JPHiP Radio (10/200 @ 96 kbs)     Now playing: Meja - How Crazy Are You?

Author Topic: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Side Story  (Read 152045 times)

Offline Minami-chan

  • Member+
  • Posts: 654
  • Still Love You
Very good chapter seems that everything is heading!
Gekikara and Black.... fantastic the scene between them and the rest of Rappapa about child´s name.
I would like read scenes aboul black and Ren /the child, i want to see reactions of rappapa with blackMOM, maybe in shibuya flashbacks?

Offline kahem

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2675
Oh BlackGeki~
Poor Shaku she took Ookabuki's hand in her face lol
And team hormon is clueless xD

Offline fael_c00l

  • 熊沢世莉奈 | Andela
  • Member+
  • Posts: 101
  • She's so beautiful when she's not mine anymore
BlackXGeki  :twothumbs ,, before i read this chapter, i think Black will pairing with Youran, i'm wrong after all  :catglare: :catglare: but it's okay, i love Black x Geki too,,  :heart: :heart:
TomoTomo is my OTP



Twitter : @Raphael_Raditya
Skype : @fael_c00l

Offline Haruko

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2345
Not every episode is more interesting..:D I want that takadeka appear :D..

jajajaj gekiXblack is so interesting.. aww that cute kiddo is Ren Matsui of course :D

Yeah I love the song when tomomi sing.. like candy or this song :D

Offline songbac

  • Member+
  • Posts: 93
  • kojiyuu forever
yeah, this chapter is good  :twothumbs :twothumbs, i love the way Ookabuki shows her love to Shibuya  :wub: :wub: :wub:

Quote
“WHAT THE HELL IS THAT EVEN MEAN!? POTENTIAL CLIENT!?” Tomo shouted from behind me, and due to our position, she was screaming right in front of my ear, giving me a slight headache that last for a few seconds. “Just because she was having a family problem that doesn’t mean they can just turned her into a junkie!!” Sado-san and Yuko-san were looking at her and then me and back to her with an incredulous expression all along. “DAMMIT!! What is he looks like? Just give a clue. ANYTHING’S FINE! I’LL KILL HIM! No one can messing around with what’s mine and get on with it without punishment.”

I put the documents down on the floor and pulled the rubber gloves of my hands.“Who’s being over-protective now, huh? And to what was happening in the past nonetheless.” I mumbled to myself.

“Shut up!” She pinched my cheek and hugged me from the back tightly and put her head on my shoulder “I know you don’t have the smartest brain, but how could you be that stupid!?”

“Ugh… ca-can’t breathe.” She was suffocating me, I can’t even made a proper retort at her insult. I felt her hold on my body loosened. I hurriedly took a deep breath and-

“You could die…” She whispered softly. Even though her voice was muffled by my clothes, I could hear it very clearly. “You could just die because of it and… we might not meet each other again.” I felt her sobbing quietly and I tried to turn to look at her, but failed. “You could’ve died and I won’t even know it. I could’ve lost you even before you’re mine again.”

--> it's so lovely  :roll: :roll: :roll:

and every your chapter have own an attraction, interesting for me  :heart::heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

i hope you can update soon  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

by the way  blackgeki is so funny, do you write about their family life, don't you???  :lol: :lol: :lol:, i hope you can write more about them and kojiyuu, hehehe :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
Love kojiyuu - yuko - chiyuu - miichan - hinana - haruna - takamina - sama - maachan forever

Offline stv_wong

  • Member+
  • Posts: 274
  • ^ best of the best ^
Chapter 24-2




*Rappappa`s Club Room, Yuko`s POV

I closed the door behind me and sat on my chair without looking at anyone and anything. Sado stood behind me, still with a frown on her face. ‘Damn… that was awkward.’ I glanced at the door to the other room and sighed. ‘Hope they’re alright.’ I remembered at what I’ve read. Based on the date, I think it was written on the day when Shibuya started to ditched school. It might be a few days after she tried taking a drug for the first time. Well, Ookabuki is not the only one who wants to commit murder to him. I want to kill him too, for almost destroying one of my Queens, one of my friends, my… family. And if he related to Erena’s death, that only mean one thing, I’ll make sure he’ll rot in jail. I know Maeda wish the same. But, it’s seems like finding the proofs of that is harder than I thought. We need help.

At the thought of help, the Chibi Captain`s face came into my mind. ‘Hmmm… she is a police, that means she has more experience than us in this whole investigation things. But, can we trust her on this? Yes, she is our senpai, but this is also related to Shibuya. Wouldn’t want to make her fall like three years ago. Hmm… I have to see first whether she can be trusted or not. And if she can, even if I don’t like it, I’ll ask for her help and also she has to be willing to cooperate and keep the information about Shibuya to herself.

“Yuko-san… what now?” I raised my head and saw the expectant faces of the members of Rappappa. ‘Hmm… if we continue to look at the documents we might end up finding more about Higa, but there’s also the risk of opening up the Pandora`s box of Shibuya`s past. Perhaps it’ll be better if we drop it for now. I’ll check on it myself.’

“I guess it’ll be better if we’re the one who check the documents. It was too risky.” Sado whispered in my ear. “Shibuya won’t like it if they know about her past.”

I nodded and said, “Let just forget the documents for now.”

“So, this meeting’s over?” Youran asked.

I looked at her and then at Shaku and Kokabuki. ‘Hmm… They need to train more. And I want to see the result of their training with my Queens. Ah… I know.’ I grinned at them. “Well, it’s over. But, there’s other things you have to do.”

I stood up and walked to the door to the other room, it’s been more than ten minutes already, and I wanna get going. I opened the door and…

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*Shibuya`s POV.

I heard the door being opened and Yuko-san`s shout soon followed. “GOD DAMMIT! WHAT ARE YOU DOING THERE?!” I immediately moved back and retracted my hands from my girlfriend`s shirt. “I’ve told you do NOT baptize our rooms!!” Yuko-san shouted again.

“I’m not!” I shouted back. I look at the door and saw almost all member of Rappappa was peeking behind Yuko-san to see what we’re doing inside. All of them were torn between amusement and surprise, beside one person, Dance, who’s frowning sadly.

“Oh, you’re not, huh?” Yuko-san said challengingly. “Then, how could I saw your hands inside Ookabuki`s shirt, huh?”

‘Damn, she saw that?!’ I looked at Tomo who’s just sighed and then she said, “Nothing’s going on,” calmly, even though her cheeks was slightly red.

“Yeah… right… as if I’m gonna believe that…” Yuko-san said with one eyebrow raised at us. “Anyway, out of the room, I want to put the documents into the secret place.” She walked inside and when we’re about to close the door, she said, “it’s time for ‘another secret training’.”

We shared another grin, this time it was a grin of excitement, Black, Geki, and Torigoya were also sporting the same grin on their faces, while Sado-san just sighed.

“Have fun, girls. I have to get back to work.” She said grimly, but then she smirked. “If there’s any injury, you know where to go.”

“It won’t be us, for sure.” Geki said and she giggled softly.

“Sure. Don’t overdo it, though.” Sado-san said before she went out.

“What kind of training it is?” Youran asked. “Not karaoke again right?”

“EH?! KARAOKE?” Team Hormone yelled.

“The ‘secret training’ you did yesterday… was karaoke?” Wota asked with mouth agape. “I thought it was some kick-ass thing.”

“This training that we will do later, is the kick-ass training.” Black said simply.

Geki giggled sofly, as she usually does whenever she was excited. “It’s gonna be fuuuun~~.”

“And as always… shut your mouth.”I said while glaring at the current Rappappa. “Do not slip out a single word to other peoples who are not in the room right now.”

“And also, keep our relationships a secret.” Torigoya added. “If our enemies know about it, they might targeting one of us and use us as a bait to get the others.” The current Rappappa looked at her inquiringly, while we looked at Torigoya with eyes wide open. ‘What’s with her? Does Yuko-san possess her or something?’

“Torigoya-san is right. If our enemy played dirty, they surely will target one of us to be use as bait….” Maeda added, and she mumbled with a small voice “Just like Minami….”

“Wait… by relationships… you mean…” Akicha looked at Torigoya and then at Black and Geki and lastly, she looked at me and Tomo. “Eeeehhh??? All of you are couples?”

“Wait… Geki and I are not like them.” Black hurriedly said while pointing out at us. “Right, Geki?”

“Mmm…” Geki mumbled softly with her eyes casted down to the floor. Black frowned at her response, but before she could say anything, Unagi already opening the question session.

“So… Torigoya-san, you’re with Yuko-san, right?” Unagi asked to Torigoya who’s nodded, and then Unagi looked at me. “And Shibuya-san with… Ookabuki?”

I just raised my eyebrow at her. And Tomo smirked smugly. “What do you think?” She asked.

“When?! Where? How?”

At that moment, my eyes drifted to Dance. She was looking at me and after a few moments she sighed and walked out of the room. Then, Yuko-san came out from the other room. “Alright. Let’s go….”

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*In the front of some building.

“So… where… are we?” Kokabuki asked. “Why are we here?”

We were standing outside of some shabby looking office building in downtown area. Without saying anything, Yuko-san just opened the door and walked inside the building. We followed after her. The current Rappappa was nervously looking everywhere, their instinct told them to be aware.

Yuko-san led us up the stairs and she opened the door of another room. I could literally felt the tension in the air that emulated from the current Rappappa when they saw the sight behind the door. There, inside the room, were some brute and rough looking guys and some women too. And then one of them, one of the biggest and scariest looking came closer to Yuko-san. The current Rappappa, and even Maeda, gasped and moved to covering Yuko-san, but we blocked them up.

The big guy stopped about a meter from Yuko-san and he looked down on her and grinned. “Oshima-san, long times no see. I heard you’re sick? Are you alright now?” He said with eyes full of concern.

“Nah… it’s nothing.” Yuko-san said while grinning as well. “By the way, can I lend some of your people for training? I have to train them.” Yuko-san said while she pointed at the current Shitennou.

The big-middle-aged guy, or we called him Dragon, his nick-name while he was still active, bowed down and smiling at Yuko-san. “Of course, this place is legally yours, after all.” He then looked at us one by one, “Torigoya-san, Shibuya-san, Black-san, Gekikara-san,” he called our name and nodded at each of us, which we replied with a nod as well. “Where’s Sado-san?”

“Sado has to work.” Yuko-san said simply. And she was practically run up the stairs. “Come on. Hurry.” She said to us from upstairs.

I just sighed and following her like the others, albeit slower. When I was on the upper floor, Torigoya was pinching Yuko-san cheek and scold her for ran before, because, well, Yuko-san shouldn’t get too tired. I looked around me and saw the amaze look the current Rappappa had in their faces when they saw the exercise machines, treadmills, weight-lifting equipments, punching bags, and most of all the two boxing rings in the middle of the room. And I moved closer to my girlfriend and her sister

“This place is nice isn’t it?” I asked her. “I actually want to bring you and Kokabuki here yesterday, but we haven’t got the time for this.”

“How could you all found this place?” Kokabuki asked me with starry eyes at the sight of all the equipments.

“The owner, Dragon, owed Yuko-san his life. After that, this place was legally became Yuko-san`s. Even though Dragon is still the one who manage this place.” I explained to her, even though I had to edit it. And without me knowing, I had gained a several listeners. When I looked around me, Team Hormone was surrounding me and all of them had this ‘so-so, what happen afterwards?’.  And I doing the only thing I used to do when people pestering me like this. I snapped at them.

“What the hell do you want?!”

Tomo, who’s by my side sighed, and said, “would it kills you if I ask you to be more nice to people?”

“She won’t be Shibuya if she’s not tsun-tsun.” Yuko-san, who’s butting in to our conversation, said. “She’s only nice to you.”

“You never ask.” I said to Tomo, and then I added to Yuko-san, “and I’m not a tsundere.” Yuko-san rolled her eyes at me and went to Torigoya.

“If I ask will you try it?”

“It depends.” I said. And when she looked at me questioningly, I grinned mischievously and whispered to her, “I want a full show, lap-dance and strip-dance combined, with the song you sang yesterday, every day for one full week.” I stepped back and I saw her face redden. Well, she said she’ll give me the show, right? I just want to upgrade it.

“What?!” She yelled and then she pulled my arm so that she can whisper back to me. “Are you crazy? Everyday?” I nodded at her, made her narrowed her eyes at me. “You do know I can’t stay over in your apartment every day, right? My parents will get suspicious.” I just looked at her with an innocent expression on my face. “Hhh… fine… but not every day. I’ll try for every weekend.”

“And the first show will start… tonight.” I said with a grin to her.

“What show?” Wota asked. ‘Damn, I forgot that they’re still around.’ I looked at them who was discussing what the show that I mean is. Kokabuki who’s near us looked at her Aneki with mouth opened.  She must’ve knew what the show mean.

“Show….” She said slowly. “Aneki… It’s not the kind of shows that Yuko-san and Sado-san said last night, right?” When she saw her Aneki`s face redden, her eyes bulged. “What? God… I don’t want to sing that song with you… ever again… It may give me… unwanted image in my head.”

“What show?” Wota asked again.

“You better not know it.” Kokabuki said. “Or you’ll get the same trauma that I have now.”

“OY, GET YOUR ASSES OVER HERE!! NOW!” Yuko-san shouted from the middle of the room, near the two rings. And we did. “What are you chit-chatting about? We’re here for training! Youran go to ring A, Ookabuki you on the other one.”

The appointed persons went to the rings, and while my eyes still on my girl, I asked Yuko-san, “who’ll she fight with?”

“Dragon has a few newbie with a bloating ego that we need to burst, and we’re here to destroy their ego.” She said with an evil grin.

“Newbie, huh?” I mumbled.

“And also, that fan of yours was here too.” She added.

I whipped my head to look at Yuko-san who was sporting a grim look in her face. “He doesn’t know that I’m here, right?” It’s not that he was a bad guy, it’s just that… he was too persistent and annoying. I had beaten him badly at the first time we met here, and afterwards he claimed to be my biggest fan. No matter how many times I had punched him out or snapped at him, he’s still pestering me whenever I was here. I wonder if he was a masochist.

“Just hope so.” She said, and then she scowled. “Nyan-Nyan’s fan is here too. I really want to kick his ass.”

“Heh, at least her fan was just looking at her from afar. Not as annoying as mine.” I grumbled to her.

“Ah… here come the training partners for them.” And a burly guy and a sexy woman came. And I truly didn’t like the way the burly guy looked at my girl. “Alright, Youran, you’ll fight her and Ookabuki, the other one. And the rules are… no rules. Just do everything you can to knock ‘em down. And remember, they are kick-boxing athlete wanna-be.”

“I rather fight her in a different way.” Youran said with a sly grin. The woman was just looking at her with a smirk as sly as Youran.

“You’re here for training.” Yuko-san glared at Youran. “Save the flirting for later. And don’t underestimate her.” She looked at one of Dragon’s coaches that act as the referees for today`s training, and gave him the signal to started Youran`s match.

“Soo… I have to fight this girl?” the burly man said, “Hey, baby, why don’t we just go somewhere and have a different match?”

I was about to jump to the ring and knocked him down, but Yuko-san has already put her hand on my arm and force me to stay still.

“In your dream.” Tomo said while giving him an icy glare.

Kokabuki, who’s standing on the other side of me, whistled. “He’s dead.” And she turned to one of the equipments. “It’s not even worth to watch anymore. Aneki will surely win.”

And then the first round started. My eyes was fixated to Tomo, even though sometimes I glance at Youran`s match. She was playing around and a little hesitant to actually hit the woman. If this kept on going she’ll surely lost to that woman. As for my girlfriend, she was calculating her opponent movement and waiting for the right time to plant her palm to him. She was kept on circling and avoiding his attacks.

After a few minutes, I heard Yuko-san yelled angrily, “Dammit, Youran!! Stop playing around and just knocked her! Or I’ll kick your ass so hard you wouldn’t be able to sit on it for weeks.” And then I heard Youran said “Fiiiine. Sorry babe, but Sachou`s order.” I glanced at the other ring and saw Youran sent her trade-mark flying blow to her opponent, who’s staggering a little after she received the heavy blow. And afterwards Youran sent a hard-jab on her.

After I know the other match was practically almost over, I went back to watch my girl`s match. At this time, my ‘fan’ came up, and he instantly started to pester me with question until I growled to him to shut up. Tomo seemed to notice it since she was kept on glancing at me.

It seemed like with another second passed, her opponent was getting frustrated and his movement became more violent. My face slowly turned into a frown when I saw them. And then, that happened. He intentionally grabbed her boobs. She immediately moved back and said something menacingly to him, and I could see it in her stance that she was ready to actually attack him. But, my mind was blinded with rage. All I could see was red. I jumped to the ring, startling both of them and growled to him.

“Change of opponent. I’m gonna kill you.” And I moved forward to him but then, Black was already in front of me, holding my shoulder with on hand while her baby on her other hand, and Tomo hugged me from the back.

“SHIBUYA! Get your ass here! That is not your fight!” Yuko-san yelled at me. “Let her finished it.”

My mind was still in rage, even though what Yuko-san had said lessened it a bit. But I still want to kill him for touching my girl. And now, Black was already left the ring and that guy was standing right in front of me, with a smug smirk on his face.

“What is it? Wanna play with me too?”

“OY! Shibuya-san`s mine. Get in the line if you want her too.” My stupid and annoying fan said to him. He’s sooo annoying that I didn’t even bother to know what his name is.

I growled in irritancies, “SHUT UP!!”, and I felt the hold on my body tighten a bit. And I heard her whispered, “I love you.” My rage instantly went down afterwards. I blinked at several times and I looked at her. She smiled at me softly.

“The three of us can get some fun later, if you know what I mean.” The burly man said, not noticing what our close proximity means at all.

I was about to marched on him when she pulled me and kissed me on the lips. After a few seconds and cat-calls, she pulled back, breaking the kiss, and whispered to me. “Relax, I can finish him. Just think about the show later.” And at the same time Yuko-san was yelled at me again, ordering me to go off the ring.

Tomo moved away from me and she was glaring at her opponent, “Sorry, but I’m not interested in men.” I smirked at her words and went down the ring. And when I stood on the side of the ring, my hand was being punched, hard, by Yuko-san.

“Stupid! Idiot! This whole match thing is so that I can see them in action by my own eyes and to measuring up how much they have improve themselves. And you just ruined it.”

“He grabbed her boobs… you would’ve reacted the same if it was Torigoya.”

“Yeah… right… That’s not an excuse! You-“ Yuko-san halted her sentences and turned to looked at the ring. “Oh… it’s over already.”

“Eh!?” I turned my head to look at the ring too. And true enough, it was over, her opponent was now twitching on the mat, clutching his torso in pain. ‘Heh, I hope he has broken ribs. Tomo’s palms are deadly.’

“Shi-Shibuya-san… you… you’re…” my fan stutteringly asked me. About what, I don’t know.

“What?!” I growled at him again.

And then, someone pulled me back for a hug and linked her hands on my waist, and she said, “She IS MINE, not yours.”

“I want a rematch, you must’ve using tricks against me.” Her opponent shouted from the ring, he’s still clutching her torso. “It’s impossible for me to lose against a girl.”

“What?! If that the case, then I want to have a match with her to- owww…..” My fan stopped his rant because Dragon bonked his head and he was now glaring at the guy who’s still on the ring.

“Both of you shut up!!! That’s why I told you to not underestimate your opponent.” His deep voice blared out and he glared towards my fan. “You! You know who they are. Are you stupid enough to make them mad at you?” And her glared at the other guy. “And you!! Don’t get too cocky. There’s a lot peoples who’s stronger than you. You won’t be able to go to professional level if you still arrogant like that.”

“But, it was impossible. She must’ve using a few tricks to defeat me. There’s no way I lost against a girl.”

Yuko-san and Dragon sighed at the same time. “Dragon, seems like your men over here, needs proper training more…. And also proper education.” Yuko-san said grimly.

“Ah… yes… you’re right… sorry ‘bout that.” He said to Yuko-san, and then he glared at the guy again. “Do you even have any idea of who they are?”

“How should I know? I’m not from around here.”

“Even if you’re not from around here, you surely know about Majisuka Jyo Gakuen, right?”

“The yankee`s all-girls-school? Yeah… So?”

“They are from Majijo, and the strongest gang in Majijo, on top of that.”

“Yeah… but, they’re just girls… even though they’re yankee they surely won’t be able to defeat a professional fighters.”

“Oh… Really? They aren’t your normal-everyday-high-school-girls. You got beaten by Kazuya that’s why you came here, right? To chase after him?” Dragon said, and when the guy nodded, he continued his speech. “And you can’t win against our other top fighters too, right?”

“For now.”

“Yeah… right… Let me tell you one thing. All of us… All, including Kazuya, lost against Yuko-san and her gang.” Dragon said slowly. “Why do you think she’s the owner of this place?”

“What?!” The guy said with mouth opened wide in shock. Well, he’s not the only one though. The current Rappappa were also in the same state as him. Even Maeda looked at Yuko-san in amazement.

“Yeah… yeah… Come on let’s go to the next round. Shaku and… Kokabuki.” Yuko-san said non-chalantly . “And the rest of you, don’t just lazing around… go train yourself.” And off they go… to the various equipments and machines.

I watched Kokabuki`s match against another burly man with Tomo, and then I saw Dragon came to Yuko-san. He smiled at her and said, “You know, you could be a good trainer Oshima-san.” And for a moment, I forget the match and watch them instead.

“I rather be the fighter than trainer.” Yuko-san answered with a grin.

“That’s what I thought too. But the life of professional fighter is hard. One injuries and off you go.” Dragon chuckled. “Just look at me. And after all, you’ve got what it takes to be a good trainer.” Seeing Yuko-san just looking at him questioningly, he chuckled again and pointed at Team Hormone who’s weight-lifting now, and to Black who’s watching over Geki and Youran`s training, and to Torigoya and Maeda who’s training with the punching bags, or more like Maeda was training. Torigoya was just pushing the bag lazily. “They might be the hardest peoples to handle, harder than my guys. And yet, with a word from you, off they go. They might go to hell and back if you ask them to. To be able to handle these girls, means you can be one hell of a trainer.” He sighed. “I’m not getting any younger, you know. I need to find someone who can run this place. And you’re one of the owners of this place, so… Just think of it.” Dragon then left to the down floor afterwards, and left Yuko-san who was frowning in thought right now.

“What’s wrong, Yuu-chan?” Torigoya asked Yuko-san.

She turned to Torigoya and smiled at her. “Nothing.” And she jumped at her. “Ahhhh… Nyan-Nyan`s boobs are the best.” She said while she rubbed her face to Torigoya’s boobs.

I’m not surprised when Torigoya smacked her head and screamed, “Hentai!”. But what’s surprised me was, after that, Torigoya pulled Yuko-san to her and said, “later… when we’re alone.” Damn… I’ve heard something I shouldn’t have.

I looked at Kokabuki’s match again. She had her opponent in her control with a dead grip. I know she was into wrestling, but… “Kokabuki, just punch him down.” I shouted to her. “Don’t waste your energy.” Wrestling is a good martial art, but in a fight, in street fights… it wastes too much time and energy.

“Fine.” Kokabuki said while she released her opponent. He tried to kicked her leg after he was released, but luckily Kokabuki saw it and she was able to jump back to avoid the kick. She then chopped him on the side of his neck, and brought his head to meet her knee. And… the match’s over. Kokabuki then went down from the ring and stood beside her Aneki. We looked at Yuko-san inquiringly, wondering who’s match it will be afterwards. She frowned a little and looked at Gekikara and Black. And after a while, she shouted.

“Geki! It’s your turn now.” And she paused a little, Geki was already walked towards the ring with her hand on the side of her neck and she tilted her head slightly. “You will fight against… Black.” I instantly turned my head to Black`s direction. She looked as shocked as the rest of us, with her mouth slightly opened. Some murmurs about Yuko-san`s decision for the next match could be heard from every direction. We had lots of training matches before, but we’ve never have a match against each other. Black gave her son to Torigoya and then she hopped to the ring.

“Wait,” Yuko-san said before the match started, and she threw a big duffel bag to the middle of the ring. “Wear those. I don’t want you to hurt each other.” Black opened the bag and pulled out a body-protector from inside, and they wore it over their clothes. “Even though I don’t want any of you to get hurt, that doesn’t mean you can show us a half-assed fight. I want to see you fight seriously. Understand?” After they nodded, Yuko-san gave the signal for the match to start.

They were throwing punches and kicks at each other, and due to their, mostly Black`s, fast movement, sometimes it looked blurry, according to what Team Hormone and Kokabuki said. While Youran, Shaku and Tomo were squinting their eyes, hoping that with it, they could follow their movements better. Even though they looked seriously fighting against each other, I could clearly see the hesitancies on their movements and on their stance. Of course the frown on their faces also told the same story. And I’m not the only one who’s noticed.

“Yuu-chan…” Torigoya whined while pouting at the ring.

“If this continue, this match is useless.” Maeda mumbled.

Yuko-san took a deep breath and shouted, “I’VE TOLD YOU TO NOT GIVE US A HALF-ASSED FIGHT!!! I DON’T CARE WHAT YOU DO BEHIND CLOSED DOOR, I WANT YOU TO FIGHT! NOW!!!”

“What?! We’re just friend.” Black said with a red face.

“I DON’T CARE!! JUST FIGHT!!”

Geki started to giggled, softly at first, and then it was getting louder and louder. “Ne… Black… come and get me.” And they started to fight seriously. It was better than any action movies. Black`s speed and Geki`s insane movements. It was like watching a dance. And then Black sent a high kick to Geki’s head, but she managed to block it with her arm. Black immediately retracted her leg and put her arms in front of her face in time, blocking Geki`s punch. And then-

“SHIBUYA! OOKABUKI! You’re next. Get on the other ring!” Yuko-san said and when we’re just gaped at her, she growled. “Now! We don’t have much time left, it’s already afternoon.” We sighed, and hopped to the other ring. “Wear these as well.” She threw the same duffel bag to us. “And I don’t want a half-assed fight.”

“Well…” I said while scratching my head. It was a little harder though, because of the gloves and helmet and all. “Should we?”

“If you rather face Yuko-san`s wrath than fight me, you can just get down the ring.” She said with a sly grin.

“Save your flirting for later, and started fighting!” Yuko-san said to us.

I sighed and prepared my stance, arms up in front of my face, legs opened and slightly bending. “We better start fast before she humiliates us more.”

“Agreed.” She was also went into position, hands in front of her body with one hand in the front of the other, fingers pointed to the sky, with palms opened. “Her teasing is getting worse and worse.”

“So… come here…” I taunted her with my hand, gesturing her to come forward. And she did, her palm directed to my face, and I avoided it by leaned my body to the side, unexpectedly her other hand was already on the way to my body and I jumped back to avoid it. “Nice… you’re getting faster or is it because you never put 100% before?”

“Tsk… I thought I get you for sure with that.” She said while she got back to her stance and glared at me.

I whistled, “Scareee….” and jumped forward with arms bend on the side of my head, and she was on the range, I released a right hook at her, aaaanndd… she caught my hand. Damn. I pulled back and sent a left jab, but she was able to block it. She moved to the side and directing her palm to the side of my head. I blocked it with my arm, but with that the side of my body was opened and she immediately hit me with her other hand. Thank God I wore the body protector, if I wasn’t, it will bruise or worse, I could get cracked ribs. I looked at her face, she was grinning, even though there’s a glint of concern in her eyes.

“Nice,” I said with a smile. “Try to block this,” I said while I sent a high kick to her head, she blocked it with her hand. I retracted my leg and sent a spinning kick, she was barely able to escape from it. After the kick I immediately crouch down and kicked her ankle. She staggered a little after the kick, but she was able to keep her stance. Well, as I said her legs were her weak points. And I waited until she ready again.

“SHIBUYA!!” As we heard the blaring sound of someone`s voice called me, we turned our head to saw a fuming Yuko-san. “What. The. Hell. Are. You. Doing??! I’ve told you I want a fight! Not for you to train her and give her some tentative attack! And why the hell didn’t you keep on attacking her?” And when our silence was the only answer we could give she kept on rambling. “If you’re fighting against other people you surely would keep on attacking your opponent until they’re fainted. But because it’s her, you halted your attack until she was up and ready again.” She sighed and turned back to the other ring. “Geki, Black, you two, stop for a while.” She then looked at each of us and at everyone else and said, “The reason for this match is to see how well you can fight against someone who knows you better, not only in person but also in your way of fighting.”

“I thought it’s Kokabuki who knows Ookabuki`s fighting style better.” Youran mumbled.

 “Yeah, well, when you fight alongside your friend you’ll know her moves well, right?” Yuko-san asked her, “But, the one who’s got the better knowledge are the spectators.” And then she smirked at me. “Or more like, the one-who-was-always-watched-from-Rappappa`s-window-whenever-Ookabuki-was-fighting-on-the-school-ground.” She said the words too quickly that made, thank God, the other didn’t even know what she was saying. “Anyway… you can continue your match. And REMEMBER, no half-assed fight.”

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   



Multiple pairing moment after this.  XD  I've to finished it first, though.


@minami-chan: eh... i'll try :nervous

@kahem: yeah.. poor Shaku, and Team Hormone are not so clueless anymore lol

@fael_c00l: ehh... BlackGeki is easier to write... ehehe...

@haruko: takadeka gonna have to wait a lil'bit. :nervous

@songbac: it's kinda sappy in my opinion, must be the hopeless romantic in me took control of me at the moment i write that.   :P
                wish granted... well, in the next update...  XD

Thanks for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys. Until next update.

Offline Takamina_Captain

  • ecchi
  • Member
  • Posts: 29
this fanfics is sooooo interesting !!!!   :lol:
Black vs Geki...Shibuya vs ookabuki...
i wonder if yuko will pick torigoya as her opponent... hehehe
Hope minami will appear much more...waiting for maeda reaction... :thumbup
Please update as soon as posibble.. :twothumbs

Offline kahem

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2675
Ahaha! Couple teasing times are the best!!!
Can't wait to know more about Black/Geki hehe~
Will you put some Atsumina? ^^

Offline Haruko

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2345
awww takadeka!!!

yeah this fight are amazing... :D the lap dance i wanna see it!! :D

Offline Minami-chan

  • Member+
  • Posts: 654
  • Still Love You
uaaaaaaaaaah!!
TomoTomo fighting!!!!  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

Offline fael_c00l

  • 熊沢世莉奈 | Andela
  • Member+
  • Posts: 101
  • She's so beautiful when she's not mine anymore
Black VS Geki,, it's so  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Hope Takadeka appear at next chapter so Maeda is not alone anymore  :) :)
TomoTomo is my OTP



Twitter : @Raphael_Raditya
Skype : @fael_c00l

Offline stv_wong

  • Member+
  • Posts: 274
  • ^ best of the best ^
Side-story, as I said earlier XD (well, more like the continuation of the story, but from other`s view.)



*On the road somewhere, evening.

A girl walked down the road with a solemn look on her face. She kicked a few pebbles while walked aimlessly.

“Yagami-senpai!!” A girl`s voice could be heard from the other end of the road. The said girl lifted her head and turned back to looked at the direction of the voice that had called her. When she got the better look of the person, she smiled and waved her hand to the caller. The caller, a younger girl came rushing to her.

“Kimoto-kun, long times no see.” She said to the younger girl after they’re close enough.

“Mou… Senpai, I’ve told you many times before to call me Kanon.” The younger girl said as she puffed her cheek cutely.

“Alright, Kanon-chan. But, you have to call me Dance too.” Dance was already walking back and with that she missed the blush on the younger girl`s face.

“Ha-hai… Dance…-senpai…”

“So… you’re in your third years now, right? Which high school will you go for?”

“E-em… Majisuka Jyo…”

Dance immediately halted and looked at the younger girl. “You’re joking, right… The other student will beat the hell out of you. You can’t fight that well.” To her surprise, the look on the younger girl was reminded her of someone`s expression when being told the same thing. Herself.

“Senpai, why do you pick Majijo? You can’t fight too.”

“Because… Shibuya-san was… there.” At that, the image of Shibuya ran across in Dance`s mind, unbeknown to her, a frown settled on her face.

“Me too.” The younger girl said softly.

“Eh!? You’ll go to Majijo because of Shibuya-san too?”

The younger girl stopped walking and she tugged at Dance`s shirt to stop her too, as she mumbled, “Idiot Senpai.” She kissed Dance`s cheek and said shyly, “I want to go to Majijo because of you, Senpai.” And she ran ahead, left Dance, who’s seems like she was on a trance, alone.

After a few while, Dance slowly lifted her hand to her cheek, the same cheek that the younger girl kissed earlier. She blinked for several times, and then her eyes widen. “EH?! Kanon-chan… likes me!? EH!?”

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*Shibuya’s apartment, late at night.

I was lazing around in my bed, still warm and fuzzy after my bath, and my eyes were half-way closed because of the tiredness. Man, Yuko-san really trained us out without restraint. I glanced at my bedroom door. That girl was still on the bath. ‘If she took more minutes to bath, I’ll just go to sleep.’

“Click.”

I heard the sound of the lamp turned off and when I opened my eyes, it was dark here, with only the light from outside illuminating my room. ‘Huh?’ I saw a shadow on the floor and I followed it to the source. She was standing in the front of the door, wearing only a bathrobe and she lifted some rectangular thing, her phone I guess, and soon, the song started playing, the same song that she sang yesterday. And she stepped closer to me. I could feel my drowsiness disappeared, well, who wouldn’t? Too bad I couldn’t see her face clearly due to the lack of light. I hope I won’t get a nose-bleed because of this, or worse, fainted.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*About the same time, Yuko`s apartment

A girl was sitting in front of the window, watching over the night view that her small apartment window providing. Ever since her grandmother died, she had to save and cut out a lot of unnecessary expenses, and living from her small inheritances. It pained her to sell the old house that were belonged to her grandmother, but she couldn’t afford the monthly costs to pay the utilities expense of the house. Thankfully, she had the insurance company to cover the hospital bills.

She kept on looking out the window with a forlorn look on her face. And she sighed.

“Managing the gym, huh? I do need to find a job after high school after all, but….”

“What are you talking about?” Another voice that was coming from behind her interrupted her monologue.

“Tori-Nyan…” She smiled at the other girl, and guided her hand to her head. “See it for yourself.”

Torigoya retracted her hand and pouted at her leader. “I rather choose for you to tell me.”

“I’m sorry, but I’m not in the mood for talking.” Yuko put Torigoya`s hand on her head again. “Did you see it?”

“Ah… Dragon-san asked you to run the gym after he retired… That’s the one you want to tell me, right?” She gave Yuko a questioning look. “So… will you do it?”

“Honestly? … I don’t know.” Yuko sighed and pulled her Nyan-Nyan closer to her, hugged her and succumbed into the warmth and comfort of her embrace. “Should I?”

The airhead girl smiled and let her girlfriend hugged her, but then the comforting moment burst out because of the feel of a pair of hands groping on her breasts. She slapped the hand away and glared at the smaller girl. But, when the smaller girl pouts at her, she let out a small smile.

“No skin-ship tonight. You’re tired. Remember what your doctors said.”

“But, Nyan-Nyan…”

“No. Let’s just sleep for now. There’ll be more time for that later.”

With that, the two girls, almost adults now, tried to settled down on the queen-sized bed, the only expensive thing in this apartment room, because it’s owner insisted that having a nice bed is a must for a proper love-making, or skin-ship as she would’ve said.

“Nyan-nyan…. Have you made your decision yet?”

“About what?”

“Come live with me.”


“…”

“… You don’t have to answer now. It’s just that…” Yuko turned to looked at the other girl with a deep frown etched on her face. “Do you know how worried I was every time I know you’re at work?”

Torigoya smiled and pull the much smaller girl to her arms, mindlessly caressing the smaller girl`s hair. “I know… Mieta… Don’t worry too much… I’ll be fine.”

“… I hate your job.”

“It’s just a temporary job. At least until I got a better job.” Torigoya pecked her forehead. “Now let’s sleep.”

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*Shibuya’s apartment.

She was circling me as she danced while untie the knot on the bathrobe slowly in a tantalizing moves. The bathrobe was sliding deliriously slow as she was giving me this smug smirk all the while. To my utter dismay and disappointment, she wore her underwear under the bathrobe. She came closer to me and sat on my lap.

I tried to stifled a moan when I felt her licked my neck, leaving a wet trail on my neck that felt like burning when her warm breath hitting it. ‘Damn… this is…. Not good. I can’t wait anymore.’ I tried to touch her, to pull her towards me, but she was already moved away.

“Nuh-uh… no touching.” She said with a sultry voice. “It’s against the rules.”

“What rules? And how come you know that after all?”

“Well…. The movies and books. I’m not that innocent, you know.” She said while she leaned to me again, kissing my cheek and the side of my lips, and like before, she was already away before I was able to catch her.

“Huh…. You think I didn’t know that you are a little devil in human`s skin?” I moved myself to get closer to her. But she managed to escape.

“I think I need to tie you up, just so you could stay still.” She said while giggling softly and I grumbled in exasperation. “You say you want a show?”

“Oh, yeah, I do…” I was finally able to catch her. I pulled her to me and nibbled her earlobe, and I whispered to her, “But, for now, I want to do something else.” I kissed her and bit her lower lips softly, and forced her to open her mouth with my tongue. My hands went down to fleetingly caressing her body.  I pulled her to sit on my lap, my left hand was on the back of her head, while my right hand was creating pattern on her back, unbuckled her bra. Our tongues were still fighting for dominance. Her hands went down from my shoulder to the hem of my pajamas, pulling it, trying to strip me.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*On a park somewhere.

Two girls were sitting on the swings. They chatted while they sometimes glanced up at the moon and the stars in the dark sky.

“Ookabuki and Shibuya-san, huh?” the girl with short hair said as she chuckled a bit. “I have to say that it is unexpected. I’ve never even seen them talked to each other.”

“Yeah… then you can imagine how surprised I was when I saw Shibuya-san and she said she want to talk to Aneki. Alone.” The other girl said with a grimace on her face. “Even me, who was almost always stayed with Aneki during school times, had never, ever, seen them together. She was also never said anything about Shibuya-san. She often glanced at her whenever we crossed way with her, but I never think that there’s something between them.”

“Well… if they intended to hide it, of course you wouldn’t know.” The short-haired girl smirked. “Since when they… well… you know…”

“Ask for yourself. I won’t say anything. I’ve promised to Aneki to shut my mouth.”

“Boooo… you’re not fun.”

Kokabuki smirked and grinned, “So what about you? Don’t you suppose to have a date today? With who?”

“Eheheh…” Youran chuckled as she scratched her head. “One of my admirers from another school.”

“Still as famous as ever, I see.” Kokabuki let out a short laugh. “What about that hot-kickboxing-pro-athlete-wannabe? You didn’t ask for her email address?”

“Why? Jealous?” Youran asked as she wiggled her eyebrows playfully.

Kokabuki scoffed and said, “Why should I? I’m not interested in playgirl like you. I rather live my life alone than be with you.”

Youran mockingly put both of her hand in her chest, pretending to be hurt by the other girl`s words. “Agh… so mean….”

Kokabuki laughed and shove Youran`s playfully. “Come on, we have to go. It’s late already. The lovebirds might have been hopping around like a rabbit on a red-bull overdose at this time.”

And they laughed together at Kokabuki`s words.

“Ah….” Youran wiped the tear that has accumulated in her eyes due to laughing too much. “Ookabuki’s right. You do tend to talked too much.”

“Shut up.”

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*Hospital.

“Shinoda-san, a patient is calling out for you. She is on the waiting room.”

A tall girl turned towards the person who said that and let out a “thanks” as a reply. She headed to the said room and saw a familiar girl inside. The said girl lifted her head when she heard footsteps, and gave her best awards-winning-puppy-smile.

“Spoiled-brat, what do you want?” Sado asked with her, er…. Sado tone.

The said spoiled-brat, Shaku, pouted at her. “I’m a patient, you know. I was hurt earlier.”

“Why you asked for me? I’m still a trainee, you know? And I could poison you or something.”

“I know you wouldn’t. Yuko-san won’t let you. And after all, I want you to tend my injuries.”

“Yeah?” Sado raised her eyebrow challengingly. “Tell me why I should do it.”

“Well, for instance, I know you bored because it’s practically empty here.”

“Fine… but, if you whine or complain, I’ll poison you.” She turned back and started walking towards the door. Shaku let out a smile and followed her.

“What or maybe who hurt you?”

“Kokabuki… damn… her wrestling holds are strong. I was careless. Should’ve paid attention more.”

“What? Kokabuki?” Sado looked at the younger girl beside her incredulously. “Was Yuko-san….”

“It was Yuko-san`s order. Black-san and Gekikara, Ookabuki and Shibuya-san, Youran and Maeda.”

The older girl frowned for a moment. “I see…”

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*Maeda`s room.

A girl with a shoulder length hair was studying. After a while her gaze turned to the photograph on her study desk. She took the photo and her thumbs mindlessly caressing another girl`s face in the photo.

“Minami… What should I do?” She let out a sigh and closed her eyes. A thought was flashing trough her head. “Captain Takahashi… Minami…. Why are they looks alike so much?” Her hand automatically reached to the scrunchies that she wore as a bracelets in her other hand. “I miss you… Minami….”

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*Black`s apartment.

A girl was sitting on the bath, currently in her happy place. But then, she heard her son’s cries. She was already half standing when her son’s cries died out as fast as it came. “Geki…,” she said while smiling. And then a frown came to her face. She was confused by the other girl behavior today. Geki was more silent than she herself was, she rarely said anything and she even giggled less today, which was a strange phenomenon.

With thought still about the other girl, she dried her body, wore her clothes and went outside with one hand holding a towel to dry her hair. She saw Geki sat in the middle of the living room with Ren on her arms. He’s sleeping peacefully on Geki’s arms. Black came to them and sat near them, stroking her son`s hair mindlessly.

“Why did he cry before?”

“Don’t know.” Geki shrugged and gave Ren to Black. “He was immediately went back to sleep after I picked him.”

“You are good with kids.”

“…”

“… Geki? What’s wrong?”

The said girl was only kept on staring at the tatami mats, fingers mindlessly playing with the corner of her shit. “Black…,” she said as her eyes casted on the small window, hiding her face from the other girl, “we… are friends, aren’t we?”

“Of course. Why are you asking that?”

“… Nothing…” With that Geki stood up. “I gotta go.” She said as she walking towards the door.

Black immediately rushed after her. “Wait, it’s late. Where do you wanna go after all?”

“… You don’t have to worry about me. I’ll be fine.” And with that, Geki walked out of Black`s apartment. She walked around the block aimlessly.

“Where should I go...,” she mumbled to herself, “I could go to her place, but…. Torigoya is in Yuko-san`s, Sado-san`s place is too far… Sigh… I’ve no other choice then. I hope she won’t bite my head off for interrupting… whatever they’re doing right now.”

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------   

*Shibuya`s apartment.

“Hmh… Ah…” her soft moan filled the room. God, I love her voice. It’s just so cute and at the same time, sexy. I quicken my pace, trying my darnest to make her scream. And after a while I felt the walls surrounding my fingers tighten as her breathing became faster. And… she did… screamed, I mean. I felt her walls pulsing for a while and she moaned again as I pulled my fingers out. Her eyes were already half-closed. I don’t blame her, really, today was a tiring day. What’s with the training and all.

I cleaned my hand with the tissue that I put on the side-table. And speaking of the said tissue, I ran out of it more quickly lately. When my mind reminded me the reason why, I felt my lips slowly turning into a smirk. I threw the ball-of-used-tissue to the trash bin on the corner on my room, and I lie on the bed beside her. Her lips turned into a small smile as I kissed her forehead. “Good night.” I said while I sat up and pulled the blanket to cover our body. And as I lay on the bed again, the door bell rang. I frowned while I looked at the clock.

“This is late. Who might it be?” she asked me with the same frown on her face.

“I don’t know.” I slipped out of bed and wore my pajamas, a blue-green-short-sleeves-hoddie with matching pants. “Go to sleep, I’m gonna check it out.” I said while walked out of the bedroom to open my front door.

I opened the door and found myself blinking for several times at the person who was standing outside of my apartment.

“Geki?! Eh!? Why are you here?” I asked in astonishment.

She grimaced and put her hand on her neck. “I’m not… er… interrupting anything, am I?”

“I was about to sleep.” I said while I let her in. “But if you came ten minutes earlier then… well… you just have to wait a bit longer for me to open up the door.”

“You’re not mad, right?” She smiled a bit. “Can I stay over tonight?”

“Sure, you can, but…” I frowned at her. “Aren’t you supposed to staying over at Black`s place?” I ushered her to the guest room.

“Ah… yes… um…” She sat on the bed and casted her eyes to the floor. Strange… what’s happen actually? “I want to ask you something too, but… perhaps in the morning.”

“Oooo…kay….” I turned to the drawer and took the pillows and blanket from inside and put it on the bed. “You know where the bathroom, right?” She nodded as an answer. “Towels and toothbrush are inside the drawer too if you need it.”

“Yeah. Thanks, Shibuya.” She said softly.

“Good night.” I said as I walked towards the door.

Her soft reply came when I was about to close the guest room door. I came back to my bedroom and went straight to the bed. To my disappointment, she was already wore her pajamas, er… my pajamas actually, she didn’t bring any clothes. She was already laying on her side, back-facing me.

“Who is it?” She mumbled while still back-facing me.

I stifled a yawn and lay on the bed as well. “Geki.” I said while pulling the blanket to cover my body.

She immediately turned back and looked at me, “Eh?! Gekikara?! Why she come here?”

“How the hell should I know?” I said carelessly, earned me a pinch on my stomach as a reprimand for my choice of words. I smiled innocently and pulled her to me. “She said she’ll tell me in the morning.”

“Oh…, alright then.” She put her head on my shoulder and snuggled closer to me. “Good night.”

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
   
 


@anzai48: anzai-san, thanks for coming here. Eh... the fight scenes were just a little part of the story actually, just scattered around here and there.
                as i said before, I'm not good with action story :nervous
                yep, I like the tomotomo fight in MJGK2 too, too bad it was really short  :smhid .

@Takamina_captain: Yey... glad I'm not failed with the fight scenes. Em... no fighting for Yuko (yet), she are not allowed to.
                               As for the takadeka....  :twisted:

@kahem: well, before we had some glimpse to toriyuu, now it's time for blackgeki. As for atsumina.... let's just see  :twisted:

@haruko: glad you like it  XD
               sorry the lap dance has to be cut short because Shibuya can't control her raging hormone :lol:
               (or more like the author can't write smexy story well :nervous)

@minami-chan: hehehe... you like the scene?

@fael_c00l: glad you like the fight... sorry it was so short. Takadeka will appear, but the rest...  :twisted:


Thank you for reading, commenting and the 'thank you', guys. Sorry for the miss-spelling and grammar mistake. Until next update.  XD

Offline Haruko

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2345
Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo/MJGK world) sidestory added (multiple pairings)
« Reply #172 on: October 25, 2012, 05:13:02 AM »
aww i wanna read the sexy dance.. BUT

you give more about the other girls.. :D and love them!! my kojiyuu!!! awww.. im waiting for takadeka and atsuko shalalala

aww black you are so slow?.. or clueless sometimes..

Offline songbac

  • Member+
  • Posts: 93
  • kojiyuu forever
Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo/MJGK world) sidestory added (multiple pairings)
« Reply #173 on: October 25, 2012, 06:36:37 AM »
arghhhhh...  :shocked :shocked :shocked ii'm too busy to read your fic  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:, today, i've not read chap 24 part 2yet, and you post new chapter,  :banghead:  :banghead: :ba :cry:nghead: :banghead:, i want to be free to read yor ficccccccccccc  :cry: :cry: :cry:

but i hope you'll usually update your fic  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

thank for your fic  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
Love kojiyuu - yuko - chiyuu - miichan - hinana - haruna - takamina - sama - maachan forever

Offline kahem

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2675
Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo/MJGK world) sidestory added (multiple pairings)
« Reply #174 on: October 25, 2012, 10:12:23 AM »
Oh Youran/Kokabuki?
Poor Geki, Black still didn't amit it lol
Shaku/Sado is a funny relationship ^^
Tomotomo times are the best!!!!!

Offline fael_c00l

  • 熊沢世莉奈 | Andela
  • Member+
  • Posts: 101
  • She's so beautiful when she's not mine anymore
Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo/MJGK world) sidestory added (multiple pairings)
« Reply #175 on: October 25, 2012, 01:05:01 PM »
DanceNon  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Ah, i almost forget about Chokoku,, It will be YouranXKokabuki or YouranXChokoku??  :? :?
Yeah i love this side-story, perfecto respecto   :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
TomoTomo is my OTP



Twitter : @Raphael_Raditya
Skype : @fael_c00l

Offline stv_wong

  • Member+
  • Posts: 274
  • ^ best of the best ^
Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo+Others/MJGK world) Chapter 25-1 added
« Reply #176 on: November 06, 2012, 01:38:51 PM »
Chapter 25




*About a week after last chapter

Currently, I was on a café near my prep school with my classmates, from prep-school off course, and I was bored as hell. I rather go straight home after class or go to Majijo, but my classmates managed to persuade me to come. I wanted to snap at them, but then again, I made a promise to try to be nicer to people, so I did. Well, at least I’ll try. I looked around me, my classmates were chatted animatedly with each other about… well, I don’t know, and I don’t care. One thing I noticed, this café was kinda nice though. I should bring Tomo here sometimes later for a date or something.

And now, one of the girls started to talked about her relationship with her boyfriend. Sigh… Ah, speaking of relationship, I wonder about the progress between Geki and Black.


*Flashback

I was sitting on the single couch in my living room with Geki sat across me after Tomo left, said she don’t want to intrude on our conversation. I was just staring at her, waiting for her to open up. Geki was fidgeting under my scrutinizing stare, which was kinda out-of-character for her to be nervous like this.

“U-um…” Geki mumbled with her eyes casted low.

“Yes?”

“When did you realize about…. Um… Ookabuki?” she slowly asked, eyes still casted on the floor.

“Is this related to Black?” I asked her back, and when her silence was the only answer I got, I sighed.

“… When did you start to see her more than just a friend?” she asked me again after a while.

I was quite surprised when I heard her question, so that’s why I was silent for a while, rearranging the words to answer her in my head. “To tell you the truth, I’ve never seen her as a friend.” I chuckled at the aghast looked on her face. “Well, she was my friend. But that was years ago. And when I meet her again in Majijo… it was all… different. And when we’re started to talked again… well… it’s not in a friendly manner at all. We both know that we want more than that.”

“I see…” she mumbled.

I chuckled again, made her looked at me inquiringly. “I’ve to thank YOU actually.” I said, answering her unasked question. “For sent her to the hospital months ago.”

“Huh?”

“Don’t get me wrong. I don’t like it when she was hurt badly like that. But, if it’s not because of that… you wouldn’t sit here today, asking me about relationship stuffs.”

“Oh… er….” Geki scratched the back of her head sheepishly. “Glad I could… help?”

I smiled at her response. “Anyway, about you and Black… I do notice she’s still thinks of you as just friend.” Geki frowned at my words. “But… you want more.” She nodded slowly. “Since when?”

“Remember when she told us about her pregnancy?” My eyes bulged at her words, ‘that was almost a year ago.’ Her hands curled up in. “At that time, I was so mad. So mad. I thought it was because of the same reason with you all. About him, ditching her and all. But then, I realized something weird, along with the madness, there was also pain and unexplainable need to just… take her away... and… keep her to myself.”

I sighed at her last words, the words ‘not-yet-satisfied sexual desires’ came into my head. My eyes widen at that. ‘Wait… what? Geeezz…, I’m hanging around Yuko-san too much.’ I face-palmed myself inside my mind.

“And then, the beating happened and I was put in the reform school for a few months and when I came back. There’s the situation with Maeda. But, after that….” She stopped for a bit, and then she tilted her head to the side. “I just want to be with her.”

“And… that’s the true reason why you spent most of the nights in her apartment lately, right?” I asked her.

“Yeah…” and then she giggled softly, “not just that. The orphanage is really suck, you know.”

“Suuuuureee…. And in her place, you’ve got her near you. Of course the orphanage suck compare to that.” I said while I grinned mischievously. “But, seriously though, all I can suggest you is to for you to try to distance yourself from her for a few days. Maybe during that she’ll re-think about… the whole things.”

“Mmm…”

“BUT. Perhaps it’ll be better for you to talk to Yuko-san or if you can’t stand the teasing you’ll get, talk to Torigoya. Their situation is a lot more similar to yours than mine. Since, they were close friend before… the whole ‘Yuu-chan and Nyan-Nyan’ thing.” I raised both of my hand and made a gesture with my fingers as I said the last words, made her smiled slightly. “As for me… well, it was like… we’re jumped straight to the flirting and secretive not-so-innocent-nor-friendly touches.”

*End of flashback.


There’s nothing change between them by the time I saw them again, which was four days ago, when Yuko-san asked us to come to Majijo. I wonder if it was truly because nothing’s change or because I was distracted by Captain Takahashi`s report. She said the drugs I had was similar with the one that killed that Erena. There are some differences, but since it was from almost three years ago, it was understandable.


*Flashback, Rappappa`s Room.

“So… may I ask how you got those drugs, Oshima-san?” Captain Takahashi asked after she read the result from the lab from her position in the middle of the room.

Yuko-san was just looking at her, trying to find out whether she can be trusted or not, I guess. She was sitting on her rightful chair, with the Shitennou, graduated and current, flanking her side, with Maeda and Sado-san standing behind her. Team Hormone and Dance was standing near the door. That was our recent ‘serious formation for confronting people’. After a while, Yuko-san said, “That’s a secret. For now.”

“Oshima-san… This is a grave matter. Someone might be in a dying condition because of these drugs now.” Captain Takahashi said in irritancies.

“I know.” Yuko-san said coolly. “That’s why I won’t just tell anything to anyone. I have to protect them.” She motioned us with a wave of her hand. “I have to protect Majijo.”

Captain Takahashi smiled slightly. “I know. I was a Rappappa too.”

“Then you should’ve known that you need to prove yourself.” Yuko-san said. We’re just looking at them in silence. Trusting Yuko-san to deal with that police. “I can’t just let you in to our group, just because you’re a former Rappappa`s Sachou. And, not to mention, a police officer. I have to know first. What do you want from us? What can you give to us if, IF, we’re willing to cooperate? We’re already having a situation inside our school and also with our neighboring school. I don’t want to add more… unneeded problems to Rappappa.”

Captain Takahashi sighed and she pulled out her glasses. Maeda let out a soft gasp, and when I looked at her, she had her hand covered her mouth and her eyes widen.

“You see… Hh… The reason why I investigate this case, at first because it was related with a few numbers of schools and the yankee inside the schools. And a numbers of innocent teenagers became the victims. And I want to stop that. But, then, they started to targeting high-school students, be it to be their agent and stuffs, or as in Erena case, to be their guinea pigs.” She put her glasses in her pocket “More than one year ago, they were targeting one girl, a very strong high school girl from Yagi Gakuen, to be their member, which, when we knew it, led to my undercover assignment. My number one goal on that mission was… to protect her from their influence and to keep her from harm.”

“What?” I heard Maeda said. She looked like she was just seeing a ghost.

“Yagi?” Yuko-san mumbled and she turned to looked at Maeda.

“The mission was completed, with the girl gone from the yankee’s world and she transferred to another school, out of their way. And the higher-ups think I finished it perfectly. But in my opinion it’s not.” Captain Takahashi sighed and looked straight to Maeda. “It’s not good because I know, I’ve hurt someone because of that, someone who’s cheerful and has a very bright smile. And because of my mistake… she….” Her words died out and she shook her head as if to dispel some unwanted thought.

“And add the fact that Erena… is my sister.” Captain Takahashi said slowly. “So, yes, Oshima-san, this is personal. I want to capture the one who’s responsible with Erena’s death, if I can't do that, I'm a failure, as a daughter and as a sister. And I want to make amend to my earlier mistake. And for that, I need all the help I could get. Can you and your girls assist me?” Captain Takahashi bowed at Yuko-san.

All of a sudden Maeda came closer to her, Captain Takahashi stood up again. “Minami?” Maeda whispered softly at Captain Takahashi who’s smiled softly albeit apologetically at her.

“I’m sorry, Atsuko. For everything.”

“You… You… What you’ve said to me… It was all a lie?”Maeda asked her. “You even were faking your own death?” A series of gasped came after her question.

“I’m sorry.”

A loud slap from Maeda answered her. And the Maeda ran out of the room, left us in an awkward situation. Youran left to look for her after a while.

“So… you’re that Minami.” Yuko-san said.

“Yes. I am. Or rather, I was.” Captain Takahashi said, her cheek was still red from the slap.

“But, Erena said that Minami’s dead.” Kokabuki said. “If she is your sister… How come she didn’t know that you’re only faking you death?”

Captain Takahashi smiled grimly. “Because, she didn’t even know I’m a police. The only one who knows about my job aside from my colleagues is my Mom. My job… is dangerous. For me and for the peoples around me. That’s why I never told her anything. All she knows was I’m a part-timer worker, and when I was on undercover for months was, that I was going back to school to get a better grade. Because, my score, like the rest of Majijo`s students, is really bad. It was a wonder I could get into the Police Academy.”

“So… all this years, you never told her that you were going to be a police, or that you’re a police?” Sado-san asked her. “Then how come we can trust you?”

“Because I knew all along which division I wanna go to. And how dangerous it is.” Captain Takahashi said. “But, in the end, no matter what…. Erena had become the victim. So, please, help me.”

“Yuko-san?” Sado-san asked Yuko-san who has been silent for a while now. She combed her hair back with her hand and looked at Captain Takahashi sharply.

“What can you give for us?” Captain Takahashi frowned at her, and she added. “What can you give to us? Can you provide us with something if we’re willing to cooperate?”

“One thing I need to know first, Oshima-san. Since some of the other school has been infiltrate…” Captain Takahashi said as she put her glasses back. “You and the rest of Rappappa are not involved in this matter, right?”

“… No. At least, not in that way.” Yuko-san said shortly.

“That’s all I need to know.” Captain Takahashi smiled slightly. “I can talk to the higher ups, perhaps make some of you as our undercover agents or at least as our informants. So at least, when you have to break some rules during investigation, you won’t get any trouble from the local police.”

We all turned our head to Yuko-san. The offer seemed pretty nice though, it was practically saying we can do our usual method without having to worry about the consequences later. But, to work with the Police… Bleh. Anyway, the decision was in Yuko-san’s hands. We weren’t joking when we said we’ll follow her anywhere, even to the deepest hell. After a few minutes of thinking, Yuko-san raised her head and looked at each one of us.

“Alright then. If we can get the free-pass, we might help you. But, if you betray us, you know what we’re capable of.” Yuko-san said coolly.
 
“No worries about that. I try my best to keep you out of the law during our investigation. But that’s only during our investigation.” Captain Takahashi said. “And, if you kill someone or destroying public properties badly, I can’t help you on that.”

Yuko-san smirked sarcastically, “Yeah, right, as if we’re some kind of crazy maniac serial killer.”

“That’s not what I meant.” Captain Takahashi smiled slightly at Yuko-san`s retort.

“Yeah… I know. I was only pulling your leg.” Yuko-san grinned mischievously and in an instant, the grin was gone and her indifferent, serious expression came back. “But, anyway, about you and Maeda, we won’t help you with it. You have to deal with it yourself. It was too… er… personal. And I can’t go there.”

“I know.”

*End of flashback.


And now, we still have to wait for the Captain… again…. She’ll tell us as soon as she got the result from her superior. And Tomo had told me yesterday that the situation in Rappappa`s room had become more tenser whenever Maeda was around. If before she was always has this expressionless face, now she was always scowling and had this scary aura surrounding her every time. Heh, that Maeda, and Captain Takahashi said she was a cheerful girl with a bright smile? I had never even seen her smile, more so to think of her as cheerful? Was she changed after the faked death of that Captain? Ah, well, I don’t know, and I don’t want to know.

And as of now, strangely the reformation boom inside Majijo has slowly dies out. I hope this was not because that Nezumi had planned something out. Because of it, Yuko-san had told me to sent Dance for a look-out. We don’t want un-necessary fight now that most of her Shitennou has already graduated and the new one weren’t as good as we are, yet, even though they have been getting better lately. In a few months or so, they’ll be as good as us. But, not now. And with Yuko-san`s condition we don’t wanna risk it. The Team Hormone was showing some progress, too. At least they can fight better than most of Majijo`s students now.

“What about you, Itano-san?” I heard someone said my name, cut me out of my stupor. I raised my head and looked at the caller, a girl, whose name I don’t know.

“What about me?” I asked.

“Where did you often go with your boyfriend for a date?” She asked again. Ah, yes, they’re talking about favorite place for a date.

“I don’t have one.” I said off-handedly. Some of them gasped and some even said that I was lying. Yeah, right. Like I give a damn of their opinion about me. And besides, I’m not lying. I don’t have a boyfriend. I have a girlfriend instead. And that reminded me, I haven’t taken her out for a proper date again. ‘Hm, perhaps I should kidnap her once in a while. Go somewhere, just the two of us.’ I grinned as the thought ran into my head.

“Why don’t you join us for a mixer next weekend?” One of the guys who sat next to me said. “We, the single peoples, will go to Disney Sea. Perhaps some of us can get closer after wards.”

‘Is he flirting with me?’ I raised my eyebrow at him. “I don’t have a boyfriend, yes. But, that doesn’t mean I’m not taken.” ‘And if you keep pestering me I’ll punch you out.’ I added in my mind.

He stared at me with mouth agape. Too shocked, I guess. My other classmates were kept on chatting and rambling like before, they didn’t even realize that I wasn’t joining them. ‘God… why the hell did I coming with them… Sigh…. I wanna go… I have to go before I kill someone.’

And my phone rang. ‘Yes! Thank you, God.’ I quickly snatched it and answering without looking at the caller`s ID.

“Yeah?” I said to the person on the line.

“Shibuya? You’re not in class now, right?”

‘Eh? Yuko-san? Thank you!!’ I was jumping in glee inside my mind, but of course my face didn’t show any emotion. “Nah… it was already finished. Why?” I said to Yuko-san, by now I had gained several listeners.

“Good. Come to the Club`s Room now. Captain Takahashi just called me. She’ll come in half an hour.”

“Sure… I’m on my way.” I said shortly and after she hung up I put my phone back inside my bag. “I have to go.” I said as I stood up.

“Where do you wanna go?” some girl asked. “We’ll go to karaoke after this.”

‘Heh… you guys are sooo fake…’ I grinned smugly and said, “duty calls”, and I quickly went out. Well, I’m not lying, it IS my duty.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------



@haruko: glad you like it  XD,
               well, here's some takadeka and maeda.  XD

@songbac: me too  :banghead:
                ah... I wanna take some days off....

@kahem: youran`s partner... is still undecided yet...  :nervous
              yeah, poor Geki... Black still sees her as a friend (for now)

@fael_c00l: about youran... we'll see what will happen later  :nervous
                 hehehe... glad you like it.

@anzai48: the 'Shibuya beating up people' was inspired from her scene in the Majijo hallway where she punched people who's on her way. XD
                sappy ending only for wmatsui?? :lol:
                Wa... I'm very happy to read your comments and suggestions on the latest chapter. I'll think about it. (Especially the honeymoon part  :lol:)
                as for Kanon... I was totally forgot that she was the one who stabbed Geki  :nervous , so let's just say that she playing as herself
                About Yuko and Torigoya scene, i was intended to put out that there's more to them than just skinship, and that happen.    XD
                as for Youran/Kokabuki, because youran`s partner is still undiceded (yet), and I remember the same danso episode, so I paired them up for the sidestory
                maybe it'll change later.
                Your fic is not only long, it's hella long. Must be the longest fic ever.  XD
                Hehehe... Thank you, but I've never seen a TomoTomo continuous fic, so...  :nervous
                Yeah... it's kinda too easy to guess who my oshimen are, huh?  :lol:

Thanks for reading, commenting, and the 'thank you's, guys. As always sorry for the bad grammar and miss-spelling. Till next update.  :)
             

Offline fael_c00l

  • 熊沢世莉奈 | Andela
  • Member+
  • Posts: 101
  • She's so beautiful when she's not mine anymore
Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo+others/MJGK world) Chapter 25-1 added
« Reply #177 on: November 06, 2012, 04:47:50 PM »
Captain Takahashi is minami,, and team hormone, they better than before now,, dafuq with maeda's aura?? :v it's scary!! Thanks 4 the update stv_wong-san,, waiting for next update,, ahh don't forget about Youran and the others too,, :D
TomoTomo is my OTP



Twitter : @Raphael_Raditya
Skype : @fael_c00l

Offline sakura_drop_

  • サクゲキと読んでください | Sakugeki to yonde kudasai~ | Please call me "Sakugeki"
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2329
  • YukoRena(Geki) & AtsuYuu shipping all the way! ♥♥♥
Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo+others/MJGK world) Chapter 25-1 added
« Reply #178 on: November 06, 2012, 07:37:01 PM »
I reread EVERYTHING I MISSED in ONE GO, and oh god how I loved it!!!

Especially my cool Yuko-sama!!!  :inlove: :inlove:

I'll be waiting for your next update!! And sorry for such a short comment!  :bow:
« Last Edit: November 07, 2012, 02:03:08 AM by sakura_drop_ »
"人間みんな変態だから" - 古川愛李, SKE48 新高柳チームKII 「シアターの女神」千秋楽公演, 2014.04.18 <"Because all people are perverts." - Furukawa Airi, SKE48 New Takayanagi Team KII [Theater no Megami] Last Stage, 2014.04.18>

My Blog: J-Pop and K-Pop Abode   The list of my fics in JPH!P: My fics   Let's have fun here: Acchan48   My home and family: United Nations Society of Adorkable Writers



My KamiOshis: Yuuko-sama, Rena-sama  Oshimen: Yuihime Other favorites: Mirukii, Juri-tan, Ripopo

Offline kahem

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2675
Re: my fanfics (MASK - Tomotomo+others/MJGK world) Chapter 25-1 added
« Reply #179 on: November 07, 2012, 01:44:50 AM »
OMG!!!!! Minami is alive!!!!

JPHiP Radio (10/200 @ 96 kbs)     Now playing: Meja - How Crazy Are You?