Re: AKB48 Fanfic, Atsumina pair!! "Like a video game" Part 12!!!

[chichay12]

WAHHHH!!
its done!!!WHY???
 
plsss..you should make a SEQUEL of this!!
This is so cool!!!
to much atsumina!!WOOHOO!!!
 
thank you for the update!!
and im hoping you should continue this..hehe
 

[fausto]

Wow Chichay12, thank you for supporting me , let's go, i'm gonna try to write a next part^^ But i have to warn you, i can keep writing forever, like a whole Atsumina life^^

[fausto]

Keisthename, i love your fanfics, please write some more^^ thank you!!!

[kahem]

Wouhou!!! Mole counting for the win!!!!
And please continue!

[Haruko]

OMG!! love it you fic and the smexy scenes.. but i have a doubt whta happen the next day.. everybody knows that takamina love acchan but nobody knows that acchan also love takamina so what happen next.. when micchan harrash to atsuko like always or when mocchi harrash takamina....

[fausto]

Haruko, i'm gonna update soon, so wait a little!!!

[fausto]

Hey!! It's a sort of an update, maybe the story's end was good like that, i really don't know if it's okay to write a next part... Please, if you think it's not necessary, tell me, coz i don't want to ruin my story

Part 5

Minami stood all day at Atsuko's house, advantage that her parents were absent. They had so much things to share...  The captain woke up first, she was all tired of this long night of discussion but she couldn't help but smile, Atsuko loved her, it was so good to know... She decided to wake up who was still sleeping in the bed. The captain smiled seeing her beautiful face asleep, she must have a really good dream because she was smiling brightly.
"Aachan..."
"…"
"Aachan", she whispered, close to her ears.
"Hm...Minami?"
"It's me. You have to wake up, we must go in 30 minutes!"
Atsuko moved slowly, still stunned. She laid her head on Minami's lap.
"Ne, Minami, why don't you come with me in the bed...? You should have sleep with me..."
"I can't Atsuko, we have to go. And, I wanted you to have a good night in a big an empty bed."
"Mou, it would have been better with you..."
The captain smiled and stoop up.
"I'm gonna make you something for breakfast, wake up okay?"
"...kay."

30 minutes later they were in ataxi, on their way to meet the team A members. Atsuko was quite nervous, she couldn't stop thinking about the reaction of their firends.
"Minami?"
The midget was in the contemplation of the landscape.
"Hm? What is it Aachan?"
"How...do you want us to act...with the members?"
The midget smiled.
"It's okay, do as you want."
"Hm, maybe I'll try to do like usual..."
Minami felt a bit disapointed, she didn't want Atsuko to do like nothing happened. But she smiled instead.
"Do as you want, Aachan. Don't worry. If you need me, I would be there."
Atsuko nodded as shyly smiling.
They decided to enter to the theater separatly. Atsuko went first, she tried to seem like usual.
"Aachan!"
Before she could understood, Miichan was in her arms, hugging her.
"My wife! Where have you been?! I missed you!"
"Hehe...Miichan! Are you trying to kill me?^^"
Minami entered the room at this moment, she saw the two girls and pretented not to care, but it was so hard...
"Captain!"
Mocchi rant o the midget.
"You're so beautiful today!"
She hugged the short girl with passion, kissing her cheeks.
"Well, thank you Mocchi."
She locked Atsuko's eyes, it was bad...
"Now that everyone is happy, shall we start?"
Minami turned to the girl who had talked.
"Yes, Mariko, thank you^^"
They started the warm-up in silence. Yuko was whispering some things in Kojima's ears, who seeemed really embarrassed.
"Takamina, you should do this haircut more often, it suits you reallywell...said Mocchi, touching the midget hair."
"Eeh? It's the usual haircut Mocchi, what do you have today? said Minami, blushing."
"Hm...The Kojiyuu thing is giving me some ideas..."
"Well...Thank you Yuko."
"Sorry..."apologized Yuko as she saw Mocchi bite softly the ears of her leader.
"Mocchi! Stop that!" Atsuko said, raising her voice.
Everyone seemed shocked, they looked at the Ace.
"I think you shouldn't distract our leader when she's trying to work."
Mocchi stood in silent, to surprised to say anything.
"Well, thank you Atsuko, let's get back to work."
All the girls obeyed, Mariko smiled.
So, it was time. Atsuko was starting to care about the leader.
There was going to be interested...

[Megumi]

Please continue!
AtsuMina!!!!!!!!!!

[fausto]

Hey guys!!I'm sorry, it has been a while since the last time, but i was a little busy^^ Hope you remember the story!!Enjoy!

They practiced two hours and then, they decided to eat together, right on the practice floor.
"Nyan Nyan, let me feed you...!"
"I can feed myself Yuko."
"I know, but it's so cute when I do it!"
Mariko was looking at the Kojiyuu couple, amused. She couldn't help but want to know more about what was going on between the leader and the Ace.
"Takamina?" She asked with a low voice.
"Yes?"
"Would you say that Sayaka is a good kisser?"
"Eeh?" Asked the captain fully surprised.
Mariko noticed that Atsuko had stopped eating and seemed very concerned. The rest of the team was wainting for the answer, curious.
"I mean, she kissed you a lot in Kagekidan, so I was wondering what was your opinion."
Minami blushed like crazy.
"She didn't kiss me that much..."
"Anyway, tell us!" Said Yuko, excited.
"Hm...I don't know, it was okay, i guess."
"Really?" Asked Miichan," I thought in the dvd you said that you had like, butterflies in your stomach when she was kissing you."
Atsuko cleared her throat, as if she had swallowed through.
"Well...I thought she was really...kakkoi, and i was really in the Maria rôle so..."answered Minami shyly, as she looked at Atsuko.
"Wow! Anyway, let's talk about the rendez-vous Atsuko gave to our loved captain yesterday", said Yuko, mailiciously.
"What? Yuko! Why are you all teasing me today?"
Kojima opened wide eyes.
"You were at Atsuko's?! Are you talking to each other??"
"So cool! See Nyan Nyan, you should invite me to your house more often too!"
"So Aachan", asked Mariko," what's going on?"
"Nothing, I had to talk to Minami..."
"Minami?!" Exclaimed Mocchi," even me call her Takamina!!"
"Wow guys, we have a new couple here!" Screamed Yuko.
"Shut up Yuko, not everyone is like you."
"But Nyan Nyan..."
"Well, we'll talk about this later, time to go to work ladies", Mariko said wisely.
The girls drew up their lunch ad checked their mail before getting back to work.
Minami was daydreaming when her phone rang. She checked it and saw that she had a mail.

« So you enjoyed Sayka's kiss uh?
I'll walk you home tonight so we can talk about this.
PS: I'm gonna kill Mocchi. »

She smiled, she was in big trouble but it was so good. Atsuko seemed to care and it meant that tonight a little longer. But Atsuko was scary nonetheless.


Minami was at the enter of the theater, talking to Kojima. Actually she was waiting for Atsuko to walk her home.
"Do you want to lunch with me tomorrow?" Asked Nyan Nyan.
"Yes, totally", answered Minami, happy.
"Okay, I'll treat you katsudon!"
"Yatta! Haruna, you're the best!""
Atsuko walked toward then, standing next to Minami.
"Well, I need to go, I think Yuko is waiting for me..."
"Are you kidding me? It's so surprising!" Laughed Atsuko.
"It's not funny Aachan, she's so obsessed by...brest all the time! You don't know how is it..."
"You're right", Atsuko looked at Minami," i don't know, it seems like your brest has a lot of attention those days..."
"Don't laugh! See you tomorrow!"
Kojima left the two girls, pickin up her phone to answer to Yuko.
"Let's go!" Said the captain.
They walked across the street and the Ace held her hand to call a taxi. Hopefully there was an empty on right there. Minami passed on the tall girl to open her the door car, like a real gentleman. It surprised atsuko and made her smile.
"Thank you."
They were quiet in the car, to shy to talk about that in front of a stranger.
After 15 minutes, they stopped at Minami's house. The captain hesitated, she didn't know what to do, sometimes Aachan still intimitated her.
"Well, I should go, we have to be up early tomorrow."
"Yep", said Minami," thank you for driving me home...I should be the one doing it..."
"Maybe tomorrow^^"
"Yes. So goodnight, I guess."
"Hm."
Minami left a quick kiss on Atsuko's two moles, and she began to leave.
"Minami?"
"Yeah?" She said as she turned.
"You...will still love me tomorrow, right?"
The captain smirked.
"No doubt..."she answered with a husky voice.

I'll upload the next part tomorrow, something about the captain and some underwears...^^ Thank you for reading!!

[kahem]

I like jealous Acchan~

[okotteru]

^ indeed jealous acchan is the best 

im glad you continued this fic ~~ looking foward to next chap (~^A^)~

[Haruko]

in deed i need to read again the fic BUT it was awesome again jeje

WHAT atsuko dont do her move on takaboy.. come acchan you need to be clear with mocchi, nyanyan and anyone that takaboy belongs to you..

I lov ehte message in the takamina´s cellphone but it was a little confused that she doesnt do anything about that..yet.. i think ..

And what about takaboy she is not jeloous about miichan..

[fausto]

Has expected, this is the next part. Well Haruko, you pointed the finger at all things that will be in this part^^ Enjoy (I hope!) .

Three days had passed since that day, and they had been so busy that they couldn't see each other. Atsuko was designed to play an important role in a new drama about school and ikemen, she wanted to announce it to Minami.But the captain had a tv show with the NO3B members. The Ace decided to call the midget to know if they could see each other today.
"Moshi Moshi?"
"Minami?"
"Ah, Atsuko, how are you?"
"Mou, it would be better if I could see you..."
"Hm, I'm out in an hour, do you want me to go at your place?"
"Really? Can you? My parents are away!"
"Aachan...what is that supposed to mean?"
"Eeh? No-nothing!"
"Haha! I'm joking!"
"Minami!"
"Gomen! I'll be at your place soon okay?"
"See you there!"

It was already 22pm when the captain left the studio, she was gonna be late at meeting Atsuko. She took a cab and wondered if her friend would be mad at her. Miichan and Kojima had joked her all day about Atsuko, actually it seemed to make them happy that they were together. Wait, were they together?
Nothing was clear between them, they hadn't really talk since the night of the confession.
Lost in her thoughts, she didn't realize that she was already arrived at Atsuko's house.
She rang the doorbell, a little anxious. Few seconds later the door opened and there was a beautiful Atsuko right in front of the captain.
"Hi, Atsu..."
She was unable to finish her sentence, Aachan was already embracing her.
"Minami!"
"Wow^^" she said hugging back hte girl with a large smile on her face.
"I'm so happy to see you! I missed you! Come in!"
They went in the tall girl's room right away, actually Atsuko was leading Minami to it. She sat on her bed, the midget decided to stood up, looking at her.
"How are you Aachan?" She said with a very serious face.
"Hm, better now", she smiled.
Dam, she was so cute. Every japanese guy had to fall for her, find her cute and beautiful, she was like the perfect girlfriend, smart, gorgeous, funny, kind...The captain felt a hint of pride, if people knew, they would be so envious.
"Minami?"
"Eeh? Sorry?"
"What were you thinking?"
"Hm, nothing..."she blushed.
"Mou, tell me!"
Looking at her, pouting, aaah, she couldn't refuse something to this girl...
"I was just thinking that...every guy in japan, and away, must think that you are the perfect girlfriend. And...I'm kind of proud of it..."
Atsuko seemed surprised, and then smiled really brightly.
"You're so kind! Actually, you're really kakkoi today!"
Right after the rehearsal of NO3B, Minami changed clothes to wear jeans,, a white tank and a little leather jacket. Her hair was seconded.
"You are...really...handsome."
"Yaa...i'm not."
"Yes, you are, your hair is so great, it's my favourite haircut on you."
She stood up and sprang to rate Minami and touched her hair. She nestled her nose in the nape of the captain.
"You smell so good", she whispered as she put her arms around Minami's neck.
"Aachan..."she was already blushing, not used to this physical contact yet." You smell good too."
"Really? I didn't put any perfume today."
"No, it's your natural scent that i like."
Unconsciously she crashed her lips against Atsuko's. The Ace pressed herself against the captain's body, wanting more. Her hand went down along her stomach and touched the leader's belly. Under her fingers she found a large band of tissue. Intrigued, she looked down and openened wide eyes.
"Minami?! You wear boxers?!!"
It was a black boxer with a large white band named « Calvin Klein ». Minami was so red right now, she took a step back.
"Aaah...gomen, Atsuko...it's not what you think...!"
"Hm, i think that you wear that because you think it's nice and cool. Am i wrong?"
"Etoo...No, but..."
"You know what? It suits you really well..."she smiled, taking a look at it again.
"Really?! Are you joking?"
"No, not at all, you're really great in it. And i think..it's hot^^"
"Aah...it's embarassing!^^"
"You don't lend them to Miichan right?" She laughed.
"No, no! For her, it's always pink pants! Wait...do you see them a lot on Miichan? She's too close to you by the way...always...trying to kiss you..." she frowned, picturing the scene.
"Ah, i see^^ Miichan is very tactile with everyone you know. Don't you have a sort of secret place behind your « all-in-pink » bedroom? Like a place where are your favourite clothes, your boxers, some GACKT posters, video games...?"
"What??"
"It would be cool though..."
Minami looked at Atsuko, this one was all excited and smiling.
"You're enjoying it. You're always talking about my « manly » side. And, I'm not gonna show my secret room right away^^"
"Well, I like every side of you, but as your girlfriend, I love your manly, ikemen side. Like Kay..."
"My...girlfriend?" she repeated, surprised.
"Is it bothering you?"
"No! Not at all! It's just that, i didn't know..."
They stood silent for a while, simply happy. Minami smiled.
"I have an idea."
"Yes? Tell me."
"I could cook you some pancakes and we could watch a movie eating them. What do you think?"
"Let's do that!"
Atsuko jumped out of the bed and joined Minami with a really big smile. Naturally, she took her hand and she dragged her down to the stairs, to reach the kitchen. The captain gently kicked Atsuko out of the room.
"Go find a movie and i'll bring the pancakes!"
Her girlfriend hugged her from behind.
"What sort of movie do you want to watch?"
"Whatever Aachan, as you want. But please, not an horror movie for tonight."
"'kay Minami!"
The tall girl forced her to face her and kissed her soft lips.
"I love you."
She left the room, hopping.
Minami looked at her girlfriend leaving, bitting up her lower lip. Something was rising in her, a behavior or an instinct that shouldn't have been there. She was a little ashamed but Atsuko was stimulating her boyish side. She was looking at her with a « boy-look » when it came to her body.
The ring of her phone disturbed her, it was Kojima.
"Moshi moshi?"she said as she came into the evening room."Ah, Kojima, yes, hm, you want me to meet you at the station or the restaurant?Okay, yes, fine, thank you. Bye!"
She hang up and sat next to the tall girl on the couch.
"Why always Kojima?" pouted Atsuko.
"What do you mean?"
"I mean you're really close to her."
Yes, as you are with Miichan."
"Hm..."she pouted again.
Minami smiled and came closer to her girlfriend.
"What's on your mind? Another killing mail?^^"
"Nothing... And by the way, i forgot to put my threat into execution, but it won't be long... Mocchi is way too close to you, do you think she's pretty?"
"She's cute, but you are way cuter!"
"…"
"Oh...don't worry, even if team members are great, you're the one I love."
"You...! You're not funny, you know you sho..."
She couldn't continue because  Minami had crushed her lips against her's. She was on her, exploring Atsuko's mouth with her tongue.
"Atsuko..."she whispered at her ear."I only want you..."
She touched  her neck and kissed the corner of her mouth.
"Are you okay with that?"
"Yes..."
The tall girl was shivering, Minami seemed so sure, and it was so sexy.
"Okay, so trust me. I'm the captain and I'm not allowed to love you, but if you tease me too much, I'm not gonna be able to hide it."
It was coming...Her manly side, she couldn't control it. She forced her to lie on the couch, toping her.
"You're so sexy... So hard not to touch you all the time, kiss you everytime time you smile..."
She kissed her once again, slightly exalted.  Atsuko had to admit that she was turned on, being toped like this by Minami.
"I wanna touch you...slowly... Your skin is so soft..."
As she said, she caressed Atsuko's belly, hips and lips.
"M-Minami..."moaned the girl.
"I love you saying my name like this...you drive me crazy."
She passed her hand under the Ace's shirt, the contact with her soft skin took her breath away. She couldn't think about something else than listening to Atsuko's breath and moans...so exciting...she had this sexy way to moan...
She continued her exploration, this time under her bra. Atsuko arched her body under the wave of pleasure, she clung at her girlfriend. Minami lifted the shirt so her skin was totally exposed, and without waiting she took a nipple in his mouth, licking it slowly. Atsuko let out a cry of surprise and pleasure, the captain licked it with insistance while she was touching the other, slowly, playing with her ​​nipple with the tip of her fingers.
Atsuko looked at his girlfriend, moving her mouth asking for a kiss, she needed it more than ever.
"I don't... think about Kojima anymore...^^" after the kiss.
"Stop...talking about her, please! Maybe I should film this and send it to Mocchi..."
Minami looked at the tall girl, discreetly opening the zipper of his pants.
"Bad girl...^^ Do... Do you want to have a boyfriend someday?"
"What? Why are you asking this now?"
She  gently inserted her hand in the Ace's pants.
"Don't know...i don't want you to...I want you..."
She touched without warning Atsuko's panties. 
"Hm...!Mina-mi..."
"...All for myself!"
She was all over the girl now, she couldn't resist but do like the first time, putting her leg between the Ace's. She wanted to follow the waves of Atsuko's body. The rush was intense, it was hard to handle it.
"I love you... Minami, i need you so m-much..."
The captain put her ear near the lips of his girlfriend, to hear her better, and accelerated the movement.
"Minami...I'm gonna..."
"Me too!"
They kept moving during few more minutes, then they grabbed each other and came together, almost at the same time.
Minami wanted to lay down next to her girlfriend but this one held her.
"No, stay, rest on me, she said breathless."
"No, i'm too heavy..."
"No, please, i want to feel you. It's good..."
They stood like this a long moment, listening to each other breath.
"I don't want to lose you, Minami. "
"You will not. No way you can escape me now^^"
Atsuko smiled. The captain looked at her, smiling too.
"And next time, you're so gonna have the “Itoshisa” outfit...! ^^"
"Can't wait^^ But...And my pancakes...?" she asked with a really cute face.
"Oh...You will have them", she captured the Ace's lips," but before...I'll have you once again, this is too good to stop..."
Atsuko smiled, it will gonna be a long night with her Takaboy. What a perfect way to end a day...^^

I hope it was okay, i'm sorry about Minami's underwear, if you think it's too much, i have to admit that i love the idea^^ I hope it's not boring... I think next i'm gonna upload a short story about this "scandal" with Atsuko, an atsumina fanfic obviously,because i'm so sad that people took pictures of her in such a moment...i totally support Atsuko, she will be my Ace forever!! Thank you!!

[miayaka]

 

you hang me here.. but but but.. its so arggg
atsumina moment!

DONT BE SORRY!
THIS IS GOOD!
nyahahaha
THANK YOU!

[Haruko]

OMG! What did you do in my mind... jajaj yeah i though the same minami have a secret boyside.. and we loved it

Kai!! kakkoi .. all this ficwas.. WOW

[kahem]

OMG!!!! Making out scene!!!
It would be so funny if in Takamina's room you can push a button and a secret room appears with man things xD

[fausto]

Thank you everybody!!I'm so glad you liked it!! Kahem, i'm also thinking that there is a button to push in Minami's room, Mariko said it once^^ I hope you will read my new fanfic when i'll upload it!!

[chichay12]

fausto-san
Pls updte this and i want more mole counting part!hoho!
Looking forward to the next updte!
my god icant wait!! 

[fausto]

Here it is!!!

Part 8

 

Atsuko woke up slowly, disturbed by the sunlight passing through the curtains.
She stretched out her arm to embrace Minami but she only met up cold shits.
"Minami?"
No one anwsered and Atsuko decided to get up to find her. Next to the bed was a giant closet, with a lot of clothes in it. The tall girl looked for something comfortable but that would also look good on her, she couldn't help but think that Minami regretted what she've done the other night.  She chose a white shirt that fell until her knees. Simple.
She walked until the kitchen, still trying to wake up. She leaned against the doorframe of the kitchen, and watched Minami. This one was dressed just with her white boxer and a black tank top.
The captain noticed her girlfriend and smiled brightly.
"Aachan, come and sit, I made you some food! Wow, you're wearing my white shirt...!"
"Yes... "she said as she walked toward her.
"It's like a dream come true, you...naked in my shirt..."
"You sound like a boy^^"
"Well, better do, regarding of my « panties », I look like your boyfriend now. Eat, you need to be strong!"
The leader placed the dish full of cakes on the table.
"Today it's cakes and hot chocolate!" She said with a funny face, giving her a big mug of hot liquid.
"Yum!"
Atsuko rushed on the food because she was really hungry this morning, Minami had draw all her energy in bed. Thinking of it again, the midget was very sexy in this role, with all this boyish energy...
"Minami?"
"Hm?" she answered, busy to wash the dishes and clean up the table.
"How long do we have before going to work?"
"Hm, no more than 30 minutes, we have to hurry."
"Hm", the tall girl pouted,"" I wish we could have time for returning to bed.."
Minami smiled but she didn't seem as tempted as Atsuko, her thoughs were away, focus on the work to do today.  It made the Ace pouting, she wanted her friend to be more lovey dovey in the morning.
"I need to go dress, but promise you will eat at least two cakes and drink all of it!"
"Hm...I will promise that only if you kiss me", said with a seductive tone.
"Aachan, I'm late..."
"Okay, so I stop eating!"
"Erm, fine!"
The leader ran her hand behind the tall girl's neck and pulled her to kiss her quickly. Minami was really in a rush, she had to prepare for work, but touching Atsuko's lips was like stopping time...She couldn't stop kissing her, all the memories of last night was running in her head, and she was beginning to lost her mind. This girl was really fucking her brain!
Finally she stepped back, taking some air.
"Now, eat!"
""Ay!" she said in a cute voice, happy now that she had her kiss.

They left the house right on time. In the taxi they checked their mails and chat about the shedule of the day. Minami was busy, looking at the landscape, thinking about work, they were arrived before they could notice it.

"Well well well, let's see who's here", said Miichan out loud to draw the attention of the team.
"Yo bro!"Screamed Yuko with a terrible accent. "I bet you did some naughty things last night!"
"Yuko! That's not what you should say to your captain!" Replied Minami, outraged.
Yuko ignored her and took her by the arm to extract her some informations.
"Aachan, what did you do? Tell me!"
Minami came to my house and she...
"Atsuko!" Screamed Minami, covering her mouth with her hand. "We just talked and watched a movie."
She stood like this, wainting for Atsuko to understand that it was forbidden to talk about this, the leader was blushing like crazy, and Atsuko seemed not to care. They heard a little sound, it was Mariko who was talking a picture of the two of us.
"It's just a proof for the fans, you know, they want this for so long...^^Just saying..."said Mariko with her trollface.
"EVERYONE!! In position!! We're starting the practice, I don't want to hear about this anymore!!!" screamed Minami, eyes wide open.
She was really uncomfortable with this situation, so she wanted to forget and take the rôle of the captain for the day.

She didn't know but Atsuko wasn't ready to let Minami alone, she wanted to touch her and kiss her, and she was going to do anything to happen to this purpose... And obviously, the pervert one, Yuko, wanted to know all of the details, Mariko wanted to take some pictures and Miichan was ready to take advantage of Atsuko to know the story!
It was going to be a long day for the poor captain...

Hope it's not annoying, the next part should be eventful!!^^

[Haruko]

jajaj poor minami, with all crazy ladies outside its gonna be a nightmare for her.. i wanna know how minami gonna resist the temptation agains atsuko