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Re: umichan's one shots ....READ...
« Reply #40 on: October 01, 2012, 02:57:15 AM »
Hey umichan o/

take your time, study to your test^^ there's nothing worse than fail in a test ;.;

so ganbatte o/

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Re: umichan's one shots .......
« Reply #41 on: October 17, 2012, 12:49:30 AM »
hello.....i miss you guys

i had a 96 on my exam that i had.....that was the reason i didn't update
 i will update Flower Shop first and then Impossible so wait for me...

i will update next week on saturday or sunday ...


ok see you....
.....until the day comes.....

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Re: umichan's one shots ....i will update...
« Reply #42 on: October 17, 2012, 05:42:47 AM »
hello umichan ^^ i miss you too~~ ganbatte for your exam.. can i have some saeyuki? :| well, yeah.. don't push yourself :) can't wait for the next update, see you soon ^o^)/

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Re: umichan's one shots ....i will update...
« Reply #43 on: November 06, 2012, 02:14:00 AM »
hi....after all this time i all ways remember that i had to update this shot.

thank you for waiting for me all this time and i will find time to update impossible and put my new shot for fuu_kun.....yes fuu_kun it will be a saeyuki.....

well this is the last part of flower shop i hope you guys like it... :)



Flower Shop part 2





Minutes pass and the waitress came with their order. They talk and talk; it was already 10:00pm.

“Miichan are you sleepy” Mariko patted Miichan’s head. Mariko looked at Miichan with loving eyes.

“Yes I am” Miichan said in a sleepy way. Mariko was still looking at Miichan with loving eyes, but…

“Wake up” Mariko yell, her eyes turn into some evil ones. The waitresses stop cleaning to the sound of Mariko’s voice. Sae and a girl came out.

“Can you guys don’t scream” Sae said upset

“I’m sorry…my fried over here was sleepy”

“Okay but don’t do it anymore” Sae glare at Mariko

“Come on Sae, lets go the kitchen” the girl said

“Okay Yuki”

“Well, I’m going to drive Miichan home to her parents” Mariko paid and took Miichan’s hand so she would stand.

“Yuko can you drive Atsuko to her house?” Mariko ask

“Yeah sure” Yuko answer

"Okay bye, see you tomorrow” with that Mariko and Miichan left.

“Okay lets go”

Yuko and Atsuko left the café, so they could go to Yuko’s car.

“So where do you live” Yuko asked while she started the car

“I live 3 block from here” Atsuko said. The ride was directed by Atsuko. It was very quiet until….

“So why did you decided to work at the flower shop?” Atsuko ask

“I just need money to survive” Yuko said without taking her eyes of the road. A red light stop Yuko’s car. The atmosphere was awkward because Yuko and Atsuko just met.

“So I heard that you were in other countries” Yuko ask

“Yeah…I was”

“Did you enjoy it” Yuko look at Atsuko

“Yes I did” Atsuko smile. Just then the red light turned into a green light. Yuko drove where Atsuko had told her to go. It was dark and scary where Atsuko told Yuko to drive.

“Are you sure you live here?” Yuko ask

“Yeah”

“Ok…..can I go with you so I can assure you will be okay?” Yuko said as she looked at Atsuko

“yeah sure”

In the entrance of the apartment there was an old man standing near the maintenance room.

“The owner is not here, she can’t give you the keys to your apartment” the old man told Atsuko

“She is not here…..when will she be back” Atsuko ask

“Tomorrow morning” said as he entered the maintenance room. Yuko look at a worried Atsuko.  She wanted to ask her if she got any other place but she remember
that Atsuko had been travelling.

“What now” Atsuko said kind upset. She had no place to go to and she had to find one right now.
Without any hesitation Yuko ask If she want, she could stay at her place just for the day. Atsuko accepted the offer because she knew that she had no money for a hotel.


-At Miichan’s house-


“Do you have your key” Mariko whisper

“Yes it is in my bag” Miichan replied. Mariko search in Miichan’s bag only to find candy.

“Miichan you only have candy in your bag” Mariko sounded upset

“In the smaller bag….will you hurry I want to sleep”

“Shut up….if you didn’t had a lot of stuff in your bag” Mariko search through the things that were in the smaller bag; candy, and other stuff she couldn’t recognize

“I got it”. Mariko opened the door to the house where Miichan live. “Are your parents here?” Mariko ask. “No they are out of town…I’m all alone” Miichan puted
Mariko stepped inside while she was holding Miichan’s hand. Mariko had already came here a few times because Miichan’s parents wanted to meet the boss of her daughter.  Mariko saw Miichan almost fall, but luckily she catched her. “Look where you are going”
Mariko held Miichan’s hand and guided her to Miichan’s room. When they got to the door Mariko let go Miichan’s hand.

“Ok go to sleep” Mariko turned around so she could leave, but Miichan grab her wrist.

“Thank you for taking me here…….you are a really good friend” Miichan smile as she looking at Mariko with sleepy eyes

“Yeah its okay” Mariko smile back. Miichan seen that decide it was time to go to her room. She open her door and wave at Mariko.

“Miichan becarefu-“Mariko was stop when she heard a loud scream.  Mariko went to Miichan’s room only to find Miichan on the ground. “Miichan get up” Mariko try to get her up but according to her she was too heavy. “baka”. Mariko then heard someone snore. Without any care she just left Miichan in the floor.


-At Yuko’s apartment-


“You can sleep in the couch if you want to or you can sleep in my bed” Yuko said as she turn on the lights and let Atsuko come in.

“It is okay I’ll sleep on your couch” Atsuko said as she looked around the apartment. It was okay, it was big enough for two people.

“Let me bring you some sheets” Yuko went to her room.

Atsuko look around and then she saw Yuko coming out with some sheets.

“Yeah….make yourself comfortable”

“Thank you”

Yuko went to her room but she stopped and went back to Atsuko. “If you need something I’ll be in my room”

“Yes and thank you again”


-Later that night-


Yuko got up and went to the kitchen. . She took an out the gallon of milk and serve herself a cup of milk. She looked around and she saw Atsuko sleeping. She walked to Atsuko still with the glass of milk. She looked at Atsuko as she drank her milk. ‘You look so pretty; to bad I won’t see you anymore’ Yuko thought as she drank her milk. Yuko when to the kitchen and put her glass in the sink. ‘Wait I can see her; she is friends with my boss’ Yuko smiled.


- The next morning-


Yuko got ready to go to work. She went outside to her living room to find a still sleeping Atsuko. She decided to wake her up because soon she would be leaving to go to work.

“Atsuko, wake up” Yuko said. She looked at Atsuko as she woke up.

“I’m sorry, what time is it?” a sleepy Atsuko said

“Its 7:30 a.m.” Yuko responded

“Can you drive me home if isn’t too much for asking” Atsuko got up and started to fold the sheets that Yuko gave her.

“Yes”


-Later that day-


“Hi, Miichan” Yuko greeted Miichan. After getting Atsuko to her apartment she went straight to work

“Yuko, did you give Atsuko a ride?” Miichan ask

“Yes, but the owner of those apartment where she lives wasn’t there, so I told her she could stay for the nigh in my place” Yuko answer

“What….she spent the night with you?”

“Baka…..of course not she slept in the couch” Yuko look at Miichan

“Girls stop talking, and water the flowers” Mariko walked in

“Hey Mariko, Atsuko spent the night with Yuko”

“What….wow...that fast….Yuko did you sleep with her?” Mariko sounded confused

“What….no I didn’t, I’m not a like that” Yuko try to protect her reputation. She wasn’t a pervert, well sometimes yes.

"well...she is kind of preety" Yuko admitted

“Good to hear” Mariko look at Yuko

“Okay move, do something or I’ll get you both fire”


Sometime later


Atsuko came every now and then and every time she came to the flower shop she would talk to Yuko or Miichan or Mariko, but mostly Yuko. Little by little Yuko fell for that girl that came unexpectedly on her first day of work.  Every time Atsuko came, Yuko would give her a rose as a present. Atsuko fell for the girl who bought her to her apartment, but later to the girl’s house.
After a long time of seen each other in the flower shop, Yuko decided to tell her the feeling she had for Atsuko. But she was worried that Atsuko might not return the feelings, but…..

“Atsuko what are you doing here” Yuko said. Yuko was at the back of the store with some roses.

“I just wanted to see you” Atsuko blush

“But you could have waited in the shop”

“But I wanted to see you how you handle the roses”

“I treat them well….i guess” Yuko blush. Yuko turned around to water the rose, but then she felt Atuko’s arms around her waist back hugging her.

“What are you doing?” Yuko asked

“Can we stay like this for a moment” Atsuko ask

“Yes I guess”

Yuko didn’t seem to be bother by that. She kept on watering the roses.

“You know….in this flower shop I met the first person that I have ever love”

“I didn’t know that…is it Mariko?

“No…she is right now with me and I’m hugging her” Yuko stopped what she was doing and turn around to see Atsuko.

“I’m that person?” Yuko sounded confused; she blush

“yes…who else” Atsuko hug Yuko

“I love you Atsuko”

“I love Yuko”

“Hey that was a stupid confession” Miichan said aloud

“Miichan shut up and let them be” Mariko hit Miichan in the forhead. The two girls that now where holding in a hug were laughing at what Miichan had said. Their confession was pretty stupid.

In the most remote place did I thought to find you, now I’m here with you in the place I met you, in the palce I knew I was in love with you, and where you confess to me. I love you and as in the flower shop’s name said “Flowers will bring you love”…….




well.....guys i'm just going to say this....this is not my best work

i was in a hurry, so i could reallly though of a good ending, sorry.....i know it suck  :sweatdrop:

well tomorrow i'm going to update the tale of a spider and a butterfly becasue my brithday its on wednesday and i was planning to update it then but my family is taking me some where, so yeah tomorrow.....

i hope you guys like it....THANK YOU


......until the day comes.......

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Re: umichan's one shots [flower shop part 2] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #44 on: November 06, 2012, 10:04:33 AM »
Awww  :inlove: its so sweet!!!!!! Thank you so much for updating these and for the very romantic ending xD hehe, goodluck on ur others fics!!!  :lol:



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Re: umichan's one shots [flower shop part 2] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #45 on: November 06, 2012, 10:36:03 AM »
Thank you for this wonderful AtsuYuu!!  :bow: :bow:
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Re: umichan's one shots [flower shop part 2] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #46 on: November 06, 2012, 10:45:09 AM »
 :nya: :nya: :nya:
aww so CUTE!
ATSUYUU
thank you Umichan
AtsuYuu fiction here is really RARE!  :gyaaah:
sooo ARIGATOU  :mon love:
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Re: umichan's one shots [flower shop part 2] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #47 on: November 06, 2012, 07:06:17 PM »
CUTE!!!
I really love atsuyuu!!!
So adorable!
This is so sweet!!

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Re: umichan's one shots [flower shop part 2] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #48 on: November 07, 2012, 09:23:52 AM »
Yeeeey! You're back!! I hope everything is well^^

Happy birthday o/

This final part of flower shop was indeed a cute one. I really liked it :heart:

Patiently waiting for your other os updates o/

And enjoy your b-day with your family \o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [flower shop part 2] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #49 on: December 01, 2012, 04:00:18 AM »
hello......

it has been a long time since i updated. And i'm sorry
lately i been felling drepress, and well i had no energy to write my story. I also had a exam , and its vey tiering.

but i will update, i will not give up on my dream on becoming one of the best authors, to becaome an author, and to demonstrate to my friend that i can write
stuff that people actually read. i'm musian, but also a writer.

i have decied to update impossible first, then the one that will come like blue garden(somebody stole my title), and a shot that will have something from me. then i will update the long fanfcition. then i will have a break where i will not write and get to this that really matter like finding more people who like takaharu, saeyuki, and Kai/nami xRay. and also i will not update until next year of january. But i will finish the long fanfiction before i take my break. my next fanfiction is goin to be called, "you, me, and my son".......i will that to your imagination.

thank you..........


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Re: umichan's one shots ANNUNCEMENT????
« Reply #50 on: December 01, 2012, 04:30:34 AM »
hello umichan >o<)/
wuhuhuuu please come back soon~~
meh love saeyuki so muchhhhh ! much much much >//<
please update sooon ! :bow :

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Re: umichan's one shots ANNUNCEMENT????
« Reply #51 on: December 16, 2012, 10:15:11 PM »
yeah... great short fic.

My fav is Is it too late? (Kai and Ray) it's short but good plot (bittersweet love)

However, Impossible (Minami and Haruna) is very long story and full of plots.... great one too. Is it finish? Doesn't seem to be finished yet.

And also Flower Shop (Atsuko and Yuuko) great one too.

Well thank's for the fic... looking forward to the next one.

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Re: umichan's one shots ANNUNCEMENT????
« Reply #52 on: December 19, 2012, 01:46:09 AM »
the continuation of impossible......it been a long time, but my Honors class drain my energy.
ok enjoy


Impossible




“What?” Minami stop walking

“Are you crazy” Mariko screamed

“No…..I just want my girlfriend back” Manami said looking at the door. Even if it doesn’t seem like it really worried…well she actually was VERY worried.

“Don’t you think we want our friend back?” Mariko ask seriously

“Uh….yes”

“Then?”

“I’m sorry”

“Takamina, we are here for you and Haruna” Miichan said as she turned to look at Mariko

“Yeah that’s right” Itano said

“We got your back” Sae put her fits up

“Well…lets go get Haruna” Minami stare at the door in front of her


-Back to Haruna-


“I love you Haruna” Yuko said as she look at a crying Haruna.

“But I don’t” Haruna cried

Yuko squad to look at Haruna, she move her hand to wipe Haruna’s tears. But Haruna back away with the strength that she had left. 

“Please let me your lover” Yuko said as she look at Haruna

“No…I don’t love you” Haruna said as she looked away to the left

“Don’t say that” tears began to form in Yuko’s eyes

“I don’t love you” Haruna turn to Yuko’s way, and saw that Yuko had lifted her right. Then a sting was left on her left cheek.

“I said not to say it” Yuko yell


-Back to Minami-


“Minami did you heard that, it sounded like someone slap someone” Sae told Minami

“What….we better hurry up, I don’t want Haruna to get hurt” Minami communicate

“Yukirin. Can you hear me” Sae ask

“Yes” Yukirin answer

“If I don’t come out of this….tell our children that I love them”

“But we don’t have children”

“That goes for you too, Kasai”

“But we don’t have kids”

At some other point

“Aren’t you going to tell me something” Miichan look at Mariko

“Girl……you know I don’t like you” Mariko looked at the window, but if she was in a real situation like this she would have told Miichan that she……

“Cut it out, nobody is going to die” Minami cut everyone’s conversation off.

“Sorry” everyone said. It was time to go inside, yet Minami was feeling nervous as what to do when she will see Haruna and her kidnaper

“You guys up in the roof, is there a fan or a window that you can see thru”

“Yes”

“Ok move closer”

“”Mariko and Miichan move to the window…I’ll stand back in the door”

Everyone was silent, but for Sae and Itano they had to hear a fan that was turn on, they could look away from it because that was where they could see a figure
standing up and another one in the floor. Mariko and Miichan look at the window, but the curtains were kind of torn that only let them see the face of Haruna. 
Minami was in there in a squad position truing to listen to the conversation that Haruana and the kidnaper were having.
She heard something slam a window and with that she decided that it was time to go in,
but where Mariko and Miichan were they saw Haruna’s phone and some glass pass by them.
Were Sae and Itano were the saw the face of the kidnaper. They were shock.
Minami push the door only to look at Yuko’s fight in the air froze.

“Yuko” Sae, Mariko, Itano, Miichan said in the same time.

“Impossible….” Was the only word that scape from Minami’s lips.



i know it short but........

well...
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....until the day cames.... :( :sweatdrop:

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible] part 7
« Reply #53 on: December 19, 2012, 01:18:54 PM »
thats short :/ but AWESOME XDb thanks! :bow: please update sooooon~~~~

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible] part 7
« Reply #54 on: January 02, 2013, 11:18:45 PM »
hello
i'm just here to tell you guys that I NEED HELP!!!!!!!!

i was reading the last part of impossible and it didn't made any scence, so i have to write it again. I'm very so sorry

After Impossible is finish i want to do a one last shot. And fuu_kun, that shot will be dedicate to you. I know you are a huge fan of Saeyuki, and well i did say i was going to put Blue rose, but i decided to make it into a really long fanfiction. so instead, you guys will be reading something called "Sae's Keys". yeah. i haven't write it but i have an idea. that would be the first shot that i write first in a word document. Please don't steal the title. so yeah wait for that one, i think it would be cool, but its going to have drama, a little action, confusion, ect.

.......until the day comes....

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Re: umichan's one shots Announcement!!!! you naughty boy!!!
« Reply #55 on: January 05, 2013, 12:39:04 PM »
thankyuuu umichan  :bow: i'm so happy when read your post  :cow: :cow: pleaseeee don't give up~!! i'm here!!! ganbatte nee~!  :fap :fap

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Re: umichan's one shots Announcement!!!! you naughty boy!!!
« Reply #56 on: January 06, 2013, 04:04:10 AM »
well the wait is over........this is the last part of Impossible.
i hope you guys like it. i enjoy writting it.

enjoy

Impossible



-In the van-


Atsuko look at the two people in front of her, Yuki and Kasai. Atsuko got something out of her bag without been seen.  She had a baseball bat, and without them notice she swing the bat and hit of them.

“At…suko” Yuki whispered

“Now that is done, it’s their turn”. Atsuko got out of the van and headed where Mariko and Miichan were. She was cautious not to let Sae and Itano notice she was
walking toward their direction. She noticed that Mariko and Miichan were too busy staring at the window, So she thought of using the darkness that was surrounding them to blend into it. She had brought the bat with her, so when the time came she would hit them both. Atsuko saw that Mariko was about to turn, but Atsuko was faster and hit her. “Atsuko” Miichan shockingly said. Without hesitation she hit Miichan too.

“Did you hear that” Sae look to Itano. She had heard what Miichan had said.

“No what was it”

“Miichan said, “Atsuko”

“That’s ridiculous, she is in the van”. With them talking they didn’t notice that Atsuko was climbing to the roof of the warehouse.

“Yuko, I can’t believe its her” Sae said as she went back to see the confrontation between Minami and Yuko. Atsuko walk like a cat and she saw them that they were sitting near a fan, so she went up to them and hit them with the bloody bat.

“Now there won’t be any interruption” she evilly smiled.


-In the warehouse-


“Yuko, how could you?” Minami asked. She could not believe that her friend almost like sister had done this. Minami though it would be somebody else but Yuko, she
never expected her to be the kidnapper of her girlfriend.

“How could I…don’t you mean how YOU” Yuko look intensely into Minami’s eyes. Minami in the other hand didn’t understand what she had meant by that. Then she looked at Haruna, all her hair mess up, some bruises on her face. She felt horrible, she wanted to ran to her but yuko stop her earlier.

“I don’t know what you mean by that” she looked at yuko. Yuko walk toward her and without hesitation she punch Minami in the stomach.” Aahhhh…..what was that for” she had fell to her knees and cough. Then Yuko kick her in the back, making Minami hit the ground. “Yuko stop” Haruna cried. “Stop”

Minami tried to get up but again she was kick by Yuko.

“You took the person that I love the most from me” Yuko yell. Minami got up and was now facing Yuko.

“I didn’t do such thing” Minami protested. She coughed.

“You took her from me!” Yuko looked at Haruna, and back at Minami.

“She didn’t love so much”

Yuko punch Minami in the face. “Shut up…she still in love with me, but you took her from me…..like if you trap her”

“I didn’t do such thing…..i couldn’t control who I fell in love with neither can she” Minami try to run to Haruna but Yuko punch her again in the stomach. She fell.

“Minamiiii” Haruna yell. She saw how Minami spit some blood. Yuko was about to kick her, but Minami grab one of her legs and tackle her to the floor. Minami got on
top of Yuko and started to punch her in the face. It took only 3 seconds for Yuko to flip positions and started hitting Minami.

 “Sae, Mariko where are you guys” Minami yell while she was getting hit. She could hear Haruan crying and she wanted to get up and push away Yuko, but with the
previous hit she loss some of her energy.

“I don’t think the will be coming” Atsuko enter the warehouse and look at Minami. The punches that Yuko was giving her stop and Yuko turn to look at Atsuko.

“I told you not to hurt her” Atsuko walk toward Yuko.

“Atsuko?” Minami was confused, wasn’t she part of her team.

“What….you thought I was part of your “team” Minami” Atsuko walk toward Haruna and slap her.

“Atsuko” Minami yell

“Don’t hurt her” Minami said

Atusko walk to Minami and look at her.

“if you could have love me, this won’t be happening” Atsuko cress on of Minami’s cheeks

“You are my best friend……how could you give in to the idea of Yuko” Minami move away. She looked at Haruna.

“Haruna I promise you will be safe” Haruna nodded

“You can’t keep her safe you are only a midget” Yuko slap Minami. She coughed blood again.

“Hey I told you not to punch her” Atusko walk toward Yuko. Minami got up and move toward her girlfriend.  Atsuko and Yuko were distracted by them arguing, Minami
saw this as a change to try to help Haruna to get up.

“Where do you guys think you are going” Yuko yell

“We haven’t finished what we started” Atsuko Yell

Atsuko ran up to Minami and hug her, but Minami push her and she fell.

“Don’t touch me; I won’t forgive you for this” Minami yell

“I love you Minami”

“I don’t love you, I love Haruna”

“You don’t love her like I do” Yuko came and slap Minami. She try to apart Minami and Haruna, but Haruna punch her with the energy she had left.

“Sae, Mariko, Miichan….answer”

“They won’t be able to help you, sorry” Atsuko look at the bat that she put near the door.

“You monster…how could you”

“Because I want you all by myself”

“That will never happen” Haruna walk to her and punch her. Atsuko got to her knees

“Shut up you b@#$%” Atsuko got up and punch Haruna, but before she could reach Haruna, Minami was in a second in front of Haruna.

“aahh” Minami yell in pain

“See what I have done” Atsuko yell to Haruna. She tackled Haruna and started to punch her. Minami try to get Atsuko off Haruna but at his point she didn’t had that much of energy left.  Yuko kicked Minami down and started to attack her.

“You were like a sister to me, you betray me”

“She found out that she loves me more than anyone else and that I would never leave her in a bad situation” Minami flip the position and she grabbed both of Yuko’s
hand and pin them down.

“She loves me now, you are her past. Don’t you think that I felt bad when I find out that I was in love with her” Minami yell. Atsuko stop hitting Haruna

“I felt bad that I was in love with my friend’s girlfriend, but I couldn’t control…we spent too much time together”

“I love Minami” Haruna yell

“I love you Haruna”

“I never thought that you would go up to this level” Minami got up and walk toward Haruna and Atsuko

“And you, you are my bestfriend……even if  you had told me that you love me, I wouldn’t have accepted” Minami punch Atsuko

“That’s for hurting my girlfriend” Minami took one of Haruna arm and held her up but Yuko ran to Minami and tackle her again,

“Get off me”

She saw a bat come across Yuko’s head making her unconscious.

“Mariko?”

“So I took so long” Mariko gave hand, so Minami could get up.

“And you, Atsuko how could you betray me…..you have to pay for this” Mariko ran toward her and she hit her. Her body fell.

“Are you guys okay?”

“Yeah….but what about them?.....I know they hurt my Haruna, but are they alive?”

“I think so, if not….well we’ll just have to say goodbye to the face of AKB48”

“I totally forgot about that”

“well will just have to go and forget about this” Minami, Haruna and Mariko started to walk, but Minami having a little energy left told Mariko to take Haruna and the
rest to the van.

Minami came back where Atsuko and Yuko where. She grabbed Haruna’s phone and she took all those pictures down and then she look at the two friend’s bodies in
the floor.

“Why did you go with Yuko’s plan” she asked a like-lifeless Atsuko.

She turned around and started to walk, but something stopped her.

“It was my plan all along…..i was the one who use Yuko”

Minami was shocked by what she just heard. She decided to keep on walking toward the band and be with her girlfriend.  Now that she has a little more scene, she asked her self how is this going to affect their relationship and careers. But what matters right now is the love that she has for Haruna and her bruises.



well this is it.... now for that Sae's keys shot, i'm loving it writting it.
thank you
 its too bloody...isn't???


.....until the day comes.....

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Re: umichan's one shots [Impossible] part 8 last part
« Reply #57 on: January 17, 2013, 02:07:34 AM »
hello......i just came back from doing my 3th final exam......one to go.....well i just decides to put part one of this shot and well apperently its long, so i'm going to put it into two parts

first part is called Sae's keys: The dream and confusion

hope you guys like it.......this shot is dedicate to fuu_kun....

Thanks.....

Sae's keys: The dream and confusion



-Dream-


‘Where am I?’

I can only see white; I turn around and around looking for answers. I’m more confused that before. A loud smack. I check if I’m hurt, but I’m perfectly fine. I turn around to see 4 doors; the weirdest thing is that they have my mane. My name, but then I read it correctly, it has some other names. Saeyaka, kasaisae, saemayu, and saeyuki.

‘What?’

I walk to one of the doors, saeyaka, I try to open the door, but it seems lock.

‘Think it needs a key’

I look around to see if there was a key or something. Next to the door there was a key hanging. The curiosity won over me and I took the key and open it. ‘That’s my friend Sayaka’ I wanted to get in but I couldn’t; I was frozen.

‘Is that me?’

I saw another me walking towards my friend. I saw them kiss; it made me blush. ‘Is she my girlfriend?’. I once again try to walk inside in there but I couldn’t. I saw the scenery change and now they were eating together in some place. ‘Is this my future?’ Again the scenery change, ‘it seems that I just got out of work’. I see Sayaka yelling at the other me, and now she slaps the other me. ‘What?’ I’m seeing my other self-cry and Sayaka leaving with luggage.

‘Is that my future with her?’ I close the door and I turn to see the others. I look to the next door and t see kasaisae, and key hanging near it. I open the door and I see my other me standing near a park while she was checking her watch. By now I really wanted to go inside, but once again I was frozen, then I saw Kasai running towards the other me. ‘She is my girlfriend?’ I saw them kissing and holding hands. Like the other door, I saw the scenery change. They are in a restaurant.
‘Sae2, why are you looking at another girl?’ I’m seeing how Kasai is getting angry at Sae 2, and now she left. The scenery changes; they are hugging. ‘I guess she forgave her’. Then the scenery changes again, but this time I see Kasai talking to another girl. Then again the scenery change, the other me was talking to another girl. Then again and again the scenery change with different girls and cloth. I’m seeing how Kasai got tired of everything and she grin. The next scene was of Sae 2 opening her room, but something got my attention.

‘She cheated on me?’

Sae 2 saw a naked girl on top of her naked girlfriend. They were cover by some sheets, but I could see that they were naked. I saw how Sae 2 was crying and now she is running away. I decided to close the door.

A thought came in to mind. ‘is this my future?’. I move to the door that says saemayu, and I open it. I’m seeing two people in bed naked, but the sheet covers half of their bodies. I see my bare back and Mayuyu’s ……The girl on top moves away from the other girl’s face, its Mayuyu who is in the bottom.

‘We are having…..sex?’

I blush slightly. The scenery change many times, and apparently they seem very happy, but then it stop. I saw them a little older, and they are in a car. I’m seeing them sharing a kiss. ‘Isn’t that dangerous?’. Out nowhere there is a truck coming towards their direction. I try to yell, “Look where you are going, there is a truck moving towards you”, but I can’t. The scenery change, I began to cry.  I’m seeing as two bodies are brought to the hospital and they send them to the emergency room.

‘What happen?’

The scenery change again, Sae 2 was in a hospital room. Apparently she had a lot of bruises. ‘Where is Mayuyu?’ The doctor came in and told something to her. She began to cry like a baby when it’s not given it’s toy. I cry like she did, I couldn’t believe it….she died. The scenery change. Sae 2 is in a funeral. She seems very sad and affected by Mayuyu’s death.

I decide to close the door and move on. Saeyuki, ‘I think I know the other name’.  I get the key and I open the door. 
Sae 2 was in a bench watching her watch, then Yuki came and they hug and kiss. I smile, ‘she is my girlfriend?’ The scenery change and they were in front of Tokyo tower. I’m seeing Sae 2 getting in one knee.

‘Is she proposing to her?’

From the way they are hugging and kissing each other, I thin she said yes. The scene change. They are in a church, Sae 2 is wearing a suit and Yuki is wearing a white
wedding dress. I see my friends in there; Minami, Haruna, Yuko, Atsuko, Mariko, Miichan, Kasai, Mayuyu, and Sayaka. They all look very happy. The image change and how did it change. I see them half naked in bed. I blush. Sae 2 is kissing Yuki’s neck and moves lower and lower. I turn red as a tomato. ‘Change the scene’. And like if someone had hear me, it did. Now they are somewhere, in a living room to be more exact. But they look a little older and there is id with them. It’s a little girl. And for some reason I can read her lips.

 ‘Papa….I have a daughter?’

I seeing how the little girl runs to Sae 2 and she pick her up. Then Yuki walk in and was about to kiss Sae 2, but…..

“Sae-chan!” I’m hearing someone calling me, so I turn around, but there is nobody. “Sae-chan!” I hear the door close and the doors star to disappear one by
one. “Sae-chan”.

I turn around, but I don’t see anything…….then……


-End of dream-


“Sae, you are going to be late for class”

Sae rapidly opens her eyes, and looks at the person above her. “What time is it?”

“Its 7:50 and you haven’t even shower” the girl above wave off and leave the room.

“Minami, why didn’t you wake me up” Sae run to her bathroom, and goes in to get a shower. This is Miyazawa Sae and she goes to Akihabara High school. The girl
who came in woke her up is her roommate Minami Takahashi, and she also attends Akihabara High school , but the difference between this two is that Minami is always on time.

“I’m leaving, get to class this time” Minami shouted. After some minutes Sae came running to kitchen and saw an omelet in the counter, and it said “better hurry up!”
She ate a piece of it and finish putting her shoe on.

“We are the keys?” she said to herself out loud. She found the keys and she was on her way to school. After a few minutes she got to school and now was running through the hallway. Ring…..ring…ring. The bell had ring and it seems that Sae was late and was going to get yell at, but when she got to her classroom she saw her class mates still talking and messing with the boar.

“Where is the teacher?” she went to some of her friends

“You late again, Sae?” Sayaka looked at Sae.

“Yeah but luckily the teacher is not here”

“The teacher got sire yesterday…..and now we are getting a new teacher” Miichan said as she was reading a book.

“Why are you reading a book, you never even picked up one” Haruna said taking the book from Miichan. Miichan wasn’t that type of girl that reads or do her
homework.

“Well I did hear that our teacher is a woman, and well I like older woman….she’ll be a good sport” Miichan grinned

“Stop dreaming Miichan, you won’t get that teacher I will” Yuko pinch Miichan’s cheek.

“What if she is old?” Haruna question.

“What?”  Miichan and Yuko said in the same time.

“Well actually I haven’t looked at that option” Miichan said disappointed.

The students keep on talking about how was yesterday and how Miichan and Yuko didn’t thought of having an older teacher.

“Actually, our teacher just graduate from Akihabara University and she is pretty young” A familiar voice said.

“And how do you know Minami” question Sae

“Oh you are finally here Sae; I thought you will be so late” Minami chuckle

“Hey it’s not funny I was having a nightmare” Sae defended her self

“Right…well any ways, I know because just meet her”

“How come you know her before us?”

“Because I the senior president….oh and also there is this new student als-“

“Is she cute” Yuko interrupted Minami

“Yeah, I guess” Minami shrugged.

“So, what are you guys talking about?”

“About how I am going to get the teacher to go out with me” Yuko Smile in a perverted way.

“No she is mine” Miichan turn around to see Yuko, and punch her.

“Will you guess quit it…….I’m going to get some water” Sae got up from her seat and got out of the classroom.  As she was getting out of class she received a text
message. She stares at it with wide eyes.

[Mayuyu: Hey there is going to be a live-action film of Black Butler]

[Sae: What? After many years of waiting……]

[Mayuyu: I know right]

[Sae: Mayuyu could have told me when we were in class]

[Mayuyu: I just got notified]

Sae was about to respond when she bumped into some one. The other person drop her books, Sae turn around and started to pick the other person’s books. “I’m sorry I wasn’t paying any attention”. She picked the books up and gave them to that person.

“Ano…..will you tell me in what hallway am I?” the girl ask

“Are you lost?” Sae look at the girl.

“Yeah, this is my first day at school” the girl smile at Sae. Sae could only smile to that girl.

“Oh, by the way I’m Miyazawa Sae” Sae vowed

“Nice to meet you, I’m Kashiwagi Yuki” she did the same as Sae.

“What classes do you have” Sae ask as she gave walk to the water fountain nearby.

“I have chemistry, calculus, scientific visualization, and English” yuki looked at her schedule.

“Oh, really…..I have the 1, 2 and 4th class with you” Sae pass her hand over her mouth to clean her mouth.

“I can take you to class”. Both decided to walk to their classroom and when they came, Sae’s friends stop what they were dong like Miichan trying to strangle Yuko,
Mayuyu reading a manga, or Minami staring at Haruna, without Haruna noticing.

“Is that the new student?” Miichan asked

“Yeah. Hi Yuki-san, do you remember me from early?” Minami asked

“Yes Minami-san” Yuki said shyly.

“Hey….Minami you need to come back to class, the teacher is asking for you” Atsuko came in to see Minami and take her back. She walked to Minami and grabbed her hand.

“Ooohhhh……” Minami’s friend said

“Why ever time Atsuko does that, you guys do that?” Minami said to her friends.

“Because….”

“Well, we just pair you guys up” and everyone nodded

“Oh, we are just friends” and with that Minami and Atsuko walk out. After some minutes later the new teacher came in. the new teacher seem like a model with that
red dress that ended exactly to her knee. Miichan and Yuko’s jaw drop hanging.

‘She is definitely mine’ Miichan thought

“Hello, class my name is Shinoda Mariko and I’ll be your new teacher and this student her is your new classmate”. Miss. Shinoda walked besides Yuki and push her a little.

“Hi… I’m kashiwagi Yuki and I was in the 11 grade just a month ago, but the principal made arrangements for me  to be in the 12 grade” Everyone in  the class  was kind of surprise that a 11th grader was now a 12th grader, but Sae wasn’t surprise at all. As her memory travel back in time, Sae remember yuki, but it was in 10th grade and Yuki was just in the 9th grade.


-Flashback-


Sae was running from her house to her High school. She didn’t stop even if they were people moving slowly. She ran and she ran, but then another girl didn’t notice when Sae was coming her way.

“Move aw-“Sae scream

Both girls fell into the ground. 

“I told you to move away, don’t you see I have to get to class” Sae said as she was getting up. She looked at the girl who she just had hit. Sae was surprise when she saw that the other girl was wearing the same uniform. The other girl try to get up but she couldn’t.

“Are you hurt?” Sae asked. The other girl just nodded. She looked away.

‘The girl is so ikemen’ yuki thought. She looked at Sae

“I think I got my ankle got twisted” Yuki said with a groan of pain when she touch her ankle.

Sae looking at the girl that was hurt she grab her hand and told her she would give her a piggy back ride to the infirmary, and the other girl accepted.

“You know I’m going to be late for my class” Sae was walking up hill to the infirmary.

“Well I’m going to be late too”

“Well I’m sorry if you didn’t move away, this wouldn’t be happening. By the way what is you name” Sae asked.

“My name is Kashiwagi Yuki and I’m in the 9th grade” Sae turn her head and look at her like if she was serious.

“Really. You are telling me you are a freshman?” Sae turn around again and kept on walking

“You haven’t told me what is your name” yuki poked Sae’s head.

“My name is Miyazawa Sae and I’m your senpai, I’m in the 10th grade” Sae said proudly.

“Hey you are that girl my friends begin talking about” Yuki said. She remembered how her friends would go crazy every time they saw Sae.

“Really, I didn’t knew I was known by the freshmen” Sae said looking down. ‘Wow, my popularity must be really high if freshmen know me’.

“Hey we are almost in the infirmary” Sae said as she looked at the infirmary. They got in and walked to the infirmary.

“Ma’am can a doctor see this girl because her ankle got twisted or something like that”

“Is she your sister?”

“No, ma’am”

“Your friend”

“Yes”

“Ok she needs to wait 5 minutes”

After 5 minutes Sae help Yuki getting up and to her to the doctor’s room, so she got examine. The rest of the day Sae was with Yuki and help her get home.  Sae notice that the 9th grader live not far from her, and probably she would walk with Yuki, but later on she forgot all about it. And then Sae moved out from her parents to an apartment that she rents now with her friend Minami.


-End of flashback-


“Hey I remember you” Sae shouted. Everyone turned to see her and said really and some other girls saying she is already taken.

“What is your name “the teacher asked

“Miyazawa Sae” Sae said

“Okay Sae, please don’t shout in my class”

Miss. Shinoda told Yuki to seat behind Sae. The day went by as the new teacher told them what she expected of the class. Then lunch came and by this point all the students were bored.

“Hey yuki, I remember you…you were that freshman I bump into and I took to the infirmary” Sae said as she turn around and look at Yuki. Yuki was look at Sae like ‘what’.

“I don’t remember what you are talking about” Yuki look at her until, she remember what Sae was talking about.

“Hey I see you welcoming the new student” Sayaka waling to them, and so did Miichan, Mayuyu, and Kasai.

“Hey guys, remember when I told you guys about that freshman…..it’s her” Sae pointed to Yuki.

“That’s her…..well you were right she is cute, but she seems young to be in the 12th grade” Miichan said as she got close to Yuki’s face.

“You look young too” Kasai pull Miichan away from Yuki’s face and then face Sae.

“Sae will you come with me”

“Where?”

“To the bending machine”

“I don’t want to”

“Stop whining and come”.

Kasai grabbed Sae’s hand and walked her to the door.

“Can I get my hand back” Sae stop and look at Kasai.

“What” Kasai looked at her hand that was holding Sae’s hand

“Oh…I’m sorry” Kasai blush.

“Don’t blush….we are friends and if you want me told hold your hand tell, besides I’m not in love with you” Sae look at Kasai and took her hand and they walk to the
bending machine.

‘Stupid….I like you more than you think’ Kasai got she wanted and they went to their classroom, still holding hands.

“Hey why you guys holding hands” Sayaka and Mayuyu said at the same time. Both turn to see each other and they had the face like ‘why did you say that’.

“It’s nothing we are just friends” Sae reply letting her hand slipped from Kasai’s hand. She went to sit down in her sit, but something bothers her.

“Why are you staring at me like that” Sae turn around and look at her friend

“Because I need to tell you something I have realized” Minami grabbed Sae’s hand and dragged her outside the classroom.

“Why is it that you have realized?” Sae sounded annoyed

“Atsuko likes me…..like for real” Minami looked to her side.

“I just don’t know what to do?” Minami look back at Sae.


-Flashback-


Starting of lunch

Minami was sitting in her sit that was near a window.

“Hey can we walk, I’m bored” Atsuko said as she sat near Minami

“But you just sat down” Minami look at her. There was something strage in Atsuko; Minami had notice this in Atsuko a couple weeks ago. She wasn’t sure what it was, but it worried her.

“Oh….bakamina, let’s just walk” Atsuko grabbed Minami’s hand and dragged her. Then they were there, walking between people that both of them didn’t knew. There
was an awkward aura between those two. They were never like that.

“Hey why are we walking like there is no end” Minami broke the ice. Atsuko stop walking and moved in front of Minami

“Minami, I haven’t been feeling so well lately” Atsuko look down.

“You can tell me what is it that is bothering you?” Minami took Atsuko’s hand. “That’s why we are friends, to have trust in each other” she added.

“Minami…..i….whatever I do or say, can we please stay friends” Atsuko look at Minami. Now Minami was staring to get worried. This unusual for Atsuko; she was acting like if it wasn’t her.

“yeah, whatever you do or say; we will be  still be friends…….you are worryin-“ Minami was interrupted when she felt someone’s ….well to be exact they were Atsuko’s
lips that were touching Minami’s.  Minami’s eyes widen with realization that it was her best friend’s lips who were touching hers, but the weirdest thing is that she actual like that taste of her friend’s lip.

‘What I am thinking?’ Minami close her eyes and then slightly push Atsuko away. The sensation of Atsuko’s lips left behind.

“Why you did that for?” Minami ask as she looked to her side. She was pretty much confused about what just had happen.

“Minami, I don’t know what is wrong with me, but I love you and…I can’t understand why. You are my best friend and well, I never thought that I would fall in love
with you I’m sorry. I love you Minami”

Minami just stood there unable to move or do anything, until she saw that Atsuko was running from her.

From another point of the school someone was watching them. It was Haruna and Yuko.

“Aren’t you going to tell her that you love her…..we don’t have to pretend anymore and you will be free from me”


-End of flashback-


“Sae, I don’t know what to do….Atsuko said that she loves me. I don’t know how to react to this” Minami looked worried.

“She already told you that, it was about time”

“How do you know”

“Once I try to kiss her, but she stop me by saying that she was in love with you” Sae just shrugged

“And you can say that so calmly…..why did you tell me?” Minami was know upset. She felt like Sae didn’t trust her; the person she lives with since the beginning of
their senior year.

“Because she told me not to tell you…..i used to like her, so I did what she told me” Sae turn around and look at Yuko walking towards her.

“Hey Yuko is coming” Sae turn around and told Minami.

“Hey Yuko. What’s cracking” Minami said.

“Nobody says that now……something happen to you, didn’t it” Yuko look deeply into Minami’s eyes.

“What do you want” Minami said.

“To come with me”

“Okay”

They left a confused Sae outside the classroom. She decided to go inside the classroom and was surprise when she found her friends and even Yuki to stare at her like she was some precious item or something.

“What?”

“What did Minami told you” Miichan asked as she walked towards

“Nothing that you care” Sae told her.

“Wow….now everything is confidential…..she likes you doesn’t she?”

“No, Miichan. You are crazy”

“Hey don’t fight……girls we should go outside and get something to eat” Yuki said. Then Miichan turn around and said, “Yeah, I’m starting to get hungry. Are you coming Sae?” Mayuyu ask with a bright smile.

‘Maybe I can hold hands with her’ Mayuyu though.

“No, not this time….I’m going to study a little for my next class” actually they have two block but the next day they would have other two different classes; blocks.

“Ok” Mayuyu sounded disappointed.

“Yuki come with us” Mayuyu grabbed Yuki’s hand drag her along with her other friends.

Sae was left sitting in her chair, the day was okay, but all of the sudden changes and problem was throwing her over the edge. Then she remembered her dream that she had last night. The dream that show her future with each of her friends and Yuki.

‘Why did I dream that……I like my future with Mayuyu and Yuki, but still….i can’t believe that I had sex with them, its just so weird. And how come I knew Yuki in my dream. Do I find them attracted?’ Sae asked herself.

‘No….or do I? I mean Sayaka has a good body and she is my other best friend, I know since middle school. Kasai…well she is pretty, but she is my friend. Mayuyu….well she is pretty and innocent…well that’s the image I have of her’ Sae blush at fragment of her dream where she was on top of Mayuyu.

“Why are blushing”

“Because I was on top of May-“Sae saw who was this person and immediately blush

“Mayuyu” Sae gulped.

“You were on top of me….was this dream” Mayuyu move closer toward Sae’s face.

“Sae, I never thought you thought of me that way” Mayuyu move even closer to her

“It’s not what you think is ju-“Sae was cut off by Mayuyu’s lips, her eyes were wide and they were even wider when she felt Mayuyu’s tongue in her lips.

“You girls cut it off” Miss.Shinoda shouted.

Sae push away Mayuyu, and was looking at her like’ why you did that’. Apparently, Mayuyu just smile to her and handed her a key.

“Sae, when I’m with you I feel so different and I just can’t stand seeing you talking to other girls or holding hands with them. I realize that I love you”

“Mayuyu….I…” Mayuyu put her index finger between her lips and said.

“Don’t worry….you don’t have to choose right now. When the time comes, you will know who to choose”

“What do you mean choose?” was the only thing that Sae could say.

“You will know soon”

With that Mayuyu left the classroom. “Is she your girlfriend, Sae” Miss.Shinoda asked as she got up and walked towards a desk that was near Sae.

“She is my friend” Sae said. Still those words that Mayuyu said hunted her.  Now she knows how Minami fells.  Was her dream becoming real or something. As the
days went by, she got confessed by Sayaka and Kasai, which both gave her key to something. This threw her thought completely out of her mind; she didn’t knew that people that she kind of grew up with, were in love with her.  But she did felt different with Mayuyu, Kasai, and Sayaka. Was she in love with the three of them, but what about Yuki? As the days past, she became more interesting in Yuki, that she spend more time with her that her other friends. Was she falling in love with her, was Yuki falling in love with Sae….well she was. Every time they spend together was a great time, like if they knew each other for a long time. But she hadn’t received any keys. To Sae’s surprise Minami had also received two keys: one from Atsuko and one from Haruna. Sae was more confuse than ever. Why did they give her keys? But one day she would learn about it.



OMG...this is too long, this is 12 pages in microsoft word....

i hope you guys like it and tell me if something is wrong or.....paring, but i already got the real parings, so please comment.

thank you.....tomorrow i have my last final exam and i'm finish for the first semester.

.......until the day comes......

Offline fuu_kun

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Re: umichan's one shots [Sae's Keys] part 1 what paring do you think it is??
« Reply #58 on: January 17, 2013, 04:25:35 PM »
umichaaaan~! uwooohh gomene.. i dunno if imposible had finish already xd

and this new long fic is SO OH DAMN GREAT! NO, I MEAN EXCELENT!! XD XD I LOVE IT VERY VERY MUCCH! :heart: :heart:

me is a hug fan saeyuki shipper.. but i dunno why ._. this time me want saemayuuu >.< they moment are so cuteee~~ gahhh i want the next part nauu! xd xd

ganbarre for your last exam umichan o(>.<)/*
sankyuuu <3 :cow: :bow:

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Re: umichan's one shots [Sae's Keys] part 1 what paring do you think it is??
« Reply #59 on: January 17, 2013, 05:25:57 PM »
thank for your new fic
It's so great
when Yuko dragged Minami I thought she would confess to Minami but it maybe seem that Haruna in love with Minami
Urg... can't wait for your next chapter :w00t: :w00t:
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