Oy, Geki. Don’t use so much chili powder,” Yuko-san said when Geki poured a big amount of the chili powder from the small bottle that she always carries with her.

Geki giggled in response and just said, “but I like it…,” and poured some more.

“It’s amazing that you never get a stomach problem from THAT amount of spicy food you eat.” I said while I was scowling in disgust or more like, a combination of disgust and afraid at how blackish-red the ramen soup was. It was already spicy without the chili powder, and yet it’s still not spicy enough for her.

“I should say the same to you.” Sado-san said with a pointed look at me.

“I’m not that crazy with spicy food.” I retorted quickly.

“No, but you’re aji-onchi. The nattou crepe thing has proved it.” Sado-san said with a smirk, while the others nodding their agreement, made me scowled dangerously and bit the duck meat in my kamo seiro with too much power.

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“So…,” Sado-san said after we finished our dinner, “what do you want to talk about, Yuko-san?”

Yuko-san took a glance left-and-right, then she fixed her gaze on somewhere behind Black. We tried to look behind her too but Yuko-san stopped us by saying, “Don’t look. They’ll notice we’re here if you do.”

“Who’s it Yuko-san?” Black asked, already on her way to give Ren to Geki, “want me to check them out?”

“No need of that,” Yuko-san said dismissively with a wave of her hand, “just some Majijo`s juniors. Let’s go before they saw us here. We have other things to do rather than fight a pack of flies like them.”

With that being said, we immediately pay our dinner and left the izakaya. The night summer breeze soon greeted us after we’re on the road. I was really thankful that I chose to wear a long-sleeves shirt today, because it was already quite cold at night even though it was blasting hot during the day. I guessed autumn would come soon.

“So… where do we go now, Yuuchan?” I heard Torigoya asked when I was looking at the stars in the sky.

When I look at Yuko-san, she has this strange and mischievous glint in her eyes, and she didn’t even answer Torigoya`s question. I just hoped whatever she choose wouldn’t get us into trouble. Not so close to my entrance exam like this. I need to pass the exam.

For a while we were just following her without a word. Though the path she chose was the same way that lead to the area where Black`s and my apartment located. With each step I made, I had been dreading it more and more. And true enough, when we reached the crossroad, she took the road to our left side, which means, she was directing us to my apartment all along. Damn it! I needed to warn my girlfriend that ex-Rappappa would crash our place but there’s not enough time for it, all of a sudden we were already in the entrance of my apartment complex. I just hoped she was wearing something decent tonight. Since it was summer and it was blasting hot, she has a tendency to wear a really short pants and tank top and not-even-bother-to-wear-a-bra. Now that I think about it, I think the last was just to tease me, not because of the hot-summer-night, because the sight of her in that was just…. Okay, I need to stop imagining it before I get a nose-bleed.

“So…, Shibuya…,” Torigoya whispered while leaned towards me, “please tell me that we won’t see Ookabuki waiting for you in a sexy outfit.”

I felt myself blushed completely and choked out, “W-WHAT?!” while gaped at Torigoya, earned myself a questioning looks from the other who were walking a few steps ahead of us in the lobby of my apartment.

“She doesn’t know we’re coming over, right?” Torigoya asked with a whisper.

“Em… nope.”

Torigoya snickered and said, “if she do… You’ll definitely never hear the end of it from Yuuchan and Sado.”
 
“Tch…. She won’t wear something like that… Em… at least not in normal occasion.” I said just before we reached the lifts area where the others have been waiting for us and the lift.

“What did you two talking about?” Yuko-san asked.

“Nothing.” Torigoya said with a cunning smile, made Yuko-san frowned at her.

Then one of the lift door opened and after we were all inside the lift, Yuko-san whined childishly, “Come on what were you two talking about?”

Torigoya off-handedly said, “Mmm... I was just telling Shibuya that the guy that crossed way with us before in the lobby looks cool.” And then she whispered to me, “payback time,” made me sighed inwardly.

“Nyan-Nyan…,” Yuko-san whined again with a crest-fallen expression, and when the lift opened in my floor, she quickly went out of the lift and stomped all the way to my unit like an angry child.

“You actually didn’t say that, right? Payback time?” Sado-san asked Torigoya while smirking at our angry leader, who was stomping a few steps ahead of us, which Torigoya answered with a smirk too.

“Torigoya has become a sadist too~,” Geki said in between giggles, not her creepy giggle, this one was actually an amused giggle while Black was shaking her head whilst smiling slightly.

“I know she will never cheat behind my back,” Torigoya whispered to us, “But that doesn’t mean that I would be okay with her flirting with other girls. She needs to get a taste of jealousy too.”

When she reached the door of my unit, Yuko-san turned back and snapped at us, “hurry up, will you! And Shibuya, open the door!”

I walked faster while rolling my eyes and grumbled to Torigoya, “This is all your fault.”

And when I had opened the door, the sight that greet us was my girlfriend, who was sitting on the couch watching TV, and she was wearing one of my men`s shirt that I purposely bought for me to use it as pajamas and by the looks of it, she didn’t wears any pants.

She turned to looked at my direction while saying, “welcome home. What did the meeting’s-…,” and when she saw us, she gaped at us. Shocked.

Yuko-san whistled with her eyes gleaming with mischief. “Nice legs…,” she drawled slowly, “you should show it more.” Temporarily forgot the reason why she was angry before.

 Tomo blushed slightly and hastily walked to our bedroom while saying, “Emm… I’ll be inside, I don’t want to disturb your meeting.” But before she was inside, she was glaring and pointed at me and said, “You. Bedroom. NOW!”

“Now I know what you mean by being cranky.” Torigoya mumbled out to me. Yuko-san and Sado-san snorted in amusement while Geki and Black giggled softly.

“Yeah, and now I definitely know how she could tame you.” Sado-san added before she laughed out loud, “Just look at what she wears at home. Or lack of, to be exact.”

I was about to retort back at her but a loud voice that was saying, “ITANO! Come here, now!” stopped me from doing so and I quickly dashed towards the bedroom, while the others were openly laughing at me.

“Whipped…,” Yuko-san said in between laugh.

“Totally whipped.” Sado-san added.

“AM NOT!!” I retorted before I close the door and locked it.

When I turned back, I saw my girlfriend stood in front of the bed with her arms crossed, looked anything and everything but pleased, with her eyes narrowed at me. And those legs of her were just… Then I heard her lightly coughed and said, “I’m up here….” I immediately turned up my gaze while I was scratching my head and laughed awkwardly.

“Why you…,” she growled while walking towards me, and slapped my shoulder, “Hentai! And why didn’t you warn me about them coming over?! I could’ve prepared something….”

“I didn’t know too, okay!?” I retorted back at her, “By the time I realized that Yuko-san led us here, we’re already at the Lobby. It was already too late to warn you.” Then I put my bag on top of the vanity table and dropped my body on the bed with a huff and closed my eyes. “You think I like it when other people see you like this? Even though it’s them….”

“Silly… don’t sulk like that,” I heard her sighed, then I felt her in the bed beside me, “sometimes you get jealous too easily. And besides, we’re all girls here.”

“Yeah… well…, Yuko-san is more like a hentai oji-san than a girl.” I mumbled out.

She snuggled me while mumbled, “Hmmm… true….” Then she mindlessly slipped her hand under my shirt and caressed my bare stomach. I knew she didn’t mean to tease me, well, at least I thought she didn’t, but she still made me on a ‘tension MAX’ mode because of it. And after a while she said, “Right… get out, now.”

I immediately frowned and mumbled, “Are you banishing me from my own room?”

“No… I’m trying to prevent THEM to tease us because you’ve made them waiting outside for too long.” She slowly explained.

I let out a sigh and pulled her hand out from inside my shirt while grumbled, “fine…”, and started to made my way to the door. Before I opened the door, I turned back and asked, “you’re coming?”

“Nah…, I don’t want to disturb your meeting.” I frowned again while she was grabbing the iPad on the side table, and she quickly answered my un-asked question, “I’ll occupy my time with this.”

With that being said, I walked out of my our room, and the sight that welcomed me was Rappappa`s members sprawled all over in my living room. Yuko-san was sitting on a single couch while eating choco-fudge and cookies ice cream, straight from the container, sometimes she would spoon-feed Torigoya who was sitting on the arm-rest of the couch. Black and Geki had opened a bag of chips and munched it while they were sitting on a love-seat couch. As for Sado-san, she was standing in front of the shelf near the TV while looking at my DVDs collection, and a can of coffee in hand. I sighed and face-palmed myself inside my mind, ‘damn…, they’re already too comfortable here.’

“So… are you all here just to raid my food supplies?” I sarcastically asked to them, made them shifted their attention to me.

“Eh? You’re out already?” Yuko-san asked when I was walking towards the empty love-seat couch, “she didn’t kill you?”

“Of course not.” I retorted while I was rolling my eyes.

“Now that you’re here…,” Sado-san said while she was moving to sit beside me, “Yuko-san?”

Yuko-san took another spoon-full of the ice cream then she turned all serious. “Empty your schedule next Monday and Tuesday. If Monday you couldn’t come it’s okay. But, you have to come on Tuesday,” she commanded us, “I want you all to be fit and full of energy for the day. So, no fooling around this weekend.”

“Next Monday…,” Sado-san mumbled, “Wait… isn’t that… next week is the week for Sports Festival, right? “

“Yep.”

“So, what’ll Majijo do this year?” I asked, “As far as I know, Majijo never really do anything in Sport Festival.”

Yuko-san took her time to spoon-feed Torigoya and herself, then she mischievously said, “Oh… don’t worry. We’ll do something alright…. Majijo`s style.”

“Geki… how long have you all preparing this?” Black asked while narrowing her eyes dangerously, chips long forgotten.

“Ehhh….” Geki squeaked and turned to look at Yuko-san, asking for help.

“Don’t get mad at her, I gave order to them to not saying anything about it to anyone.” Yuko-san answered in Geki`s behalf and then she took another spoon-full of ice cream and half-smiled-half-groaned in satisfaction, “This ice cream taste like heaven…. Anyway! Here’s what we’ll do….”

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@Railgun96: sorry for the wait  :sweatdrop:

@cisda83: takadeka will be back after the event in majijo.  :twisted:

@sakura_drop_: same here. :nervous Glad you're still around though.
                       *hoping that you'll get your inspiration again soon.* XD

@haruko:  :lol: takadeka is busy with other things  :lol:
             
@theblueknight: well, lucky for you, I can't seem to write short one. Whenever I tried to write drabble it would always turned out to be a long fic :banghead:
                        aish... I want to take a vacation too

@BbSis: here's some Sado`s story for you. More of it will be in the side-story :nervous

@Shinoki: Hi  :welcome Thanks for reading.
               Er... that's because they are my OTP :nervous, lucky me have a kami-oshi and wifeni-oshi that also a close friend with each other  :wub:
               I'll try my best to not disappoint you all.  :nervous


Thanks for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys. Sorry again, for the wait :nervous

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 3
« Reply #332 on: April 13, 2013, 09:23:51 AM »
ohhh Where is the cutie Ren?!.. he was there and when they arrive to shibuya´s aparment he wasn´t o_o.. Reeeen where are you?

And Gekikara you are in trouble.. black give you a little Ren to take care and you forget about him! jajja its funny

OMG a love rappapa and how they tease...

but yeah im waiting for atsumina and sexy takadeka..

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« Reply #333 on: April 13, 2013, 12:05:16 PM »
Can I say how awesome Yuko-sama is?  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :wub: :wub: :wub:

I love this update and I also miss AtsuMina  :cathappy:

I'll be waiting for your next update!  :bow:
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 3
« Reply #334 on: April 13, 2013, 02:28:53 PM »
Gekikara~~ So cute!!!!
It's a bit sad how Shaku and Sado are......
Fufu~ ToriYuko are getting along nicely.....

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 3
« Reply #335 on: April 13, 2013, 03:00:16 PM »
Ah... so Sado and Miichan have past together... I can see that Sado was wronged here... She was helping a kid... elementary kid

Yeah... Sado open up to Miichan... You two are fated to be together... like WTomo...

Hahaha.... nice legs indeed... Tomo~mi....  :lol:

Erm... Sport festival... what are they going to do?

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 3
« Reply #336 on: April 13, 2013, 11:00:48 PM »
then im glad you write long chaps keeps me busy and intertain  :lol: i think the only way you will be able to get vacation is if you get sick but i hope you dont get sick its a pain in the you know what  :smhid dude nice update i was laughting at yuko's antics torigoya is so gonna punish her later  :lol:  and as for sado so thats why she wont give shaku a chance  :smhid thats still a stupid reason or reasons  :smhid i hope she makes up her mind soon before its too late you know what they say about waiting too long for a person to make up their mind like they say in persona 3 time never waits...  :) love this chap cant wait for the next one  :)
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mano continuemos siempre asi
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 3
« Reply #337 on: April 14, 2013, 12:27:18 AM »
yeyy you updated

yosh marimii begins slowly hehe thanks by the way

haha tomtomo are you cute

yuko drags them to shibuyas apartment

please update more hehe

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                                          ~KojiYuu~
                                                      ~TomoTomo~
                                           ~MariMii~
                           ~Wmatsui~
             ~MaYuki~

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                                And more ^^

Offline kahem

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 3
« Reply #338 on: April 14, 2013, 02:50:17 AM »
OMG Chiyuu just in man shirt!!!! *nosebleed*

Offline Railgun96

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 3
« Reply #339 on: April 14, 2013, 10:48:59 AM »
Thanks fr the update!

This chapter is awesome! :twothumbs Love tomotomo moments!

Update soon!

MAYUKI ~ YUKIRENA ~ ATSUMINA ~ KOJIYUU ~ TOMOTOMO♪

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