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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 10/23/12
« Reply #60 on: October 24, 2012, 09:13:18 AM »
I...I....I can't tell you how much I love you (not in that way okay :nervous). Imagine if this happened in real life XD, the reporters were gonna have a field day of it but we would be celebrating overnight :lol:, drinking prohibited of course :nervous
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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 10/23/12
« Reply #61 on: October 24, 2012, 12:24:59 PM »
Love the way it goes, of course Aki-pi is happy hehe  :twothumbs Anyway, I can't wait for the update, see how the situation is handle and what Minami will gonna do/think about that. It means: UPDATE!!  :nervous

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 10/23/12
« Reply #62 on: November 01, 2012, 06:53:20 PM »
@arrow27: Thanks! The exams went fine, as I expected. :D I really try to keep the story realistic, as you noticed. I hope the ending doesn't disappoint!

@kahem: Don't worry!~ Acchan's happy to take the fall for Takamina. All that matters is  :heart:!

@Chichay12: Drama is the best, isn't it? XD

@Pdpond: Acchan would really do anything for her Takamina!~  :heart:

@saeyukilover: I once read something about how fans in Japan look at our beloved pairings differently than non-Japanese fans. We all want to ship the girls together, but the Japanese fans see it more like, "I want to be with her!" instead! I think I read it on AKB48Wrapup. So I unfortunately doubt their main audience would be very supportive if a relationship was really announced.  :cry: Wasn't the reaction to Acchan's wanting to marry Takamina blog post something like, "You know that's not possible, right?" or something?  :cry:

@Haruko: And Takamina is so stubborn. XD Good luck, Acchan!

@hidden_player: I'm glad you think the conversations are cute! I think Atsumina is totally cute. XD

@Tanchan: I'm glad you love me? XD Oh, god, we'd have so much fun. And I'd totally be drinking, by the way, since I'm legal for that. XD But since I'm a lightweight, I'd get drunk like right away and pass out.  :lol:

@fausto: Takamina has a lot of thinking to do, doesn't she? Well, you don't have to yell for it anymore, because I have updated! See?


Omg, I am finally, finally, finally done writing this piece of crap. Now I can relax and write fluffy one-shots. It's short because I didn't have much to say and I just wanted to be done and move on from this. XD

So as for the title, I've hinted before that I've changed the main plot of this a few times, and that resulted in the title no longer working out. "Second" was supposed to refer to Takamina getting second place at the senbatsu, but after her solo debut announcement, I just got so excited that I had to raise that. Then, the transition "Second to Last" represents the fall she thought she would experience as the result of the scandal. Obviously, that title no longer makes sense. So I came up with another meaning for the title and stuck it in here. It's pure cheesiness and I wanted to puke, so I hope you like it.


Second to Last
Chapter 7 (Final)


Eight years ago, Minami first met Atsuko.

They didn't speak for a few months, but Minami remembered the other girl of her own age clearly, stumbling her way through dance steps and second-guessing herself during all of the performances and rehearsals. Eventually, around the time of "Skirt, Hirari", the two were brought together by circumstance.

They were the last two in the dressing room, not because they were slow or late, but because the let everyone else go ahead of them to pick spots to stash their things and change. As a result, they were in a rush, so much so that by the time they got to the point of helping each other tie their ribbons in their shirt collars, something inevitably went wrong.

"Um, Takahashi-san," Atsuko shyly began. "Have you seen an extra ribbon?"

Minami turned to look at Atsuko, dressed impeccably in her white shirt and pink skirt, no wrinkles visible to the eye even though she had been rushed. Even her hair seemed to not have a strand out of place. Minami found herself beginning to feel a bit self-conscious about her own appearance, which was not nearly as tidy, even though she had to stand as center for the song. Her fingers tightened around the ribbon in her hand.

"Nope. Just mine. Did you leave it somewhere?"

"I don't think I did..." Atsuko trailed off, frowning. She looked around calmly, pawing through her purse even though she had already searched through it for the lost accessory.

Ever since the beginning of the group, the girls had been told to think of each other as rivals, feeling a will to improve and surpass each other. As Minami watched Atsuko look for the ribbon, it struck her that this was the perfect situation, one that her seniors would have used as an example of how to crush the competition. She could simply tie her ribbon around her own neck, shrug, and walk off to meet up with everyone else.

But as she looked at the other girl, someone her own age, someone as unsure in life as herself, she couldn't find it within her to take such an action. Besides, she reasoned, between the two of them, it was Atsuko who was much more suited to be the center, not her.

"Here, turn around," Minami stated.

"Did you find it?" Atsuko asked, her face brightening in a smile as she turned to face the tiny girl. She was surprised to see Minami's hands reach up to securely tie the ribbon on her short neatly. After a moment that Minami used to straighten it, Atsuko took a step back, fidgeting a bit. "Th-Thanks. I'll tie yours now."

"That was mine," Minami admitted.

"What?" Atsuko asked, her smile disappearing. "Why did you do that?"

"Because you didn't have yours?" Minami responded as a question, knowing it wasn't a good excuse at all. The embarrassed expression on her face reflected this failure.

Atsuko reached up to untie the ribbon, but Minami's hands stopped her. This caused the younger girl to exclaim in frustration, "But now you don't have one, and you're the center! All I am is a girl who can't sing and can't dance, but you can do those things! So you take your ribbon back, and I'll go tell Akimoto-sensei that I lost mine, and I'll go home, and everything'll be fine!"

"Nope!" Minami shot back. "If you give me that back, I won't wear it. Then we'll both get in trouble."

"Why?" Atsuko demanded.

"Because I'm stubborn!" Minami proudly answered. The two stared at each other for a moment before they couldn't keep up the argument and they both broke into a fit of giggles.

"You sure?" Atsuko asked, twisting her fingers in the hem of her skirt. "I don't want you to get in trouble, Takahashi-san."

The grin on Minami's face widened and she shook her head. "Call me Minami."

"Then... You have to call me Atsuko."

This declaration of friendship, borne from the need for Minami to take the blame for things which may not actually be her fault, was enough to make up for the loss of the ribbon, and although Minami did get a severe lecture later that night, it was far outweighed by this new bond that would grow and blossom into something more as the years would pass.

Which brought them here, eight years later, to a situation that can easily be described as a perfect reversal.

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"Minami?"

The small girl blinked a few times, startled out of her reverie by her concerned girlfriend. She noticed after a moment that Atsuko's face was extremely close, indecently close considering that they were in an unlocked, public room. Akimoto would open the door any minute now, revealing them to the entire hallway of office workers in the process. Of course, doing so would negate the entire point of the meeting they were in. So Minami soon found herself on the floor, as her hasty attempt to get away from Atsuko backfired and her chair fell over, her with it.

To make matters worse, that was moment in which the door swung open. Akimoto stopped in the doorway, first looking down at the clumsy girl at his feet, and then over at the other girl still sitting professionally in her chair, stifling laughter behind her hand. Not quite knowing how to respond to the scene, he simply coughed, which caused a very embarrassed Minami to jump back to her feet before sinking back into the chair that she had previously been occupying.

After Akimoto sat down across from the girls again, he asked, "Can I assume by whatever that was which I walked in on that you two have agreed to the proposed solution?

Minami was silent at the question, her hands folded in her lap. She noticed Atsuko's pleading gaze directed towards her, but she still wasn't quite convinced of the idea. Her attempt to convince herself to accept the solution Atsuko had suggested—something extremely difficult for someone as stubborn as her—had been interrupted before she had been able to finish resigning herself to agree.

While she took the blame away from others, she never once expected anything in return. She didn't count and keep track of favors, because she didn't feel any were owed back to her. Yet she began to realize that maybe others didn't feel the same way. In taking the fall for Atsuko all of those years ago, it was possible that the younger girl had wanted to do something of the same, a wish that had grown as her feelings surely had. And to leave that need unfulfilled would be karmically cruel to both of them.

Swallowing a deep breath, she raised her eyes to meet those of the man who had given her all of the opportunities in her life. Through him, she had been able to sing, to dance, to act, to be someone whom she had only dreamed of being. And through him, she had met the woman whom she loved more than anything else in the world.

And she said, "Yes."

A relieved exhale escaped Atsuko's mouth at the statement, and Minami's eyes met hers. A smile was shared between the two, one that couldn't be described using simple words, but the love between the two of them was so apparent that even Akimoto began to chuckle to himself.

"Just don't be so obvious from now on, okay?" he asked slyly, causing both women to blush. "Anyway, if I could have you both sign this statement? I'll gather a collection of reporters for a press conference right away. Once this is released, you'll be free to go."

True to his words, after Minami and Atsuko signed the written statement, a multitude of phone calls were made, and they waited patiently in Akimoto's office until he returned from the press conference in the main lobby of the building. While waiting, both girls plugged their phones in to find a huge amount of texts and voice-mails waiting for them, all of them supportive from friends and family.

"Did you see the one from Yuko?" Atsuko giggled, resting her head on Minami's shoulder as she scrolled through pages of messages.

"Yup. Have to say that I agree—it's crazy that we got caught before her and Harunyan," Minami smiled. "I think I'm going to give her a lecture about how this isn't an excuse for her to expose their relationship, too."

"I think that with Yuko's personality, they'd be able to get away with a lot more than we can," Atsuko reminded, causing Minami to grumble something incoherent in response. After closing her phone, Atsuko closed her eyes. "We really are lucky to have such wonderful friends, aren't we?"

Minami gave a low hum in response, still typing her reply to Yuko's text. Once it was sent, Atsuko reached over to grasp the tiny girl's phone and folded it shut as well, linking their fingers together loosely in the process. Minami turned her head to look down at the content girl nestling into her shoulder, watching the long eyelashes flutter in front of her. A content expression formed on her face as well until she allowed her eyes to close.

"We really are," she agreed.

"And we're really lucky that we were able to resolve everything," Atsuko continued.

There was no point in bringing up the fact that Atsuko had lost something in the process, as it couldn't be changed at this point. Instead, Minami just agreed, saying, "We are. I almost had to give up the second to last thing I wanted to lose."

"Second to last?" Atsuko repeated. She lifted her head, causing Minami to open her eyes and look over at her girlfriend again. Atsuko's hand left the grasp of Minami's and reached up to play with the strands of hair at the side of Minami's face. "So what's the last thing you'd ever want to lose?"

The tiny girl blushed and averted her eyes for a moment, which in combination with the deep blush that colored her cheeks was enough of an answer. Atsuko giggled before leaning in to place a light kiss on the embarrassed girl's lips before resting her forehead against the other's, grinning widely.

"I love you, too," Atsuko murmured happily. She didn't care that she was no longer an actress anymore. All that mattered was that she was the woman whom Takahashi Minami loved.

As for Minami, she had learned through the ups and downs of the past 24 hours what truly was most important to her, what was held most dear in her heart. The safety and comfort of the past years had finally been weighed against the possibilities of the future, and to her surprise, she had found that most of her happiness lied where she didn't expect it: with a person instead of a profession.

And she couldn't wait to see where that happiness would lead her to.

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #63 on: November 01, 2012, 08:52:53 PM »
No matter how busy I am cramming for a project (3:50am at my place XD), I just can't ignore your update. Augh, I've been a silent reader of this in a long while and now I can't hide this feeling of gratitude over your wonderful fic. Ahhhhh.. Thank you!!! love love.

I was expecting that everything would be dramatic at the end, but it became fluffy and sweet which I really liked. I can really feel the love and with that history of how they met and started a good relationship makes sense and connection how the story had ended.. Ah I can't explain any further and clearer, I'm giggling here as well.  :mon lovelaff: HAHAHAHA.

Hope to read more awesome fics from you heart heart heart lots of hearts for you <333333 lol.

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #64 on: November 02, 2012, 12:46:17 AM »
Hehe... sorry for never commenting this fic, Second to Last. I lurked on this one too, tbh. :}

So... in the end, Atsuko was put herself and her career at risk... for Minami? Wow!  :shocked  So envious of their love  :wub:
Umm... actually, I got a little confused while reading this part.  :nervous

There was no point in bringing up the fact that Atsuko had lost something in the process, as it couldn't be changed at this point. Instead, Minami just agreed, saying, "We are. I almost had to give up the second to last thing I wanted to lose."

"Second to last?" Atsuko repeated. She lifted her head, causing Minami to open her eyes and look over at her girlfriend again. Atsuko's hand left the grasp of Minami's and reached up to play with the strands of hair at the side of Minami's face. "So what's the last thing you'd ever want to lose?"

Sorry, my english is so terrible. I hope you don't mind explaining it to me? Ehe...  :nervous

And, I'm looking forward for your another new fics. Thanks for the update, I love the ending.   Your writing style is so amazing.

Thank you!

Minami's telling Atsuko that if she made a list of all of the things important to her, that she didn't want to lose or give up, her career, what she almost lost, is second on the list. This makes Atsuko curious about what's first on the list, although she probably knows it and just wants to hear Minami say it. XD It's kind of like when someone says, "That's the last thing I want to happen!" Kind of. Does that make sense?  :sweatdrop:
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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #65 on: November 02, 2012, 03:22:03 AM »
awww i dont want that acchan lose her career T_T.. but my atsumina its more important

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #66 on: November 02, 2012, 03:43:04 AM »
Can I say I love you XD? I've been following this fanfic since the beginning and it's finally come to an end, I still want to read more of it. I like your writing style and the choice of words you used, not repetitive and the flow is very smooth. I like every moments that they had in the story. Not much kissing, not intimate acts, no ehem....*smut*. What many people fail to understand is that love can be expressed with simple gestures in the simplest form. Caring for and sharing with each other, being at each other's side, understanding without expressing in words, believing in each other, being forgiving toward each other, sacrificing without asking anything in return, all of those things, be it in times of happiness as well as sadness are what make it a long-lasting love.

The image of them sleeping next to each other, fingers intertwined is one of the most peaceful and beautiful sight, just like how they held hands walking around the SSA stage on that day, or when they simply stand next to each other during concerts, no words exchange but both are aware that they have each other by their side.

Sorry if this sounds to sappy and cheesy XD

P.S.: i'm waiting for your next fic, be it one short or long story I will still be looking forward to it
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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #67 on: November 02, 2012, 06:43:06 AM »
A great ending for great fic. Everything is perfect, not this chapter but the whole fic as well :thumbup

I'm officially your fan :wub:


I hope to read more Atsumina fics from you :heart:

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #68 on: November 02, 2012, 09:36:28 AM »
Good endind, I wanna cry but I won't

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #69 on: November 02, 2012, 10:19:38 AM »
Your definitely right there!!! With yuko's personality they will get away with it :)

Atsumina your grand everyone will love u guys  :heart:

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #70 on: November 02, 2012, 02:03:50 PM »
Calyrica!!!!!!!!

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Of Kisses (and More)
(AKA Of Kisses - Part 2)

I actually read and reblogged this on tumblr when you updated, but because I was on tumblr I never got the chance to properly comment so here I am! I was so happy that you made a second OS to Of Kisses did you know?! Like, I loved~ :heart: it. You know I usually never read OSs because I know that if I ever come across a good author writing short amazing shots that make me feel all wiggly panda status that I wouldn't be able to sleep tossin' n turnin' all throughout the night. It just ain't enough for me, so, so~~I was damn happy when my eyes scanned part 2   :grin:

I started out with a small smile :yep:

then...

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Atsuko opened her mouth to say, "Then we're not friends."

Me: Kekeke nonono not friends at all~~~ :cathappy:

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"We're something else."

Me: Oh hellz yes keke did gettin' gewd~ :pimp:

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Her own lips trailed a path down Minami's neck and back up towards her ear, taking the sensitive earlobe between her lips and pulled on it gently before whispering, "Something that makes you mine."

Me: WHOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooo~~!!!  :bow: :bow: :bow:

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When they were found early next morning by a punctual Togasaki, he simply draped a blanket over the pair and moved on with the day.

Edited to fix formatting issues that didn't carry over from Tumblr. :-(

Me:  (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Where that smut at???!!!!!!!!  :bleed eyes: LOLOLOLOL :rofl: 

You see what I mean? I just can't handle shots  :sweatdrop: ...Okay now onto 'Second to last chapter 5 - 1&2'

The opening statement about happiness is depressing  :shocked , but it's true and that's reality. I'm hurt by this...and it kind of makes me happy that I can be? So, there can only be one explanation to this...I.must.be.some.kind.of.masochist. LOL  XD Tis why I write and enjoy reading angst...it's like hmm..."Ohhh waah??? They caught Atsumina kissing???!!!! Whhhaaa???!! Minami's career could be over???!!!!!! ...Damnz~That's some crazy shizness, I luv it. (Only in the fics of course!!! It'd be terrible if her career be getting jeopardized, unless they were kissing for reals then all is good lololol) I like how Atsuko's character seemed as if she was not afraid to hide the truth. Your imagination is so...real, how u be doin dat?! I'll say it again, I luv it~. There was that scene where Atsumina were in that aged old room and conversing about if Minami had gotten second place and how she wasn't mad and all..It kind of made me all fuzzy inside ahah, they love each other a lot. I'm glad to see that they aren't fighting or anything dramatic like that (I think I'm damaged from all that angst I read  :lol:) It's nice and sweet...(So this is how fluffy romance is?...Again, I luv it~)

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"Tell me, Minami," Atsuko pleaded as she let go of Minami's hand, instead moving to caress the sides of her girlfriend's face with her palms. "What makes you happy?"

Minami's eyes were locked on Atsuko's, and she was drowning in the honest love she found. Completely captivated, losing her hold on her frustration and anger, she could think of nothing else besides the woman before her, and so she simply answered, with a cracking voice, "You."

Me: *sniff* This is so beautiful...*wipes tears of joy*

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When their lips finally brushed together, Atsuko found the barriers that Minami had put up were finally broken down. Arms circled around her waist and pulled her up from her kneeling position on the floor until she found herself sitting, straddling Minami's lap, her body crushed against the woman she loved. Her hands moved from Minami's cheeks to the back of her neck as her tongue snaked into Minami's waiting mouth, finding a passionate battle waiting for her, which she heatedly fought. When she tried to pull back after a moment, Minami chased her lips each time, attempting to bring her back into the kiss she had started.

Me: Fuuuuu~~~ was not ready for a sexy scene!!!  :bleed eyes:  :cathappy:

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"Say it," Atsuko insisted in a dark voice, though her eyes betrayed her, still gleaming.

Me: You got it Acchan~ I love you Atsumina~ :heart:  :nervous  :thumbup

Onwards to chapter 6  :cow: You were very descriptive with Atsumina's morning, I think that's why I'm drawn to your style perfect grammar and all lol. @Togasaki bringing them their dresses...He is an awesome guy isn't he? Hehe, even in 'Of Kisses' he be shipping the duo here and there lol. Why was Aki-P furious for anyways? lol, it's his fault for shipping them so hard in the past that things turn out this way hahahaha.  :D

Chapter 7 - Final???!!! ALREADY?!  :angry: I better get some awesome hot giggidy good damn one shots after this hehe I'm sure I will. Well, this is actually a good thing. *Applauds** because some great authors never finish their addicting fics and I'm so very glad you've worked so hard to finish this fic  :thumbsup I really loved how you set up this last chapter, it's perfect. If only you could see how my ooogly face was smiling with twinkling eyes this whole time  :oops: It's not cheesy with your new incorporation of the title into the fic, I actually love cheesy and this...this was *OVER FLOODS WITH FEELS* I'll say it one final time (Just for this post of course) I love it, love this fic, love you~~ :heart: I'm back into Atsumina again after this masterpiece :wub:

You're seriously one amazing writer & like I said although I am late...I will always support you for all the smiles you've blessed me with from all your work^^ I'm looking forward to your future work and I hope homework will go easy on you hehe. Sorry, if this post is SPAM LOL.



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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #71 on: November 12, 2012, 10:34:37 PM »
@keisthename: Ah! I'm glad you came out of hiding! I've enjoyed your fics so much, too!  :heart: I can't give Atsumina a bad ending, so it came out cutesy and fluffy since that's what I do.  XD Nothing wrong with causing you fits of giggles with that, though, right?

@O r i g a m i: You too? What's with people all of a sudden coming out of hiding with that chapter?  :lol: Not like it's my best work or anything.

@Haruko: Atsumina is definitely more important!  :heart:

@Tanchan: I am flattered if you say that you love me! I also really like the praise you give about how affection can be expressed with more than just smut. I really try to show that in my fics and draw a line between those I post here and those I post in the perv forum. I think this stems from that two of my three relationships have been purely non-physical in the past, so I understand that just cuddling and being close to another person is such an intense feeling... or something.  :sweatdrop: I want to express that.

@hidden_player: And I officially thank you! More fics are coming!

@kahem: Awww, don't cry! It's a happy ending!

@saeyukilover: They already get away with so much.  :lol:

@anonymousdowner: YOU! I don't even know what to say to your monster of a comment except "hgeawfihewa;oghewa;feawg  :D :D :D :D :D". You hit all the parts in the stories and chapters that I meant to have stick out. AND NO THERE'S NO SMUT FOR OF KISSES PART 2 THEY DIDN'T HAVE SEX YOU PERVERT!  XD Ahem. You crazy person. Come out of hiding more often!



I have a new one-shot! I hope you all like going back to before Acchan's graduation!~



Of Haircuts

When Atsuko heard the news about Minami's haircut, she was away, filming on location for a drama.

She had received a frantic text from Miichan, alerting her "wife" that something was most definitely wrong with the tiny woman Atsuko was "having an extra-marital affair with". To further stress this point, the toothy girl described in her text that "not only is the midget's ribbon gone, but so is the hair that it's supposed to tie up!"

Of course, the image this put in Atsuko's head of a completely bald Minami wasn't quite accurate, but the shiver that went down her spine chilled her thoroughly, even though the spring weather was warming up. This fear didn't let up throughout the entire day of shooting, and only amplified when the director informed her that since the filming was behind schedule, she'd have to stay on location to finish up the next day, as well. And even though she tried to rush through the next day's scenes, another actor showed up late in the morning, beginning a string of setbacks that she had no control over.

Which all meant that by the time she could finally visit her girlfriend, it had been 32 hours since the life-changing haircut.

Atsuko didn't even waste time knocking on the door of Minami's apartment. Instead, she unlocked the door with the spare key that had been entrusted to her, and without even muttering the polite, "Shitsurei shimasu," rushed into the entryway, frantically kicking off her shoes and bypassing the house slippers she kept lined up next to the coat-rack on the wall. Her purse was hastily dropped, her keys next to it rather than having taken the time to tuck them back into the inside pocket of the fancy bag.

"Oh? What is—" Minami poked her head out from her bedroom, a volume of manga in one hand. "Oh, Atsuko! You should have said something when you came in. I thought that—"

As Minami was rambling on, having been taken by surprise, Atsuko took in the sight of her tiny girlfriend. Thankfully, the small girl still seemed to have some hair on her head, something which brought momentary relief to the younger girl, although sadness and worry still showed in her eyes as her gaze traveled from the roots of the light strands down to the shoulder she wasn't used to being able to see. Crossing the distance between them in half as many steps as it should, Atsuko reached up to twirl the soft strands around her fingers, causing Minami's speech to stop in surprise.

"Your hair—" Atsuko choked on her words as she forced them out of her drying throat. "Miichan texted me that you cut it, but..."

Minami found herself consumed in a fit of giggles, knowing how much of a troublemaker their mutual friend could be. In fact, this entire visit had been most likely orchestrated by a vast amount of misinformation contained (or missing from) said text message. A lecture would have to follow at their next rehearsal or photo shoot or whatever they had next, but she'd worry about that later.

For now, she simply responded, "It wasn't some crazy decision I made or anything. My hair caught on fire when I was out shopping, and so I—"

A strangled sound made its way up Atsuko's throat, something between a gasp and a scream, and the taller girl instantly stepped back, pulling the manga volume out of the tiny hand grasping it, before spinning the girl around, carefully but quickly examining the soft skin of Minami's neck, looking to make sure there were no burns or otherwise marred spots marking her skin.

"H-Hey, I'm fine!" Minami insisted, swatting the prying hands away. "Don't you think I would have let you know otherwise?"

Atsuko pouted, dropping her hands to her sides reluctantly. "I was still worried. You didn't tell me anything."

"Well..." Minami tilted her head, trying to come up with an excuse while not meeting her girlfriend's disappointed stare. The truth was that due to this drastic change, she had been accosted left and right by members and staff, and she was just sick of talking about it. Besides... "You were supposed to get back last night, so I was going to tell you then?"

"And when I didn't, you didn't think to tell me about it?" Atsuko asked, her face falling further.

"No, that's not it, really..." Minami weakly responded. Then, after a moment, she realized. "Hey! You said you were worried, so why are you whining about me not texting you? You should have texted me!"

Atsuko gasped in surprise, the fake hurt expression completely leaving her face, replacing it with complete shock. "Did... When you cut your hair, did you cut your denseness and failing personality off, too?"

"Eh?" Minami widened her eyes at the question. "I didn't... What? That's not something I can just 'cut off'!"

As Atsuko realized she wasn't really getting anywhere, she changed her tactic. "Anyway, you made such a big change without telling me, and you're not upset at all!"

"Hm..." Minami thought for a moment, leaning against the bedroom door-frame. She began to subconsciously nudge the dropped manga volume with her foot as she thought aloud, "I've thought before about what shorter hair would be like, since y-you look so nice with it and stuff, but everyone knows me with the ribbon and all. But my head feels a lot lighter and it's easier to brush and stuff. I really like it right now."

Atsuko's hand reached up once again to the newly cut hair and ran her fingers down the strands until she reached the end, her hand resting against the base of Minami's neck, her thumb caressing back and forth. A soft blush crossed her face as she admitted, "I'll have to get used to it."

Minami giggled, "Me, too. I won't be able to wear all of my ribbons anymore."

At that statement, Atsuko froze, remembering something very important from a few days earlier. It wasn't very well-known, but quite a few of the tiny girl's ribbons were special gifts from her girlfriend. Since they were often apart, whenever Atsuko had to travel somewhere for a few days to shoot scenes for a drama or a movie or something else not AKB related, she would return with a ribbon as a souvenir. It even got to the point where instead of chocolate or flowers or other things that girls stereotypically liked to receive on anniversaries and Valentine's Day, Atsuko would buy Minami an extra-special ribbon.

And so, inside of the purse that had been forgotten in the entry way was a small wrapped box with a ribbon inside.

Continuing on, not noticing a pained expression crossing Atsuko's face, Minami said, "Maybe I'll make a collage with them or something. Wouldn't that be really nice over the bed? All of the different colors and sizes and..."

Blinking for a moment, Minami was brought out of her musings by realizing that Atsuko was no longer standing in front of her. She nearly tripped over the manga volume on the floor, but she left the doorway to find her girlfriend. Since her apartment wasn't too large, it only took a turn of her head to spot the younger girl crouching in the entryway, digging through her purse. Her lips were tightly pressed together in a determined expression as she finally found what she had been searching for.

It was a small box, wrapped in shiny pink paper, that Atsuko had brought back from her trip. In one swift motion, she straightened up to stand and marched over to the confused girl standing in the bedroom doorway. If it were anyone else, the stomps would have echoed throughout the hallway, but Atsuko seemed graceful in everything she did, and her sharp steps glided her body next to Minami's before she pushed the smaller girl further into the bedroom until the two were standing in front of the mirror that was used each morning in the "ritual of ribbon picking" as it was so often called by the teasing AKB members.

The shiny pink paper was hastily torn off, even though Atsuko had asked the shopkeeper sweetly if the carefully hand-picked present could be nicely wrapped for her dearest friend. After dropping the box's lid to the floor, Atsuko gently lifted the pink ribbon from the padded base of the box, the soft pastel hue complemented by white lace trim becoming visible to the intended recipient of the gift.

It was truly a beautiful accessory, but Minami wasn't given time to appreciate it, because Atsuko roughly spun her until they were face-to-face. A hand gathered her bangs together and pulled them atop her head before the ribbon was clipped around them, fastening it to the hair atop her head. A few stray strands fell down, but the intention of the hastily done hairstyle was clear: to show Minami that even though her hair was short, she could still wear the special gifts from her girlfriend.

When Minami looked back from her reflection in the mirror to Atsuko, she noticed for the first time that the younger girl's eyes were glassy with unshed tears, partially out of sorrow at the thought that the years of mementos of her love would be confined to a dresser drawer, but now also partially out of relief that the previous fear was no longer something she had to worry about. And so, Minami tentatively took a step closer to her girlfriend, pulling the waiting girl into her arms, her shoulder instantly becoming a resting place for Atsuko's soft cheek. A breathy sighed escaped the taller girl's mouth at the motion, the breath tickling Minami's neck. It was an unfamiliar sensation, as her hair was usually in the way. The gasp that left her body without her control caught Atsuko's attention, and she tightened her grasp.

"I should have thought about how sensitive your neck is," Atskuo giggled. "I could have some fun with this."

Minami's eyes widened in horror at the implication and she struggled in the embrace she had initiated. The hold on her didn't lessen for a few moments, but she was eventually released to stare into the playful eyes of her girlfriend.

"Relax," Atsuko continued giggling. "I wouldn't do something like that... in public, anyway. In fact, I have to be a lot more careful not to leave marks anymore—"

"You used to give me hickeys?!" Minami screeched.

Atsuko blinked a few times before tilting her head to the side innocently. "You mean you didn't know? I guess you really couldn't see them with all your hair in the way, but..."

At the revelation, Minami backed away a few steps to sit on the bed behind her. How many photo shoots had been close to compromised because of Atsuko's... well, her possessiveness, would it be? Not like she knew a lot about this stuff or anything...

A laugh interrupted her mind from spinning out of control, and her eyes shot up to see Atsuko trying to hide it behind her hands, an effort which was obviously unsuccessful. "You really will believe anything, won't you? I'm just kidding. Though someday, I'd love to see your reaction if I do..."

Minami shook her head frantically as a blush colored her cheeks. The fast movement caused the clasp of the ribbon that had been not-so-carefully clipped to the hair atop her head to loosen, and the ribbon was soon hanging down her forehead between her eyes. After nearly giving herself a headache trying to focus a cross-eyed gaze on it, she plucked it off of her bangs and looked down at it in her hands, admiring the detail of the trim and the softness of the material.

As she did so, Atsuko moved to site beside her, leaning her body against Minami's side as the small girl appreciated the gift. Atsuko's head rested against the shoulder she was so comfortable leaning against, waiting patiently. It wasn't really a wait she minded, as this closeness was something she treasured.

"If... If I would have made a collage of ribbons," Minami began, breaking the silence, "it's not like I'd have just put any of them up. I'd put this one up for sure."

Knowing Minami and the way she expressed her feelings, this statement was much deeper than it appeared to be. While she only mentioned the ribbon from today which was held in her hands, she was, without speaking, also including the fuzzy white ribbon Atsuko had bought last Christmas (of which Nyaachan had received a matching one, but unlike his owner, the small cat hated wearing ribbons), the striped blue ribbon Atsuko had bought near the ocean the summer before...

A smile slowly formed on Atsuko's face. "Good. They're all special, aren't they?"

Minami blushed at the realization that her girlfriend had seen through her words. In response, Atsuko playfully poked the flushed cheek closest to her, earning a surprised squeal from the tiny girl as she nearly jumped off of the bed, dropping the ribbon in the process. Atsuko's breathy giggles furthered this embarrassment, but she threw her arms around the older girl, knocking them both backwards on the bed. She ended up with her head nestling in the crook of Minami's neck, the ends of the newly-cut hair tickling her nose in such an uncomfortable fashion that she had to rise up, hovering over her blushing girlfriend.

"As long as you don't cut it any shorter," Atsuko warned in a dark voice.

Looking up with wide eyes, Minami nodded. Her reward for agreeing was to be completely crushed in a warm embrace as Atsuko's contagious grin spread to her own face as well. While the special ribbon Atsuko had given her laid forgotten on the bedroom floor, the cuddle she was receiving was a fantastic present, too, though she'd never tell that to the younger girl who was currently lying completely on top of her, eyes closed in happiness.

Despite everything, being interrogated by her friends the past few days, being the subject of all sorts of crazy rumors in the papers, she decided something in that moment.

Getting her hair caught on fire was so worth it.
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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/12/12
« Reply #72 on: November 12, 2012, 11:43:28 PM »
Love your last chapter of 2nd to last, and loved the entire fic in general!! Love all your fics!! :D Atsumina is soooo adorable :3 & the fic "of haircuts" was amazing as well! It was so sweet and funny! Minami's old haircut looked awesome but this one def suits her as well, & glad she can still put on ribbons :D thanks for alll your great fics and updates :)

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/12/12
« Reply #73 on: November 13, 2012, 04:02:17 AM »
I love your ending to the second to the last!! It was a really amazing fic and I really loved. Although I don't alway comment, I read every AtsuMina fic here. :d
As for the one shot, it was really sweet and funny in one way.
Thank you for this update!

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/12/12
« Reply #74 on: November 13, 2012, 05:25:05 AM »
Yeah you're back XD and still great work as usual. I'm still missing Takamina's old hairstyle, even though this new hair looks good on her and I have no complaint. I find it ironic how when she had her hair long, she almost never let it down, one of the rare times when she did it took my breathe away, and now when she has cut it short, she has to add extensions to make it long :nervous. I'm hoping she can grow her hair back quickly so that she doesn't have to add extensions anymore because I like seeing her real hair than extension; her old hair looked damn great when down I'm telling you.  It's funny when she had the chance, she refused to do it and now when it's taken away from her she uses artificial means  to have it :lol:

P.S.: I've never been in a relationship so I didn't have the chance to experience that feeling of just cuddling and being close to each other in a non-physical way myself but imagining Atsumina like that in your fic (exactly how I picture them when they're in private and also because I can't imagine Takamina being wild and such that some other authors make her out to be XD), plus all those moments in real life where they're always being next to each other ever since the beginning, comforting each other (mostly Takamina to Acchan), holding each other's hands, Acchan always leaning on Takamina's shoulder (Migikata XD), Takamina always being protective toward Acchan,  them being understanding without the need for words and much more that I'm too lazy to list out, Atsumina fans know all about that anyway, it's like I'm feeling it myself in an imaginative way XD. I'm one of those people who believe love isn't about sex and sex isn't the most important thing or isn't necessary to prove your love. Yeah, hopefully one day I can experience that too. IT's the best feeling of being together, not that pervert stuff XD. I did read your smurf stuff and I must say that it's not in the in-your-face way of expressing it so I'm fine with that.
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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/12/12
« Reply #75 on: November 13, 2012, 05:29:24 AM »
Oops double post, may I ask the mod to delete it for me?

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/12/12
« Reply #76 on: November 13, 2012, 06:20:23 AM »
aww atsumina so cute.. :D

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/1/12
« Reply #77 on: November 13, 2012, 07:20:09 AM »
@anonymousdowner: YOU! I don't even know what to say to your monster of a comment except "hgeawfihewa;oghewa;feawg  :D :D :D :D :D". You hit all the parts in the stories and chapters that I meant to have stick out. AND NO THERE'S NO SMUT FOR OF KISSES PART 2 THEY DIDN'T HAVE SEX YOU PERVERT!  XD Ahem. You crazy person. Come out of hiding more often!

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, the 'Crazy person' here~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cathappy:

┬┴┬┴┤ʕ•ᴥ├┬┴┬┴ Just coming out of hiding to show you my appreciation for the 'Of Series' again :thumbup

@ The "THEY DIDN'T HAVE SEX YOU PERVERT!" part hehe all I can say is... "Right back at ya~~!" LOLOLOL  :grin:

I wasn't seriously craving for any smuts actually (I accept it anytime tho XD) , just wanted to prove my point on how amazing you characterize AtsuMina. Ahah, in other words Calyrica-chan, I think you have a sexy imagination.  :rofl:

To be honest, I am more a fan of 'Almost smuts' if that makes sense. Then with romance...there is simply nothing more expressive in love (To me at least) when every little heartfelt thing is kept pure and innocent. I agree with you though where the line is drawn between those we fan fiction authors write here and those that are labeled with this guy -->  Le pervert: ಠ⌣ಠ or in my case sometimes this guy --> ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ  :lol:

Okay, on to commenting like a normal reader should....

As usual this was another fluffy addition to your work and I enjoyed the awesome read. I laughed out loud when my eyes scanned over the part where Acchan had imagined Takamina bald kekeke. I don't personally think a haircut is a big deal however in Minami's case, the way Atsuko had reacted to it was just so kawaii  :wub: && her pink ribbon gift dude...dats like...sOO~~! AWWWwwww~~  :heart: :heart: :heart: :yep: I usually only become damaged by angst, but they're just so cute with the lovely conversations and tiny gestures that I believe that my 'Feels~' meter crashed  :) Another thing, Minami's hair grows fast though minus extensions!  :shocked

Keep up the awesome work! Thank you for the good read, I smiled~ :)

EDIT: I've been wondering how your Visual Novel idea was coming along!
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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/12/12
« Reply #78 on: November 13, 2012, 08:20:44 AM »
I've red it yesterday on twitter  :twothumbs I'm always fan of your fics about atsumina, it's cute and sexy at the time, just what I needed. thank you!!  :thumbup

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Re: Calyrica's Atsumina Offerings~ Update: 11/12/12
« Reply #79 on: November 13, 2012, 01:54:06 PM »
because someone told me that you are back!
  :on woohoo: as your co-shipper
THANK YOU! for this update!

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