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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 20 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #120 on: September 19, 2012, 05:29:16 AM »
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!~ you! you made me cry from this!!  :OMG: :OMG: :frustrated: :frustrated:

first, blackyouran?  :on blackhole:

second, why not sadoshaku?  :tantrum:

third, shibuyadance?  :stoned: :stoned:

and fourth, ookabuki cries, and thinks that shibuya cheated on her? what the heck!!??  :on blackhole: :temper: :on voodoo: :on speedy:

just let me die from this  :mon cry: :mon cry:

man, this is so heartbreaking!  :mon headbang:

please, update more soon. and please please, send someone suitable for dance.. maybe kanon? or 'nantene'?  :mon lovelaff:

oh oh oh, does this mean that the day shibuya will say the 3 words to ookabuki is drawing near??  :mon mischief: yaaahhh~ can't wait for that time!!  :mon fyeah: :mon XD:  DOKI DOKI  :mon crazyinlove:
I love FTM. Nuff said.

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 20 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #121 on: September 19, 2012, 05:57:28 AM »
JAJAJ a I love the Sado-yuko humor :D... but torigoya is not jealous about their relationship mmm

-_- shibuya.. you are in troubles but this time you dont do anything bad.. aww

yeah i want blackgeki of course and youran with... miichan its ok

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 20 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #122 on: September 19, 2012, 07:51:18 AM »
I know it,, Dance love Shibuya  :smhid :smhid and what about Tomo, i don't wanna see her crying  :cry: :cry:
What a great update as usual  :thumbsup :thumbsup
And what about the other training? I want to see how Black train Gakuran... eh i mean Youran  :doh:
« Last Edit: September 21, 2012, 02:26:23 AM by fael_c00l »
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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 20 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #123 on: September 19, 2012, 08:48:10 AM »
hichichic...  :( :( :(

first, your fic is very interesting, i like your fic very much  :wub: :wub: :wub:, so i'm sorry because i read it for a long time, now i comment to you  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:

second, hichichic  :( :( my chiyuu, poor my chiyuu, it's a misunderstanding  :smhid :smhid :smhid, i love couple tomotomo very much   :wub: :wub: :wub:

third, my kojiyuu's so cute, more kojiyuu please  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:, hehe. Yuko -san and sado are funny when they tease shibuya. By the way, why isn't sadoshaku??  :yawn: :yawn: :yawn:

i'm waiting for your update, i want to know what happen to love story's Shibuya - Ookabuki  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

  :heart::heart:THANK YOU VERY MUCH  :heart: :heart:
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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 20 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #124 on: September 19, 2012, 10:02:41 AM »
Oh noooooooooo
Poor shibuya.... and poor Ookabuki ...

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 20 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #125 on: September 19, 2012, 03:57:41 PM »
I'm loving all these chapters!!  :heart:

Yuko is such a teaser~ and i love her for that! Hahaha Yuko-Sado dou are the best trolls ever in akb!  XD

I want more please!  :bow:

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 20 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #126 on: September 19, 2012, 04:54:43 PM »
My poor Chiyuu T_T
The period thing is funny xD

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 20 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #127 on: September 21, 2012, 10:46:14 AM »
Chapter 21





*Majijo`s upper floor.

It has been three weeks since our ‘Grand Entrance in Majijo again’ as Yuko-san would’ve said. And these weeks was even more miserable for me than the two weeks before. First of all, I’ve started with the prep-school and I have class four times a week, and for someone who’s never study properly before, it was like hell. I won’t be surprised if I saw smoke coming out of my head due to overused.

And second, Tomo has been all weird lately. Whenever I emailed her, her reply would came after an hour or more. Whenever I called her, it was more like a greeting exchange rather than a phone conversation. She was always had reasons to end it. And when I asked her out for a date, she was always refused, saying that she has another errands or she was about to leave with her family. And when we had our training, which was, due to my now packed schedule, only twice for now, she was always kept her distance from me. Hell, I was talked to Kokabuki more than to her, which was extremely weird, considering our mutual dislike to each other.


*Flashback. Three days ago.

“Damn… I’m so tired….” Kokabuki said while she dropped her body on the grass.

“Heh… weak…” I said while still sat on the grass, facing the streaming water on the river.

I glanced at Tomo, she were sitting beside Kokabuki with a straight expression on her face. She was acting all weird whenever I get too close to her. And when we had our fight training, if I didn’t know better I would say that she was trying to hit me for real. For a several times, her palm has almost made contact with me. Even her sister, whom has shared mutual dislike with me, was not that aggressive. It’s not wrong for me to think that MY GIRLFRIEND won’t be that aggressive, right? If it was on a different type of aggressiveness, of course I would like it. But, not like that.

“Hey, you two, wanna go and have some dinner? My treat.” I asked them.

Kokabuki made a face at me, “Not that ramen from last week, right?”

I grinned at that. After last week training, I treated them for dinner in my favorite ramen restaurant. Last week, when I said that I’ll treat them to dinner, Kokabuki were staring at me with mouth opened wide, while Tomo only frowning and she looked like she would refuse. But, because her sister already said yes, she had no other option but to come as well.

“Why not? It was good.” I said, already knew she’ll disagreed. It’s just a shame, really, I think the ramen was really good. But other people don’t like it.

“It was horrid,” Kokabuki said and she glanced at her sister, and said, “I’ll pass, I’ve to go home.” She stood up. “Aneki, you go with her. See you later.” And she walked away from us, and left us in a tense and heavy silence.

“Well, since it was only us… where do you wanna go?” I asked her after a while.

She stood up. “I’m sorry. I’ve got to go too.” And she walked away from me.

I immediately stood up and ran after her. “Hey! Wait!” I grabbed her hand and pulled her to face me, but she looked away, refused to meets my gaze. ‘What’s wrong? Why are you being like this?’ I wanted to ask her that. But I couldn’t bring myself to say anything. I was… afraid to hear the answer. So, a more heavy and tense silence from before surrounding us once more.

“If you got nothing to say, can you let me go?” she asked after a while, still not looking at me.

Some unfamiliar pain spreading all over me when she said that. I opened my mouth to say something, but… nothing came out. With a sigh, she pulled her hand from my hold and walked out on me without a word.

*End of flashback


Sigh… this relationship things started rubbing on my nerves in all the wrong way. What going on actually? What the hell was wrong? Why did she acting all weird like this? And so, now, because I want my answer, here I am, walking towards the top room of Majijo, Rappapa`s Room, unnoticed. I even didn’t tell Yuko-san and Geki. She won’t be able to avoid me if I come to her in school. I opened the door, and all eyes inside looking at me beside one pair. The room was jammed full. Almost every member of the current Rappapa, beside Youran and Maeda was inside. Dammit!

“Shibuya?” Yuko-san asked me, breaking the silence. “What are you doing here? Ran away from the evil teachers in the prep-school?” She smirked mischievously to me.

I only stared at her, not saying anything. My eyes moved to Tomo, she was still looking at other direction, not even bother to smile or anything. ‘Dammit, what’s wrong!? Before I graduate, even though we had to act that we didn’t know each other, whenever we met accidentally in school, she always smiled slightly or gave me a slight nod, as a signal that she saw me, that even though she didn’t saying anything it was only an act. But, now that people know that we know each other, even they only know us just as ex-Queen and her successor, she was always pretend that I wasn’t around.’

“Shibuya?” Yuko-san asked me again. I averted my eyes to her and just shrugged.

Yuko-san frowned at me and after a while she sighed loudly. “Alright. Everybody, OUT! I want to talk to Shibuya alone.” She said while she glared at me.

One by one, they passed me while they walked to the door, and I just stared straight forward to Yuko-san, avoiding eye contact with anyone. But when the Kabuki Sisters about to pass me, Yuko-san said, “Ookabuki, you stay here.”

She stopped in her track and turned back in and stood with her back leaned on the lockers. The others, who’s behind her also stopped and looked at Yuko-san inquiringly. And after a while they continued to walk out of the room. I caught a glimpse of Kokabuki who’s smiled grimly at me before she was out of the room and closed the door behind her.

“Alright, I actually don’t want to interfere with your personal problems, but I’ve had enough!” Yuko-san said after a while. “I’m not blind. I can see that something happen. I can see that tense atmosphere between the two of you.”

 She kept on rambling while we just stood there in silence. “And how it’s change you. First of all, Shibuya,” I looked at her when she said my name, and I saw her pouted, “you’re not fun anymore. You’re even more silent than Black now, and you were spacing out more often that my Nyan-Nyan. I want my tsundere Queen back!” I just rolled my eyes at her words.

“Second! Ookabuki, I know I don’t know you as well as I know Shibuya. But! I’ve seen you spacing out with a morose look on your face often now.” She stood up and walked towards the door. “And I don’t know what had happened, but I want you to fix it! Don’t come out of here when you haven’t fixed it.” She slammed the door and left us alone in the Rappapa Room.

I released my breath after Yuko-san had left. ‘Damn… her speech… I’ve heard something similar like that from her before. But, when?’ I glanced at her. She still casted her eyes down. I sighed once again and stepped closer to her. She flinched slightly when I was stood near her, invading her personal space.

I sighed again. “You know what? I don’t know what’s happen too. So… what’s happened?” No answer. “What’s wrong with you? Why are you avoiding me like this?”

Still no answer.

I gulped nervously, “Did I do something wrong?” If I’m not talking to her I wouldn’t even ask this. I rather die than admitted that I made a mistake. But, she still didn’t give me any answer. ‘Grr….Dammit!! my patience started to running out here.’ I took a several deep breathe to calm myself.

 “Answer me, dammit!!” Aaaand… it didn’t work. I finally snapped. I grabbed her upper arms forced her to looked at me. “Look at me.” Still no movement. I held her chin and lifted her head up. “I said look at me!” And she did. She looked at me with a blank expression and her eyes, her eyes stared at me coldly. I was so surprised that I felt like air escaping my lungs, literally.

“Let go of me.” She said coolly.

“Not before you tell me what’s wrong.” I said with the same amount of ice in my voice. “What. Is. Wrong? Answer me!!”

My hold on her arms strengthens unintentionally. She flinched in pain and slapped my hands away. “You’ve hurt me, you jerk!” She hit my shoulders while saying, “I hate you! Your secrets! Your temper! YOU!!”

“Stop it!” I caught her hands and saw her straight in the eyes. Her eyes were gleaming with the tears that have accumulated there. My heart ached when I saw the tears. Just like there’s an invisible hand that has squished it. I wiped the tears away with my thumb softly and kissed her forehead, and I pulled her closer to me. Hugged her, tightly.

“What’s wrong?” I whispered in her ear. “I don’t like seeing you like this.” I caressed her hair that cascading in her back. I could feel the fabric of my clothes in my left shoulder slowly getting wet with her tears as she sobbed quietly. “Seeing you in tears like this… pains me… Did I do something wrong?” I gulped slowly, hoping with that I could remove the clog in my throat. “If I did… then I’m sorry…. But… if you didn’t tell me, I wouldn’t know what I did.”

I moved back a bit so that I could look at her properly, but she looked away, refusing to look at me. “Look at me.” I said softly.

She shook her head. “No, I must’ve looked hideous now.”
 
I put my hands on the side of her face, made her look at me. “You’re not… You look beautiful as always…” I wiped the tears away again. “If I’m at fault here, I’m sorry… don’t cry anymore… please…”

I leaned forwards and put my forehead on her. “I… I…,” I licked my lips in nervousness. ‘I love you. Just say it.’ I gulped slowly. ‘I love you.’ I bit my lower lip. “I…,” I gulped again. ‘I love you… Why is it so hard to say?’

“I… miss you.” ‘Dammit! Shibuya, you idiot! Just say that you love her! Idiot!!’ Even though I wasn’t able to say what I truly wanted to say, at least she smiled now and I smiled back to her. I kissed her lips lightly. “Care to tell me what’s wrong now?”

I saw the pain passed by in her eyes. Just a flash, but I saw it. I moved closer to her. There are only a few millimeters away between our face, with my hands linked in the base of her back. “What’s wrong?” I whispered to her, “Tell me.”

“I…,” she licked her lip, “I saw you… kissing Dance.”

My eyes widen when I heard that. “What?”

“She loves you… and…”

I cut her by kissing her softly at first, but then it turned deeper, the kind of kiss that would leave us out of breath. I nipped her lower lip and licked it afterwards. She opened her mouth and let my tongue roamed inside. After a while, my lungs burned, asking for oxygen and I pulled back. Breathing heavily afterwards.

“That’s not a kiss. What we’ve just done… that’s a kiss.” I said while still breathing heavily. “She kissed me, but I didn’t kiss her back. I rejected her. Didn’t you see it?”

“I ran away after I saw her kissed you.” She said while biting her lips nervously.

I sighed at that. “Well… if you had stayed… you’ll know it.”

“… She loves you…”

I sighed again. “She does… Hhhh…. I should’ve known….”

“I’ve told you and you didn’t believe me.”

“Yeah…, I didn’t see it coming at all.” I leaned forwards to peck her lips. “But, it doesn’t matter, you’re the one that I want. Nothing can change that.”

She beamed at me, and after a while she frowned. “What about the drugs? Is it true that you were a drug addict before?” She asked me.

I lowered my eyes in shame. ‘So… she heard that too, huh?’

She propped my head up with her hand and looked at me with a soft expression on her face. “Why you never told me about it?”

“It’s not something to be proud of. It’s a mistake. A big mistake. I should’ve never done that. If Yuko-san weren’t around I… I probably dead by now.”

“Is that why you said Yuko-san is your savior?”

I nodded.

She sighed and smiled teasingly. “They are right.”

“Who?”

“Yuko-san and Sado-san. You are reckless.”

“Shut up.” I scoffed. “And you shouldn’t jump into conclusion without asking me first.”

“Sorry.” She smiled at me again.

After seeing her smiled, I can’t stop myself to not kiss her. My lust meter increasing with each seconds passed. I want her soooo… much. It has been more than a month now. Her hand was already inside my shirt, caressing my back. My hand moved to grope her breast, made her moaned softly, and my other hand caressing her firm behind. God, I miss this. This closeness, her warmth, her presence near me, her scent, her voice…, her. Damn… I want her, soooo much.

And… the door opened. We immediately stopped kissing, but our face was still inches away, my hands were still groping her, and she still has her hands inside my shirt. We shared a look of dread and turned our head to the door and saw… Maeda.

For a moment we were just staring at each other. And then she blushed lightly and with a slight movement of her eyebrow she said, “er… sorry. I don’t mean to… interrupt.” She closed the door again afterwards.

After she left, we released our breath at the same time and laughed.

“That was…”

“Mood breaker?” I cut in.

She playfully slapped my arm, “embarrassing.”

“Mhmm….” I grazed the side of her face with my nose. “Did you see her blushed?”

She giggled softly. “Yeah… I don’t know she can blush.”

I nibbled her ear and licked it afterwards.

“Mmm… Stop that.”

I kissed her neck, “Why?” and licked it, made her moaned again. “I thought you like it.” And I nibbled her neck.

“What if…,” she gasped when I sucked the sensitive spot under her ear, “someone walks in on us again?”

“Mhm…,” I mumbled, still busy with her neck, “I don’t care.”

“I… I thought you want… to keep our relationship as a secret…”

I left her neck and looked her straight in the eyes. “You know what? Screw that. I’ve had enough of putting on a mask and act.” I kissed her lips roughly. Our hands started to roam each other body again. Touching. Teasing. Rubbing. Groping.

I pulled back after a while, grasping for air. “Wanna move to the Fighting Room? The door has lock.”

“I want a more comfortable place.” She said breathlessly.

“My apartment then.”

“Mmm… okay… let’s go.”

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*Majijo`s hallway.

We walked side-by-side with only one intention. To my apartment. Fast. And it’s seemed like luck wasn’t on our side. When we walked towards the main building, we met Yuko-san in the hallway. Sigh… time for another teasing.

“Soo… all fine now?” she asked with a smirk.

We just looked at each other and smiled, made Yuko-san smirked wider and then she sighed. “Thank God… You have no idea how boring she was when we had dinner together three days ago and also during our ‘special training’ last week.” She said to Tomo. “Me and Sado tried to riled her up just for fun but… BUT!! She DIDN’T EVEN RESPOND!!!” I rolled my eyes at her. “She was all silent and whenever we asked her if there’s something wrong, she just shrugged and spacing out again!! And during our ‘special training’ she was just sat in the corner and spacing out. This is Shibuya we’re talking about. Since when she’s ever become silent!!? She is supposed to be active, hot-blooded and tsundere.”

“I’ve told you I’m not a tsundere!”I cut Yuko-san`s rambling.

“See…,” she kept on talking to Tomo who’s trying her darnest to not laugh, “that’s what I’m talking about. This is the Shibuya I know. The Shibuya during these past weeks is… meh… not her at all.”

“What do you mean by that?”I interrupted her again.

“Shibuya is supposed to be hot-blooded, that’s why she was riled up so easily. And her temper is one of our sources of fun. Even though it was also her bad habit. And that’s reminding me… What did you see in her anyway?”

“Hey!? You’re supposed to be on my side.” I said, offended by her words.

“She is irritating, has a short-temper, reckless, dense, blunt, rude… I can keep on going you know.” She kept on rambling, ignoring me. “Her good sides are only the fact that she is strong, has a good look and body, and good with fashion. Or more precisely, her plus value is only her physical matter.”

“Stop ignoring me and talked as if I’m not here!!!” I yelled.

Yuko-san grinned mischievously to me. “I’m not ignoring you at all.” And she smiled innocently. “I just want my fun, that’s all.”

At this time, Tomo can’t stop her laugh anymore. She has begun laughing uncontrollably.

“See… I’ve made her laugh. You should be thankful to me.” Yuko-san said, smirking again. “And by the way… what did you just do in the Rappapa`s Room anyway?”

“Wha… what do you mean?” I asked, Tomo has stopped laughing and just stared at Yuko-san.

“I saw Maeda walking down the stairs, looking all red. And when I asked her, she said she was just seen something she shouldn’t have.” She grinned mockingly to us. “Don’t tell me you’ve baptized our room.”

“Of course not!!” we said at the same time.

She laughed and walked past us to the direction of Rappapa`s Room. “Good. Because only me and Nyan-Nyan who can baptize our room.”

“What?” She said with a ghastly look on her face.

“Hentai-Sachou, that’s too much information. Geezzz….” I pinched the bridge of my nose. Trying to get rid of the image of Yuko-san and Torigoya in our club room doing ‘that’, that has came instantly in my mind after she said that. Her laughter can be heard in the hallway as an answer to my words.

“By the way, what is ‘secret training’? What kind of training is that?” she asked afterwards while we walked.

“As the name stated, it’s secret.” I smirked at her. “Rappapa is located in music club room, if you forget.” I added when she glared at me.

“So… it’s got something related to music.” She asked again curiously.

“You’ll know sooner or later. Perhaps Yuko-san will invite all of you on our next ‘secret training’. Now that you and your friends are also Rappapa now.”

“I see,” she said after a while. “Then… who’s Nyan-Nyan?”

I smirked at her for a while. “I can’t tell you. It’s not my secret to tell. Sorry.”

“I see….” She casted her eyes down on the floor in disappointment.

“You’ll know if you pay more attention to Yuko-san. But, I can’t tell you anything else.”

We kept on walking afterwards in an awkward silence, thanks to Yuko-san. And the atmosphere got tenser when we walked past the classroom. Eyes following our movement.

“What’s with the stares?” I whispered to her. “I’m used to it since I was a Queen, but this time is more irritating.”

“I guess because we’re together.” She whispered back to answered me. We walked past more class and she said, “Wait here.”

And she walked inside a class. I read the nameplate. ‘Class 3-2’. I thought she was in ‘3-1’. And after a while she walked out with Kokabuki who’s talked loudly, “Another ‘cleaning time’, Shibuya-san?” and she added in a much more hushed voice while still pretending to be smirking. “Dammit, why I should covering up your relation with each other?”

“Yes, it is.” Tomo said, and she whispered, “because I’m your aneki.”

I fight with the urge to face-palmed myself, but instead I just started walking again and said, “come on, let’s just go.” Though I had to agree that her idea of tagging Kokabuki along with us was great.

And then we walked through the hallways and stairs towards the front gate, looking all bad-ass, which was shattered when we already passed the front gate and away from the prying eyes of Majijo`s students and staffs.

“Arggh… Why should I be the one who’s tagging along with you?” Kokabuki asked in irritancies.

“As I said before,” Tomo answered her with a small mischievous smirk, “since you’re a good sister of mine… you should… mhph…”

I covered her mouth with my hand, stopping her in mid sentence. “Let’s just go.” And I whispered in her ear, “I want to eat you… now!”

“Oh, God… I just didn’t hear that… I didn’t see anything… Geeezzz….” I turned my head to look at Kokabuki after I heard that. She was shaking her head while frowning and rubbing her forehead with a distressed look on her face. Ah, well… I thought I was whispered… not my fault if she heard that. “This is exactly why I don’t wanna tag along with lovebirds like you two.”

We just laughed at her misery, which made her frowning even more.

“Alright then…,” Tomo said after she stopped laughing, “we’ll go now. Thanks, Kokabuki.” And she walked away from Majijo, dragged me along with her.

After a few meters I turned back and said, “By the way, training’s tomorrow after school.” After I saw Kokabuki nodded, I turned back again and kept on walking.

“I thought you have afternoon classes every Friday?”

“Mmm… yeah… but the teachers re-schedule it to morning classes.” I answered her. “And besides, I can always skip, like I do now.”

She slapped my arm. “Argh… what the hell?” That slap was not a playful slap. It was hurt. Dammit.

“You skipped today? Did you forget why you take a prep-school?” she asked me angrily.

“Of course not.”

“Then don’t skip classes.”

“You want me to go now?” I asked her while raising my eyebrow at her.

She frowned for a while. “Em… I guess you can skip for today.”

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*A few blocks away from Majijo.

“Hey,” she pulled my hand, “wait a minute. Isn’t that Youran?” she asked me while pointing to the riverbank on the side of the road.

I looked at the direction her finger has pointed. And it sure was Youran, running in the riverbank, being chased by… a herd of dogs. I turned my head to look at her with a ‘WTF’ look on my face. “What the hell is that?” I asked her in half amusement half exasperation. Seeing the current Queen of Rappapa… being chased by a herd of dogs. WTF indeed.

And to my surprise my answer not came from her, but from behind me. “It’s her training.” I jumped slightly and turned to see Black.

“Black… Dammit!! Don’t sneaking behind me like that!” I shouted at her. “And what do you mean by training?”

“She’s too slow. My training for her is to increase her speed.” She said calmly.

“By making dogs chased after her?” I asked with an incredulous look on my face.

“Why the dogs chase her anyway?” Tomo asked her too.

Black smirking slightly. “I made her carry a bag full of dog`s foods. She has to run as fast as she could if she didn’t want her clothes to be ruined by a herd of hungry dogs. By the way, I’ve to go after her. Wouldn’t want one of the Queens of Rappapa got beaten by dogs.” She turned back and walked away from us. “And by the way, Shibuya, glad to see you’re back to yourself. Sulking and spacing out are not suitable for you.” 

“When she’s not silent, she talked too much.” I said while shaking my head.

A hushed “I heard that” can be heard from behind us, made us shared another smile.

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@lollita90, kahem, minami-chan: hope this chapter pay out for all the depressing issues from last chapter.

@haruko: well... perhaps we'll see more of Torigoya's jealousy  :lol:

@fael_c00l: is this answering your question about Youran and Black`s training?  :lol:

@songbac: Thanks for commenting :bow:
                well since Kojiyuu is my other OTP, there'll be more of them  XD

@haruhi16: they are the best trolls :rofl:


As always, thanks for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys... See you in the next chapter :)

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 21 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #128 on: September 21, 2012, 12:28:34 PM »
YAY! They fixed everything!!!!!
lol Youran training hahaha!
Poor Kokabuki xD

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 21 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #129 on: September 21, 2012, 12:38:12 PM »
Thanks man,, hahaha LOL when i know what is the training,, Black is so cruel, using dog to make Youran faster,, it reminds me to Hiruma from Eyeshield 21 when he force Sena to run using Cerberos :D ,, maybe in the future Youran can have Black's speed,, and thanks again for the update :D but i kinda curious about NyanNyan and Shaku training,, please update soon,,,,
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« Reply #130 on: September 21, 2012, 04:32:11 PM »
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“Stop it!” I caught her hands and saw her straight in the eyes. Her eyes were gleaming with the tears that have accumulated there. My heart ached when I saw the tears. Just like there’s an invisible hand that has squished it. I wiped the tears away with my thumb softly and kissed her forehead, and I pulled her closer to me. Hugged her, tightly.

“What’s wrong?” I whispered in her ear. “I don’t like seeing you like this.” I caressed her hair that cascading in her back. I could feel the fabric of my clothes in my left shoulder slowly getting wet with her tears as she sobbed quietly. “Seeing you in tears like this… pains me… Did I do something wrong?” I gulped slowly, hoping with that I could remove the clog in my throat. “If I did… then I’m sorry…. But… if you didn’t tell me, I wouldn’t know what I did.”

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I leaned forwards and put my forehead on her. “I… I…,” I licked my lips in nervousness. ‘I love you. Just say it.’ I gulped slowly. ‘I love you.’ I bit my lower lip. “I…,” I gulped again. ‘I love you… Why is it so hard to say?’

“I… miss you.” ‘Dammit! Shibuya, you idiot! Just say that you love her! Idiot!!’ Even though I wasn’t able to say what I truly wanted to say, at least she smiled now and I smiled back to her. I kissed her lips lightly. “Care to tell me what’s wrong now?”

 :oops: :oops: i can imagine that scene, it's so lovely  :wub: :wub: :wub:. Argh............, i love this couple so much ( besides kojiyuu, hehehe  :roll::roll::roll:)

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“I saw Maeda walking down the stairs, looking all red. And when I asked her, she said she was just seen something she shouldn’t have.” She grinned mockingly to us. “Don’t tell me you’ve baptized our room.”

“Of course not!!” we said at the same time.

She laughed and walked past us to the direction of Rappapa`s Room. “Good. Because only me and Nyan-Nyan who can baptize our room.”

OMG  :smhid :smhid:smhid really?? , Yuko-san ia number one  :twothumbs  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs


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And I whispered in her ear, “I want to eat you… now!”

 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: hehe, i'm asking myself, next chap have hot scene, haven't it??? :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:, oh yeahhhhhhhh  :P :P :P, i hope to read your next chap soon  :) :)
Love kojiyuu - yuko - chiyuu - miichan - hinana - haruna - takamina - sama - maachan forever

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 21 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #131 on: September 22, 2012, 12:26:20 AM »
I love that you have arranged things between the two.

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« Reply #132 on: September 22, 2012, 04:39:20 AM »
Im gonna say again!!... I love yuko.. jajjaja its so funny :D.. omg torigoya jealous.. from whom?

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 21 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #133 on: September 23, 2012, 04:30:27 AM »
OH MY UMEDA AYAKA AND IWASA MISAKI  :shocked :shocked
THIS FANFIC IS THE BEST ALL I READ, REALLY, GOOD, THIS IS SO PERFECT  :shocked :wub: :shocked :wub:

I'M WAS SAD WHEN OOKABUKI SEE WHEN DANCE KISSED SHIBUYA  :cry:
I'M WAITING FOR MORE, PLEASE, CONTINUE WITH THIS FANFIC PERFECT

I'M YOUR FAN, REALLY, GOOOOOOOOOOOD  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 22 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #134 on: September 24, 2012, 06:08:26 PM »
Chapter 22




*Rappapa`s Room, one day after last chapter, afternoon

I opened the door and saw Team Hormone inside, grilling… hormones… as usual. They looked at me as I walked inside with a bored looks on my face. Or more like sleepy. I only had three hours sleep last night because certain someone slept over in my apartment. And that certain someone was in the mood last night. Sigh… can’t blame her, really, because I too, was in the mood. Not a surprise here. As Yuko-san would’ve said, after you get the taste of it, you’ll always want for more. And it had been more than a month. A MONTH!!! Sigh… next time I’ve to remember our period’s schedule, and pay attention to her more. I won’t let her ignored me for weeks like last time anymore.

“Shibuya-san?” Unagi called me. She must’ve seen me spacing out. I only stared at her as a response. “Umm… why are you here?” she asked after a while.

“Where’s Yu… Argh!!” I was about to asked her about where Yuko-san was, but someone jumped on my back, literally, stopping me in mid-sentence. I saw skinny arms around me, wrapped in dark green jacket. “Geki!! Don’t jump on me! What if I fall to the grill?!” I released her arms from me and glared at her.

She only giggled and biting her nails, “hehehe~, Black said you’re okay now~,” and she sat on the bench.

I heard some footsteps from outside and looked at the door. Torigoya came in with Shaku who looked all flustered and embarrassed and dead tired. ‘Strange… is this the same girl with the one who was weeping on our graduation day?’

“Ah… Shibuya… Geki… you’re here too.” Torigoya chirped happily.

“Er… Torigoya-san, what’s happen to Shaku?” Wota asked her. It seems I wasn’t the only one who noticed.
 
Torigoya opened her mouth to speak, but Shaku beats her, “she ordered me to play punching games and arm wrestling games in game center, afterwards she ordered me to dance like those idol on TV in Shibuya`s Intersection!!” She rambled in amazing speed. “Not only that!! She also made some thugs fight me!!”

All of our eyes flew to Torigoya after Shaku’s outburst. I did the game center things too… but the rest? Wow… just wow… That was… creative.

Torigoya only smiled and said, “Yuu-c… Yuko-san`s order, Yuko-san`s order, and the last also Yuko-san`s order.” She tilted her head to the side and pouting questioningly. “I wonder why though.”

And the door to the fighting room opened. Maeda walked out with Yuko-san`s arm half hugging her. Yuko-san smiled at us when she saw us and frowning slightly. I followed her gaze and I understood instantly why she frowned. Torigoya glared at her coldly, and her eyes were screaming bloody murder at the sight of our sachou half hugging other woman. Yuko-san gulped loudly and cracked a nervous smile at her. Torigoya walked towards Yuko-san slowly, threateningly.

“Ehhh…. Hi,” Yuko-san said while Torigoya wrapped her arm on Yuko-san`s neck and dragged her, “why you didn’t tell me before that you’ll co…” I couldn’t heard the rest of Yuko-san`s words because Torigoya already closed the door.

“Wow… what’s going on here?” Sado-san`s voice came from the behind me. She came when our attention was on Torigoya and Yuko-san it seemed.

“Sado-san… why are you here?” I asked her, since she was rarely came here after graduation, unlike us, ex-Shitennou.

“Yuko-san asked me to.” She said simply, she then glanced at Shaku and Team Hormone who’s whispered scandalously about what they had just saw earlier. “If there’s anything about what you just saw earlier spread out of this room, I’ll deal with you myself. Understand?” She asked menacingly in her Sado mode, made them nodded frantically.

She turned back to face me and Geki and asked silently, “what’s going on? I’ve never seen Torigoya like that.”

I sighed and whispered, “she saw Yuko-san half-hugging Maeda,” and I glanced at Maeda who’s by now has read her book again.

Geki giggled softly, “Torigoya is maaaad~~.”

“Heh… Yuko-san is sooooo… whipped now.” Sado-san smirked.

I smirked back, “so much for hiding their relationship, huh?”

The door was opened again. It was the Kabuki Sisters this time. Me and Tomo gave each other a brief smile when our eyes met.

“Well, as they say, they won’t hide anymore.” Sado-san said, “But, I do believe that there are some things that better keep private. Especially now that we’re facing the reformist and Yabakune. It’ll be better if their relationship is only known by us.”

“It’ll be hard to keep them from knowing though.” I said while pointing towards the current Rappapa.

“As long as they can keep it as a secret, I guess it’ll be okay.” Geki said.

“Yeah…” I said slowly, with my mind and eyes were elsewhere, on my sexy girlfriend more precisely. Too bad her uniform hid her body, I wonder why her casual clothes was so different from her uniform. People wouldn’t even know she has a good sense of fashion if based it on her uniform.

Youran came after a few while. She immediately mingled around with the Kabuki Sisters and Shaku. Sado-san and Geki was talking about Geki`s progress in study by now, while my full attention was still on my girlfriend. My face slowly turned into a frown as I saw Youran put her hand on Tomo`s shoulder and still was. ‘Grr… how dare she touches my girl!!’

“Ah, that’s remind me… Shaku!!” I looked at Sado-san after her sudden outburst, the others also looked on her. “When will you return my money? I need to pay for my rent.” She said while narrowing her eyes.

“Ehehe… I was hoping you’ll forget.” Shaku said while grinned innocently.

“Well, you better return it soon, unlike you… I live on my own.” Sado-san said menacingly. “She borrows my money to pay for her dinner. I met her and Torigoya a few days ago and we went for a dinner together. Actually, I intended to treat them. BUT, this GIRL ate too much. And since she didn’t have enough money, I had to cover it first!” She added after she saw Geki and I looked at her questioningly.

“Emailed me your bank account, I’ll ask my mom to transfer the money to you.” Shaku said, still grinning.

“I hate rich kid.” Sado-san growled at her.

“Hey! I’m rich kid too.” I said, felt offended by the remarks.

“At least you’re different from her.” Sado-san said while rolling her eyes. “Since you live on your own you’re not as spoiled as her.”

“Errr… Sado-san, Shibuya-san, why you live on your own?” Unagi asked us, and when we looked at her, she quickly added, “just curious, that’s all.”

“What’s wrong with that?” I asked back.

“Almost all of us don’t live with our family anymore, beside Torigoya.” Sado-san said shortly. And a tense silence filled the room after that.

The sound of a door opened caught our attention. Yuko-san and Torigoya walked out of the fighting room, looking all smile and happy face. I smirked and covered my mouth with my hand instantly when I saw them. ‘So… something good happened inside.’

“What’s with the silence?” Yuko-san asked.

“Unagi asked why Sado-san and Shibuya live on their own.” Tomo said when no one answering Yuko-san`s question.

“Shibuya?” Torigoya asked silently to no one in particular, “no –san?”

“Ah, that…,” Yuko-san said, she looked at us for a while and after we nodded, she continued her speech. “Well, that’s easy Sado and Shibuya had, er…, has a few problems with their family, so… they live on their own. So does Black. While for Geki and me, we’re orphan. Torigoya over here, live with her dad.”

“I live on my own.” Torigoya added. “My dad rarely comes home.”

 “Yeah… well… you can live with me if you want to.” Yuko-san boldly said. Made us gaped at her in surprise even Torigoya and Sado-san who’s closer to her than anyone. “Anyway…,” Yuko-san added after a while, “I only told you that because you’re all Rappapa now. But… tell one word to other people outside… I’ll cut your tongue. Is that clear?”

They nodded frantically, the current Queens were more reserved though. ‘Heh… they finally act like one. Good…’

“Sado…,” Yuko-san called while pointing the fighting room with her head and said, “Shibuya, Torigoya you can join in too, since you’re already here.” And she walked to the fighting room with Sado-san following behind. I shared a questioning look with Torigoya and followed them. Closing the door afterwards.

“Why Geki doesn’t join us?” I asked to Yuko-san after I sat on the floor with them, formed a small circle in the middle of the room.

“She already knows our topic.” Yuko-san said in a bored tone. “They’re all knows it.” She pointed the door with her head. “And I think it’s about time I tell you as well.”

“What is happening actually, Yuko-san?” Sado-san asked, frowned plastered in her face. “I’ve seen quite lot of Majijo`s and Yabakune`s students in the hospital.”

I looked at Sado-san in shock. I’ve known there has been more fighting lately, but I didn’t know how worse.

Yuko-san sighed. “We have a situation here with Nezumi and Center and now, there is Yabakune, who have been hunting out Majijo`s students.” She sighed again. “And with Majijo`s condition now, and my own condition we can’t fight them back, yet. The Shitennou are getting better with each day passed, but….”

“It’s still not enough.” Sado-san finished for her. “We lack in number. You can’t fight them with only brute strength.”

“I know. We need a strategist. I don’t like this, but we truly need one.” She held Torigoya’s hand and looked at her. “After my near death experience, I can’t just head down to a fight without knowing what will happen later. Because I know, that now I have someone who’s waiting for me.” Torigoya smiled at her.

“So… about this strategist…” I said after a brief silence.

“You’ll know later.” Yuko-san said. “And by the way, I know I’ve said this for several times already, but, don’t interfere if not necessary, especially you, Shibuya. What’s with the brawl last Monday?” she narrowed her eyes at me.

“They’re bad-mouthing Majijo. Should I just let them get away with it?” I retorted.

“You all has graduate now. Let them deal with it.” Yuko-san pointed the door with her head.

Sado-san and Torigoya nodded, while me… I just sighed. “Okay, but I’ll deal with those who dare lay a finger on her. Not as an ex-Queen. It’s personal.”

“She’s not weak you know.” Yuko-san said, instantly recognizing who the person I mean.

I sighed slowly. “I know… it’s just that… I have a bad feeling about all of this…”

They all frowning after I said that and for a while, we were just sat there in silence, with thoughts running in our head. And then Yuko-san stood up and said, “Perhaps it’ll be better if we go outside.” And we followed her.

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When we walked out, silence filled the Rappapa`s room. We shared a questioning look with each other, and my eyes instantly found its way to Tomo. She looked at me nervously and smiled and she looked away to her fellow Rappapa.

“They must’ve gossiped about us.” I whispered.

“That’s explaining the silence that welcomed us.” Sado-san said.

Yuko-san went to sit on her chair. “Seriously, girls… you’ve gossiped around too much.” She combed her hair with her hand.
 
“Is there anything else, Yuko-san?” After she shook her head, I walked towards the door. “I’ll go now. Kabukis, let’s go.”

“Shibuya, wait.” I heard Yuko-san said while we was at the door. I turned to look at her. “I forgot to tell you. Secret training, tonight. Same place, same time.”

The current Rappapa looked at Yuko-san at the mention of ‘secret training’, hoping that Yuko-san would’ve said more. I smirked and nodded my head.

“And they,” Yuko-san looked at the Kabuki Sisters, “can come as well. Youran, Shaku, you too.”

“What about us?!” Wota asked.

“Sorry, Shitennou only.” Yuko-san said while smirking at the crestfallen expression on her face. “You can join later on. For now, it’s Shitennou only.”

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*Outside of Majijo, on the road somewhere.

“So… what’s we gonna do now?” Kokabuki asked while we walked “Not to game center again, right?”

I smirked at her. “Game center it is. You’ll have to nail it first. It’s easy after you get the grip of it.”

“That’s embarrassing.” She said while shaking her head.

“Forget that you’re in public.” Tomo said, “It’s easy after that.” I looked at her questioningly, and she added, “I used to play it when I was in junior high.”

“Oh, I see.” I said slowly. “And by the way, you still have to do the bicycle race game too.” I said to her afterwards.

Kokabuki smirked at that while Tomo just sighed. “Do I have too?”

“You see, if it was in a game it was more fun. But, I can always use Black`s method if you want.” I said while looked at her with my poker face intact.

“Fine…” she said while crossing her arms in front of her chest. “I don’t understand why you order us to do that though.”

“Me too.” Kokabuki butted in.

“Easy.” I grinned to them. “Kokabuki, your movements are too stiff. You need to fix that.”

“And playing Dance Dance Revolution can fix that?” She gaped at me.

“Yup, just looked at Dance, she may be weak but her flexibility is astounding.” I said off-handedly, and I saw a dark aura surrounding my girl and a look of dread in Kokabuki`s face. I instantly know that I had said the wrong thing.

“Oh, God, not again.” Kokabuki sighed. “I rather become the third wheel than to tag along with a fighting couple.”

We cracked a smile at her remark. “So, what about me?” Tomo asked after a while, I know she was desperately wanted to change the topic.

“Your standing isn’t strong enough. You need to strengthen your legs muscles for that.” I said. “I’ve noticed that you have tendencies to stumble after your legs got a few hits. No matter how good you are, if your legs can’t support you anymore, it’s all over.”

“I see…” She said slowly, frowning slightly.

I smiled and put my hand on her head, patting her head. “Afterwards, I’ll take you two to my favorite place for fighting training. Well, Rappapa`s favorite place actually.”

“Is it the place for ‘secret training’?” Kokabuki asked.

I grinned at Kokabuki while answering, “No. You’ll see later what it is.” Then I moved my hand from my girl`s head to her shoulder, half hugging her. “And by the way, Tomo, call your mom, tell her you’ll stay over in my place again tonight.” I said to my girl. “It usually finished near midnight.”

I heard Kokabuki sighed and mumbled “lovebirds …” and walked in front of us.

We continued to walk like that, with Kokabuki walked ahead of us and me half-hugging Ookabuki, while she called her mom. After a few minutes, Tomo flipped her phone closed and sighed. Kokabuki has already turned to looked at us.

“It’s amazing how fast your mom let you go when you mention her name.” She pointed her finger to me. “And how weird it is that you have the same name.” She grinned at us.

“Shut up.” I glared at her. “Do you want me to kick your damn ass?” I was about to charge at her when I felt Tomo tugged my hand to stop me. I looked at her for a while and glaring again at Kokabuki who’s now frowned slightly, ‘hey… I know a better way to give her a lesson to not messing around with me.’ With that thought, I looked back to my girl, cupped her face with my free hand and kissed her hotly. She instantly responded to my kiss, kissing me back.

“Arghhh…. Lovebirds! Stop the PDA!!!” I heard Kokabuki shouted, “Geez!! And I thought you’re intended to keep it as a secret.” And I heard her stomping away from us. I pulled away and grinning. ‘Heh… mission accomplished.’

Tomo glanced at her sister who’s now already five meters away from us and narrowing her eyes at me. “You do that on purpose.”

“Of course I do.” I grinned innocently at her.

She sighed and shook her head. “Anyway, now that she’s away, we can talk.”

We started to walk again, only much slower than Kokabuki who’s desperately want to run away from us. “What is it?”

“I know who Nyan-Nyan is now.”

I smirked, “of course. Told you it’s easy.”

“Yeah, they practically didn’t hide it at all.” She smiled in amusement.

“Oh, they used too. But after Yuko-san`s near death experience, they, or more precisely Torigoya has been more bold about it.”

“I can understand that.” She looked to the ground sadly. “She must’ve been so scared.”

“As for Yuko-san… I guess you’ve seen her skin-ship by now…” I sighed.

“Oh, yes I do.” She smiled again. “She always jumped on Torigoya-san whenever she came to Majijo. I’ve never think of it though. I didn’t know that there’s something more.”

“For their case, ignorance is a bliss.” I said in amusement. “People in my class used to seeing Yuko-san skin-shipped Torigoya for…. Almost every day. And they never thought much of it. Come to think of it, I’ve only known recently too.”

“Really?”

“Er…during Yuko-san`s illness actually.”

“Oh.”

We walked in silence for a while. I know that there are still other things she wants to ask, but for some reasons that I don’t know, she didn’t said anything. “What is it?” I asked made her looked at me questioningly. “Somethings bothering you. What is it?”

She sighed, “I know now why your bond with each other is so strong. It’s not just because Yuko-san, isn’t it?” I kept on looking on her, not saying anything. “You do know that we’re talking about you and the other ex-Rappapa when you’re in the fighting room, don’t you?” I nodded. “Gekikara was silent all the while. But, based on what Yuko-san had said, we know your bond with each other was strong not only because all of you will follow Yuko-san to death, but also because you only have each other.”

I released my breath heavily. “Well… we’re not that close. But, we do trust each other to death. Or more like we trust Yuko-san to death, and because of that we shared mutual understanding and trust.”

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*At the game center.

The blaring sound from the DDR game machine was deafening, but I didn’t hear it at all. I could feel my face scrunched up in irritancies. On the bicycle race game, the highest rank Tomo could get was the 3rd, but when Kokabuki joined in for fun, she could win the race. So does Kokabuki. She always failed to finish the DDR game even in the medium level. But when Tomo played with her like now… I glanced at her score, she seemed well enough. Sigh… I need to separate them. Not because I was jealous. But because they won’t be able to fight together all the time. Their bond is as close as a true sister, but they really need to be able to fight alone. And it’s NOT BECAUSE I’M JEALOUS!!

“san… Shibuya-san… Shibuya-san!!”

I snapped out of my thought when I heard someone called me and looked to the direction of the voice. Kokabuki was watching me in confused look. “I’ve been calling you for ten times.”

“So? Finished already? You don’t fail again, right?” I said in a bored tone.

She just frowned, “no, I was able to finish it.”

“Good.” I walked to the exit, knowing they’ll follow me. And true enough, when I reached the road, I felt someone held my hand and tugged it softly. “What is it?” I said while continued to walk down the road. Not even bother to see the person who’s held my hand, since I already know who it was. I felt my hand being pulled harder, so I stopped walking and turned back and saw Tomo looking at me worriedly. I smiled instantly when I saw her face. “What is it?” I asked again, in a much softer tone this time.

“You’re angry.” She said simply. “Why?”

“I’m not. Come on, let’s go we’ve stayed here for too long.” I walked again, “Yuko-san would’ve tease me to no end if we’re late.”

“Why?” She walked by my side, hand still holding mine. “Kokabuki’s with us.”

“It didn’t matter for her.” I said while rolled my eyes.

“You called me?” I heard Kokabuki’s voice from behind me and I shook my head as a response. I saw her glanced down for a second, and she was smirking to us and said, “By the way, there’s some of our kohai in the crossroad ahead. You better stop the holding hands thing if you still want to keep your relationship as a secret.”

“Shit!” I immediately let go of her hand and walked faster, put some distance between us.

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*In the front of some building in downtown area.

“Why are we here?” Kokabuki asked me. “Don’t we have a ‘secret training’ to do? That’s why we skipped our fight training, right?”

I smirked at her. “You’ll see later.”

Kokabuki looked around and frowned. “Seems like the others aren’t here yet.”

I looked at my phone, no email and we’re a few minutes early. “They’ll come in a few minutes. We’re too early.” I glanced at Tomo, she has been half-pouting-half-frowning since I walked away from her earlier. I let out a sigh and move closer to her. “What’s wrong?” I asked and kissed her forehead, made her eyes widen, and she let out a shy smile.

“Nothing… just a little tired.” She lowered her head and held my hand again.

I heard Kokabuki sighed and said, “Dear God…, not again.” She shook her head when I looked at her and she said, “I’ll go over there… to look at…,” she pointed at the store in the next building, “ah, well, I better be going before I die from diabetes from the amount of sugar you two produced.” And she did.

I heard Tomo laughed and I looked at her again. ‘Damn, her smile is blinding.’ I smiled back at her. “What is it? Why are you laughing like that?”

“I feel sorry for Kokabuki.” She chuckled a bit again. “This morning she was pleading to me to not going all lovey-dovey to you, since she knows that we have fixed our problems. She said it’ll be awkward for her to tag along with 'lovebirds'.”

I smirked while looking at Kokabuki who’s pretending to be interested with something on the display. “Sure she does…”

She slapped my arm, “behave…”

I grinned at her and leaned closer. She realized what I want to do and put her hand on my face, stopping me.

“Are you crazy? We’re in public!” she hissed.

I took her hand and bring it to my lips, kissed it, and pined her to the wall behind her. “So?” I whispered hotly in her ear, “this place is pretty far from Majijo and beside we’re in Nichoume here. People wouldn’t even take a second look on us.” And I kissed her, gently at first, and when things starting to get hotter, I heard some voices.

“Shibuya?!”

“Ookabuki!?”

At the same time, followed by a loud “EEEEHHH?!?!”

 We jumped away from each other, literally. And all I could say afterwards was, “SHIT!”

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@minami-chan, korisunyan:  hehehe... hope you like this chapter too...  :hee:

@kahem: another Kokabuki third wheel moment  :hiakhiakhiak:

@fael_c00l: it's seemed like i failed with Torigoya and Shaku :err: , glad you found Youran`s training funny though.

@songbac: not hot scene in this chapter, sorry (at least not yet)  :kekeke:

@haruko: here's the answer  :glasses:


Thanks for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys. See you later in next chapter... :byebye:

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 22 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #135 on: September 24, 2012, 08:30:14 PM »
 :w00t: :w00t: Shibuya is so bold! hahaha  :inlove: :inlove: I'm happy that she and chiyuu clear their misunderstanding, this couple is so cute  :deco:

Torigoya is so jealous  :lol: watch out Yuko-sempai~  XD and there is MariMii moment too  :thumbup

Is it possible that Maeda get a patner? just curious... hehehe

strategist? :shocked  .... is it Nezumi?

Wow, who busted them? Can't wait for your next update  :twothumbs :twothumbs

Thank you for your update stv_wong-san..  :bow:
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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 22 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #136 on: September 24, 2012, 10:40:32 PM »
Yeah poor Kokabuki I really feel bad for her xD
I wonder who it was at the end I would say Black lol
OMG Kojiyuu in the fight room!!!!!
I like when Shibuya was jealous because of Youran hehe

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 22 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #137 on: September 25, 2012, 04:43:41 AM »
jajaj but i wanna know what happen whe torigoya took yuko in that room T_T..

jejeje shibuya you are in troubles!!! :D love it!!

but i feel so sorry ... maeda is alone... and you cant bring minami back -_-

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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 22 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #138 on: September 25, 2012, 09:03:23 AM »
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I better be going before I die from diabetes from the amount of sugar you two produced.

 :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: hahaha, poor Kokabuki, she's funny.  :P :P and tomotomo is so sweet  :wub: :wub: :wub:

Toriyoga's jealousy is cute and kojiyuu is sweet too  :heart: :heart: :heart:

Shaku is funny when she answered innocently sado's question  :roll: :roll: :roll: and sado, too when she explained to all people about shaku  :twothumbs :twothumbs


thank for your interesting chap. I hope your update soon  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo / MJGK world) Chapter 22 added (+ other pairing)
« Reply #139 on: September 25, 2012, 10:52:37 PM »
Hohohoho
It seems that have caught them!!   :twisted: :twisted:

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