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« Reply #300 on: February 28, 2013, 03:22:38 AM »
Here is Chapter 27 - part 2 of MASK. Um... sorry for the wait... :nervous



*In the morning, hospital.

The first thing I heard was the sound of the door being opened and closed and a ruffling-like sound. Afterwards, I felt my cheek was being poked with a round-like object. As I peeled my eyes opened, I saw Sado-san smirking at me, with a stethoscope in hand.

“Awww…. You two look so cute together.” She said with a mocking grin. “I don’t want to interrupt your quality time with her, BUT you need to go. NOW.”

I rubbed my eyes and based on the weight and warmth on the left side of my body, I knew that certain someone has been using me as her-personal-human-body-pillow and snuggling me in her sleep, like she used to do whenever we’re sleeping together. ‘And I thought she needs to sleep on her back because of the stitches in her abs. No wonder Sado-san smirking like that.’

“It’s not even seven yet.” I mumbled out, still in a sleepy state.

“I said you need to go home at seven, not waking up at seven.”

“… Fine….” I slowly move out of my girlfriend`s embrace, careful to not waking her up, and sat on the bed while yawning. I took a glance at Sado-san and realized something. “Did you just poke me with that stethoscope?”

“Why? You rather choose me using this?” She asked back while pointing at the pen in her front pocket.

I groaned in exasperation at her sadist nature even in the morning like this. “You’re not Geki.”

“Who’s it?” I heard Kokabuki`s voice, still thick with sleepiness.

Sado-san answered shortly, “Me.”

“She’s waking me up.” I answered her, “go back to sleep.” And Kokabuki answered with a low mumble and then, all quiet.

Sado-san looked at Tomo pointedly who’s still in a deep-slumber. “It’s amazing how she can still sleep when even Kokabuki was awakened by our voices.”

“She’s particularly hard to wake up.” I said while combed my hair with the hairbrush from the bag.

“Hm… yeah, I see it now.” Sado-san said as she sat down on the couch on the corner of the room. “So… I’ve heard about you and Torigoya…”

I rolled my eyes in exasperation and grumbled, “We’re friends. Nothing more and nothing else.”

“Oh, I know,” Sado-san said with a smirk, “I’ve always known that even though she didn’t seems to like it, she has fallen for Yuko-san since first year, and that she considered you as comrade because of the same family situation and all, But, does she,” Sado-san pointed at my girl who’s still sleeping deeply, “knows that as well?”

“Of course,” I said with a frown on my face. After a few more minutes, I finished to make myself somewhat more presentable. I yawned again and said, “Okay, let’s go.”

“You don’t want to wake her first?”

“Mm… no. I don’t want to disturb her sleep. I’ll email her later.” I answered while took my phone and wallet and put it in my jeans pockets.

And when I kissed my girl`s temple before we went out, I heard Sado-san mockingly said an “aaaawwwww….. so sweet…,” made me instantly scowled in response.

“So, by what you’ll go home with?” Sado-san asked me as we walked in the hallway.

“I take my mom`s car with me. I’m planning to return it before class, but… now that I think about it again. Perhaps I should return it after class.” I said with a grin.

“Eh? That Hummer car?” Sado-san asked, and after I nodded, she snorted in amusement, “I want to see your classmates’ reaction when they see you in that kick-ass car.” She chuckled a little and added, “Why don’t you wear your spare Rappappa`s jacket too? They already know you’re Queen Shibuya the ex-Rappappa`s Shitennou after Geki crashed your class after all. There’s no need for you to hide your true self anymore.”

“Nice idea.” I said with a chuckle too, already imagining what would happen later. “I’m getting tired of putting a ‘normal-good-girl’ mask anyway.”

“Tell me what happen later. I need a good laugh.”

“Sure.”

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*Parking lot near Shibuya`s prep-school

As I parked my car, I knew lots of people were staring at me, at the car actually, because of the dark tint on the car`s window they surely wouldn’t be able to see me behind the steering wheel. I grab my bag on the passenger seat, checked myself out on the mirror, flattening the crease on my Rappappa`s jacket and walked out of the car. After I locked the car, I looked around me and saw a few of my classmates were standing nearby, they were staring at me and whispered scandalously to each other. But when they noticed me staring at them, they immediately stop and were looking at anywhere and everywhere but my direction with an ashen look on their faces. I smirked smugly and walk towards the building. As I walked towards my class with my best smug grin on my face, a Queen`s grin, other people who were cross way with me, were literally jumped away after they took a look at my jacket.

‘Heh… it’s been a while since I get this reaction from people. Majijo`s students reaction whenever I visit Majijo is an exception. If they don’t recognize me without the jacket, I’ll surely kick their asses off to make them remember who I am.’

When I opened the door to my class, all eyes inside the class went to me and they all stopped their activities before. It was kind of amusing, really, like how one of them stopped from sitting down on the chair, with half sitting half standing pose. ‘Heh… I truly like this reaction.’ I walked towards my chair, sat down and dropping my bag to the floor. My eyes gazed around the room and whenever someone`s gaze met mine, they would looked away instantly. ‘Great, now I’ll have my peace. I had enough with them trying to befriend me. Rappappa is already enough for me. I don’t need others besides them. I don’t need fake friendship.’

I was just about to dozed off a little before class starts, but then someone with hideous make-up and an extremely oobusu fashion came inside my class and walked straight to me.

“So… It’s true what people said. One of Rappappa`s ex-Queens is here.” She said while looking down at me.

I leaned back to my chair to looked at her smugly with other peoples were staring at us, “Yeah, so?” I looked at her clothes more closely and scowled in disgust, “Burn that shirt… and those shoes, you’re a fashion disaster in it.”

She ignored my comment and looked down on my right hand and smirked. “So… I guess right now I can win against Rappappa. Even though we’re already graduate now.”

“Who’re you?” I asked in irritancies. ‘How dare she interrupt my sleeping time!’

“You’ll remember me after I defeated you.” She said as she was rushing to hit me.

I instantly slide down to the floor below my desk, and kicked her leg, made her stumbled. “You’re not important enough for me to remember.” I said as I stood up and leaned my body to my desk. “And if you think just because my hand in a cast, I can’t fight. You are sooooo… wrong….”

“D-Damn it!!” She shouted as she came rushing towards me again with her right hand ready to throw a punch at me, which I block with my left arm and I twisted my arm to caught her hand, pulled her towards me while I sent my knee to her body, made her bowed down, clutching at her stomach in pain. I glanced around me and saw fear spreading in the room, I snickered in amusement at the aghast look on my classmates` faces, more so from when they saw me with my jacket. I glanced down to that stupid b**ch that dare to ruin my day and deciding to deliver the final blow. When she stood up again, I threw a left hook, hit her straight on her cheek, and made her fall on the sets of chairs and desks behind her.

“Just go. I’m not in the mood to breaking your bones into pieces.” I said as I sat back down on my chair, breaking the silence that has engulfed the room. “And next time, do not forget, there’s no way you can win against Rappappa`s Queen alone.” I said with my deathliest glare directed at her while she slowly tried to stand up, and I added, “Well, you can’t win too even if you bring your friends with you.” And she walked out of the class, or more likely limped out. I took a glance at the clock on the wall and grinned to myself. ‘Great, still thirty minutes before class, time for some nap.’

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*Shibuya`s prep school, rooftop.

So, here I was, sitting on the roof with my back on the wall, with the building’s shadowing me from the hot summer sun. Since I wasn’t in the mood to go to the cafeteria and mingle with other students, then here I was…. Ah, who am I kidding? When did I ever have the mood to mingle and being a social person? I rather choose to be alone or with Rappappa. Too bad there’s still some people here. Ah, well, at least they won’t bother me and I could have my much needed sleep. Why? Because, I couldn't sleep last night. I was all antsy and anxious and… I have to admit… horny. Why again? First of all, due to our blasted periods and conflicting schedules, I haven’t touched her again for more than two weeks, so my usually sated sex-drive was on a rampage. AGAIN!! And to add my miseries even further, because she ran out of clothes, she was wearing that blasted-thin-flimsy-almost-see-through hospital gown as her pajamas. It was almost like she was wearing close to nothing! Damn it!! Me and my bad luck.

Which was why I need to sleep now, or I’ll be tempted to sleep during the class. And just when I was about to welcoming the dream land, someone opened the door to the roof with a loud “bang!” and when I was about to opened my eyes and yell at the disturbance, another body has latched to me. By the scent of that person and the long-straight-reddish-hair that fallen in front of my eyes, I knew who it was instantly.

Not in the mood to snap at the person, I just muttered, “why are you here?” I’m too sleepy to get angry.

The person released me and sat beside me. “Just want to tell you that the interview went well. I’ll have my first photo-shoots on Monday.”

“Oh… good then.” I mumbled while closing my eyes again. “But, why the hell are you here?”

“I’m bored out of my mind.” She whined, “Yuu-chan and Geki are still in school, Black and Sado are working….”

“And I have classes too, you know.” I cut her from her rambling with a sigh and opening my eyes, some people on the roof were loking at us in curiosity. “Geezzz…. Only a few days ago, it was Geki, and now you… Would Black crashing my prep-classes too?”

“Hey… hey… wanna have dinner together later tonight? I’ll call Geki, Black and Sado. My treat….” She piped in with a small smile on her face, ignoring my complain.

It was tempting, it’s been a while since we had dinner together, but… “I’ll pass. I have to get back to the hospital after class.”

“You’ll sleep there again tonight?” she asked innocently with a tilt of the head to the side. My eyes widen when I heard her question and I could only responded with blinking at her repeatedly. She giggled at my response and added, “Sado sent an email to Yuu-chan this morning. She said you two looked so cute.” I growled at her and stood up, headed toward the stairs, left her behind.

“Shibuya! Wait up!!” I heard her voice trailing from behind me while I was walking down the stairs.

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*Hospital, hallway.

So, now I was headed towards the ward with Torigoya was still tailing me from behind. Sigh… she’s been following me around since lunch break, simply because she was bored and she couldn’t bother the others. She even followed me to my classes. The teachers didn’t even notice she was there all along. But my classmates were a different story. They were all whispering to each other and ogling at Torigoya, especially the males. Man… I’ve had enough with their stupidity and simple-mindedness. Thankfully though, all of their lunatic (and idiotic) fantasies were broken by the time they heard Torigoya called me Shibuya and went to sat on an empty chair next to mine. And to make them know who she is, I purposely talked to Torigoya some small things about Majijo and Rappappa during the breaks. They would surely know who she is when they heard all that.

And when I opened the ward’s door, all eyes in the room were looking at us in shock, made it all four pairs of them. I sighed and walked inside (with Torigoya) as I answered the un-asked question. “She’s simply bored the hell out of her mind, and since the others are busy…, she came to me and following me around.”  I know that they must’ve been having some ‘strange’ thoughts on their mind when they saw us. Especially after heard what Torigoya had said about us yesterday. Damn her.

“You’re so cold….” Torigoya whined at me while poking at my shoulder.

I sighed again and muttered “you’re lucky the teachers didn’t recognize you and kick you out of my classes.”

“And I thought you like me…”

She whined while tugging at my jacket. And when I was about to retort back at her, I felt a dark and (very) devilish aura from behind me. When I looked at the direction of the aura, I saw my girlfriend was looking at me with both eyebrows raised and giving me the ‘and-you-said-there’s-nothing,-huh?’. The dark aura even made Shaku who was sitting on the side of her bed to jump and went to hide behind Youran and Kokabuki.

At this, I grabbed Torigoya`s collar and hissed to her, “Are you trying to kill me here?!”

“What do you mean?” she asked in a fake-innocent expression. Damn it… she really was trying to kill me.

“You were-“

“Cough… cough….” I heard my girlfriend was faking some coughs and when I looked at her, she was scowling dangerously at me. I face-palmed myself, literally, and tried to give some explanation. But when I opened my mouth, her deathly-glare has shut me up.

“Um… Shaku, Youran, why don’t you all accompany me to the canteen downstairs. I’m hungry.” Torigoya said without the smallest hint of guilt, breaking the tense and awkward silence after a few seconds.

“Sure.” Shaku and Youran said in the same time, and they (with Torigoya) immediately left.

“Wait… you guys… how could you leave me with ‘them’?!” Kokabuki whined, “I can’t leave my bed yet….” When we gave her an even stare, she sighed and took her phone and earphones from her side-table and plugged the earphones on. She closed the curtains surrounding her bed afterwards.

“I-“

“Shut it.”

She didn’t even give me the chance to explain myself. I held back a sigh and just slumped my shoulder and looked down on the floor in defeat. ‘Damn that Torigoya… just you wait for my revenge.’

I was waited and waited for her wrath but it never came. Instead, I’ve heard her giggled. Surprised, I raised my head and saw her laughing at me. I could only blink continuously in confusion.

“Come here.” She said after her laughter subdued. “you looked like a kicked puppy.”

I scowled at her, but still walked towards her and sat on her bed. A little bit relieved after knowing that she’s not as mad as I thought she was.

“You think I didn’t know that she was trying to pull a prank on you?” she said while grabbed my hand and softly, slowly caressing the back of my hand with her thumb. “You said Torigoya-san was just bored, right? I guess just like Yuko-san and Sado-san, her way of getting fun is to tease you and prank you, huh?” and she giggled again for a good measure.

My scowl deepened and I muttered, “she been hanging around Yuko-san and Sado-san too much lately.”

She pecked my cheek and said “awww… you’re so cute when flustered like this…” while laughing at me again. Damn it.

“Tch… I thought you were mad…”

“Well…” she trailed off and after grinning mischievously she said, “at least we’re alone now, right?”

I grinned back at her, and nodded my head towards Kokabuki who’s behind the curtain. “Not entirely.”

“She’s behind the curtain, and she’s listening to music in full volume…. I’d say we’re alone.” She said with a smirk.

I smirked back at her and slowly closing the gap between us. Within a few seconds, our lips connected to each other’s and I kissed her slowly, lazily, knowing the other wouldn’t even dare to bother us if they thought we’re in the middle of a couple’s quarrel. I heard her hummed when I slipped my tongue inside her mouth, so I sneaked my hand around her waist carefully to close the distance between us.

“What the hell are you two doing?”

Upon hearing the voice, we immediately stopped kissing and then shouted “Sado-san!” at the same time.

I tried to stop myself from blushing from being caught in the act by the second biggest troll in our group and instead, I growled at her, “have you ever heard of knocking?”

“Have you ever heard of lock-the-door?” She retort back at me with one hand on her hip. “And besides, what are you thinking? You’re in hospital!”

“We’re just kissing! There’s nothing wrong with that!”

“Yeah…. Riiiiiiiight…. As if I’m gonna believe that….” Sado-san said sarcastically. “By the way, I’m here for work.” Sado-san was quick to add when she saw me wanted to retort back at her. “So, Ookabuki, how are you now?”

Tomo sighed before answered, “My stitches are itchy, my back sore and it feels like there’s a dozen of ants in my nose.” She scowled a little and added, “And thanks to the hits on my face, I looked like a rotten apple now.”

“I have given you the ointment to treat your bruises this morning, have you use it?” Sado-san asked, looked all professional. “It’ll make the bruises disappear faster.”

“I have… but it’s kinda hard to rub my own back with my current condition.” Tomo sighed.

Sado-san gave me a pointed look and teasingly said, “Shibuya, make yourself useful. Help her.”

“Hey!”

“As for your stitches, there’s nothing I can do about it. Just don’t scratch it. I can give you some itching salve, but I’m afraid that might make longer time for the stitches to dry.” Sado-san said to my girlfriend, purposely ignoring me, made me scowled again. “And you have a broken nose, it’s usually like that. Just be careful to not sneeze or something, or you might ripped your stitches. I’ll try to talk to the Doctor, maybe he have some way to reduce your discomfort.”

“Okay.”

Sado-san wrote down some things on her clipboard and looked at the direction of Kokabuki`s bed and frowned. She walked to her direction and opened the curtain. Kokabuki was laying on her bed with her earphones on and when she saw Sado-san she pulled her earphones off her ears.

“Thank God you came.” She said, relieved.

Sado-san raised one of her eyebrow and turned to look at me and Tomo. “Do I need to ask what has happened before that made her like this?”

“No.” we answered at the same time again.

Sado-san was staring at us again and when she turned her attention to Kokabuki, I felt myself sighed in relief. Well, I hope she wouldn’t press the issue further. If anyone knows about last night incident…, dear God, that’s embarrassing. We have to make sure Kokabuki won’t tell anything to anyone about last night. Or else. I glanced at my girlfriend and saw her looking at me tenderly. I smiled at her and held her hand. I really couldn’t wait for her to release from the hospital. And then… and then we’ll be living together. As she had said before, we might be young still. But, we both know, we only need and only want each other.

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@BbSis: I'm safe (for now :nervous). Sorry, no MariMii in this update. But, I'll put some in the next chapter. I hope it won't disappointing you.
            Ah, I see... I'll look forward for her birthday party (in your fic) then  :P

@theblueknight: the protagonist in Persona is just like a pimp. How he gets all the girls and all. ChieYukiko is just so canon, there's a lots of hints of them.  XD
                        I like Rise, just... don't ship her for yuri pairing.

@ hikari_043083: LOL, I did that too. Fanfiction is really eating up my life  :nervous

@kahem: thank you, glad you like it :)

Thanks for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys. Till next update. Um... I'll try to balance between the Hogwarts Crossover and MASK  :nervous

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27-2
« Reply #301 on: February 28, 2013, 10:12:10 AM »
Yeah.... another chapter on MASK at last...

Sado is so sadist.. and naughty... spreading news about and teasing Shibuya....

Yeah... Torigiya is been influenced by Yuko and Sado.... so she likes to tease Shibuya to pass her time

Hahaha... Shibuya likes to spread fear to others.... but she is very strong... able to defeat someone with only one hand...cool

Ah... so Shibuya doesn't want to make other friends except the one from Rappappa.... that's good enough... yeah some friends can be fake as she said...

What's going to happen next....

Can't wait to see the next

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27-2
« Reply #302 on: February 28, 2013, 11:59:10 AM »
Yay a MASK update! I hope you did not get caught writing the update at work.

Sado such a troll, but we all love her just as that. She is not Sado if she is not a troll.

If Shibuya has a spare jacket, does that mean the others have too? I'm sure Black's son has his own jacket fashioned after his mother's as evidenced by the first episode of Maji 2.

Too bad Shibuya declined dinner. I wanted to see how dinner with Rappapa works. Maybe next time then hehe!

The girl in prep school must be a Yabakune graduate. Lucky for her Shibuya was not in the mood.

Thanks for this update. I'll be waiting for your next one (and the GekiBlack how-they-got-together special hehe).

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27-2
« Reply #303 on: February 28, 2013, 11:35:08 PM »
dude awsome  :rock: cant believe i got to read more of your story made me real happy  :twothumbs cant wait for some marimii  :wub: ... and yes thats true those guys are dam pimps ha ha ha  :pimp: dow hey everyone has their likes and dislikes when it comes to their fav persona characters which im ok with  :thumbsup dow you know my shipper i cant help it since i accidently read a fanfic of my now fav pair  ;) thats why they are ship under yuri not on purpose but hey it happen  :smhid anyways i also dig the whole chiexyukiko they were my first pairing after all  :heart: now back to your story awsome story its under my top 3 fav stories at the moment  :inlove:
Spanish original name es mary es mi amor por leo dan:
Mari(mariko)es mi amor, solo con ella
vivo la felicidad yo se que nunca a nadie
mas podria amar, por que la quiero de
verdad por eso mary por favor dame tu
mano continuemos siempre asi
despues de todo que mas te puedo
pedir si soy feliz...muy feliz.
Si un dia me faltas tu que
Dios me ayude a morir ya que
no volvera a hacer en esta vida feliz
sin ti mari...sin ti mari...si estoy
viviendo por ti... 
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English ver dow originally name mary is my love by leo dan :
My love is Mari, just with her
I live in happiness
I know I will never again
fall in love with nobody, because I
feel a true love Because of that,
Mari, give me your hand we'll
forever continue this way After all,
what can I ask you more if I am happy...
very happy If one day I will miss you,
God help me to die ,
without you Mari...
If i live my life for you...  -----------<@

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« Reply #304 on: March 01, 2013, 12:16:38 AM »
yeeey! Update! I'm so relieved that I live alone in week days, otherwise my parents would think I went crazy with all the squealing and jumping I made when I saw you updated MASK huahuahuahua

Good that you are okay now^^ Don't worry about MariMii, because I love read all TomoTomo moments! But I'll wait anxiously that time to come o/

Sado being the sadist she is was hilarious huehuehue and yes, Torigoya is spending too much time with Yuko and Sado xD I also think that girl who wanted to fight with Shibuya at school will bring trouble in the near future; but Shibuya was so awesome defeating her with only one arm *.* I wanted to check up that diner too >< I can't wait to see them living together *.*

Can't wait to see the nexts updates o/

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It started in a wedding (MariMii + usual couples) - ongoing
The fanfiction post thread (KojiYuu, WMatsui) - ongoing
The cry of a lonely star - ongoing
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27-2
« Reply #305 on: March 01, 2013, 03:24:44 AM »
Aye aye aye! Shibuya is such a badass!
Too bad their quality times are always interrupted

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27-2
« Reply #306 on: March 01, 2013, 03:35:20 AM »
Your fic is great. I like it :D . But it too long when you write the new chap. So, after this fic. will you write the new fic about WTomotomo?

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« Reply #307 on: March 01, 2013, 04:40:09 AM »
 :lol: :lol: poor Shibuya, she can not touch her girl friend for a long time  :smhid (more than 2 weeks  :on gay: :on gay: ).
and  wow Torigoya  :on cigar: :on cigar: it's my unexpected , she teases Shibuya  :whistle: :whistle: , yeah " she been hanging around Yuko-san and Sado-san too much lately.”  :lol: :lol:

i hope you'll update soon  :on woohoo: :on woohoo:

p/s: about your new fic, i've still not read your fic, because i often wait for many chapters  :P :P :P
Love kojiyuu - yuko - chiyuu - miichan - hinana - haruna - takamina - sama - maachan forever

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27-2
« Reply #308 on: March 01, 2013, 06:16:35 AM »
yoshaaaaa finally the next chapter is updated   :thumbsup

I will wait for your marimii too good luck  :thumbsup

please update soon :bow:
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                           ~AtsuMina~
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                                                      ~TomoTomo~
                                           ~MariMii~
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Love this Pairing
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« Reply #309 on: March 04, 2013, 08:01:00 PM »
thank you for the update :)
I feel bad for the WTomo cause they are always getting interrupted
Torigoya with the teasing... definitely the consequence of being with Yuko too long... but I liked it
I will patiently wait to the next update

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« Reply #310 on: March 05, 2013, 04:24:17 AM »
I love your stories :inlove: they're so awesome i can't wait to see what happens next in Mask
hoping for more drama :twothumbs
also thanks to you i got the inspiration to make photo edits of HP(AKB48)  :cow:
and i would be honored to show them to you

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27-2
« Reply #311 on: March 05, 2013, 12:35:26 PM »
weeeeeeeee!! New chapter!! (so happy!)
Torigolla is like a troll too! (like sado san and Yuko  :D )
I read too the crossover with HP, is good too! but I prefer MASK-MJGK word

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28-1
« Reply #312 on: March 10, 2013, 10:55:00 AM »
Chapter 28 part 1



* Two weeks later.

“So, nothing left, right?” I asked her while looking around the room, checking if we left something behind, with the new Rappappa helping us and Kokabuki. After two long weeks, finally the Doctor let them out. She looked much better now. The bruises in her face were gone, her broken nose has healed completely, so does the bruises on her back. She only needs to be careful with the stitches on her abs, but other than that…

“Yeah… I believe that’s all.” She said while checking the room too.

Youran and Shaku were helping us packing, especially Shaku, she was a big help, didn’t know she was so good at small detail, like how to fold and arranging the stuff inside the bag so that it was tidier and took less space, and she even helped us checking the room one more time. Thanks to her, the packing was easier and faster. While Youran… well… she did helped, but….

I glanced at Youran who’s fussing over Kokabuki, saying that Kokabuki wasn’t well enough, so she shouldn’t carry heavy stuff on her own. Hm… looks like we’ve got another couple in the making. Tomo and Shaku didn’t even saying anything and by the way they act like nothing unusual happened, it’s seemed like this has going on for quite a while. Well… I think it’s time to tease my favorite friend/enemy, or I should say, my would-be-sister-in-law… in a way. I grinned and waiting for the right moment while watching at them carefully. But, before I get the right moment, my ear was being pulled by Tomo.

“I know what you’re thinking.” She whispered to me, threateningly, “but just drop it for now. Don’t say anything!”

I frowned at her and whispered back at her, “Why? It’s going to be fun…” I rolled my eyes and added, “Your sister needs to get laid so that she won’t be as up-tight anymore… In… both meaning” I grinned as I said the last words, noticing the double-meaning after I said it.

She slapped my shoulder and even though she was smiling, she said in exasperation, “don’t be so crude like that.”

“But you think so too, right?” I grinned at her and wiggled my eyebrows playfully. “I need to get laid too…” I added while whispering huskily on her ear, made her shivered slightly and I bit her ears for a good measure.

She slapped my shoulder again and hissed, “not here,” and she slapped my shoulder again, “at least wait until we get to your apartment.”

“It’s now your apartment too.”

She blushed slightly and whispered, “I know… still couldn’t believe it though….”

“I’m sorry that it has to happen in this way… but…”

She shut me up by put her finger on my lip and shook her head. “It bound happen sooner or later. This only made it sooner. I’m not complaining though.” But then she was glaring at me. “BUT! About Kokabuki and Youran don’t say anything. And don’t say anything to your Shitennou-friends too. Me and Shaku already told Yuko-san, Maeda and Geki to let them be. Kokabuki doesn’t even realize they have something yet.”

“Fine… fine…” I muttered in exasperation.

“I mean it! Don’t!” She whispered threateningly at me. “If you tease them, Kokabuki might bring her defense shell again, and the possibilities of them being together will all disappear before it even exists.” She stomped at the floor and whispered at me again, “and like you said… she needs to get laid. But, I’ll be happier if she found someone who’ll be with her till the end, not just getting a quick-screw for a night.” She slapped my shoulder with a huff, “she’s my sister for God’s sake!” She was about to slap my shoulder again but I caught her hand and whispered back at her.

“Okay. Okay. I get it. There’s no need to get violence. Geez…” I sneaked my hand around her waist and hugged her from the back, dropping my chin on her shoulder as I watched the younger Shitennou, waiting for them to finished… whatever it was. Youran and Kokabuki were still bantering about some irrelevant stuffs and Shaku was still checking the room, under the table, under the bed, inside the drawer and cabinet.

Not long after, the door was opened by Sado-san, a very angry and fuming Sado-san. She glanced at us, and I seriously thought she will scold me again for… letting my lust ran out of control in a public place. Which was not true. At all. I just hugged her, there’s nothing wrong in hugging, right? But, then she shifted her attention away from us and looked at Shaku menacingly and walked closer to her while Shaku gulped noticeably. Sado-san pulled Shaku by the ear and dragged her out. Shaku was saying, “itai… don’t pull my ear… ouch… itaiii!” during her way out, while we’re just looking at them in confusion, and after Sado-san closed the door, we’re still staring at the door for a few seconds more.

“Well…. Sado-san is… on her sadist mode today…” I said, breaking the silence.

“You tell me….” Youran retorted, “I wonder what Shaku has done?”

I shrugged and slumped my head back on Tomo`s shoulder, closing my eyes in bliss of being together with her, after not seeing her for a few days because of the damn home works and mock exams. “Well, now we have to wait for Shaku to come back.” I heard her said, and then I heard, more like, I felt her sighed. “Hope they won’t be too long. I want to get back home.”

“Aneki… you mean to Shibuya-san`s apartment, right?”

“O-oh… e-em… right.”

I heard Youran snickered loudly and she said with amusement apparent in her voice, “Why being so shy, Ookabuki? We all know that you two are definitely on ‘that’ kind of relationship already.”

I opened my eyes and gave Youran a pointed look while saying, “Yeah… yeah… at least we’re not on abstinence because of being single and waiting for that someone to finally realize something.” I said off-handedly, earned myself a jab on the stomach discreetly from my girlfriend who’s warned me with her glare.

Youran was gaping at us and looking at us while Kokabuki was looked confused by my words. “Ookabuki!! What did you told her?!” Youran yelled at my girl while pointing at me.

“I didn’t tell her anything!” She answered, “it’s not my fault if she could read it in your behavior.” And I nodded in agreement.

“Wait… wait... what are you all talking about?” Kokabuki intercepted, even more confused with the sudden turn in the conversation.

“Nothing.” Youran and Tomo said at the same time. I just sighed and silently praying for Shaku to come back soon. I wanna go home. AND I NEED TO GET LAID! DAMMIT!! It’s been a month already. The sooner we get back home, the better.

After a few minutes of half-teasing-half-bickering moment between Tomo and Youran, with me embracing my girl from behind and spacing out, and Kokabuki who’s getting even more confused with every minutes passed, Shaku finally came back. A very sad and dejected looking Shaku. When I saw her, I automatically released my girl and put some distance between us. Somehow thought it was necessary.

“Shaku, what’s wrong?”

“What’s happened?”

Shaku sighed and with a small quivering voice, she told us what has happened.

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*Emergency stairs, a few minutes before.

After they walked out of the room, Sado dragged Shaku to the emergency stairs, knowing that they’ll be alone there. As soon as the door closed, she menacingly asked, no, demanding an answer might be more fitting.

“Why did there’s 20,000 Yen on my bank account coming from yours?”

“I-I heard you’re having a financial problem right now… so…”

“I don’t need your pity!” Sado barked at the much younger girl, and after she saw the girl flinched and looking at the floor sadly, she felt a little guilty, but her pride stopping her from apologize to the girl.

“I’m not pitying you.” Shaku slowly said, “I’ve heard from Torigoya –san that you’ve worked double-shift lately to cover the medication bill for your grandma. It’s not much… but, I hope I can help somehow.”

“As I said, I don’t need your parents` money.” Sado said coldly, still irritated.

“It’s not theirs. I… I had a part-time work these past months. I’m not a spoiled-brat. I’ll prove it to you”

Sado felt her anger slipping away by the time she realized that the younger girl was working part-time for helping her. But…

“Why?”

Upon hearing the question, Shaku raised her gaze to meet the Sado`s. “As I said… I want to help to carry your problems…,” she was stopped for a while, thinking, hesitant, but then she added, “… Mariko…”

Sado’s eyes widen and she curtly said, “My name is Sado.”

“That’s your real name, right? Why can I call you that way?” Shaku stubbornly asked. “I’ve heard Torigoya-san called Yuko-san as Yuu-chan. And I’ve heard Gekikara called Black-san as Yuki when I overheard them talking on the phone. And I do know Ookabuki and Shibuya-san called each other Tomo, even though they tried to avoid saying each others` names in public. So why can’t we? Why can’t I?”

Sado pinched the bridge of her nose in irritation and while gritted her teeth, trying to keep her anger at bay, she said, “Because we’re not like them.”

“Then what can I do to change it?” Shaku asked with determination in her eyes. The determination, that Sado has never seen before in the usually playful girl’s eyes. That made her somewhat happy and angry at the same time. She had to admit that she enjoyed their playful bantering, and she had to admit that she liked the younger girl`s playfulness and she love to tease her. But, right now, seeing the playfulness was all gone, she chastised herself in her mind, because she had opened her defense, the defense that only Yuko could break. And now, this girl in front of her, has crumbled her wall little by little and still trying to hammer it down. There’s no way she would let her doing it further. She wouldn’t let anyone in anymore, not after all the things that has happened with her families, and not after she opened her heart to another and that person was already in love with someone else, though she didn’t know it at the time. And not to mention… the girl was too young for her right now. She could get arrested.

“You can’t do anything.” Sado said shortly before she walked out the emergency stairs. “You’re too young for me. I’ll transfer the money back to you later.” And she left a very sad Shaku alone in the Emergency Stairs.

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I face-palmed myself literally after I heard what happened and after that I could only responded with, “so… the Sadist has found the Masochist. God… what a pair.” Earned myself an elbow in my stomach again from Tomo because of my blunt remark. At least Shaku was smiling slightly because of it, while Youran and Kokabuki was gaping at her in surprise. Well, I’ve gotta say I was surprised too. I mean, I didn’t know that there was something between them. Um… for Shaku, at least. I don’t think Sado-san see her in ‘that’ way.

“How?” Youran gaped.

“Why her?” Tomo asked too.

Shaku glanced at me and asked back to Tomo, “I could ask you the same thing… Why Shibuya-san?”

“She was my childhood friend.”

“Then why do you fall for her?” Shaku asked again.

My girlfriend was thinking her answer for a while and with a frown she said, “I don’t know. I just… do….”

“Same here… I don’t know too.” Shaku sighed, “by the time I realized it, I was already drawn to her. Perhaps it has to do with her looking like someone I know.” She sighed again and continued to rambling about her misfortune and how she didn’t know what to do anymore. I shared a confused and exasperated look with my girlfriend and saw the same look on Youran and Kokabuki. I want to stop the poor girl from her rambling, but something she had said caught my attention.

“Could you repeat what you’ve said?” I told Shaku.

“Why she is so cold?”

“No… before that.”

“She said I’m too young for her, while we’re only one year apart?”

“Yes, that.” I said with a nod. “Well, how old do you think she is?”

“Em… same as you? Eighteen or nineteen?”

“You’re wrong.” I answered with a sigh. Knowing, the reason why Sado-san rejected her was not because she didn’t like her. Well, I guessed it wasn’t because of that…. Er… perhaps… “The only teenagers are Geki, Black and I. the others was already in their twenties.” After I saw the look of surprises in their faces, I added, “I’ve turned nineteen a few months ago… and so does Geki and Black…”

A gasp interrupted me and as I looked at my girl, she has this look of horror and guilt. “Oh, God… your birthday… last July… I forgot… I’m so sorry.” She pleaded at me while clutching at my hand.

I sighed and patted her head, “It’s okay. We were on bad term at the time, and we’re both busy… I forgot too…. At least until the others kidnapped me on my way home and dragged me to my ‘supposed to be a very late’ birthday party.” I said with a full roll of my eyes.

“Geez… Aneki, even though you were giving her the silent treatment at that time, how could you forget her birthday?” Kokabuki said in mirth, made my ‘already feeling guilty’ girlfriend even guiltier.

“I’m so sorry….”

“I said it’s okay. It’s not important.” I said to her and then I asked Shaku, “anyway where was I?”

“You, Black-san and Geki….”

“Oh, right… The others are older than us. Yuko-san and Torigoya are twenty two… and Sado-san is… twenty three. While you are…” I trailed off, because I don’t know how old she was.

“Seventeen.” She finished my words.

“Yep… you’re… about six years apart.” I said with a shrug.

“Why they’re only finished high-school a few months ago?” Kokabuki asked.

“I know why. But you’ve gotta ask for yourself. I won’t betray their trust.” I said with such finality on my tone to let them know I won’t say anything about it anymore. I look at my girlfriend who was giving me the puppy look and frowned, “you included,” and she huffed in response.

“Then what should I dooooo….” Shaku wailed, “Shibuya-san?”

“How the hell should I know?” I exclaimed loudly. “One thing for sure, do not put some money on her account again. She’s a proud person. She’ll only see it as an insult.”

“Shibuya-san… tell me… what should I do to get her attention?! You’re one of her friends… help me…” she wailed again. I sighed in exasperation at her antique. Actually, as far as I can see, she already got Sado-san`s attention on her, only… not that way. But there’s no way I told her that, right? Sado-san might kill me if I do. I know she has her reason to shun that girl away, and until she asked for my opinion, I won’t voice out anything.

“I don’t know, okay?! What am I?! A match-maker?!” I yelled in frustration after she wailed at me again, and I successfully shut her up. “Geez… I’m not good in relationship too… and why the hell did people asking me about stuffs,” I muttered to myself while rubbing my forehead, “firstly, it was Yuko-san, and then Torigoya… then it was Geki… and now you… Geez…” Deciding that it would be better for me to leave the room than to stay and might get myself in trouble for being blunt and rude towards my girlfriend`s friend, I started to walked to the door.

“Where are you going?”

“Cleared out the administration!” I answered and almost slammed the door behind me.

I hurriedly walked to the administration section, almost stomping all the way, and almost barked at the clerk when I asked for the bills. My eyes bulged out when I saw the amount of the bills as I was walking to the cashier and then I remembered. She was in the ICU for a night and then… not to mention being hospitalized for two weeks, and all the medicines, blood-transfusions and stuffs. I gulped and slowly pulled out my platinum credit card and gave it to the Cashier while silently praying that it won’t cross my credit limit and hoping that my parents wouldn’t even check my bills and just paid it off like usual.

My parents usually just give me the money whenever I asked them, without asking what for. They don’t care much as long as I don’t do drugs. Well… I did use drugs before. But they didn’t know it of course. The others often called me rich-brat and scold me for being a spendthrift. The thing is, I’m not a spendthrift, but I do now quality often accompany with a high price. And I don’t mind if I have to spend more money for high quality items. But, it doesn’t mean I don’t know the value of money. I almost cry when I saw the hospital bills. It’s almost at the same amount with my living cost for two months. ‘Dear God… don’t let my parents saw this, please… just make them pay it up like usual without further questioning.’ And when the Cashier give me my credit card and ask me to sign on the payment bills, I sighed in relief. At least it didn’t crossed my credit card`s limit. This was one of the rare moments that I was thankful for being born in my family. But still, this means no more shopping for me until next month. Sigh…

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*After Shibuya had left the room.

“She’s… truly not good with people, huh?” Youran sweat-dropped after she saw Shibuya stormed out of the room. She then turned her head to look at Ookabuki. “Shaku isn’t the only one wondering here… What did you see in her anyway!?”

Ookabuki only smiled and refused to answer, while Kokabuki sighed and remembering all the times she witnessed their couple times like they’re the only living being on the planet. She shivered in disgust and muttered darkly, “you wouldn’t say that if you saw them when there’s no one around,” she shivered even more to make a point, “they’re just too sweet that they almost gave me cavities.”

“For real?!”

“Yeah, they’re just…. Bleh….”

“Hey… hey… tell us…” Shaku said, temporarily forgot her problems, “come on… Kokabuki, spill it out.”

Kokabuki looked at her Aneki who’s grinned and just simply said, “I won’t help you out if she hunts you down…”

Kokabuki looked back at Shaku and Youran afterwards, “then… no… sorry…”

“Tch….”

All of a sudden the door opened, with Gekikara standing behind it. She was still on her school uniform and Rappappa’s jacket, but there’s some bruises on her face. She mumbled her greeting and sat on one of the chairs inside the room.

“Gekikara? What’s wrong?” Youran was quick to move to stood beside Gekikara, and put one of her hand on Geki’s shoulder.

“The usual reformation thing.” Geki mumbled. “Good thing that you’re all here, Yuko-san was on a meeting with Captain Takahashi and Maeda. She asked me to tell you all to prepare yourself to clean up the entire reformation thing.”

“Nezumi and Center acted up again?” Shaku asked her while she went to sit on the bed.

“Some juniors, actually… But, yeah, we think Nezumi was behind all this.” Geki mumbled again. “Yuko-san is already preparing some strategies. We ran out of people, so… We can’t just go on our usual ways of fists and kicks.”

“When?”

“We don’t know yet. I guess in a few weeks or so.” Geki sighed and then she looked around. “Where’s Shibuya? I thought she ditch her classes to help you out.”

“She IS here. She went to clear out the administration.” Ookabuki answered.

“Oh, good then.” Geki said.

“It’s not good…  The entrance exam for the vocational school she had chosen is only three weeks more!” Ookabuki said in irritation, “no more ditching classes again after this.”

“Geez… Aneki, you sound like her mother or something.”

Shaku and Youran laughed at the sisters, while Geki managed to smile a little and she said, “I mean, it’s good that she isn’t here in this room right now.” After she paused a little, she then continued, “Yuko-san told me to not telling Shibuya, Sado-san and Black about all of this. She won’t tell Torigoya too. So… you have to shut it too.”

Ookabuki frowned. “Why?”

Geki grimaced slightly and answered, “They have other things to do. They’re not Majijo students anymore, so… And as you said, Shibuya will face her exam soon, Black has to work and taking care of Ren in the same time, Sado-san was busy with her job, and Torigoya also has lots of photo-shots in the moment.” She sighed and rubbed her forehead. “We shouldn’t bother them with this as long as we could handle it ourselves.”

“They’ll know it sooner or later,” Ookabuki said with a frown, “I don’t know how long I can keep it from T-Shibuya, considering now I live with her.”

“I know… I don’t know how I could keep Black from knowing too.” Gekikara mumbled.

After a while Shaku sighed, “Ah, well, you two just have to try to keep them from knowing then. And speaking of exam and work,” She looked at her friends one by one and asked, “what’ll you all do after graduate?”

“Not college for sure.” Youran said.

Kokabuki sighed, “same here.”

“Mmm…” Geki mumbled her agreement.

“I’m not sure…,” Ookabuki said. After seeing the questioning look her friends gave her, she sighed, “I want to go to vocational school too, taking a home economic field or something. But with my parents cutting out my allowances… looks like I need to find a job rather than further study.”

“But, Shibuya-san is from a rich family too, right?” Youran asked, “She surely will help you out if you asked her to.”

“I don’t want to leech her out.” Ookabuki grimly said.

“And her parents would only support her until she reaches 21. After that… she’s on her own.” Geki added. “Perhaps you can stop her tendencies to spend too much. Or she’ll have a problem later on.”

“You know that too?!” Ookabuki asked to Gekikara, surprised. But then she blinked and added, “No, forget I said anything. Of course you know.”

Gekikara gave a slight smile and leaned back on the chair, stretched her body like a cat, “I’m her fighting buddy for years.” She stood up and started walking to the door. “I better go before Sado-san and Shibuya saw me here.” She was only a few steps away from the door, when the door suddenly opened.

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I walked to the room with my shoulder slumped, totally in my out-of-character mode. Damn… it was really expensive. ‘No shopping… no shopping…’ That was the words that kept replaying in my head during the short walk to the room. When I opened the door, I immediately frowned at the look they were given me. It was varied in between surprise, horror, shock and… was that guilt that I saw on my girlfriend`s face? And then… I noticed the bruises and small cuts on Geki`s face. Just like whenever she was just finished fighting.

“Who did you fight with?” I asked Geki who’s only smiled awkwardly at my question. “Why don’t you give me a call for something? It’s been a while since the last time I… exercising.”

“Er… It… it’s just a small flies.” Geki stuttered, “you’ll get bored even if I call you.”

I frowned at her even more. I’m not smart, but I’m not an idiot too. I knew she was hiding something from me. Especially with the way they looked so surprised when I came back. After a while, Geki scratching the side of her head and mumbling, “I have to go, see you all again later,” while hastily walked out of the room.

“What… the… hell… happened?” I growled in irritancies because they’re clearly hiding something from me.

“Eh… nothing!” Tomo was quick to say. “So… um… let’s go.”







For all the MariMii shippers... I'm so sorry :bow: :bow: Please don't kill me :nervous As for my AKB48/HP crossover fic, I put it on Tumblr. You can find it under the atsumina and kojiyuu tags if you want to read it.

@cisda83: Torigoya is living with Yuko and Sado often came over to Yuko`s place, let's just say that all that time she spent with the trolls influenced her :lol:

@hikari_043083: I think they all have at least two jackets. it's impossible if they wears the same jacket everyday :nervous
                        ah God.... I have three pairs in waiting for the side-story specials now.... :panic: :nervous

@theblueknight: thank you  :)
                        yeah, I can understand it so well.... :lol:

@BbSis:  :lol:, I live by myself too.
            i can write about their daily lives... but then this story won't progressing.. :nervous
            sorry about the marimii :( but Shaku still needs to prove herself to Sado first :nervous
           
@kahem: at least when their lives together they can have the time as long as they want to XD

@noel nguyen: thank you

@songbac: it's alright... i'm happy enough that you read my fic. :)

@elo: hello :welcome
         errrr... sorry about the MariMii parts...

@kojiyuu44: thank you for waiting, here's the new update :)

@kitzune:  :welcome
               Oh... i think i have saw some of them.It's really good :twothumbs

@minami-chan:  :lol: here's the new update then.


Thanks for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys. Sorry for the grammar errors and miss-spelling.

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 2
« Reply #313 on: March 10, 2013, 12:54:38 PM »
Yay! An update! Just in time, too. I just got my internet line fixed.

I think you are right, though. They must have at least 2 jackets or 3 (maybe). Since it's like a uniform and if 1 jacket got bloody, they would have to wash it. They can then wear another one until the recently washed one dried. That's good. But now they might need more jackets especially WTomo. Hehehe!!!

Looks like your side episodes are piling up. Of course, I'll still be waiting for GekiBlack. I want to finally see them call out each other's real names hehehe!!! Take them out one at a time. No need to rush. Quality is better when not rushed.

Hang in there!!!

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 2
« Reply #314 on: March 10, 2013, 12:59:09 PM »
Ah... Kokabuki and Youran is coming on good.... a couple soon enough

Yeah.... TomoTomo are living together in Tomochin's apartment....

Sado is so scary.... Shaku is in big trouble.... what did she do to get that kind of treatment from Sado?

Ah.... Poor Shaku is being rejected.... she even worked just to help Sado out...

Sado... was in love with Yuko....?! So she was scared to be broken heart or hurt again coz' of her family and Yuko.

I can understand Sado reluctant.... but please move on.... be happy with Shaku

Ah... Poor Tomochin is going to be cut off after she is turning 21.... What kind of parents does she have?

Never be there for her.... just give money.... and got married with another man that the daughter don't like....

Tomochin should just take as much money that she can every month up to her limit and make another trust fund that the parents don't have access to.

What's going to happen with Tomochin, Sado, Torigoya... when they find out about reformation group....?

What was the issue that Takamina, Atsuko and Yuko discussing?

I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 2
« Reply #315 on: March 10, 2013, 04:06:24 PM »
dont be sorry at least I know that shaku has feelings for sado :D

I hope you will make marimii in the next chapter hehe  :twothumbs

I will not give up  :thumbsup

please update soon :bow:
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 1
« Reply #316 on: March 10, 2013, 10:17:10 PM »
Yeeey! Ookabuki is finally out of the hospital o/

Hueheu Shibuya paying the bills. I'm cheering for her parents not ask where she spent that huge amount of money o/

Kokabuki and Youran, humm. It was kind of unexpected :p

Shaku and Sado, hmmm it's a begin. Shaku is trying, but Sado is hardheaded xD she have to understand that age gap is not important :) and you are righy, Shaku has to proof herself for Sado o/ I'll wait for this moment hehe~

I also agree that the story have to go on o/

It was a nice update! Thank you o/ I'll follow the HP one on Tumblr *.*

<3
Sorry about my lack of activity... I'm kinda stuck in life...

My fics:
It started in a wedding (MariMii + usual couples) - ongoing
The fanfiction post thread (KojiYuu, WMatsui) - ongoing
The cry of a lonely star - ongoing
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  • Theblueknight a.k.a oneyugigirl fan of Hatsune Miku/HANDMC/AKB48 and Im IN LOVE with Shinoda Mariko mi linda esposa(waifu) <3
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 1
« Reply #317 on: March 10, 2013, 10:58:08 PM »
took a break from this site for two things one my nephew jovi-kun is sick has stomach flu and I had to take care of him while his mom is out of town working doing taxes and at the same time I also got around to playing one of my ten or so games (shin megami tensei games heh  :nervous ) I bought in the last year that I haven't played at all either im getting too old for video games or idk im being lazy heh so I was playing p4 the golden for 3 days straight heh I haven't played it since it came out or since I bought it heh last year anyways took a break and found out theres an update here thanks author-san your amazing!!!  :D more sadoxshaku please!!!!  :twothumbs if you keep updating I will be on here more than playing mi games  :twothumbs I want more youran too please update soon  :D
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Spanish original name es mary es mi amor por leo dan:
Mari(mariko)es mi amor, solo con ella
vivo la felicidad yo se que nunca a nadie
mas podria amar, por que la quiero de
verdad por eso mary por favor dame tu
mano continuemos siempre asi
despues de todo que mas te puedo
pedir si soy feliz...muy feliz.
Si un dia me faltas tu que
Dios me ayude a morir ya que
no volvera a hacer en esta vida feliz
sin ti mari...sin ti mari...si estoy
viviendo por ti... 
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English ver dow originally name mary is my love by leo dan :
My love is Mari, just with her
I live in happiness
I know I will never again
fall in love with nobody, because I
feel a true love Because of that,
Mari, give me your hand we'll
forever continue this way After all,
what can I ask you more if I am happy...
very happy If one day I will miss you,
God help me to die ,
without you Mari...
If i live my life for you...  -----------<@

Offline Minami-chan

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 1
« Reply #318 on: March 11, 2013, 12:01:38 AM »
We!! Thanks for the new chapter!!
Sado and Shaku interesting couple ^^

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 28 - 1
« Reply #319 on: March 11, 2013, 02:09:09 AM »
hehe more and more couples I like it ^^

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