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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/1/12
« Reply #20 on: September 02, 2012, 06:45:51 PM »
T.T  :inlove:  I would love that to happen. But ... I see impossible.
Minami is my Oshimen and always will vote her, but for now I'll settle for  keep or ranking her up a little.
T__T this fic would be a wonderful dream  :wub: :wub:

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/1/12
« Reply #21 on: September 03, 2012, 06:27:13 AM »
yeah!! minami first place.. hell yeah!! ILOVE YUKO she is my oshii but IF only  is takamina who beat her Im glad for that :D

yeah!!

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/1/12
« Reply #22 on: September 03, 2012, 09:03:53 AM »
You changed up the story a little bit lol. It's damn interesting though omg!

It's okay about the title though, although I am curious why that is the title in the first place following your original idea.

I have no idea what's going to happen next, but I am awaiting all that epic drama goodness you've warned in the upcoming chaps!

Thanks for the chapter, please update soon. Goodluck!  :heart:

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/1/12
« Reply #23 on: September 10, 2012, 03:37:11 AM »
I finally have a chance to reply to everyone now!  :heart: I've finally finished catching up on reading everyone's fanfics, so I'll have time to comment on them, too!

Also, just want to give an update on the VN idea I was tossing around before. I have an idea of how I want to start it and the general idea for the storyline and what choices might occur, but not what I want to do for individual scenes. I also need to get my hands on some 720p video sources and hi-res pictures. But the first scene is mostly done. Random screenshot of the work environment

Second to Last chapter four will be this week for sure. I have it about 2/3 done. It's longer than I expected it to be. XD I'll also explain the title mess-up once I finish the story, but that also requires me to come up with what I want the ending to be...  :banghead:

anonymousdowner: You have replied on everything so far and that's great. XD So from the beginning, let's see... Since you asked about one, I have been thinking of a sequel to Of Kisses, with the inspiration coming from the Heavy Rotation making-of, but it's still in the "idk what I want to do with it phase". As far as "bad ends" with my VN, a "bad end" would probably be like, "You just stay as friends," instead of something actually bad. XD Yeah, when I read that omake my proofreader added, my heart stopped a bit, too. :P I'm still so happy that you like Shoujiki so much.  :drool: I also want to continue Of Rehearsals with a bath scene, but that would totally turn into smut and I feel weird writing a second smut fic so soon.  :P

Haruko: I did come up with an idea for a Kojiyuu fic for you about a week ago, but I forgot what it was going to be. :-(

Tanchan: Thank you! Tumblr is really a neat place. :D

Rukaeru: I know, it's so hard to be in a good mood about Atsumina with Acchan graduating. :-( I read fanfics to cheer myself up about them, too!

midorisakura: Thanks! I think that Tumblr didn't put my posts up right away when people looked at the tags. Once I got my first "like" on a post, though, they seemed to show up.  ;)

fausto: I like it, too! I think that younger Takamina would take charge, but as they got older, Acchan got too bold and she got intimidated, so she stopped  :rofl:

Wmatsui22: Thank you! I plan on writing more! :D

kahem: Ah, I've heard so much about Catherine, but I haven't played it. XD Thanks for reading!~

ichikawa: Thank you! I'll keep writing.  :heart:

miyaka: Ha, I'm considering a sequel to it that's inspired by the Heavy Rotation making-of, but we'll see. ;-)

arrow27: Takamina practicing Itoshisa no Accel would totaly be epic. :shocked

Minami-chan:
I don't actually see it to be possible, either, but with all of the hard work and effort she puts into everything, she probably deserves it the most. :-(

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/1/12
« Reply #24 on: September 10, 2012, 10:57:20 AM »
Of course I did, I love showing support for writers who have epicness in their writing skills.

How can I love your work, expect more awesomeness, but then not show any support? I know how it is as a fanfic author and have people appreciate your work, it's a really great feeling. So when I can, I'd almost always comment and share my opinion. Gotta show and spread the love lol.

In reply...Hmm, I don't think it's weird for anyone to write another smut all fast when the first one was such a wonderful success. I say you have talent and why not just show it off? lol it's up to you though since you feel that way then it can't be helped, but again I loved that work of yours and umm I'll always be cheering encore for more so yah haha.

On the other hand omg, that VN stuff is sooooooooossoooooo cooooollll!!!! I can not wait, it's exciting! You're a fic god if you finish that O__O  :bow: :bow: :bow:

Thanks for your hard work, I'll be expecting the update!  :peace:

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/1/12
« Reply #25 on: September 11, 2012, 08:49:38 PM »
So I'm totally in my office on campus but instead of doing homework, I'm posting this, since I finished writing it this morning.

The lack of realism spirals out of control in this one. >_>

Also, why on earth can I write sex scenes fairly easily, but I struggle like crazy when people are just kissing? >_>

After this, I'm writing the sequel to "Of Kisses" before coming back to chapter 5.


Second to Last - Chapter Four


For a moment, Minami wondered foolishly if she had been drugged.


It was a foolish thought since it was obviously not true, but once she had stood up after her name had been called, her memory was unreliable. She remembered looking out at the crowd, plaque in her hand, but not a single word she spoke. She remembered sitting on the chair reserved for the top rank in the middle of the stage, but neither how she got there nor how she left. And she remembered being showered with hugs and congratulations as she walked backstage, but not who all surrounded her.


Though that last one could be a result of her blurry vision, unstoppable tears blocking her view.


As the news sunk in further and her shock began to fade, though this process was quite slow, the world around her grew clearer and she was made aware of what people were speaking to her and what responses she gave. She reached up to quickly wipe the tears from her eyes to find that the AKB member currently giving her congratulations was Mariko. The taller woman had both hands placed on Minami's shoulders, a proud smile spread across her face. She didn't cry, though her eyes were shimmering with unshed tears.


Mariko was saying something, her voice wavering and cracking slightly, but Minami interrupted her, her own voice hoarse and barely a whisper. "Where's Acchan?"


"What was that?" Mariko asked, leaning her head down.


Flashes of light filled Minami's vision, and a hoard of cameras were brought to her attention. It didn't surprise her, of course, but she was still coming out of her daze and hadn't taken the paparazzi into account yet. A larger camera was right next to her, filming the aftermath of what was so far the most unexpected election in AKB's history. Anything she said or did would be headlines on internet news sites in a matter of minutes, so she didn't want to speak loudly.


In Mariko's ear, she whispered, "I want to see Acchan."


Of course, due to the tear-filled chaos, it was hard to tell where any specific person was. However, the appearance of the graduated ace would certainly grab attention, so it was safe to assume she hadn't come backstage.


"I'll tell you if I see her," Mariko promised. And while it was true that Mariko was a bit of a prankster, she was also extremely responsible, and Minami knew she could trust this promise.


It felt like a mirror of years ago. When Atsuko had regained her place at first after losing to Yuko in a previous election, Minami had combed the halls backstage, looking for her girlfriend, then, too. This time, even though their positions were reversed, she was still the one searching for the person whose shoulder she wanted to cry on the most, whose embrace she wanted to be wrapped in the most... But she couldn't express any of those wishes. She could only ask weakly where Atsuko was.


Atsuko was much more free. Even before her graduation, she would be perfectly comfortable with hugging Minami no matter where they were, or reaching for her hand as they walked. She had even leaned in for a kiss a few times, though she was met with resistance on each occasion. But right now, even though Minami wanted to feel that same freedom in public expression of her friendship and love, when she'd see Atsuko, hopefully soon, she'd only allow herself to be pulled into the congratulatory embrace that everyone else gave, not comfortable with any further display. She was far too mindful of her surroundings, with its gossip mongers and cell phone cameras and people just waiting for an excuse to knock her to the ground, especially after seeing her rise so far up.


So even though she wanted to escape to Atsuko and was asking everyone where Atsuko was so that she could escape, she couldn't actually allow herself to.


After Mariko turned away to answer someone calling to her, Minami also shifted her attention, finding Yuko a few metres away. She firmly pressed her lips together in a determined expression and walked over to the woman she had stolen first place from.


"Ah! Takamina!" Yuko yelled, stretching her arm out so that her finger was pointing right at Minami. "You! There you are!"


Minami let out a weak laugh that was interrupted by a few falling tears as she swatted Yuko's arm away and pulled her faux-rival into a weepy hug. As soon as she felt her friend's arms wrap around her shoulders, it was as if the floodgates opened entirely, and her tears began to stream down her face once again. The coldness she was feeling against her own shoulder suggested to her that Yuko had also fallen victim to the emotional atmosphere.


"Yuko, I'm so sorry," Minami choked out between heavy sobs.


"You should be!" Yuko teased, pulling back so that Minami could see the playful glint in her eyes. "I thought we talked about this earlier!"


Minami attempted to play along, responding with, "As soon as I sat down out there, I totally forgot!"


It was a weak jab at her own failing character, but both women seemed satisfied with the comeback, and they hugged once more, allowing the ring of cameras that had formed around the two to take dozens of pictures of the top two ranks.


"You really deserved it, though," Yuko mumbled, a rare serious statement coming from her heart. "You really do work harder than everyone else. It's about time people noticed."


With that, the two were nearly blinded by the flashes from the multitude of cameras around them, and they both stumbled apart in a mess of weak tear-filled giggles. Minami then made her response, stating, "You deserve the top spot, too. Everyone here has worked hard, so I can't take it just because of that."


"Oh, stop being so humble!" Yuko scolded, slapping Minami's shoulder gently. "Just think of this as the next step of your world domination plan. Takahashi Japan!"


Minami shook her head at a furious speed, obviously not aiming for such a thing at all, but before she could formulate a full response, she was interrupted by Akimoto Sayaka tapping her shoulder to get her attention. At first, she thought the former Team K captain wanted to express her congratulations as well, but instead, she spoke in a low voice: "Mariko wanted to find you."


The statement could only imply one thing: Mariko had found Atsuko. Since all of the attention had been focused on herself and Yuko, it would have been easy for Atsuko to sneak backstage unnoticed. Whether that was planned or not, Minami had to admit that Mariko could be a bit of a genius sometimes. But now, she had to make her way over without attracting attention, and she wasn't nearly as crafty.


Thankfully, a diversion was provided for her, as an unsuspecting Haruna walked into Yuko's line of sight.


"Haru~nyan!" Yuko whined, running over to the taller girl and burying her face into the ample chest right in front of her face. "I'm sad! Comfort me!"


"Get off of me!" Haruna shrieked as cameras began snapping pictures of the two.


With everyone's attention firmly fixed on the pair giving a healthy dose of fan-service, Minami quickly distanced herself, following Sayaka away quietly. While there were members of all of the AKB sister groups lining the hallways in groups, once they left the main focus of the top rankings, there weren't any cameras around. Minami's own absence would soon be noticed, but she had already escaped down a few corridors and was far out of sight.


After a few moments, they came across Mariko, who was leaning against a closed door, seemingly on her phone. As as Minami got closer, she noticed that while Mariko's head was facing the small screen, her eyes were shifted towards the direction Sayaka was leading Minami from. The opposite side was a dead end, so Mariko was obviously guarding the room she was blocking, her cell phone being an illusionary diversion to not cause attention.


"They took the bait?" Mariko inquired, her eyes sparkling.


Sayaka grinned. "Poor Haruna. You definitely owe her for what Yuko's doing to her."


"Isn't that her reward?" Mariko shot back, causing the two women to giggle and Minami to stare in confusion. But rather than answering Minami's stare and thus revealing the details of the plan titled 'Operation Reunite the Captain and Her Ace—But Don't Let Anyone See the Sparks Fly', Mariko simply opened the door just wide enough for Minami to (be forced to) slip in and quickly shut the door behind. As the doors didn't lock, Mariko stayed outside the door on her phone.


Of course, being left in the dark about the details of what was going on, Minami didn't freely walk inside the room. Instead, Sayaka gracefully grabbed Minami by the waist and half-pushed, half-threw her through the doorway (which was quite easy considering the difference in size of the two women) before scurrying back to the main chaos to make sure none of the cameras had a reason to find their way down the corridors leading to the room she had just come from.


But as soon as Minami heard the door click shut behind her, she didn't think about the way she had been led to the room anymore. Because in front of her, Atsuko stood, a bright and loving smile gracing her pleasant features, and her wish had been realized. Without the cameras and the flashing lights and tearful screams of over two-hundred and fifty other girls deafening anyone within earshot, she was free to act as she wished, and she held tightly to Atsuko's waist, burying her head in her girlfriend's shoulder, her tears flowing freely again. She felt Atsuko rest her cheek against her head, and Atsuko's own tears began to fall onto Minami's hair. This only caused Minami to nestle in further to the familiar embrace, their bodies fitting together perfectly.


"Congratulations, Minami," Atsuko softly mumbled against Minami's hair.


That was all Minami needed to hear, and was what she had been needing to hear ever since her name had been announced. Keeping her arms wrapped around Atsuko's waist, she pulled her head back so that she could see her girlfriend's face glowing with pride. Atsuko reached a hand to gently brush Minami's tears away, and it lingered against Minami's cheek, causing the older girl to instinctively lean in to the warmth it provided.


"I'm not really convinced of it all," Minami admitted with half a laugh forcing its way out of her throat. "But thank you."


Atsuko shook her head before leaning down until her forehead was resting against Minami's. "Just let yourself be happy about it."


Minami's response was just to close her eyes and let out a low hum, neither agreeing nor disagreeing with her girlfriend's specific statement, but instead allowing herself to be happy about the intoxicating proximity, which really was just a twist on what was asked of her, wasn't it? With Atsuko's soft breath caressing her face, one hand cupping her cheek, her other resting on her back pulling her close, she was surrounded by safety and warmth and she completely uncharacteristically forgot about everything that was taking place outside of the room.


Her eyes slowly opened to stare into Atsuko's dark gaze, her mind fogging over in an instant. She leaned upwards, pushing herself up on her toes, allowing Atsuko's hand to pull her along the short distance until instead of their foreheads touching, their lips grazed against each others'. Atsuko's hand moved back to tangle in Minami's long hair, keeping the other girl close as her lips parted, taking Minami's bottom lip between hers and running her tongue along the width. Minami gasped in response, her mouth opening in the process, and Atsuko continued to hold her dominance in the kiss, her tongue moving forward to gently caress Minami's own. Minami's grip on the back of Atsuko's loose-fitting dress tightened in concert with the quickening of her heartbeat and the tightening in her stomach. She responded to Atsuko's passionate embrace with all of her energy, but she was still unable to wrestle control away, and that was really what usually happened when they were in such intense situations.


If she didn't pull back soon, she knew things would get out of hand, but so much had happened in such a short time that she didn't break of the kiss like she knew she should. Completely lost in both the emotional and physical sensations coursing through her body, she didn't notice the frantic pounding on the door to the room.


She didn't notice the door click open.


She didn't notice flashes of light illuminating the room in a frenzy.


She didn't notice as the seeds were planted that could grow to destroy her dream.


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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/11/12
« Reply #26 on: September 11, 2012, 08:55:58 PM »
Thank you for this..
I find your fic one of the most unique stories here..
I usually lurk around to find some stories to read..
and your fic was one of the stories caught my attention..
thank you and keep updating..  :heart:
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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/11/12
« Reply #27 on: September 12, 2012, 04:31:37 AM »
eh? a fic.. for me :O.... onegaishimasu!!!!!!!!!!

jajaj i love all this fic but of course my faovrite part de kojiyuu part jajajaj I  imagine that scene sounds so funny..

wait what.. nooooo the press gonna reveal atsumina relationship :O i hope is mariko who enter in the room -_-

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/11/12
« Reply #28 on: September 16, 2012, 10:19:33 PM »
OMGAWD!!!

How come I missed this update?!!!! WHAT?!!!!!!!!!!!WHAT?!!!!!!!!!!!WHAT?!!!!!!!!!!! Did I miss this on tumblr too or what? O__O"

I barely saw your post during the debate in the general discussion thread and just had to come check, thank kami-sama I did!

The chapter started out joyously. Then as you have warned us earlier 'The ending scene'  :shocked This is how all the heartache will begin isn't it?...

I don't even know how to feel right now, since I'm a mess for them and then it just ended so abruptly I'm still left swimming in my 'feel' for this chapter.

Thanks so much for this update! Again, I seriously appreciate the great work.  Please, update soon :heart:

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/11/12
« Reply #29 on: September 16, 2012, 11:58:05 PM »
I haven't play neither but I watched videos for the story ^^ Catherine is so WOW!!!

OMG!!! Takamina won the senbatsu!!!

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/11/12
« Reply #30 on: September 20, 2012, 07:35:13 PM »
anonymousdowner: Okay, okay, how about this? I'll write another smut as soon as I get access to the perv forum. I don't have many more posts to go. (I'd get another post closer if you'd update your fic so that I could comment on the awesomeness of the update since I'm really enjoying your fic as well.)  And as for your response to Ch4 of Second to Last... Yes, you did miss it somehow even on Tumblr. XD But I'm glad you eventually made it back to read!

miayaka: I'm glad you think the story is unique! I don't think it's that crazy. XD

Haruko: I knew you'd like the Kojiyuu part! I had to stick them in the story somehow. And I hate to tell you... but Mariko's not the one entering the room. ;-)

kahem: I'm thinking of playing it after I finish Valkyria Chronicles, so then I'll see how "WOW" it is!

As I mentioned at my last update, I'm posting the sequel to Of Kisses, which was the first post in this thread. I'm really happy with how this turned out, so i hope you all enjoy it, too!



Of Kisses (and More)

(AKA Of Kisses - Part 2)


When Minami had originally offered to be Atsuko's kissing partner, she expected that it would end once the younger girl's curiosity had been satisfied that same afternoon.


But this expectation very quickly was shot down, as the next time she found herself giggling with Atsuko on her bed, her lips had been chastely claimed. With a blush on her cheeks, Atsuko had answered Minami's confused expression with a mischievous, "You said I could kiss you whenever I wanted to, right?"


It turned out that "whenever Atsuko wanted" was actually quite often, and that Atsuko's curiosity was seemingly endless. While Minami would never let it be known to anyone— certainly never to Atsuko herself— she secretly really liked kissing Atsuko, so she didn't make any effort to halt this new development within their friendship.


While this could also symbolize a relationship that would surpass the definitions of friendship, Minami didn't view it as such. Her offer originally came from her friendship, and certainly didn't mean l-l-l— ... anything other than that. She hadn't heard of a word from Atsuko implying anything otherwise, either. So even though it was a bit abnormal, they were really just best friends who kissed every once in awhile occasionally a lot. But that was okay, since it was only in private, and she was pretty sure no one so much as suspected such a trend was going on.


Which honestly was a bit miraculous, seeing how this went on for three years. As days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months and months turned into years, Atsuko grew more and more bold with her surprise kisses. Her tongue began to sneak its way past Minami's lips and her hands began to wander, first over the material of Minami's clothes and eventually underneath. Minami often found herself in a quite odd mental state after such heavy make-out sessions, as even though she enjoyed the feeling of Atsuko's hands and mouth and body against her own, this situation she had unknowingly started was completely spiraling out of control.


But she put off taking control for a number of reasons. First of all, Atsuko seemed to be really happy when they spent their time together in such an intimate fashion. Her eyes would sparkle and grow aflame as she'd lean in for more and more, and Minami couldn't couldn't extinguish that fire. Second, and probably really the reason stopping her the most, was that she simply could not bring herself to talk about such an embarrassing topic. While most girls her age were fully fluent in the language of romance and sex, shouldn't couldn't even say the "s-word", much less talk about it or anything related to it. Even just asking Atsuko to please take her hand out of her shirt was going to send the short girl into a stuttering, blushing mess.


However, the third year brought on an event that rattled this balance in their friendship that was already slowly tipping to the side. This event featured a very giggly Atsuko chasing Minami around a dressing room with the intent to plant a big kiss on the other girl's lips. Of course, Minami was certainly not willing to entertain such a notion, no matter how happy and beautiful Atsuko looked at the moment, because they were in public with a camera filming them.


The setting was, of course, the filming for the Heavy Rotation music video. While admittedly, everyone was under this spell that caused all of the girls to kiss each other, to Minami's knowledge, the myriad of lip-locks were full of silly, innocent pecks, not under the danger of turning into something deep and passionate and entirely inappropriate for their location and audience. And therein lied the difference between Atsuko's chasing of her and everyone else's actions.


After an extremely short retreat, Atsuko managed to grab Minami's arm and pull her close enough to lean in and softly kiss her. Minami instantly pulled her head back out of fear, but Atsuko simply let go, giggling and bouncing off to her next target, leaving Minami frozen in place, absolutely bewildered. A few snickers came from the girls around her, and she quickly shook her head to recover and move on.


But she knew she'd have to force herself to come back to it.


The shooting ended at 1AM, but Minami knew that if she put off confronting Atsuko about the past three years leading up to today, she'd end up in the same position she always found herself in. So even though Atsuko was only a few metres away, Minami sent her friend a short text, asking her to meet at the theatre in an hour. It would take nearly that long simply to change into normal clothes and travel to Akihabara, but Atsuko caught Minami's gaze through he mirror in the dressing room and nodded.


An hour later, Minami dangled her legs off the end of the stage at the theatre, clutching her phone in both hands while waiting not-so-patiently. A ring of keys lay abandoned next to her on the stage, one key singled out, and she glanced at it nervously when she heard a door slam in the distance.


"Minami?" she heard a familiar voice whisper, breaking the silence of the empty venue. "Where are you?"


After letting out a relieved exhale, Minami yelled back, "I'm on the stage! Make sure you lock up behind you!"


Soon after, Atsuko stepped onto the side of the stage from a backstage entrance, and seeing Minami sitting on the edge, walked over to her. She covered her mouth with her hand to hide a yawn as she dropped her body to the ground to sit next to the shorter girl, leaning her head to rest on the familiar shoulder. Her hand subconsciously reached out, gently tossing Minami's cell phone aside and replacing it with her hand, which entwined with Minami's own.


"So you have something so important to talk about that we have to have this conversation in the middle of the night?" Atsuko softly whined.


Minami frowned, though her friend couldn't see the expression. "W-Well, it struck me, and I didn't want to forget..."


"If you would forget it tomorrow," Atsuko teased, "it must not be that important, hm~?"


"I-I didn't mean it like that!" Minami insisted, having been caught in Atsuko's trap of words. "It's more like... You know, I'm not good with serious conversations and stuff..."


"Says the Team A Captain who's always encouraging everyone..."


Minami closed her eyes and leaned her head to rest against Atsuko's. While she knew this conversation wasn't going to be easy, Atsuko was making it particularly hard on her. Her thumbs subconsciously traced circles on Atsuko's palm as she contemplated how to breach the conversation without Atsuko completely discouraging her along the way.


Luckily, Atsuko saved her from further humiliation by conceding. "Sorry. I'm just so exhausted, and even though you've had three years to bring it up, you had to choose right now— "


Minami's eyes shot open in surprise. "You already... H-How did you— "


"If it were anything else, you wouldn't drag me here at 2AM and stutter so much," Atsuko giggled, but her cheerful tone was soon covered by a yawn once again, which seemed to suck all of the energy out of her. When she continued after a moment in which Minami was still too surprised to speak, her voice was lacking the playfulness from before. "So what is it that you need to say?"


This finally gave Minami an opening, and although her heart was pounding, she managed to state, "You know, that offer three years ago... I-I didn't expect it to still..."


"I didn't, either," Atsuko agreed. "But I'm glad."


"'Glad'...?" Minami repeated.


Atsuko shifted her body slightly, causing Minami to lift her head. This freed Atsuko to look over at Minami's blushing face, which was apparent even with the dim lighting in the empty, unused theatre. She used her free hand to grip the back of the smaller girl's neck as leverage to pull their faces close enough to brush their lips together. A flush covered her own cheeks as she pulled back, and she responded to the question finally with, "Because I like kissing you."


They were so close to each other, and Minami found herself completely entranced by the woman in front of her, with the soft breathing caressing her cheeks and the dark gaze holding her own. It was hard to form a response, since her determination to hold the conversation she had hoped for was rapidly fading away.


"I like kissing you, too," Minami managed to blurt out, not really what she intended to say.


Atsuko tilted her head to the side as a wide smile spread across her features. "So what's the problem?"


"Well," Minami began tentatively, "we're friends, right?"


The smile on Atsuko's face faded at the question. "Of course."


"Friends don't... k-k..."


"They don't kiss?" Atsuko finished, gaining a wide-eyed nod from Minami. The pair both grew silent, but didn't pull away from each other. Sensing Minami was having a hard time deciding where to take the conversation from there, Atsuko opened her mouth to say, "Then we're not friends."


"What?" Minami asked, completely bewildered.


"Since friends don't normally kiss, then we're not friends," Atsuko summarized for the dense girl she was holding. "We're something else."


Again, Minami found herself repeating Atsuko's words slowly. "'Something else'...?"


She felt the hand that was tangled her hair behind her neck move to her shoulder and gently push her down to the stage floor. In her confusion, she didn't protest the movement, and instead looked up at the figure hovering over her. Her hands were freed, as Atsuko pulled her hand away from where it was previously grasped in order to support her weight. This allowed Minami to reach up and tuck Atsuko's long hair behind her ears, allowing her to see the the expression staring down at her.


Atsuko grinned widely. "Something more."


Minami didn't have a chance to question the statement, as her lips were roughly claimed by her something-more-than-a-friend. Her eyes fluttered shut and her hands reached up to clutch at the material of Atsuko's shirt, pulling the girl atop her closer until instead of hovering above her, Atsuko's body rested against hers in a tight embrace. Atsuko took Minami's bottom lip between her teeth and tugged on it before attempting to lift her head away, but the smaller girl chased the retreating lips with her own, lengthening the kiss with her own passion, one of her hands trailing up to tangle in Atsuko's hair in an attempt to keep the other girl in place.


But Atsuko still managed to pull back after a moment, placing short kisses against the corner of Minami's mouth while gazing down at the girl below her, whose eyes were still closed, her cheeks flushed and her lips swollen. Her own lips trailed a path down Minami's neck and back up towards her ear, taking the sensitive earlobe between her lips and pulled on it gently before whispering, "Something that makes you mine."


And as dense as Minami may be, she certainly wasn't stupid. The words Atsuko spoke clicked together in her brain and she knew exactly what was being implied. Her eyes slowly opened and a strangled gasp left her mouth as she processed the emotions coursing through her from the possessive words spoken in her ear and the physical sensations burning her skin from the passionate kisses and touches caressing her body.


"S-So today..." Minami shakily attempted to route the conversation back to the reason behind their need to have such a private meeting.


Atsuko nestled her face in Minami's neck and let her lips linger on the soft skin there before she responded, her airy voice slightly muffled, "Everyone was all over each other, so had I had to show everyone that you're mine."


Minami couldn't help the cheesy grin that spread across her face at the confession. All of a sudden, this action that had caused such alarm earlier in the day no longer seemed to be a big deal. She felt her... well, her girlfriend, now, snuggle further into her side, and the late hour was brought to her attention.


"Mm, Atsuko," Minami slowly began, fatigue slurring her words a bit. "We should both go home and sleep."


A high-pitched groan of protest was stifled by Minami's neck before Atsuko responded with, "You're comfy. I'm gonna sleep here."


Minami blinked a few times in surprise, but didn't protest. Her own exhaustion was beginning to take over as well, and Atsuko's soft body provided a perfect blanket to snuggle with. She no longer even noticed the hardness of the cold stage floor beneath her as her eyes drifted shut and her breathing deepened into a sleepy rhythm.


When they were found early next morning by a punctual Togasaki, he simply draped a blanket over the pair and moved on with the day.



Edited to fix formatting issues that didn't carry over from Tumblr. :-(
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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/20/12
« Reply #32 on: September 21, 2012, 01:45:44 AM »
They are so cute~

In Catherine is the character Catherine who is WOW!!!

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/20/12
« Reply #33 on: September 21, 2012, 05:09:44 AM »
aww atsumina.. that was cute and hot..  and togasaki.. jejej :D love him too.. :D

yeah kojiyuu please!! :D... but then.. is not maritroll so.. T_T

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/20/12
« Reply #34 on: September 21, 2012, 06:51:11 AM »
that was cute! XD
hope there will be part 3 for this XD

thanks for the update :thumbsup

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/20/12
« Reply #35 on: September 21, 2012, 07:02:51 AM »
So Togasaki knows everything, if anyone of us were to meet him at the theater, that person should bombard him with questions :lol:. Part 3 please, I want to know the members' reactions when they saw their Captain/Ace sleeping together like that :twisted:

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/20/12
« Reply #36 on: September 21, 2012, 09:06:13 AM »
Omg this is so good ;___;/ I'm trying to bring my heart back to life! LOL :heart: :heart:

I love AtsuMina so much and this just made me love it some more.

I can't wait for more of your work!

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/20/12
« Reply #37 on: September 21, 2012, 11:40:20 AM »
wow!

Atsumina!!!! :D

I like it!!!

Please more Atsumina ONE_SHOTS!!!

Please update your Second to Last..

I'm waiting..

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/20/12
« Reply #38 on: September 22, 2012, 11:49:40 PM »
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that was cute!
hope there will be part 3 for this

I agree with this ;)
Part 3 please
I hope there will be part 3, this is so sweet~  :heart:
Thank you for this update and I hope you make another part!

Oh, geez. XD I just can't win! I meant for the first part of Of Kisses to be a one-shot, then people bugged me for a sequel, and so I was like, "Oh, fine. Why not?" and I wrote one, hoping that would make everyone happy. And now you crazy people want more?  :sweatdrop: I... I'll do my best!  :heart: I think I'll finish up Second to Last first, though.

TakaminaBG: I don't think you're weird for thinking it was hot. XD As I was writing the fic during lectures, I was shielding my paper away from my classmates next to me because I was uncomfortable with it.

Sese: Wouldn't that be awesome? XD I, unfortunately, lost that excuse last year.  :cry: So Takamina will never offer to kiss me.

Rukaeru: Oh, I'm so sorry you couldn't understand some of the words I chose! I sometimes forget that there are a lot of people reading who aren't native English speakers, so I kind of go crazy with the language. XD One one hand, it adds a lot of variety to the story (not reading the same words over and over), but it does make it harder for some people to understand. Feel free to ask me if you're confused on anything. :-)

kahem: Atsumina is always cute! :heart:

Haruko: Heh, yeah, Togasaki seems awesome, so I had to throw the last line in there. XD And nope, not Maritroll. I did say there was going to be drama, so that's the start of it.  :P

Trickster: Thank you! Atsumina is always cute!~

Tanchan: I seriously bet Togasaki knows so much about everything. XD It'd be hilarious to see what secrets he could share...

Nyanoha: Bring that heart back to life!  You want to be alive to read more fanfics, don't you?  :w00t:

Wmatsui22: Thank you! I'll update Second to Last soon!
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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 9/20/12
« Reply #39 on: September 25, 2012, 10:49:17 PM »
Here's an update on Second to Last~!

I have decided that instead of doing homework or writing my lesson plans (well, I have most of that done, anyway), I will post part of Chapter 5. I've decided to split this chapter into 2 parts because I haven't even arrived at the main scene of chapter 5, yet it's already 2/3 as long as chapter 4 was! In fact, I made an outline of five things I want to get through in this chapter, and I've really only accomplished one in this part.  :sweatdrop: So you guys get an early update. I wouldn't expect part 2 for another week, though.

Wow, there are a lot of pointlessly long sentences in this one.


Second to Last

Chapter 5 - Part 1

It has been theorized that there is only a finite amount of happiness in the world.

There are two main reasons why this can be believed to be true. First is that it's often the case that when one person gains happiness, it is at the expense of other people. This can be easily seen in events such as auditions and competitions, and of course any time people find comedy in others' misfortune. The second is that people go through cycles of bliss and misery; no one is happy for the entire duration of his or her life.

And in this moment, Minami found herself to be a textbook example of this theory.

When the door to the room she had been hiding in with Atsuko swung open, revealing a dozen reporters with cameras raised at eye level, she quickly stepped back from the passionate embrace she had been caught in. However, the bright flashes of light that were fading back into the normal brightness of the room informed her that her movement was too late. And thus, the great achievement she had been awarded not even an hour earlier had already been overshadowed by what could become the most extreme scandal among all of the AKB48 groups.

She quickly found herself pulled to the side, as Atsuko shielded her from the still-clicking cameras who had taken over the area around the doorway. Her first instinct was to reach for her cell phone, but it was stowed away in the locked green room she had been in earlier that afternoon. While she knew Atsuko had her phone with her, she dared not reach around in her girlfriend's pockets when her every move was being documented in such detail.

From between the legs of one of the photographers, she saw Mariko sitting on the floor. The tall girl's knees were bent upwards, and her hands were awkwardly supporting her weight from behind her, in a position that implied she had been roughly knocked to the floor while attempting to keep the paparazzi out of the room.

Minami discreetly raised her hand to her ear in a motion that she hoped Mariko would interpret as referring to her cell phone. She received a nod from the older girl as she shuffled to her feet and held said cell phone in front of her chest, indicating that the wordless message had been successfully received. Without gaining any notice from the reporters—they were far too busy with the secret couple in front of them—Mariko slipped out of sight, phone to her ear, leaving Atsuko and Minami to stall for time without further harming their reputations while waiting for damage control to arrive and diffuse the situation.

One of the reporters, who had been standing off to the side, held out a small tape recorder with shaking hands as he asked, his voice nasally and arrogant, "What would the rule-breaking general manager and fallen ace wish to say for themselves?"

At the question, Atsuko narrowed her eyes, and she began to speak in a cold tone, "Am I not allowed to congratulate—"

"We have nothing to say at this time," Minami interrupted, still hiding behind Atsuko as to not give more cause for bad press. "Our agencies will release official statements at a later time."

"But why should we wait when both of you are right here?" another reporter asked with a deep, booming voice, his question echoing in Minami's ears long after his voice had left his throat.

She knew that if she hesitated to speak, Atsuko would give a response. While the taller woman was normally quiet and hesitant, after her graduation, she had begun to bloom into a woman who took more of a role in deciding her own path in her life and career. This was mostly a response to no longer being tied down by the strict rules that she had been forced to follow as a member of AKB48. She could say whatever she wanted, go wherever she wanted, spend time with whomever she wanted, and after a day or two, it would be entirely forgotten, and she could continue to act in whatever drama or movie she was working on with next to no consequence. The few brief scandals that had been headlines since that fateful day in August just a year before were perfect examples of that.

But not only did Minami have to follow the rules of AKB48, she had to enforce them. She couldn't speak freely.

"We have no obligation to answer your questions," Minami flatly stated.

At this statement, rather than speaking one-at-a-time like before, three or four of the reporters shouted questions at once, their voices mixing with each other to become uninterpretable. Even so, it wasn't hard to guess what the questions probably were and know not to answer them.

Luckily, after a few more moments of this chaos, a commotion was raised outside the doorway. A few large men broke through the wall of cameras and surrounded the two women in the center of the room. Their size and stature blocked any further photos that would be worth anything to the press, and in this way, after placing firm hands on the girls' backs, they quickly maneuvered Atsuko and Minami out of the room.

"Takahashi-san, Maeda-san," one of them spoke in a low tone once they left earshot of the paparazzi behind them. "There's a car waiting outside for both of you."

Minami let out a relieved exhale and nodded, though she was still a bit nervous about the confrontation they were surely about to be driven to. It was late, but due to the election, Akimoto Yasushi was likely en route to the same vehicle as they were, to drive to his office and discuss the repercussions of what had occurred. But at least no further damage could be cause now that they were once again out of sight of the reporters.

They were led out a service exit most likely used by vendors who sold merchandise and refreshments during shows. A black van with tinted windows was parked in the large garage the exit led to, and one of the men leading the two rushed forward to slide open the backseat door for them to enter. After nodding in thanks, Minami followed Atsuko into the vehicle, taking a seat next to her girlfriend, and the door was rolled shut behind her. The front passenger seat was surprisingly empty, but from the driver's seat, Togasaki leaned over, nodding to them women in greeting, but did not lift a stern frown from his face.

"Before we leave, I need your phones," he stated.

"Mine's in the green room," Minami quickly answered, folding her hands together in her lap and looking down at them. When she had received her promotion to general manager not even a full year earlier, she had been told that she had been placed in a position above Togasaki. Yet here, this distribution of power had been reversed, which implied to her that her position had already been revoked—which was more than fair, she admitted to herself—but it still stung.

Atsuko's soft voice echoed through the interior of the van. "I can't discuss this with my manager?"

"We're already discussing this matter amongst the higher-ups," Togasaki responded patiently.

While Atsuko's tone had been respectful and her question valid, the response given to her caused a frown to form on her face. Even so, she reached into the pocket of her pants to pull out her cell phone, but rather than handing it to the man in front of her whom she once considered to be her superior, she held it in her hands and looked down at it.

Noticing Atsuko's hesitation, Minami quietly pleaded, "Atsuko, please."

Atsuko's mouth opened as if to form words of protest, but she instead decided against fighting this battle and gave up possession of her phone to Togasaki. He placed it safely in an inside pocket of his overcoat before turning the key in the ignition, starting the van with a low hum. He wordlessly drove the van away from Budokan, the solitary vehicle traveling its path, unfollowed.
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