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Re: LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Chapter 16 (1/20)
« Reply #120 on: January 21, 2013, 04:57:28 AM »
Suzuran and Miichan y 2 are in trouble  :sweat:

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Chapter 16 (1/20)
« Reply #121 on: January 21, 2013, 06:10:07 PM »
Nice update,
Miichan in trouble,
Yuko jealous if Miichan didnt get punish?
Seem there are a lot problem happen,
but about Mocchi Bday?
Takamina and Mocchi got secret huh?
what will happen if Acchan knows that?

Looking forward for the next update.
Ganbatte masu!!

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Chapter 16 (1/20)
« Reply #122 on: January 22, 2013, 06:34:16 AM »
my first time reading this fanfic
and is really cool, sweet, great, everything.  :wub:
you do really well.  :twothumbs
I'm waiting the next chapter.  :D

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Chapter 16 (1/20)
« Reply #123 on: January 23, 2013, 12:14:47 AM »
Hehehe... Miichan... making someone love live in pinch...

well what's going to happen next with everyone... i.e. TomoTomo is okay, TsuYagi still in trouble...

Anyhow, interesting development there... Thank you

Hope to see the next

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LovelyPeace -- Saisho no Mail (Aki/Mocchi) (3/10)
« Reply #124 on: March 10, 2013, 06:21:26 AM »
Saisho no Mail – (Akicha/Mocchi) One Shot

“I wanted to see you, too…”

Kuramochi Asuka sighed, sitting in her long abandoned classroom. All of her classmates were in their rooms or doing club activities while she was alone, moping.

"I feel like I rarely see you," Asuka said to her roommate, Takajo Aki.

"We're in the same class, and dorm, but it feels like we're so distant."

"I've felt the same actually," Aki said.

"Really?" Asuka asked.

"Yeah. It's this longing feeling," Aki said with her hands at her chest. She could feel her heart beating faster.

Asuka blushed. "What do you mean?"

Now Aki blushed not knowing how to answer without sounding like she was in love... with Asuka.

Aki looked up at Asuka before turning away. "Mocchi, do you love me?"

Before Asuka could answer, a girl with long, wavy black hair came running towards them.

"I finally found you, Akicha!" Kitahara Rie said, clinging to Aki's arm. "Hey, Mocchi!"

"Hey, Kitarie," Asuka said, glad that she was saved from answering, but at the same time frustrated.

"Akicha, I thought you were going to the movies with us? We’ve been waiting,” Rie asked.

“Ah, it’s already that time?!” Aki asked.

“Where’s your cell phone? We tried contacting you,” Rie asked.

“Right now it’s charging. I’ll catch up with you in a while,” Aki said.

“Great! Oh, hey, Mocchi, why don’t you come with us?” Rie asked before turning to leave.

“No thanks. I don’t feel like watching a movie,” Asuka said.

“I see… well, you’re welcome if you change your mind!” Rie said as she ran off.

“Akicha should just go to the movies now,” Asuka said.

“But, I want to know. How do you feel about me?” Aki said as she held Asuka’s arm.

“You’re just a really good friend! So… I have to go!” Asuka pulled and went off to her room.

“Mocchi…” Aki sighed sadly.

“Akicha~! We’re going to be late!” Sashihara Rino yelled from the end of the hall.

“I’m coming!” Aki ran towards her friends and got ready to leave.

“So Mocchi didn’t change her mind?” Rino asked.

“No… she’s as stubborn as ever…” Aki said as RinoRie exchanged looks.

“Well, let’s see the movie!” Rino said, swinging her arm around Aki.

“Yeah, yeah! Snacks are on Sasshi, right?” Rie asked.

“Eh, why is it always me?!” Rino asked as the other girls laughed. 

Asuka, on the other hand, was looking at them through the crack of her door. She closed it and leaned back. “Why didn’t I tell her…?”

Asuka noticed Aki’s cell phone charging on her nightstand and idea came to her. She went over and picked it up, opening a new text message. 

“With this I have a chance…”


So now on the following day, Asuka was still waiting for Aki to read her message. Aki was so tired from when she came back, that she went to sleep before checking her phone. Asuka didn’t want to wake her to be rejected.

I hope we could still be friends at least, Asuka thought before sitting up straight in her desk. She then noticed the girl standing at the door. “Akicha!”

“What are you doing in such a place?” Aki asked as she sat on top of the desk Asuka was sitting in.

“I thought it was peaceful… the sunset shining in the windows,” Asuka said.

“Don’t tell me you’ve been here since class ended?!” Aki asked.

“Eh, is it that bad?” Asuka asked.

“Mou…” Aki sighed before her expression changed. “I saw your text.”

“… You really read it?” Asuka asked.

“Yeah. Why did you lie?” Aki asked.

“Gomen!  I know that I probably hurt you! But,” Asuka stopped. When did Aki lean so close to her? “Akicha…”

“I can say it now,” Aki said. “These feelings… are love, and I love Mocchi.”

Once Aki stopped talking, Asuka kissed her. That was all she needed to hear.

“M-Mocchi… at least say something first,” Aki said.

“I love you so much, that the thought of you rejecting me was ripping my heart apart,” Asuka said.

“Even if things were different, I would never want to lose you as a friend,” Aki said.

“So we’re dating?” Asuka said.

“You’re really asking me that…?” Aki asked.

“I’m joking! From now on, you’re my girlfriend~,” Asuka said, starting to kiss her again, but kissed her ear instead.
 
“Ah~, Mocchi! Stop that~!” Aki whined, but Mocchi held her tight.

“Just for a while~,” Asuka said. “Akicha’s ears… are so great after all.”

Though Aki continued complaining, she eventually started to like the feeling. She liked it so much that she was afraid she might moan out loud.
 
“M-Mocchi… isn’t that enough? Y-You’re making me feel weird,” Aki said.
 
“Ah, gomen. Is your ear sore?” Asuka asked.

“No, but that’s not the problem…”  Aki blushed.

“Did you… get turned on?” Asuka asked.

“Maybe…” Aki said softly which interested Asuka. “No way! I won’t let you do it again!” Aki covered her ears.

“I didn’t even say anything! Ah, Sasshi!” Asuka said, noticing Rino and Rie at the door.

“Eh? S-Sasshi! Kitarie!” Aki said. “What are you two doing here?”

“My bag’s in here,” Rino said. “We would of walked right in, but we heard you two talking just now so we stopped.”

“Try to forget it!” Aki said.

“It looks liked the two of you worked things out,” Rie said.

“Yeah, well, we will leave you alone so you can continue,” Rino said.

“Don’t be too loud, other people may come in,” Rie said as the girls walked out the class laughing.

“We won’t do anything like that here! Right, Akicha?” Asuka asked.

“Um…” Aki said nervously, gripping the edge of her skirt.

“A-Akicha? Are you serious?” Asuka asked, blushing.

Aki stood up and pulled Asuka to the corner of the room and kissed her, longer than the first two. “I know I’ll regret this, but at the same time, I don’t care.”

Asuka was still surprised, but she wrapped her arms around Aki’s waist, pulling her closer. “Don’t blame me later.”

Aki nodded before kissing her again. “I’ll blame Sasshi and Kitarie… then you.”

~
Dont worry! AKB High's next chapter is still underway! I had to post something to make up for such a long time. Ah, and this is set in AKB High, by the way! And they will appear in the real story! But how? (And Sayaka still plays a part~) The same as this? I don't know~  Oh, and the title is that group's song, right? (Though honestly i dislike it lol) :heart: :peace:
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Re: LovelyPeace -- Saisho no Mail (Aki/Mocchi) (3/10)
« Reply #125 on: March 10, 2013, 06:29:29 AM »
I really like Mocchi and this kinda mixed some great feelings between the two

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Saisho no Mail (Aki/Mocchi) (3/10)
« Reply #126 on: March 10, 2013, 11:15:00 AM »
Thank you for update
This moment is so sweet  :heart:
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Re: LovelyPeace -- Saisho no Mail (Aki/Mocchi) (3/10)
« Reply #127 on: March 10, 2013, 01:06:02 PM »
Since akicha transfered to jkt48 she is now officially my oshimen! And this one shot is SO OH LOVELY! Me LOVE it soo much >///< aaaa me miss akicha so much >< hope I can see her at 20 march on theater.. Thanks for this lovely one shot.. Kyaaa kyaaaa x) :bow:

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Saisho no Mail (Aki/Mocchi) (3/10)
« Reply #128 on: March 10, 2013, 02:39:22 PM »
I'm sitting with some other people I know and is reading this on my phone
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I'm sitting here and is smiling like some crazy hentai

Yeaaaa!!!! There isn't many AkiMocchi(?) fanfics >~<

T~T shipping them!

Please update the fic soon!!

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Saisho no Mail (Aki/Mocchi) (3/10)
« Reply #129 on: March 10, 2013, 06:05:30 PM »
nice update,
so this was actually happened about Aki & Mocchi,
but what about the secret of Takamina & Mocchi?
their moment was nice,
Rino & Rie was so evil,
would they tease them??

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Saisho no Mail (Aki/Mocchi) (3/10)
« Reply #130 on: March 11, 2013, 07:16:04 AM »
Yay :luvluv2: an aki/mocchi story
It's so adorable
And I loved the sweet moment between TomoTomo :nya:

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Chapter 17 Part 1

“What were you thinking, Miichan?” Atsuko asked.

“I was just playing around! I kissed plenty of other girls before,” Miichan said.

“While lying on top of them on a bed?” Yuko asked. 

“Well… counting Suzuran only Mariko~,” Miichan blushed.

“I can’t believe you!” Takamina said. “What would of happen if Yuko and Mariya didn’t come?”

“I said it was just a kiss, a kiss,” Miichan said. “Why won’t you see my point?”

“What about Suzuran and Mariya?” Takamina asked. 

“They’ll be fine! Suzuran just has to explain that it was a misunderstanding,” Miichan said.

“But, you just seen them arguing a short while ago,” Atsuko said.

 “Yeah, Mariya was about to try and apologize,” Yuko said.

“Mariko will be disappointed,” Takamina said.

“Eh, wait!” Miichan said.

“Yeah, and weren’t you the one all jealous about Mariko flirting with Nyan-Nyan?” Yuko asked. “Though I can’t say I like it either…”

“It’s not my fault they’re arguing, and I find Suzuran attractive so I flirted with her! It’s not my fault I miss Mariko!” Miichan exclaimed before running out and going into her dorm room.

“Miichan…” Atsuko said sadly.

“That’s why she did it. She missed Mariko so she used Suzuran in her place,” Yuko said.

“Minami, maybe you should lighten up on Miichan a little,” Atsuko said.

“Yeah, go apologize!” Yuko said.

“You’re acting like I’m the only one who was criticizing her!” Takamina said.

“You know Miichan the best,” Atsuko said. 

“Yeah, W-Minami,” Yuko added.

“…Fine, I’ll go,” Takamina said before going out the room.

Meanwhile, Suzuran was walking down the hallway, depressed. Mariya had locked her dorm door, and Juri wasn’t in there to convince her to unlock it, so she decided to just leave her alone for a while.

“Ranran? What are you doing?”

“Shima-chan?” Suzuran turned around to see Shimada Haruka in front of her.

“Your face was a little scary looking, what’s up?” Haruu asked.

“Shima-chan~! What am I going to do? Yagi’s super mad!” Suzuran whined.

“Calm down, Ranran!” Haruu laughed. “Want to go the school roof?”

“Roof?” Suzuran asked.

“It might help you feel better,” Haruu said, holding out her hand.

“Okay,” Suzuran pouted, before taking Haruu’s hand and walking with her to the stairs that led to the school rooftop. “You can see all of Tokyo!”

“If you come up here at night, it’s really pretty,” Haruu said.

“Eh… I want to see it,” Suzuran said.

“So, what happened with Yagi?” Haruu asked.

“Mou, I was getting over that!” Suzuran said before sighing. “Tell everything?”

“Yeah,” Haruu said.

So, Suzuran told everything that happened, to her first fight with Mariya, to the encounter with Miichan in the nurse’s office.

“I knew it was wrong, but I just wanted to kiss her one more time,” Suzuran said.

“Was it the same as kissing Yagi?” Haruu asked.

“No, it was completely different,” Suzuran said. “No offense to Minegishi-senpai, but Yagi’s lips is more... yeah.”

“Don’t just stop halfway!” Haruu sighed.

“You know what I mean~!” Suzuran said.

“I never kissed Mariyagi before so I don’t, actually,” Haruu said.

“It’s like from Yagi’s kisses, I feel really loved,” Suzuran said. “I didn’t feel that with Minegishi-senpai.”

“Then tell that to Yagi,” Haruu said.

“But she won’t let me in her room! She ignores my calls, texts, & emails!” Suzuran said, gripping the fence that surrounded the roof.

“You’re not thinking of climbing over, are you?” Haruu asked, walking beside her.

“No, but that’s a good idea…” Suzuran said.

“It isn’t!” Haruu said.

“Minegishi-senpai is a senpai I really adore, but I want Yagi to stay as my girlfriend,” Suzuran said, her voice cracking due to tearing up.

“Ranran…” Haruu placed her hand on her shoulder. “I’m sure everything will be fine. Just give it some time.”

“Shima-chan, arigato~,” Suzuran said, turning around to hug her.

“You’re welcome, so stop crying already,” Haruu said.

~
Hai! I cut the chapter in half since i could not post the full story yet. Part 2 will come... someday. Ah, an April Fools joke? Thats mean~ i thought something happenned~~!! :heart: :peace:
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Re: LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Chapter 17 Part 1 (4/1)
« Reply #133 on: April 02, 2013, 11:43:47 AM »
Ara... Miichan is such a childish sempai...

Using Suzuran... as a replacement for Mariko

Although Suzuran seems to also want to try...

So the fault is on both of them...

Ah... Yagi please forgive Suzuran... She really likes you lots

And Mariko... go flirt with Miichan soon....

Great update.... Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

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You finally updated!!!  :onionwhip:

Hai! I cut the chapter in half since i could not post the full story yet. Part 2 will come... someday.  And no i did not change my name to "fully and truly embrace and cherishlyPeace"!!! I do not know what happened, and i cant change it, and i didn't change it in the first place!! What should i do~~~?! :heart: :peace:

Ah about that! It is for April Fool Day, you know!  XD
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When I read i find strange word 'posterior' so i want to ask everybody in that fanfic discussion but someone asked already about it so i scrolled down and find answer that it is prank for April Fool Day  XD

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Chapter 17 Part 1 (4/1)
« Reply #135 on: April 03, 2013, 06:54:45 AM »
aww fix it!!

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Chapter 17 Part 1 (4/1)
« Reply #136 on: April 10, 2013, 06:22:32 PM »
nice update,
so what will happen next?

looking forward for the next update.

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LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Ch. 17 Part 2 (5/31)
« Reply #137 on: May 31, 2013, 10:21:20 PM »
~ Part 2

Inside the school, Juri found herself in the library searching for a manga book. She had intended to help Mariya trust Suzuran again, but Mariya said that Juri didn’t have to try so hard.

I guess they’ll be fine, Juri thought as she found the manga she was looking for. As she soon as she turned around, Juri bumped into another girl who was walking towards her, knocking the girl down.

“That hurt…” Juri whined, holding her face, the manga now on the floor. She looked down to see a girl she never seen before, rubbing her own head in pain.

“That hurt, you know!” the girl exclaimed.

“G-Gomen nasai! I didn’t see you,” Juri said, extending her hand.

“Well, I guess it’s my fault, too,” Kawaei Rina took Juri’s hand and got back on her feet.

“I’m Takahashi Juri,” Juri said before picking up the manga.

“Kawaei Rina,” Ricchan said. “Are you going to check that manga out? I wanted it~!”

“Well, I was. But I was going to stay here and read it for a while,” Juri said. “We can share it.”

“Really? I’d like that a lot!” Ricchan said.

“Yeah, I don’t mind,” Juri said, finding herself blushing.

JuRicchan found a table and sat side by side.

“Kawaei-san, you don’t seem like the type to read shoujo manga,” Juri said.

“I know that! But, I like it anyway…” Ricchan said.

Soon, an hour had passed, and Juri and Ricchan didn’t even realize it. They managed to finish the whole manga.

“It was great, right~?” Ricchan asked.

“Yeah, now we don’t even have to take it out anymore,” Juri said.

“But, when you fell earlier, you should have seen your face! It was so funny!” Ricchan said, imitating Juri’s reaction.

“Kawaei-san, that’s mean~!” Juri laughed.

“Then, why are you laughing?” Ricchan asked.

“Because you looked funny,” Juri said.

“My friends always say I have funny reactions,” Ricchan said.

“Kawaei-san, I’ve been meaning to ask, what grade are you in?” Juri asked.

“I’m a second-year,” Ricchan said,

“Eh?! I thought you were a first-year like me!” Juri said.

“I’m not!” Ricchan said. “Can’t there be one person who gets my age right?!”

“I didn’t mean to offend you!” Juri said.

“It is fine… unfortunately, I’m used to it,” Ricchan said, smiling a little.

“Hey, Kawaei-san, let’s exchange numbers,” Juri said.

“Okay, but only if you call me Ricchan from now on,” Ricchan said.

“Okay, Ricchan,” Juri said, handing Ricchan her phone.

“Hey, is this you at Disneyland?” Ricchan asked, looking at Juri’s wallpaper.

“Yeah. I went with some friends during the summer,” Juri said.

 “Maybe one day we can go together,” Ricchan said.

“Yeah, that sounds fun,” Juri said, smiling at Ricchan. I just met her, but I feel so comfortable around her…

“Juri? Earth to Juri!” Ricchan said, waving her hand in front of Juri’s face.

“Eh? Oh, was I spacing out?” Juri asked.

“Yeah, you know you looked kind of creepy,” Ricchan said.

“Creepy?” Juri asked.

“It’s like your eyes are dead,” Ricchan said.

“I can’t help that!” Juri pouted.

“You’re cute~,” Ricchan got up with the manga and went to put it away.

“E-Eh?!” Juri blushed, quickly standing up.

“Come on, let’s find another a manga,” Ricchan said.

“Sure,” Juri said. Maybe I am…

~
Hai! A small update! I'm sorry! But its JuRicchan~~ yay!  :twothumbs Since there are so many girls and pairings. Like... a chapter for each pairing? And i'll try to make them as detailed as i can (which i am bad at).

Also, back when i started this fanfic i didnt follow NMB, but now that i follow them more, i decided to add: SayaMilky, AiNana, Maachun/Ripopo, Fuuchan/Keicchi/Airi.  :heart: :peace:

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Ch. 17 Part 2 (5/31)
« Reply #138 on: May 31, 2013, 10:32:28 PM »
Kawaii~~~~ but I don't remember the plot... sad... will go reread...
hrm... kawaii~ kawaii~ yay~ I don't know how to comment, but yay~
I don't really know Juri and Riichan's characters... so hrm~

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Re: LovelyPeace -- Akihabara Girls High School: Ch. 17 Part 2 (5/31)
« Reply #139 on: June 01, 2013, 04:25:46 PM »
Thank you for update :)
Jurichan is cute
Please update soon  ;)

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