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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update To those who this may concern...
« Reply #220 on: April 08, 2013, 01:55:10 PM »
I will make this clear and only say it once. It appears that the situation has handled itself but to be clear to everyone, please stop spamming my thread with talks of shipping writers. I don't mind it but please refrain from talking about it on my thread. Everyone has their own opinion and everyone has a right to express it in any form they choose. I'm just asking if those who like to ship writers could please move your topic somewhere else and not in my thread. For those who fail to comply, I will no long take requests from that person so you have been warned. I come here to write and be creative not gossip about rumors. If anyone has any issuses you can PM privately and we'll discuss the matters privately. Otherwise to those who have nothing to do with this, I'm terribly sorry and I hope you all still continue to read my OS's because I do enjoy making them.

Also, Ruka you're not bothering me at all. It's good to hear from you so don't think you're a bother I don't mind taking requests from you or anyone else so just remember that you're not a bother.

Now then for those who had nothing to do with this, I'll be happy to take your requests and do my best on them. I'm sorry if I seemed rude throughout this entire thing but I just wanted to say something and put and end to it so there won't be any future problems. I'm sorry if I've offended anyone but again this is a place to write not gossip. Thank you and enjoy the rest of the forum.

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update For whom this may concern...
« Reply #221 on: April 08, 2013, 06:24:35 PM »
Its a pleasure to finaly comment this exciting fic! :cathappy:

I like the style used in this fanfic very much, and as well as the action in it! Im really intrigued/excited about what is about to happen, the curiosity is making me overactive!  :tntrm:

I know this comment its not so intefesting but i just couldn't help myself anymore so i had to leave here a little from my mind speach. Thank you very much for writting this piece of mind fantasy that captured me , Miyumi. :k-great:


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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Wind Up Doll
« Reply #222 on: April 09, 2013, 02:19:05 AM »
Well here is the Renayuki that Sakura requested. I hope you like it!
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RenaYuki: Wind Up Doll

My name is Kashiwagi Yuki and when I was little I would often visit my grandmother's house because my parents were always busy on business trips and didn't have time to take care of me. Every day I would go to her house and play with this doll that she used to have when she was little. I would play with that doll every day when I visited my grandmother's but she would never take with me just yet.

The doll itself was really pretty and it was really fun to play with it. We would play tea parties and dress up and all kinds of games. I would take it everywhere I went and would never put it down even for a second. What was strange about the doll though was that there was a small hole on its chest shaped like a heart. I never knew what it was and my grandmother wouldn't tell me. She said it was a secret and I would find out when I get older.

Time passed by and I'm in high school now. One night I came home and found out my grandmother passed away. I was very sad and my mother told me that we were going to go to the house and take what she left us. We drove up to the old house and we walked inside. My mother told me to look around and if I saw something I would like I could take it. Before I took off my mother handed me a letter that was written by my grandmother before she died. Inside it there was a small wind up key but I didn't know what it went to. The note itself said,

"Use this key to unlock the heart of an old friend."

I didn't know what she meant so I just looked around for some other things. I decided to take a mirror, a brush, and a necklace. I was about to leave the room when I saw an old box that I hadn't seen before. I opened it and was surprised to see the old doll that I used to play with. I had completely forgotten it and I was really happy to find it. I took the doll and decided to take it home where it could finally be mine.

When I got home I went to my room and set my things down and the set the doll on my bed. I changed into my pajamas and then sat down and played with the doll. It still looked the same as always and I was surprised how well kept it had been all these years. While looking at it I saw that same hole on its chest that I wondered what went in it.

Then I remembered the key that grandmother had given me. I pulled the key out and saw it had the same heart shape like the hole on the doll. I pulled out the key and placed it in the doll and it fit perfectly. I wound it up three times and pulled it out. I could hear clicking coming from inside. Then the doll's arm suddenly moved and it ticked. Slowly the doll stood up and started to move. After a while the doll started to dance and I was amazed at how well it moved. The doll moved as if it was actually alive. It even sang like a real person. As I watched it I couldn't take my eyes off the doll. Then it slowed down and eventually came to a stop.

I wound it back up again and once again the doll started to move. When it finished I wound it up again and again. I just couldn't stop watching it because every time I watched it I found myself lost its movements and I just couldn't stop watching.

However it got late and it was time for me to sleep. I put the doll away and let it rest after a long night of dancing. Then I fell asleep and didn't wake up until morning. The next day I woke up and had to go to school so I couldn't bring the doll with me because I was afraid it would get broken or lost. I said goodbye to the doll and then left for school. I hated school and I really never enjoyed coming. Kids would always pick on me and be mean to me. I didn't really have any real friends except one girl who was nice to me. Her name was Rie and she was nice to me. However today I saw her hanging out with the girls who always picked on me and she told me that she hated me and didn't want to be my friend. Then the girls dumped a bucket of mop water on me and called me horrible names. I cried and ran home not caring if I still had school or not. I just wanted to go home and hide from all the people and never come out.

I ran into my house and up to my room. I slammed the door shut and ran into my bed where I cried for a good hour. I was just so upset with everything from school to life in general. Everything just sucks so much and I hate it. I wish I could just go far far away from this place and never come back. Sadly I'm stuck here for another two years and I don't think I can take much more of it. I suddenly heard a beep and saw my phone ring. It was Rie trying to say she was sorry but I didn't want to hear it. I threw my phone and it hit the wall. There was a small thud and then a louder thud. I looked over and saw the doll had fallen. I walked over and picked it up making sure it wasn't broken or anything. Sadly there was a crack on its neck and it looked like the head was going to fall off. I felt so bad that I started to cry again letting my tears fall.

Tears were getting on the doll as I held it close to me. Then I thought a nice way to cheer me up is to wind the doll up again. The fool started to tick only this time the doll began to glow and it rose in front of me. Then the doll suddenly grew to about the same size of me. Then the glow faded and revealed a beautiful girl sitting before me. She opened her eyes and said,

"Hello my name is Rena."

I didn't know what to say but I was just overall stunned.

"How are you feeling today Yuki?"

Now I was really freaked out. How did she know my name? I didn't know what to say but instead I started crying again. Rena saw this and reached out pulling me in her embrace. The feeling was so nice that I couldn't stop crying and she held me close to her cradling me. After a while I finally stopped crying and Rena pulled out a tissue. She took it and wiped my tears away.

"Don't be sad Yuki. Everything will be ok."

Rena held me close and then said,

"Now let's go back to school. We can't let those girls win now can we?"

I didn't want to go back but Rena convinced me so we went together. As we walked Rena held my hand and together we walked into the school. Inside we found the girls together with Rie and when they saw us the first thing they said was,

"Hey who's your cute friend?"

"She should be with us not you."

"What'd you do pay her to be your friend?"

I was ready to run away again but then Rena said,

"I'm sorry but Yuki is my friend and I would never leave her for pathetic bullies like you."

The girls got mad and one tried to attack Rena but Rena suddenly pushed the girl back and she slammed through the door! The other girls became scared and ran away. Meanwhile Rena just smiled and said,

"Class is about over. Shall we go out and get something to eat?"

I nodded my head and we went to the ice cream shop. There we are ice cream and Rena told me stories about my grandmother when she was younger. Rena was a doll that would turn human when the tear of a sad maiden entered the hole in her chest. When I cried I must have activated her and she came to life just for me. I was really happy that Rena was here with me because I won’t be alone anymore and it would just be me and here through thick and thin. However there was one thing that I wondered about Rena. How did she turn back into the doll form? When I asked her Rena placed her finger over my mouth and told me not to worry about it because it wasn’t important. To change my mind Rena stood up and started to sing and dance for me. It was more beautiful seeing her dance in her human form rather than the doll form. Then she cuddled with me and sang more songs as I passed out soon after.

When I woke up I was looking forward to another fun day with Rena. However when I woke up I saw Rena was gone and the doll was missing as well. I don’t know where she could have gone and I checked everywhere but she was gone. I fell to my knees and started to cry again because Rena had left me. Then out of the corner of my eye I saw something on my pillow. It was a small note and I opened it to read.

“Yuki I’m sorry I couldn’t stay with you long but your grandmother was calling me and I had to turn back. Don’t be sad Yuki and don’t cry anymore. From now on I want you to be happy and don’t let others push you down. Stand up and fight and I’m sure you’ll do fine on your own. Remember Yuki you’re too old to be playing with dolls.”

I smiled realizing that Rena was right. It was time for me to grow up and be my own person for once. No more hiding in the shadows and running away. It’s time for me to fight and for once and for all take a stand for myself. Ever since that day I never backed down and my life became instantly better. I made new friends and worked hard to achieve my dreams. Now I’m older now and I have a daughter of my own. Today we were playing in the park and she came over to me holding a doll. It looked a lot like Rena so I asked her where she got the doll. She pointed to a woman who was walking away and when I tried to walk over to her she was already gone. I looked at the doll my daughter was holding and saw it had the same hole in its chest like Rena did. I smiled and pulled out the same wind up key and then handed it to my daughter.

“What’s this for mama?” 

“Put it in and find out.”

My daughter put the key in and wound the doll up. The doll started to move just like Rena did and moved like her. However this doll was not Rena because the hair was different and the crack on her neck wasn’t there. However my daughter was overjoyed when she saw the doll moved and thanked me for it.

“What are you going to name the doll?”

“Hmmm Jurina!”

“Jurina? I like the name. Take good care of Jurina ok Mayu?”

“Hai!”

I took my daughter’s hand and we walked home together. I looked back and there I saw Rena and my grandmother both smiling at me. I smiled back at them and waved before they disappeared.

“Who are you waving to mama?”

“Ah no one. Just an old friend and a wind up doll."

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Well I hope you liked the OS! Send a request and I will do my best!
« Last Edit: April 20, 2013, 06:23:54 PM by miyumi »

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Wind Up Doll
« Reply #223 on: April 09, 2013, 03:23:02 AM »
AH... so sweet story there...

about the doll...

Mayu is Yuki's daughter here....

Jurina and Rena are the doll....

Very nice.... I like it...

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to see more

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Wind Up Doll
« Reply #224 on: April 09, 2013, 09:26:35 AM »
Darling, thank you~!!!!  :deco: :deco:

That was so sweet and so lovely~  :wub:


P.S. I'll send you my 'story' this evening, I had lots of studying last night  :)
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Candy Kisses
« Reply #225 on: April 20, 2013, 05:44:53 PM »
KojiYuu birthday fic~ Hope you like it and Ruka I'm not a baby! >3<
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KojiYuu: Candy Kisses

Today was a very special day for Kojima Haruna. Today was her birthday so she was very excited to see what everyone had planned for her. She had already gotten a lot of nice presents from her friends and her fans. There was one person though that she had not received a present from and that person was Yuko. Haruna thought that Yuko was busy and forgot perhaps but it was highly unlikely since Yuko practically adored Haruna and was like her own little stalker. After a party with her friends, Haruna went back to her room tired after a long fun day. That night she fell asleep feeling a little sad that she didn't see Yuko all day.

The next day Haruna woke up and found a strange little surprise. There on her pillow was a small box with a pink bow on it. Haruna was about to open it but the gift opened itself when the lip flew off. What was inside was something that made Haruna squeal from the cuteness. There inside the box was a baby squirrel with a red bow on it's head. The squirrel crawled onto Haruna's hand and tapped her finger with it's tiny paw. The squirrel ran back into the box and pulled out a note. It carried it over to Haruna and Haruna read the note.

"Hello! My name is Momo and I will be leading you today on a special birthday gift hunt! Yuko sent me to guide you to the clues she left you. All throughout Akihabara there are stickers made of candy called Candy Kisses. You have to find them and kiss them. When you do they will reveal a clue as to where Yuko is! Are you ready to get started? Then let's go!"

Momo climbed onto Haruna's shoulder and Haruna just smiled and said,

"Alright then let's go!"

The first clue lead Haruna to a flower store not too far from her home. When she walked in the store clerk there asked if she was interested in taking any flowers that they were going to throw out. Haruna was going to decline but then Momo ran off into the room where the flowers were. Haruna followed and was surprised to see the first candy kiss on the vase that held a rose. Haruna walked over and picked up the vase. She kissed the sticker and the rose bud opened revealing another note.

"Hmm cherry~"

Haruna read the note and this time it was leading her to a book store that she had once went to. There at the book store there were a ton of books and Haruna knew she was going to have a hard time searching all the books. However Momo helped out a little when he pointed to a picture of a girl in underwear. It was then Haruna got the idea where the next kiss could be. Haruna went to the magazine section but more specifically the Play Boy ones. There were many magazines but the question was which one? Haruna looked around and couldn't find a clue as to which one. However suddenly her nose picked up the scent of orange. She followed the scent to the magazine with her on the front cover. She picked up the magazine and kissed the sticker.

"Orange~"

A note slipped out and it said to go to a cafe that she often goes with her dogs. Haruna walked there and saw dogs everywhere running around with their owners. She made a note to herself to bring her dogs there sometime. Haruna walked around and the she felt a tiny tug on her pant leg. She looked down and saw a tiny dog similar to hers with a small box in its mouth. Haruna petted the dog and then looked at the box. There was a lock on it with no key so Haruna wondered where was the key. She looked around and suddenly felt another tug on her leg. She saw the dog walk over to a patch of leaves on the ground and started to dig at it. Haruna helped and together they found a small key. Haruna opened the box and found a not that said,

"Look at the dog."

Haruna looked back at the dog and saw there was a candy kiss right on the dog's nose. She didn't know how it got here but it certainly was a surprise. Haruna kissed the dog and the dog ran off. Then it came back with another note saying to go to a bakery where she often got cakes. Haruna started to walk there but then was stopped when a group of guys jumped out and tried to take her away.

"Hey how about you come with us? I'm sure we can have tons of fun."

One of the guys wrapped his arm around her but she quickly slapped it away. She tried to run but they surrounded her keeping her trapped. Haruna didn't know what to do and there was no one to call for help. When all hope was lost Momo suddenly jumped out onto one of the guys. He crawled into the shirt of one of the guys and the guy started screaming and squirming. On the inside Momo was biting every place he could. The other saw this and tried to help. They grabbed a wooden plank and told the guy to hold still. Momo came out and gave a taunting look at the one with the wooden plank. The other grew angry and swung hard. Momo escaped right as the wood smacked the other guy in the face. Momo ran and crawled up the pant leg of another.

The guy started freaking out when he felt Momo bite all over his legs. The other guy grabbed a pipe and tried to hit Momo. However he missed every time and ended up beating up his friend until he was down. Momo crawled high above onto a balcony and then pushed a vase down. It crashed onto the last guy's head knocking him out. When it was all over Momo went back to Haruna and licked her cheek telling her everything was ok and she was safe. Haruna thanked Momo and then went to the bakery where she was welcomed with a free slice of cake and some juice. As Haurna ate the cake, the waiter handed her a small chocolate.

"I saw what happened out here. Looks like you had it rough. Eat this and it'll calm you down."

"Thank you."

Haruna ate the chocolate and smiled realizing how sweet it was. The waiter also pulled out note and handed it to Haruna. She opened it and saw a candy kiss right on the paper. She kissed the sticker and said,

"Strawberry..."

When she kissed it, a door opened and there was an arrow telling her to follow it. Haruna walked into a dark passage way that lead to an elevator. In the elevator the button was already set to the top floor. Haruna followed and when she reached the hall she walked out into the hall where there was a trail of candies leading to a room. Haruna walked in and saw the room was dark. She walked in and the door shut behind her.

"I've been expecting you~"

A light came on and there standing in a red silk dress holding a cake was Yuko.

"Happy Birthday Nyannyan~"

"Y-Yuko?!"

"Did you like my little scavenger hunt? I hope Momo helped you."

Momo walked over to Yuko who carried him to a little bed.

"I can't believe you planned all this." Haurna said.

"Well off course! Only the best for my Nyannyan~"

"Well thank you Yuko. I thought you had forgotten about me."

Yuko ran over to Haruna and hugged her tightly.

"I could never forget you..."

Haruna held her close and it was then she felt strange lumped on her back. She pushed Yuko back and said,

"What the heck is on your back?"

"Woops looks like you found your present early~"

"Nani?"

Yuko stepped back and slipped off her dress. There on her body were candy kisses covering all over her body including those special parts. Haruna knew what Yuko was planning and she couldn't help but give her a pervy smile.

"Happy Birthday Nyannyan~ Now come here and enjoy your present~"

Haruna climbed on top of Yuko and began to eat her sweet sweet present. Yuko thought this wasn't going to be the last time she used the candy kisses.
 
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Well I hope you enjoyed the OS! Let me know if you want me to make anymore!
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Candy Kisses
« Reply #226 on: April 20, 2013, 05:58:18 PM »
Really lovely!!

Can I request a ......hmm... lets me think a little...I want something.....not mayuki, maybe next time but this time I would be thankfull if you could make a YukiNyan! Like YukixKojima!

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Candy Kisses
« Reply #227 on: April 21, 2013, 09:29:41 AM »
This 'Candy Kisses' is so lovely... and so cute of a story

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to read the next one

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Candy Kisses
« Reply #228 on: April 21, 2013, 09:36:15 AM »
It was so sweet!!!!
And Momo was so cute and cool!!! I wanna the same squirrel!!!!

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Meeting in the Rain
« Reply #229 on: April 23, 2013, 09:50:55 PM »
Here is the YukiKoji Temodemo requested! I hope you like it and sorry it took me a while to make!
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YukiKoji: Meeting in the Rain

It’s raining today which means I can go outside and play! Usually I can’t play in the sunlight because mommy said that my skin is too delicate. The only time I can play is when it’s night out or when it’s raining. I hate playing in the dark because it’s scary and I have no one to play with. In the rain though it’s very pretty and the sound of falling rain is very relaxing. Since it was raining I was really excited so I put on my dress and ran outside. The feeling of the water hitting my skin was so relaxing and refreshing that I just loved it. In the rain I would splash in the puddles and run around. I would even ride my bike even though it’s not safe and mommy told me not to. I love playing in the rain but sometimes I get really lonely. I live in a big house with a gate that keeps bad people from getting in. I’m happy that it keeps the bad people out but it also keeps the good ones out as well. I really wish I had a friend to play in the rain with. If I could have just one friend then I would be happy for the rest of my life.

I was in the rain staring at my reflection in a puddle when I suddenly I saw something else in the puddle. I looked up and saw a little girl standing outside of the gate. She was staring at me while she wore a red rain coat. I tried to walk towards her but she suddenly ran away. I wondered what the little girl was doing there but I decided to ignore it. I went back to playing and soon after I had to go inside. That night I spent trying to figure out why that girl was there. Maybe I’ll see her tomorrow.

The next day I was back outside playing because it was raining again. However this time a ball suddenly flew over the fence into the garden. I walked over and picked it back up. Then I looked over and saw the same girl from yesterday staring at the ball that I was holding. I walked over to the gate and held out the ball asking,

“Is this yours?”

“Un.”

“Here.”

I threw the ball over the fence and she caught it.

“Thank you.” she said.

“You wanna come inside and play with me?”

“Can I?!”

“Sure!”

I walked over and opened the gate to let her in. I wasn’t supposed to but I really wanted to play with someone. When the gate was opened the girl walked in and I shut the gate back. I led her over to the patio where there was a cover keeping the chairs dry. The girl sat on the chair and pulled off her hood off revealing long brown hair. It was truly beautiful as I watched her stand up and take off her rain coat and set it aside revealing a cute pink dress.

“So what’s your name?” she asked.

“Yuki. You?” I replied.

“Haruna.”

“Wah what a pretty name!”

“Thanks I like yours too.”

“So what do you wanna play?”

“Wanna play tea party?”

“Sure!”

I ran inside and brought out my place tea set I got for my birthday. We pretended to be royal princesses and my house was our castle and the garden was ours. We ran around and pretended to have special powers over the water and splashed each other. I was having so much fun with Haruna that I didn’t even notice my mommy come home. When she saw Haruna she screamed and pushed her down. I tried to run to her but mommy held me down and slapped me hard telling me I wasn’t allowed to bring in strangers and she dragged me inside. I wasn’t allowed to leave the house ever again and mommy put a guard dog to make sure no one got in. I still had Haruna’s ball that she never got back and I felt really bad for still having it. I knew I had to get it back to her but I was afraid that I would get hit again. I wanted to get to her badly though and I knew I really had to. Grandma always taught me to return the things you borrow. It was hard to get away from my mommy though because she was always in the house. Then one day she had to leave for a work meeting and I was home alone. I thought now was my chance and I should take it while I can.

However there was another problem and that was the dog. He was really scary and looks like he could take a man’s head off. I had to be careful is I was going to make it there safe. Another problem was it was sunny out and I couldn’t go out. If I went out my skin would burn and hurt a lot. I wanted to return her ball though so I took a cloak and covered my body with it. Now my mommy locked the door to my room but there was another way out. There was a secret door hidden behind my toy box that was there when I first came here. I moved the toy chest and opened the door. I snuck out and walked over to a thin tunnel between my house and the other. I was standing at the edge of the shade and I was scared. There was something in me though that made me want to take a step. I took a deep breath and stepped outside. I crawled through the tunnel and made it to the side walk. There were people walking by staring at me because they thought my outfit was strange. That didn’t matter though because I was on a mission.

With Haruna’s ball in my hand, I walked down the street and looked at all the other houses. I was looking for the one Haruna lived in but the problem was I didn’t know what one was hers. Then while I was walking I saw a house that had Haruna’s rain coat laying outside on a chair. I walked over to her front door and the door opened. There was Haruna standing there and when she saw me she gave me a nasty look. I held out her ball and said,

“Take it.”

Haruna took her ball and then tried to close the door but I stopped her.

“Wanna play with me?” I asked.

“No you look weird. Get away.” she said.

“Please I just wanna play.”

“I said no!”

Haruna pushed me and slammed the door. I felt really say but I returned her ball and that’s all I cared about. I turned around and started to walk back to my house. On the way I must not have heard the boys coming by. They ran past me and one of them grabbed my cloak. They took it off and then ran off it with. I instantly felt the burning one my arms and legs and I fell to the ground. I tried to cover myself but the sun burned and pain was burning throughout my body. I screamed in pain crying and rolling. The sun was blinding me and it hurt too much to move. Eventually I became too weak to move and just laid there in the sun. I thought I was going to die but I was happy to at least give Haruna her ball back. Before I blacked out, I heard someone call my name. I looked over and saw Haruna running towards me.

“Yuki!”

After that everything became dark and I didn’t feel pain anymore. When I woke up I found myself in a hospital. I looked around and saw a bunch of flowers, balloons, and stuffed animals from family members. Then I looked over and saw Haruna holding my hand sleeping. I moved my fingers and Haruna woke up.

“Yuki! I’m so sorry are you ok?”

“Yeah I’m ok…” I said.

“Yuki I’m so sorry. I’m so so sorry.”

“It’s alright Haruna. You didn’t know.”

“It’s fine. I’ll get better in no time and we can play some more ok?”

“Un!”

After that Haruna’s mommy and my mommy became good friends and said Haruna could come over whenever she wanted. I would go over to Haruna’s too and together we would have all kinds of fun. Haruna and I are the best of friends now and I couldn’t imagine it to be any better. Years have passed since that time and I’ve grown up. Haruna and I are in high school now and I wasn’t allowed to go to high school. I had to stay at home and get private lessons. Haruna was so busy with studies and other things that we never saw each other. I did miss Haruna a lot but I was happy that she was out there doing some good. I was sitting on the patio drinking some water watching the rain fall when I felt a light tap on my shoulder. I looked over and saw Haruna smiling and holding a basket of cookies. We talked a lot about school and clubs. Haruna sounded like she was doing well. As we sat there Haruna suddenly said,

“Nee Yuki remember how we met?”

“Yeah you lost your ball in my house.”

“Well that and we met in the rain like it is now.”

“Ah that’s true.”

“Let’s play!”

Haruna ran out into the rain and I watched her run around. I smiled as she twirled and asked me to join her. I got up and walked over and together we played in the rain. Playing out there reminded me of our first encounter. Our little meeting in the rain. 

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Meeting in the Rain
« Reply #230 on: April 23, 2013, 10:08:48 PM »
Kind of impressive Miyu! I wouldnt believe it that someone beside me would request such an interesting and weird pair. The chimestry between them is almost null but they look good together in my eyes.

Hahhh since Temochan decided to not request mayuki, ill request ma...no no no. I need a break from Mayuki too, so new  pairs would be good.

How about Yukoyuki?YukoYuki yay! This will be my last request for a while, thanks a lot miyu.
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Meeting in the Rain
« Reply #231 on: April 23, 2013, 11:01:15 PM »
Me want YukoYuki too!!!

This was like always amazing, Miyu hon :*

Wanna read moar!!!
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Meeting in the Rain
« Reply #232 on: April 24, 2013, 07:49:03 AM »
'Meeting in the Rain' is very sweet and lovely fic...

YukixKoji is very cute together....

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to read the next one

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Hole in the Wall
« Reply #233 on: April 24, 2013, 10:43:54 PM »
Well here is the request you asked for Yuuki! I hope you like it!
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YukoYuki: Hole in the Wall

In my school there is an old wall that had been there since the school was first built. Sometime along the way the wall suddenly got a mysterious hole that no one knew how it got there. Every time the school fixed it, the hole would come back. Eventually the principal gave up on fixing it and eventually left it there. They say that one day a student was walking past the hole and noticed a note in the hole. When they read it, it said,

“Hi my name is Yuki. Wanna be friends?”

The student thought it was a joke so they wrote a reply. Then the next day when they checked it, there was a response. Slowly the student started to get to know Yuki and then once day the student asked if they could meet Yuki in person. Yuki became scared and said she couldn’t which made the student think it was just another prank. Soon after the student never wrote to Yuki again. The next day the student didn’t show up to school and didn’t show up for weeks after. Eventually when others asked the mother what happened they said the student died. She claimed she found the student dead in their room. Now no one walks by the hole and it’s been left there ever since.

I’m new to the school and when I first heard the legend I didn’t believe it. I thought it was just a joke and there was no way a wall could talk to someone. After class I went to the wall and saw the hole was empty. I slid my note into the hole and then left. Then the next next day I didn’t see anything but when I checked later on I saw the note was gone. When I stopped after school there was another note and I opened it. There it was the note that started it hall,

“Hi my name is Yuki. Wanna be friends?”

I took out a pencil and wrote,

“Sure! My name is Yuko! Nice to meet you.”

I left notes every day and every day I would find a new one. We got to know each other really well and we talked about all kinds of things. At one point I had forgotten my text book and told Yuki and the next day my text book was there on my desk! I finally decided it was time to find out who Yuki was so I snuck back inside the school and hid behind some trash bins. After a while I heard some shuffling so I looked up to see if there was anything there. Sadly there was nothing but I saw the note was gone! I couldn’t believe that and I thought that maybe they ran across the hall looking for someone. However there was nothing there and I wondered what was going on. I walked back over to the hall and saw a small glow coming from it. It vanished before I could get a good look at it but it looked like a hand. That’s when I knew there must have been someone on the other side of the hole. I looked around for any kind of secret passage way but there was none and I have no idea how someone could get behind it. From what I understood there was only concrete behind that wall.

The next day I walked around the building in the area where the wall was but I couldn’t find anything there. I went through some old school blue prints and didn’t see any secret passage way or tunnel. There was nothing but solid wall and nothing was getting in or out. That day I asked Yuki if I could meet her and she said that she was too scared and shy. I tried really hard to get her to come out but she kept insisting that we couldn’t meet. That night I decided to try a different plan and get her to come out. I left a note and hid in the same spot I did before. This time though I had a string pulled to the note so when it started to move I would pull the note back out. I waited until finally the note started to move and I pulled.

The note came out and something else also came. There hanging from the hole was a long white arm. I ran out and grabbed the arm and started to pull. However the arm was strong and started to pull back as well. I pulled as hard as I could and slowly I could feel the hand slide out. Then with one big tug, something big came out. I fell hard and hit my butt and it hurt but when I looked over I saw something that left me breathless. There next to me was a girl only there was something different about her. She was giving off a strange glow and she looked almost transparent. However the one thing that I saw that made her stick out the most was that she had no feet. That’s when I realized this girl was not alive but a ghost. She must be Yuki the one who wrote the notes.

“Yuki?”

“Hai?”

Yuki looked over and saw me and was a little scared. She tried to run away but I told her don’t go. She looked over at me and I smiled. I held out my hand and said,

“Don’t be afraid.”

She slowly reached out and I took her hand. She was cold as ice.

“What happened to you?” I asked.

“When the school was first being built this area was still under construction. When I was alive I was always bullied and picked on. One day I was being chased and ran here trying to escape. I hid in a space under that wall and waited for them to leave. When the left I was about to get out but then cement was dumped on me. I tried to call out but no one could hear me and I was buried in the cement. I died and I wasn’t able to go to heaven for some reason. I’ve been stuck here ever since.”

I wanted to say something but the tears wouldn’t stop flowing from my face. It took me a while to get it together but eventually I did and then I told her,

“Well how about I help you leave?”

“How can you do that?”

“Well why don’t you think of the happiest things you remember when you were alive?”

“Well I remember being with my friends who protected me when I was being bullied. They were so nice to me and we had all kinds of fun.”

“Well remember that time Yuki and think the happiest things you could.”

“Yeah.. I remember the park we went to and the old ramen shop. All the games we played and even my old crush. I remember being in love and all the wonderful things. So many wonderful times…”

Suddenly Yuki started to emit this warm glow coming from her. She looked over at me and smiled with tears in her eyes. She reached out and hugged me pulling me close to her.

“I remember her…”

A strong light came out of Yuki and filled the whole room. Then suddenly I started to see everything in Yuki’s life. I saw the friends she was talking about and it showed me all the fun times. It showed me everything she did from hanging out with friends to being with that girl she was talking about. The one that she loved and cared about so much. I watched them kiss each other and dirty things that made me blush. Then I watched Yuki be chased and hide into the hole. I watched her being buried and died. Then everything shattered and destroyed and all that was left was Yuki. She had a smile and said,

“Thank you Yuko.”

“No problem.”

“Oh and one more thing…”

“Nani?”

Yuki walked over to me and suddenly pushed me into the hole.

“Hey what’s going on?!” I said.

“I lied Yuko. I wasn’t buried here. There was a spirit before me that told you the same story and I believed her. I set her free and she dragged me into this cold wall. Now I’m free which means it is your turn…”

“Eh?!”

Before I could do anything the hole sealed and Yuki left. The next thing I knew, I died and everything was dark from then on. I don’t know how long I had been there in that hole but it felt like years. I was just sitting there in the cold darkness when I suddenly saw a light. It was small but it was something. I tried to get to it but there was something pulling me back. I tried calling out but no voice would come. There was a small piece of paper and a pencil sitting on a table. I don’t know what happened but there was something me that made me write down words I had heard long ago. I placed the note outside the hole and watched a young girl pull it out. There she read the note saying,

“Hi my name is Yuko. Wanna be friends?”

And so the cycle of the spirit in the wall starts all over again and now I’m in it. I guess that’s what happens when you mess with a hole in the wall.

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Hole in the Wall
« Reply #234 on: April 24, 2013, 10:54:43 PM »
Interesting story, poor Yuko getting duped into the hole :(
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Hole in the Wall
« Reply #235 on: April 24, 2013, 11:03:25 PM »
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YUKO-SAMA!!!!!!!!!!!! Miyu hon, how could you... Ah, you could. You always write dem sad and heartbreaking stories... Can I have a happy with some kissing YukoRena to heal my broken heart?

And I'm dizzy and nauseous today... Have mercy and write smth sweet, please?


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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Hole in the Wall
« Reply #236 on: April 25, 2013, 01:37:09 AM »
whew~ read all of the one shots here today... well minus a few atsumina and saeyaka
but, wow so epic!!! <3 <3
that YukiRena one was epic and the ending was all like MayuJuri!!
The hole in wall thing was like...... wow......
Yuko..... Yuki..........
and that Kojiyuki one was really interesting.... whats wrong with Yuki I wonder, she sickly?
the plug one shot was kind of interesting..... Yuko...... she's really...... yay!
And the Yuko and Geki one where she goes crazy was like OMG....
I love Gekikara and Yuko paired together~~~
The opposites one where the characters changed, the girls just changed roles.... like Taka is Acchan
Rena is Sae......? I think......
And the chibi Takamina one was kind of confusing, but then again, I've read a lot today! <3
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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Flower Girl
« Reply #237 on: April 25, 2013, 02:13:37 AM »
Here is the happy one Sakura requested! Hope you like it!!
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YukoRena: Flower Girl

They say in this world girls are like flowers. They’re beautiful and give off sweet nectar. Specters come to gaze at the beauty and then fight for who gets the nectar. I must be one of those flowers that no one likes because no one talk to me. I must give off a gross nectar that repels people and my looks make them disgusted. No one talks to me and whenever they do usually it’s an insult. I don’t really have any friends but I’ve gotten used to it now and I’m ok with being alone. All I want is to just get through high school and move o in life. I walked into the classroom and walked over to my desk where I found a little surprise sitting there. There on my desk was a small white flower. I picked it up and thought it looked really cute. I looked around to see if anyone would claim to be the one who left it but no one stood up. I tried to see if the person had left a sign behind but there was nothing. For the rest of the class I wondered who left the flower there for me and I’d have to thank them if I found them.

The next day there was another flower and this time it was a small purple one. It was really cute and made me giggle a little. Despite being small it smelled really good smelling like the scent of honey. There was a note there on my desk as well and I picked it up to read it.

“Honey is best tasted straight from the flower.”

I didn’t know what it meant at first but after looking at the flower for a while I saw tiny little buds on the tips. I took the bud into my mouth and took a bite only to be surprised by a sweet taste in my mouth. The flower had a sweet honey in it and I thought it tasted good. I started to feel this strange feeling in me that made my heart flutter. I felt like someone was taking care of me in a certain way where they left me little signs of attention. I really wanted to meet the person giving me the flowers and thank them. I hope I’ll be able to meet them sometime soon because I really want to so badly. I think if we met then we would get along really well.

The next day I walked in and found another flower on my desk. This time it was a blue one with circular petals. There was a bright yellow center and some orange pollen buds. This time there was a note that said,

“Don’t let your spirits get down when faced with challenges.”

That day I was given a ton of homework but I somehow managed to get through it all. My mother was also giving me a bunch of yelling because I forgot to do some chores for her. I had to do extra chores and when I got home I had to study for three tests. I don’t know how I got through it all but maybe it’s because of what the note said. I don’t know but for some reason each flower gives me a new power.

The day after I found two red flowers with the stems intertwined. There the note said,

“Two is better than one. You can share the happiness with the other.”

As I was standing there reading the note I felt a light tap on my shoulder. I looked over and saw a girl a little shorter than me and had a red bow on her head. She was looking at the flowers in my hand and told me they were pretty. I handed her one and she thanked me for it. Then she asked me if I wanted to hang out with her and her friends and I gladly accepted. I felt really happy I was finally able to hang out with friends who actually were a lot like me. I’m a pervert and a weirdo and they were too. The girl with the bow was named Minami and she is quiet the perv sometimes when she talks with her girlfriend Atsuko. Those two are like bunnies in heat whenever they were there together and it was really cute. I don’t know how this all happened but I was really happy that I was able to meet Minami and become friends with her. I think my life is finally starting to change little by little and I’m really liking the change.

The next day I walked in and found a large orange flower with a red center and another one but blue with a purple center. With it the note said,

“Those with big hearts tend to have small voices.”

I didn’t quite understand that but that afternoon I ran into a girl who was crying. I had recognized the girl as one of the most cheerful and energetic girls I know. I saw her crying with her other friend who was known as a really strong girl and could crack a skull without even flinching. Turns out the two were being bullied and neither one of them were brave enough to step up. I comforted them and then told them that I would help them. The genki was Miyazawa Sae and the other was Akimoto Sayaka. The two were twin towers and knowing that a little bully could take them down was a surprise to me. However I took care of the bully in a good way because since no one likes me it was very easy to weird her out. The two were grateful to me and ever since we became really good friends. I’m happy we were able to meet and become friends. I think this mysterious flower person is starting to open a new chapter in my life.

The next time I found a flower it was a dark purlple flower with thorns on them. On the note it said,

“Looks can be deceiving look out for the rose with hidden thorns.”

I didn’t know what that meant either but it couldn’t have been good. That same day I met a nice girl named Haruna who needed help with a subject she struggled in. I helped her gladly and when a test came up we had to work hard. However while I was working I saw Haruna was cheating off my test. I told her to stop and she told the teacher I was cheating. I ended up getting a zero and had to go in to take the test again. I got a good grade but the teacher took off half credit so I ended up getting a bad grade overall. When I tried to confront Haruna she pushed me away and called me for assault. I had to stay after school late that day and clean all the classrooms on the floor. Now here I am mopping the halls and wiping the windows. While I was cleaning, I suddenly slipped and fell hitting the ground hard. Then to make things worse someone dumped the mop water on me and ran off. It was then I had had enough and I was done with it all. Tears were in my eyes as I ran into the room to grab my stuff. I was running so fast that if I hadn’t dropped my bag then I wouldn’t have seen the petals on the floor.

I saw a trail of petals leading outside the classroom. I followed the trail outside through the woodsy area behind the school. I followed the trail all the way to a clearing where there were all kinds of flowers that I had never seen before. They were in all kinds of shapes and colors and different scents. The place was like a hidden paradise or something. I saw there were still some petals to follow so I followed them all the way to a swinging bench. There sitting on the bench was a girl wearing a headband made of flowers. She was holding another one and when she saw me she smiled and walked over to me. She placed the headband on my head and kissed my cheek. I felt my face turn bright red and she just giggled.

“Okaeri.” she said.

“Tadaima..” I said.

“Kochi.”

She took my hand and led me over to the bench. We sat together and swung on the bench relaxing and chatting about small things. Then the girl suddenly said,

“My name is Rena. I hope you don’t mind but can we be friends?”

“Of course! I would love to!” I said.

“Good! Then let’s be friends and even more…”

“Eh?”

Rena leaned in a kissed my lips. This caught me off by surprise and at first I wasn’t sure what to do. Eventually though I gave in and it was really sweet. Her lips tasted like honey and her skin like silk. She reached down and placed her hand on a part of me I never touched before. That day she did things to me I never thought I would ever feel in my life. The pleasure was mind blowing and the feeling our bodies touching was just magical. When we finally stopped Rena said,

“You may not remember me but I knew you back when we were little. I was always picked on for being different and you stood up for me. Every day you would give me a really pretty flower and it was from then on I knew I loved you. When I found out you went to this school I came here and made this little flower game.”

“Wow.. I remember you now! You’ve really changed since then. Definitely cuter than last time.” I said.

“Mou you haven’t changed either you perv.”

I giggled and kissed her lips. Then we cuddled under the blanket together and for once in my life I felt like I had become a beautiful flower. And it’s all because of my flower girl.

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Well there you go Sakura a happy one! Hope you like it!

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Flower Girl
« Reply #238 on: April 25, 2013, 02:59:33 AM »
I like how you make these pairings work in your fics

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Re: miyumi's OS collection!!! update Flower Girl
« Reply #239 on: April 25, 2013, 08:28:25 AM »
'Flower Girl' is very interesting OS

Although YukoRena pairing is very rare to see...

It suited this OS

Thank you for the OS, miyumi

Can't wait to see more of your OS

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