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SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI (AtsuMina)
« on: September 20, 2012, 11:36:53 PM »
As promised i update, again an Atsumina fanfic^^ Actually, all my fanfic are kind of connected, because it's always the same characters, and Minami and Atsuko have the same relationship, so i like to think it's the same story, but at different moments of their life. Thank for reading!!

SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI
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Minami was in the room with the boys, joking as always.
Today was special, Atsuko was the guest of her show. It was one week since they didn't see each other, Atsuko had moved in to the new flat and Minami felt very lonely in the appartement, but she didn't want her friend to know, it was her decision.
She missed Atsuko a lot, now that she wasn't in AKB anymore, Minami had this impression that all her motivation was gone. She didn't tell anybody, how could she...She was now the general manager, and AKB was still AKB without Aachan. But it was so hard...

The door opened and the captain's heart leaped in her chest. It was her. At the door.
"Hello everybody", she said with an happy voice, smiling.
"The boys stood up", surprised and intimidated.
"Hello Maeda-san, welcome!"
"Thank you", she blushed.
The captain was in the back, waiting for the presentation to end and looking at Atsuko. Once again she was so beautiful...The Ace noticed her fastly but didn't show any emotion, she kept talking to the boys politely.
"So Maeda-san, you can rest and prepare yourself here, we're gonna be on set if you need anything."
"Okay, thank you very much."

They left the room, atsuko closed the door and she turned over to look at her beloved midget.
"Hi"", she said with a sweet voice.
Takamina looked back at her and finally smiled.
"Hey you."
Atsuko traveled the distance between them and stopped really close to her captain. They looked at each other in silent. Minami was sat on a table and Atsuko was now standing between on her legs. The tall girl sighed in a smile and stretched her mouth to kiss Takamina's lips. It was so good to feel that again, this fire in her chest, Atsuko had dreamed about that kiss each minute of each day of the week.
"Minami...You seem so tired and sad...Are you okay?"
"Now that you're here, yes. I've missed you."
"Me too", she buried her face in the captain's neck. Don't push yourself too hard okay? I don't want you to feel sick.
Minami didn't respond, caressing Aachan's hair slowly.
"I was worried about you, I'm not used to be away from you. Be careful, Aachan."
"I need to talk to you, I want to see you", she said as she kissed the midget again. "Minami, I so need you to be next to me."
She was going to kiss her again when the door opened when the door opened.
"Starting in three minutes!"
"Oh, okay, we'll be here in a sec'!"
Atsuko straightened her hair and smiled to the small one.
"Don't go anywhere after the show, I'm not done with you...!"


Voila!!I'll update tomorrow if you want to, I'm sorry if you have the impression that I'm repeating myself... :D
« Last Edit: October 22, 2017, 07:52:48 PM by sophcaro »

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #1 on: September 21, 2012, 01:15:38 AM »
Aw that was cute :D I loved the shin domoto ep with Acchan in it ^^ I look forword to your update :)

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #2 on: September 21, 2012, 01:19:55 AM »
So cute~
I wonder what Acchan to do to Takamina after hehe

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #3 on: September 21, 2012, 02:52:06 AM »
awww so sweet, acchan so sweet...
i wonder if this fanfic have part 2.... :wriggly:
thanks for fanfic... :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 03:25:28 AM »
sweeeeeeet!!
Xcited to the next part!!
Atsumina!!! :thumbsup

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #5 on: September 21, 2012, 04:58:48 AM »
So cute~
I wonder what Acchan to do to Takamina after hehe

yeah!! part 2 please..

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #6 on: September 21, 2012, 05:24:00 AM »
Nice!!!  :theking I demand part 2 as well yaaay  :bow:

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #8 on: September 21, 2012, 11:34:52 AM »
wow!

ATSUMINA FAN FICTION!!! (:D)

I Like it!!!

Thanks For making it!!!!

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #9 on: September 21, 2012, 07:55:42 PM »
nice~ Atsumina fiction,
how to get newest update soon,~

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!! part 2
« Reply #10 on: September 21, 2012, 09:16:45 PM »
Update!!This is the part 2, sorry I'm a little late!!

Part 2

The interview was going well, as usual the captain was discreet and the boys all dedicated to Atsuko. Some of the question were about the two of them, their friendship, their fights or their habits. Atsuko was playing the game, and Minami was thinking.  The « move in » subject was still sensible to her, she didn't to talk about, she was against the fact that Atsuko had chosen to be alone in a new house. It was hurting her.
Maybe it was just a love crush during AKB, Atsuko had now the chance to live something else, new and exciting. Yet, when it came to talk about what people call « fan-service » during shows, Atsuko was always so direct, fearless and suprisly sincere...
The captain had to admit that she was lost and a little depressed, but it was so good to see her smile!
Now it was time to sing « Migitaka ». The song went well but Minami couldn't help but cry seeing Aachan and hearing her say such sad lyrics. The tall girl was smiling, tbe same way as at the Tokyo Dome, it was a smile to hide sadness.

Everybody congratulated the Ace for her perfomance and took some pictures. Minami went directly to her space where she had her clothes and stuff. She was pouting when she suddenly felt arms around her waist.
"I thought I'd ask you not to go anywhere", Atsuko whispered in her ears.
"Aachan", she thrilled.
"Yes, it's me. Hm...I've missed hugging you like that..."
The captain faced her friend.
"Sorry for crying...I promised myself not too but..."
"No, it's okay. You have a lot to go through those days...You  need to rest. And to come to my house!^^"
Minami had an idea, it was silly but...
"Atsuko? What are you doing tomorrow night?"
"Hm, tomorrow night...I see my boyfriend!"
"Boy...boyfriend??! Eeh? What?Who??" she asked with eyes wide open.
"Haha, Minami baka!" She kissed her roughly," it's you my boyfriend!"
"Ah...! You scared me... But, do you want to go... eat something with me?"
"Hm...no. I want you to come to my place with food and that we eat together. I need to convince you that it's not a bad « place to live »^^"
"Oh...Alright, what do you wan to eat?"
"Whatever you want!"
She put her coat on.
"I have to go!"she kissed the leader passionately and teased her, "be sure to have a lot of energy tomorrow because we won't sleep..."
She smirked and left the room. Minami stood there, paralysed. Each time Atsuko was acting like that, the leader was defendless, victim of the aura of the Ace....

That's it for tonight, i will upload the next part tomorrow as usual, tell me what you think!!Thanks!! :nervous
« Last Edit: September 22, 2012, 10:50:01 AM by fausto »

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #11 on: September 22, 2012, 12:30:56 AM »
They won't sleep? ohoh~

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #12 on: September 22, 2012, 02:28:36 AM »
Quote
"be sure to have a lot of energy tomorrow because we won't sleep..."

ooh myy  :on bleed: it's just me or it's a little hot in here  :sweat:

is it going to have a part 3??

i really hope so~~ this fic is quite interesting and i want to know why they wont sleep  :mon mischief:
« Last Edit: September 25, 2012, 09:09:31 PM by okotteru »

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #13 on: September 22, 2012, 07:43:52 AM »
Yeah i going to ruin this fic but I keeo thinking about that yuko and gonchan are living with atsuko right know -_-.. so she is not alone anymore..

Maybe you need to kick out yuko and gonchan for a day or something.. or yeah ignore my thougts ..

jajaj otherwise yeah atsumina love dovey moment :D yeah!!! :D.. accha is so aggresive againts minami... maybe a little next chapter for our pervy section :D

for last but not leat I recommed that you put in the title that you add a second chapter.. because person you read your fic cant imagine that you upload another chap.. well its just a observation..

great fic

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #14 on: September 22, 2012, 10:46:00 AM »
won't sleep huh ..
what a naughty ace :D

Waiting for update ^^v

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #15 on: September 22, 2012, 12:13:03 PM »
Some how have a bad feeling~
takamina will give Acchan eat alive...

hope for the update~!

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #16 on: September 22, 2012, 01:13:33 PM »
OMG THEY WONT SLEEP  :thumbup Update soon  :bow:

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!! part 3
« Reply #17 on: September 22, 2012, 09:07:23 PM »
@Haruko, thanks for your comment, i have to admit that i left the part where yuko and harugon were with Atsuko, I'm sorry, when i think about Atsumina, i only see atsumina^^ Thank you for telling me about this part matter, i changed it, you were right!!

So this is the last part!!Enjoy (please  :nervous )

Part 3


The day had passed terribly slowly, Atsuko was tired but just thinking that « her » Minami was coming tonight was enought to give her energy. She was a little stressed, it was only the second time that her friend was coming in this appartment, and today, she had to like it because Atsuko had on idea...
for the occasion, she was dressed with a black skirt and a white shirt, a bit transparent. She was trying to fix her makeup when the doorbell rang.
At the door was a really kakkoi Minami, dressed with a black suit, holding two bags of food.
"Wow, Minami...you're...wearing a suit...!"
"Eehm...yes, i thought...since you said you had a date with your boyfriend, i had to look like one...it's silly i know..."
"No! No, you're really handsome, and...sexy!"
"Yaa...can I come in?The food is still hot but not for so long."
"Of course", she stepped back to let the leader came in." What did you take?"
"Hamburgers!" She said with a big smile.
"Really?!"
"Yeah, i know it's forbidden for our weight, but since it's tonight, I thought we're gonna do a lot of forbidden things so..."
Atsuko smirked, a devil smile on her face.
"I can see you caught the spirit of this date^^"
"Not sure, but I trust you too reveal it to me soon."
They sat on the kitchen table and Minami gave Aachan her food, a double cheeseburger with french fries and coke.
"Wow! I'm so hungry! Thanks!"
"You're welcome, happy to see her so enthusiastic."
They began to eat, Atsuko was so busy eating that she didn't talk.
"So, how was your day, Aachan?" Asked Minami, looking at the very glutton girl.
"Oh...Well, it was exhausting. I was busy thinking about this moment...And I think I'm gonna play in a new drama!"
"Really? That's great! What's the story?"
"Don't know yet...but i'm someone's girlfriend and I'm gonna have issues, for sure!^^"
"Good", said the captain, finishing her burger.
"Good?" Asked the Ace, stopping to eat." That I'm someone's girlfriend?"
"No, baka^^ a new drama is good for you, Atsuko."
"Hm", she pouted," it's not sure yet."
She swallowed a french frie, pouting again. The midget noticed that this one was sulking, and she smiled, kindly.
"What is it?"
"Nothing...It's just that...I thought you'd be jealous..."
"Ah...you thought or you wanted?"
"...maybe wanted..."
"Aachan..."
"I'm not hungry anymore", she said coldly as she stood up.
"Okay, go rest a little, I'm gonna clean this."
"Yes..."
The tall girl went in the evening, letting Minami clean up the table.
Few minutes later, Takamina joined Atsuko on the couch, this one was playing on her DS. She ignored the midget, still mat at her.
"Aachan..."
"…"
"Atsuko", she took her DS and forced her to look at her. "I love you, very much, and I miss you everyday. It's really hard for me not to see you next to me. I know that you have a new life now and I have to accept that I'm not in it anymore...Of course I'm jealous, as hell, I don't want you to kiss boys or be naked in a movie, but I can't tell you that everytime you announce me that you have an opportunity to follow your dream. It would be bad, for both of us. Do you understand?"
"...I feel bad now...Minami is such an amazing person!"
"Yaa...I just want to be fair, despite my feelings."
"Yes...And I'm just afraid to lose you, now that 'm gone. There is so many cute girls in AKB..."
"I know. But I'm not trying to remplace you okay? It's not easy, but I want to be with you."
"Hm...You're really beautiful today."
"Baka", she laughed, embarrassed.
"Kiss me, Minami", she said in a husky voice.
"Eeh? How can you be so direct?"
"'coz I want to. And i'm trying to invoke your boyish side...^^"
Minami crashed her lips against her girlfriend's.
"You've succeed..."
"It was about time, enough talking, I want you!" She whisper, catching her by her suit to kiss her.
Minami was losing her mind, this girl was to sexy to resist. She topped her conviction, the last time they had sex was three weeks ago! While kissing her, the leader heard atsuko moaned, and she couldn't control herself anymore.
"Atsuko...You're so...God!"
"Mi-nami! Touch me...please, i want you so bad!"
The Ace took her shirt off to invite her « boyfriend » to explore her body, and it worked very well! Minami was already sucking her brest.
"Geez...Minami, you're so good at this..."
She moaned out loud when the leader penetrated her with two fingers, under her skirt. They were too pressed to undressed completely.
"Aachan...Please moan louder...I love this."
The tall girl obeyed, it was the first time Minami was asking for something like this. It was exciting her even more!
"Aaah...Minami!  You need to move in with me! I want this everynight!"
"What?! "Shouted Minami, stopping her movement.
"Don't stop, i'm almost there!" She forced Minami to move again and screamed her name when she came, against the kakkoi midget's body.
Atsuko was breathing fastly, shaking under the last waves of desire. Minami looked at her, speechless.
"Atsuko, were you serious?!"
"Very. I can't...live without you."
"…"
"I'm begging you Minami, I need you everyday."
"But you moved out...?"
"I know...i thought maybe I should try to live alone, like a grown up. But I can't. I want to eat with you, tell you what I've been doing all day, ask about yours, sleep against you..."
"…"
"Minami?"she looked at her, worried because of her silent.
"Yeah... It's just that I thought that you were moving because now you could have your own place alone."
"What? Since when do you think that?"
"Since you left me alone..."
"Baka....So you're okay to move in with me?"
"...Yes!"
"Great! I love you so much!"
"Me too. But I'm warning you! If you enjoy your « drama kiss », you'll be in really big troubles!!"
"Haha! No way I enjoy this, Minami is the best kisser ever!"
"I'm doubting about this..."
"Let me check!" She said as she pulled the leader against her and kiss her passionetely.
"...Hm, I was right...Mocchi, you're missing something...!"
"Atsuko!"
Maybe tomorrow they would be exhausted and broken, but it didn't matter, as long as they were together.

The end.

I hope you didn't think it was annoying... :nervous I have a new idea, for a fanfic, longer than this one, and about Aachan making a drama where she plays a spy, and Minami of course!!! :D something like that... :sweatdrop:

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #18 on: September 23, 2012, 12:39:56 AM »
hehehe great Atsumina moment ^^

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Re: SHIN DOMOTO KYOUDAI Atsumina fanfic!!!
« Reply #19 on: September 23, 2012, 04:34:40 AM »
wow!

It's very nice story :D

Please make your idea about ATSUMINA..

Thank You...

I can't wait for your next FAN FICTION..

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