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Begginer. COMPLETE.
« on: August 12, 2012, 03:53:49 PM »
'I love you!'  The crying girl shoted as she hugged her loved one
'I know.......but I dont love you anymore.Its time to move on.' her lover said as she tryed to push her away gently

The crying one fell on her knees and continued to cry.....I only watch from a distance the exchange.What can I do? I am only a cat......

They broke up......the one how left was the one how said that she found another.

The one how remained continued to cry for days.And she stoped smiling.

I loved her smile......

'If I canceal myself, I will lose everything, but its alright.' making this vow I fell in love with a human.

I am a black cat, my owner named me Black. I fell in love with my owner and I couldnt do anything about it.After all Iam just a black cat.

But I want to see again her smile.....Matsui Rnea,my owner had always had a beautiful smile.A smile that made her shine.

And the only person that can bring her smile was the person she loves,Matsui Jurina, how left her.She left her for another....Watanabe Mayu....how too was in love with someone else...

I fell in love with a human, such is a bakeneko's story.

Ah, the sweet melody of sorrow.Humans are sinful creatures, they lie,steal, and pretend.

I only made one sin in all my life until now,I fell in love with a human.

You sit and look outside.I come closer trying to comfort you,and you pat ,and stroke me but never smile.Its like you lost your soul.....

For you, how lost your lover

I wanted to bring back your smile

So I decided ,I will take her form and live .

I look up at the sky from inside my hood.

I pledged to the full moon.I will make you happy surely.....


You had broken down, crying .So I embraced you tinghtly and said

'I wont leave you anymore'

Ah,god.....I am so cruel....

I close my cold eyes.

We embrace and when you calm down you pull away and stroke my cheek.A smile formed on your face....

'Jurina.....I am so happy that you come back.' You say and hold me close.....



'I had to pretend I had memory loss,'

I wispher as I look out the window, to the sky where the moon is shining.

'But, for the sake of your smile,'

Behind me is you how are smiling .Your eyes are sparking, my beautiful Rena.

'All lies and sins can be forgiven'   I give you a red flower and you happy accept it.The smile never disappearing.

'thats what I feel'

Ah,sweet melody of love....how can I lets you go now?

The red flower makes me remember my original form.....I am a black cat...


We lived for 4 months together,and your smile never disappeared.But you never know how much 'I' love you not Matsui Jurina...

One night, you spoke to me

With your hand close to my face,you stroked my cheek.

'hey, your eyes   are different to hers ' the shock could be seen on my face a little.

Yes, I know it will happen at a moment.My eyes have always been cold, not like hers, always happy.

The shadow over my eyes was visible.

You come closer and hug me ,continuing to say

'...but it doesn't matter'

I was trembling ,you embraced me,and cried

'dont leave me alone any more'  you hold me tightly 'I feel in love with you..'

Ah,god

This is my punishment ,is it not?


I close my eyes and hold my hands on my neck

My disguise is peeling away

My ears come out

And I lose my ability to speak

I look aver at you,how holds a hand over your month with a shocked face.I know this will happen too,and I still took the risk and become human.

I become a black cat again, as I run away, you spoke to my back,and said

'Thank you'

as you try to run after me....


The risk to become human ....I accepted it and fell in love with you...

Ah,I have comited such sins

so please, hate me all you wish......

THE END.
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« Last Edit: April 16, 2013, 08:31:49 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Bakeneko (Wmatsui--RenaBlack one-shot)
« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2012, 04:17:53 PM »
what a story  :pleeease:
what a sad story  :fainted:
I wonder what happened after  :dunno:
I can't know 'cause it's a one shot  :stoned:

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Re: Bakeneko (Wmatsui--RenaBlack one-shot)
« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2012, 05:07:46 PM »
just one comment....damn! and I was thinking on doing more one shots like this! the next one being Asumina.......

ahhhh~ whatever! Im going back at working on my next chapter for Love puppy.Maybe I can burn some brains~
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Bakeneko (Wmatsui--RenaBlack one-shot)
« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2012, 05:33:29 PM »
yea yea you should finish the chapter  :on comhere:

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Re: Bakeneko (Wmatsui--RenaBlack one-shot)
« Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 05:20:51 PM »
sad story...nooooo noooo  :banghead:
please update this fanfic....i don't want sad story....
arigatoooo....

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Re: Bakeneko (Wmatsui--RenaBlack one-shot)
« Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 05:57:26 PM »
Ahhh I love this story especially the ending, it really good :]

Sometimes love is cruel but they still decided to take it xD

Thank you, the story is beautiful <3

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Re: Bakeneko (Wmatsui--RenaBlack one-shot)
« Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 06:21:22 PM »
Ah~ i like the way you put YukiRena here! It's very interesting! Make it an one shot is good enough :x

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Re: Bakeneko (Wmatsui--RenaBlack one-shot)
« Reply #7 on: August 24, 2012, 08:26:31 PM »
                                                                                  The end.


I wanted to have you to myself, I wanted to feel you more.I wanted to be your and you mine.I wanted you to only see me, to anly love me, to only think about me.

This what was wrong..........MY LOVE FOR YOU. it was wrong in every way possible.

I was close to you, I was the closest to you.I had you all to myself from time to time........

But soon I realized that it will end someday.......when Atsuko announced the graduation. I know that someday you will graduate too, and me too.

The parting would be too ....too scary, hurtfull, it will destry me.....it will the 'me' from now.

I remembered in that moment that I am not a boy, that I cant be with you, that you only see me as a doughter......

I am NOT a BOY.

So our ending will hurt 'me' the must...

you ....will have a boyfriend, will marry, will have a real doughter!

'I' ....the 'me' from now will probably die.

So before that will happen, 'I' will disappear so 'I', the new 'me' will bear everything.

The new 'me' wount care so much aabout you, and the LOVE will disappear.

This forbiden and unrequested love/lust for you will disappear.

So now at TOKYO DOME, when Aki-P announted the teams.....I am grateful to him.....its hurting , but this is the push 'I' need to become the new 'me'!

Now 'I' say good bye to you ....

Now, 'i' ,Watanabe Mayu, say goodbye to 'you' Kashiwagi Yuki.......

Good bye to the old 'me' that loved you.....and welcome to the new 'me' that only sees you as an old friend......

Sayonara.

This is the E-N-D.
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: The end. (Mayuki)
« Reply #8 on: August 24, 2012, 09:00:13 PM »
im still shock with the transfer and this breaks my heart :(

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Re: The end. (Mayuki)
« Reply #9 on: August 24, 2012, 09:49:38 PM »
T_T Mayuki!!!!

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Re: The end. (Mayuki)
« Reply #10 on: August 25, 2012, 09:24:50 PM »
                                                                         I want my happy end!

So...thats it.....it just ended like that didnt it? 6 years wherent nothing for them all, for Aki-P or the others members......but for me these past 6 years where everything....

I hold dears these years I spend with you and dont want them to end....

I ...dont want a BAD END......I want my HAPPY END! So I will make it myself!

Even though I am no longer Team b's captain! even if you are no longer my Ace! I dont care about it!

I dont need you to by my ace, not my friend, not my daughter! I need 'you' to by mine!

Even thought I cryed when I heard that you wont with me anymore....that was the push for me to confess........

Tonight I will confess to 'you, finally! This love that I feel.....is more than a mother-doughter love.....its more than friend ship.....its more than ....than what I could ever dream! I love with my everything so I will confess finally, before 'you' will be gone.

And even if it is unrequested I dont care.........I will love you from distance.....you will be my only love! Even if someday I will marry, I will still love you! even if I will have a doughter!.....if I will have a doughter ever then I will name her after you......my lovely ace....


I wait until we are alone after after everythings end....I hope I am not too late....

I aproach you silently and you greet me but I hid my mouth .....I hope my voice wont break....

'so....we arent in the same time anymore...' you break the silence as I still try to calm myself....

'y-yes....but we will still see each other,right?' I ask shakingly

'of course! no one could replace Yukirin! ' you say then look down at your feets thinking

'Im happy then, Mayuyu....my little dau---' I start trying to gain more time but you stop me

'dont! dont call me your daughter.......you are not my mother...' I froze, these hurtful words crush my heart.....but I wont give up! I will still confess to you my dear !

'Mayu.....wh--'

'I...have something to tell you Yukirin.....' You look up in my eyes with determination.

Something is starting to move, in this world maybe I will have the happyness I wish for?

'I have something to tell you too Mayu..' we look at each other, waiting for one of us to say something

I give up.....I must tell you now or I wont tell it anymore for this eternity....

'I lov---' but I never finished my words as I felt something soft on my lips, my eyes widen in shock! You are kissing me.....my Mayu!

You broke the kiss to soon, I couldnt even kiss you back.....why so fast?

You turn your back 'Ma--' and once again you stop me

'I ...I wanted a kiss at least.....I truly wanted to confess....but , I will tell you anyway before 'I' disappear' You turn once again to me

'I.....Yukirin, I dont want to be your daughter.....I want more.....more than you will ever give me....but now that we are finally going separate.I will walk my own path......but I want at least to confess these unrequested feelings.'

you take a deep breath and I watch you breatheless.....could it be?! You do too? finally...

'I love you, Kashiwaki Yuki....' you whisper with a sad smile....

Iam frozen from happyness but you dont know that and in your eyes I can see the love disappearing......I can see 'you', the 'you' from now disappearing and becoming something I never want to see......

I shock from the froze and when you turn around to run, I hold your wrist and turn you back

locking our lips in out first kiss as a ....couple......

I can confess , these unrequested feeling ......Finally!

'I love you too, Watanabe Mayu!!'


THE TRUE END!!!!!!

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I finally calmed down after a day on learning knowing that there is not CaptaixAce and at the end I readed some good storyes that made me happy, and I realized 'THIS IS NOT THE END! THIS IS JUST A CHANGE OF THE GAME! STAY CALM AND SHIP MAYUKI!!!!1' i TOLD TO MYSELF so I wrote this......

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« Last Edit: August 26, 2012, 05:29:47 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: The end. (Mayuki) I want my happy end!
« Reply #11 on: August 25, 2012, 11:18:57 PM »
yuuki-chan I love this end  :gyaaah: :fainted:

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Re: The end. (Mayuki) I want my happy end!
« Reply #12 on: August 26, 2012, 04:26:35 PM »
Your comment in the end it is really the light of the true!!

Really good end !!!!
Mayukiiiiiiii !!!!!!!

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Re: The end. (Mayuki) I want my happy end!
« Reply #13 on: August 26, 2012, 05:08:33 PM »
Great that you finally sorted out your feelings! :thumbsup I'm happy for you :deco:

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Re: The end. (Mayuki) I want my happy end!
« Reply #14 on: September 04, 2012, 09:57:48 PM »
   Perfect crime




I am Watanabe Mayu, a 17 years old girl and this is my story.At the age of 14 I was seduced.

My father owns a big company and is known, my mother is a designer and I am to be the one how will take my fathers company, and with my talent from my mother I plan on making big things.Things for which people will remember me, they will know me when my name will be told.I have ambition, and big plans, talent, known parents and everything.Everything would want .

But ......at the age of 14 years, I meet someone how didnt want them.She didnt want money,to be famous, to have everything.She only wanted something she shouldnt.She wanted ME.

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I was with my parents at a party on a night.It was almost my birthday, just a few months away.I was happy, the party wasnt a bussiness one, and there where others my age too.

'Mayuyu! look, that lady looks hot!' Oshima Yuki, my best friend was telling me as she pointed at a girl of 20 years, how didnt look focused, she seemed to think about something or just to not care about the party.Yuko was looking at her with sparks in her eyes, she found someone that interested her.

'Yuko, dont you think she is a little too older? She looks like 20! we're just 14...' I try to explain her so she wont start doing stupid things but she stops me smirking

'heh you say that, but that lady there is looking at you like you're food!' she says pointing a second behind my back then smirking and turning .
I look at my back .That was the first mistake I made.

I should have never looked back.But I did, in my inocence I did it, and at 10 steps away at a table was a girl.A girl? A woman if I can call her that.

Her black hair was one of a feline, it was straight and soft.Her dress was a simple one, that fit her body so well, showing her long and luscious legs.It was fit on her chest too, showing its perfect form and making you want to touch it and fall in sin.Her face....her stunning smile was directed to me, she was looking in my direction.I stoped breathing, her dark eyes where pools that pulled me in a prison, I averted my eyes to escape before I fell.She was and is a godness.

I take a last peck at her eyes and see her wink at me.I blush and turn my back again.Looking at my friend Yuko, I take her hand and say
'Doesnt matter! I dont want problems so lets go.' But she pulls my hand and I look at her confused

She smirks, a smirk I started to hate in that moment.
'Too late! ' she says and whispers in my ear 'good luck! that lady is coming this way~ ' and then without waiting for my answer she walks away.

I didnt move......because before I could run away she was alredy in front of me.The godness smiled down at me and I blushed a little but tried to keep my pokerface on, a emotionless face that could trick anyone.

'Hello, little princess....' she said in a whisper with her sensual voice that send shivers on my spine.I look up and mentain the poker face
'can I help you miss?' I ask politely
She smiles at me 'yes you can.'
I wait for her to continue only to froze at the end
'Can you give me your heart~?' she sais and licks her lips at me before winking

My poker face almost disappears in the air, as the blush is still on my face.She brings a hand up to my face and stokes my cheek, smiling all the way.I was about to turn and run away,.....that was the best to do.But I was to slow.

My father comes from behind her and they start talking, I want to go away but she takes my hand and refuses to lets go.
After 4 minutes in witch I didnt know what they talked about my father turns to me and says smiling
'Mayu! good news. This is Kashiwagi Yuki, she wants to take you for 2 months, she said she can make you have ambition.I want to see this happening, so tomorrow you are going with her!'

And that was it......I was left wide eyes and mouth open as my father and Yuki had gone to talk more.

The problem then was simple, I didnt have ambition then.All that I wanted was to play games,read manga and sleep.I wanted to become a mangaka but my father didnt want that.He said I was talented and that I should do something that will make people remember me.But I didnt want, I lackd ambition.

So when he heard that she ,Yuki , can make me have ambiton then he was truly happy, he accepted and send me with her for 2 moths.

But he didnt know that it come with a priece.

I was taken away, to a apartment.She had said that she lived there even if I didnt believe her.In the first week she had done noting but take care of me.Sh let me read manga, watch tv and do whatever I want as long as I was close to her.I didnt know what she was doing, she was studying me.She was looking at what I like and what I dont.She was hunting me.

I also learned a little about her, she was truly just turned 19, witch surprised me.But I fond too little about her, because I didnt care, while she had studyed my every move.

The next week the hunting had started.

She had started hugging me and touching me, making me uncomfortable at first but after a while I felt good having her close.Then starting to feed me, then sleep in the same bed.Things where happening too fast.I couldnt see the truth behind her smiling face.

I felt enchanted as she hugged me on the bed.It was like she had put a spell on me, I starting hugging ,sleeping in her bed and more when I missed her warmth.But I didnt know what was happening with me.....

We become good friends in a very short time.I could tell that more than best friends.I was seduced.I didnt know it but I starting to want more, to be with Yuki more, and the time was runing out.

But one night it hit me.
'Ne, Yukirin? what is that was your real plan? ' I ask her out of the blue as we hug in her bed.
'hmmm~' She has her eyes closed with a smile 'my plan? '

'I didnt have a real plan at the start.....but then I wanted to feel you, to be with you....to fall for you' she said and I froze.What did she want to do to me?
I looked up at her and she opens her eyes.

'Because of you, going down' she whispers and moves one of her hands to rub my back
'nothing really,I never wanted to do anything' she smiles sensualy 'nothing ,but the Perfect Crime'

't-the Perfect crime?' I speak shaking
She nodds and rubs her nose to mine, we were that close.....I could feel her breath on my face.The rubbing made me relax but I continued to stare in her dark pools that captured me.

I fell asleep, her warmth invading me.

We continued like always, going out one night she whispered
'The night tempted the delusions of black hearts while the city sleeps.In this time I want to go crazy.....' she turns to me with the same gentle smile 'but first I want perfection....then I can go wild without carring'

I looked at her confused but she just kissed me on the cheek and hugged me close.

Then she lifts my chin and kisses me on the lips.......
In that moment I become aware.
But when has it began?

These how are unskillful will keep sinking into this deep sea of sin.

Thinking that I closed my eyes and kissed her back.

From then on we wherent friends anymore......I couldnt call us friends anymore.She would stole kisses from me , in any moment she wanted, and I wont say anything about it.I loved her taste.

One night while we were hugging and watching tv, she turned her head and kissed me.But it wasnt short, it was sensual, forcing her tongue in my mouth.I was under a spell again, and my hand had started moving on their own , moving on her body and groping, caresing and hiting.

As I was moving my hands on her body I heard her whisper, for a second when I stoped
'Don't stop....touching..'

But I stoped.I realized what I was doing and stoped.I pushed her away and run into the room and in my bed.That night she hadnt come to sleep in my bed.I felt empty, so I decided to ignore what had happened so I wont lose her.


The next morning you wherent smiling anmore.....I was eating breakfast and looking at you , you didnt look back at me that morning, not until I made a move.
I finished eating and stoped beside your chair.You were reading a book, not even bothering to look at me or talk to me.
'Past the doors into you deep mind, can I take a look there?'
These words where something told from my heart, I wanted to know what was really going on in your mind, to know what did you really conside me....

You smiled.That was the single reaction I got, but I thought it was more than enough, to see you happy.

Her lips where sweet and sorrowful, they where Temptation.
Her favorite question for me had become 'can I obtain from you that which is not allowed?'

My answer being always a kiss.

I finally thought that your obssesion for me was and Imitation, your oh so called 'love'. I finally know what the Perfect crime was.To make someone fall in love with you, to seduce and screw them, you wanted to do this to a minor.It wouldnt be named a crime if the said minor would fall for you,would be seduced and would take your virginity.It was a crime, but like that you would gain perfection, and you wanted me to give it to you.This was the perfect crime.

But what could I do? only a 14 years girl with no ambition.If only I had ambition then I could have stoped you somehow.....but from what? from seducing me? you alredy did that.....from making me fall in love? I am alredy in love with you.....from making me take your virginity?...I want to take it.....


I gently put ripe fruits into your mouth, Realizing the moment again but we cant go back. With us being in this bed, your head on my lap.I  couldnt do nothing about it.

Trying everything so I may forget, you made me feel happyness and sadness in the same time.I wanted answers but when you saw my searching eyes  you sat up and said
'Its better to wait now and search for the right answer later'
you turned to me and slowly you put yourself on top of me....

I felt it, we were both confused.As you kissed me, our become one.Was it love? I think then you started asking yourself.Were you really doing it only for pleasure? for the perfect crime? or have you fallen for me too?

We began a dance of love in that bed.Our hands moving on each others body.

Time was fast, and you were under me, naked and looking indecise.I stoped and asked one last time
'Are you sure?'

You smile your stunning smile and putting your hands around my neck say
'I'm sure'
Then no longer unsure and waiting, going into the depths, I enter inside you and take the flower away.

You were not a girl anymore...you were a woman.

'You have now obtained perfection'

That were my last words before I found myself the next day in my bed,home.

You have obtained what you wanted, and did the Perfect crime.You left me loving you, obssesing over you.

That made my ambition appear.I wanted to meet you again in the future  and seduce you .

I am almost sure you had fell in love with me too.But you have left so suddely that I was mad, I wanted you to be mine.

So I had ambition.My father was very happy, I decided to finally leave my stupid dreams about becoming a mangaka and took after his steps, my mother was happy too.You have made them happy .But you have made me dangerous.

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Now at the age of 17, I step after my father and search for you.I will have you.I am certain of that.That is my ambition.

I felt your everything, you had done the perfect crime.

But left no evidence.No one could tell that someone had done anything to my body......but my mind was changed completly.

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18, is the number where I become an adult right? Now I am an adult.I have 18, and wait for the party to end.

Its a big party ,my parents happy with what I done in the last years, they would have done anything to make me happy now.They had seen the change after a while and didnt like it.

I was more emotionless that before, more less talking, never smiling.There was nothing that made me happy......or so they said.Yuki made me happy.She was the only one that could.

I sit at a table and drink some orange juice, my favorite.Even if I become an adult I still prefer the drink you would give me saying that it should make me happy.But it never did ,because you are not with me.

'Hello, my king' I hear a voice say but dont care about it and ignore it.I didnt feel like talking to no one .....I only wanted my Yukirin....

I feel hands around my neck and a head is resting on my shoulder.
'How is my little princess doing inside?' the voice sais again now more sensualy
'go away' I say annoyed
'hhmmm~ ' the person licks my ear 'but...I wanted to give you a taste of my perfect crime....I want make it happen again'

At these words my world stops.You are back.Back to me.Back to make it again.

......you never wanted the money,to be famous,or to be rich.You only wanted me.

It was a perfect crime.


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Boriiiiinnnng~ but I had a lot of time and this was the single thing I was thinking about so I wrote it......maybe I should do something else tomorrow......I need a life!

....please leave me a review?!
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Perfect crime. (Mayuki)
« Reply #15 on: September 04, 2012, 10:33:21 PM »
it's not boring... It's very interesting!! I love it XD Really!!!
Aaaaah~ Ii desu ne~!!!!
Mayukiiiiiiii !!!!!!!

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Re: Perfect crime. (Mayuki)
« Reply #16 on: September 04, 2012, 11:25:48 PM »
hihi perfect crime hihi~ bravo Yuki~

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Re: Perfect crime. (Mayuki)
« Reply #17 on: September 04, 2012, 11:31:44 PM »
nice story
me wanna you to make the revenge part..haha

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Re: Perfect crime. (Mayuki)
« Reply #18 on: September 06, 2012, 08:03:44 PM »
why do I get random thoughts and not any ideas for my ongoing fics?!

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                                                                                        =Crybaby girlfriend=


'This is...the end' The girl hugged the younger one 'Don't cry'









'Lets go watch a movie?' A black haired girl asked her shorter partner.
'hhmmm~ what kind of movie?' the shorter one with twin ponytails asked as they walked together the road.

'Well, there is a new horror movie at the cinema!' The older one said as they directed for the movie

'h-horror?! ' the younger said surprise 'you know Im not good with these things....' she pouted as she hold on the olders hand

The older on smiled at the cute reaction and they entered for the movie.

'then....how about a love one?'

Was it really that sad...? the older one was wondering as she watched her girlfriend,Watanabe Mayu ,cry and sniff watching the movie.

-What can I do.....but cry with you?- where the older ones thoughts ,Kashiwagi Yuki, as she started crying with her girlfriend in the room.


'nee, Yukirin' Mayu said as she sat on the sofa close to Yukirin
'hmm?' Yuki stroked Mayu's head softly

'do you.....hate me?'

'eh? why are you asking that?' Yuki asked surprised

'well.....I always cry, if its sad or not....I am a crybaby' Mayu said sad as she started crying

-I can only accompany you and cry- Yuki sighed smiling and tears ran down her cheeks 'I love you,Mayuyu!'

The two cryed together as the movie finished

'The two of us crying' Mayu said as she looked at her love 'that's strange' and they start to laugh together.

Yuki smiled as she pated Mayu's head and held her close.



*I put the ring chosen to match yours, I put in my poket as I walk the road to your house.

I want you to be fully mine, as I love you this much.*

-It will hurt your feelings, I realize that .......but I want you to become strong.-

*-But I must say it now-*


*You never know that , but when we part I pretend to be strong.* Mayu thought that as she forced a smile and patted Yukis head softly .

'Ill see you tomorrow' she says as she looks at Yuki who is pouting.

'Smile' Mayu says , but inside she is crying with sorrowful eyes.

Yuki smiles at Mayu's kildish actions.

For her forced smile Yuki could do nothing but watch and smile as Mayu told, but inside she wanted to look away,her heart hurting.

-The word I chose for you ,how showed me a forced smile, was...-

'Goodbye'   

Yuki took steps back, looking away.

Mayu looked surprised at her.



*what can I do for you,the strong one? *

Mayu was playing with Yuki on the sofa as they saw a comedy movie, they where happy as they both smiled.

Yuki hugged Mayu close to her and kissed her forehead.

Mayu blushed and smiled

*is to show you a smile*


Shopping was a relaxing thing, for both of them.Yuki likeing to buy lot of things and Mayu watching her being happy.

As they walked on the bridge, they stoped and looked at the sun falling the the water.

It was a bridge of memories.

But what its beyond that its what separates them.

Mayu turned and looked at something else, while Yuki moved the other way to get out the bridge.


That was the moment, when they both decided.

*I want you to be mine...*
-You must become stronger...-

Yuki turned suddenly, and so did Mayu.

*-So I must say it, now-*

*Mayu's Pov*

When we part I hang my head all alone, as the tears start to form and try to roll down my cheeks.I stubbornly  hold them and frown.

What....had you just said?

'I dont love you .....please forgive me Mayuyu.....I want to break up now' you sweet voice says 'Sayonara'

These words hit me.

The tears fall after all but I still frown.

It was clear to me, that word ,but....

It won't stop.....

I start crying ,hard, falling to the ground and you hug me, for a moment before you step back and smile at me.

I hold my hand up to catch you ,but spilling and falling from my fingertips  is your 'I love you'

Where is it now?

I didnt know that this was the end, I hoped it was the moment you would be fully mine....

It feels like you are fading aways, but you are right in front of me.

You come closer and putting me up, you wipe my tears away.

You say your magical words

'A magic spell for the crybaby
A magic spell to stop the tears
So ,......make the same face as me'

Your smiling face and determination.......I smile too, the tears starting to stop.

'Smile' and I do as you say......

With tears in both our eyes we smile and laugh.Its like the memories we have isnt it?

You would always cry with me but also make me smile.

You sing me a little as you pat my head.

*back to 3rd pov*

They faced each other again.

Now both smiling, with the distance between them.

It was time to part.

Mayu smiled cherfully at Yuki......while Yuki smiled, a forced smile.

*-the feelings we conveyed in the end-*

'See you then'

they both said as Yuki left first.

Looking back at Mayu, with a sad face Yuki whispered

'Sorry'

While Mayu smiled at her, not hearing it and saying

'Thank you'


Yuki left, her love broken with the hope that this would make Mayu strong.

Mayu remained alone, and staring at the sky she whispered

'This is the end...' She trew the rings in the water under the bridge

'I'm not going to cry'

But the tears that continued to fall down her cheeks betrayed her...........

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Yeah so I was feeling sad so I did this, the song is from vocaloid like always.......

*...* is Mayu

-...- is Yuki

*-...-* are both their thoughts

Leave me a review? after this ill do a chapter for the onegoing fics....

“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: =Crybaby girlfriend=(Mayuki)
« Reply #19 on: September 06, 2012, 08:36:29 PM »
Waaaaaaah so sad!!!! :cry:

So Yuki break up with Mayu just because Mayu is a crybaby!!!

Mayu wanted to marry Yuki!!! So sweet :wub: !! But the end too sad!! :cry:
Mayuki = Cutest couple



Married?!-Mayuki fanfic (maybe it will have another pair)

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