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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible]
« Reply #20 on: September 16, 2012, 04:50:58 AM »
hello.

Umichan-san..

please make a ATSUMINA or KAIATSUKO..

Thank You..

I will wait for that..
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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible]
« Reply #21 on: September 16, 2012, 02:34:16 PM »
ATSUYUU!!
yey! more atsuyuu!

do your best author! :D

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible]
« Reply #22 on: September 17, 2012, 01:03:49 PM »
hello.

i have a question,

is this (Impossible) is a complete one-shot?

please answer me.

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible]
« Reply #23 on: September 18, 2012, 03:05:15 AM »
hello...i'm here to drop-off my shot..

sorry if i didn't put part 1 on it.....i was too lazy...

well here it is part 2.

enjoy



Impossible



8:00
“Wake up” the man yell at haruna. Haruna woke up, she felt sick and wasn’t conscious enough. Then-

“Ahhhh”Haruna was shocked at what she saw.
 There were pictures of her everywhere. Her eyes move slowly as she seeing her pictures until she saw a picture of her and Minami kissing in the streets at night. That was not a magazine photo; it was a normal one like from a digital camera.

“Mi…na…mi” Haruna  whispered.

“Oh yeah…Minami….I thought you and Yuko were girlfriends” the man’s voice sounded a little feminine.

“I never expected you and Minami were girlfriends” the man’s face looked sad. The man turn around and look at Haruna, she looked very frighten.

“I’m sorry for not introducing myself, my name is Riku”. Riku had one of the biggest grins Haruna has ever seen.
 That grin seemed familiar but that didn’t matter at the moment she couldn’t remember.
Haruna remember she had a date with Minami; it was supposed to be at 8:30.

“Please let me go…what did I do to you?” Haruna struggle to say those words. Riku just stare at her. “No” he said flatly.

“Please let me go…..I don’t like this” Haruna started to cry.

“What did I do to you?”

“One thing” Riku held one finger up.

“You don’t love Oshima Yuko” Haruna was shocked and confused by what Riku said.

“What do you mean?” Haruna asked. Haruna knew she loved Yuko once but then Haruna started no3b and started to hang out with Minami.
 And she found the person she really loves was Minami.

“I mean.. you and Yuko used to go out, nut then no3b was form….
you and Minami stated hanging out more and when you realize you were truly in love with Minami…you left Yuko….you ruined Yuko’s life.’

Haruna was shocked at the statement he just made. ‘How does he know all that’? Riku started to walk where Haruna was.

“Don’t come any closer…I will yell”

“Do it nobody will hear you”-ring..ring..ring..

Riku walked to his desk where he had Haruna’s cell phone.

“My cell phone…give it back!” Haruna yell.

Riku looked at ID; it was from Minaimi.

“It’s Minami….i want you to answer calmly…if you tell her what happen, I will kill you”





i know its short but like last time....i'm lazy to wirte and i have homework..

for the atsuyuu fans.. i'm already writting the 1 shot and its call flower shop....thats all i'm going to say...


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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 2] (TakaHaru)
« Reply #24 on: September 18, 2012, 04:05:43 AM »
O.O It ended like this?! Noooo >< I want more :cry:

Very intersting... Haruna got kidnaped by Riku XD

Again, without I notice it, you updated twice xD

Please tell me it's going to be a part 3 ><

see ya o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 2] (TakaHaru)
« Reply #25 on: September 19, 2012, 01:56:09 AM »
i'm here to drop-off my shot

and i'm sorry if i didn't said how may parts are they going to have.....actaully i'm a lazy writter over the wekk but in weekend i'm faster.

thank you for reading my shot... :bow:

enjoy


Impossible



8:4o

“Hello…Haruna” Minami said a little worried.

“Yes” Haruna answer calmly, just like Riku told her to do.

“Its 8:40 are you to be here soon…are you okay?” the worried Capitan said.

“I think it’s impossible to come right now because my hair drier is broken” Haruna hope Minami knew what she meant.

Flashback

The Takaharu couple was in Minami’s house. Both of them had the day off, so they stayed in Minami’s house instead of going shopping. Ring….ring,,,ring….

“Aren’t you going to answer that” Minami asked Haruna.

“No” Haruna said as she didn’t care.

“Why”

“Because…it’s an absent number and every time i answer no body answers back” she said a little angry.

“Be careful…..it might…a…stalker” Minami chuckle at the last part.

“Don’t make me scare” Haruna playfully hit her girlfriend.

“ok, I have an idea, if you are in trouble call me and say; “I think its impossible to come right now because my hair drier is broken” and that’s how I will know you are in trouble” Minami said seriously.

“Promise”

“Promise” the promise was sealed off by a kiss.

End of flashback

“I understand….I’ll wait then” Minami said seriously

‘I hope she understood’

9:00

Minami’s POV

“She is in trouble, what should I do?”

I’m worried. I try not to panic. “bingo, I should check my computer “ she still had the necklace I gave her right….why I’m not getting my laptop.


Normal POV

“Good job, you didn’t panic at all and that was a good excuse” Riku patted Haruna’s head.

“Leave me alone” Haruna yell. This made Riku upset. Riku was mad; he couldn’t contain it any longer. He was about to hit her, but he saw Haruna covering her face.

“Haru-chan, don’t be afraid I’m not going to hurt you” Riku walked to where his desk was. Leaving a unnoticeable Haruna crying.






don't hate me if i'm lazy i still go to school.....worst thing ever...
well... to the atsuyuu and saeyuki fans, i already finish writting (in class) the shots.

i'll put them next or next two weeks..


....until the day comes....

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 3] (TakaHaru)
« Reply #26 on: September 20, 2012, 12:33:53 AM »
Oh my! At least they have a code =p

Yes, hadn't said the number of parts this one will have ><

Riku is kinda creepy ><

moooore o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 3] (TakaHaru)
« Reply #27 on: September 20, 2012, 03:09:58 AM »
i actually don't know how many parts will i have......it takes time....to tell you the truth my school is taking my live.......i don't see my friends that often,
another girl is.....the person that i like; i can't see her.......i miss her....i still can't believe she told me "i love you"......okay back to this.....

in my notebook is four pages but that was part 1 in my theory.....and in another notebook i have the second part which is four pages.....so i don't know how many parts will have and i might update tomorrow.....


my Atsuyuu fans i finish flower shop and i'm writting another shot

the SAEYUKI fans i'm finish writting Blue Rose.....so please wait.....

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 3] (TakaHaru)
« Reply #28 on: September 20, 2012, 04:33:19 AM »
i actually don't know how many parts will i have......it takes time....to tell you the truth my school is taking my live.......i don't see my friends that often,
another girl is.....the person that i like; i can't see her.......i miss her....i still can't believe she told me "i love you"......okay back to this.....

I understand you in all this ways^^ Please take your time and don't give up o/

Good luck :cow:

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 3] (TakaHaru) reply to someone
« Reply #29 on: September 20, 2012, 12:44:19 PM »
HELLO.

PLEASE UPDATE MORE OFTEN..

I'M THRILLED AT YOUR EVERY CHAPTER..

THANKS
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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 3] (TakaHaru) reply to someone
« Reply #30 on: September 21, 2012, 01:27:47 AM »
hello....i'm just dropping off my shot......i'm to lazy to write the whole thing......so i'm sorry..

enjoy



impossible



Back to Minami’s house
“Thank you for coming” Minami vowed .

In her house there was all of her close friends; Atsuko, Sae, Yukirin, Itano and Kasai tomomi, Miichan, and Mariko.

“Were you able to call Yuko, you know she will get worried about Haruna since they used to be girlfriends” Miichan asked.

“Actually, I haven’t been able to call her…let me try again”


Back to Haruna


Ring…ring….ring

‘Who might that be’ Riku thought.


“You better not make any noise, you understand” Riku yell with almost a feminine voice.

“Hello” Riku whispered.

“Hello, something horrible happen, will come to my house” the person at the other end said.

“I’m sorry, I can’t I’m too busy and plus I’m not near where you are, sorry”


Back to Minami


“She is not answering” Minami said in frustruation.

“Where’s Atsuko” Yukirin asked.

“She went to the bathroom” Miichan answer.

Minami went to her bedroom and bought her laptop. Atsuko return from the bathroom.

“I talked to Yuko, she said she is busy and she was sorry she is not able to make it” Atsuko announced.

“Oh well…..everyone gather up” Minami commanded.

“Yes, capitan” everyone said at the same time.

“Okay” Minami open her laptop. Everyone was surprised at the image of her laptop….the image of her screen was a picture of her and Haruna kissing. “Ahhh that so
cute” sae said.

“Ok you guys don’t need to see that, anyways this is where Haruna is” Minami showed everyone a map.

“You chip her?” Itano asked

“Yeah so…well it’s in a necklace that I gave her”

“Good idea”

“Thank you” both Itano and Minami high fived.

“Okay let’s get to the point, her location is 2 miles from here so we need a van” Minami turned where Mariko was.

“Did you bring the van?” Minami asked

“Yes Capitan”

“Ok, Itano did you and Kasai bought our communication” Minami asked

“We bought something awesome, we bought those thing that you put in your ear and communicate hands free”

“Bluetooth?” Miichan asked

“Yeah I guess”

“Great, Mariko did you and Atsuko chose our cloth….”Minami asked confoused

“Yes, even though you didn’t want it, they are in those suit cases and they are leather”
“Really. Leather” Minami look at them like are you serious.

“Oh well…everyone change cloths”


15 minutes later


In front of the van

The doors of the van were open. Inside the van were some of the highest technological computer systems, it look like one of those van in FBI movies.

“Wow, great job Mariko….Sae and Yukirin will drive. The rest of us will be inside” Minami stated.

“What’s our mission name” Miichan asked.

“uh..uh…let’s call it “impossible”


Back to Haruna


“Stop touching me” haruna yell

“Why, I like touching you…I miss it” Riku said in a feminine voice

“Miss it…wait who are you” Haruna asked frightened, suddenly she felt someone’s lips on her’s. It was Riku. Haruna try to stop him but she was too weak, then she
summon enough strength to push hi-

“Yu…ko”


i'm lazyy.....i have to do my homework now....



.....until the day comes.....

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 4] (TakaHaru)
« Reply #31 on: September 21, 2012, 02:29:46 AM »
Oh! No wonder Yuko was busy.... XD

Wow, they are almost secret agents =p they must be rich...

See ya next update o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 4] (TakaHaru)
« Reply #32 on: September 22, 2012, 03:19:52 AM »
hi.....i'm going to tell you that tomorrow i'm going to put chapter 5 of my fanfic....the tale of a spider and a butterfly...

i'm sorry if i'm not going to update this shot for two days; today and tomorrow.

on sunday i'm going to update the shot and that would be it.......well....actually its going to be on a pause....for 2 days

on monday i'm going to put Flower shop(atsuyuu) its going to be 2 parts because i'm too lazy to write it......i hate school....

i'm a restive teenager.......and for my 2nd OTP, SAEYUKI

Blue rose its going to be uodate on wednesday......(i don't know how to spell the day)

and thats it .......THANK YOU TO ALL OF THOSE WHO READ MY SHOTS......YOU ARE MY INSPIRATION.....THANK YOU



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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible on pause] read this please
« Reply #33 on: September 23, 2012, 08:15:45 PM »
okay i came back.....and there is a change of plans.
if i don't update tomorrow flower shop i might update it on tuesday......
well....i hope you guys like this really long shot..........in my mind it was a shot but to my hands it was so long to write.


enjoy

Impossible


Back to Minami


“Okay girls, it’s time to star Sae, Itano, Mariko, and Miichan will come with me the rest of you will stay and watch over us.” Minami commanded

“Yes Capitan”

Sae, Itano, Mariko, Miichan, and Minami headed out to the storage house were Haruna was.

“sae and Itano go to the left, Mariko and Miichan go to the right. I will to the door”


Back to Haruna



When Haruna pushed “Riku” something was revealed, “Riku” was Yuko.

The person that was pushed hit its head on the desk. When that person looked down something fell, it was a wig. Whit that the act was over.

“Yu…ko” Haruna was shock

“Yeah it’s me” Yuko got up and grin at her. Yuko started to walked where Haruna was.

“Why….yuko..The person I used to love” Haruna was crying.

“Like you said, used to, now you don’t, that’s why I did it” Yuko grabbed Haruna’s chin

“You were everything to me, but you were stupid enough to leave me for that midget” Yuko sounded very angry. Haruna started to cry even harder.


Back to Minami


“Capitan do you hear me” Kasai was trying to communicate. “Yes Kasai. Okay tell me what’s the deal”.

“The area its really small, it’s 200 by 200; it will be a piece of cake”

“Okay I got it” the Capitan try to communicate with Sae and Itano.

“You guys go to the top of the roof” Sae and Itano did as they were told.

“Mariko and Miichan is there a window in there” Minami asked.

“Yes but we are not near that window” Miichan whispered

“Get to the window slowly, I will go the door”

“Wait are you stupid” all who were listening to yell.






well....THANK YOU and i need some ones help for my Saeyuki Fanfiction not the shot.......i need help with my ideas and the order of my ideas because for my Fanfiction sae is going to be a vampire and mayu is going to her sister.......but i have many ideas that now they don't make sence.......


help me onegai


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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 5] (TakaHaru)
« Reply #34 on: September 24, 2012, 02:39:24 AM »
Yeey! And now everyone  is going to discover that Yuko is behind all this =o

Yeey o/ I liked it o/

See ya next part o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible part 5] (TakaHaru)
« Reply #35 on: September 27, 2012, 01:22:46 AM »
hello....i'm just here to update my shot.....

today is ATSUYUU day well to meit is.....well its because i'm putting my atsuyuu shot.

i didn't update yesturday....beacause my grilfriend had my notebook where i wrote those stories........


welll enjoy.....


Flower Shop
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A sunny morning, beautiful scenery of spring, and a clear sky. But to a girl it wasn’t a beautiful morning, it was a bad morning. Today she starts a new job in a flower shop. She liked flowers but not that much.

“Good morning, Oshima Yuko desu” Yuko greeted her new manager.

“Good morning, Yuko-san, I’m Mariko as you know….today you will take care of the flowers” Mariko pointed to the flowers.

“Put this on and follow me” Mariko gave an apron to Yuko and Yuko did as she was told.

Mariko and Yuko went to the back of the shop. A room where it had lockers, and suddenly a girl jump in front of Mariko. Yuko scream at the sudden “attack”.

“Miichan stop doing that, you would have given your new mate a heart attack” Mariko gave a death glare to Miichan.

“I’m sorry” Miichan vowed. “My name is Minami”

“My name is Oshima Yuko, nice to meet you”


2 hours


“yuko-san, pour water to those spider lilies” Minami said

“Okay, but don’t call me yuko-san just call yuko” smile and turn around to pour water on the spider lilies.

“Okay yuko in exchange you can call me Miichan” it was about 10:00 am, it was sunny, yet windy. Then a customer came into the flower shop. A short-hair girl step
into the shop. Miichan stop what was she doing and stare at the girl.

“Atsuko” Miichan whispered

“Hi Miichan I miss you” Atsuko and hugged her. Yuko was clueless. The door to Mariko’s office flew open and Mariko look at Atsuko and walk to hug her.

“I miss you Atsuko” Yuko was still confess. Atsuko look at her direction where Yuko was.

“I see you found a replacement for Minami”

“Well Minami left with Haruna….and well we haven’t seen her since” Mariko looked at Atsuko

“Okay Atsuko look sad

“Yuko come here” Yuko walked where the trio was.

“Atsuko this is Yuko; Yuko this is Atsuko”

“Hello, Atsuko-san” Yuko vowed.

“Just call me Atsuko” she smiled

Hours passed and the day went on with a warm smile on everyone’s face. Some customers came in and out with flowers in their hands. But the next customer will be only notice by Yuko.

“Hello, how can I help you?” Yuko greeted a short girl with a pony tail.

“Yes can I have a dozen of red roses” the short girl said. Yuko didn’t knew where the rose were, so she went to Mariko’s office where Mariko, Miichan, and Atsuko were
talking. Yuko left the door kind of open; the view of the space was only that people inside weren’t able to look outside but the people outside could look inside.

“Atsuko” the short girl whispered.

Yuko came out and went where Mariko told her.

“Can I have a dedicatory?” the short girl asked

“Uhm…yeah sure” Yuko was new so she didn’t knew where the dedicatory cards where.

“They are in that box” the short girl pointed it out

“How do you know?” Yuko asked while she walked to the box

“I used to work here” the short girl smile

“Oh…ok…what do you want the dedicatory card to say?” Yuko asked

“I will always love you Haruna” the short girl smile.

“Okay, here you go..it will be 10 dollars” the short girl pay and left.

“Hey Yuko we are going to close early today; do you want to come with us for dinner, its almost 7:00 pm” Miichan asked

“Yeah sure”

15 minutes later

“How was your trip Atsuko” Mariko asked. The four of them were in a danso café.

“It was okay, I went to America, South Korea, and England” Atsuko said happily

“Can I take your order and by the way my name is Sae” and ikemen girl in boy’s cloths asked them

“The usual for the four of us” Mariko told Sae

“I’ll be right back”

“Well let’s stop talking about me, Yuko tell us something about you” Atsuko said while looking at yuko

“I live alone, I have a cat, and…..I really like your smile” Yuko smile

“Thank you”



Thank you to those who read this.......well this is the first part of the shot
the next update is unknow to me bacause i have big test comming up, so i have to study


.....until the day comes.....

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Re: umichan's one shots [Flower Shop part 1] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #36 on: September 27, 2012, 07:32:47 PM »
Yeey! New OS o/

Liked this one^^

just one question... the takaharu one ends like that? ><'

see ya next update o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [Flower Shop part 1] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #37 on: September 28, 2012, 01:22:50 AM »
OMG!!!! Yuko is the bad guy in Impossible?!!!!

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Re: umichan's one shots [Flower Shop part 1] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #38 on: September 28, 2012, 01:20:01 PM »
OH MY GOSH ATSUYUU!!!! :mon freeze: :mon angel: :mon crazyinlove: please continue to update! But studyy first  :mon geek: :mon yeah: :mon fan: goodluch on your exam. And congrats on such a wonderful atsuyuu fic even though it is only the starting  XD i think it will be more and more exciting and sweet story!! Thank you so much formmaking atsuyuu fic!!  :ptam-kiss: :wriggly: :on grad: :on GJ: :on gay:



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Re: umichan's one shots [Flower Shop part 1] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #39 on: October 01, 2012, 02:26:03 AM »
hi........no this is not an update....i'm just gouing totalk about the shots....

impossible is on haitous and flower shop is going to be update on tuesday....and this is why?????

well......i have an big test and i really need to study and do my best because i had a bad grade on the last one, so....yeah...uhmm

wait for me i promise that i will finish each and evry shot and fic i do.....


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