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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory: BlackGeki SP
« Reply #360 on: May 26, 2013, 05:35:12 PM »
Ooookay.... First of all, sorry for not updating in quite a long time. Something has happened to made me lost my inspiration. If any of you following my Tumblr blog might have notice how my blog has turned into a Chiyuu-exclusive-fan-blog. Let's just say that... someone's action (or lack of, to be exact) had made me lose all love on her. Not turning into a hater, but... just... neutral I guess. Ah... I better stop here. Don't want to say anything about that anymore. :smhid

And other than that, I'm currently on a new job-hunting mode too, and that kinda took my attention away from writing. And... I also have to be honest here that I... spent my time for online game far too much lately. Sorry for that. I'll try to write more after this. :nervous

Anyway, since Black-Geki win the vote (and thank you,all, for your participation, I really appreciate it), here is the Black Geki special that I have postponed since... eh... months ago? Well... enjoy! :D




*Few days after the Shibuya and Gekikara talk in between Chapter 24 and 25.
 
“So… what do you think I should do? …Yuko-san?” Geki asked while fidgeting nervously in the bench. The Rappappa`s sachou has kicked out the other members when she saw Geki’s forlorn face by the time she walked inside the Rappappa`s room.

Yuko sighed and turned to look at her double-personalities Shitennou, “I knew there’s something between you…. But before I said anything else about that matter, I’m gonna ask you some questions, if the answer for all of it are ‘yes’, then I’ll try to help you out. But if you still hesitate for even one question, then I’ll pretend that this talk never happens. Understood?”

Geki nodded her answer, somehow confused by the sudden change in the Rappappa`s Sachou demeanor.

“Alright… now I want you to listen and give me the answer afterwards. Do you just wanna be with her all the time, but you know you can’t? Do you want her to be happy and will do anything to guarantee her happiness?” Yuko asked seriously and tilted her head to the side afterwards while waiting for Geki’s answer.

“… Yes… to all…”

“Tch…,” Yuko snorted with a grin, “that’s the easiest question. Because, someone with deep friendship with their friends would answered with a ‘yes’ too. Now…, these ones are more than that… Do you want to kiss her lips till she’s gasping for breath? Do you-“

“W-wait, Yuko-san, you actually want me to answer that?” Geki stuttered with her face redden from embarrassment.

“Uh-huh. Now just listen for the second round of questions will ya? Where was I? Hmm… Ah! Do you want to hold her all night long, because being apart even just for a while is too painful to bear? And… do you… want to… touch her… and make her scream your name in pleasure…?”

“Th-that is…,” if her face was red before, it was even redder now.

“Just answer it!” Yuko snapped at Geki and she went to sit on her chair with a huff.

Geki jumped a bit and stuttered her answer, “Y-y-yes….”

“Do you… willing to love and raise her son as your own, even though his father is a son-of-a-bitch jerk?”

“I-I… b-but what if… what if he hurt her too… just like… his father?” The Crazy Queen muttered out with a painful expression on her face.

“Do you love him?”

“…”

“Geki?

“I-I already do…. U-um… it’s Black’s son… there’s no way I could hate him even though I hate his father so much.” Geki answered, helpless.

Yuko sighed again and walked to stand beside one of her Shitennou and gave her a pat on her shoulder. “We all do… we ALL do. That man… is….” Yuko trailed off and shook her head.

Geki smiled at the Sachou and blurted out her biggest fear, “B-but… Yuko-san… what if he grown up to be like…. His father?”

“Then you should prevent it from happening.” Yuko said while she was standing up and walked towards the window and looked down to the Majijo`s ground below.

“How? I… I don’t even know how to raise a baby. I…”

Yuko just stood in silence for a few seconds and turned to look at Geki with a serious expression on her face and she slowly said, “Stay with them. Help Black raise him. Protect him, care for him, and most importantly… love him. That way… I hope he can be a decent man when he grows up. And I know you feel insecure because you’re an orphan. That you’ve never even know how it feels like to have a family on your own. But Geki…, believe me on this. As long as you love him, I know you will be a great parent. Just do it.”

One of the Shitennou was just looking at her Sachou for a few minutes with an out-of-character-serious look on her face and then she slowly raised her right hand to her neck and slowly nodded, while slowly but surely said, “Yes, I will do it.”

Yuko smiled at Geki and whilst nodding her head, she said, “Good to hear that. And, by the way… I’ve heard you were spending the night in Shibuya’s place these couple of days…”

Geki sighed her response while slumped on one of the chairs in Rappappa’s Room, “Yeah… the longer I stayed with Black… um… I guess it’ll be better if I don’t. At least for a while.”

“Hm… yeah… you might be right. But, tomorrow is Friday though. Are you sure you still want to crash at Shibuya place? You do know that Ookabuki will stay over at her place on weekends, right?” Yuko asked with a grin.

Geki grimaced at what her sachou had said and with a scratch on the side of her head she said, “I’ve emailed Sado-san and she said I can come and crash her apartment for the weekend and she advised me to ‘don’t even try to disturbing the couples on weekends or else you’ll be traumatized for life.’ Though I don’t understand why she said that.”

As soon as one of the shitennou finished her speech, Yuko was roared in laughter, confusing the shitennou even more. “Ah… Well…,” Yuko paused a bit to wiped the tears in her eyes due to too much laughing, “she was talking from experience. Or should I say, experiences.” And she roared in laughter again.



*A few weeks later, about one week before the Kabuki Sisters` Raid.

One girl with a green jacket wrapped around her frail-looking body was climbing up the stairs of the small apartment building. Her shoes clanked softly every time it hit the iron stairs. She was only a few doors away from her destination when the door on her left opened suddenly. The old woman behind the door gasped in surprise at the sight of the girl who was standing just a few steps away from her door, but she soon smiled at her, by which the girl returned with a smile on her own. The infant boy on the old lady’s arms smiled slightly as a form of greeting towards the girl.

“Ah, Matsui-chan… I thought you were Yuki-chan. The sounds of your footsteps are so similar to her.” The old lady said, smiling, her smile turned into a frown when the infant on her arms struggling to get away from her and waving his tiny hands at the girl, asking silently for the girl to pick him up, which she did. The old lady watched as the infant raised up his hand and caressed the girl’s face and smiled happily, shown up his teeth.

Gekikara eyebrows rose in surprise when she saw the tooth, but she soon smiled and cooed the infant, “Ooh… you’ve another tooth… it’s so small and tiny…”

The infant responded with a happy baby talk and he snuggled the girl. The old lady watched it all and softly said, “He really likes you, isn’t he?”

“Eh?!”

The lady smiled at Gekikara and said, “I haven’t seen you for a few weeks lately and I noticed how he was upset with something. At first, I thought it was because of his tooth bothering him. But, with how he instantly raised up his head towards the door when we heard your footsteps and how he whined and pulled me here. I’d say little Ren was upset because he misses you.”

“Oh…,” Gekikara mumbled out. She lowered her head and saw the infant in her arms smiling happily at her, and she muttered, “I’m sorry little one… I’ve… lots of things on my mind. I won’t neglect you ever again.” She then looked at the old lady and said, “Thanks for taking care of him, I’ll take my turn to baby-sit him until B-Yuki comes home.”

“You’re welcome. He is a good boy, so it’s not a bother at all. If else, it makes me feel less lonely.” The lady said.

After they bid their goodbye, Geki walked to Black’s front door and opened the door with the spare key Black gave her months before. She turned the lights on and looked around the familiar small apartment. From its small kitchen that only divided with a small counter from the living area, the door that leads to the bathroom, and another door to the only bedroom in the apartment. She was gazing at the bedroom`s door as she was remembering how shortly after Ren was born, Black often told her to sleep in her bedroom instead of in the living room so that they could take their turns to tending Ren during the nights more effectively.

“Pa!” The infant said, cutting the girl out from her thought.

“Eh? What is it, Ren?”

“P-pa…ppa…”

“Eh?”

“Ppa!”

“Eh?” The girl dumbly said again and then understanding begun to dawned on her. “Eh? You’re calling me Papa?” She asked with eyes wide opened and pointed herself with her finger.

“Pp-pa!” Ren happily said and hugged the dumb-founded girl with her tiny hands.

Geki smiled and went to sit on the tatami floor near the low table on the living room whilst mumbling, “Yuko-san is right.” The infant looked at her with his head tilted to the side in an asking manner which made her smiled again and pecked the boy’s temple, “If your blood-father is a son-of-a…. er… Black would kill me if I use swear words in front of you, but anyway, I just need to be your papa instead, right?”

The infant grinned and clutched the girl while saying “Ppa!” again.

Geki pecked the boy’s temple again and started to rock slowly while humming some unknown tune for him. After a few minutes, the boy’s eyes starting to closed, drifting off to the dreamland, feeling safe and secure in his papa the girl’s arms. She was about to stand up and put the baby in his cot when the door opened.

“Geki?” Black whispered her friend`s name with eyes slightly opened wider, “So… it’s really is you.”

“Hi… Black. Long time no see.”

Black peered out and saw her son was sleeping on her friend’s arms and without saying a word; she took him to put him into his cot. The baby stirred slightly in his sleep and went back to sleep. She put him, tucked him in and kissed his forehead before heading out of the bedroom and to sit in front of the other girl.

“So… why are you here?” Black asked with her usual whisper.

“You don’t want to know where I was all this time?” Geki asked back with a little frown and pout.

“Should I?” Black teasingly asked even though her outside appearance shown nothing of it, and when she saw Geki pouting even more she smiled slightly and said, “I already know where you’ve been.”

“How?”

Black pulled out her handphone from her pocket and put it on the table while she was saying, “don’t underestimate Rappappa’s mailing system.”

“Oh…, wait… you and the others emailing each other about me? What were you talking about?”

“About how I feel like I have two kids instead of one,” Black dead-panned. When she saw the hurt expression on the other girl’s face, she smiled slightly and added, “I’m kidding. They told me about your whereabouts and about how I don’t need to worry and that you would come back home again after you finished… whatever it is you need to finish.”

“Oh…”

“So… with you being here, I take it you have finished it?”

“Yeah… I just… need to think for a while. And I’ve reached my conclusion now.” Geki sighed and leaned back to the wall behind her.

“Good then…”

Geki shown off her rare soft smile and whispered, “tadaima.”

“Okaeri.” Was the soft reply.

“So… what did I miss?” Geki asked while stretching out, “About Ren… aside from his new tooth.”

“I knew you had seen it.”

“Of course.” Geki responded with a mock hurt expression on her face.

“He called me Mama… just a few days ago… and he has starting to learn how to crawl.” Black answered with a rare tender looks on her face.

“…Oh…,” Geki squeaked softly, somehow she was feeling guilty, she was happy when Ren called her Papa. But she wasn’t sure if Black would be as happy. And bad luck for her, Black noticed something was wrong with her. And to dismiss her un-asked question, Geki smiled slightly and whispered, “He… um… called me Papa… just then.”

“I see…”

After a few minutes of silence passed, Geki grew even more nervous and guiltier. She started to fidgeted while waiting for Black’s respond, a real respond. But she knew it would be better if she wait instead of asking. And she knew she had made a right decision when she heard Black sighed softly and gave her a slight tender smile.

“I’ve always knew that he will eventually sees you as his other parent. Considering how you’ve been helping me looking out for him ever since he was born. But I’ve never thought he would call you Papa.” Black said, then she shook her head, amused. “I hope it’s not making you feel uncomfortable and all.”

“Um… no… I was actually happy when I heard him calling me Papa. But….”

Seeing the guilty looks Geki gave her, Black smiled reassuringly and said, “I don’t mind, Geki. You might be the best Papa for him.”

“Then… if I’m his Papa…,” Geki trailed off as she was off to a deep thought and after a few second of internal battle inside her head, she made her decision to talk to Black about it. “If-if I can be his Papa…. Then… can I also be his true Papa?” She asked the other girl as she looked at her straight in the eyes.

“Hm?”

Geki gulped noticeably and for the first time in her life she was actually afraid. After a few seconds of starring contest with Black, her fear got the best of her and she shifted her gaze towards the tatami mats. Silently waiting, hoping, praying.

“You… baka…,” she heard Black muttered in exasperation, “Why do you think I let you stayed here after all these months? Why do you think I keep asking the others about your whereabouts? Why do you think I keep on worrying over you? Baka….”

Geki whipped her head to look at the other girl and stutteringly said, “B-Black…, I-I…,” only to get cut out by the other girl who has leaned over her and kissed her softly, slowly.

“… Rena…,” Black whispered softly, her breath was hitting the other girl’s face, unlike the usual whisper this one is more sensual though, paralyzing the other girl on her spot and made her mind went blank, “you are so… baka….”

“B-bl-… er, I mean… Y-Yuki…” Geki stuttered again, inside her mind she was cursing herself for letting Black made her a stuttering fool. But she couldn’t help it. Unlike the other girl, she didn’t know what it feels to be in love before. She didn’t know how to deal with it. Didn’t know how to act like her usual self when even by being this close to the other girl was enough to made her mind went blank, her palms to sweat, her heart-beat to increase its’ pace, and most importantly, made her felt more alive than ever. “I-I….”

“I know…,” Black said as she was stood up and offered her hand to Geki, “Let’s go to sleep, shall we? It’s late and I want to have my rest before Ren decided to wake up and play all night.”

Geki took the offered hand and shortly after they were both standing, Black turned her back at her and walked towards the bedroom, made Geki frowned and muttered, “B-but… I-I… I want to say that I lo-”

When she heard the other girl mumbled turns into incoherent words, Black turned back and firmly said, “Rena, I know. Don’t forget that I know you better than anyone else, even yourself. Now, let’s go to sleep.” And then she went inside the bedroom, left the other girl alone in the living room, to pondering to herself about what had happened between them.

After a few minutes of out-of-character-brooding, Geki snapped out of her mind and went inside the bedroom and dropped her body to lay on the futon beside Black. Nothing change compared to the other nights that she had spent with Black, but this time she can sleep with a big and content smile on her face.



@haruko: Er... sorry... I forgot to put his part on Shibuya's apartment scene. But... if you want to imagine Geki forgot about him than... do so... :lol:
              it's funnier that way XD

@sakura_drop: more kick-ass and awesome Yuko in this side story.  XD
                      as I said before, she's not my oshi, but I respect her so much :oops:

@shinoki: cute Geki overload in this side-story  XD (ah, well, I hope  :P )

@cisda83: IMO, lots of things happened in Sado's life that made her... the way she is. And I hope I can write it well later on.
               as for the sports fest... :twisted: Lets wait and see, shall we? :twisted:

@theblueknight: yeah, well, but you have to wait longer though... :nervous
                        Ah... I want a vacation so bad that i'm willing to get sick. As long as it's just a light flu or fever.  :nervous

@elo: don't worry, I had written down some for MariMii. :D

@kahem: I had her Janken Taikai 2011 costume in mind with the exception that Ookabuki didn't wear the very-short shorts Chiyuu wore. And it's just so... :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

@railgun96: thanks for reading. Sorry I couldn't update soon. :(

@minami-chan: the 'guys' in my story are just so whipped  :lol:

@Kojiyuu44: thanks for liking it  :bow:

@BbSis: I don't like drama but I like surprise :D
            So, yeah... Sado and Shaku has a past together

@tfme3638: thanks for reading  :bow:
                  eh... really? I cringed when I read the first chapters because the amount of errors there. I want to re-write it, but... haven't got the time :nervous

@songbac: ah... well... here's the update  :lol:
                don't forget to remind me again to update if i take too long in updating this again  :lol: online game really took my free time lately. :lol:

@chichay12: ah... sorry :( Hope you'll like the side-story

@xsilentreader: Ah, hello  :welcome Glad I could pull you out then  :lol:
« Last Edit: May 26, 2013, 05:54:47 PM by stv_wong »

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #361 on: May 26, 2013, 05:50:09 PM »
yeyyy you updated

hahaha ren calles geki papa

awwww geki is so cute she is stuttering

thanks I will be waiting ^^
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #362 on: May 26, 2013, 06:41:55 PM »
an update...yay...

like it so much...it's so cute and fluffy

ahh...such a great power love is...even a brutal fighting freak like Gekikara have to kneel down and show her soft side in front of love...good job man :on GJ:

anyway,may I know what online game you are playing? been a while since last time I touch an online game....

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #363 on: May 26, 2013, 06:49:30 PM »
read read update <3 <3 <3
yay yay! BlackXGeki <3
Yuko-san... yeah...
Gekipapa is kid #2~~~
When Gekikara said 'can I be his real papa'
I was like GET MARRIED YOU TWO!!!! *yes capitalized as I was nearly literally shouting

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #364 on: May 26, 2013, 10:40:43 PM »
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs weeeeee welcome!!!

I really like this couple ... they are soooooooooo sweet!!!

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #365 on: May 27, 2013, 03:02:23 AM »
Poor Geki, Black didn't let her speak xD

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« Reply #366 on: May 27, 2013, 05:44:42 AM »
update!!
it was really cute~~
loved it when Ren called Geki papa :)
so cool of Black not letting Geki speak  :lol:
Thank you!!

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #367 on: May 27, 2013, 07:23:21 AM »
Jeje sorry but Im a little ren´s fan *O* ... jeje it was funny if they forget.. black gonna be mad with geki..

otherwise awww this was so sweet :B

Im waiting do long for this chapter thanx a lot :B

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #368 on: May 27, 2013, 07:52:12 AM »
Ah... Geki was so cute... embarrass over the more explicit questions....  :twisted:

but I can understand why she was worried about Ren... whether he would turn up as his father...   :yep:

Yeah... you can only hope you rise them right.. giving them all the right morale advices ... able to know what's right and wrong...  :thumbsup

Poor Sado... for being scar for life...  :lol:

Ah.. Ren was so cute... and calling Rena Papa... yeah...  :inlove:

Ah... Yuki was so understanding... and more initiative than Rena...

Rena was reduced to a stuttering toddle...

Yeah... Yuki and Rena together for real... So sweet...

Can't wait to see more whether the side stories or the continue of the real story...

Whichever... I enjoyed reading them...

Thank you for the GekiBlack side story...

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #369 on: May 27, 2013, 02:43:48 PM »
*imagining blushing and embarrassed Geki*
KYAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
*faints*
Somebody get my soul~~~
Uwaa... i can't use computer for a while... :banghead:
I hope my MariMii is posted by that time~~  :deco: please~~ :cathappy:
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« Reply #370 on: May 27, 2013, 07:15:33 PM »
Oh yeah new update  :cathappy:

O hey Stv-san, love this OS, it's sweet n cute :wub:
Geki looked really afraid to convey her real feeling :lol: but, that's the cute side of her :deco:

Can't wait for ur other update too  :D
Take care well Stv-san :jphip:
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« Reply #371 on: May 28, 2013, 04:03:54 PM »
Yes finally the Black-Geki special!!! I'm so glad it was the pairing that won the poll. Thank you so much for this. I expected a longer one but this actually worked. They finally called each other by their real names yay!!!

Little Ren was so cute. He recognized Geki as his other parent. Can we legally change his name to Ren Kashiwagi-Matsui like with Western names?

When I was imagining what you would do with their confession, I thought for sure Geki was the one to confess. But it turned out that Black beat her to it. I wish they said those 3 magic words to each other though.

So, which one is next? I hope you do more specials like this for each couple.
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« Reply #372 on: May 29, 2013, 05:03:50 PM »
Yay!!! :twothumbs update!!  :panic: :panic: bring out the confetti!  :lol: :lol: 

Seriously, despite all the 'errors' it's great! Heck! You made me a tomotomo fan! :twothumbs :wub: :inlove: :wub:

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« Reply #373 on: May 30, 2013, 10:12:30 AM »
I usually did replies when I post the updates, but because I don't know how long it takes for the next update, I'll do it now.  :nervous

@Elo: Black's son is a cutie, right? XD

@bunny_rabbit:  :D glad you like it. It has been years since the last time I played online games too, but I got hooked shortly after I tried it. Ah btw, I'm playing Eligium.

@Shinoki:  :lol: they're really like a married couple.

@Minami-chan:  :D

@kahem: as I've said before, all of the 'seme' in my fic are whipped  :lol: I wonder why.... :lol:

@KojiYuu44: cute Ren and Geki-papa  XD

@Haruko: lol Geki is not a good papa if she forgetting him  :lol: but it's indeed funny :lol:

@cisda83: well, IMO besides being batshit insane, she is actually quite innocent at heart (esp if you compared her to the other Rappappa)
               that's why she was embarassed over the... indecent questions Yuko asked her.

@xsilentreader:  *took your soul and put it back into your body*  :lol:

@Crimson: Geki's so cute, yes?

@hikari_043083: hm... I don't know how the naming thing in Japan, but usually when a girl got married, she'll take her husband family name.
                        And same-sex marriage isn't legal yet in Japan, so...  :banghead:
                        well, Black is more... 'experienced'  XD
                        next? Hm... after the next Chap, I've promised some peoples I'll put SadoShaku

@tfme3638: confetti?? :lol: Btw, glad you like the stories  :lol:

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« Reply #374 on: May 30, 2013, 11:39:16 AM »
I havnt commented in a while due to my Internet being down so I feel a bit guilty lol anyway love the side story I can't believe geki is getting called papa lol I love tomotomo in Ur fic they seem perfect for eachother an I really want to know more about the relationships in the gang and between tomochin an her mother I wonder how she would react with tomotomo dating eachother an remind me always stay on tomomi's good side

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« Reply #375 on: May 30, 2013, 01:16:23 PM »
stv_wong-san

Yeah... Geki seem to be more innocent compared to the others.... as you said

Really you are going to make SadoShaku side story soon enough...?

Can't wait... whatever you decide to make.... whether the side stories or the continuous of the main story...

I'm looking forward to it...

Thank you....

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #376 on: May 30, 2013, 03:29:50 PM »
stv_wong-san, you said that

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I usually did replies when I post the updates, but because I don't know how long it takes for the next update, I'll do it now.

and i think maybe it's longgggggggggggg timeeeeeee, you'll update next chap  :smhid :smhid :smhid

by the way the sidestory : BlackGekiSp is very good  :twothumbs:twothumbs

I hope you'll update soon  :shifty: :shifty: :shifty:
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) SideStory : BlackGekiSP
« Reply #377 on: May 31, 2013, 01:03:41 PM »
KYAAA~~~~ so cute of Ren calling Geki papa~  :wub: :wub: :wub:

Uwa, I got cavities from all the sweet scenes~  :luvluv2:

This is the second story (after my girlfriend's AtsuYuu) that made me squeal this week~  :wriggly:

Nyuhu~~~  :shy2:


And Yuko-sama, so amazing~~  :luvluv1: She is born to be the leader~ I like how Oshima Team K is shaping up coz of her leading~ (that was a bit out of topic, nee?  XD) but I mean it, she is so cool and such an amazing person~~ be it real life, stories or majisuka  :mon inluv:


Uwa, I wonder why Black didn't let Geki say that she loves her... Maybe I am seeing too much...but I feel that Black is afraid of the word love...Even though she loves Geki, right? Or maybe she is afraid Geki doesn't love her coz she doesn't know what love is?  :dunno: :sweat:

Anyway, this is a great update... I laughed a lot about the mentioning of Sado's experience with interrupting the momentS  :mon lmao:


Really, thank you for this squeal-awesomeness-worthy update and sorry for the late comment  :kneelbow:

I'll be waiting for the next part patiently~


P.S. I voted for BlackGeki but I still wanna read SadoShaku story  :hee: Greedy, aren't I?  :kekeke:
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-1
« Reply #378 on: June 10, 2013, 05:52:20 PM »
Chapter 29 - Part 1



Currently I was half-walking-half running towards Majijo. Why, you asked? Because Yuko-san told me to come shortly after my classes ended, but the damn traffic in Shinjuku where my prep-school was located, was on its worst today. Because of that, and the damn teacher that just wouldn’t leave after the bell rang, I had to miss the train. Yuko-san told us that if we couldn’t come in Monday, it’s okay, but knowing her, it’ll be for the best if I at least come to Majijo even only for a while. And when I was inside of Majijo’s ground, I immediately dashed towards the stadium.

When my eyes spotted some of Majijo’s girl near the stadium, I stopped in my track and took a deep breath to control ragged breathing and made myself more presentable. After a while, I composed myself, tried to put on my queen’s mask, the bored and bad-ass look, and slowly walked towards the stadium while giving a glare to whoever stood in my way. When I was inside, the first thing I saw was the three huge rings in the middle of the stadium, octagon rings, just like the ones in Dragon`s Gym. Then, in front of the three rings, stood the small podium with few chairs on top of it, where most of Rappappa`s members and some other peoples located. On the left side of the podium, stood some whiteboard where Wota and Unagi were scribbling something on it. After I saw the Rappappa’s members, I didn’t even bother to watch the matches.

As I walked closer, I noticed the other peoples that were on the podium. They were Captain Takahashi’s Shitennou. As Yuko-san had said before, perhaps they were there to be the supporting power when needed. The Captain herself wasn’t here though. But, why the hell that Ohori stood so close to my girl? And those occasional skin-ships she did. Grhhhh… Damn it. I felt myself scowled and gave death-glare towards her while I walked towards the podium. And I definitely saw Ohori smirked to me when our eyes met, made my girl, who was talking to her at that time, to turned back to look at my direction and gave a slight smile to me since we still has to hide our true relationship from others’ prying eyes. But her smile slowly turned into a frown when she took notice of the death-glare I gave to Ohori.

When I reached the side of the low podium, I jumped on top of it and went towards Yuko-san and Gekikara’s direction, when usually I would go to Tomo first. But because that Ohori was there, and because I was afraid I couldn’t control my emotion if I go there, I didn’t.

Gekikara smiled at me as I was getting closer to them, while Yuko-san, who’s immediately noticed my foul mood, punched my arms lightly as a greeting, flung her arm around my shoulder and whispered to me, “Don’t get jealous so easily. You’re hurting her feeling if you’re like this.” By which I responded with a growl. She glanced from the corner of her eyes towards them, and whispered again, “Yep… you did. Her mask is still intact, but I can see the pain in her eyes clearly.”

I pried her arm off me and went to sit on one of the chairs there while muttered, “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

“Yeah… yeah… riiiiiiiiiiiight…,” she teasingly said while sat down beside me, “seriously though, don’t fight just because of this. As Cap’n had said, Ohori just likes to plays around, remember? And add the fact that they were neighbors for years…. And after all, Ohori-san is already- ”

“Whatever…,” I muttered with a roll of my eyes, and I decided to change the topic, “Anyway, how’s it going?”

Yuko-san gave me the ‘I-know-what-you’re-trying-to-do’ looks for a while, then she nodded her head towards the rings, then she pointed at the left and center rings and said with a bored tone, “Well, right now we’re only getting the matches for the 4th and 5th winner positions, they’ll get free lunches for 2 weeks, courtesy of the Head Mistress. We already found the Top Three for next round tomorrow. And… as we had predicted before, Center wins to the next round,” she then turned to look at the whiteboard, “one junior and… Shaku.”

When I heard the last name I immediately whipped my head to fully looked at her to see whether she’s joking with me or not while shouting a “WHAT?!”

She smiled ruefully and mumbled, “you’ve heard me.”

“B-but… why Shaku…” My question trailed off into nothing as I was at lost of what to say.

“To prove herself to Sado perhaps…,” she sighed her answer and then she scratched her head, “I don’t understand too.”

I glanced at Shaku who was sitting down at the corner of the podium with an eerily serious expression as I was remembering Rappappa’s meeting last week in my apartment.


*Flashback, the meeting at Shibuya’s apartment.

“So…, we’ll set up a… tournament… so to speak… just like the usual Sports Festival,” Yuko-san said with the spoon still hanging from her mouth. She took another spoonful of ice cream before continued, “but, like what I had said before, we’ll do it Majijo’s style. Which means… Fight Tournament….”

“… Cool…,” I said with starry eyes at the mentions of fight, “hey, hey…, Yuko-san, can I join too?”

“No way.” She dead-panned with a serious looks, made me scowling instantly, and then she added, “it’s for Majijo’s student only.”

“So... with it being a tournament… what are the prizes?” Sado-san asked.

“The… top of Majijo….” Yuko-san said slowly.

“WHAT!?”

Yuko-san smiled at our aghast look and added, “But for that, they need to pass from you all first. The first day will be the ‘elimination day’ where the contestants will fight each other and the three winners from the first day, will fight three of the Shitenou, they choose, in a group fight. And the one, who’s still standing after that, if it was the contestant, will face….”

“Please tell me it’s not you.” Torigoya cut Yuko-san with her question.

Yuko-san smiled reassuringly at Torigoya and mumbled, “No…,” and she caressed Torigoya’s cheek oh-so-gently while softly said, “as much as I want to… I don’t want to make you worried even more.” Made me shivered in…, I didn’t know… disgust was too… overboard…, maybe awkward was more fitting…, at their blatant display of affections which was quite rare if you took out Yuko-san’s pervert ways of skin-ships. From the corner of my eyes, I saw the new couple was trying hard to hide their smile, while Sado-san was slightly frowning and sighed.

“So… who’ll they facing with?” Black asked after a few moments of awkward silence and she shifted Ren position in her lap.

“Maeda.” Yuko-san mumbled her answer, ice cream long forgotten.

“Ah…. I see….”

“But… won’t they think that this is unfair? Considering how we’re on top of Majijo for reasons.” I asked, “I mean… the chance for them to win is very… small.”

“Yeah… well…, that’s why I told you all have to come on the second day,” Yuko-san said while scratching her head, “so if… there’s a… brawl going on… even if they don’t pick you up as opponent, which I think the chances of them picking you is kinda small, because picking-you-up means death-wish…,” she trailed off, “but… it’s highly probable that there will be… protest of… whatever the result will be. You all should come to… ‘maintain the condition’, so to speak.”

“And there’s this Nezumi,” Sado-san added, “I think she’ll use this chance to ‘screw’ us.”

“Yeah… the probability for that is quite high…,” Yuko-san mumbled, “Cap’n thinks so too, which is why she’ll ask her friend to come and help us.”

The others were nodding their head at what Yuko-san had said but for me, I remembered what had happened when we first met Captain Takahashi’s Shitenou. Or more precisely one of them. Ohori. Oh, I knew she’s on our side, and according to my girlfriend, a good and kind onee-chan. But that doesn’t mean I have to like her, right? Which, I don’t anyway. And, her, visiting my girlfriend for almost every day when she was hospitalized and being all touchy-feely with her, only made me disliking her even more.

“Tch…,” I muttered in exasperation, knowing that it would be for the best that they’ll come too. But I didn’t like it at all, so I tried to found another subject that related to that issue. “Was it because of the up-coming tournament that she often came home bruised and battered recently?” I asked while pointing at my bedroom with my head to made them knew who I was talking about.

“Yeah, I ordered them to do it with Youran and Shaku, it was for training more than an actual fight actually.” Yuko-san sighed, “because, well, let’s face the truth, the contestants will choose to fight them over you all.”

“Because they considered the recent Rappappa are weaker than us.” Sado-san finished. “And, not to mention the Kabuki Sisters are still not in their best condition after that raid.”

“Yeah. Hence the trainings.” Yuko-san amended, “I hope it’ll works out or we might-”

The sound of door being opened made Yuko-san stopped in the middle of her speech, and all eyes in the room glanced at the direction of the sound, which was from my bedroom’s door. Tomo, who was behind the said door, grimaced awkwardly and then she hurriedly walked toward the bathroom while saying, “Eh~, sorry to interrupt. I just wanna go to the toilet.” And I noticed she had worn short pants by now.

“Nah..., you’re not interrupting anything.” Yuko-san said with amusement apparent in her voice. “This is your home, you know.” And she and Sado-san laughed a little at how Tomo hastily walked as if she was afraid of something. Which she wasn’t, she was just feeling a bit uncomfortable because of them being her. Well, I guessed. “It’s funny, how uncomfortable she is because of us being here.” Yuko-san said with a low voice. “She’s never like that in school.”

“I think this is the first time I saw her being all awkward like that.” Sado-san added with a low voice too.

“That’s because you all invading her personal space without notice first.” I grumbled out.

“Yeah, well…, I’m your sachou, you see,” Yuko-san said with a shrug, “I want to see how you cope with living together with her, since I know how individual and private you are.”

“Thanks for the concern,” I retorted with full of sarcasm, “but we’re doing fine.”

“But earlier you said…” Torigoya piped in, but I immediately cut her out.

“We’re fine. Just… need to adapt. That’s all.”

Torigoya was about to retort back at me when Tomo opened the toilet’s door, and like before, all eyes flew to her direction again.

“…What?” she asked, suspicious.

Yuko-san gave her a cheeky grin and answered, “nothing~”

Tomo shifted her gaze to me and asked again in exasperation, “What?”

“How the hell should I know?” I answered while I was rolling my eyes.

She narrowed her eyes at me for a few more seconds until Yuko-san distracted her by asking oh-so-innocently, “Why do you wear pants now?”

“H-huh?”

“I’m not joking when I said you should show you legs more, you know…,” Yuko-san said oh-so-innocently again and then she drawled out while grinning perversely, “Maaaaaan~~~, I’m lucky… all of my Rappappa have their fair shares of beauties…. Goddamn hot Tori-nyan, graceful beauty Sado, fashion gal Shibuya, the double ojou-sama beauties Geki and Black… and our kouhai are good too.”

I rolled my eyes at her remark while at the same time fought with the urge to growl at her indecent thought of my girlfriend, even though I knew she would never ever cheat on behind Torigoya’s back… or else she’ll having nightmares for the rest of her life. At the same time, Torigoya was coughing slightly to catch Yuko-san attention while Sado-san sighed in a tired manner at the up-coming World War III between Torigoya and Yuko-san. Geki and Black smiled amusedly at the situation. We all know the fight wouldn’t be too serious, so we’re not too concerned with it.

But instead of fighting, Yuko-san who’s seemed to notice Torigoya’s foul mood, grinned her much-too-innocent-squirrel’s-grin to Torigoya before latched herself on her, which made both of them to fall back at the carpeted floor. Even after they both fell, Yuko-san still didn’t let go of Torigoya, she was snuggling even more closer to her instead, which Torigoya responded with wrapping her arms around Yuko-san. They didn’t even care (or realize) that we were also there nor the fact that they were in other’s apartment.

“Eh…,” Tomo whispered hesitantly after a few moments of awkward silence, save for the sound the couples on the floor made as they were cuddling and, to our horror, started to kiss, “did they always like this even though you all are also here?”

Then unanimous and long sighs from Sado-san, Black, Geki and me answered her, made her eyes widen and she with a louder voice she asked, “Seriously?”

“Even before they’re officially dating, they were often gone in their own world whenever we’re alone.” Sado-san sighed, “You know, some playful bantering, discreetly flirting with each other and such. And after they became official, it’s only getting worse.” Black, Geki and me amended Sado-san speech with a nod.

“Eh~~~”

“OY! My apartment is not your private love hotel! Go back home if you want to do ‘that’!!” I shouted while crossing my arms in front of my chest when I saw Yuko-san was starting to grope Torigoya, made them froze for a bit and Yuko-san turned to gave me a pointed-irritated look, then she stood up and helped Torigoya, who’s blushing madly, to stand up.

“Fine then. We’ll leave now…,” Yuko-san muttered childishly, and then she turned all serious again, “don’t forget the tournament though.”

*End of Flashback


“Wait…,” I slowly said as I realized something, “this means…. Yuko-san, this means Shaku will face us tomorrow?”

“More likely… yeah, she will.” Yuko-san grimly said with a deep frown on her face, “Seems like another meeting is on the way for tonight.”

“I… can’t join in.” I said with a bit guilty feeling, and I sighed when I saw her frowned at me and answered the un-asked question, “My step-sister hasn’t come home yet after a fight with her Dad two days ago. So, my Mom called me earlier today and asked me to look for her if I want that Hummer car to be mine.”

“Ah…,” Yuko-san sighed with a sympathetic look on her face, “I hope she’s alright. Your step-sister is a cutie.”

“What the hell? Are you a loli-con or something?!” I growled at her choice of words.

Yuko-san just shrugged and calmly answered, “What? It’s true though.”

“She’s just fifteen for God’s sake.”

“It doesn’t change the fact that she’s cute.” She dead-panned, “Seriously though, I really hope she’s alright. She’s seemed like a good girl, and if people know she’s related to you….”

“Yeah…, I know…,” I grimly said while rubbing my head, “I’ll send Dance to look for her after this.”

“Go now. This is urgent matter. I think I saw her walked out from the back door just minutes before you came.” She ordered with a straight face while watching at the matches.

I sighed as a response and stood up, walking towards the back door as she said. During my walk, I could felt someone watching me, and I didn’t even need to turn back and look who was that. I already knew who. Sigh… I knew Yuko-san was right, I just…. Argh… Damn it all!!

After I walked a few steps out from the stadium through the back door, my ears started to hear some voices. It’s seemed like girls’ voices, made it two girls, and it seemed like they were debating about something. I turned my head towards the direction of the voices and saw the two girls stood behind a sakura tree, their faces couldn’t be seen because the tree’s lowest branches blocked my sight. As I walked closer, I took noticed of the owner from one of the voices, it was Dance, the other one… it’s a familiar voice but I still didn’t know who, until I walked even more closer to them and saw the person. I felt my eyes bulged out and my mouth opened wide.

They noticed me came to them and turned to look at me, and as my mind finished with the rebooting process, I shouted to them, “AHH!!.... Why are you here?!!”, while my finger pointed at the other girl.

Dance was stutteringly whispered my name after she saw me, in a shocked state after I shouted at them, but the other girl ran towards me and gave me a hug while shouting, “Tomo-nee…, I miss you…”

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@XxRoByNxX78: nah, it's alright. Glad you still found the time to commented though. Relationships in the gang? Hm... I'll try.  :)

@cisda83: hey... thanks for waiting, here you go...  :)
               ShakuSado will be post after the tournament.

@songbac: er... the waiting is not that long this time, right? :nervous

@sakura_drop_: Heeee.... glad you like it XD
                       About Black, she knows it's very hard for Geki to speak her feelings up, so she spare her from that :lol:
                       And about Sado... :lol: Kokabuki might be the third wheel with the Shibuya-Ookabuki pair, but Sado is the third wheel for almost every couples.
                       (and not to mention the third wheel for the one she loves and her bestfriend) :(



So... who can guess who Shibuya's step-sister is?  :lol:
And... should I make Shaku fight the gang or withdrawing from the tournament? :? I still don't know which way should I make her go to.
Anyway, thanks for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys. Sorry for the miss-spelling and bad grammar. :nervous

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-1
« Reply #379 on: June 10, 2013, 06:15:36 PM »
 I think its kanon.....
Kyaaaa I can't wait to read the next part  :on woohoo:
Pls update soon :on gay:

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