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Hello, I'm new here, and this is my first fanfic in englis ever, i hope you will enjoy it, sorry for my bad english!!!
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                                           Like a video game



   The day was starting hardly for the leader of AKB48, she had to get up early to learn a new choregraphy to the team A. She was a bit stressed because of the bad ambiance in the team lately, and she feared it was because of her. Despite her efforts towards Maeda Atsuko, this one seemed to hate her or something like that...It was difficult for Minami to assume the role of the leader of the team A and of the all AKB group, so when it came to give orders or correct some of their movements, she was always embarrassed. So the fact that the face of the group was so distant and cold with her was a big handicap to her.
Maeda Atsuko was a great dancer and singer, the leader  came to think that maybe the tall girl thought that this one was not able to be a good captain, and maybe she was angry because she didn't like the team A as it was...

Today they had a couple photoshoot in the team A. Kojima and Mariko were together, holding hands archly, they're were too cute together, even if no one objected the fact that Kojima belonged to Yuko. No doubt this one would  sulk knowing the existence of this photoshoot.
Minami looked by far the session, apprehending her turn, she was laid with the Ace. The way she had to behave was difficult to find … And she had to admit that the cold look on Atsuko's face all the time was hard to support.
When she were set up, Atsuko's face changed so fast and she began to embrace Minami as the photographer was aking her too. A strange feeling invaded the midget as she acted like a boy to her. It was so weird, they're smiling to each other, touching and so close...
"Okay, we're done, thank you very much!" Said the photographer.
"Thank you very much" said Atsuko and Minami together.
Minami looked at Aachan while she was changing clothes, she was talking to Miichan, laughing out loud. Joy suited her so well, her smile was sparkling. Suddenly the captain felt jealous of the others members who had the chance to talk to her.
"Hey captain!"
She turned and she came face to face with a smiling Kojima.
"Ah, Nyan Nyan, what is it?"
"You're okay? How was your shooting?"
Kojima was puzzled but decided to ignore it,
"G-Good", Minami respond, hesitant.
"We're having a party after this, because it's was hard work since one month right? So you have to be there!! Okay?"
"Party? Hm, it's day off tomorrow, so i suppose."
"Great!! Be there at 21:00 pm okay?"
"Yes mam'."


The party was nice, Minami didn't want to drink any alcohol, she was to reponsible and into her leader role for that, but she was talking with Miichan and it was pleasant. She loved this energy between the team, even if this past month things have been a little conmplicated, everyone was doing his best and it was good to feel that you could count on someone.

Atsuko was on her fourth glass of alcohol already. She felt lighter now, but still sad. She was sitting on a dark corner, to be able to look at the leader quietly.
She was so beautiful tonight, so simple anf full of energy and charisma. She loved her smile, her gestures and her dorky laugh.
The Ace felt her heart tighten in her chest, she needed to talk to her, with the alcohol she would have the courage to do it. The fear was in all her body but nothing was important but talk to her...
She suddenly got up, as if her body was taking the control, and went to the captain. This one was in an animated conversation with Miichan. She stood right in front of Minami, really seriously.
"I need to talk to you", she said in a decided tone.
The leader found it hard to believe, plus, Atsuko was really beautiful, like an apparition.
"...W-Well, o-okay."
Minami was so surprised that she followed Atsuko without a word to Miichan.
"Bye Minami, it was nice talking to you!!Yes..me too, thank you!"
They stopped in an empty room, an after Atsuko closed the door, the captain felt a littke stressed. Atsuko looked at her leader, she liked it so much when she wore her black winged sweat, she was so cute! She came closer to her, she could smell her delicious smell, like during this photoshoot. Without no warning, she pulled her toward her and kiss her roughly. Their lips crashed against each other, Atsuko didn't want to stop it, her heart was beating so fast, her lips were burning. They separated when they were finally out of air. The Ace was silent, unable to say anything, lost in the memory of this kiss.
"Why...W-What...are you doing?!"
Minami's body was heaving rapidly, gasping for air. She was so beautiful, lost and full of questions, a little disheveled. But Atsuko couldn't explain anything.
"Thank you."

She left the room without another word, leaving her leader alone. Minami couldn't believe what she had experienced.
It was so sudden. Maeda Atsuko, the face of AKB48, had drawn her in an empty room to kiss her... Why? What does it meant? It has to be a joke, some kind of a bet with another member. Yet it was so intense... Minami had never kissed anyone, but it was so...pleasant. Her heart was still beating terribly fast. What was that kind of feeling? Maeda Atsuko...How foolish was that...?
She left the room 15 minutes later, when she had recovered her thoughts. She found the others dancing on an EXILE song, and she decided to join them. On the way, she locked eyes of Atsuko. Strange feeling...Sensation of burning again...what the hell?
The party ended without any problem, everybody went home around 3:00 am. Two of them were unable to reach sleep that night.

End of the first part!!!Thank you for reading!!!Update soon if you want to!!
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« Last Edit: November 20, 2012, 01:40:13 PM by fausto »


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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2012, 04:02:21 PM »
HNNGGG... That was aggressive of you Acchan.. uwaaa... can't stop giggling about this story.. please update sooon! ahhhh I'm going crazy I wanna know what happened! lolz  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #3 on: August 07, 2012, 04:09:50 PM »
yey!
Another atsumina fic!
Wohooo!
Atsumina all the way!
Pls update as soon as possible!
Thank you!

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #4 on: August 07, 2012, 04:20:45 PM »
 :nya: Tsundere Acchan  :nya:
stay low then strike fast... That shock Takamina's system  :glasses:
Update soon... wanna see how Takamina handle the situation.

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #5 on: August 07, 2012, 05:09:17 PM »
Waaah this story  :k-inlove: I like the plot so much !!
Acchan be honest with your feeling !! Don't make the Tsundere Acchan !

The kiss is so perfect ! Please update soon, I want more  :luvuluvu:

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #6 on: August 07, 2012, 05:30:22 PM »
Wow i'm happy you liked it, i'll upload the next part tomorrow!!!!thank you so much!!!

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #7 on: August 08, 2012, 06:06:03 AM »
HNNGGG... That was aggressive of you Acchan.. uwaaa... can't stop giggling about this story.. please update sooon! ahhhh I'm going crazy I wanna know what happened! lolz  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

me too... jajja acchan you are so aggressive.. :D

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW!! Update!!!
« Reply #8 on: August 08, 2012, 11:03:46 AM »
Hello!!As promised, I update the next part today, I hope you're gonna like it, sorry again for my english!! ;)

Part 2



Two days after the party, some of the AKB members had a fashion show scheduled. Actually, the members had to choose two outfits according to their style or their taste, and scrolled throught with it. Atsuko was with a staff members and she had already chose her clothes, something classy, like the usual clothes she liked to wear.
But now, she was absorbed in the contemplation of her team leader Takahashi Minami who was putting on her outfit. With no surprise, she had chosen a leather jacket, a white tee-shirt and a black skirt. To accessorized the all thing, she had found big sunglasses and aviator glasses. She was so stylish, it was so her!
The show had began so the girls stood behind the scene, waiting for their turn. Atsuko was right after the captain, so she was able to watch Minami's performance on a screen right in front of her. She didn't know what to say, it was so stylish, the leader was walking with confidence and she had a sexy attitude. Atsuko realized it was exactly what she liked in Minami, that and much more.
No more thinking, it was her turn to shine.

Minami had to take off her outfit but she liked it too much, so she kept it a little longer. She was putting her sunglasses on when she found Atsuko right in front of her, starring.
"Eeh?"she blushed. "Is it something wrong?"
"Minami."
"Y-Yes?"Hopefuly she could hide behind her sunglasses.
"Can you come to my house tomorrow at 2:00pm?"
"At your house??Why?"
"Can you?" Persisted Atsuko.
"W-Well, i guess, if it's important, so okay", answered the leader, lost in the Ace's eyes.
"Good. Make sure to be there."
"Yes..."
She turned on her heels, leaving Minami alone once again. What was going on...
"Wow, leader, you've reached the cold Ace's heart! Nice jacket by the way!"
"What? Yuko, stop jocking! She's so weird, don't you think?"
"Can't tell, it's Atsuko you know", she said joining Kojima.
"No, I don't..."Minami spoke to herself.

Minami got to the door a little late, she had no time to dress, so she wore her black sweat again. She rang at the door, a litlle stressed. Atsuko had ask her to come to her house, first time ever, and she had no clue why.
She was trying to find a good reason for this conversation when the door opened.
"Oh you're there."
Er...Atsuko in a white shirt, almost transparent, and a denim short...so hot!
"Yes...You asked me to, remember?"
"I know. Come in."
She obeyed and came in the hall, it was a beautiful house.
"Follow me", she said as she claimed the stairs.
Straight to the point, Atsuko was scary sometimes.
"Okay."
Atsuko was taking her to her room! It was nice, girly and tidy. There were many posters and photos of AKB48 and it warmed Minami's heart.
"Minami? You're done?"
"Hm? Oh yes...sorry."
"So", she stood in front of the midget, trapping her against the wall, "can i kiss you now?"
"Eeh? That again?"
"Yes. "
"But why?"
"I just need to kiss you, is it okay?"
"Wha...No!Why?"
"I need to know something...Come on."
"Maeda-san, I don't know what I've done but maybe we could talk..."
"I don't want to talk."
Minami seemed shocked by the determination of her team A member .
"I don't understand."
"Okay. Forget about it."
Atsuko began to leave the room when Minami grabbed her arm.
"No. Wait. You have to tell me why you want this."
Atsuko was surprised, the leader's face had changed, she was so serious and concerned.
"Are you trying to make fun of me? Because I think it's a silly way to..."said Minami.
"No."
"What?"
"I'm not trying to do that."
"So what? I know you don't like me but..."
"...I'm...trying to figure out why I felt so...electrified the other night", admited the tall girl.
Minami opened wide eyes.
"Well...you were drunk..."
"It doesn't change anything...Maybe I'm not your type, but can I do it now?"
"No."
"…"
"I'm the one doing it."

It's all for today, next update maybe tomorrow if you want it^^Thank you!
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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #10 on: August 08, 2012, 12:03:26 PM »
Waaah Acchan is so bold and shameless ! It's so good  :luvuluvu:
Minami takes the opportunity ! Kiss kiss  :k-inlove: Kiiiss sexy Acchan !

Update soon please, I want more  :luvuluvu:

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #11 on: August 08, 2012, 07:16:36 PM »
I'm so busy that I'm so late on the new stories here
and this is
ATSUMINA!!!!

KEEP IT UP!

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« Reply #12 on: August 09, 2012, 01:01:39 PM »
Hey!!^^Today the third part!!Things are getting serious^^Enjoy!(I hope^^)

Part 3

Atsuko looked at her with big eyes, obviously she didn't expect that at all.
"...Why?"
"Don't discuss."
It was the first time Minami was talking to her like that, and it was nice, actually.
"Okay."
"If it's bad...try not to punch me please."
Atsuko nodded, she was a little stressed. Minami took a deep breath and concentrate, she had never kissed anyone before...and it was Maeda Atsuko...
She looked at the girl in front of her, she had closed her eyes, waiting for Minami. She was so beautiful...Slowly, she approached the red lips of the tall girl and when she finally touched them, a very strange desire envaded her. She stood a little moment like this, and then she broke the kiss to see Atsuko's reaction.
The Ace stood few seconds like that, frozen. Then she opened her eyes and look at Minami.
"...Thank you."
"Hum, you're welcome. Can I know the answer?"
"I think...that's what i expected..."
"Oh...I don't get it, but it has to meant that i'm a bad kisser, that you were drunk and lost...I understand."
"Minami?"
"Uh?"
Atsuko took her friend's hands and looked right in her eyes.
"I'm sorry for being so horrible all these years, I was trying to deny it but..."
"Wait, it's okay, you don't have to like me..."
"The truth is...I love you."
"…"
Minami opened her mouth, in shock. She blushed instantly.
"What???!"
"I'm sorry."
"Eeh? But it can't be true...you never talked to me, you never looked at me, never laught at my jokes, never ate with me..."
"I know, I was trying to deny it..."
"Deny?Why?"
"...I was fourteen, and a girl...Discover that another girl was always in my thoughts and that is naturally bad is so scary...So i thought maybe deny it and act like i didn't care would be easier."
"...Aachan..."
Minami saw Atsuko smiled.
"What?"
"That name...You just called me Aachan. It's nice! You never did."
"Oh...I always wanted to call you like that but i couldn't, and i've figured now was the right time to start..."
"Starting from now, you'll have to call me Aachan."
Minami smiled, she was relieved.
"Wow...I can't believe it...So you don't think I'm a bad leader?"
"No, no at all. You're the best for this rôle, obviously."
Minami loosened his shoulders and sighed in relief.
"Ah...seven years without talking to you...it was so hard..."
Atsuko felt guilty, her friend was so kind and cute.
"I'm so sorry Minami..."
"No, it's okay."
Atsuko pouted.
"Yeah...But you don't love me right? I mean, it's okay..."
She had totally lost her cold look, and it seemed so natural now. Minami couldn't help but smile.
"Silly."
"Eeh?"
Minami raised Atsuko's chin with a finger.
"I've loved you since the first year of AKB..."
"What??You never..."
"Said it? You were always angry at me, no talk, no look...I thought you were against the fact that i was the leader, because I didn't deserve it, so I've decided to forget all about this attraction."
"…"
"The so loved Ace, « the face of AKB », number 1, how can I ever think of keep this person for me, you could have anyone. Plus, you already have a wife...Miichan!"
"Miichan is a joke, she forced me!^^And! You're the one everybody loves and wants as a wife in AKB!"
"Not true!! Beside you choose another member that day, why not me?"
"I was pretending, remember? And you? Why Kojima? Why two girls?"
"Hm...Kojima has such a beautiful brest...and two, because it's...interesting!She smirked.
"Perv'!"
Minami pretended to be vexed.
"Eeh?Perv?!Says who? The one who ignores me for seven years and then, one night, drunk, kisses me in a dark corner, touching my butt?"
"Yeah...Well...I was drunk..."
"Hm...don't worry, you have a beautiful brest too, she said with a boyish look."
"Minami! You're such a guy!"
"What can I say...? Maybe seven years of abstinence forced me to admit that your brest and your lips are attractive..."
Atsuko came very close to her and whispered.
"Maybe you could kiss me..."
"Atsuko!"
"Wow...you saying my name like this, it's so sexy...I might be used to it..."
"Since when are you such a teaser?"
"...Always have been...don't you notice it?She said with a seductive face."
God, she was so beautiful, how to resist...
"Never towards me, Minami pouted."
"So, it's a beginning. Anyway, we were at the part where you had to kiss me...^^"
"Had to?"
Atsuko pouted, which made Minami laughed.
"Your two moles on your cheeks are really cute, you know."
"Really?" Asked Atsuko as she sat on her bed, inviting her friend to do the same.
"Yeah, I love them!" She said as she touched them.
Atsuko thrilled.
"Well, do you that I have like ten moles on my all body?"
"Really?"
"Yes...she said in a seductive tone, nobody knows that. Do...you want to see them?"
"No." Minami answered with a really serious look.
"Eeh..."
Takamina bursted out laughing at the face of Atsuko.
"You should see your face!!Haha!!"
"Minami! You are making fun of me!"
"Hahaha!"
Atsuko pouted, upset. Minami stopped laughing and took the hand of her friend, and then filed a kiss on her cheek.
"I just wanted to joke, sorry."
"No, it's okay, I mean, it's not very interesting..."she blushed.
"Well..."she came closer to Atsuko's face, "actually I already know your moles, where they are..."
"Eeh??How do you know?"
"Hm, I have a really good detective...expoensive by the way..."
"No way! Are you joking?"
"Yes..."
"Ah!"
"About the detective, not your moles, Atsuko."
"But, no one knows..."
"We take our baths all together, and for some of them, I'll have my sources..."
"Your sources?" Atsuko pouted. "You mean you asked some members to watch me!"
"Yep," Minami answered with a little malicious smile.
"But..."
"Everyone knows I like you, you know, but they're acting like they don't."
Atsuko seemed disapointed, she pouted like a little girl. And then, her face changed in a second, then she smiled archly.
"Well, I'm not so sure...You'll have to prove me that."
"What? Such a teaser..."
"I know it was a lie!"
Minami wrapped her hands around the Ace's waist and leaned down to kiss her.
"Ne, Atsuko..."
"Hm", said the tall girl, her skin became more sensitive.
"I'm gonna show you I don't lie, so don't  move..."

Thank you for reading!! Hope you liked it!! update soon if you want!!

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #13 on: August 09, 2012, 02:32:51 PM »
WOAHHHHHH
 :on bleed: :on bleed:

to much atsumina!!!
its killing me!!!
now  :imdead:

thank you for the update!!!
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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #15 on: August 09, 2012, 03:45:33 PM »
Totally like it!!!  :twothumbs

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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #16 on: August 09, 2012, 05:29:09 PM »
Well, Chichay12, i didn't mean to kill you, sorry...^^ :lol:   TakaminaBG, I know what you mean, i think the update will satisfy you, well, i hope so!!! Thank all of you for your support!! I know it's just an Atsumina fanfic, but what can i say, i'm REALLY into this couple that sometimes I forgot to add some others members!!^^

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« Reply #17 on: August 10, 2012, 11:38:08 AM »
Yosh, today it's the last part!! Thank you for reading!!

Part 4


As she said it, Minami started to kiss Atsuko's moles on the cheek.
"One...two..."
She's now on her neck.
"Three...four..."
Atsuko moaned, as she felt the lips of her friend kissing her soft skin.
"Five," she whispered on her arm, "six, seven, eight, nine", she said kissing slowly Atsuko's belly, where there were the most.
"Minami..."
"At last but not least...the secret one!^^"
She slowly unbutonned Atsuko short and went look for the secret mole, on the right waist of the Ace. It was so little, brown and cute, hide on the perfect waist of Atsuko. She knew it was there but she had never saw it. It was worth it!
She filed a little wet kiss on it and touched it carefuly.
"It's definetly my favourite! So cute!"
"So you knew it...Who told you?"
Minami smiled and patted Atsuko.
"I'll never tell you!"
"Minami!Meannie!" She scolded her.
"So, did I lie?" The captain smirked.
"No", Astuko pouted. "I've nothing to hide now..."
"Don't be so sad, there's so much of you I want to see!"
"Like what?"
"Your bod...personality!"
"Minami, you're so boyish!^^"
"Sorry."
"No, I like that. I'm sure you can be so active sometimes..."
"Atsuko!"
"Haha, Minami is so funny to tease!"
"Don't be proud of that, it's tourmenting me you know."
"Sorry, i'm just saying that my lovely leader is so sexy when she acts like a boy to me."
"Well", she blushed, "sometime I cannot help but behave like that."
Suddenly Atsuko's arms wrapped around Minami's neck and the tall girl kissed her passionnetly. Surprised, the midget responded to it, uncapable to resist.
"Minami..."The Ace whispered in her ears, "take me now..."
"Eeh? Aachan...I don't think we should...your parents..."
"They're away for the week-end...you have no excuse. Unless you don't want to..."
"It's not hat...I'm just..."
"What?" The tall girl asked.
Minami tried to focus, she was the leader, she had responsabilities, and for so long she thought Atsuko hated her...But no she was there, kissing her, and her body was burning.
"Nothing."
She kissed Astuko back, with the same intensity, passing her hand in the girl's hair. The other went to Atsuko's neck, she could heard her moans, and it was exciting her.
Am I daydreaming...?Seven years without nothing and today, a confession, a kiss, a naughty proposition...I might have a heart attack...
The captain rolled her over to be on the top of her. What a nice view...Atsuko's heart was beating so fast, she felt like melting when she felt Minami pressed their lips again.
Would you mine...daydreaming a little more...she moaned as their lips met to battle. Atsuko wrapped her arms around the midget neck, pulling her closer.
I'm afraid i can't stop, answered Minami.
She kissed her collarbone, which tored the Ace a moan, captain's lips were so sweet...Minami couldn't resist, she started to unbutton her shirt, little by little, keeping on kiss her. She smirked when she saw Atsuko's bra, black, beautiful. She bit her lip before smirked.
"Kami-sama, thank you."
"Bakamina", blushed Atsuko, she couldn't help but giggled lightly.
Minami didn't answer, the shirt was open, she could see the bra and the Ace's belly, it was astonoishing. Her skin was so soft. She couldn't control herself, she rained many kisses. Atsuko arched, full of desire, her hands ran on Minami's back, searching for her skin she needed to touch.Minami placed a knee between the legs of the tall girl, it was easier for her like this. Surprisingly, it tored at Atsuko a groan of pleasure. Minami made a movement back and forth with her waist, keeping on caress her belly.
"Minami..."
"Hm?"
"...Where did you learned to do that?"
"Can't tell...to embarrassing..."
"Please..".as she moaned from another movement.
"...Naughty dreams with you..."She said blushing like crazy.
"Oh...I'm glad! Minami you're so cute!"
The captain slipped her hand underneath the girl's bra, she couldn't wait any longer. She accelerated the pace, and Atsuko's breathing became jerky.
"I don't think...I can't take it any longer..."
"It's alright, let it go"
Atsuko grabbed her leader forcefully and buried her head in her neck.
"Minami!" She screamed as she finally came.

The two girls were laid on the bed, side by side, holding hands, trying to catch their breath. They were relief, happy and serene. Atsuko snuggled against the body of Minami, smiling.
"I knew you were the one."
"Eeh? You've checked it with my prowess in bed?"
"No", laughed the tall girl, "but feeling like i'm happy and filled, i know that you're the one for me."
"Damn, I thought just to have found an easy girl..."
"Minami!"she tapped her friend kindly.
"Hahaha!"
"Your jokes still suck", she pouted.
Minami stuck her tongue out.
"I love you, you know", the leader said, in a husky voice.
"I know", said Atsuko, smiling.
They fell asleep few minutes later. It was really a sublime day...

It was the evening when they woke up, Atsuko yawned.
"Ne, Atsuko?"
"Hm, what is it, Minami?"
"Do you think...people can live if the one they love the most is gone?"
Atsuko frowned and came closer to the leader.
"What do you mean?"
"Hm...I...really love you, you see, and even if this past seven years you didn't like me, in appearence, you were next to me, always. But now...i want to always be with you, speak to you, love you everyday, and I can't imagine live without you...I think i would die. But maybe I can't be with you..."
Atsuko didn't know what to say, she didn't expect that at all. Minami seemed so sincere, and the tall girl was so happy to how deep her love was. But the leader had a sad look, and she didn't like to se her like that.
"Minami..."she smiled brilliantly, "you know, our love is like a video game!"
"A video game?" Minami frowned, lost.
"Yes! Exactly! Look, we have a goal,we need to get stronger, go through mazes and win battle. But we have each other and friends, so with faith, experience and will, we can make it!!"
"...You spend to much time with Kojima and her malefic DS!"
"Haha! Actually, I'm proud of my metaphore!"
"I can see that^^"
"Minami, I love you, and nothing can make us apart. I just want to be with you, so i believe it's gonna be okay, i could always be by your side."
Minami smiled, it warmed her heart, she was not alone, she believed in that love.

"Ne, Minami?"
"Huh?"
"Do you think one day... we could borrow “Itoshisa no accel” outfit?"
Eeh?What for?"
"So you can put it on...You're so sexy in it, maybe you could wear it and count my moles again..."
"Atsuko!"



Well, in the beginning, it was supposed to be the end, but i can't help but feel so sad now, i don't like to finish stories^^ :( Maybe i could try to continue it, I don't know, what do you think?? Yesterday I had this idea of a new fanfic atsu/saeyaka on Kagekidan, maybe i should write this one... :nervous. Anyway, thank you so much for reading this fanfic, it makes me really happy!! And i hope you will update soon too coz i neeeed fanfics^^ :panic: :thumbup :thumbup 
« Last Edit: August 10, 2012, 01:23:14 PM by fausto »


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Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" NEW
« Reply #19 on: August 10, 2012, 01:30:42 PM »
yay that was really hot!! :heart: :heart: :heart: Thank you for this wonderful fic!!  :thumbsup

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